Hi, M4M from ur queue
[Beginner]
00:10:608 (5) - make NC
00:16:462 (9) - how about make a slider from here to 00:17:194 - ? then add notes at 00:17:925 - & 00:18:657 -
00:34:023 (2,3) - is this too close? not as others
00:39:876 (8,1,2) - the DS between them are not quite same, make sure ur DS same
00:49:389 - 00:50:120 -00:50:852 - i'd like to map these three emphasis, how about consider it?
00:54:511 (2) - sliders like these mb you can copy 1 then rotate it 180°, replace it to make pattern more beautiful )
00:51:584 (1) - kiai time should have more 1/2 beats, like this parts 00:28:169 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -
[Easy]
00:31:828 (4,5) - DS too big
00:39:876 (1,2,3,4) - this flow looks like a rectangle ,they are too shape for these level players.
00:57:437 (2,3,4) - make the flow more soft ) same problem
01:05:852 (3,4) - im sure u can blanket this better
[Normal]
00:13:169 (1) - here, the upper left corner is too empty , u can rotate it 90° and move it to there, will looks better
and if u do that, sure replace the incoming sliders
00:29:267 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same sharp flow, mb fix it?
00:34:023 (10) - reput DS from here
00:45:730 (1) - as highest diff, mb u should map here ? and rhythm here are fun.
00:55:791 (3,5) - dont overlap them will better
Try to fill the space, make it doesn't looks like that somewhere so empty and somewhere so crowd, it will help improve the ornamental )
Well , GL and go further