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shenpei310

adron zhero wrote:

I don't love ur song but moding anyway... (k)

Colours seems to be too random, put these.



Well, i think u can call some bats...
THANKS.....
Doomsday
Hey :)

  1. I got offset: 336. BPM seems fine though
  2. Maybe put "Chinese" in the tags as well?
[EASY]

Lookin' good

[NORMAL]

Perhaps the beats are stuck to straight lines a bit too much, but it's nice overall. Nothing bothered me

[HARD]


01:26:080 (1) - Replace this spinner with something else? It's so short and jumps out of nowhere, so maybe a slider would work better.
01:42:330(1) - ^
02:46:080 (1) - ^

[INSANE]

Apart from the jumps you put in (like 00:21:080 (4,5,6,7), 00:49:330 (5,6,7), 01:25:080 (4,5,6,7), etc). which don't fit in imo, Nothing bothered me. I see those jumps in many Insane maps so I can't force you to change them, but I want you to :(

Overall, it's actually quite a nice map. Insane uses jumps a bit too much, but the other difficulties are Nice and fairly well made, but not amazing though. Nice.

Starred
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Doomsday wrote:

Hey :)

  1. I got offset: 336. BPM seems fine thoughhmm....maybe different from different people...but the bpm is sure to be right,so people can change local offset according to themselves..
  2. Maybe put "Chinese" in the tags as well?
ok

[EASY]

Lookin' good

[NORMAL]

Perhaps the beats are stuck to straight lines a bit too much, but it's nice overall. Nothing bothered me

[HARD]


01:26:080 (1) - Replace this spinner with something else? It's so short and jumps out of nowhere, so maybe a slider would work better.changed
01:42:330(1) - ^changed
02:46:080 (1) - ^i consider to remove the part after it

[INSANE]

Apart from the jumps you put in (like 00:21:080 (4,5,6,7), 00:49:330 (5,6,7), 01:25:080 (4,5,6,7), etc). which don't fit in imo, Nothing bothered me. I see those jumps in many Insane maps so I can't force you to change them, but I want you to :(ok,i make the distance shorter

Overall, it's actually quite a nice map. Insane uses jumps a bit too much, but the other difficulties are Nice and fairly well made, but not amazing though. Nice.

Starred
thanks
deepsea
I got offset +5 ~ 10, not sure though. timing of most chinese songs are terrible.>_>
Topic Starter
shenpei310

deepsea wrote:

I got offset +5 ~ 10, not sure though. timing of most chinese songs are terrible.>_>
...........doomsday say -4,you say +5~10......terrible....
deepsea

shenpei310 wrote:

deepsea wrote:

I got offset +5 ~ 10, not sure though. timing of most chinese songs are terrible.>_>
...........doomsday say -4,you say +5~10......terrible....
I rememered it had 330 so what I got is about 335 ~ 340 and doomsday got 336 so seems not too wrong?

Or did I forget something?_?
Topic Starter
shenpei310
hexie……
Topic Starter
shenpei310

shenpei310 wrote:

SPOILER

deepsea wrote:

I got offset +5 ~ 10, not sure though. timing of most chinese songs are terrible.>_>
...........doomsday say -4,you say +5~10......terrible....I rememered it had 330 so what I got is about 335 ~ 340 and doomsday got 336 so seems not too wrong?

Or did I forget something?_?[/quote]

i made a mistake ,i have thought my offset is 340....ok,now i change it to 336........it is very hard to get a exact offset of a low bpm song..[/quote]
Selee
;)
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Selee wrote:

;)
hello?
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. If song comes from an album, put the album name in source.
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:330 (1) - Maybe remove new combo here, to follow combos pattern used before.
[Normal]
  1. 01:39:080 (1) - Remove new combo. No reason to place it here.
  2. 02:10:580 (1) - I'm not completely sure about it, but i'd remove new combo here too.
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:330 (1) - Remove new combo here.
  2. 01:39:080 (1) - and here, 01:41:080 (1) - and here.
[Insane]
  1. 01:16:830 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos.
  2. 01:39:080 (1) - Same here, 01:41:080 (1) - and here.
  3. 02:28:830 (1) - And here.
My mod can look stupid, but i really don't like overused combos.
Anywas. Map is well made, and it plays cool. I hope it'll be ranked. Starrr'd :D
James2250

ShaggoN wrote:

General
  1. If song comes from an album, put the album name in source.

Put the album name in the tags not the source, read this
Topic Starter
shenpei310

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. If song comes from an album, put the album name in source.
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:330 (1) - Maybe remove new combo here, to follow combos pattern used before.
DONE
[Normal]
  1. 01:39:080 (1) - Remove new combo. No reason to place it here.ok
  2. 02:10:580 (1) - I'm not completely sure about it, but i'd remove new combo here too.i add a note so new combo may looks reasonable
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:330 (1) - Remove new combo here.done
  2. 01:39:080 (1) - and here, 01:41:080 (1) - and here.
done

[Insane]
  1. 01:16:830 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos.emm...logically,there should not be new combo obviously,but ...i think it colorful so looks better?....hm...i change that,since i think it may really confuse the player if they don't know the rythm....
  2. 01:39:080 (1) - Same here, 01:41:080 (1) - and here.done
  3. 02:28:830 (1) - And here.
OK

My mod can look stupid, but i really don't like overused combos.ah...anyway it is a Good mod .A good map should be excellent on every aspects,so it need different modders to focus on different things.
Anywas. Map is well made, and it plays cool. I hope it'll be ranked. Starrr'd :D
thanks
Topic Starter
shenpei310

James2250 wrote:

ShaggoN wrote:

General
  1. If song comes from an album, put the album name in source.

Put the album name in the tags not the source, read this
good...i'd rather not ....looks strange...
Andrea
Revived.
nongfushanquan_old
怎么还没有rank啊?必须顶起啊!!
Topic Starter
shenpei310

nongfushanquan wrote:

怎么还没有rank啊?必须顶起啊!!
别打酱油……
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
Aah, what's with all the spaces in the tags? Remove them. Also the "Album:" part of the tag. Also remove "pop" since that'll be the genre
The video is really low quality for 8 megs. Think you can find/make a better one? If you have problems with this, let me know and I'll see what I can find for you.
Your MP3 is 320 kbps: please re-encode it to 256 or 192kbps (192 is preferred, but since your map is so old, you can technically do 256). Once again, if you don't know how to or have problems getting this done, let me know.
I'm not seeing a reason why most of the slider ticks are silenced

[Easy]
00:16:336 (1) - This is way too soon after a spinner for a difficulty like this. Please consider mapping through the spinner, or changing some of the rhythms afterward.
00:22:336 (1) - Hrm, these don't really work too well in an easy difficulty simply because it's hard for new players to tell when it will stop - plus having a note so soon after it will just cause more problems. Please try a simpler rhythm.
01:12:836 (1) - Too soon after a spinner again. Please try to leave 2-3 beats before starting another note for a difficulty this easy.
01:20:836 (1) - ^
02:32:836 (1) - ^
02:38:336 - Just delete this break.

[Normal]
02:06:336 (5) - Maybe stack this with the 6 slider instead?
02:38:336 - Add a note here and delete that break

[Hard]
01:15:336 (2) - That whistle sounds really odd
Some of the stacking and overlaps were kind of weird but the map is okay.

[Insane]
Reduce stack leniency to this:

It'll make some of your stacks look neater such as 02:30:336 (1,3,5) -
02:40:336 (1,2,3) - Really don't like this overlap
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Aah, what's with all the spaces in the tags? Remove them. Also the "Album:" part of the tag. Also remove "pop" since that'll be the genre
The video is really low quality for 8 megs. Think you can find/make a better one? If you have problems with this, let me know and I'll see what I can find for you.
Your MP3 is 320 kbps: please re-encode it to 256 or 192kbps (192 is preferred, but since your map is so old, you can technically do 256). Once again, if you don't know how to or have problems getting this done, let me know.
I'm not seeing a reason why most of the slider ticks are silenced

[Easy]
00:16:336 (1) - This is way too soon after a spinner for a difficulty like this. Please consider mapping through the spinner, or changing some of the rhythms afterward.
00:22:336 (1) - Hrm, these don't really work too well in an easy difficulty simply because it's hard for new players to tell when it will stop - plus having a note so soon after it will just cause more problems. Please try a simpler rhythm.
01:12:836 (1) - Too soon after a spinner again. Please try to leave 2-3 beats before starting another note for a difficulty this easy.
01:20:836 (1) - ^
02:32:836 (1) - ^
02:38:336 - Just delete this break.

[Normal]
02:06:336 (5) - Maybe stack this with the 6 slider instead?
02:38:336 - Add a note here and delete that break

[Hard]
01:15:336 (2) - That whistle sounds really odd
Some of the stacking and overlaps were kind of weird but the map is okay.

[Insane]
Reduce stack leniency to this:

It'll make some of your stacks look neater such as 02:30:336 (1,3,5) -
02:40:336 (1,2,3) - Really don't like this overlap

ALL DONE...

and i remember i have done full submission after change the mp3 to 192k...why you still say 320k?

now i think the video does not make much sense to the map,and i do not need it any more.


"I'm not seeing a reason why most of the slider ticks are silenced"
WELL,I do not think they make much sense...do you think it will be better not to silence them?
Garven
The download I had was 320. Looks like it's back to 192 now, so no worries there.

As for the slider ticks, if you set it to tick rate 2 it would fit pretty well with the song and sound fine imo.
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Garven wrote:

The download I had was 320. Looks like it's back to 192 now, so no worries there.

As for the slider ticks, if you set it to tick rate 2 it would fit pretty well with the song and sound fine imo.
sounds good...changed
Alace
revived
Alace
revived
Topic Starter
shenpei310
stress...
Elfen_Lied
;) star~
sherrie__fay
[easy]
note下的要么全跟vocal 要么全跟伴奏.
其实我发这句之前很纠结 因为他不妨碍打
我还专门找了个rank#240000+的基友帮我试图
围观打完探讨之后得出的结论是"因为速度慢所以看圈是能打的但是总之节奏变得很违和"
...感觉说了没啥用
[insane]
01:50:836(1)修形.-.
01:58:086(4)不做评论……问了几个人都说不确定是否rankable 好看倒是很好看 留着吧 当心别找到nazi的MAT
02:18:586(1,2,3,4,5)花放歪啦~快!快正过来:333
[general]
1建议在view里把grid level调到4 很多摆不正的东西都可以调了
2最后那段副歌多燃啊多燃啊多燃啊还可以kiai还可以送分为什么不做啊orz
3千言万语汇成一句话 310滑条帝

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Topic Starter
shenpei310

sherrie__fay wrote:

[easy]
note下的要么全跟vocal 要么全跟伴奏.
其实我发这句之前很纠结 因为他不妨碍打
我还专门找了个rank#240000+的基友帮我试图
围观打完探讨之后得出的结论是"因为速度慢所以看圈是能打的但是总之节奏变得很违和"是有点,但是全按伴奏又未免太单调,没什么可玩性
...感觉说了没啥用
[insane]
01:50:836(1)修形.-.我觉得这个滑条出现在这个地方很2。。。。画成啥样都不和谐。。我再想想
01:58:086(4)不做评论……问了几个人都说不确定是否rankable 好看倒是很好看 留着吧 当心别找到nazi的MAT扭扭更健康啊……
02:18:586(1,2,3,4,5)花放歪啦~快!快正过来:333瞎了。我又摆了一下,实在摆不好啊。。总差点。。。
[general]
1建议在view里把grid level调到4 很多摆不正的东西都可以调了。。只要不是要完全重叠那种的应该都差不多吧。。不然我得看瞎了才能发现。。
2最后那段副歌多燃啊多燃啊多燃啊还可以kiai还可以送分为什么不做啊orz。。不是很喜欢干重复的事情。。怕太单调啊。。我个人是不太喜欢打3分钟以上的歌……不过可能送分图的话越长大家越高兴。。但是没啥意义……
3千言万语汇成一句话 310滑条帝我思索了很久,发现好图都是滑条用得好。。回顾当年,这图真是傻得一B。。现在我要东山再起。

最后 star
谢谢!我会继续努力啊!
fartownik
General:

- Your mp3 is too long, it should end up when the map ends. You'll have to cut it.

- Instead of making ":" in the tags, do a regular space


[Insane]

01:26:086 (1) - This is insanely annoying and confusing pattern. The player plays, he's having fun and then a 2000 ninja spinner comes out, he's hardly doing it and gets a 100, he thinks it's already after this armageddon, but then comes a triple that is not even in the center of the playfield and kills him. That's what will happen if you keep this pattern!
02:46:086 (1) - ^

This map has a potential. I like it.


[Hard]

01:43:086 (1,3) - Swap new combos.


[Normal]

Fine.


[Easy]

00:17:836 - Add a note?
00:36:336 (1) - Start at the white tick? Sounds odd following the lyrics.
01:44:086 (1) - Start at the white tick.
01:48:086 (2) - ^, also this slider is covered by the previous slider, so you MUST move it 1/2 forward and set a new combo on it.


Good map, no any serious problems.
star
Alace
As i know
the song is mapped over 80%, it doesn`t need to cut at all
fartownik

Alace wrote:

As i know
the song is mapped over 80%, it doesn`t need to cut at all
hmph, I have to admit... I didn't know about this rule :D

I thought all the unused mp3 should be cut, seems like I was wrong ;) don't cut it then
Banana
这首歌节奏是变化的、、目前的timing能把节奏对上,但有很多重音不对
我的timing,注意有些使用3/4拍
timing point
offset. Meter.
00:01:836 4/4
00:40:336 3/4
01:12:336 3/4
01:16:336 3/4
01:24:336 4/4
02:00:336 4/4
02:32:336 3/4
02:36:336 3/4
02:40:336 3/4
02:44:336 4/4
如果改掉,之后要调整音效,主要是重音点上的finish
insane
02:11:836 no clap?
Normal
00:23:086 单独成一个note?
最后star、
Topic Starter
shenpei310

qihanzhang wrote:

这首歌节奏是变化的、、目前的timing能把节奏对上,但有很多重音不对
我的timing,注意有些使用3/4拍
timing point
offset. Meter.
00:01:836 4/4
00:40:336 3/4
01:12:336 3/4
01:16:336 3/4
01:24:336 4/4
02:00:336 4/4
02:32:336 3/4
02:36:336 3/4
02:40:336 3/4
02:44:336 4/4
其实我不太懂4/4和3/4的区别,你给的这个表我也看不太懂。。。在某个点是四四拍或者四三拍是什么意思?
Banana

shenpei310 wrote:

其实我不太懂4/4和3/4的区别,你给的这个表我也看不太懂。。。在某个点是四四拍或者四三拍是什么意思?
嗯、不是有打拍子这种说法吗?专业解释我也不太会、但简单说来3/4就是三个白线(在edit界面的时间轴上)会出现一个长一点的,4/4是四个白线出现长的,在长一点的地方就是重拍,osu系统也会特意把这个音加重,而不需要额外加绿线改音量、

至于我列的表格,是在timing setup界面(f6)下的说法、每行是一个红点、就是inherited point,meter显示的是哪个就在setup左边改成3/4(waltz)、
Topic Starter
shenpei310

qihanzhang wrote:

shenpei310 wrote:

其实我不太懂4/4和3/4的区别,你给的这个表我也看不太懂。。。在某个点是四四拍或者四三拍是什么意思?
嗯、不是有打拍子这种说法吗?专业解释我也不太会、但简单说来3/4就是三个白线(在edit界面的时间轴上)会出现一个长一点的,4/4是四个白线出现长的,在长一点的地方就是重拍,osu系统也会特意把这个音加重,而不需要加绿线改音量、
好像现在没有选3/4 4/4的选项了?
Banana

shenpei310 wrote:

好像现在没有选3/4 4/4的选项了?
(f6按出来的、左边偏下)
Topic Starter
shenpei310

qihanzhang wrote:

shenpei310 wrote:

好像现在没有选3/4 4/4的选项了?
[attachment=0:928f3]QQ拼音截图未命名.jpg[/attachment:928f3](f6按出来的、左边偏下)
还是没觉得重音有变化。。。
Banana

shenpei310 wrote:

还是没觉得重音有变化。。。
、、就中间唱的"伦敦大桥垮下来"的"来"就比其他的要重
不过既然是应该是重音的地方加过hitsound的、、、timing什么的不管它好了。。貌似是我把事情搞复杂了。。

稍微mod下、基本是建议
general
insane‘s PreviewTime: 72334
others’ PreviewTime: 72326
重新设一下、


insane
18:817 去掉clap
23:711 绿线音量调低到70
33:836 想用clap、
47:336 这个finish还有后面的一个显得有点重、加个绿线修低一点?
52:086 clap 后面的转盘用的finish也重、
1:08:336 这里就开始放note,break长了,白线放四个?
1:43:461 去掉(2)
1:46:080 绿线如果不用就删
之后把leadin去掉、

Hard
21:711 绿线音量调低到70
35:836 去掉clap
47:336 声音调低一点
1:03:586 开始放note
1:43:586 消音
2:11:836 去掉clap
2:23:586 开始放note

easy
1:44:336 这。。短点会好些、不行弄来回的

困了、Normal的问题和Hard差不多、、不想打了
Alace
eeeeee where is the mapper going
i am still waiting for you XD
plz make your mapset ranked
Breeze

Alace wrote:

eeeeee where is the mapper going
i am still waiting for you XD
plz make your mapset ranked
Osu need more well-made Chinese song
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Banana wrote:

shenpei310 wrote:

还是没觉得重音有变化。。。
、、就中间唱的"伦敦大桥垮下来"的"来"就比其他的要重
不过既然是应该是重音的地方加过hitsound的、、、timing什么的不管它好了。。貌似是我把事情搞复杂了。。

稍微mod下、基本是建议
general
insane‘s PreviewTime: 72334
others’ PreviewTime: 72326
重新设一下、


insane
18:817 去掉clap
23:711 绿线音量调低到70
33:836 想用clap、
47:336 这个finish还有后面的一个显得有点重、加个绿线修低一点?
52:086 clap 后面的转盘用的finish也重、
1:08:336 这里就开始放note,break长了,白线放四个?转盘行不?
1:43:461 去掉(2)这个我有点不能理解
1:46:080 绿线如果不用就删
之后把leadin去掉、

Hard
21:711 绿线音量调低到70
35:836 去掉clap
47:336 声音调低一点
1:03:586 开始放note
1:43:586 消音不能理解。。。
2:11:836 去掉clap
2:23:586 开始放note

easy
1:44:336 这。。短点会好些、不行弄来回的这是造型。。

困了、Normal的问题和Hard差不多、、不想打了
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