Vikon wrote:

map不錯, 找不到大問題
只是一些建議

[Easy]
00:14:330 (1,1) - 對於EASY來說，note太接近spinner只能让他们别转太狠了。。。再变的话我听不习惯
01:10:330 (1,1) - ^
02:30:330 (1,1) - ^

[Normal]
fine for me

[Hard]
02:47:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這麼多note放在一起，或會有點混淆迪西也说过了，所以第一次分开放了，到后面的话节奏应该掌握了。再说总不能认为这首歌只被玩一次吧？

[Insane]
00:04:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

(mod得有點少，可以不給kd~ good luck~

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request :3

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Please full submit the map again. I was given the update button when I just downloaded and installed the map. [!]it is weird....
2. What a cute song :3ah,i think so~
3. Did you cut the video or it does stop on 02:59:080?i cut....
4. Cut the useless part of the mp3. It could decrease the filesize. But I suggest you to map the song until the end.i think play a song over 3min is too tired,so......but i want to give the players a complete mp3 of this song....

[Easy]
00:38:080 (2) - Move it like this (turn off distance snap).ok..
[attachment=0:da26e]screenshot024.jpg[/attachment:da26e]
00:52:580 (1) - Extend it to 00:56:330.i really do not know why many modders want me to change this...after the spinner is over,according to the lyrics,it is another part,and i make it as a break.....
01:18:455 - Will be better if you remove the break.done, add a spinner
02:12:580 (1) - Extend it to 02:16:330.the same reason

[Normal]
01:00:631 (2) - I prefer it put on 01:00:411. [?]nothing is there????
01:03:278 (2) - Make it start from 01:03:499.nothing is there????
00:52:580 (1) - Extend it to 00:56:330.
02:10:580 (1) - Ugly slider. Change the shape.......changed
02:12:580 (1) - Extend it to 02:16:330.

[Hard]
00:02:330 to 00:05:830 - Soft hitsound sounds weird. Change them to normal hitsound, then lower the volume to the first tick. Also, remove the whistle sound.maybe it is really hard for people to here the bass here,i think i had better remove them
01:26:080 (1) - Can you change this into a slider or something else? This slider is too short and ruin the epicness of this diff.
02:46:080 (1) - ^ah,i am very bad at spinner,but i can still get 300 here,so i think it is ok....

[Insane]
-- I found some death jumps. Consider reducing the distance of some jumps?not too hard...but i remove the jump in hard diff
-- A little bit overmapped but it's okay I think.

00:02:330 to 00:05:830 - Soft hitsound sounds weird. Change them to normal hitsound, then lower the volume to the first tick. Also, remove the whistle sound.all removed!!!!!!!
01:16:830 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.but now it looks beautiful? if remove,one color looks ugly...
02:24:330 (2,3,4) - Unstacked properly.maybe you don't get the newest one?

Star. I love modding this.

1. Maybe some Custom Hitcircle Colors ?

1. Tick Rate 2 please.
2. Drain Rate +1 please.

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Maybe some Custom Hitcircle Colors ?

i am bad at drawing,so bad at selecting color,but i think pink is ok...

[Insane]

00:19:330 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:39:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream isn't going synchrone. (6,7,8) are really badly placed. Please remap this stream.
01:12:330 (9) - Add New Combo.
01:12:830 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:35:330 (5) - Move 2 grid levels to the right. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
01:35:580 (6) - Move 2 grid levels to the left.
01:55:330 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:01:330 (1) - ^
all done!

[Hard]

1. Tick Rate 2 please.
2. Drain Rate +1 please.

01:42:330 (1) - Center this one ?
01:43:080 (1) - ^
all done

[Normal]

01:39:080 (2) - Add New Combo here so it will match with the rest of the difficulties at that point.done


[Easy]

00:52:580 (1) - Extend till 00:56:330. (VanMoNky also posted it and I agree with him.)now,i think at 00:55:330 or 00:56:330 both are ok...since you all like end at 00:56:330...i'll change...the other spinners like this are also changed

Starred~

Dusty wrote:

[Hard]
sometimes your 1/4 triples are stacked and sometimes they're not, it confused me at first o__o

01:38:580 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - unstack please? It's a little awkward to mei do not think so,but i found it boring,so add a spinner,mayby a little difficult

[Insane]
01:38:580 (1,1,1,1) - unstack these?如果突然在屏幕上四个地方放四个单音，感觉有点莫名其妙。
01:58:080 (4,1) - and these?没啥必要。

hm, I think I like [Insane] best, it looks like you put the most effort into that onei am good at making insane.我最先做的insane，然后另存为HARD,再一个个删，再NORMAL。。。

arsrun wrote:

nice♫
a little Advice:

[normal]
01:18:580 SP may start at 01:18:330也可以，但是normal我想根据歌词来，hard和insane这里根据音乐来

[hard]
01:18:705 (2) remove this note.unuseful, here is no hitsound 3>是有点问题。
01:43:330 (2~ ) 这段不对,redone it plz~不是不对，从这里开始变为跟音乐而不是跟歌词
02:03:080 May add a note here.我觉得都可以，我听上去感觉就是两个。弹起来也不别扭。

[ins]
01:18:705 (2) as hard.
02:03:080 as hard.

adron zhero wrote:

I don't love ur song but moding anyway... (k)

Colours seems to be too random, put these.



Well, i think u can call some bats...

1. I got offset: 336. BPM seems fine though
2. Maybe put "Chinese" in the tags as well?

Doomsday wrote:

Hey

1. I got offset: 336. BPM seems fine thoughhmm....maybe different from different people...but the bpm is sure to be right,so people can change local offset according to themselves..
2. Maybe put "Chinese" in the tags as well?

ok

[EASY]

Lookin' good

[NORMAL]

Perhaps the beats are stuck to straight lines a bit too much, but it's nice overall. Nothing bothered me

[HARD]

01:26:080 (1) - Replace this spinner with something else? It's so short and jumps out of nowhere, so maybe a slider would work better.changed
01:42:330(1) - ^changed
02:46:080 (1) - ^i consider to remove the part after it

[INSANE]

Apart from the jumps you put in (like 00:21:080 (4,5,6,7), 00:49:330 (5,6,7), 01:25:080 (4,5,6,7), etc). which don't fit in imo, Nothing bothered me. I see those jumps in many Insane maps so I can't force you to change them, but I want you to ok,i make the distance shorter

Overall, it's actually quite a nice map. Insane uses jumps a bit too much, but the other difficulties are Nice and fairly well made, but not amazing though. Nice.

Starred

deepsea wrote:

I got offset +5 ~ 10, not sure though. timing of most chinese songs are terrible.>_>

shenpei310 wrote:

deepsea wrote:

I got offset +5 ~ 10, not sure though. timing of most chinese songs are terrible.>_>

...........doomsday say -4,you say +5~10......terrible....

shenpei310 wrote:

SPOILER

deepsea wrote:

I got offset +5 ~ 10, not sure though. timing of most chinese songs are terrible.>_>

...........doomsday say -4,you say +5~10......terrible....I rememered it had 330 so what I got is about 335 ~ 340 and doomsday got 336 so seems not too wrong?

Or did I forget something?_?[/quote]

i made a mistake ,i have thought my offset is 340....ok,now i change it to 336........it is very hard to get a exact offset of a low bpm song..[/quote]

Selee wrote:

;)

1. If song comes from an album, put the album name in source.

1. 00:34:330 (1) - Maybe remove new combo here, to follow combos pattern used before.

1. 01:39:080 (1) - Remove new combo. No reason to place it here.
2. 02:10:580 (1) - I'm not completely sure about it, but i'd remove new combo here too.

1. 00:39:330 (1) - Remove new combo here.
2. 01:39:080 (1) - and here, 01:41:080 (1) - and here.

1. 01:16:830 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos.
2. 01:39:080 (1) - Same here, 01:41:080 (1) - and here.
3. 02:28:830 (1) - And here.

ShaggoN wrote:

General

1. If song comes from an album, put the album name in source.

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General

1. If song comes from an album, put the album name in source.

[Easy]

1. 00:34:330 (1) - Maybe remove new combo here, to follow combos pattern used before.

DONE
[Normal]

1. 01:39:080 (1) - Remove new combo. No reason to place it here.ok
2. 02:10:580 (1) - I'm not completely sure about it, but i'd remove new combo here too.i add a note so new combo may looks reasonable

[Hard]

1. 00:39:330 (1) - Remove new combo here.done
2. 01:39:080 (1) - and here, 01:41:080 (1) - and here.

done

[Insane]

1. 01:16:830 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos.emm...logically,there should not be new combo obviously,but ...i think it colorful so looks better?....hm...i change that,since i think it may really confuse the player if they don't know the rythm....
2. 01:39:080 (1) - Same here, 01:41:080 (1) - and here.done
3. 02:28:830 (1) - And here.

OK

My mod can look stupid, but i really don't like overused combos.ah...anyway it is a Good mod .A good map should be excellent on every aspects,so it need different modders to focus on different things.
Anywas. Map is well made, and it plays cool. I hope it'll be ranked. Starrr'd

James2250 wrote:

ShaggoN wrote:

General

1. If song comes from an album, put the album name in source.

Put the album name in the tags not the source, read this

nongfushanquan wrote:

怎么还没有rank啊？必须顶起啊！！

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Aah, what's with all the spaces in the tags? Remove them. Also the "Album:" part of the tag. Also remove "pop" since that'll be the genre
The video is really low quality for 8 megs. Think you can find/make a better one? If you have problems with this, let me know and I'll see what I can find for you.
Your MP3 is 320 kbps: please re-encode it to 256 or 192kbps (192 is preferred, but since your map is so old, you can technically do 256). Once again, if you don't know how to or have problems getting this done, let me know.
I'm not seeing a reason why most of the slider ticks are silenced

[Easy]
00:16:336 (1) - This is way too soon after a spinner for a difficulty like this. Please consider mapping through the spinner, or changing some of the rhythms afterward.
00:22:336 (1) - Hrm, these don't really work too well in an easy difficulty simply because it's hard for new players to tell when it will stop - plus having a note so soon after it will just cause more problems. Please try a simpler rhythm.
01:12:836 (1) - Too soon after a spinner again. Please try to leave 2-3 beats before starting another note for a difficulty this easy.
01:20:836 (1) - ^
02:32:836 (1) - ^
02:38:336 - Just delete this break.

[Normal]
02:06:336 (5) - Maybe stack this with the 6 slider instead?
02:38:336 - Add a note here and delete that break

[Hard]
01:15:336 (2) - That whistle sounds really odd
Some of the stacking and overlaps were kind of weird but the map is okay.

[Insane]
Reduce stack leniency to this:

It'll make some of your stacks look neater such as 02:30:336 (1,3,5) -
02:40:336 (1,2,3) - Really don't like this overlap

Garven wrote:

The download I had was 320. Looks like it's back to 192 now, so no worries there.

As for the slider ticks, if you set it to tick rate 2 it would fit pretty well with the song and sound fine imo.

sherrie__fay wrote:

[easy]
note下的要么全跟vocal 要么全跟伴奏.
其实我发这句之前很纠结 因为他不妨碍打
我还专门找了个rank#240000+的基友帮我试图
围观打完探讨之后得出的结论是"因为速度慢所以看圈是能打的但是总之节奏变得很违和"是有点，但是全按伴奏又未免太单调，没什么可玩性
...感觉说了没啥用
[insane]
01:50:836(1)修形.-.我觉得这个滑条出现在这个地方很2。。。。画成啥样都不和谐。。我再想想
01:58:086(4)不做评论……问了几个人都说不确定是否rankable 好看倒是很好看 留着吧 当心别找到nazi的MAT扭扭更健康啊……
02:18:586(1,2,3,4,5)花放歪啦~快！快正过来:333瞎了。我又摆了一下，实在摆不好啊。。总差点。。。
[general]
1建议在view里把grid level调到4 很多摆不正的东西都可以调了。。只要不是要完全重叠那种的应该都差不多吧。。不然我得看瞎了才能发现。。
2最后那段副歌多燃啊多燃啊多燃啊还可以kiai还可以送分为什么不做啊orz。。不是很喜欢干重复的事情。。怕太单调啊。。我个人是不太喜欢打3分钟以上的歌……不过可能送分图的话越长大家越高兴。。但是没啥意义……
3千言万语汇成一句话 310滑条帝我思索了很久，发现好图都是滑条用得好。。回顾当年，这图真是傻得一B。。现在我要东山再起。

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