The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

nice map~
use kiai time???
and give star~

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Pokie wrote:

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00:22:326 (1) - 減少一個折返不太对。。


Normal

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00:34:576 (1) - 橫放?
02:06:826 (6) - Ctrl+H


Hard

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01:38:576 (1) - spacing 不放中间会怪怪的。。
01:52:076 (8) - 前移至01:51:826 不太对。


._. 加油

• 调一下Offset 有点抢拍
  02:32:334-02:48:334 :Kiai Time

• 00:12:326 (3): 放在①的位置
  00:52:576 (1): 去掉Finish或者延长两拍

• 00:52:576 (1): 同Easy
  02:12:576 (1): ^
  01:37:326 (3,1): 距离太近

• HP+1
  00:30:326 (7,8): 距离太近
  00:49:326 (5,1): ^
  00:52:576 (1): 同Easy
  01:37:286 (3,1): 距离太近

impossiblexu wrote:

[General]

• 调一下Offset 有点抢拍
  02:32:334-02:48:334 :Kiai Time

[Easy]

• 00:12:326 (3): 放在①的位置
  00:52:576 (1): 去掉Finish或者延长两拍

[Normal]

• 00:52:576 (1): 同Easy
  02:12:576 (1): ^
  01:37:326 (3,1): 距离太近

[Hard]

• HP+1
  00:30:326 (7,8): 距离太近
  00:49:326 (5,1): ^
  00:52:576 (1): 同Easy
  01:37:286 (3,1): 距离太近

Good map~

^STAR^

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

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[General]
The BPM should be 120. Not 120,01 I've changed,but i think BPM120.006,offset 340 is better

[Easy]
00:08:345 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, that very difficult for new player
00:16:344 (1) - ^
00:34:593 (1) - Too short for easy diff
01:12:841 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, that very difficult for new player
01:14:341 (1) - Make symetric?

[Normal]
00:14:345 (1) - Clap and finish is bad, remove clap or finish?
00:18:344 (1) - Move 1 grid right?
01:14:341 (1) - ^
01:49:338 (2) - Make symetric?
01:50:338 (3) - ^
01:52:338 (1) - Move 1 grid down?

[Hard]
00:27:344 (6) - Move 1 grid right?
00:28:844 (3) - Move 1 grid down? So the (3) is stack with 00:27:844 (8)?
00:46:842 (5) - Move 1 grid up?
02:40:335 (1) - Move 1 grid right and move 1 grid down? So the (1) is stack with 02:38:835 (3)?

[Insane]
00:18:844 (2) - Not stacked with 1 at end
00:20:344 (1,2,3) - Not stacked with 2 at end
00:26:344 (2) - Not stacked with 1 at end
00:43:343 (2) - ^
00:44:593 (2) - ^
01:16:840 (1,1,1) - Not stacked with 01:16:340 (1) at end
01:50:338 (3) - Not stacked with 2 at end
02:21:086 (4) - Not stacked with 3 at end
02:28:336 (1,1) - Not stacked with 02:27:586 (4) at end
02:30:336 (1) - Don't let this object is hidden

Great song
(((((っ´Θ｀)っ <- STAR

tsukamaete wrote:

长沙沙包路过

shenpei310 wrote:

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Blazevoir wrote:

[General]
* Err... Do you think you could trim both the video and the music file at the beginning? It just seems weird that the video's playing while we're hearing nothing ahh,actually,there is music,very light,you can hear it when you listen with earphone.this is why i put note in diff hard and insane. Thanks for pointing that out. I really didn't hear it at first.
* Trim the end of the music file if you're not gonna map to it.i don't think so...many people use osu! as a mp3 player,i do not want them listen to a incomplete version of this song...... I understand how you feel, but I even had to trim the music file for one of my maps...

[Easy]
Why isn't this as long as the other difficulties? must be the same?i think it repeat,so maybe no need for new player to play 2 time...... Okay... but if someone else end up complaining about it...

[Hard]
01:45:334 (5,1) - I don't know... Shouldn't there be a note/notes somewhere between these?
i tell you what i thought....first you should hear there is something make me feel like a finish(i do not know how to explain it specificly in english).it is light and low,so you need a earphone ,or you can not hear(like the beginning part ).. Hmm... I see.

[Insane]
00:02:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, I don't think these notes are needed. Maybe you should map something for Easy and Normal around this section too?
i should say that there is someting you didn't hear,that's why i put down the volume of the hit.but if you still thinck there is no need.i'll think about it. (you can hear 3 group of dong dong dong(sounds like),the reason why i start on the second one is that
i want people to find the rhythm in the first.)
for easy and normal ,i prefer start with spinner.... I guess that's fine... for now.

00:40:338 (1) - What in the... why did you slow this down, especially since any previous sliders/sliders after this one weren't? ah ,because this slider is finish,so i feel it sounds slow....do you agree?wait for your suggestion I'm sorry, but I don't
01:45:334 (2,1) - Same case as Hard
for the next few notes,they are not based on the voice of singer or other background musical instrument,but the bass(like 01:46:334 (1) 01:47:334(1,2,3,1) 01:50:334(3,1,2,3)02:03:208(3,4,5,6,7)......because i want some diversity. I see.
02:31:582 (6) - This isn't spaced out the same as the previous five notes.now better? No; move it up one grid space.
02:34:332 (1) - I want to hit this note immediately after the previous note ....hah...insane,so not that stict about distance I'm not that good yet, lol Sorry about this.

done..

Blazevoir wrote:

My replies in the spoilerbox are in this color.

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Blazevoir wrote:

[General]
* Err... Do you think you could trim both the video and the music file at the beginning? It just seems weird that the video's playing while we're hearing nothing ahh,actually,there is music,very light,you can hear it when you listen with earphone.this is why i put note in diff hard and insane. Thanks for pointing that out. I really didn't hear it at first.
* Trim the end of the music file if you're not gonna map to it.i don't think so...many people use osu! as a mp3 player,i do not want them listen to a incomplete version of this song...... I understand how you feel, but I even had to trim the music file for one of my maps...

[Easy]
Why isn't this as long as the other difficulties? must be the same?i think it repeat,so maybe no need for new player to play 2 time...... Okay... but if someone else end up complaining about it...

[Hard]
01:45:334 (5,1) - I don't know... Shouldn't there be a note/notes somewhere between these?
i tell you what i thought....first you should hear there is something make me feel like a finish(i do not know how to explain it specificly in english).it is light and low,so you need a earphone ,or you can not hear(like the beginning part ).. Hmm... I see.

[Insane]
00:02:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, I don't think these notes are needed. Maybe you should map something for Easy and Normal around this section too?
i should say that there is someting you didn't hear,that's why i put down the volume of the hit.but if you still thinck there is no need.i'll think about it. (you can hear 3 group of dong dong dong(sounds like),the reason why i start on the second one is that
i want people to find the rhythm in the first.)
for easy and normal ,i prefer start with spinner.... I guess that's fine... for now.

00:40:338 (1) - What in the... why did you slow this down, especially since any previous sliders/sliders after this one weren't? ah ,because this slider is finish,so i feel it sounds slow....do you agree?wait for your suggestion I'm sorry, but I don't
01:45:334 (2,1) - Same case as Hard
for the next few notes,they are not based on the voice of singer or other background musical instrument,but the bass(like 01:46:334 (1) 01:47:334(1,2,3,1) 01:50:334(3,1,2,3)02:03:208(3,4,5,6,7)......because i want some diversity. I see.
02:31:582 (6) - This isn't spaced out the same as the previous five notes.now better? No; move it up one grid space.
02:34:332 (1) - I want to hit this note immediately after the previous note ....hah...insane,so not that stict about distance I'm not that good yet, lol Sorry about this.

done..

deepsea wrote:

1.coincident timing in all diffs.
2.capitalize the title.

[Hard]
01:27:08 (1) ~ (7) The stack like this after spinner is hard to read, at least in first chorus.

Blazevoir wrote:

Uhh... can you do another full submission? It won't load the music file...

Sunny Holic wrote:

支持中文歌～ ~

Vikon wrote:

map不錯, 找不到大問題
只是一些建議

[Easy]
00:14:330 (1,1) - 對於EASY來說，note太接近spinner只能让他们别转太狠了。。。再变的话我听不习惯
01:10:330 (1,1) - ^
02:30:330 (1,1) - ^

[Normal]
fine for me

[Hard]
02:47:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這麼多note放在一起，或會有點混淆迪西也说过了，所以第一次分开放了，到后面的话节奏应该掌握了。再说总不能认为这首歌只被玩一次吧？

[Insane]
00:04:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

(mod得有點少，可以不給kd~ good luck~

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request :3

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Please full submit the map again. I was given the update button when I just downloaded and installed the map. [!]it is weird....
2. What a cute song :3ah,i think so~
3. Did you cut the video or it does stop on 02:59:080?i cut....
4. Cut the useless part of the mp3. It could decrease the filesize. But I suggest you to map the song until the end.i think play a song over 3min is too tired,so......but i want to give the players a complete mp3 of this song....

[Easy]
00:38:080 (2) - Move it like this (turn off distance snap).ok..
[attachment=0:da26e]screenshot024.jpg[/attachment:da26e]
00:52:580 (1) - Extend it to 00:56:330.i really do not know why many modders want me to change this...after the spinner is over,according to the lyrics,it is another part,and i make it as a break.....
01:18:455 - Will be better if you remove the break.done, add a spinner
02:12:580 (1) - Extend it to 02:16:330.the same reason

[Normal]
01:00:631 (2) - I prefer it put on 01:00:411. [?]nothing is there????
01:03:278 (2) - Make it start from 01:03:499.nothing is there????
00:52:580 (1) - Extend it to 00:56:330.
02:10:580 (1) - Ugly slider. Change the shape.......changed
02:12:580 (1) - Extend it to 02:16:330.

[Hard]
00:02:330 to 00:05:830 - Soft hitsound sounds weird. Change them to normal hitsound, then lower the volume to the first tick. Also, remove the whistle sound.maybe it is really hard for people to here the bass here,i think i had better remove them
01:26:080 (1) - Can you change this into a slider or something else? This slider is too short and ruin the epicness of this diff.
02:46:080 (1) - ^ah,i am very bad at spinner,but i can still get 300 here,so i think it is ok....

[Insane]
-- I found some death jumps. Consider reducing the distance of some jumps?not too hard...but i remove the jump in hard diff
-- A little bit overmapped but it's okay I think.

00:02:330 to 00:05:830 - Soft hitsound sounds weird. Change them to normal hitsound, then lower the volume to the first tick. Also, remove the whistle sound.all removed!!!!!!!
01:16:830 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.but now it looks beautiful? if remove,one color looks ugly...
02:24:330 (2,3,4) - Unstacked properly.maybe you don't get the newest one?

Star. I love modding this.

1. Maybe some Custom Hitcircle Colors ?

1. Tick Rate 2 please.
2. Drain Rate +1 please.

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Maybe some Custom Hitcircle Colors ?

i am bad at drawing,so bad at selecting color,but i think pink is ok...

[Insane]

00:19:330 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:39:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream isn't going synchrone. (6,7,8) are really badly placed. Please remap this stream.
01:12:330 (9) - Add New Combo.
01:12:830 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:35:330 (5) - Move 2 grid levels to the right. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
01:35:580 (6) - Move 2 grid levels to the left.
01:55:330 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:01:330 (1) - ^
all done!

[Hard]

1. Tick Rate 2 please.
2. Drain Rate +1 please.

01:42:330 (1) - Center this one ?
01:43:080 (1) - ^
all done

[Normal]

01:39:080 (2) - Add New Combo here so it will match with the rest of the difficulties at that point.done


[Easy]

00:52:580 (1) - Extend till 00:56:330. (VanMoNky also posted it and I agree with him.)now,i think at 00:55:330 or 00:56:330 both are ok...since you all like end at 00:56:330...i'll change...the other spinners like this are also changed

Starred~

Dusty wrote:

[Hard]
sometimes your 1/4 triples are stacked and sometimes they're not, it confused me at first o__o

01:38:580 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - unstack please? It's a little awkward to mei do not think so,but i found it boring,so add a spinner,mayby a little difficult

[Insane]
01:38:580 (1,1,1,1) - unstack these?如果突然在屏幕上四个地方放四个单音，感觉有点莫名其妙。
01:58:080 (4,1) - and these?没啥必要。

hm, I think I like [Insane] best, it looks like you put the most effort into that onei am good at making insane.我最先做的insane，然后另存为HARD,再一个个删，再NORMAL。。。

arsrun wrote:

nice♫
a little Advice:

[normal]
01:18:580 SP may start at 01:18:330也可以，但是normal我想根据歌词来，hard和insane这里根据音乐来

[hard]
01:18:705 (2) remove this note.unuseful, here is no hitsound 3>是有点问题。
01:43:330 (2~ ) 这段不对,redone it plz~不是不对，从这里开始变为跟音乐而不是跟歌词
02:03:080 May add a note here.我觉得都可以，我听上去感觉就是两个。弹起来也不别扭。

[ins]
01:18:705 (2) as hard.
02:03:080 as hard.