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braian5234
yeah :twisted:
Topic Starter
shenpei310

braian5234 wrote:

yeah :twisted:
what?hi?……
The 08 team_Bourdon
nice map~
use kiai time???
and give star~ :D
Topic Starter
shenpei310

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

nice map~
use kiai time???
and give star~ :D
THANKS
Pokie
General
  • - Preview Point?
    - Source留空
    - 刪掉.osb後full submit



Easy
  • - 取消lead-in

00:22:326 (1) - 減少一個折返


Normal
  • - 取消lead-in

00:34:576 (1) - 橫放?
02:06:826 (6) - Ctrl+H


Hard
  • - 只有這個難度選了custom combo color?
    - 取消countdown
    - lead-in second 1004

01:38:576 (1) - spacing
01:52:076 (8) - 前移至01:51:826


._. 加油
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Pokie wrote:

General
  • - Preview Point?
    - Source留空
    - 刪掉.osb後full submit



Easy
  • - 取消lead-in

00:22:326 (1) - 減少一個折返不太对。。


Normal
  • - 取消lead-in

00:34:576 (1) - 橫放?
02:06:826 (6) - Ctrl+H


Hard
  • - 只有這個難度選了custom combo color?
    - 取消countdown
    - lead-in second 1004

01:38:576 (1) - spacing 不放中间会怪怪的。。
01:52:076 (8) - 前移至01:51:826 不太对。


._. 加油
至少还是让我这个新手了解了不少基础知识。。。
Dotsu
[General]

  • 调一下Offset 有点抢拍
    02:32:334-02:48:334 :Kiai Time


[Easy]

  • 00:12:326 (3): 放在①的位置
    00:52:576 (1): 去掉Finish或者延长两拍


[Normal]

  • 00:52:576 (1): 同Easy
    02:12:576 (1): ^
    01:37:326 (3,1): 距离太近


[Hard]

  • HP+1
    00:30:326 (7,8): 距离太近
    00:49:326 (5,1): ^
    00:52:576 (1): 同Easy
    01:37:286 (3,1): 距离太近


Good map~

^STAR^
Topic Starter
shenpei310

impossiblexu wrote:

[General]

  • 调一下Offset 有点抢拍
    02:32:334-02:48:334 :Kiai Time


[Easy]

  • 00:12:326 (3): 放在①的位置
    00:52:576 (1): 去掉Finish或者延长两拍


[Normal]

  • 00:52:576 (1): 同Easy
    02:12:576 (1): ^
    01:37:326 (3,1): 距离太近


[Hard]

  • HP+1
    00:30:326 (7,8): 距离太近
    00:49:326 (5,1): ^
    00:52:576 (1): 同Easy
    01:37:286 (3,1): 距离太近


Good map~

^STAR^
感觉有些东西还是没啥必要。。。转盘子时间的问题我感觉我的节奏比较习惯
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
The BPM should be 120. Not 120,01

[Easy]
00:08:345 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, that very difficult for new player
00:16:344 (1) - ^
00:34:593 (1) - Too short for easy diff
01:12:841 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, that very difficult for new player

01:14:341 (1) - Make symetric?

[Normal]
00:14:345 (1) - Clap and finish is bad, remove clap or finish?
00:18:344 (1) - Move 1 grid right?
01:14:341 (1) - ^
01:49:338 (2) - Make symetric?
01:50:338 (3) - ^
01:52:338 (1) - Move 1 grid down?

[Hard]
00:27:344 (6) - Move 1 grid right?
00:28:844 (3) - Move 1 grid down? So the (3) is stack with 00:27:844 (8)?
00:46:842 (5) - Move 1 grid up?
02:40:335 (1) - Move 1 grid right and move 1 grid down? So the (1) is stack with 02:38:835 (3)?

[Insane]
00:18:844 (2) - Not stacked with 1 at end
00:20:344 (1,2,3) - Not stacked with 2 at end
00:26:344 (2) - Not stacked with 1 at end
00:43:343 (2) - ^
00:44:593 (2) - ^
01:16:840 (1,1,1) - Not stacked with 01:16:340 (1) at end
01:50:338 (3) - Not stacked with 2 at end
02:21:086 (4) - Not stacked with 3 at end
02:28:336 (1,1) - Not stacked with 02:27:586 (4) at end
02:30:336 (1) - Don't let this object is hidden

Great song
(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
The BPM should be 120. Not 120,01 I've changed,but i think BPM120.006,offset 340 is better

[Easy]
00:08:345 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, that very difficult for new player
00:16:344 (1) - ^
00:34:593 (1) - Too short for easy diff
01:12:841 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, that very difficult for new player

01:14:341 (1) - Make symetric?

[Normal]
00:14:345 (1) - Clap and finish is bad, remove clap or finish?
00:18:344 (1) - Move 1 grid right?
01:14:341 (1) - ^
01:49:338 (2) - Make symetric?
01:50:338 (3) - ^
01:52:338 (1) - Move 1 grid down?

[Hard]
00:27:344 (6) - Move 1 grid right?
00:28:844 (3) - Move 1 grid down? So the (3) is stack with 00:27:844 (8)?
00:46:842 (5) - Move 1 grid up?
02:40:335 (1) - Move 1 grid right and move 1 grid down? So the (1) is stack with 02:38:835 (3)?

[Insane]
00:18:844 (2) - Not stacked with 1 at end
00:20:344 (1,2,3) - Not stacked with 2 at end
00:26:344 (2) - Not stacked with 1 at end
00:43:343 (2) - ^
00:44:593 (2) - ^
01:16:840 (1,1,1) - Not stacked with 01:16:340 (1) at end
01:50:338 (3) - Not stacked with 2 at end
02:21:086 (4) - Not stacked with 3 at end
02:28:336 (1,1) - Not stacked with 02:27:586 (4) at end
02:30:336 (1) - Don't let this object is hidden

Great song
(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
ALL done! nice mod,thanks!
Nozomi Kiriya
=w=
tsuka
长沙沙包路过
Topic Starter
shenpei310

tsukamaete wrote:

长沙沙包路过
老乡么呵呵。。不晓得长沙有几个人玩这游戏。要不是我在上海读书,一辈子也发现不了这游戏

你这大神别装什么沙包。。。
Blazevoir
Sorry that I couldn't mod this sooner :? Anyway, like I said I would, here's my mod:

Black = just a comment (not sure what color the issue would be in)
Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this
Red = you MUST fix this
Anything red with a large font size AND in bold = Don't ignore it!

[General]
* Err... Do you think you could trim both the video and the music file at the beginning? It just seems weird that the video's playing while we're hearing nothing :?
* Trim the end of the music file if you're not gonna map to it.
* I know it's been said already, but add Kiai Time.
* Fix your inherited timing sections!

[Easy]
Why isn't this as long as the other difficulties?

00:08:339 (1,2,3) - Is this kind of spacing allowed on an Easy? Just a suggestion, but maybe you could remove the note at 00:08:339 (1) then make the spinner at 00:06:339 (1) end at 00:08:339 instead.
01:17:836 (4) - Add a break after this?

[Normal]
00:17:342 (3,4,5) - Make these into a repeating slider instead?
00:22:341 (1) - Too close to the previous combo
00:48:590 (1,2) - I don't like how this is arranged... Maybe you should delete the second slider, make the first slider repeat, then just place a note at 00:49:090 or something.
00:50:590 (1,2) - ^
01:17:839 (4) - Add a break after this.
02:38:085 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:02:339 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Umm... I don't know what color to put this, but anyway... I understand that no music plays here, but I don't think these notes are needed... Why I say that is because Easy and Normal didn't have anything around this section.
01:45:334 (5,1) - I don't know... Shouldn't there be a note/notes somewhere between these?

[Insane]
00:02:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, I don't think these notes are needed. Maybe you should map something for Easy and Normal around this section too?
00:40:338 (1) - What in the... why did you slow this down, especially since any previous sliders/sliders after this one weren't?
01:45:334 (2,1) - Same case as Hard
01:46:334 (1) - I want to say this is too close to the previous combo, but I'll just wait and see what you do first about my 01:45:334 comment.
02:10:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Shouldn't these be spaced out evenly?
02:23:582 (1) - I hope this slider gets fixed after you fixed your inherited timing sections, because it won't slow down like the other three after it.
02:31:582 (6) - This isn't spaced out the same as the previous five notes.
02:34:332 (1) - I want to hit this note immediately after the previous note :?
02:35:332 (2) - Stack underneath properly?

I'll do a recheck later.
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Blazevoir wrote:

Sorry that I couldn't mod this sooner :? Anyway, like I said I would, here's my mod:

Black = just a comment (not sure what color the issue would be in)
Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this
Red = you MUST fix this
Anything red with a large font size AND in bold = Don't ignore it!

[General]
* Err... Do you think you could trim both the video and the music file at the beginning? It just seems weird that the video's playing while we're hearing nothing :? ahh,actually,there is music,very light,you can hear it when you listen with earphone.this is why i put note in diff hard and insane.
* Trim the end of the music file if you're not gonna map to it.i don't think so...many people use osu! as a mp3 player,i do not want them listen to a incomplete version of this song......
* I know it's been said already, but add Kiai Time.done.....
* Fix your inherited timing sections!

[Easy]
Why isn't this as long as the other difficulties? must be the same?i think it repeat,so maybe no need for new player to play 2 time......

00:08:339 (1,2,3) - Is this kind of spacing allowed on an Easy? Just a suggestion, but maybe you could remove the note at 00:08:339 (1) then make the spinner at 00:06:339 (1) end at 00:08:339 instead. good,done
01:17:836 (4) - Add a break after this? ok.

[Normal]
00:17:342 (3,4,5) - Make these into a repeating slider instead?
00:22:341 (1) - Too close to the previous combo
00:48:590 (1,2) - I don't like how this is arranged... Maybe you should delete the second slider, make the first slider repeat, then just place a note at 00:49:090 or something.
00:50:590 (1,2) - ^
01:17:839 (4) - Add a break after this.
02:38:085 (2) - ^
^all done


[Hard]
00:02:339 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Umm... I don't know what color to put this, but anyway... I understand that no music plays here, but I don't think these notes are needed... Why I say that is because Easy and Normal didn't have anything around this section. explained ^
01:45:334 (5,1) - I don't know... Shouldn't there be a note/notes somewhere between these?
i tell you what i thought....first you should hear there is something make me feel like a finish(i do not know how to explain it specificly in english).it is light and low,so you need a earphone ,or you can not hear(like the beginning part )..

[Insane]
00:02:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, I don't think these notes are needed. Maybe you should map something for Easy and Normal around this section too?
i should say that there is someting you didn't hear,that's why i put down the volume of the hit.but if you still thinck there is no need.i'll think about it. (you can hear 3 group of dong dong dong(sounds like),the reason why i start on the second one is that
i want people to find the rhythm in the first.)
for easy and normal ,i prefer start with spinner....

00:40:338 (1) - What in the... why did you slow this down, especially since any previous sliders/sliders after this one weren't? ah ,because this slider is finish,so i feel it sounds slow....do you agree?wait for your suggestion
01:45:334 (2,1) - Same case as Hard
for the next few notes,they are not based on the voice of singer or other background musical instrument,but the bass(like 01:46:334 (1) 01:47:334(1,2,3,1) 01:50:334(3,1,2,3)02:03:208(3,4,5,6,7)......because i want some diversity.
01:46:334 (1) - I want to say this is too close to the previous combo, but I'll just wait and see what you do first about my 01:45:334 comment. too.......
02:10:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Shouldn't these be spaced out evenly? ah,i've made a big mistake...weird here..
02:23:582 (1) - I hope this slider gets fixed after you fixed your inherited timing sections, because it won't slow down like the other three after it. done...what a big mistake.........
02:31:582 (6) - This isn't spaced out the same as the previous five notes.now better?
02:34:332 (1) - I want to hit this note immediately after the previous note :?....hah...insane,so not that stict about distance
02:35:332 (2) - Stack underneath properly?done

I'll do a recheck later.

done..
Blazevoir
My replies in the spoilerbox are in this color.

shenpei310 wrote:

Blazevoir wrote:

[General]
* Err... Do you think you could trim both the video and the music file at the beginning? It just seems weird that the video's playing while we're hearing nothing :? ahh,actually,there is music,very light,you can hear it when you listen with earphone.this is why i put note in diff hard and insane. Thanks for pointing that out. I really didn't hear it at first.
* Trim the end of the music file if you're not gonna map to it.i don't think so...many people use osu! as a mp3 player,i do not want them listen to a incomplete version of this song...... I understand how you feel, but I even had to trim the music file for one of my maps...

[Easy]
Why isn't this as long as the other difficulties? must be the same?i think it repeat,so maybe no need for new player to play 2 time...... Okay... but if someone else end up complaining about it...

[Hard]
01:45:334 (5,1) - I don't know... Shouldn't there be a note/notes somewhere between these?
i tell you what i thought....first you should hear there is something make me feel like a finish(i do not know how to explain it specificly in english).it is light and low,so you need a earphone ,or you can not hear(like the beginning part ).. Hmm... I see.

[Insane]
00:02:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, I don't think these notes are needed. Maybe you should map something for Easy and Normal around this section too?
i should say that there is someting you didn't hear,that's why i put down the volume of the hit.but if you still thinck there is no need.i'll think about it. (you can hear 3 group of dong dong dong(sounds like),the reason why i start on the second one is that
i want people to find the rhythm in the first.)
for easy and normal ,i prefer start with spinner.... I guess that's fine... for now.

00:40:338 (1) - What in the... why did you slow this down, especially since any previous sliders/sliders after this one weren't? ah ,because this slider is finish,so i feel it sounds slow....do you agree?wait for your suggestion I'm sorry, but I don't :?
01:45:334 (2,1) - Same case as Hard
for the next few notes,they are not based on the voice of singer or other background musical instrument,but the bass(like 01:46:334 (1) 01:47:334(1,2,3,1) 01:50:334(3,1,2,3)02:03:208(3,4,5,6,7)......because i want some diversity. I see.
02:31:582 (6) - This isn't spaced out the same as the previous five notes.now better? No; move it up one grid space.
02:34:332 (1) - I want to hit this note immediately after the previous note :?....hah...insane,so not that stict about distance I'm not that good yet, lol :? Sorry about this.
done..
And now for the recheck:

[General]
Umm... why does the Kiai Time keep going even after the map ends for all difficulties?

[Easy]
I said everything in the spoilerbox.

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Also fine~

[Insane]
I said everything in the spoilerbox.

I didn't really have anything to complain about this time, so here, have a ★ (well, two of them)~
deepsea
1.coincident timing in all diffs.
2.capitalize the title.

[Hard]
01:27:08 (1) ~ (7) The stack like this after spinner is hard to read, at least in first chorus.
Topic Starter
shenpei310

Blazevoir wrote:

My replies in the spoilerbox are in this color.

Blazevoir wrote:

[General]
* Err... Do you think you could trim both the video and the music file at the beginning? It just seems weird that the video's playing while we're hearing nothing :? ahh,actually,there is music,very light,you can hear it when you listen with earphone.this is why i put note in diff hard and insane. Thanks for pointing that out. I really didn't hear it at first.
* Trim the end of the music file if you're not gonna map to it.i don't think so...many people use osu! as a mp3 player,i do not want them listen to a incomplete version of this song...... I understand how you feel, but I even had to trim the music file for one of my maps...

[Easy]
Why isn't this as long as the other difficulties? must be the same?i think it repeat,so maybe no need for new player to play 2 time...... Okay... but if someone else end up complaining about it...

[Hard]
01:45:334 (5,1) - I don't know... Shouldn't there be a note/notes somewhere between these?
i tell you what i thought....first you should hear there is something make me feel like a finish(i do not know how to explain it specificly in english).it is light and low,so you need a earphone ,or you can not hear(like the beginning part ).. Hmm... I see.

[Insane]
00:02:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, I don't think these notes are needed. Maybe you should map something for Easy and Normal around this section too?
i should say that there is someting you didn't hear,that's why i put down the volume of the hit.but if you still thinck there is no need.i'll think about it. (you can hear 3 group of dong dong dong(sounds like),the reason why i start on the second one is that
i want people to find the rhythm in the first.)
for easy and normal ,i prefer start with spinner.... I guess that's fine... for now.

00:40:338 (1) - What in the... why did you slow this down, especially since any previous sliders/sliders after this one weren't? ah ,because this slider is finish,so i feel it sounds slow....do you agree?wait for your suggestion I'm sorry, but I don't :?
01:45:334 (2,1) - Same case as Hard
for the next few notes,they are not based on the voice of singer or other background musical instrument,but the bass(like 01:46:334 (1) 01:47:334(1,2,3,1) 01:50:334(3,1,2,3)02:03:208(3,4,5,6,7)......because i want some diversity. I see.
02:31:582 (6) - This isn't spaced out the same as the previous five notes.now better? No; move it up one grid space.
02:34:332 (1) - I want to hit this note immediately after the previous note :?....hah...insane,so not that stict about distance I'm not that good yet, lol :? Sorry about this.
done..
And now for the recheck:

[General]
Umm... why does the Kiai Time keep going even after the map ends for all difficulties?

[Easy]
I said everything in the spoilerbox.

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Also fine~

[Insane]
I said everything in the spoilerbox.

I didn't really have anything to complain about this time, so here, have a ★ (well, two of them)~[/quote]

all done!!!!!!!!!!!!
Topic Starter
shenpei310

deepsea wrote:

1.coincident timing in all diffs.
2.capitalize the title.

[Hard]
01:27:08 (1) ~ (7) The stack like this after spinner is hard to read, at least in first chorus.
done
Blazevoir
Uhh... can you do another full submission? It won't load the music file...
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