cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, shenpei310~

因为是要泡了的图，也没有什么可吐槽的，都是nazi……

[Collab]
01:27:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个完全可以摆到成中心对称的 ok
02:07:711 (x,x) - 可以放两个note 故意的。。
02:33:086 (2,4,6) - 间距不等，而且46overlap了，6往上移 changed a little
02:40:336 (1,2) - 把2放到1的下面比较好看 ok

[Hard]
00:38:086 (1) - 跟后面有点近 fixed
01:50:836 (6) - 略丑 changed a little

[Easy]
好漂亮的slider

木有啦~
快快rank~~~

wmfchris wrote:

哇舊圖

[General]
- you don't really need the tag Cpop: 1) searchs nothing else 2) Confusing "canton-pop" and "chinese-pop" 3) It'll be shown in genre. removed
- N:C1 and N:C2 is the same judging from your song file, just merge them together. ok

[Hard]
00:16:336 (1) - you can hear a weak cymbal sound, and considering 00:08:336 - you can put a weak finish here. fine
00:27:336 (5,6,7,1,2) - I'll prefer spreading them out, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356024 ok
00:34:586 (1,2,3) - just whistle on (3) like the last combo? ok
01:38:586 (1,2,1,2) - well even with NC it's kinda unexpected that there's a difference in time...Try to unstack the notes? 每个往下移了2grid
02:01:336 (2) - [Nazi] second slider anchor right 1 grid so that the slider align with the notes and the curved slider well. ok
well I'm not a big fan for how the whistle is used in the song, not sure but a bit inconsistancy?

[Collab]
00:23:086 (2,3,4,5) - they can be stacked? fixed
00:52:336 (3) - misleading spacing... 这个我觉得还好，因为是在长白线重音上，不容易读成红线note
01:37:836 (7) - Make the hexagon accurately... right 1 grid + down 2 grids -w- ok
01:38:586 (1,2,1,2) - same as Hard 同H
02:34:336 (1,2,3) - discouraged; a large part of (3) is covered by (1) and the hitburst of (6). 整个ctrl+j了一下，再调了一下位置

[Normal]
00:23:086 (2) - 1/2 slider with 4 ticks is quite unexpected in the normal. Just reduce 1 tick? ok
02:01:336 (1,2) - Try to make symmetrical pair of sliders instead of overlapping them? ok, done

[Easy]
01:44:336 (1,1) - they just overlap quite a lot, and this causes difficulty for beginners. orz 改转盘了

quite a lot of slider overlapping problem, and may need a bit more mods.

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
00:34:586 (1,2,3) - 好像是我搞錯了前面沒whistle looool remove whistledone

no kd

1. 02:20:086 (2) - The reverse arrow of this slider is totally hidden by 02:19:336 (6)'s hitburst which make it really hard to expect. It needs to be visible, otherwise it is too confusing.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哇中文歌!!

2B difficulty is for fun, not rank. The others are for rank.

求2b diff._.