1. Easy (1.33 stars, 94 notes)
2. Extra (5.2 stars, 371 notes)
3. Hard (3.34 stars, 271 notes)
4. Insane (4.38 stars, 330 notes)
5. Normal (2.2 stars, 171 notes)

1. 大概没有

1. 00:40:597 (1) - 感觉拉到00:40:447开始比较好

1. 00:31:044 (1) - 包好？基本上我能看出来blanket的都属于比较明显的了_(:з」∠)_
2. 00:33:432 (1) - 和5做直线？往左移动一点

1. 感觉AR8是不是太高了- -7或者7.5好点
2. 00:26:567 (2) - CTRL+G? 和前面的00:25:671 (5,6) - 一样搞对拉打起来爽一点
3. 00:26:865 (3) - 朝上curve好像好点
4. 00:30:149 (2) - CTRL+G吧...这样flow就是一个螺旋
   

1. 00:17:014 (3) - 为什么不stack 00:16:119 (4) -

1. 00:22:388 (5,6,1) - 试试看5和6换下位置然后把1CTRL+G
   
2. 01:29:253 (1) - 为什么这个NC了前面的diff没有- -不如统一一下其他diff最后一个note也这样？起码Insane可以

• General

1. bg逼死强迫症系列
   
   Extra
2. 00:42:537 (6,8,1) - 调下位置http://puu.sh/hgBXe.jpg，空间不够的话这组整体上移些
   
   Insane
3. 01:03:731 (2) - 不ctrl+g做个跳吗，hard这里都有
4. 01:18:507 (5) - 跳的位置不对，应该在01:18:507 (5,1) - 跳。所以移到368,120
   
   Hard
5. 00:45:820 (2,3) - 很容易让人误以为1/2
6. 01:16:119 (4) - ctrl+g，01:16:119 (4,1) - 之间形成跳好点
   
   Normal
7. 01:01:194 (5) - 变成1/2滑条前后衔接是不是顺畅点

• Maybe you can try moving the slider at 00:02:388(1) from its current position (x92, y148) to (x92, y149)? like I said not that big of a deal

• Maybe you can try using a similar pattern found at 00:04:029(2, 3, 4)?

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Extra]
00:33:432 (1,2) - 00:34:029 (5,6) - 不善良，建議..到底是谁不善良点了啦！..总而言之我往外拉出来了一点点..

SPOILER

中間5尾巴和1重叠，2和7重叠
00:42:985 (1) - 超出屏幕都在说这个，fix
01:04:402 (4) - 這種貼在尾巴上的如鯁在喉，不善良，建議貼1腦袋fix
01:16:865 (4,6) - 01:16:716 (3,5) - 重合成這樣这个...稍微换了种摆法

SPOILER

01:23:432 (1,2) - 不太好看我觉得还是在忍受范围内的！
[Insane]
00:29:701 (1) - 不切開麽（其實我覺得沒問題，但可能會有人挑刺吧），00:29:552 (6,1) - 之間距離可以加大fix
00:32:089 (1) -

SPOILER

01:00:746 (1) - blanket?这个是不想让他blanket
01:12:835 (1,2,3) - 正三角fix
01:13:134 (3,1) - 重叠很perfect啊
01:16:119 (4) - blanket...很perfect啊！
01:18:656 (1) - 再修一下形狀吧现在很perfect啊
[Hard]
00:14:328 (1,2,3) - blanket
00:21:492 (1) - 距離與前後都不符，特別是打開stack之後fix
01:03:731 (3,4) - blanket
01:04:776 (3) - ^
[Normal]
00:14:328 (1) - 00:15:522 (2) - ^
00:52:537 (1,2,3) - 修好看點？
[Easy]
沒啥想説的

[Teichan] wrote:

yo, from your M4M queue lol, I have no maps now so I'd like to reserve a ticket orz.

[General]

1. 这个1365*768的bg，我的强迫症发作了
2. 总体ar有点偏高，我建议enh的ar都-1

[Easy]

1. 00:35:820 (1,2,3) - 红线滑条？低难度我建议这里还是跟vocal
2. 其他没什么挑的

NH都没什么挑，只有h这里有一个nazi 00:55:970 (1,2) -

[Insane]

1. 去掉widescreen supportfix
2. 00:27:164 (5,1) - 不太喜欢这样的flow< 我更倾向于顺时针转180，不过这里排版好像已经定下来了那就算了

[Extra]

1. 00:25:223 (1,2,3,4) - 第一pc十分具有误导性，至少我以为是stream了，要不把间距摆大点第一pc嘛！
2. 00:42:985 (1) - 我觉得放左边一些跳得更爽fix

实力量产不得不服，送星，你就可以泡啦

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

Extra

1. 00:36:865 (1,2) - 总觉得这两个换一下比较好，你试试。恩这个好！
2. 01:18:208 (5,6) - 这两个换一下，跳的爽一点。恩这个也好！
3. 没啥好写的啊，射一颗再墅。

Insane

1. widescreen support去掉。fix
2. 00:10:895 (2) - 我觉得这个反向，然后再放远一点比较好，现在这样放虽然ds差不多但打起来感觉有点奇怪。fix
3. 00:27:014 (4,5,1) - 这个略难，比00:29:253 (5,6,1) - 要难太多，但song里的pattern却是差不多。感觉45换一下位置比较好。fix
4. 01:21:791 (3) - 放在204,136吧，你01:20:597 (3,4) - 来了这么一发，这边vocal又唱那么高，可以跳大点。fix
5. 和ex好像，大概知道你怎么搞的了。呀，自从那个什么鬼上线后我都尽量把insane和extra做的比较像，不想再被挑那个难度问题了简直恶心

Hard

1. 00:08:059 (3) - 这个反向比较合曲感觉。

fix
e和n都ok，哦草我只写了那么点美酒了。

待泡戳我就行。

liangv587 wrote:

哇哈哈，m4m来了https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289713

• General

1. bg逼死强迫症系列
   
   Extra
2. 00:42:537 (6,8,1) - 调下位置http://puu.sh/hgBXe.jpg，空间不够的话这组整体上移些 这个改了个方法放
   
   Insane
3. 01:03:731 (2) - 不ctrl+g做个跳吗，hard这里都有ctrl+g了后面的flow就很奇怪了
4. 01:18:507 (5) - 跳的位置不对，应该在01:18:507 (5,1) - 跳。所以移到368,120这个我觉得还ok
   
   Hard
5. 00:45:820 (2,3) - 很容易让人误以为1/2我都觉得还OK
6. 01:16:119 (4) - ctrl+g，01:16:119 (4,1) - 之间形成跳好点fix
   
   Normal
7. 01:01:194 (5) - 变成1/2滑条前后衔接是不是顺畅点

Megurine Luka wrote:

[General]

1. 大概没有

[Easy]

1. 00:40:597 (1) - 感觉拉到00:40:447开始比较好

[Normal]

1. 00:31:044 (1) - 包好？基本上我能看出来blanket的都属于比较明显的了_(:з」∠)_
2. 00:33:432 (1) - 和5做直线？往左移动一点

[Hard]

1. 感觉AR8是不是太高了- -7或者7.5好点
2. 00:26:567 (2) - CTRL+G? 和前面的00:25:671 (5,6) - 一样搞对拉打起来爽一点
3. 00:26:865 (3) - 朝上curve好像好点
4. 00:30:149 (2) - CTRL+G吧...这样flow就是一个螺旋fix
   

[Insane]

1. 00:17:014 (3) - 为什么不stack 00:16:119 (4) - 对爱fix

[Extra]

1. 00:22:388 (5,6,1) - 试试看5和6换下位置然后把1CTRL+G前面那个换了后面slider这个就...
   
2. 01:29:253 (1) - 为什么这个NC了前面的diff没有- -不如统一一下其他diff最后一个note也这样？起码Insane可以

extra总要有点特殊对待嘛！

That's it.

Kagamine Ren wrote:

M4M： https://osu.ppy.sh/s/292823

[General]

1. BG怎么是1365*768 逼死强迫症系列

[Easy]

1. 00:00:597 (1,2) - 我不喜欢nazi mod ..不过这个一眼就能看出歪了
2. 01:21:791 - 这个tick音多余，插绿线去掉吧
3. 00:22:388 (2,3) - 这里建议跟前面一样先圈再滑条，突然换一种形式感觉不太友好，毕竟是easy

[Normal]

1. 00:52:537 (1,2,3) - 这个摆法感觉略丑，比如这样
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:20:447 - 前后似乎都是跟人声，所以这里建议加个圈，或者连着后面做个折返也不错

[Hard]

1. 00:44:776 - 建议这里停转盘？后面红tick上也可以，蓝tick有点不知道为什么fix
2. 01:16:119 (4) - 建议ctrl+g，hard里这种逆flow好坑

fix

[Insane]

1. 00:44:776 - 同hardfix
2. 00:35:820 (1) - 这个感觉摆跳舒服一点，然后00:34:925 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这一串可以换种有趣点的摆法，比如这样
   SPOILER

   
   好..复杂...我觉得现在的也还ok啦
3. 00:40:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这些可以根据音效音量的渐变间距也渐变一下？渐变在extra用过了, Insane用会被大佬们找茬

[Extra]

• 
  2ha的图总是星数比实际难度低好多orz，不会摸ex，就从打图时候的感受说点啥吧。

1. 毕竟201bpm，建议ar9.2 或者9.3咦真的？..这个待定吧其实我还是不习惯用小数点儿..
2. 00:18:507 (4,5,6,7) - 这个对角距离可以再大一点fix
3. 00:25:223 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个原地单点点起来好难，建议变成3个，00:25:671 (4) - 这个放远点做个跳fix
4. 00:39:402 (2) - 这滑条头上什么音都没吧，建议跟insane一样从00:39:253 - 拉滑条这个确实是有的
5. 00:44:776 - 同hardfix
6. 00:52:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个打起来有点莫名，这种似原地又非原地的单点，就像一口痰想吐吐不出来，可以更好玩一点
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:11:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
   SPOILER

   

这俩都稍微换了下方法

Raose wrote:

[Extra]

00:02:388 (1) - I suggest you shorten this by 1/2 a beat, since there is a strong beat at 00:02:686
00:24:179 (2) - maybe curving it the other way would make it flow better from 00:23:582 (5,1) http://puu.sh/hgD7Q/65c45f457a.jpgfix
00:25:671 (4) - consider unstacking this note since the singer starts singing againfix
00:45:820 (3,4) - switching these on timeline sounds better to me since there is a strong beat at 00:45:970
00:59:104 (3) - how about tilting and stacking the end of 3 on 00:58:358 (1) for a cleaner look? http://puu.sh/hgD11/5ce6624b49.jpg
01:17:014 (5) - curve this slider upward for better flow fix

[Insane]

00:05:223 (2,3) - these skip over a really strong beat D: I think it'd be cool if you could include it in like this maybe: http://puu.sh/hgDfE/fe43ccc611.jpg
00:45:671 (2,3) - same comment as in insane, consider switching these on timeline to include the strong beat
01:05:074 (3,4) - consider moving these around, I think it would flow better into the next sliders: http://puu.sh/hgDqL/f64b28592e.jpgfix

[Hard]

00:22:835 (2) - blanket is a bit off D:fix
00:45:820 (2,3) - this gap plays awkwardly for me, since there's a beat and there are vocals. Maybe bring (3) earlier by 1/2?

[Normal]

00:26:268 (1) - add finish on headfix

[Easy]

nothing

Good luck on your set!! I love arslan senki~

Aerous wrote:

m4m !

Extra
00:07:611 (4) - I think the end should be clickable !
00:11:044 (2,4) - Nazi but take off grid snap and restack these !fix
00:13:134 (1,3) - Should be the in the same y - axis !
00:14:328 (1) - Add finish too ?
00:23:432 (4) - x:480 y:252 !fix
00:24:477 (3) - Should be lower because of the previous slider pointing downward a bit. Maybe ? --> http://puu.sh/hiAAg/a9825c9d0a.jpg
00:32:089 (1,2,3) - Suggestion : http://puu.sh/hiACU/b146e31117.jpg and http://puu.sh/hiADY/568c614c7c.jpgfix
00:39:402 (2,3,4,5) - Another suggestion http://puu.sh/hiAGX/66335349c8.jpg
00:40:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Nice I love thsi
00:44:776 - Spinner should end here ?fix
00:49:104 (2) - Rotate this a bit --> http://puu.sh/hiAKH/f357ecf097.jpg better flow
01:00:149 (3,1) - Same slider shape ?
01:02:089 (1) - CTRL + G
01:11:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion : up down flow --> http://puu.sh/hiAQa/b3c5b879e1.jpg
01:25:522 (4,5) - Stack these since you did it for 01:25:074 (2,3) -
01:29:253 (1) - x:124 y:120

Insane :
00:02:985 - Map this ?fix
00:07:611 (3) - Tail should be something clickable ?
00:12:835 (5) - Why did you suddenly add a red anchor to this slider ?
00:12:835 (5,4) - Fix the stack ! Take off grid snapfix
00:36:865 (1) - This should be like this 00:38:208 (1,2) - With the circles
00:40:447 (2) - Triplet here more fun
00:42:985 (6) - NC since you did it for Extra difffix
00:43:059 (1) - Slider suggestion same as extrafix
00:49:701 (4) - More distance
01:00:746 (1,3) - stack ?fix
01:17:910 (3,4) - Same slider shape ?
nice diff !

Hard :
00:40:447 (1) - CTRL + G
00:48:358 (3) - Curve the other way ?
00:51:641 (2,3) - Same slider shape ?
01:09:104 (1) - more distance !
01:17:014 (3) - Why suddenly change this ? CTRL + G?

Normal :
00:09:999 (2) - Whistle on headfix
00:31:940 (2,3) - Stack
Nice diff

Easy :
Nothing much !


I love your maps !

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue victim list requests!

When I first heard this song I was like "how in the world does one map this song"? And then you somehow managed to make it work, so good job
I enjoy some of your other maps; this one is really good as well

General
- Very solid beatmaps for all five difficulties; I had a little trouble trying to see if there was anything wrong with it, heheh

- Flow-wise I think it's solid

-Mostly just blanketing issues but you don't really need to fix them because I don't know if they were intentional or not

Easy
- Only thing I can find is that your slider at 00:01:144(2) can be better blanketed around 00:00:597(1)

Normal
- Slider at 00:14:328(1) can be better blanketed around the start of the slider at 00:15:522(2)

- Slider at 01:17:014(2) can be better blanketed around end of the slider at 01:16:716(1)

- Slider at 01:24:179(5) can be better blanketed around the end of the slider at 01:23:880(4)

Hard
- Not that big of a deal, but the slider at 00:02:388(1) blankets adequately around the (5) from the previous combo in its current position; it can be better

• Maybe you can try moving the slider at 00:02:388(1) from its current position (x92, y148) to (x92, y149)? like I said not that big of a deal

- Slider at 00:20:149(1) can be better blanketed around 00:19:999(3)

- Slider at 00:56:716(2) can be better blanketed around 00:56:567(1)

Insane
- Got no comments; it's awesome as it currently is

Extra
If I was better at this game I wouldn't resort to autoplay but I'll still try to help out as best I can

- The pattern at 00:06:119(2, 3) feels a little off flow in my opinion.

• Maybe you can try using a similar pattern found at 00:04:029(2, 3, 4)?

That's about all I can find. Hope this helps you out

Hollow Wings wrote:

2ha姐姐怎么能那么萌，我要喷鼻血了（