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Ayane - Go Love&Peace (short size) [Taiko]

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Renka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月18日 at 15:45:36

Artist: Ayane
Title: Go Love&Peace (short size)
Source: 超次元ゲイム ネプテューヌmk2
Tags: ed ending playstation 3 geimu choujigen game neptune short size crest of knights tv animation hyperdimension neptune processor disc Ⅴ
BPM: 128
Filesize: 5003kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.96 stars, 199 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.12 stars, 113 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.34 stars, 299 notes)
  4. Oni (2.84 stars, 435 notes)
Download: Ayane - Go Love&Peace (short size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 Ranked Map

Kantan - 100%,Done
Futsuu - 100%,Done
Muzukashii - 100%,Done
Oni - 100%,Done


15/7/2015 change mp3.

Apl_old_1
Mod Request from PM by chaica

General
01:47:747 - Kiai time End

Kantan
01:43:997 - change a o
01:45:872 - change a o

Futsuu
00:18:684 - change a o
00:19:622 - change a o
00:20:090 - change a o
00:57:825 - change a o
00:58:528 - change a o

Muzukashii
00:13:293 - add a o
00:13:528 - add a o
00:15:168 - add a o
00:13:762 - delete
00:14:934 - delete

Oni
00:13:293 - add a o
00:22:903 - change a o
move - 01:03:684(105) → 01:03:918
01:04:153 - change a o


good luck =~=
Topic Starter
Renka

kiicha wrote:

Mod Request from PM by chaica

General
01:47:747 - Kiai time End - all fixed
Kantan
01:43:997 - change a o - fixed
01:45:872 - change a o - fixed

Futsuu
00:18:684 - change a o - no change,音は低い個所をdで置いているので
00:19:622 - change a o - no change,高い音なのでkのままで
00:20:090 - change a o - fixed
00:57:825 - change a o - no change,音は一定の高さを保っているので。
00:58:528 - change a o - fixed

Muzukashii
00:13:293 - add a o - no change,置く必要はないと自分は感じましたが、他の人の意見も参考にしたいと思います。
00:13:528 - add a o - no change,^
00:15:168 - add a o - fixed
00:13:762 - delete - no change.
00:14:934 - delete - no change.


Oni
00:13:293 - add a o - no change,same as Muzukashii.
00:22:903 - change a o - fixed
move - 01:03:684(105) → 01:03:918 - fixed
01:04:153 - change a o - no change.


good luck =~=
Thank you for Modding!
Hanjamon
Hi chaica~

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • Uncheck Enable countdown, Widescreen support and letterbox during breaks in all diffs, is not necessary

    As kiicha said, finish the kiai in 01:47:747 -
[Kantan]

  • 00:12:122 (9,10) - control+g these notes (d k) sounds better
    add k in 01:12:590 - and 01:13:059 - , and delete 01:14:934 (74,75) - ? sounds better and you will have a break before the kiai
    01:29:934 (8,9) - if you applied ^ delete these notes for consistency
    01:41:653 (13) - i see this note a bit unnecessary, delete for a little break
[Futsuu]

  • 00:06:965 - add a k here for consistency with 00:05:090 -
    00:27:590 - i feel this empty, add a d?
    00:56:184 (75) - change this to k? sounds good
    00:58:293 (80) - move this note to 00:58:059 - and delete 00:58:528 (81) - ? is easier and shorter than the actual pattern
    01:13:997 (113) - this pattern is long so change this note to k? will be easier
    01:19:856 (125) - add finisher here, DKD is easier and less confuse for a Futsuu
    01:21:262 (128) - add finisher here too, same reason as ^
    01:34:856 (4) - same as ^, add finisher here
    01:36:262 (7) - add finisher here too, same reason as ^
[Muzukashii]

  • 00:28:762 (43,44,45,46,47) - this part is a bit inconsistent, try this from 00:28:528 - to 00:29:700 -
    00:55:012 (116) - change to d (ddd) try to avoid Oni patterns like ddk, kkd in a Muzukashii >.<
    01:41:653 (26) - same as ^, change this note to d (ddd)
[Oni]

  • 00:58:528 (80) - change this note to k? sounds good
    01:28:059 (16,17,18,19,20) - i think a ddddk works better >.<
Interesting map, good luck :3
Nishizumi
i'll mod your map if you applied hanjamon's mod.
Topic Starter
Renka

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi chaica~

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • Uncheck Enable countdown, Widescreen support and letterbox during breaks in all diffs, is not necessary - fixed!

    As kiicha said, finish the kiai in 01:47:747 - - fixed!
[Kantan]

  • 00:12:122 (9,10) - control+g these notes (d k) sounds better - fixed
    add k in 01:12:590 - and 01:13:059 - , and delete 01:14:934 (74,75) - ? sounds better and you will have a break before the kiai - okay,fixed.
    01:29:934 (8,9) - if you applied ^ delete these notes for consistency - yes,fixed.
    01:41:653 (13) - i see this note a bit unnecessary, delete for a little break - fixed
[Futsuu]

  • 00:06:965 - add a k here for consistency with 00:05:090 - fixed
    00:27:590 - i feel this empty, add a d? - fixed
    00:56:184 (75) - change this to k? sounds good - fixed
    00:58:293 (80) - move this note to 00:58:059 - and delete 00:58:528 (81) - ? is easier and shorter than the actual pattern - fixed
    01:13:997 (113) - this pattern is long so change this note to k? will be easier - fixed
    01:19:856 (125) - add finisher here, DKD is easier and less confuse for a Futsuu - fixed
    01:21:262 (128) - add finisher here too, same reason as ^ - fixed
    01:34:856 (4) - same as ^, add finisher here - fixed
    01:36:262 (7) - add finisher here too, same reason as ^ - fixed
[Muzukashii]

  • 00:28:762 (43,44,45,46,47) - this part is a bit inconsistent, try this from 00:28:528 - to 00:29:700 -
    -I want to reference. Change the placement.
    00:55:012 (116) - change to d (ddd) try to avoid Oni patterns like ddk, kkd in a Muzukashii >.< - fixed
    01:41:653 (26) - same as ^, change this note to d (ddd) - fixed


[Oni]

  • 00:58:528 (80) - change this note to k? sounds good - fixed
    01:28:059 (16,17,18,19,20) - i think a ddddk works better >.< - You have changed to I will reference ddkdk.
Interesting map, good luck :3
I became very helpful! Thank you for Modding!
Saikoro
hey, chaica! from PM

Kantan
00:19:622 (15) d
00:27:122 (21) d
00:46:809 (42) k
01:13:528 (70,71) dd
01:39:778 (10) delete

Futsuu
00:42:122 (47) d
00:42:825 (48) k
00:48:684 (61) k
00:49:622 (63,64) dd
01:33:684 (1) k

Muzukashii
00:15:168 (8) delete
00:16:340 (12) k
00:18:215 (17) k
00:22:434 (26) d
00:25:950 (36) d
00:34:739 (61) delete
00:37:434 (38) d
01:47:747 (3) D

Oni
00:49:622 (51) d
00:56:184 (72) k
01:28:293 (18) d

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Renka

Saikoro wrote:

hey, chaica! from PM

Kantan
00:19:622 (15) d - fixed
00:27:122 (21) d - no change.
00:46:809 (42) k - fixed
01:13:528 (70,71) dd - You would like to think to hear others opinion.
01:39:778 (10) delete - fixed

Futsuu
00:42:122 (47) d - fixed
00:42:825 (48) k - no change.
00:48:684 (61) k - fixed
00:49:622 (63,64) dd - fixed
01:33:684 (1) k - fixed

Muzukashii
00:15:168 (8) delete - fixed
00:16:340 (12) k - no change
00:18:215 (17) k - fixed
00:22:434 (26) d - fixed
00:25:950 (36) d - no change.
00:34:739 (61) delete - fixed
00:37:434 (38) d - fixed
01:47:747 (3) D - no change,I have been unified in K.

Oni
00:49:622 (51) d - fixed
00:56:184 (72) k - no change,
01:28:293 (18) d - fixed

Good luck!!
参考になりました!Thank you for Modding!
Topic Starter
Renka
updated
Nishizumi
Hi chaica o/ M4M request from PM

[General]

  1. 00:00:872 ~ 00:08:372 - decrease volume hitsound to 60% or above ?
  2. 00:08:372 ~ 00:15:872 - add timing section, volume hitsound to 66% or above ?
  3. 00:15:872 - add timing section, volume hitsound to 70%
  4. 01:15:872 - decrease volume hitsound to 76% ? the hitsound is too hard imo
  5. F4/song setup > tab design > uncheck countdown, widescreen support and letterbox
[Kantan]
  1. 00:30:872 - add d ?
  2. 00:38:372 - ^
  3. 00:45:872 - ^ ?
  4. 00:53:372 - same as above
  5. 01:00:872 - add finish ?
  6. 01:09:309 - add note ? i suggest k
  7. 01:13:997 - add finish
  8. 01:19:622 (84,85,86,87) - remove finish ?
  9. 01:34:622 (3,4,5,6) - same as above
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:00:872 - add finish ?
  2. 01:13:293 - change to d ? consistency with other diff
  3. 01:13:997 - add finish ?
  4. 01:19:622 (124,125,126) - remove finish ? too hard for futsuu player, and sound weird imo
  5. 01:21:028 (127,128,129) - same as above
  6. 01:34:622 (3,4,5) - same as above
  7. 01:36:028 (6,7,8) - ^
  8. 01:36:526 - omg what are you doing there ? lol delete this
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:00:872 - add finish ? same as you did at 00:08:372 - the both are same pitch
  2. 00:01:340 - change to k ?
  3. 00:03:215 - same as above
  4. 00:10:481 (25,26) - swap these ?
  5. 00:16:340 (12,14,16) - change to k ? the pitch is higher than around
  6. 00:46:809 - ^
  7. 00:47:395 - move to 00:47:629 - ? same you did as oni, and would better
  8. 00:54:778 ~ 00:55:247 - how about this ? if you wanna make triplet here you also must add triplet on oni
  9. 00:57:122 - change to k ? same you did as 00:49:622 -
  10. 01:00:872 - add finish ?
  11. 01:09:309 - change to d ? consistency with other diff
  12. 01:11:653 - change to k
  13. 01:13:997 - add finish ?
  14. 01:25:715 - add d ? i know you follow the vocal, but it's weird to let blank here
  15. 01:26:653 - change to k ? same pitch as 01:27:122 - imo
  16. 01:38:840 - same as 01:25:715 - add d
  17. 01:40:715 - add finish ? same you did as 01:40:247 -
[Oni]

  1. 00:00:872 - add finish ? same as you did at 00:08:372 - the both are same pitch
  2. 00:04:856 - delete ?
  3. 00:05:090 (15,16) - swap these ? i think more fit
  4. 00:31:457 - move to 00:31:692 - ? same you did as muzu, and would better imo
  5. 00:56:184 (72,74) - change to k ? high pitch there, not same as around
  6. 01:09:075 - same as above
  7. 01:01:692 - add d ? make triplet as you did on muzu
  8. 01:14:817 - delete ? for easier before kiai time start
  9. 01:20:599 - add d ? i know you follow the vocal, but i think it's weird if you let here blank
  10. 01:31:340 - ^
  11. 01:35:559 - ^
  12. 01:40:715 - why didn't you add finish ? same as 01:40:247 -
  13. 01:44:465 - change to k ?
Sorry for the poor mod, hopefully it would help you. good luck :)
kouzuki_karen
hi for m4m request

General

your background image is not resized properly (it should be 1366x768), so try to fix that somehow (maybe use a program like paint.net or an online image resizer or something)

Kantan

00:21:965 (17) - this could be deleted, I think the resulting k___k___D would sound better
00:22:434 - poorly snapped, move to 00:22:200 instead
00:29:465 (22,23) - same as above, delete (22) and move the new (22) to 00:29:700 instead
00:37:434 - could move to 00:37:200
01:12:590 (69,70) - should delete, because the combo here is already long as it is for a "Kantan" diff.

Futsuu

00:21:965 (12) - could delete, there isn't really any obvious sound here (and similar reason to kantan)
00:22:434 (12) - same as kantan (move back 1/2)
00:47:747 (59) - could delete, no obvious sound here
00:52:434 (5) - move to 00:52:200
00:55:012 (10,11) - this would probably make more sense if you can (10) to don and delete the second note (also there's no any real sound there at the second)
01:11:418 (42,43) - change first to kat and remove second, a bit similar to above
01:36:497 (12,13) - wtf is this lol

Muzukashii


00:31:692 (6) - might as well delete and make 00:31:809 (7) - a kat note
00:47:395 (48) - delete
01:14:934 (8) - should be moved back to 01:14:700

Oni


00:26:887 (37,38) - ctrl+g
01:28:411 (19) - delete, feels a bit strange having a sudden 5 note stream when the previous part was a break (considering how slow the song is), but this is mapper's taste so feel free to keep, that's also perfectly fine
01:46:575 (68,69) - could change to both dons
01:41:536 (38) - delete (similar to 01:28:411 (19) -, and also make 01:41:184 (35) - a kat).

good luck :3
Topic Starter
Renka

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi chaica o/ M4M request from PM

[General]

  1. 00:00:872 ~ 00:08:372 - decrease volume hitsound to 60% or above ?
  2. 00:08:372 ~ 00:15:872 - add timing section, volume hitsound to 66% or above ?
  3. 00:15:872 - add timing section, volume hitsound to 70%
  4. 01:15:872 - decrease volume hitsound to 76% ? the hitsound is too hard imo
  5. F4/song setup > tab design > uncheck countdown, widescreen support and letterbox - all fixed
[Kantan]
  1. 00:30:872 - add d ? - no change,Since taking vocal.If there are other pointed out, I think.
  2. 00:38:372 - ^ - ^
  3. 00:45:872 - ^ ? - ^
  4. 00:53:372 - same as above - ^
  5. 01:00:872 - add finish ? - fixed
  6. 01:09:309 - add note ? i suggest k - ok, add k.
  7. 01:13:997 - add finish - fixed.
  8. 01:19:622 (84,85,86,87) - remove finish ? - change to d D d K.
  9. 01:34:622 (3,4,5,6) - same as above - ^
- change to k D d K.

[Futsuu]
  1. 01:00:872 - add finish ?- fixed
  2. 01:13:293 - change to d ? consistency with other diff - fixed
  3. 01:13:997 - add finish ? - fixed
  4. 01:19:622 (124,125,126) - remove finish ? too hard for futsuu player, and sound weird imo - hmm... change to dkD
  5. 01:21:028 (127,128,129) - same as above - change to ddK.
  6. 01:34:622 (3,4,5) - same as above - change to kkD.
  7. 01:36:028 (6,7,8) - ^ - change to dkK.
  8. 01:36:526 - omg what are you doing there ? lol delete this - sorry;;
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:00:872 - add finish ? same as you did at 00:08:372 - the both are same pitch - keep,If there are other pointed out, I think.
  2. 00:01:340 - change to k ? - no change.Here because it put from 00:08:372 ddk unified in ddd.
  3. 00:03:215 - same as above - ^
  4. 00:10:481 (25,26) - swap these ? - no change,Here I have been unified in ddk.
  5. 00:16:340 (12,14,16) - change to k ? the pitch is higher than around - change to 00:17:747 note k.
  6. 00:46:809 - ^ - fixed.
  7. 00:47:395 - move to 00:47:629 - ? same you did as oni, and would better - fixed.
  8. 00:54:778 ~ 00:55:247 - how about this ? if you wanna make triplet here you also must add triplet on oni - okay,fixed.
  9. 00:57:122 - change to k ? same you did as 00:49:622 -no change,Here are intentionally inverted.
  10. 01:00:872 - add finish ? - fixed
  11. 01:09:309 - change to d ? consistency with other diff - fixed.
  12. 01:11:653 - change to k - fixed.
  13. 01:13:997 - add finish ? - fixed
  14. 01:25:715 - add d ? i know you follow the vocal, but it's weird to let blank here - okay,fixed.
  15. 01:26:653 - change to k ? same pitch as 01:27:122 - imo - fixed.
  16. 01:38:840 - same as 01:25:715 - add d - fixed
  17. 01:40:715 - add finish ? same you did as 01:40:247 - fixed
[Oni]

  1. 00:00:872 - add finish ? same as you did at 00:08:372 - the both are same pitch - keep,same as muzukashii.
  2. 00:04:856 - delete ? - fixed.
  3. 00:05:090 (15,16) - swap these ? i think more fit - fixed.
  4. 00:31:457 - move to 00:31:692 - ? same you did as muzu, and would better imo - fixed.
  5. 00:56:184 (72,74) - change to k ? high pitch there, not same as around - fixed.
  6. 01:09:075 - same as above - fixed
  7. 01:01:692 - add d ? make triplet as you did on muzu - fixed
  8. 01:14:817 - delete ? for easier before kiai time start - okay,fixed.
  9. 01:20:599 - add d ? i know you follow the vocal, but i think it's weird if you let here blank - fixed
  10. 01:31:340 - ^
  11. 01:35:559 - ^
  12. 01:40:715 - why didn't you add finish ? same as 01:40:247 - fixed.
  13. 01:44:465 - change to k ? - no change,Sound I feel constant.
Sorry for the poor mod, hopefully it would help you. good luck :)
Thank you for Modding! I was very helpful! Thanks~
Topic Starter
Renka

mrdumpling64 wrote:

hi for m4m request

General

your background image is not resized properly (it should be 1366x768), so try to fix that somehow (maybe use a program like paint.net or an online image resizer or something) - okay,fixed.

Kantan

00:21:965 (17) - this could be deleted, I think the resulting k___k___D would sound better - fixed
00:22:434 - poorly snapped, move to 00:22:200 instead - 00:21:497 - okay,fixed.
00:29:465 (22,23) - same as above, delete (22) and move the new (22) to 00:29:700 instead -^
00:37:434 - could move to 00:37:200 - fixed.
01:12:590 (69,70) - should delete, because the combo here is already long as it is for a "Kantan" diff. - okay,fixed.

Futsuu

00:21:965 (12) - could delete, there isn't really any obvious sound here (and similar reason to kantan) - fixed.
00:22:434 (12) - same as kantan (move back 1/2) - fixed.
00:47:747 (59) - could delete, no obvious sound here - fixed.
00:52:434 (5) - move to 00:52:200 - fixed.
00:55:012 (10,11) - this would probably make more sense if you can (10) to don and delete the second note (also there's no any real sound there at the second) - okay,fixed.
01:11:418 (42,43) - change first to kat and remove second, a bit similar to above - change to 01:12:590 note is d.
01:36:497 (12,13) - wtf is this lol - sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry;;;;;;;;;;

Muzukashii


00:31:692 (6) - might as well delete and make 00:31:809 (7) - a kat note
00:47:395 (48) - delete
01:14:934 (8) - should be moved back to 01:14:700

all fixed!

Oni


00:26:887 (37,38) - ctrl+g - fixed.
01:28:411 (19) - delete, feels a bit strange having a sudden 5 note stream when the previous part was a break (considering how slow the song is), but this is mapper's taste so feel free to keep, that's also perfectly fine - sorry,no change,We want to go now of placement.
01:46:575 (68,69) - could change to both dons - fixed
01:41:536 (38) - delete (similar to 01:28:411 (19) -, and also make 01:41:184 (35) - a kat). - okay,Here I will change.

good luck :3
Thank you for Modding!
Topic Starter
Renka
Updated.
tina71129
Hi~ Mod request

Muzukashii
00:00:872 (1,2) - k
00:06:497 (16,18) - Ctrl+G
00:08:372 (19) - k
00:27:122 (38,42) - Ctrl+G
00:29:465 (1) - d
01:39:309 (20,21) - k?
01:41:184 (24,25,26,27) - k

Oni
00:00:872 (1) - k
00:07:200 (19) - k
00:34:622 (64) - k
00:35:325 (68,69) - Ctrl+G
00:37:200 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
01:16:809 (35,36) - Ctrl+G
01:18:098 (43) - d

Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Renka

-Eternal Love- wrote:

Hi~ Mod request

Muzukashii
00:00:872 (1,2) - k - no change.
00:06:497 (16,18) - Ctrl+G - no change.
00:08:372 (19) - k - no change.
00:27:122 (38,42) - Ctrl+G - fixed.
00:29:465 (1) - d - fixed.
01:39:309 (20,21) - k? - change to 01:39:309 is k.
01:41:184 (24,25,26,27) - k - no change.

Oni
00:00:872 (1) - k - no change.
00:07:200 (19) - k - no change.
00:34:622 (64) - k - no change.
00:35:325 (68,69) - Ctrl+G - fixed.
00:37:200 (2,3) - Ctrl+G - no change.
01:16:809 (35,36) - Ctrl+G - fixed.
01:18:098 (43) - d - fixed.

Good Luck! :D
Thank you for Modding! Updated~
Gemu-
Hi, from PM.

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[ Kantan]

00:32:747 - Change to k is better.
00:34:622 - Change to k for kd dk.
00:57:122 - Change to k to follow the pattern.
01:38:372 - Change to k.

[ Futsuu]

00:27:825 - Change to k.
01:13:762 - Change to d for the pattern.
01:35:090 - Change to d, is not necessary a D.
01:43:059 - Change to k.
01:43:997 - ^
01:45:872 - ^

[ Muzukashii]

00:13:997 - Change to d is better.
00:16:106 - Change to k.
00:16:809 - ^
00:20:090 - Change to k.
00:48:450 - Change k for the combination.
00:49:036 - ^
00:55:950 - Change k for the combination.
00:57:825 - Change to k.
00:58:528 - ^
01:13:762 - Change to d.
01:47:512 - Change to d is better.

[ Oni]

00:25:715 - Change to k.
01:03:215 - Chnage to k is better.
01:07:434 - Change to k and here 01:07:903 - Chnage to k too for kd dk.
01:08:137 - Change to d and here 01:08:372 - Change to k is better for the pattern and the combination in this part.
01:17:747 - Change to k.
01:33:567 - Change to k is better.
01:34:036 - ^
01:34:387 - Change to d.
01:44:114 - Change to k and here 01:44:348 - Change to k too for dk kd.
01:44:700 - Change to k and here 01:44:817 - Change to k too.
01:45:286 - Change to k for the rhythm.
01:45:637 - ^

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Topic Starter
Renka

game rock wrote:

Hi, from PM.

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[ Kantan]

00:32:747 - Change to k is better. - no change.
00:34:622 - Change to k for kd dk. -fixed.
00:57:122 - Change to k to follow the pattern. - okay,fixed
01:38:372 - Change to k. - fixed.

[ Futsuu]

00:27:825 - Change to k. - no change,Since the stain is taking in k dk.
01:13:762 - Change to d for the pattern. -okay,fixed
01:35:090 - Change to d, is not necessary a D. - no change,Here I have been unified in big note.
01:43:059 - Change to k. - no change.
01:43:997 - ^ - fixed.
01:45:872 - ^ - fixed.

[ Muzukashii]

00:13:997 - Change to d is better. - no change,Here we take the sound in k.
00:16:106 - Change to k. - fixed
00:16:809 - ^ - no change.
00:20:090 - Change to k. - no change.
00:48:450 - Change k for the combination. - fixed.
00:49:036 - ^ - fixed.
00:55:950 - Change k for the combination. - hmm...change 00:56:184 is k.
00:57:825 - Change to k. - no change.
00:58:528 - ^ - no change.
01:13:762 - Change to d. - fixed.
01:47:512 - Change to d is better. - ok.

[ Oni]

00:25:715 - Change to k. - fixed.
01:03:215 - Chnage to k is better. - no change.
01:07:434 - Change to k and here 01:07:903 - Chnage to k too for kd dk. - no change,I feel like not changed much sound.
01:08:137 - Change to d and here 01:08:372 - Change to k is better for the pattern and the combination in this part. - okay,fixed.
01:17:747 - Change to k. - no change,for kdkdkd do not want too much use, it takes a sound ddkdk.
01:33:567 - Change to k is better. - fixed.
01:34:036 - ^ - fixed.
01:34:387 - Change to d. - fixed.
01:44:114 - Change to k and here 01:44:348 - Change to k too for dk kd. - okay,fixed.
01:44:700 - Change to k and here 01:44:817 - Change to k too. - hmm...01:44:817 onlt change to k.
01:45:286 - Change to k for the rhythm. - no change,The pattern became kdd ddk the above mod.
01:45:637 - ^ - no change.

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Thank you for Modding! I was a great help to me~
Julie
Between, your mp3 is 128 kbps, I found a 192kbps short version. I don't know if you want http://puu.sh/hiVEG.mp3

Title : Go Love&Peace (short size)
Metadata proof : http://puu.sh/hjXSs.png and http://puu.sh/hjXzy.jpg

Since this isn't full version xD

Here you go chaica :D
[General]

01:47:747 - 100% volume for the last note? You probably want it super higher because last one, but maybe lower it a bit? 100% is a bit too loud haha xD.

[Kantan]

00:20:325 - Not mapping this sound as k anymore? Keep it constant? :D

00:34:622 (27,28,29,30) - Not sure about this xD. This one 00:31:340 (23,24) - probably for vocal, but this one 00:35:090 (28) - , the vocal and the instrument sound you were mapping before is here 00:35:325 - . Keep it constant http://puu.sh/hiLvC.jpg , more easier for beginner to hear what sound they are tapping for :3.

01:04:153 (57) - lol, I think your trying to match this sound 01:03:918 - or this 01:04:270 - (but this one on blue stick so not sugested =w=). So in other words, suggest putting here 01:03:918 - or delete XD. Is like this part 01:07:668 -

01:18:684 (73,74,75,76) - and 01:33:684 (1,2,3,4) - only one with 4 in a row, delete the 2nd note?

01:40:247 (10) - remove finisher, there no cymbal sound here XD


[Futsuu]

00:12:122 (15,16,17) - uwahh please match the piano chord like you did here 00:04:622 (5,6,7) - <3!!! (also will keep thing consistent).

00:15:403 (3) - delete not really an important sound, is mostly a continue of this sound 00:14:934 -

00:19:622 (7,8,9) - same reason as 00:12:122 (15,16,17) -

00:36:497 (34,35,36) - do like this 00:43:997 (48,49,50) - ? same important sound sound O.O. because every white tick already have bass sound xD

00:50:090 (2) - move to 00:50:325 - like this 00:51:497 (4,5) - , because it only have bass here 00:50:090 - .

01:13:059 (44,45,46,47,48) - shouldn't it be like this http://puu.sh/hiNxe.jpg? Judging from the instrument pitch~ Like 01:13:059 - and 01:13:059 - = same instrument sound

01:19:856 (60) - and 01:34:856 (8) - delete, just keep these 01:19:622 (59,61) - like in kantan? :D match the vocal pretty good. Since you been matching vocal a lots, and your 1/4 are mostly to match vocal.

01:40:247 (10) - remove finish, there no cymbal sound, is same sound as this 01:40:715 (11) - but without cymbal drum.

01:43:997 (18) - add finish, since you added for this one 01:42:122 (15) - . Also have cymbal sound :3

[Muzukashii]

00:22:200 - hmm not mapping this sound? while you did it on all diff and and here 00:29:700 - xD

00:32:278 - add a note here, it feel like losing rhythmn here XD

01:13:059 (3) - move to here 01:12:825 - ? Since this 01:13:059 - is the same sound as 01:12:825 - . Make this 01:13:293 (4,5,6,7) - feel better to play :D

01:28:762 - add k here :D!!!

01:40:247 (22) - same reason as futsuu and kantan

[Oni]

00:07:200 (19) - k? same chord as 00:05:325 -

01:07:434 (118,119,120,121,122) - Not sure how your mapping your double here, I do here this sound really clear on this blue stick 01:08:020 - , is the same as this instrument sound and is also here 01:07:668 - . http://puu.sh/hiJKj.jpg

01:09:778 (129,130,131) - Your matching the vocal, judging from how you map your d = higher pitch for that part, so the end should be something like this http://puu.sh/hiJOI.jpg.

01:13:997 (147) - Hmm you add a finish for this on Kantan, Futsuu and Muzukashii, but not on Oni? xD. There no stream before, rhythmn same as the other level :3. Probably forgot XD.

01:27:356 - and 01:27:825 - Really suggest mapping these sound ><, they are as important as this 01:27:590 (15) - .

01:27:825 - add k

01:40:247 (34) - same reason as futsuu, kantan and muzukashii

GL!! omg this part 01:14:700 - to 01:15:872 - remind me of another song UWAH XD! go go go \o/
Topic Starter
Renka

Julie wrote:

Between, your mp3 is 128 kbps, I found a 192kbps short version. I don't know if you want http://puu.sh/hiVEG.mp3- I was replaced let me! Thank you~!!!

Title : Go Love&Peace (short size)

Since this isn't full version xD - It was overlooked, Thank you!

Here you go chaica :D
[General]

01:47:747 - 100% volume for the last note? You probably want it super higher because last one, but maybe lower it a bit? 100% is a bit too loud haha xD. - I am also Agree,volume is 88%.

[Kantan]

00:20:325 - Not mapping this sound as k anymore? Keep it constant? :D - okay,fixed.

00:34:622 (27,28,29,30) - Not sure about this xD. This one 00:31:340 (23,24) - probably for vocal, but this one 00:35:090 (28) - , the vocal and the instrument sound you were mapping before is here 00:35:325 - . Keep it constant http://puu.sh/hiLvC.jpg , more easier for beginner to hear what sound they are tapping for :3. - okay,fixed.

01:04:153 (57) - lol, I think your trying to match this sound 01:03:918 - or this 01:04:270 - (but this one on blue stick so not sugested =w=). So in other words, suggest putting here 01:03:918 - or delete XD. Is like this part 01:07:668 - 01:04:153 (57) delete.

01:18:684 (73,74,75,76) - and 01:33:684 (1,2,3,4) - only one with 4 in a row, delete the 2nd note? - fixed.

01:40:247 (10) - remove finisher, there no cymbal sound here XD - fixed.


[Futsuu]

00:12:122 (15,16,17) - uwahh please match the piano chord like you did here 00:04:622 (5,6,7) - <3!!! (also will keep thing consistent). - okay,fixed. d dk

00:15:403 (3) - delete not really an important sound, is mostly a continue of this sound 00:14:934 - fixed.

00:19:622 (7,8,9) - same reason as 00:12:122 (15,16,17) -

00:36:497 (34,35,36) - do like this 00:43:997 (48,49,50) - ? same important sound sound O.O. because every white tick already have bass sound xD - fixed.

00:50:090 (2) - move to 00:50:325 - like this 00:51:497 (4,5) - , because it only have bass here 00:50:090 - . - okay,fixed.

01:13:059 (44,45,46,47,48) - shouldn't it be like this http://puu.sh/hiNxe.jpg? Judging from the instrument pitch~ Like 01:13:059 - and 01:13:059 - = same instrument sound - fixed.

01:19:856 (60) - and 01:34:856 (8) - delete, just keep these 01:19:622 (59,61) - like in kantan? :D match the vocal pretty good. Since you been matching vocal a lots, and your 1/4 are mostly to match vocal. - fixed.

01:40:247 (10) - remove finish, there no cymbal sound, is same sound as this 01:40:715 (11) - but without cymbal drum. - ok.

01:43:997 (18) - add finish, since you added for this one 01:42:122 (15) - . Also have cymbal sound :3 - fixed.

[Muzukashii]

00:22:200 - hmm not mapping this sound? while you did it on all diff and and here 00:29:700 - xD - fixed.

00:32:278 - add a note here, it feel like losing rhythmn here XD - ok,add d.

01:13:059 (3) - move to here 01:12:825 - ? Since this 01:13:059 - is the same sound as 01:12:825 - . Make this 01:13:293 (4,5,6,7) - feel better to play :D - okay,fixed.

01:28:762 - add k here :D!!! - okay,fixed.

01:40:247 (22) - same reason as futsuu and kantan - ok~

[Oni]

00:07:200 (19) - k? same chord as 00:05:325 -

01:07:434 (118,119,120,121,122) - Not sure how your mapping your double here, I do here this sound really clear on this blue stick 01:08:020 - , is the same as this instrument sound and is also here 01:07:668 - . http://puu.sh/hiJKj.jpg - Well, I was changed.

01:09:778 (129,130,131) - Your matching the vocal, judging from how you map your d = higher pitch for that part, so the end should be something like this http://puu.sh/hiJOI.jpg. - well,fixed.

01:13:997 (147) - Hmm you add a finish for this on Kantan, Futsuu and Muzukashii, but not on Oni? xD. There no stream before, rhythmn same as the other level :3. Probably forgot XD. - Oh I'm sorry, I have to add.

01:27:356 - and 01:27:825 - Really suggest mapping these sound ><, they are as important as this 01:27:590 (15) - . - okay,add d.

01:27:825 - add k - ok.fixed.

01:40:247 (34) - same reason as futsuu, kantan and muzukashii - ok,fixed.

GL!! omg this part 01:14:700 - to 01:15:872 - remind me of another song UWAH XD! go go go \o/ - Do not know what song to myself;w;w;


Still immature point there were many, I was very helpful! Thanks~!
JUDYDANNY
Hi, Here's a Taiko mod via PM.
WIP.
見落としがないようにかなりシビアに見たつもりですが ベースの部分はある程度しっかりしているので修正次第でかなりgoodなmapsetになると思います!
[Kantan]

  • 曲調に合わせたつもりで提案をしていますが、その曲調自体があまり変化しないので パート毎は大方変化があまりないような構成の提案になってます。あしからず
    特に前奏はFutsuuとのspread差が出てしまう提案にもなりますが、その場合はFutsuu以上も自分なりに修正した方がいいかもしれません
    <<Composing>>
  1. 00:50:149 (45) – move to 00:50:618 (45) – and change to don? よりボーカルに合うかなと
  2. 00:59:993 (55) - move to 00:58:118 (53) – and change to don. 1つ前と同じですが、変化量は00:59:524 (55) –のkだけで物足りると思ったのでmoveの提案で載せてます
  3. 00:58:587 (54) –and change to k?
  4. 01:44:993 (15) – move to 01:43:118 (13) - . 01:43:587 (14) – の高音を目立たせるなら01:44:993 (16) –のノーツは不要に感じます..そのうえで(14)をよりはっきりさせるためにmoveの提案も入れました
    ------------------------

    <<Strategy>>
  5. 00:15:462 (13) – から00:29:290 (24) – までの部分 ですが、ここは前奏でもかなり音が大きいうえに、曲調だけならAメロよりも重要視すべき部分なのでもっと盛り上げていいです。イメージとしては 少ない密度の量で、色変化を多めに取り入れる形が好ましいかなと思います
    最低限のラインとして
  6. 00:26:712 (20) –,00:21:790 (18) – change to don、00:19:915 (16) –,00:27:415 (21) –add kat.
    の形にすること(で、前奏とまったく同じになりますが)、でここから更に
  7. Either A or B.
    A.00:17:337 (14) –, 00:24:837 (19) – change to kat.
    B. 00:16:399 (14) - , 00:18:274 (16) - , 00:23:899 (22) - , 00:25:774 (24) – add kat.

    A.2色変えるだけでも前奏00:00:462 (1) –から00:06:790 (6) –までの部分と同密度でありながら音の盛り上げが表現できます
    抵抗がないなら
    B. ノーツをそのまま付与しても問題ない難易度だと思います
    今回は2案出しましたが、ほかにもいろいろ試してみることをお勧めします!
  8. 00:34:915 (30) – move to 00:35:149 (30) - . 00:42:649 (37) –こういった部分でもボーカルで押しているので統一した方がいいと思います
  9. 00:36:790 (32) – delete?

  10. 01:00:462 (1) - から。
    A01:00:462 (55,56,57,58,59,60) –からの流れを受けて、
    B01:07:962 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) –と答えるようなノーツ構成
    量が増えるのはkiaiに対してもいい変化ではありますが…少々顕著すぎな気がします
    Futsuuの肉付けのような構成から減らすようなパターンが一番しっくりくると思います。提案パターンとしては以下のものを出します
    (少々見づらいかもしれませんが(1)のノーツが01:00:462 (55) –に該当します)


  11. 01:15:462 (16) –からですが、もう少しkiaiに音がほしいかな…
    e.g.
  12. 01:16:399 (2) – change to kat.
    *-1ボーカルが比較的高いのと、盛り上がりがパーカッションの音と相まってfitするので dkdkリズムをベースにしていいと思います。
  13. 01:17:805 – add don.
    *-2 01:15:462 (1,2) –を受けて付与しても問題ないレベル化と
  14. 01:31:399 (1,2,1) – 同様, d – k – d >>> k k d - k でよいかと

    ---------------------
Topic Starter
Renka

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi, Here's a Taiko mod via PM.
WIP.
見落としがないようにかなりシビアに見たつもりですが ベースの部分はある程度しっかりしているので修正次第でかなりgoodなmapsetになると思います!
[Kantan]

  • 曲調に合わせたつもりで提案をしていますが、その曲調自体があまり変化しないので パート毎は大方変化があまりないような構成の提案になってます。あしからず
    特に前奏はFutsuuとのspread差が出てしまう提案にもなりますが、その場合はFutsuu以上も自分なりに修正した方がいいかもしれません - 前奏部分を全難易度見直し、修正しました。
    <<Composing>>
    [/color]
  1. 00:50:149 (45) – move to 00:50:618 (45) – and change to don? よりボーカルに合うかなと - 変更しました
  2. 00:59:993 (55) - move to 00:58:118 (53) – and change to don. 1つ前と同じですが、変化量は00:59:524 (55) –のkだけで物足りると思ったのでmoveの提案で載せてます - 変更しました。
  3. 00:58:587 (54) –and change to k? - ok!
  4. 01:44:993 (15) – move to 01:43:118 (13) - . 01:43:587 (14) – の高音を目立たせるなら01:44:993 (16) –のノーツは不要に感じます..そのうえで(14)をよりはっきりさせるためにmoveの提案も入れました - その方がいいですね、変更しました。
    ------------------------

    <<Strategy>>
  5. 00:15:462 (13) – から00:29:290 (24) – までの部分 ですが、ここは前奏でもかなり音が大きいうえに、曲調だけならAメロよりも重要視すべき部分なのでもっと盛り上げていいです。イメージとしては 少ない密度の量で、色変化を多めに取り入れる形が好ましいかなと思います
    最低限のラインとして
  6. 00:26:712 (20) –,00:21:790 (18) – change to don、00:19:915 (16) –,00:27:415 (21) –add kat.
    の形にすること(で、前奏とまったく同じになりますが)、でここから更に
  7. Either A or B.
    A.00:17:337 (14) –, 00:24:837 (19) – change to kat.
    B. 00:16:399 (14) - , 00:18:274 (16) - , 00:23:899 (22) - , 00:25:774 (24) – add kat.

    A.2色変えるだけでも前奏00:00:462 (1) –から00:06:790 (6) –までの部分と同密度でありながら音の盛り上げが表現できます
    抵抗がないなら
    B. ノーツをそのまま付与しても問題ない難易度だと思います
    今回は2案出しましたが、ほかにもいろいろ試してみることをお勧めします! - Bの意見を採用し、他の難易度でも少しノーツを新たに付与、見直しをしました。
  8. 00:34:915 (30) – move to 00:35:149 (30) - . 00:42:649 (37) –こういった部分でもボーカルで押しているので統一した方がいいと思います - 変更しました。
  9. 00:36:790 (32) – delete? - ok!

  10. 01:00:462 (1) - から。
    A01:00:462 (55,56,57,58,59,60) –からの流れを受けて、
    B01:07:962 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) –と答えるようなノーツ構成
    量が増えるのはkiaiに対してもいい変化ではありますが…少々顕著すぎな気がします
    Futsuuの肉付けのような構成から減らすようなパターンが一番しっくりくると思います。提案パターンとしては以下のものを出します
    (少々見づらいかもしれませんが(1)のノーツが01:00:462 (55) –に該当します)
    - そうですね、提案があっていると思いましたので変更しました。

  11. 01:15:462 (16) –からですが、もう少しkiaiに音がほしいかな…
    e.g.
  12. 01:16:399 (2) – change to kat.
    *-1ボーカルが比較的高いのと、盛り上がりがパーカッションの音と相まってfitするので dkdkリズムをベースにしていいと思います。
  13. 01:17:805 – add don.
    *-2 01:15:462 (1,2) –を受けて付与しても問題ないレベルかと
  14. 01:31:399 (1,2,1) – 同様, d – k – d >>> k k d - k でよいかと - 変更しました。貴重な意見ありがとうございます。

    ---------------------
JUDYDANNY
2nd post. No Kudosu, please.


mp3 file
ビットレートは192kbs以下にするというルールがあります。 現状の音源はUnrankableです

Title
GO→Love&Peace , (short size)の表記は 公式ソースで見つけられない場合は消してください
tags
playstation 3 のゲームみたいなので playstation のtagの後ろに 3の表記も必要だと思います
彩音さんのシングルCD Crest of Knights のカップリング曲であるので Crest of Knights も tagに追加してあげてください
http://5pb.jp/records/release/detail/detail.php?records_product_code=AVCA-49030



Futsuu
[Futsuu]
  • <<Composing>>
  1. 00:01:399 (2) - , 00:08:899 (11) – delete? バス音が00:15:462 (3) - からのパートと比較してないので落ち着かせるためにも削除がいいと思います
  2. 00:18:743 (7) - move to00:17:805 (6) - ? 認識しやすくなり、ここがやりやすくなると思います00:19:212 (8,9,10) –
  3. 00:26:243 (18) – move to 00:25:305 (17) – and change to k?
  4. and , 00:26:712 (19,20,21,22,23,24) – d-kd,k-dk?
  5. 01:45:227 (21) – move to 01:44:758 (20) –
    01:45:462 (22) – において隣接ノーツをなくし、孤立させることで01:45:462 (22) –から1/1のリズムを刻ませてバス音の盛り上がりより表現させることができると思います!
  6. and, 01:45:930 (23) – add don?
    ------------------------

    <<Strategy>>
  7. 00:32:805 (29) – don  音がさして高くない以上donで落ち着かせるのが適切だと思います。
  8. 00:33:743 (31) – k? 色をかえるならボーカルを聞いてみてもここが妥当だと思います
  9. 00:46:399 (56) – k, same as above.
  10. 00:51:555 (5) – add don and 00:51:790 (6) – , 00:49:915 (2) - change to kat.
  11. 00:54:368 (10,11) – ノーツ詰めませんか? T_T (imgでいう11~13番にノーツが入ってます)
    .g.
  12. 01:14:524 (53) – k, MuzukashiiとOniも提案しますが、 ボーカルがとても高いのでk音がとてもfitします!
  13. 01:29:524 (12) – k ,same as 01:14:524 –

    ---------------------

    <<Opinions>>
  14. 01:16:399 (57) – k and 01:16:165 (57) – add a don? 01:16:165 (57) –ここからボーカルの音を拾ってあげた方が音の広がりがより取れると思います
  15. 01:19:446 (65) – delete?
  16. 01:21:555 (69) – delete?
  17. 01:31:633 (2) – move to 01:31:165 (16) – , 01:31:399 (1) – change to k ,and 01:32:571 (4) – add k . ? same as 1st kiai part.
  18. 01:34:446 (8) – delete?
  19. 01:33:274 (5) – don?
  20. 01:38:665 (7) – add don , 01:37:727 (5) – を置くなら、、、おいてもいいと思います。
  21. 01:38:899 (8,9) – どちらかor どちらもk?

Muzukashii
[Muzukashii]
  • <<Composing>>
  1. 00:06:555 (17) – k?
  2. 00:19:915 (23) - , 00:21:555 (26) – k?
  3. 00:22:727 (29) – delete, 00:22:962 (29) –への勢いが少し付きすぎてると思います.
  4. 00:29:055 (4,5) – kd?
  5. 00:29:993 (6) – add don? もしくは、 Aメロスタートをより意識させるための空白づくりとして代わりに00:29:524 (6) – ここにaddでもよいかと
  6. Either
    A.00:47:102 (51,52) – どちらかをk にした方が00:48:040 (53) –からのkdにつなげやすいかな...?
    B. 00:48:040 (53) – から00:49:212 (57) –まですべて色反転 + 00:50:149 (59) – don, 00:51:555 (63) –kat.
  7. ]01:01:282 (92) – delete, ddkkddkkの勢いを最高潮にもってあげるために、パワーは落としてあげていいと思います
  8. 01:02:571 (96) - , 01:06:321 (107) – delete?
  9. 01:16:868 (18) – k?
  10. 01:30:930 (25) – k?
  11. 01:24:602 (4) – delete? 気持ち休ませる意識でどうでしょうか?
  12. 01:39:368 (21) – k? ボーカルの余韻でkに合わせても、その後の01:39:837 (22,23) –との音取バランスもベターだと思います
  13. 01:41:946 (29) - , 01:45:579 (40) – delete? バスドラの1/2リズムを考慮すると、よりfitすると思います
  14. and, 01:42:180 (29) – k?
    ------------------------

    <<Strategy>>
  15. 00:39:837 (31) – move to 00:39:602 (31) – and Either, A or B
    A. 00:40:540 (34) – delete and 00:40:305 (33) – change to k
    B. 00:41:008 (36) – delete
    前後関係が安定してないような、1/2が少しだらだらと感じるというか、徒競走のイメージとして
    00:37:962 (26,27,28,29,30) – でスタートダッシュは切ったものの、00:39:602 (31) –と00:39:837 (31) –の間で足を滑らせかけて遅れを取ってしまい、00:39:837 (31) –からとりかえそうと無理に詰め込んでる…ような感じがします。 より自然な具合にボーカルに合わせた方がいいかなと
  16. 01:03:743 (98) - , 01:07:493 (107) - delete、
    00:55:540 (72) - から01:13:587 (7) - まで1/1を超える休憩がずっとないのでどこかしらにブレイクが必要です
    また、作ってあげた方が抑揚づけにつながると思います
    ※ただブレイクのspread差を考慮すると、Futsuuとのタイミングが異なるので、Futsuuの構成はここを見直した方がいいかもしれません
    かもしれないというのは、構成上仕方のないものとしてまれにブレイクのタイミングが異なるspread存在するいう点です。今回はそのようなケースとして見てますが、無理して直さずに他のmodderにベターなパターンの提案で修正、ていう程度の認識でもいいと思います
    ---------------------

    <<Opinions>>
  17. 00:32:337 (12,13,14,15,16,17) - ddk - dkd >>>d - ddk - d ?
  18. 00:14:993 (8) – delete? 主観です


    もう少しパターンが統一されてもいいかなと思います :?
Oni
[Oni]
  • <<Composing>>
  1. 00:20:149 (10,18) – move to 1/2 right? 旋律部分の抑揚にどうでしょうか
  2. 00:31:868 (59) - k and ,00:32:337 (60,61,62,63,64,65) – ddk-ddd>>>ddddd-k ? フィーリングな部分であると思うので提案がしにくいのですが、 k音が少し不足しているのと、3連が少しくどいような気がしました
  3. 00:39:368 (10) – k and 00:41:360 (19,20) – delete kkk3連は不要に感じます
  4. 01:07:024 (116) – delete, その後の3連のピアノがより明確に聞こえます
  5. 01:26:243 (11,12,13,14) – d-kkk>>>k-d-k  39秒の部分同様、音の取り方が不安定な感じ..
  6. 01:38:430 (27) – k and , 01:39:368 (32) – k? ボーカル、バックのスプラッシュ音等
    ------------------------

    <<Strategy>>
  7. 01:41:712 (7) –ここから明らかにマッパーが変わったのかって錯覚くらいスタイルが変わって難易度が跳ね上がりすぎているのでもう少し抑えることを提案します[
    e.g
    01:42:649 (12,13,14,15,16) – dk-kd-k >>>dkd-k (元ある16番の位置は休符の提案です)
    01:43:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – dk-kd-kdd-ddk-d > d-kd-dkdd-d-k
    01:46:282 (18) – move to 01:46:516 (19) - ?

    ---------------------

    <<Opinions>>
  8. 00:36:087 (73,74,1,2,3,4) – kdddk-d >>> k-dk-dk , or k-dk-dd?
  9. 01:14:290 (144,145) – k ボーカルが高い(01:16:165 (152,153) –と同じ)ので とても合います!
  10. 01:17:102 (157) – k? ボーカル、バックのスプラッシュ音等
  11. 01:20:618 (175) – k?ボーカル、バックのスプラッシュ音等
  12. 01:29:407 (26) – add k? 主観です
  13. 01:37:493 (22) – k? ボーカル、バックのスプラッシュ音等

Oniを最後に見てしまったので今更な感じがしますが
少し気になった点を挙げると、00:30:930 (55,56,57,58) - d-dddをベースにしている点
ほかの難易度はd-d-kがベースになっている点もあり、Oniだけ1/2のベースがd-d-dになっているので.... 他の難易度と音の取り方がだいぶ違うなぁと思いました

以上です>< 低難易度は割としっかりしていましたが Oni,Muzukashiiとなると ベースの部分における配置や1/4連打が少々不安定な感がありました..低難易度と照らし合わせて見比べてみてもいいかもしれません!
Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
Renka

JUDYDANNY wrote:

2nd post. No Kudosu, please.


mp3 file
ビットレートは192kbs以下にするというルールがあります。 現状の音源はUnrankableです -
Title
GO→Love&Peace , (short size)の表記は 公式ソースで見つけられない場合は消してください - 上記でJulieさんがソースを貼ってくださっています、この音源はボーナスサウンドトラックのものなのでこう表記しています。
tags
playstation 3 のゲームみたいなので playstation のtagの後ろに 3の表記も必要だと思います
彩音さんのシングルCD Crest of Knights のカップリング曲であるので Crest of Knights も tagに追加してあげてください - 追加しました。
http://5pb.jp/records/release/detail/detail.php?records_product_code=AVCA-49030



Futsuu
[Futsuu]
  • <<Composing>>
  1. 00:01:399 (2) - , 00:08:899 (11) – delete? バス音が00:15:462 (3) - からのパートと比較してないので落ち着かせるためにも削除がいいと思います - fixed
  2. 00:18:743 (7) - move to00:17:805 (6) - ? 認識しやすくなり、ここがやりやすくなると思います00:19:212 (8,9,10) - 変更しました。
  3. 00:26:243 (18) – move to 00:25:305 (17) – and change to k? - 変更しました。
  4. and , 00:26:712 (19,20,21,22,23,24) – d-kd,k-dk? - 自分もそう感じたので変更しました。
  5. 01:45:227 (21) – move to 01:44:758 (20) – 変更しました。
    01:45:462 (22) – において隣接ノーツをなくし、孤立させることで01:45:462 (22) –から1/1のリズムを刻ませてバス音の盛り上がりより表現させることができると思います! - そうですね、変更しました。
  6. and, 01:45:930 (23) – add don? - fixed.
    ------------------------

    <<Strategy>>
  7. 00:32:805 (29) – don  音がさして高くない以上donで落ち着かせるのが適切だと思います。- 変更しました。
  8. 00:33:743 (31) – k? 色をかえるならボーカルを聞いてみてもここが妥当だと思います- 変更しました。
  9. 00:46:399 (56) – k, same as above. - ^
  10. 00:51:555 (5) – add don and 00:51:790 (6) – , 00:49:915 (2) - change to kat. - 変更しました。
  11. 00:54:368 (10,11) – ノーツ詰めませんか? T_T (imgでいう11~13番にノーツが入ってます) - 変更しました。
    .g.
  12. 01:14:524 (53) – k, MuzukashiiとOniも提案しますが、 ボーカルがとても高いのでk音がとてもfitします! - そうですね、変更しました!
  13. 01:29:524 (12) – k ,same as 01:14:524 – ^

    ---------------------

    <<Opinions>>
  14. 01:16:399 (57) – k and 01:16:165 (57) – add a don? 01:16:165 (57) –ここからボーカルの音を拾ってあげた方が音の広がりがより取れると思います - fixed.
  15. 01:19:446 (65) – delete? - ok!
  16. 01:21:555 (69) – delete? - ^
  17. 01:31:633 (2) – move to 01:31:165 (16) – , 01:31:399 (1) – change to k ,and 01:32:571 (4) – add k . ? same as 1st kiai part. - 変更しました。
  18. 01:34:446 (8) – delete? - ^
  19. 01:33:274 (5) – don? - ^
  20. 01:38:665 (7) – add don , 01:37:727 (5) – を置くなら、、、おいてもいいと思います。 - ^
  21. 01:38:899 (8,9) – どちらかor どちらもk? - 01:38:899をkに変更しました。

とても参考になりました!

Muzukashii
[Muzukashii]
  • <<Composing>>
  1. 00:06:555 (17) – k? - ok!
  2. 00:19:915 (23) - , 00:21:555 (26) – k? -^
  3. 00:22:727 (29) – delete, 00:22:962 (29) –への勢いが少し付きすぎてると思います. - そうですね、fixed.
  4. 00:29:055 (4,5) – kd? - ^
  5. 00:29:993 (6) – add don? もしくは、 Aメロスタートをより意識させるための空白づくりとして代わりに00:29:524 (6) – ここにaddでもよいかと - 00:29:524にノーツを入れました。
  6. Either - Bの意見を採用させていただきました。
    A.00:47:102 (51,52) – どちらかをk にした方が00:48:040 (53) –からのkdにつなげやすいかな...? -
    B. 00:48:040 (53) – から00:49:212 (57) –まですべて色反転 + 00:50:149 (59) – don, 00:51:555 (63) –kat.
  7. ]01:01:282 (92) – delete, ddkkddkkの勢いを最高潮にもってあげるために、パワーは落としてあげていいと思います - fixed.
  8. 01:02:571 (96) - , 01:06:321 (107) – delete? - ^
  9. 01:16:868 (18) – k? - ^
  10. 01:30:930 (25) – k? - ^
  11. 01:24:602 (4) – delete? 気持ち休ませる意識でどうでしょうか? - fixed.
  12. 01:39:368 (21) – k? ボーカルの余韻でkに合わせても、その後の01:39:837 (22,23) –との音取バランスもベターだと思います - ^
  13. 01:41:946 (29) - , 01:45:579 (40) – delete? バスドラの1/2リズムを考慮すると、よりfitすると思います - ^
  14. and, 01:42:180 (29) – k? - ^
    ------------------------

    <<Strategy>>
  15. 00:39:837 (31) – move to 00:39:602 (31) – and Either, A or B - fixed,Aの意見を採用させていただきました。
    A. 00:40:540 (34) – delete and 00:40:305 (33) – change to k
    B. 00:41:008 (36) – delete
    前後関係が安定してないような、1/2が少しだらだらと感じるというか、徒競走のイメージとして
    00:37:962 (26,27,28,29,30) – でスタートダッシュは切ったものの、00:39:602 (31) –と00:39:837 (31) –の間で足を滑らせかけて遅れを取ってしまい、00:39:837 (31) –からとりかえそうと無理に詰め込んでる…ような感じがします。 より自然な具合にボーカルに合わせた方がいいかなと
  16. 01:03:743 (98) - , 01:07:493 (107) - delete、
    00:55:540 (72) - から01:13:587 (7) - まで1/1を超える休憩がずっとないのでどこかしらにブレイクが必要です - そうですね、ノーツを消しました。
    また、作ってあげた方が抑揚づけにつながると思います

    ※ただブレイクのspread差を考慮すると、Futsuuとのタイミングが異なるので、Futsuuの構成はここを見直した方がいいかもしれません
    かもしれないというのは、構成上仕方のないものとしてまれにブレイクのタイミングが異なるspread存在するいう点です。今回はそのようなケースとして見てますが、無理して直さずに他のmodderにベターなパターンの提案で修正、ていう程度の認識でもいいと思います
    ---------------------

    <<Opinions>>
  17. 00:32:337 (12,13,14,15,16,17) - ddk - dkd >>>d - ddk - d ? - fixed.
  18. 00:14:993 (8) – delete? 主観です - ^


    もう少しパターンが統一されてもいいかなと思います :? - 他の難易度と照らし合わせることを心掛けていきたいと思います。

とても参考になりました!
Oni
[Oni]
  • <<Composing>>
  1. 00:20:149 (10,18) – move to 1/2 right? 旋律部分の抑揚にどうでしょうか - fixed.
  2. 00:31:868 (59) - k and ,00:32:337 (60,61,62,63,64,65) – ddk-ddd>>>ddddd-k ? フィーリングな部分であると思うので提案がしにくいのですが、 k音が少し不足しているのと、3連が少しくどいような気がしました - そうですね、変更しました。
  3. 00:39:368 (10) – k and 00:41:360 (19,20) – delete kkk3連は不要に感じます - ok,fixed.
  4. 01:07:024 (116) – delete, その後の3連のピアノがより明確に聞こえます - ^
  5. 01:26:243 (11,12,13,14) – d-kkk>>>k-d-k  39秒の部分同様、音の取り方が不安定な感じ.. -^
  6. 01:38:430 (27) – k and , 01:39:368 (32) – k? ボーカル、バックのスプラッシュ音等 - ^
    ------------------------

    <<Strategy>>
  7. 01:41:712 (7) –ここから明らかにマッパーが変わったのかって錯覚くらいスタイルが変わって難易度が跳ね上がりすぎているのでもう少し抑えることを提案します[
    e.g
    01:42:649 (12,13,14,15,16) – dk-kd-k >>>dkd-k (元ある16番の位置は休符の提案です) - ok,fixed.
    01:43:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – dk-kd-kdd-ddk-d > d-kd-dkdd-d-k - d-kkd-kdk-d-kというように配置しました。
    01:46:282 (18) – move to 01:46:516 (19) - ? - fixed.

    ---------------------

    <<Opinions>>
  8. 00:36:087 (73,74,1,2,3,4) – kdddk-d >>> k-dk-dk , or k-dk-dd? - 後者を採用しました。
  9. 01:14:290 (144,145) – k ボーカルが高い(01:16:165 (152,153) –と同じ)ので とても合います! - fixed.
  10. 01:17:102 (157) – k? ボーカル、バックのスプラッシュ音等 -^
  11. 01:20:618 (175) – k?ボーカル、バックのスプラッシュ音等 -^
  12. 01:29:407 (26) – add k? 主観です -^
  13. 01:37:493 (22) – k? ボーカル、バックのスプラッシュ音等 -^
Change myself
01:29:993 - change d.

Oniを最後に見てしまったので今更な感じがしますが
少し気になった点を挙げると、00:30:930 (55,56,57,58) - d-dddをベースにしている点
ほかの難易度はd-d-kがベースになっている点もあり、Oniだけ1/2のベースがd-d-dになっているので.... 他の難易度と音の取り方がだいぶ違うなぁと思いました - d-ddkという配置が音に合わないと感じd-d-dをベースに配置しましたが、他の難易度と統一性に欠けると思いましたので、他の配置もd-d-dをベースに変更しました。

以上です>< 低難易度は割としっかりしていましたが Oni,Muzukashiiとなると ベースの部分における配置や1/4連打が少々不安定な感がありました..低難易度と照らし合わせて見比べてみてもいいかもしれません! - むずかしい以上の難易度はかんたん、ふつうと照らし合わせての譜面作成を怠り統一性を考えずにノーツを配置していたところがありました...以後気を付けます。

Good Luck! :)
 Thank you for Modding!!
JUDYDANNY
Bubbled
==★
Topic Starter
Renka
Change MP3 File. Updated~
Nofool
Hi', PM req.
im kinda late sorry ;_;
Good set overall imo, could be improved a little bit maybe.

[Kantan]
Pretty good kantan.
- 01:19:290 (78) - k ? sounds better, as you did at - 01:34:290 -.
- 01:45:540 - add d ? consistency with - 01:41:790 (12) -.

[Futsuu]
- maybe move - 00:57:727 (19) - to - 00:58:196 - as k, and remove - 00:59:133 (21) - if too many notes ? there was no d at - 00:52:102 - which sounds similar x_x.
- move - 01:03:352 (29) - to - 01:03:586 - ? fits better the song but idk about the flow here ;_;.
- 01:07:102 (37) - ^.
- move - 01:12:727 (48) - to - 01:12:493 - ? ^ same reason.
- 01:16:243 (57,58,59,60,61) - something like k dd dk would fit better the vocal, instead of dk d dk ? your pattern doesn't sound bad so as you pref.
- move - 01:25:852 (5) - to - 01:26:086 - ? vocal.
- 01:31:243 (16,17,18,19,20) - refer to - 01:16:243 -.

[Muzukashii]
- change - 00:26:321 (38) - to k ? plays better as k imo.
- move - 00:39:680 (30,31) - to 1/2 beat before would fit more what you di at all the other similar parts, example : - 00:31:946 (11,12) -.
- move - 01:46:594 (43) - to - 01:46:360 - ? k ddd d k plx.

[Oni]
- add k at - 00:19:993 - and remove - 00:20:227 (9) - ? you follow the melody everywhere before but not here õ_o, also for cinsistency with - 00:27:493 (43).
- move - 01:23:625 (258) - to - 01:23:391 - ? better pattern reverse.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Bubbled
y u no BN then :c ?
Topic Starter
Renka

Nofool wrote:

Hi', PM req.
im kinda late sorry ;_;
Good set overall imo, could be improved a little bit maybe.

[Kantan]
Pretty good kantan.
- 01:19:290 (78) - k ? sounds better, as you did at - 01:34:290 -. -okay,fixed.
- 01:45:540 - add d ? consistency with - 01:41:790 (12) -. - no,I have put a little bit of break.

[Futsuu]
- maybe move - 00:57:727 (19) - to - 00:58:196 - as k, and remove - 00:59:133 (21) - if too many notes ? there was no d at - 00:52:102 - which sounds similar x_x. - fixed.
- move - 01:03:352 (29) - to - 01:03:586 - ? fits better the song but idk about the flow here ;_;. - ^
- 01:07:102 (37) - ^. -fixed
- move - 01:12:727 (48) - to - 01:12:493 - ? ^ same reason. - no change,Because I do not want to increase much even strokes.
- 01:16:243 (57,58,59,60,61) - something like k dd dk would fit better the vocal, instead of dk d dk ? your pattern doesn't sound bad so as you pref. - okay,fixed.
- move - 01:25:852 (5) - to - 01:26:086 - ? vocal. - ok.
- 01:31:243 (16,17,18,19,20) - refer to - 01:16:243 -. - change to d kd kk.

[Muzukashii]
- change - 00:26:321 (38) - to k ? plays better as k imo. - no change,I have an arrangement in which combined with Oni.
- move - 00:39:680 (30,31) - to 1/2 beat before would fit more what you di at all the other similar parts, example : - 00:31:946 (11,12) -. - okay,change.
- move - 01:46:594 (43) - to - 01:46:360 - ? k ddd d k plx. - no change,I have avoided even strokes. - fixed.

[Oni]
- add k at - 00:19:993 - and remove - 00:20:227 (9) - ? you follow the melody everywhere before but not here õ_o, also for cinsistency with - 00:27:493 (43).- fixed.
- move - 01:23:625 (258) - to - 01:23:391 - ? better pattern reverse. - okay,fixed.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck' Thank you for Modding!

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Bubbled
y u no BN then :c ?
stu00608
Hi~ from pm mod req

--> = move

[Futsuu ]

  • 00:17:883 k

    01:01:477 k
    01:31:946 k
    01:32:649 d
[Muzukashii ]

  • 00:20:930 del
    00:23:743 k
    00:31:477 k
    00:38:860 del
    01:01:477 k
    01:01:711 k
    01:02:415 -> 01:02:180
    01:02:649 d
    01:02:883 k
    01:03:118 d
[Oni ]

  • 00:06:633 (18,19) - kd? same as the other diff
    00:18:821 k
    00:18:938 del~
    00:38:977 k ?
    00:55:383 d
    put a note here to allow the drum sound?

    01:05:930 ddk = add 2 d

    01:19:290 (241,242) - kk ?

    01:22:336 add d
    01:22:571 ~ 01:23:040 put ddkkd? sounds better
Kantan looks good :)
Muzukashii I feel a little weird :o
Oni nice map :)

Good luck :D
Topic Starter
Renka

stu00608 wrote:

Hi~ from pm mod req

--> = move

[Futsuu ]

  • 00:17:883 k - fixed.

    01:01:477 k - no change.
    01:31:946 k - ^
    01:32:649 d - ^
[Muzukashii ]

  • 00:20:930 del - fixed.
    00:23:743 k - no change. same Oni.
    00:31:477 k - no change,It is a unified whole diffi in ddd.
    00:38:860 del - fixed.
    01:01:477 k - ^
    01:01:711 k - no change.
    01:02:415 -> 01:02:180 - ^
    01:02:649 d - ^
    01:02:883 k - fixed.
    01:03:118 d - ^
[Oni ]

  • 00:06:633 (18,19) - kd? same as the other diff - ok,fixed.
    00:18:821 k - no change,I want to keep the pattern of ddk d kdd.
    00:18:938 del~ - ^
    00:38:977 k ? - no change,same muzukashii.
    00:55:383 d - ok.
    put a note here to allow the drum sound?

    01:05:930 ddk = add 2 d - hmm,ok.fixed.

    01:19:290 (241,242) - kk ?

    01:22:336 add d - hmmm,,,add k.
    01:22:571 ~ 01:23:040 put ddkkd? sounds better - no change,I feel it is too difficult.
Kantan looks good :)
Muzukashii I feel a little weird :o
Oni nice map :)

Good luck :D
Thank you for Modding!!!
Surono
<(``)

[Kantan]
no broplem 4 me~

[Futsuu]
00:31:008 (26) - k
00:38:977 (12) - k
01:09:446 (40) - k

[Muzukashii]
00:00:540 (1) - k
00:02:649 (7) - k
00:09:915 (24,25,26) - ctrl g
00:31:243 (9) - k
01:03:352 (2) - k
01:11:790 (23,1,2,3) - dkdk
01:13:430 (6) - k
01:32:415 (6,7) - dk or kd

[Oni]
00:10:500 - add d
00:10:969 - del
00:14:602 (46,47) - kk
00:21:868 (17) - k
00:31:008 (55) - k
00:33:352 (64) - k
00:38:977 (82) - k
00:51:165 (129) - k

hm just it.. sry if not helpful ^^" i afraid to recommend many.. GL~
Topic Starter
Renka

Surono wrote:

<(``)

[Kantan]
no broplem 4 me~

[Futsuu]
00:31:008 (26) - k - It is unified ddd,sorry,no change.
00:38:977 (12) - k - ^
01:09:446 (40) - k - ok,fixed.

[Muzukashii]
00:00:540 (1) - k - no change.
00:02:649 (7) - k - fixed.
00:09:915 (24,25,26) - ctrl g - no change,other diff since the unified.
00:31:243 (9) - k - same as futsuu.
01:03:352 (2) - k - no change.
01:11:790 (23,1,2,3) - dkdk - change to kdkd.other diff is kdkd.
01:13:430 (6) - k - umm...no change.
01:32:415 (6,7) - dk or kd - keep.

[Oni]
00:10:500 - add d - no change,a little hard
00:10:969 - del - no change.
00:14:602 (46,47) - kk - ^
00:21:868 (17) - k - no chane,but 00:21:633 is k.thanks.
00:31:008 (55) - k - same as futsuu.
00:33:352 (64) - k - fixed.
00:38:977 (82) - k - no change.
00:51:165 (129) - k - ^

hm just it.. sry if not helpful ^^" i afraid to recommend many.. GL~
thank you for modding!!!
xtrem3x
Mod request via ... PM or in-game (?)

________________________________________________________________________

General:


Don: d
Kat: k
Big don: D
Big kat: K

________________________________________________________________________

Kantan:

GOOD

________________________________________________________________________

Futsuu:

00:21:633 (12,13) - ctrl+g (same reason about high sounds)

00:27:258 (20,21) - ctrl+g (why is different here?)

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Muzukashii:

00:21:633 (24,25) - ctrl+g (same reason about high sounds)

00:31:477 - Change to k (high vocal)
00:33:821 - ^

00:49:055 - ctrl+g (high vocal)

00:58:665 - Change to k (start with k because long vocal sound)

01:29:836 (19,20) - ctrl+g
01:30:188 - d (a triple is good)

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Oni:

00:09:680 - d (break sequence is rare, is better complete imo)

00:21:868 - Change to k (High sound)

00:32:415 (60,62) - Change to k (follow emphasis about vocal)
00:33:118 (63,64) - ctrl+g (same reason about emphasis)

00:59:954 - d (a mini-stream in this part is rarely good)

________________________________________________________________________
Topic Starter
Renka

xtrem3x wrote:

Mod request via ... PM or in-game (?)

________________________________________________________________________

General:


Don: d
Kat: k
Big don: D
Big kat: K

________________________________________________________________________

Kantan:

GOOD

________________________________________________________________________

Futsuu:

00:21:633 (12,13) - ctrl+g (same reason about high sounds) - keep.

00:27:258 (20,21) - ctrl+g (why is different here?) - ok,fixed.

________________________________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

00:21:633 (24,25) - ctrl+g (same reason about high sounds) - keep.

00:31:477 - Change to k (high vocal) - keep to Placement of ddd.
00:33:821 - ^ - fixed.

00:49:055 - ctrl+g (high vocal) - keep.

00:58:665 - Change to k (start with k because long vocal sound) - ok,fixed.

01:29:836 (19,20) - ctrl+g - fixed.
01:30:188 - d (a triple is good) - ok,fixed. change to 01:30:071 is d.

________________________________________________________________________

Oni:

00:09:680 - d (break sequence is rare, is better complete imo) - keep

00:21:868 - Change to k (High sound) - ok!

00:32:415 (60,62) - Change to k (follow emphasis about vocal) - ok,The other diff also changed.
00:33:118 (63,64) - ctrl+g (same reason about emphasis) - ok,The Muzukashii also changed.

00:59:954 - d (a mini-stream in this part is rarely good) - hmmm..keep.

________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for Modding!!!
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