t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (P*Light Remix) [OsuM

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ToifAmri

Pharos21 wrote:

OK

2nd MOD. No kudo please

[SB]

hmm.. setelah kau kasi Code it... kan jadinya item..

nah dari situ kau bisa kreasi mau kau fade ato gimana bisa tanpa membuat SB load nya meledak


soo.. for the 1st part (start sampai 00:11:260 - )

kau kasi pict di sini dan sesuain size nya (mainin scale nya) terus kau kreasikan mo di gimanain terserah anda


2nd part (00:11:260 - sampai 00:22:231 - )

hmm.. untuk countdown kau pake flash ya?? titik terang kau redupin please (secukupnya sampai ngga terlalu menyilaukan. karena flashmu jujur.. bisa jadi musuh mu pas nanti dah qualified)


3rd part (00:22:231 sampai 00:27:374 - )

untuk starternya.. kau kasi Fade out (efek ngilang pelan pelan) kau kasi titik Fade di 00:22:231 - sampai 00:24:974 - dan kau ilangin gambarnya di 00:24:974 -
dan kasi efek Fade in (efek appear pelan pelan) kau kasi titik Fade di 00:26:346 - sampai 00:27:374 - dan kau munculin gambarnya di titik 00:27:374 -

jadinya kira kira kaya gini




4th part ( 00:27:374 - sampai 00:49:660 - )

hmm.. C-Down mu di sini terlalu lebar ke atas.. jadi ngga enak mainnya... kau kecilin kira kira segini



dan bagian 00:49:317 - sampai 00:49:660 - , jujur ngga rapi banget...coba kau fade ngilang di daerah ini (end nya di 00:49:660 - )


5th part ( 00:49:660 - sampai 01:00:631 - )

hmmm.. OK banget ini part.. i like it... kasi sedikit bumbu C-Down dan perfect.. ak serahkan titik penempatan dan timingnya ke kreasimu, tapi inget.. jangan lebar lebar C-Down nya.. samain lah kaya C-Down yang udah di rombak di 4th part



6th part ( 01:00:631 - sampai 01:11:260 - )

gelap... kosong... hanya ada flash..... kasi gambar lahh~


7th part ( 01:11:603 sampai end nya kiai)

nah ini yang ak bilang SB mu bisa jadi musuh sejuta umat.. Pulse mu terlalu kuat (pembesaran terlalu Gila.. kau kecilin scale maxnya sampe pulse nya jadi Soft)

dan kau tadi tanya bagian yang terlalu over kan... ini bagiannya

01:37:660 - wew.. ini move nya terlalu jauh jadi kesannya cepet banget.. ak recomended speed nya kaya efect yang pertama 01:15:717 dan kau bedakan arahnya

01:32:174 ngga ada flash nya.. padahal yang lain ada

dan di point setelahnya.. kalau kau liat efect yang keterlaluan cepetnya.. kau kurangin speednya (samain kaya yang ak kasi barusan)

01:54:117 - hmm good variation.. but too fast.... reduce the speed please dan lebih di smooth kan

Last part

wahh ak suka bagian ini.. tambahin fade ngilang setelah Gong.. dah perfect.. ^.^

[Chart]

Format
1-2-3-4

[Novice]

01:28:660 (88660|1) - ohhhhh Unsnaped tragedy TT^TT

wew.. ak suka cara kau ngasih LN untuk Sound Effect.. Keep it up

00:00:289 (289|1,1660|3,2346|1,3031|0,3717|2,4403|0) - OK... ini LN ngmap apaan?

00:11:260 (11260|0,11603|1,11946|2,12289|3) - wew.. LN ini terlalu susah untuk NOV

[Advanced LV12]

00:18:974 - missing Note start stream nih

00:19:317 (19317|2) - move ke blue line atasnya (stream nya jangan di putus please

00:20:174 (20174|3,20174|2,20346|1,20517|0,20517|1,20689|1,20860|2,20860|3,20946|0,21031|1,21117|3,21203|0,21289|2,21374|1,21460|0,21546|3,21631|2,21717|1,21803|2,21889|0,21974|2,22060|0,22146|1) - buat jadi stream single note.. ngga enak menurutku kalo di kasi dual.. kalo di diff atasnya ini Fine~

00:27:374 - missing Note

01:18:631 (78631|1) - variation nya ngga pass.. kalo mo di kasi kaya gini.. please di hitung beatnya.. kerasa tiba tiba

wew... ngga ada variation sama sekali...orz

[Adv lvl 14]

idih.. dah bagus nih

cuman.. ko ada bagian yang ngga pas sama lagunya ya? coba kau dengerin lagi sambil kau Testplay


OK MOD end Here ^.^

Gl ^>^

kalo ada yang di tanyakan. PM me ^.^
Terimakasih ^^
Evening
kudosu denied as requested ~
Aste-

Z3nx wrote:

kudosu denied as requested ~
thanks Z3nx samaaaaa~ orz
Ciyus Miapah
ane gk bisa ngemod mania thanks
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Fort wrote:

ane gk bisa ngemod mania thanks
sama - sama :3
bilqiscutee
Hi mod as requested via pm~

[General]


wut?/ itu yg di BG kaneki-kun dayone? x_x

Novice Lv.6 nya terlalu mudah icon nya juga masih easy usahain sampe blue icon Normal icon


[Advance Lv.12]


00:19:060 (19060|3,19317|2) - delete

00:19:403 add

[Another Lv.14]


wew ini 2 note 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - padahal sounds nya sama kaya ini - > 00:11:946 & 00:12:289 etc.
00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - kurangin 1 note atau tambah 1 note di setiap garis putih.

00:16:531 (16531|3) - delete, lalu move 00:16:489 (16489|2) - ke 00:16:660 col 4

00:17:860 (17860|1) - delete, no sound here

00:18:031 (18031|0,18117|1) - ctrl + J

00:19:831 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3021596 better

00:21:546 add 2 note

00:21:717 add

00:21:889 add 2 note

00:22:060 add

sisanya tolong di re-pettern lg ya kurangin jack2 nya :v


okay sorry cuma bisa mod segitu :D:D
oiya, butuh 4k Extra? mungkin gw bisa bantu buatin GD :)
Good luck~
Kuo Kyoka
Next time please ask me before you take my mp3: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226153
Why does i know its:
My mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuc.png
Your mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuA.PNG
Its same, right?
Also your map have same BPM. offset with me so its easily for me to detected :P

Why I warn you should call me to take my mp3?
Because this is full song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWbw1rKOFAI
its take 4 minutes and 15 seconds

On this edition only take 2 minutes 6 seconds: Because im the one who cut the mp3 and fixed the qualify of it, so its the mp3 of mine :P

Okay now, im just warning, next time please ask me first, okay?

Thanks and also good luck with your map ~

P/s: The SB seems quite ... idk how to says but its ... i dont want to says it :'( better to fix it, and suggest on kiai time, why not use only one img/code for it insteal of copy and paste? it will make the sb extend the size, i think ~

Anyway, if you need help on SB, call me or Roxas for more information, thanks and good luck <3
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bilqiscutee wrote:

Hi mod as requested via pm~

[General]


wut?/ itu yg di BG kaneki-kun dayone? x_x

Novice Lv.6 nya terlalu mudah icon nya juga masih easy usahain sampe blue icon Normal icon


[Advance Lv.12]


00:19:060 (19060|3,19317|2) - delete

00:19:403 add

[Another Lv.14]


wew ini 2 note 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - padahal sounds nya sama kaya ini - > 00:11:946 & 00:12:289 etc.
00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - kurangin 1 note atau tambah 1 note di setiap garis putih.

00:16:531 (16531|3) - delete, lalu move 00:16:489 (16489|2) - ke 00:16:660 col 4

00:17:860 (17860|1) - delete, no sound here

00:18:031 (18031|0,18117|1) - ctrl + J

00:19:831 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3021596 better

00:21:546 add 2 note

00:21:717 add

00:21:889 add 2 note

00:22:060 add

sisanya tolong di re-pettern lg ya kurangin jack2 nya :v


okay sorry cuma bisa mod segitu :D:D
oiya, butuh 4k Extra? mungkin gw bisa bantu buatin GD :)
Good luck~
okee
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Next time please ask me before you take my mp3: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226153
Why does i know its:
My mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuc.png
Your mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuA.PNG
Its same, right?
Also your map have same BPM. offset with me so its easily for me to detected :P

Why I warn you should call me to take my mp3?
Because this is full song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWbw1rKOFAI
its take 4 minutes and 15 seconds

On this edition only take 2 minutes 6 seconds: Because im the one who cut the mp3 and fixed the qualify of it, so its the mp3 of mine :P

Okay now, im just warning, next time please ask me first, okay?

Thanks and also good luck with your map ~

P/s: The SB seems quite ... idk how to says but its ... i dont want to says it :'( better to fix it, and suggest on kiai time, why not use only one img/code for it insteal of copy and paste? it will make the sb extend the size, i think ~

Anyway, if you need help on SB, call me or Roxas for more information, thanks and good luck <3
i am so sorry.. :cry::cry::cry::cry: . oke i call you if i need help on SB :o
Rivals_7
Get busted by Kuo Kyoka eh? Seems Legit :3
Better watch out. Don't make a same mistake again. Those BNG people is not only check the beatmap but they also check the folder.
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Rivals_7 wrote:

Get busted by Kuo Kyoka eh? Seems Legit :3
Better watch out. Don't make a same mistake again. Those BNG people is not only check the beatmap but they also check the folder.
i am so sorry :cry::cry::cry:
Rido
Wah wah maling >_>

Btw just suggesestion:
Novice - Advanced - Another? Harusnya NOVICE - ADVANCED - EXHAUST (kapital semua) yg ini ngikut diff namenya SDVX. Kalo tetep pake Another, harusnya Normal - Hyper - Another, yg ini ngikut BMS
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bakabakemono wrote:

Wah wah maling >_>

Btw just suggesestion:
Novice - Advanced - Another? Harusnya NOVICE - ADVANCED - EXHAUST (kapital semua) yg ini ngikut diff namenya SDVX. Kalo tetep pake Another, harusnya Normal - Hyper - Another, yg ini ngikut BMS
Ga bermaksud maling kak :cry::cry:
SPAS-ID
MOD

- NO MOD -

1. To Many Repeated Note 01:00:974 - 01:10:231
2. The LN Should Be From 02:05:089 - 02:06:460
1. 3 Note In Every Double White Line 00:00:289 - 00:11:260 ( To Give It More Star Diff )
2. Why Dont U Make 1/3 Or 1/4 Stair Over Here 01:08:860 - 01:10:231 ( This Is EXHAUST Right ? )
3. 3 Note In 01:16:060 And 01:16:403 Because It Has Higher Beat
4. 01:21:889 And 01:22:231 ^
5. I See No 3 Notes Here ( Except This 02:00:631 )
1. Is That Even A Proper Background ?
2. 00:49:660 - 01:00:631 I Prefer Not To Make It Goes In Wierd Way
3. 01:10:231 - 01:11:260 Make It Stay And Just With C-White
4. 01:54:117 - 02:06:460 R U Run Out Of Idea ?!


EDIT : Add 1 Star Diff On All Maps Please ( 0.5 Star Diff On EXHAUST Its To Easy
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

SPAS-ID wrote:

MOD

- NO MOD -

1. To Many Repeated Note 01:00:974 - 01:10:231
2. The LN Should Be From 02:05:089 - 02:06:460
1. 3 Note In Every Double White Line 00:00:289 - 00:11:260 ( To Give It More Star Diff )
2. Why Dont U Make 1/3 Or 1/4 Stair Over Here 01:08:860 - 01:10:231 ( This Is EXHAUST Right ? )
3. 3 Note In 01:16:060 And 01:16:403 Because It Has Higher Beat
4. 01:21:889 And 01:22:231 ^
5. I See No 3 Notes Here ( Except This 02:00:631 )
1. Is That Even A Proper Background ?
2. 00:49:660 - 01:00:631 I Prefer Not To Make It Goes In Wierd Way
3. 01:10:231 - 01:11:260 Make It Stay And Just With C-White
4. 01:54:117 - 02:06:460 R U Run Out Of Idea ?!


EDIT : Add 1 Star Diff On All Maps Please ( 0.5 Star Diff On EXHAUST Its To Easy
Thanks :)
Kagu-chan
Hi, sorry for delay, was way busy xD

Please refer this tool result (ignore SB isuue here since this map has a SB inside)
Comparing:
t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [NOVICE Lv.6].osu
t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [ADVANCED Lv.12].osu
t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [EXHAUST Lv.14].osu

Check some necessary data...
No issues found

General check for NOVICE Lv.6
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

General check for ADVANCED Lv.12
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

General check for EXHAUST Lv.14
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

Metadata check...
No issues found

Analyze MP3 File - this may take a while...

FileName => Kick-ass Kungfu (PLight Remix).mp3
FileSize => 3.0 MB
AudioBitrate => 192 kbps
Duration => 0:02:09
Duration in MS => 129000

Check for issues in MP3...
No issues found

Check Timings...
You used 1 timing section(s) and 9 inherited section(s)
KIAI-Time in NOVICE Lv.6 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%
KIAI-Time in ADVANCED Lv.12 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%
KIAI-Time in EXHAUST Lv.14 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%

Checking Hitobjects...
NOVICE Lv.6 [4K]
This Diff contains 377 Hitobjects (Short Note: 359, Long Note: 18)
77 on Row 1 (20.42%)
113 on Row 2 (29.97%)
116 on Row 3 (30.77%)
71 on Row 4 (18.83%)

ADVANCED Lv.12 [4K]
This Diff contains 603 Hitobjects (Short Note: 571, Long Note: 32)
134 on Row 1 (22.22%)
146 on Row 2 (24.21%)
165 on Row 3 (27.36%)
158 on Row 4 (26.20%)

EXHAUST Lv.14 [4K]
This Diff contains 920 Hitobjects (Short Note: 901, Long Note: 19)
166 on Row 1 (18.04%)
313 on Row 2 (34.02%)
248 on Row 3 (26.96%)
193 on Row 4 (20.98%)


You should try to fix the balancing - ive checked since ive seen that it could be a bit... off xD
On ADV-Diff its OK i guess ;)
Also i want to point out that Jacks are only allowed for Diffs lower than 150 BPM OR higher diffs - So please consider changing and removing Jacks in NOV diff since there not fitting too.

If you fixed this issues please PM me again for normal mod, thanks ;)
bilqiscutee
[ADVANCED Lv.12]
[BASIC Lv.6]
[EXHAUST Lv.14]
if you change the diff name like this, i think i will change my EXTRA Lv.?? to INFINITE Lv.?? ;)
SPAS-ID
Little Mod

1. 01:16:060 - 01:17:089 Please Make It 0.5 , 1.25 I Looks Really Wierd If U're Using 0.45 , 1 -_- Applies For Other SV ( EXH )
2.Why Theres No Stairs ? Cmon
3. Make The Note On EXH Looks Like This 01:21:203 (81203|0,81203|2,81203|1,81546|1,81546|0,81546|2,81889|3,81889|1,81889|2,82231|2,82231|3,82231|1) - Not This 01:26:689 (86689|3,86689|1,86860|0,87031|3,87031|1,87203|0,87374|3,87374|1,87546|0,87717|3,87717|1) -
4. I Can Make A Storyboard For This Map Tho
5. Change BG name into BG.png FFS !
Rifkymarcelio
GD In progress bro.. semua 7k
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bilqiscutee wrote:

[ADVANCED Lv.12]
[BASIC Lv.6]
[EXHAUST Lv.14]
if you change the diff name like this, i think i will change my EXTRA Lv.?? to INFINITE Lv.?? ;)
Okey :)
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