1. Easy (1.48 stars, 105 notes)
2. Hard (3.53 stars, 302 notes)
3. Insane (4.62 stars, 386 notes)
4. Normal (2.16 stars, 168 notes)
5. toybot's Extra (5.32 stars, 418 notes)

Rank #1

Thank you toybot for the GD, I liked it

Video was wrongfully taken from this mapset LOL. Full credits given to xxdeathx

SPOILER

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/301394

Padge14 wrote:

If you have difficulty to read the mod, PM me.

Easy

00:32:006 (2) - Maybe, Put this one 1/2 before ( 00:31:849 - ) Like you did at 00:57:112 -
On easy its more consistent for this quiet part to be mapped on the white tick for beginners. It can be done but I feel theres not really any emphasis to do it even if the vocal starts on the red tick. Like at 00:35:638 (1) It works since its an NC and the rhythm dictates me to use a red tick.
00:37:059 (2) - Same ^

I see this part 01:05:954 - more like this

• Position :

1. 6 red at : 01:05:954 -
2. 7 red at : 01:07:059 (7) -
3. 1 yellow at : 01:07:059 (7) -
4. 2 yellow at : 01:08:006 (2) -
5. 3 yellow at : 01:08:954 -
6. 4 yellow at : 01:09:585 (4) -

Added but I'm not sure about the red and yellow section. I hope this is good.
01:18:585 - Move the start of the slider of 1/2

And why not continue the end of the song by moving the end of your spiner at 01:22:533 - or simply change it by a slider like this

To do it (use 1x space) : Change your spinner by this ( same start, but end earlier )

Continue at 01:23:796 - ( Note #1 red of my picture )
Note #1 red at 01:23:796 (1) -
Note #3 red at 01:26:006 -

I do like the suggestion of continuing map. But I considered ending the map here since its an Easy map and having end on a spinner here is quite a fitting end for the player. However if multiple suggestion pop up that I really should map the end, I will do it

Normal

00:33:112 - Maybe remove the small jump
WOOPS LOL
00:39:743 - Add a note; example (the note #4 red is the new note )
Did something similar

Hard

00:18:901 - Add a slider here, Example of placement :
Added something

Insane

I found nothing for this one

kakifly wrote:

hi
Hi
general

-bg should be cropped to 1366x768, might not be a big deal but its an easy fix
Wow how did I mess that up
-disable letterbox
-personally i'd tone down the internsity of combo 1, its really bright,also not sure about this but combo 4 is the same colour as'background' maybe you can change 'background' to black http://puu.sh/hioOv/ae9cae2e87.jpg
You gloomy guy. LOL I wanted the colours to be vibrant but I understand. Just toned down the yellow to have a thicker orange colour
insane

-00:00:743 (3) - feels out of place, like its just a filler note which doesnt play well. it doesnt even follow the main instruments like 00:00:428 (1,2) - & 00:00:901 (4) -
If you turn down the hitsound volume, you can hear the slight white tick drumming. I think the reason it feels out of place might be because of the distance gap so instead I lowered that.
-00:01:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - what do you think about this flow? i just ctrl g a few notes. its much more natural and circular this way http://puu.sh/hioXe/3618d00a09.jpg
-00:03:270 (3) - same as 00:00:743 (3) -
-00:03:901 (6,7,1) - this rhythm is barely readable because of its spacing, i'd suggest just to remove 00:04:138 (7) - since its overmapped.
Someone else has said this so it backs up your suggestion
-00:04:217 (1) - unsnapped
-00:04:849 (3) - ^
-00:04:217 (1,2) - normal whistles work really well here, add for all diffs if you change
To me it just sounds like the whistles overlap each other with the main whistle and it doesn't sound the nicest. So for me, I'll have to keep consistency one the soft whistles with this one.
-00:04:849 (3,4,5) - again, hard to read. its a 1/4 note but spaced like 1/2. something like this would be a lot easier to play http://puu.sh/hip8B/3e50bfbd08.jpg
I have unstacked the 1/4 note but I do want to keep this pattern shape as it emphasises the change in pace for the music
-00:08:796 (7,8) - these sound overmapped to me, just mapping out the sounds on the white and red tick is enough
-00:15:506 - ^
Not this one, for me the triple emphasises LiSA holding her voice.
-00:20:164 (2,3) - ^
I love my kicksliders :c
-00:25:375 (5) - add finish because you can hear cymbals in the music
This is weird because I don't see any reason the MUSIC should even have the cymbals there when its the first verse.
-00:36:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - this zig zag flow is uncomfortable to play here, you can easily smoothen the flow by moving 00:36:585 (5,6) - somewhere around here http://puu.sh/hipr4/5bd7b93e98.jpg
Thank you for the suggestion but instead I have the zig zag flow less pressured during the end of it instead.
-00:47:006 (1) - try ctrl +g it will make the flow a lot better imo :3
:o
-00:50:638 (6,7) - sound overmapped, instead add notes on 00:50:559 - & 00:50:638 - because the drums are there
-00:51:349 (2) - just remove this, its overmapped and the distance makes it hard to read
-00:56:638 (4,5,6,7) - overapped, remove them. the only sound here are drums on the red tick
I think the distance is justified but thats for pointing that out, now that I look at it, the stream looks out of place. Fixed
-01:01:533 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - again overmapped, and its not a good way to map this stream since its plays badly, ill put a visual here for you to show where the actual drum beats are, try to not map streams everywhere just because its cool or whatnot http://puu.sh/hipI2/ca12401c7b.jpg i think the drummer is drunk here cause some parts are a bit offbeat lol
-01:20:796 (6,7,8) - overmapped
This one is fine for me
-01:27:743 (2,3) - ^ same with 01:28:375 (2,3,4) -

this is actually a nice insane, considering you dont have any ranked maps yet, the only thing i reallyyyyy dislike are the overmapped streams

hard

-00:00:743 (3) - same as insane. id try a rhythm like this instead http://puu.sh/hipUE/74a8b9d4dc.jpg you can stack (3) onto 00:01:059 (4) -
Same reasoning as insane but I still would like a note there because of the soft white tick drum you can hear. Plus it keeps momentum at the start
-00:08:480 (2,3,4) - triplets like these are often hard to play in hard, i suggest a 1/4 repeat slider instead
I'll keep the suggestion but I will still keep this as a triple for now since i want it to pair with the triple at 00:05:954 (3,4,5)
-00:15:428 (5,6) - sounds overmapped to me, remove 00:15:506 (6) - its best to not overmap in hards if possible
-00:25:612 (6) - ^
-00:50:638 (5,6) - ^ same concept as insane
-00:50:796 (1) - id just end this on the white tick , this current rhythm is strange..
-01:11:796 (4,5) - overmapped, and you should not put 1/4 jumps in hards, try a rhythm like this instead http://puu.sh/hiqlH/4bafd3efde.jpg
Thanks for the rhythm suggestion
-01:16:770 (4) - remove, because its overmapped
-01:19:928 - ^
again nice hard but try not to overmap parts

normal

-00:02:006 (4,5) - i dont find that this rhythm follows the music very good, id suggest this instead http://puu.sh/hiquG/778641fc17.jpg
Thanks for pointing it out, I did however do something different, I hope this is good as well
-00:18:743 (6) - how about a 3/2 slider here? to cover the beat at 00:19:217 - as well, since the current rhythm make this part feel undermapped http://puu.sh/hiqzP/4ea365415d.jpg
Used a 1/1 slider and a HC instead
-00:52:217 (2) - add nc for kiai
-01:02:006 (5,1) - watch your spacing

easy

-00:08:006 (4) - you can end this a beat earlier to prevent the 1/2 rhythm
Will beginners really have a hard time doing this? There is plenty of reaction time
-00:12:112 (3,4) - a rhythm suggestion to omit the 1/2 rhythm http://puu.sh/hiqRr/c13693fd0e.jpg
-00:18:743 (2) - this 1/2 rhythm would be too hard, since a newbie would have to actually hit the circle on time. just place a 3/2 slider here instead
-00:34:849 (5) - remove repeat to avoid 1/2 rhythm
Same reasoning as first suggestion
-00:40:217 (5) - put a circle here instead to remove the 1/2 rhythm
-00:48:270 (1) - this spinner just doesn't feel right, like its placed at a part where its not appropriate, unlike your normal/hard. id suggest to just map this part
-00:54:112 (4) - make this a 3/2 slider to remove the 1/2 rhythm
-01:04:217 (4,5,6) - this entire part has a really awkward rhythm, why the sudden long sliders? also try to find a way to omit the 1/2 rhythm..
-01:16:849 (6) - turn this into 1/1 slider to avoid 1/2 rhythm
-01:21:270 (1) - this spinner doesnt fit imo
why not map the end?
i think out of all the diffs easy's rhythm choice is very poor, not saying that 1/2 isnt ok in easy but the way you use it isnt appropriate. because unlike a 1/2 slider where a player doesnt have to click within half a beat, they just hold it for a bit.

I can understand that some of the 1/2 might not be done in the best situation, but I have faith that putting those 1/2 will add at least some difficulty for our easy players. There is plenty of comfort for them to do it

overall the maps pretty cool, surprisingly the lowest diff needs most work. i'll shoot a star though, good luck

Hey man thank you for the M4M but most importantly thank you so much for the star! I think that's my first star shot by someone
I didn't have time to completely finish the mod since there is quite a lot which I am glad you took the time to do. So if you read this message, just know I will finish it off. The reason the easier difficulties need to be worked on more is because of my inexperience with them :p

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

I've come from #modreqs for the m4m request

Insane
00:20:164 (2,3) - Isnt this overmapping? I can only hear 2 drum beats
I usually use kicksliders to emphasise the intensity of the note or when there should be a stream. I don't think its bad to overmap like this sometimes but if people really don't enjoy it, I'll have to remove it
00:30:428 (1,2) - Increase in SV makes these look like 1/2 sliders and its very tricky to read as its in the middle of a measure.
Removed the timing point and adjusted
01:02:006 (8,9) - The sliders here work well as they dont have any sudden SV changes, face the direction of the next slider and fit the music
01:17:322 (8) - I would remove this slider as there's nothing playing here
But the vocals
01:18:743 (1,2) - these notes are very weak. Maybe remove them for emphasis on the vocals? Up to you though
It should be fine
01:28:375 (2) - Does this really have to be a 1/4 slider? It would be better as a single note imo
01:27:901 (3) - ^
01:28:533 (3,4) - the DS between these notes are misleading

Just another note. I get that this is suppose to be an Insane but theres alot of single tap circles at 190 bpm no less. Maybe you can turn some into sliders? Though if its part of the difficulty, then fair enough dont change it.
This isn't really an issue since the map is targeted towards players who can play around and below my skill level

Hard
00:00:743 (3) - Delete this and replace with a circle at 00:00:901
00:03:270 (3) - ^ Same pattern as above
Since last mod had this suggestion too, I will change it accordingly

Normal

00:15:270 (5) - Turn this into a single circle?
Did something else
01:07:217 (1) - Delete NC at start it at 01:08:006 (2) instead
I find the emphasis for the NC here is correct
01:09:743 (1) - Start NC at 01:10:217 (2)
This should be fine as well

Thats all from me. I hope this mod was helpful and GL getting ranked

Moo-Chan wrote:

m4m

[Easy]

1. 00:02:954 (4) - imo you should nc this
2. 00:08:006 (4) - ^
   I didn't want to go too crazy with the NC's as the one's currently used work to their respective phrases for the singer. If I don't change any NC's, it just mean I don't think its too big of a deal
3. 00:14:006 (2,4) - maybe you could move (4) to the left a bit? these two are kinda overlapping
4. 00:15:585 (4) - nc
5. 00:34:217 (4,1) - the overlap here could be avoided. find a way to fix this? there really shouldnt be overlaps like this in an easy
6. 00:41:954 (2) - move to x:371 y:209 for a perfect stack
7. 01:04:691 (5) - nc
8. 01:09:901 (5) - ^
9. 01:14:954 (4) - move the anchor at the tail to the right twice to be even with the previous slider
   Its a stylistic choice. LOL, no I think this is absolutely fine and doesn't need to pair up
10. 01:26:322 (4) - this could be moved to the left a bit to avoid overlapping
11. 01:26:322 (4) - nc
12. 01:26:322 (4,1,2) - separate these some to also avoid the overlap they create
13. 01:27:585 (1) - remove nc
    Only NC I will change

neat

[Normal]

1. 00:05:480 (1) - you should point the slider tail down some. the flow its producing with the next note is kinda meh with the way you have it
2. 00:20:480 (2,3) - maybe blanket these? it would look better
   I don't think I will blanket, but I will try to make it look better
3. 00:29:480 (4,5) - if youre going to have a small curve in (4) at the tail, id at least blanket the next slider with that small curve. im a nazi when it comes to blanketing. try moving 00:30:112 (5) - to x:392 y:100
   Straightened the slider That straight bend doesn't sit well with me either
4. 00:33:112 (5) - id move this to x:292 y:116 because what you have atm is kinda ugly. moving this note will open up the flow more imo
   Changed some notes
5. 00:38:164 (1,2) - fix blanket
6. 00:45:743 (1,2) - you should blanket the tail of (1) with the tail of (2). it would look a lot better

some placement could be improved

[Hard]

1. 00:02:164 (4,5) - blanket these
2. 00:05:164 (4) - move this to the left some
3. 00:07:059 (2) - i would ctrl - g this for a better flow
   This is intentional as I am using dropoff flow here
4. 00:09:112 (1,2) - blanket
   Instead, I don't like this DS here so I'm going to just give it basic flow
5. 00:22:849 (5) - you should move this note to x:336 y:212. imo it makes the flow feel nicer
   Made a blanket instead
6. 00:30:743 (1,2) - fix blanket
7. 00:37:691 (3) - ctrl - g
   Intentional dropoff flow
8. 01:04:533 (5) - move to x:157 y:151 to perfectly stack under (2)'s tail
9. 01:05:322 (3) - nc to keep consistency with the previous section like this
   Nice NC suggestion
10. 01:10:533 (3) - id ctrl - g this
    Intentional, but it does look weird so I hope this fix I did makes it better
11. 01:19:375 (3) - ^
    ^
12. 01:23:796 (3) - nc
    No sorry

if i were you id go back and re check all your blankets
Don't be a blanket nazi

[Insane]

1. 00:04:849 (3) - object here isnt snapped
   Thanks for noticing
2. 00:01:849 (2,4) - blanket is slightly off
   lol
3. 00:25:691 (1) - ctrl - g this. the flow it produces is so much better than the current one
   I don't think so
4. 00:30:428 (2) - ^
5. 00:49:533 (1) - ^. this one will also create a smallish jump that would feel perfect
   Did something else
6. 00:54:585 (1) - ctrl - g this
7. 00:55:059 (2) - ^, this one and the one above play a lot better when ctrl - g'd
   I like the overlap but this suggestion is better
8. 01:04:217 (4,1) - fix blanket
9. 01:12:112 (1) - remove nc
10. 01:16:849 (4,5) - why are these so close together? space them away. if you were trying to create an anti-jump, then move them away just a bit more. but where theyre at atm isnt nice
    I was trying to fix this area, but i guess i made a bigger mess. Thanks!

so, blankets, stacks, and placement needs some work

this is all i could find
i wish you luck with the set, and cant wait to see your mod for my map
chao~

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there!
you requested a reverse m4m in my queue! your req- t/304087/start=105
easy
00:02:954 (4) - nc
00:07:375 (3) - fix ds
00:10:849 (1) - ^^
00:15:585 (4) - nc
00:20:480 (1) - ds
00:29:480 (5) - ds
00:33:585 (3) - nc
00:41:954 (2) - ds
00:41:954 (2,3) - overlap
00:47:006 (2) - ds
00:47:954 -slider should end here
00:54:585 (1,2) - overlap
00:59:480 (3,5) - ^^
01:07:059 (8,1) - swap nc
01:14:954 (4,6) - overlap
01:26:322 (4,2) - ^^

Most of the overlaps are gone now. I won't be changing the suggested NC's since they work just fine and there weren't any DS issues when I check on aimod
normal
00:04:849 (4) - ds
00:07:217 (5,1) - overlap
00:12:428 (4,1) - dont do that-bad flowing
This is fine?
00:12:901 (1,2) - overlap
00:17:796 (4) - nc
00:42:901 (6,1) - dont-bad flowing
dropoff flow
00:54:585 (1) - ds
00:56:638 (5) - ^^
01:08:480 (3) -^^
01:26:006 (6,1) - overlap
hard
00:30:743 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:31:849 (1,3) - bad overlap
00:37:691 (3,1) - stack ends?
00:44:322 (5,1) - swap nc
00:59:796 (1,2) - swap nc
01:24:901 (6,1) - swap nc
insane
00:09:112 (1,2) - blanket them?
00:14:638 (3) - ctrl g?
00:22:375 (3,1) - blanket them
I don't think there is a need
00:57:112 (1,2) - ^^
I think the DS would mess up. I wasn't planning on blanketing this.
00:58:533 (1,3) - stack xD
01:01:533 (3,4) - stack?
01:04:217 (4,1,4) - blanket them?
Intentional
01:06:428 (2,3) - ctrl g?
Flow would become too basic
01:09:743 (1,2) - fix blanket
gl!
ill send you my map in PM

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Hey, I thoguht it'll take 5 hours. But it doesn't take that long. LOL

Mods

Easy

• 
  00:13:375 (1,2,3) - I prefer to do it like this http://puu.sh/hn6SP/2cd3df95c0.jpg . It'll make the pattern more solid, you know.
  01:09:901 (5) - It'll be better if you make it like this http://puu.sh/hn74P/7c504a251d.jpg
  But I like this straight slider
  01:17:480 (1) - (Caution) Becareful of using sliders like this, especially on Easy
  Why
  01:25:059 (2,3) - It'll be better if those two sliders not touching the slider 4

Normal

• 
  00:12:428 (4,1) - Do it like this http://puu.sh/hn7Il/bcc8d08633.jpg
  This is a nice suggestion but I think it would cause the flow to be too sharp
  00:18:270 (2,3,4) - Make the slider 2 and head-to-head each other
  This is fine. Using asymmetry here
  00:36:428 (2,3,4) - Can't tell you a lot with words, but I have an idea to make it better. http://puu.sh/hn7Pm/dabc969741.jpg
  Curve the slider? But straight sliders are fine too
  01:07:217 (1,2) - (Attention) Avoid 2 touching the 1
  They weren't touching but they are definitely too close to eachother
  01:23:796 (2,3) - Same as 01:07:217 (1,2)
  ^
  01:28:059 (3) - Add anchor point at x:184 and y:112
  Again straight sliders are fine

Hard

• 
  00:20:164 (6,7,1) - You better make a triangle there to make it more great
  00:47:480 (2,3) - It won't look harsh if you use slider here
  Changed the double
  00:50:006 (2) - Put the 2 at x:352 and y:72. Looks more awesome to me
  The circle placements here feel comfortable for me doing doing this would squash it with the hitcircle to the bottom left of it

Insane

• 
  Nothing to say.

Comments/Overview

It's a nice map
But, the problem that I really don't like is you are using too much sliderstart at the upbeat rather than upbeat. Try to avoid that.
It is not a bad map. You don't need to re-map them all. But what I don't like is you are using too much unnecessary pattern such as using too much wiggle in some of your slider. If this your 5th map, you'll have a better chance to be a great mapper.

Nothing more to say, Good Luck :3

Kyle Y wrote:

Having a M4M?
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/305737
hope you can have a quick mod on 3 difficulties out of 4 diff

[EZ]

SPOILER

00:10:849 (1) - ds better at 1.00 (+/- 0.03)
00:16:849 (6) - care about the ds
Nothing too drastic about these two DS
00:24:428 (5) - 00:25:691 (1) - same
Added a circle
00:37:059 (2,3) - 2->3 not well looked
Mapping style, plays well
00:54:112 (4) - maybe sth about drop off flow? would it be too difficult for new player? not sure about it
I will definitely take this suggestion as I wanted to map to the vocals but 3/2 sliders work well without being any more difficult than on easy
01:06:112 (7) - sound should be started at 01:05:954 -
Easy map, white tick
01:09:901 (5) - nc (I forget to check combo before)
01:14:954 (4) - nc
I am fine keeping these NC's
01:20:006 (3) - better blanket
01:21:270 (1) - started at 01:21:112 - maybe ended 01:22:533 -
01:25:059 (2,3) - better the same slider (now, slope is different)
Not very clear so I can't understand what you're trying to say here

[NM]

SPOILER

00:14:322 (3) - ds
00:26:322 (2) - not well looking I think
How
00:33:585 (1,2) - 2 blanket with 1
Mapping style. To me this is fine
00:38:954 (2) - blanket
I won't blanket but I'm moving the slider
00:45:743 (1,2) - blanket each other
No need for perfect blanketing
00:48:270 (1,2,3) - maybe flowing? not sure about it
00:49:533 (1) - consider circle at 00:49:533 - and spinner started at 00:49:612 -
Mapping style. This is fine
01:02:006 (5) - not well looking
How
01:05:480 (2) - sound started at 01:05:322 -
white ticks
01:09:585 (5,3) - blanket
^
01:16:533 (5) - nc
All NC's are fine
01:21:112 (1) - same suggestion
^
01:23:796 (2) - nc
^
01:24:428 (3) - better blanket with 2
Mapping style

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:23:006 (1) - Blanket
My mapping style is to not blanket everything so I will have to leave these blanket suggestions out
00:24:901 (3) - blanket with 3
If you're telling me to fix the blanket that should be intentionally centred, I will do that
00:30:743 (1) - blanket
00:33:112 (1,2) - blanket
00:34:059 (4) - not a well place I think
It does overlap with the slider but not with any of the circle placements so this should be fine.
00:34:849 (2) - ctrl+g and ctrl +h and put back to the original place
Dropoff flow
00:39:428 (1) - blanket
00:46:217 (2) - ^ and ctrl +g
01:05:954 (1) - blanket
01:13:533 (1) - blanket with 01:14:164 (3) -
01:21:112 (1) - same suggestion
^
01:23:796 (3) - nc
^

guineaQ wrote:

M4M owo

General

Let the BNs handle this lol

Insane

1. 00:00:585 (2,3) - Honestly, it doesn't really make much sense to have a circle at the place of 3 when the sound there is so weak compared 1,2,4. Consider replacing 2,3 into single 1/2 slider. This also allows you to get more jumpy overall in this section.
2. 00:03:112 (2,3) - ^^
   Changing this to sliders. hopefully this position should be alright
3. 00:04:849 (3) - try bending this a little bit so that the slider ball circle slightly touches the next note, it completely removes the chance of annoying slider breaks while keeping the small 1/4 jump you wanted.
   I'm just getting rid of the 1/4, I'm sure I'll just get more complaints about it
4. 00:30:743 (1) - imo would have been more comfortable if this was bent the other way around.
   Ctrl + h
5. 00:36:270 (3,4) - missed triplet
   75% speed and I can't hear any triplet potential D:
6. 00:40:691 - The music here is kinda equal in intensity level as other 0.8x sections, well it is kinda painful to change it now to 0.8x I guess
   Changed to 0.8x nah the 0.6x is just this little section
7. 00:50:796 (1) - HMMM I can't think of better alternative atm but yeah you could probably do better lol
   Made a blanket
8. 00:51:822 (3,4,5,6,7) - this stream is a bit TOO squashed together, and especially since the end of the stream is not really aligned with 00:52:217 (1) - ...
   
   Ok now I get why I felt little awkward playing the kiai lol, you are missing some 3/4 vocal sounds and purely relying on drums o3o normally this isn't bad but LiSA's vocal stands out too much owo
   Issue is I feel that using 3/4 just wouldn't work because the drum beats are just as strong
9. 00:54:112 (3,4) - Like you missed the 3/4 here, could probably make slider - circle - circle
   Your suggestion does work, but whats currently here works too D:
   I feel like this map is rankable as it is, just imho could have been harder lol
   Dont do this to me lol

Hard

1. 00:02:954 (1) - Hmm, I have no idea why you make 00:01:691 (1,2) - into circles yet you dont make these into two circles.
   wat
2. 00:04:217 (1) - Maybe for consistency you either change these to two stacked circles or 00:01:691 (1,2) - into slider.
   OOOOHHHH. I made it more consistent
3. 00:10:849 (1,2,3) - turn this into 1/1 slider, right now 2 doesn't really make that much of a sense
4. 00:11:796 (1,2) - I would have done something like this
   
   
   I do prefer what I currently have
5. 00:13:375 (2,3,4,5) - emphasis here is weird, should be just 1/2 slider to 1/1 slider, its not like you are basing your emphasis on vocals anyways
   Changed to white tick slider
6. 00:32:322 (2,3,4,5) - should really space these out a little more by like 0.1x
7. 01:23:638 (2) - remove this, 1/1 pause stack does the song more justice.
   Removed two circles
   
   I guess rest is ok owo

Normal

err, the way you placed the notes are quite harsh angular flow wise for a newbie.
I'll agree with kakifly here, surprisingly the upper diffs are good and it's the lower diffs that needs work lol

I'll just give rough alternatives since it is entirely up to you whether you want to do something about the rhythm or not.

1. You should utilize more stacks, they allow you to have more "difficult" rhythm without really adding on any actual difficulty but do more justice for the song.
   I just feel like stacking with low ar is not something I want and so I usually leave stacks out in lower difficulties
   Like:
   00:00:901 (2) - easily replaceable with circle -> 1/1 slider with stack, you capture the white tick guitar transition sound with this.
   00:02:164 (4) - this one could be 1/1 slider -> circle instead.
   and vice versa.
2. Things like 00:11:480 (2,3,4) - are nice to look at, but imo they play quite bad since you are messing with the flow from 4 to 00:12:901 (1) -
   don't get me wrong, I do all kinds of aesthetics weird shiet in my things too, but probably a good idea to change it if it doesn't actually play well (the rhythm here could be better too imo)
3. 00:14:954 (4,5) - things like this are quite tricky because the drums are on the slider end ;w; you can replace this with circle -> 1/2 reverse slider.
4. 00:35:006 - even though its normal, you shouldn't be missing unique and mappable rhythms in a difficulty like this.
5. 00:39:428 - missing this beat threw me off really hard.
6. 01:14:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is too dense, you should remove 01:16:691 (6) - and have a circle on 01:16:849 - instead. I mean, doesnt make much sense when this pattern is the most dense and is found in the end not the kiai :S

You should get more mods that focuses on rhythm for Normal owo/
I'll be standardising the rhythm now which taking in all these suggestions

About Easy: looks fine in general, and about 1/2s in Easy, its perfectly fine and allowed. Just that this song is 190 BPM is what makes it kinda ehhhhhhhhh.
Since you used 1/2 gap on slider to slider pattern IT SHOULD BE FINE TECHNICALLY.

keep working hard owo)b

1. 00:02:006 (3) - this could be a bit nazi modding but please make the triangle perfect with moving the circle to: x:342 and y:281. This looks better and also plays better because the player has the same distances between the three circles.
2. 00:02:164 (4) - you should consider adding a drum clap or a drum finish here. There's a little drum-break at this point and maybe emphasize that.
3. 00:02:638 (5) - - if you added a drum clap before add a hit finish here for a little build up.
4. 00:06:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a diamond shape: make the distance between 00:06:743 (1,2) - and 00:07:059 (3,4) - the same. Because the music is nearly the same and that makes for better flow and it also looks much neater.
5. 00:07:375 (6) - think about using ctrl + h for this slider to make a z-shaped back-and forth motion. The guitar in the background is like an echo of the one before so the pattern could also echo that a bit. This way you also add some jumps and stuff... maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3059621 (this could also be personal preference but this makes the map a bit more... juicy)
6. 00:11:796 (1,2,3,4) - this plays weird because the singer sings the same two times. Instead i would use some circulating sliders.
7. 00:12:901 (1) - here's a clear emphasize with the snair in the background and the screaming vocals. so add a soft-finish
8. 00:15:506 (7) - delete this circle. there's no sound and don't overmapp pls.
9. 00:15:901 (2) - make this slider into two circles because the vocal is strong on that sliderend and it shouldn't be played like off-beat, imo. then stack the circle with 00:16:217 (3) - (like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3059637)
10. 00:24:270 (5) - instead of stacking with 00:24:112 (4) - stack it with 00:24:428 (1) - I think you should move the cursor before that because else it doesn't feel really played... and stuff..
11. 00:41:322 (3,4) - ctrl + g those two for a nice circle flow. else there's a flow break.
12. 00:42:743 (3,4,5) - fix the triangle
13. 00:44:480 (1) - you can also ctrl + g this slider to get a clockwise flow. this plays better, imo
14. 00:49:217 (5,6) - ctrl + g because there's a flowbreak again. this will be a bit off with the slider next, but that's okay because there's a little stop and you can break flow a bit better there. This is a lot better than before.
15. rest seems fine.

1. 00:17:954 (1,3) - fix that blanket
2. 00:12:901 (1) - add a hitsound finish (soft finish) here
3. 00:42:428 (2,3,4) - fix that triangle
4. 00:45:743 (1) - not sure if that slider is rankable because you don't really know how fast this goes and it's not that easy to read. consider using another slider. (also this ones ugly af)
5. 00:48:270 (1) - ctrl g for a better flow.
6. 01:06:743 (3,4,5) - again a bad triangle.
7. 01:26:954 (3,4) - not sure if that jump's okay for a hard.
8. This hard difficulty plays more like a light insane. consider making some patterns easier and tune down some of your jumps.

1. 00:09:112 (3) - add a hitfinish here.
2. 00:09:743 (4) - ^
3. 00:18:270 (2,3) - normals are a lot about looks. consider making this one line. this looks not tidy.
4. 00:23:480 (2) - move this down a bit for looks
5. 00:30:112 (5) - this could be a bit confusing for newer players. consider making two sliders out of this one.
6. 00:42:112 (4) - move this one to 00:41:954 - and add a circle at 00:42:428 (5) - the drums are really strong here and shouldn't be ignored for that light thing i dont even consider important.
7. 00:49:059 (2,3) - make a line with those two?
8. 01:00:428 (3) - this slider touches the hp-bar. please put it down.

1. 00:09:112 (5) - add a hitfinish here. like in all the other diffs. HITFINISHES are best wooooo
2. 00:20:480 (1,2) - try to blanket these two?
3. 00:45:743 (1,2) - not sure but this is very much on top of the map and maybe you should put this a bit down.
4. 01:17:480 (1) - i'm not sure about this slider. about readability and stuff. consider changing it into something easier to read.

Hard wrote:

Yo.

Insane

1. 00:02:006 (3) - this could be a bit nazi modding but please make the triangle perfect with moving the circle to: x:342 and y:281. This looks better and also plays better because the player has the same distances between the three circles.
2. 00:02:164 (4) - you should consider adding a drum clap or a drum finish here. There's a little drum-break at this point and maybe emphasize that.
   I do like the soft finish so I will keep that for now
3. 00:02:638 (5) - - if you added a drum clap before add a hit finish here for a little build up.
   Made a drum hitsound
4. 00:06:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a diamond shape: make the distance between 00:06:743 (1,2) - and 00:07:059 (3,4) - the same. Because the music is nearly the same and that makes for better flow and it also looks much neater.
   Ahh I wasnt going for neatness with this song xD. This is just simple zig zag flow and I wasnt planning on making any shapes here
5. 00:07:375 (6) - think about using ctrl + h for this slider to make a z-shaped back-and forth motion. The guitar in the background is like an echo of the one before so the pattern could also echo that a bit. This way you also add some jumps and stuff... maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3059621 (this could also be personal preference but this makes the map a bit more... juicy)
   D: I think the straightforward flow here is fine
6. 00:11:796 (1,2,3,4) - this plays weird because the singer sings the same two times. Instead i would use some circulating sliders.
   Ahh I was going with some stacked circles to emphasise the repetition but I will take this as suggestion
7. 00:12:901 (1) - here's a clear emphasize with the snair in the background and the screaming vocals. so add a soft-finish
   Oh i just want to keep this quiet section... quiet, so i didn't want finishes on this part
8. 00:15:506 (7) - delete this circle. there's no sound and don't overmapp pls.
   I was trying to use the triple as a way to emphasise her voice. People are saying im undermapping and overmapping so I can't win lol. I will just leave this here until more people point this out
9. 00:15:901 (2) - make this slider into two circles because the vocal is strong on that sliderend and it shouldn't be played like off-beat, imo. then stack the circle with 00:16:217 (3) - (like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3059637)
   White tick slider isnt too bad to play when mapped to the rhythm so I will keep this for now
10. 00:24:270 (5) - instead of stacking with 00:24:112 (4) - stack it with 00:24:428 (1) - I think you should move the cursor before that because else it doesn't feel really played... and stuff..
    Done
11. 00:41:322 (3,4) - ctrl + g those two for a nice circle flow. else there's a flow break.
    Done
12. 00:42:743 (3,4,5) - fix the triangle
    Sorta done?
13. 00:44:480 (1) - you can also ctrl + g this slider to get a clockwise flow. this plays better, imo
    But there is already clockwise flow D:
14. 00:49:217 (5,6) - ctrl + g because there's a flowbreak again. this will be a bit off with the slider next, but that's okay because there's a little stop and you can break flow a bit better there. This is a lot better than before.
    Intentional flowbreak
15. rest seems fine.

Hard

1. 00:17:954 (1,3) - fix that blanket
2. 00:12:901 (1) - add a hitsound finish (soft finish) here
   Same reasoning as before
3. 00:42:428 (2,3,4) - fix that triangle
4. 00:45:743 (1) - not sure if that slider is rankable because you don't really know how fast this goes and it's not that easy to read. consider using another slider. (also this ones ugly af)
5. 00:48:270 (1) - ctrl g for a better flow.
6. 01:06:743 (3,4,5) - again a bad triangle.
7. 01:26:954 (3,4) - not sure if that jump's okay for a hard.
   wtf fixed
8. This hard difficulty plays more like a light insane. consider making some patterns easier and tune down some of your jumps.
   190bpm. Gotta keep that challenge

Normal

1. 00:09:112 (3) - add a hitfinish here.
2. 00:09:743 (4) - ^
3. 00:18:270 (2,3) - normals are a lot about looks. consider making this one line. this looks not tidy.
   Tidied the flow
4. 00:23:480 (2) - move this down a bit for looks
   Nah this is fine
5. 00:30:112 (5) - this could be a bit confusing for newer players. consider making two sliders out of this one.
6. 00:42:112 (4) - move this one to 00:41:954 - and add a circle at 00:42:428 (5) - the drums are really strong here and shouldn't be ignored for that light thing i dont even consider important.
7. 00:49:059 (2,3) - make a line with those two?
   Intentional
8. 01:00:428 (3) - this slider touches the hp-bar. please put it down.

Easy

1. 00:09:112 (5) - add a hitfinish here. like in all the other diffs. HITFINISHES are best wooooo
   woooooooo
2. 00:20:480 (1,2) - try to blanket these two?
   Intentional
3. 00:45:743 (1,2) - not sure but this is very much on top of the map and maybe you should put this a bit down.
4. 01:17:480 (1) - i'm not sure about this slider. about readability and stuff. consider changing it into something easier to read.
   Made it much more readable

That's all. Good luck with your map ~

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Thanks for the nazi mod!