1. Easy (1,45 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (2,5 stars, 182 notes)
3. Normal (1,7 stars, 130 notes)

- done by me

[ Zzz ] wrote:

off set 510

no kds

GL~

No mod ;; Sorry

My time is fine if we'll be seeing you !!

George wrote:

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---Easy---
I'd highly suggest using a small distance spacing to keep everything simple for newer players who cant do jumps fixed (0,9x)
00:05:706 (4,5) - When you change the spacing make 5 blanket 4's ending fixed
00:08:069 - Add break fixed
00:11:848 (2) - Make this a copy of 00:10:431 (1) but remove the repeat and flip it upside down (ctrl >) fixed
00:12:793 (3) - Make this blanket the previous fixed
00:14:210 (4) - Make previous blanket this fixed
00:16:100 (7) - Make this a copy of 00:14:683 (5) and have them both blanket 00:15:628 (6) fixed
00:24:132 (2) - Make this a copy of 00:23:187 (1) and flip it upside down fixed
01:04:289 (3) - Make this blanket the tail of 01:02:872 (2) fixed
01:07:124 (5,6) - Blanket fixed
01:12:793 (2) - ^ fixed
01:13:265 (3,4) - ^ fixed

---Normal---
Distance spacing ;w; fixed (1,0x)
00:00:982 (2,3) - blanket fixed
00:05:234 (2,3) - blanket fixed
00:08:305 - Break fixed
00:11:376 (4,5,6) - blanket fixed
00:13:265 (6,7) - ^ fixed
00:20:824 (6,7,8) - ^ fixed
00:26:021 (3,4) - ^ fixed

---Hard---
00:03:344 (5,6) - Fix the blanket fixed
00:08:541 - Break fixed
00:28:384 (4,5) - Fix blanket (so it blankets the tail of 4 fixed (if i got it right)

Thank you^^

imaikiseta wrote:

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  01:25:076 (1) - I was thinking spinners should start here they start here already

Hard

00:48:108 (6,7) - Flow would be better if you scooted these closer to 00:47:754 (5) ? fixed

00:51:415 (5,1) - ^^ fixed
00:52:478 (3) - Remove and make a star pattern? i will in next update^^

Normal

00:07:124 (6) - Remove reverse fixed
^^00:07:124 (6) - Slider should end here? i like it here.. but if someone will think the same as you i will change it^^
00:54:369 (5,6,1) - Highlight these and then move them here (all the others should follow, landing onto the red ticks) i will think about this one
^^00:55:076 (1) - Remove and add a slider ending 00:55:313 i want to keep circle here :''
01:07:596 (3) - Better flow if this was a straight slider fixed

Easy

00:07:124 (7) - Slider ends here (Maybe not and I'm not that sure too because there's a blue tick there) i will think about it
00:21:297 (5) - Remove for a longer slider ending 00:21:769 with no reverse fixed
00:17:517 (1) - Replace for a circle fixed
00:25:076 (3) - ^^ fixed
00:53:423 (6) - ^^? fixed with circle
01:10:431 (1) - I only think the start of the slider only needs Finish, not the reverse or the end fixed (i added 2 circles before slider & removed reverse)

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hello~ Rina-desu Hi ^^

General

1. All difficulty = The volume is too high. I thought hitsounds should be loud, well, at least be able to hear
   00:00:510 (1) - ~ 00:40:667 (1) - 30~40% fixed
   00:40:667 (1) - ~ 00:55:313 (3) - 20~30% fixed

Easy

1. 00:17:045 - Add circle ( The beat feels empty. ) fixed
2. 00:28:384 - 00:32:163 - Same fixed
3. 00:51:061 (3) - Change circle !! ( Now think too hard. ) fixed
4. 00:54:604 (1,2) - Delete ( Good beat = 00:54:132 - and 00:54:604 - and 00:55:076 - Here ) < But that is too difficult. Delete :3 deleted and i think now the part feels empty. maybe add a slider here?
5. 01:01:454 - 01:01:927 - 01:09:958 - Add Circle there were too much circles in this part so i decided to add slider on 01:01:454 (8) - ^.^
6. 00:05:234 (4) - 00:14:210 (4) - 00:28:856 (5) - 00:36:415 (4) - 00:51:533 (4) - 00:55:313 (7) - 00:59:092 (5) - 01:07:124 (6) - 01:14:210 (6) - 01:21:769 (6) - NC fixed
7. 00:21:297 (5,1) - 00:25:076 (3,1) - 01:02:399 (1,2) - Swap NC fixed

Normal

1. 00:39:722 - Add Circle fixed
2. 00:54:369 (5,6) - Like this photo 00:54:132 (5) - fixed

Hard

1. 00:07:832 (7) - This 00:07:714 (7) - Here fixed
2. 00:17:045 (7) - Add 1/2 Slider ( 00:16:572 (6) - This same slider. ) fixed
3. 00:17:517 (1) - no 1/4 Good beat = 1/2 fixed
4. 00:28:265 (3) - no 00:28:265 (3) - This 00:28:147 (3) - Here fixed
5. 00:32:990 (2,4) - Same fixed
6. 00:35:706 - Add Circle fixed
7. 00:42:793 - Add Circle or 00:42:911 (5) - This 00:42:793 (5) - Here fixed
8. 00:52:478 (3) - To me there is a better way. fixed
9. 00:54:368 (5,6,1) - The same as the normal difficulty fixed
10. 00:55:667 (2) - This 00:55:549 (2) - Here fixed
11. 01:14:092 (6,3) - Same fixed
12. 01:17:754 - 01:21:061 - 01:22:950 - Add Circle fixed
13. 01:24:132 (6) - Change 1/2 fixed
14. 01:24:604 (7) - Suggestions 01:24:604 (7) - ~ 01:25:431 (1) - Like this photo fixed
    01:25:431 (1) - Spinner fixed
15. 00:10:431 (2) - no Anti-jump. is not good. will fix

GL~ Thank you for mod! ^^

annika69 wrote:

Hello~~ ^^

My mod

[General]
Add a inherting point here 01:26:966 and put the volume down to 5% so the end doesn't sound so loud fixed

[Easy]
00:07:124 (6) - Make it end on 00:07:714 ? fixed
00:12:793 (3) - Fix blanket fixed
00:14:683 (5,7) - Same^^ fixed
00:21:297 (1) - Same^^ fixed
00:25:549 (2) - Same^^ fixed
00:28:384 (5) - Move it so it doesn't get overlapped by 00:26:966 (3) fixed
00:28:856 (1) - Fix blanket, but i see that you there is alot of blankets that needs to be fixed, so i'm not going to mention any of them from now on. I recommend you go through the map yourself and fix them.
01:01:454 (4) - Fix it so it blankets with (3) fixed

[Normal]
As said in the easy diff, i'm not going to mention any blankets, please check the map yourself.
00:07:124 (6) - Make the slider end 00:07:832 ? fixed
00:55:076 (7) - Straighten it out a little bit? fixed

[Hard]
So sorry, but i don't have time to mod this But the same as the others, fix blankets. fixed everything i noticed
Thank you!

Elikeyla wrote:

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Hard :


P.S. : You must see the rythm divider too, don't forget it¡ okay!


00:05:470 (4) - add a circle fixed
Like this:


00:06:887 (6) -
Move circle number 6 to this position: fixed



00:31:691 (3) - Move the 3rd slider to -------> 00:31:927 , after this, add 2 circles fixed
00:31:218 (2) - It has to move back fixed


*Oh I forgot, ......Add the New combo too when "" and we......."" starts fixed




00:54:132 (5) - It would be nice if you put a stream, but an easy one not like Centipede Lol :'D
and then move the slider. well i tried
Here the idea:



00:24:604 (5) - new combo until -----> 00:28:384 (5) +
and it finishes when she says ""you""

00:35:706 (8) - new combo too +

00:48:226 (7) - new combo +

00:54:132 (5) - new combo +

01:01:927 (6) - new combo until --------> 01:05:470 (7) - +

01:20:116 (2) - this is not a new combo D: the combo starts at --------> 01:21:061 (4) +

01:22:950 (3) - new combo +

*Try to apply what I said before to Easy and normal combos too, listen to her voice carefully and you will get the perfect combos :'D I will!


Lol I hope I helped you a bit D: yes you did ^_^
Im not a pro but I try to help good luck i am not a pro either. you helped alot thanks!

Mio_chan wrote:

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Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.

[General]
I suggest using smaller grid size so that you can control you spacing more easily, slider will look better too.
Also large grid size on Normal and easy can be dangerous as spacing is relatively small, the difference in terms of the SV multiplier can be huge and may result in unrankable spacing fixed

[Hard]
HP 8 is a bit over I think, since the note density is not that highm I recommend HP7 fixed
00:06:651 – add a note? Due to bass drum fixed
00:23:895 (7) –make it a blanket of (1)? fixed
00:50:116 (4,5) – weird spacing I think 00:48:226 (1,2,3,4) – has constant spacing but suddenly have a anti-jump. Make it constant spacing with the rest? fixed. i switched these notes somehow
00:57:202 (9,10,12) –poor blanket I think, improve by using smaller grid size fixed
01:04:053 (6,7) – weird spacing I think, small spacing where I cannot find any reason behind it fixed
01:12:321 (1) – Ctrl + G? flow better imo [fixed
01:24:840 (6) – I suggest changing the first 2 ticks to circles, I think it plays better fixed
The following are NC mod, but it in spoilerbox to make the post cleaner:

NC mod

00:31:927 (1) – remove NC and put NC at 00:32:635 (3) -, you are following the drum rather than vocal fixed
00:35:706 (1) –same as above fixed
00:55:313 (5) – NC, beginning of chorus fixed
01:05:470 (1) –I suggest putting the NC in 01:06:179 (2) -, if you are trying to do comboing by phrasing of vocal, or you may just add new combo on every long white line to keep things simple fixed
01:16:100 (5) – NC, to keep this part consistent fixed

[Normal]
Not interesting enough imo (mostly at the beginning, chorus is better) as the vocal has some interesting beat but you are following the drum
all the time, maybe you can add more variation on your next map i will do my best nex time!
I think you need to redo the whole comboing because some of the combo are 1 bars but some of them are 2 bars long and I can’t find a good reason for this. (music does not suggest this varying comboing pattern). To keep thing simple, you do comboing in a consistent manner within the verses and within the chorus. (comboing of chorus can differ from verses, but within chorus and verses should be the same). You can learn to make more interesting comboing when you gain experience (by mapping and playing) Okay! Well, I will try to stick 2 downbeats
00:02:399 (4) – not good blanket, remap it in smaller grid size fixed
00:13:265 (6) – I suggest changing this to circle and then add something on the blank white tick, since the vocal ends at long white tick. fixed
00:24:604 (1) – same issue as above fixed

[Easy]
Seems fine, neat
00:17:045 (5) – spacing “error” due to grid size (small error actually, but better to fix imo) fixed
00:21:297 (1) – your map use 0.9x but this is 1.0x, fix this as some QAT will say this is enough to DQ a map fixed
01:10:431 (1) – I think it’s better to make it 0.9x, but idk since this is a 3 beat break fixed
01:13:265 (5) – not blanketed well by (3) fixed

Thanks for your mod, it was helpful! ^.^

1. 00:01:218 (2,3) - the emphasized beats are on the white and not the red ticks. i suggest you put a circle at 00:01:218 - and then a slider and a circle. it plays weird if you don't do this.
2. 00:04:289 (1,2,3,4,5) - not sure about the rhythm here. the ... guitar? has a really loud sound at 00:04:643 - and i think you could add a circle there (a little streamy-thing) it's okay for a hard and else the 1/2 circle stuff could be a bit confusing
3. 00:11:376 (5,7) - please decide for one rhythm. either map the vocals OR the drums. the first slider is one the drums, and ignores the vocals on the red tick, while the second is on the vocals ignoring the drum. please decide for one to map.
4. 00:17:990 (2,3) - here the impactfull sounds are on the red ticks. please make them clickable because they're really loud and shouldn't end up as ghost notes on sliderends
5. 00:19:407 - again this note is really loud and impactfull. make this clickable
6. 00:22:478 - there's music here so why don't you map it? the random pause is pointless, imo and feels wrong
7. 00:23:895 (7,1) - again impact and stuff. clickable impacts should be made clickable
8. 00:29:092 - please use the same rhythm as you used before for 00:25:313 (2,3,4) - . it's weird that you suddenly use a 1/1 slider. this doesn't work out.
9. 00:30:273 (4,5) - at this point i will stop telling you what notes are emphasized. i suggest you go through your map again and listen to the song a bit more. there are notes that are impactfull and they should be tapped. don't always go with the drums in the background.
10. 00:32:872 - again that sudden break is weird and i dont know why you're doing this.
11. 00:43:029 (6,7) - how about you make them blanket each other ? i think you should copy paste on of them and then build the other around.
12. 00:55:076 - why don't you add a circle here to support the vocals?
13. 00:55:313 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - somewhere here should be a nc
14. 01:04:053 (6,7) - what's with that sudden decrease of the DS ? please use ds

1. 00:06:651 (4,5,6,7) - this pattern could be too difficult for a normal. change 00:07:596 (7) - into a simple circle. just one. don't stack 00:06:887 (5,6) - because this is hard to read for newer players
2. 00:17:517 (1,2,3,4) - like in the hard you suddenly change from mapping the vocals to mapping the drums. this is weird. don't do that.
3. at this point i stopped modding that diff. please try to make it a bit more consistent. don't suddenly change the rhythms. it's confusing for newer players.

1. 00:22:242 - why are you suddenly making a break here? there's no reason for that.
2. 00:40:667 (1,2) - it's not comprehensible which rhythm you're following here. how about you make it like this:
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3. this diff is nice though

1. You could probably put the Sampleset at 00:55:311 onward to drums since it's the chorus thing

1. 01:01:927 (1,2,3) - The 2 where it is looks ugly