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Daoski

Joined August 2014

Daoski 2016-10-05T04:55:17+00:00

hey there, just a small mod

-Pretty solid map + spacing, so I'll just be pointing out some small inconsistencies in your mapping from a gameplaying perspective ^^

00:16:739 (6,1) -
hm this might be optional, but i'd prefer having these overlap more mostly because the only spaced notes are your 5+note streams
furthermore, all of your triples are just simple stacks, so maybe your "triples" here can also follow a similar fashion
despite looking good, this isn't as playable as it can be especially since ur hitsounding is placing emphasis on those 2 circles
an easy application of this suggestion would be to simply just completely stack these 2 circles
*this change should be applied to all instances*

00:29:239 (4) -
hmm i see a lot of hitcircles overlapped under sliderends which you do throughout the song
now there may be nothing wrong with it but i'll be pointing out a couple things:
generally, overlaps are just hard to sightread no matter how you place it especially in parts of the song w/ lower intensity imo
moreover, your choice of overlap should either be slightly off the sliderend (similar to this case) and not completely over it as I see in other instances of the song, just makes it easier to anticipate patterns, makes your mapping more consistent, and adds bonus points to your aesthetics which are already lit af
*this applies to sliders over sliders too*

00:35:529 (3) -
including the already mentioned above, I'm not quite sure about overlapping the circle under a stacked triple as well + sliderstartcircle
I just want to highlight this because the follow point from this circle to the next is going to be practically invisible, but it's your call and it still looks perfectly calculated
*overlapping over a sliderstartcircle is absolutely ok, i just highlight this because its being overlapped by a stacked triple which is a little unreasonable*

00:44:239 (5) -
maybe... curve this with the inside of the arch facing to the right and rotating it by ~60 degrees clockwise, because i don't really like sliders that point to the previous circle like this
*you don't have to change all other instances of this occurrence, because this specific case is followed by a stream hence the reason i highlight this*
here's my example of this suggestion... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6249214

01:33:594 (3,3) -
music suggests that this is supposed to be a slider in order to make it a stream, essentially.
*completely optional*

01:34:723 (2,3,4,1) -
idk exactly what reasons u had when mapping this part, but the 1 slider seems inconsistently spaced and angled with respect to the 2,3,4 circles, no?

01:41:981 (1,3) -
i think these two sliders should be made with alternating directions like these 2: 01:41:336 (5,6) -
* can be easily applied by just switching the direction of the 1 slider horizontally like this for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6249238 *
I may be a bit picky here, but you should at least stay consistent for this specific case imo

01:59:239 (3,1,2) -
this part is pretty questionable as you overlap the 3,1 --> 5 digit players will easily misread this
thus, I believe you should generally make changes in the tempo like this as playable as possible
possible solutions include.. just simply not overlapping the 3 circle over the 1 slider... ill leave this part to your decision making

03:09:400 (3,4) -
I honestly think this spacing shouldn't be reduced, as all the other jumps have the same spacing (bigger in comparison to the specific circles highlighted)
I understand you are just making a geometrically accurate star, but just remember that I believe the distance spacing should be consistent here since there are no other changes in distance spacing for this specific jump section imo

I'll add more when I have time... GL getting it ranked! This map is super solid, well done with the precise circle and slider placements!

LMT

535 posts

Joined October 2015

LMT 2016-10-05T10:53:25+00:00

Hi from #modreqs. Quick check because I don't have enough time orz sorry.

[Neverending Story]

00:35:852 (5) - this is an extended note by the guitar (I know you're mapping to the snares but only the guitar is present between 00:35:852 (5,1) - these objects ) so try this out http://i.imgur.com/HG1qvBS.jpg , the slider is on 0.50x sv . If you think that's cool then don't forget these places too 00:41:013 (5) - , 00:51:336 (4) - .
01:01:658 (4,5,6) - why is this a triple ? overmapping triples is usually used to emphasise the final (third) beat, which isn't the case here since both the snare and the vocal stresses on the white tick instead of the red tick. Also the sound on the downbeat isn't that much weaker than the red tick so the sliderend on the downbeat feels off while playing. If you want to emphasise the jumps afterwards, just make the note on the red tick a circle.
01:08:917 (2,3) - this misses the vocal which you seem to follow with the 1/1 slider, try this out http://i.imgur.com/Ivs1OlK.jpg .
01:10:207 (2,3,4,5) - same here, the vocal is even more emphasised here so having a placement that compliments the vocal is quite essential. example: http://i.imgur.com/0nxexqM.jpg . The snare drum on 4 is definitely a lot more prominent than the bass kick on 5 so I put a slider there, but obviously that's just a suggestion as you can always justify that with spacing for circles.
01:11:497 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm here misses both the vocals and the drums. Vocal stresses these notes 01:11:497 (2) - 01:11:820 - 01:11:981 - 01:12:142 - while the drums stress and the snare is here 01:12:142 - .
02:25:126 (6) - why should the snare be a sliderend? I'd click that snare.
03:35:529 - you may want to increase the global ds for this section because the drums are making a very powerful pattern that hypes up this entire section.
03:47:304 - the vocal starts on this tick but not the white tick so if you're following that consider mapping a sliderhead here instead.
03:51:175 - since the "eyes" land on this tick instead of the downbeat, consider making the downbeat a 1/4 slider and put a circle here instead.

I have a few problems with rhythm choices throughout the map but maybe i'm just missing a point, if that's the case then this mod is pretty minor.
good luck!!

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-10-05T16:17:40+00:00

Daoski wrote:
hey there, just a small mod ~ this is not a small mod

Neverending Story
-Pretty solid map + spacing, so I'll just be pointing out some small inconsistencies in your mapping from a gameplaying perspective ^^

00:16:739 (6,1) -
hm this might be optional, but i'd prefer having these overlap more mostly because the only spaced notes are your 5+note streams
furthermore, all of your triples are just simple stacks, so maybe your "triples" here can also follow a similar fashion
despite looking good, this isn't as playable as it can be especially since ur hitsounding is placing emphasis on those 2 circles
an easy application of this suggestion would be to simply just completely stack these 2 circles
*this change should be applied to all instances* ~ will try that

00:29:239 (4) -
hmm i see a lot of hitcircles overlapped under sliderends which you do throughout the song
now there may be nothing wrong with it but i'll be pointing out a couple things:
generally, overlaps are just hard to sightread no matter how you place it especially in parts of the song w/ lower intensity imo
moreover, your choice of overlap should either be slightly off the sliderend (similar to this case) and not completely over it as I see other instances of the song, just makes it easier to anticipate patterns, makes your mapping more consistent, and adds bonus points to your aesthetics which are already lit af
*this applies to sliders over sliders too* ~ will rechecck those slightly overlapped stuffs

00:35:529 (3) -
including the already mentioned above, I'm not quite sure about overlapping the circle under a stacked triple as well + sliderstartcircle
I just want to highlight this because the follow point from this circle to the next is going to be practically invisible, but it's your call and it still looks perfectly calculated
*overlapping over a sliderstartcircle is absolutely ok, i just highlight this because its being overlapped by a stacked triple which is a little unreasonable* ~ I see now

00:44:239 (5) -
maybe... curve this with the inside of the arch facing to the right and rotating it by ~60 degrees clockwise, because i don't really like sliders that point to the previous circle like this ~ nice
*you don't have to change all other instances of this occurrence, because this specific case is followed by a stream hence the reason i highlight this*
here's my example of this suggestion... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6249214

01:33:594 (3,3) -
music suggests that this is supposed to be a slider order to make it a stream, essentially. ~ I dont see why it should be
*completely optional*

01:34:723 (2,3,4,1) -
idk exactly what reasons u had when mapping this part, but the 1 slider seems inconsistently spaced and angled with respect to the 2,3,4 circles, no? ~ wtf is that 1.0x DS lol

01:41:981 (1,3) -
i think these two sliders should be made with alternating directions like these 2: 01:41:336 (5,6) - ~ will try
* can be easily applied by just switching the direction of the 1 slider horizontally like this for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6249238 *
I may be a bit picky here, but you should at least stay consistent for this specific case imo

01:59:239 (3,1,2) -
this part is pretty questionable as you overlap the 3,1 --> 5 digit players will easily misread this
thus, I believe you should generally make changes the tempo like this as playable as possible
possible solutions include.. just simply not overlapping the 3 circle over the 1 slider... ill leave this part to your decision making ~ no overlap/stack for 3 and 1

03:09:400 (3,4) -
I honestly think this spacing shouldn't be reduced, as all the other jumps have the same spacing (bigger in comparison to the specific circles highlighted)
I understand you are just making a geometrically accurate star, but just remember that I believe the distance spacing should be consistent here since there are no other changes in distance spacing for this specific jump section imo ~ star pattern changed, and DS is more consistent within it

I'll add more when I have time... GL getting it ranked! This map is super solid, well done with the precise circle and slider placements!

thanks a lot!

LMT1996 wrote:
Hi from #modreqs. Quick check because I don't have enough time orz sorry. ~ it worked lol
[Neverending Story]
00:35:852 (5) - this is an extended note by the guitar (I know you're mapping to the snares but only the guitar is present between 00:35:852 (5,1) - these objects ) so try this out http://i.imgur.com/HG1qvBS.jpg , the slider is on 0.50x sv . If you think that's cool then don't forget these places too 00:41:013 (5) - , 00:51:336 (4) - . ~ the guitar sound sounds like a pause of movement to me, so no change
01:01:658 (4,5,6) - why is this a triple ? overmapping triples is usually used to emphasise the final (third) beat, which isn't the case here since both the snare and the vocal stresses on the white tick instead of the red tick. Also the sound on the downbeat isn't that much weaker than the red tick so the sliderend on the downbeat feels off while playing. If you want to emphasise the jumps afterwards, just make the note on the red tick a circle. ~ there is an audible sound on 01:01:739 - , and I do want to emphasize that. It is not overmapping
01:08:917 (2,3) - this misses the vocal which you seem to follow with the 1/1 slider, try this out http://i.imgur.com/Ivs1OlK.jpg . ~ I do a transition between the vocal-drums here. And on this very tick, I follow the drums
01:10:207 (2,3,4,5) - same here, the vocal is even more emphasised here so having a placement that compliments the vocal is quite essential. example: http://i.imgur.com/0nxexqM.jpg . The snare drum on 4 is definitely a lot more prominent than the bass kick on 5 so I put a slider there, but obviously that's just a suggestion as you can always justify that with spacing for circles. ~ will consider this
01:11:497 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm here misses both the vocals and the drums. Vocal stresses these notes 01:11:497 (2) - 01:11:820 - 01:11:981 - 01:12:142 - while the drums stress and the snare is here 01:12:142 - . ~ I dont think I missed any vocal/drum lines on those timestamps. Idk maybe it is just me...
02:25:126 (6) - why should the snare be a sliderend? I'd click that snare. ~ huh? it is a sliderhead, and it is clickable
03:35:529 - you may want to increase the global ds for this section because the drums are making a very powerful pattern that hypes up this entire section. ~ this section is already somewhat 'hyped' and 'intense' my eyes (no pun intended) but maybe I will consider to broaden the DS a bit
03:47:304 - the vocal starts on this tick but not the white tick so if you're following that consider mapping a sliderhead here instead. ~ Once again, this is a transition between vocal-drums. On the tick you highlighted, I changed to follow the drums and ignored the vocal
03:51:175 - since the "eyes" land on this tick instead of the downbeat, consider making the downbeat a 1/4 slider and put a circle here instead. ~ I need the downbeat (1) to emphasize the loud cymbal sound that is more important than the 'eyes' vocal imo.
I have a few problems with rhythm choices throughout the map but maybe i'm just missing a point, if that's the case then this mod is pretty minor.
good luck!!

thanks, although it is pretty minor! Still better than nothing

GranDSenpai

242 posts

Joined February 2014

GranDSenpai 2016-10-11T13:25:04+00:00

'ello

2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: 00:03:272 (1) -
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: i dunno but this looks really awkward
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: if it was my map
2016-10-11 22:57 theramdans: yeaaaaah
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: i'd do something like this
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFf5T/814d0e33ab.jpg
2016-10-11 22:57 theramdans: I feel you man
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: but i think maybe just personal preference really
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: doesnt flow well
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: it wont change the way it's played
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: but it looks more pleasing
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: wow that is better than I am expecting
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: brb trying that
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: also if you do change that
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: 00:03:756 (3) - perhaps try doing the same with this note?
2016-10-11 22:59 GranDSenpai: o btw. everything is just a suggestion

2016-10-11 23:00 theramdans: you got it
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: 00:35:529 (3,4) -
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: this is also just what i would do
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: but perhaps switch the order of these two notes?
2016-10-11 23:01 theramdans: let's see
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: it would feel more comfortable playing
2016-10-11 23:01 theramdans: is there anything wrong with that?
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: i dont think so
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: it's just what i would do \:D/
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: zig zag eh
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: let me try
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: if you do end up changing it though
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: 00:40:691 (3) - you'd need to change this one the same
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: the movement from (4) to (5) is too much I think
2016-10-11 23:03 theramdans: but maybe that will feel more challenging
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: 00:44:562 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: this looks pretty ugly imo
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: i see what you were going for though
2016-10-11 23:04 GranDSenpai: maybe could do something like this?
2016-10-11 23:04 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFfqb/126d10cd31.jpg
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: 01:05:852 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: moar zig zags lol
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: you skiped over a rather loud bass drum aswell
2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: how to make that ? hhaa
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: put first three notes down
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: and then copy paste

2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: I skipped it for the vocal
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: pishi made a good video about this
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: you could map the vocal and the drum
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: something like this would work imo
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFfy3/bbbdecbfbc.jpg
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: i dont think you should ever skip over loud sounds D:
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: 01:09:723 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: also here
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: i think you should do this
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFfAB/c8508efcfb.jpg
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: you keep the held effect from the vocals
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: but you map the bass
2016-10-11 23:09 GranDSenpai: 01:11:013 (1) - same here
2016-10-11 23:10 GranDSenpai: 01:16:175 (1) - this section is same as the last one exactly
2016-10-11 23:11 GranDSenpai: 01:22:465 (6,2,1,2) - also could i suggest that you move all of these notes up a little tiny bit
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: 01:22:143 (4,5) - because this jump is bigger
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: 01:22:465 (6,1,2) -
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: while this part is more intense but the spacing decreases
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: tell me if i'm going too fast

2016-10-11 23:12 theramdans: yeah you are
2016-10-11 23:13 GranDSenpai: ok i'll let you catch up
2016-10-11 23:13 GranDSenpai: tell me when ur rdy
2016-10-11 23:15 theramdans: ok
2016-10-11 23:15 theramdans: you can continue
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai: 01:44:562 (1) - same thing as the start
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai: i feel like you should curve the slider
2016-10-11 23:16 theramdans: upward I guess?
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFfUN/5a3dff5a94.jpg
2016-10-11 23:17 theramdans: I got it
2016-10-11 23:18 GranDSenpai: 02:40:691 (5) -
2016-10-11 23:18 GranDSenpai: i like this slider

2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: 02:44:239 (2) -
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: i also feel like there should be a slider here
2016-10-11 23:19 theramdans: `you are the 2nd person to tell me that
2016-10-11 23:19 theramdans:

2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: instead of just a singletap
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: \:D/
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: 03:12:626 (1,2,1,2) -
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: omg
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: this part is hard to play D:
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: but you can't really do anything about it
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: haha
2016-10-11 23:21 GranDSenpai: 03:17:465 (1) - same as before in my opinion

2016-10-11 23:21 theramdans: ok I put a slider
2016-10-11 23:22 GranDSenpai: that's really all i have to say about the map
2016-10-11 23:22 GranDSenpai: pretty well done

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-10-11T14:09:56+00:00

GranDSenpai wrote:
'ello
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: 00:03:272 (1) -
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: i dunno but this looks really awkward
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: if it was my map
2016-10-11 22:57 theramdans: yeaaaaah
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: i'd do something like this
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFf5T/814d0e33ab.jpg
2016-10-11 22:57 theramdans: I feel you man
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: but i think maybe just personal preference really
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: doesnt flow well
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: it wont change the way it's played
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: but it looks more pleasing
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: wow that is better than I am expecting
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: brb trying that
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: also if you do change that
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: 00:03:756 (3) - perhaps try doing the same with this note?
2016-10-11 22:59 GranDSenpai: o btw. everything is just a suggestion
2016-10-11 23:00 theramdans: you got it
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: 00:35:529 (3,4) -
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: this is also just what i would do
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: but perhaps switch the order of these two notes?
2016-10-11 23:01 theramdans: let's see
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: it would feel more comfortable playing
2016-10-11 23:01 theramdans: is there anything wrong with that?
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: i dont think so
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: it's just what i would do \:D/
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: zig zag eh
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: let me try
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: if you do end up changing it though
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: 00:40:691 (3) - you'd need to change this one the same
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: the movement from (4) to (5) is too much I think
2016-10-11 23:03 theramdans: but maybe that will feel more challenging
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: 00:44:562 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: this looks pretty ugly imo
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: i see what you were going for though
2016-10-11 23:04 GranDSenpai: maybe could do something like this?
2016-10-11 23:04 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFfqb/126d10cd31.jpg
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: 01:05:852 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: moar zig zags lol
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: you skiped over a rather loud bass drum aswell
2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: how to make that ? hhaa
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: put first three notes down
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: and then copy paste
2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: I skipped it for the vocal
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: pishi made a good video about this
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: you could map the vocal and the drum
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: something like this would work imo
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFfy3/bbbdecbfbc.jpg
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: i dont think you should ever skip over loud sounds D:
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: 01:09:723 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: also here
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: i think you should do this
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFfAB/c8508efcfb.jpg
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: you keep the held effect from the vocals
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: but you map the bass
2016-10-11 23:09 GranDSenpai: 01:11:013 (1) - same here
2016-10-11 23:10 GranDSenpai: 01:16:175 (1) - this section is same as the last one exactly
2016-10-11 23:11 GranDSenpai: 01:22:465 (6,2,1,2) - also could i suggest that you move all of these notes up a little tiny bit
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: 01:22:143 (4,5) - because this jump is bigger
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: 01:22:465 (6,1,2) -
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: while this part is more intense but the spacing decreases
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: tell me if i'm going too fast
2016-10-11 23:12 theramdans: yeah you are
2016-10-11 23:13 GranDSenpai: ok i'll let you catch up
2016-10-11 23:13 GranDSenpai: tell me when ur rdy
2016-10-11 23:15 theramdans: ok
2016-10-11 23:15 theramdans: you can continue
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai: 01:44:562 (1) - same thing as the start
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai: i feel like you should curve the slider
2016-10-11 23:16 theramdans: upward I guess?
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai: http://puu.sh/rFfUN/5a3dff5a94.jpg
2016-10-11 23:17 theramdans: I got it
2016-10-11 23:18 GranDSenpai: 02:40:691 (5) -
2016-10-11 23:18 GranDSenpai: i like this slider
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: 02:44:239 (2) -
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: i also feel like there should be a slider here
2016-10-11 23:19 theramdans: `you are the 2nd person to tell me that
2016-10-11 23:19 theramdans:
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: instead of just a singletap
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: \:D/
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: 03:12:626 (1,2,1,2) -
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: omg
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: this part is hard to play D:
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: but you can't really do anything about it
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: haha
2016-10-11 23:21 GranDSenpai: 03:17:465 (1) - same as before in my opinion
2016-10-11 23:21 theramdans: ok I put a slider
2016-10-11 23:22 GranDSenpai: that's really all i have to say about the map
2016-10-11 23:22 GranDSenpai: pretty well done

thanks for the quick irc mod! It helps~

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-10-27T15:27:07+00:00

some opinion after testplayed the hardest diff

[Neverending Story]
00:21:336 (4,5) - spacing is easy to fake to 1/4 because it just have such big 1/4 spacing on 00:21:013 (2,3) -
00:35:529 (3,4) - the jump kinda suddenly, it should have same spacing imo
01:06:094 (2) - overmap? it sounds weird
01:16:417 (2) - same
01:59:400 (1) - recommend circle, it can catch the rhythm better
02:25:046 (1) - remove nc, its unnecessary

good luck

theramdans

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Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-10-31T14:05:52+00:00

Rizia wrote:
some opinion after testplayed the hardest diff

[Neverending Story]
00:21:336 (4,5) - spacing is easy to fake to 1/4 because it just have such big 1/4 spacing on 00:21:013 (2,3) - Slider exit to stream entry is now further apart
00:35:529 (3,4) - the jump kinda suddenly, it should have same spacing imo ~ I am emphasizing the drum sound on the red tick there so I put a jump, idk if it fits. I'll leave it as it is for now
01:06:094 (2) - overmap? it sounds weird ~ I was told not to put 3/4 there, so I put 1/4 instead to fit the vocals
01:16:417 (2) - same ~ but idk maybe I'll delete them
01:59:400 (1) - recommend circle, it can catch the rhythm better ~ cool
02:25:046 (1) - remove nc, its unnecessary ~Ok

good luck

thanks a lot!

kappaToast

24 posts

Joined July 2016

kappaToast 2016-11-22T16:16:59+00:00

Hi, im here for moding

im a begginer so... idk

00:33:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would rather place circles of triangles insted, becouse this part has little less instensity like in the begining.
01:33:433 (1,2,3) - I hate when people rapidly place triple notes away from each other insted of using "repeat" sliders.
00:53:271 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - - On this part slider velo and objects should be redused.
01:58:755 (1) - this slide also should repat twice, becouse the gutar is the main instrument in that part even in whole song.

GL

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2016-11-25T08:26:11+00:00

owo

theramdans

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Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-11-25T15:49:07+00:00

kappaToast wrote:
Hi, im here for moding

im a begginer so... idk ~ at least you tried

00:33:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would rather place circles of triangles insted, becouse this part has little less instensity like in the begining. ~ you mean 1/4 circles instead of sliders? no, too hard
01:33:433 (1,2,3) - I hate when people rapidly place triple notes away from each other insted of using "repeat" sliders. ~ this is a pretty common technique
00:53:271 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - - On this part slider velo and objects should be redused. ~ SV is already reduced, it is on 0.75x
01:58:755 (1) - this slide also should repat twice, becouse the gutar is the main instrument in that part even in whole song. ~ having this repeats twice, it is weird and confusing...

GL

HootOwlStar

750 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2016-11-26T10:55:04+00:00

the bg is like ew. it's way too blurry and the colour scheme is intoxicating. try this out http://bit.ly/2gJuE1u or actually not it's totally up to you
[ez]

rhythm in the intro could be made simpler but that doesn't really matter anyway

minor aesthetic problems. 00:11:014 (4) - the blanket with 00:09:724 (2) - is imperfect + 01:10:368 (3) - could raise a few pixels to increase the distance with 01:08:433 (1) - + 01:41:981 (1,2) - imperfect blanket too + 01:54:884 (3,1) - should shift the combos
flow problems. 00:34:884 (1,2,3) - plays weird especially from (1) to (2) in which https://puu.sh/suW0h/55f8a6d461.JPG seems forced. suggestion https://puu.sh/suW5D/c03f629958.JPG+ 01:10:368 (3,1) - ya
01:43:433 (2,1) - 01:51:175 (2,1) - distance snap problems.
01:23:271 (3) - 02:25:207 (3) - 03:09:078 (3) - would be better if you provide a click at the slider ends for overall rhythm emphasis. consider to split the sliders into 1/1 slider followed by a circle with 1/1 gap in between.

[norm]

00:34:562 (4,1,2,3,4) - the rhythm feels weird since this is the only part where the electronic guitar notes aren't emphasized (or basically the 3/2 notes)
01:58:755 (1,2,1) - tidy up the distance snapping in between + 02:14:239 (3,4,5) - would definitely improve in aesthetics if a mirror symmetry pattern is applied

in hard diff, 00:20:529 (4,1) - 00:56:497 (1,2) - shift NCs
that's it anyway ok bye gl

theramdans

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Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-11-28T14:28:34+00:00

HootOwlStar wrote:
the bg is like ew. it's way too blurry and the colour scheme is intoxicating. try this out http://bit.ly/2gJuE1u or actually not it's totally up to you ~ for some reason, I cant access the link you provided
[ez]
rhythm in the intro could be made simpler but that doesn't really matter anyway
minor aesthetic problems. 00:11:014 (4) - the blanket with 00:09:724 (2) - is imperfect + 01:10:368 (3) - could raise a few pixels to increase the distance with 01:08:433 (1) - + 01:41:981 (1,2) - imperfect blanket too + 01:54:884 (3,1) - should shift the combos ~ I did the NC. Those blankets are tiny bitsy slightly off, yeah minor stuff
flow problems. 00:34:884 (1,2,3) - plays weird especially from (1) to (2) in which https://puu.sh/suW0h/55f8a6d461.JPG seems forced. suggestion https://puu.sh/suW5D/c03f629958.JPG+ 01:10:368 (3,1) - ya ~ both fixed
01:43:433 (2,1) - 01:51:175 (2,1) - distance snap problems. ~ Idk why that happens
01:23:271 (3) - 02:25:207 (3) - 03:09:078 (3) - would be better if you provide a click at the slider ends for overall rhythm emphasis. consider to split the sliders into 1/1 slider followed by a circle with 1/1 gap in between. ~ Agree
[norm]
00:34:562 (4,1,2,3,4) - the rhythm feels weird since this is the only part where the electronic guitar notes aren't emphasized (or basically the 3/2 notes) ~ Because I take priority higher for the vocals than the instruments
01:58:755 (1,2,1) - tidy up the distance snapping in between ~ Again, Idk how that happens + 02:14:239 (3,4,5) - would definitely improve in aesthetics if a mirror symmetry pattern is applied ~ I think it is mirrored to horizontal axis
in hard diff, 00:20:529 (4,1) - 00:56:497 (1,2) - shift NCs ~ shifted
that's it anyway ok bye gl

thanks a lot <3

_Meep_

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Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2016-11-28T16:58:59+00:00

irc
http://puu.sh/sxlIf/b663ceab8a.txt

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2016-12-01T07:55:08+00:00

Hi~

[Neverending Story]

For the diff's name, I don't think there's the word "Neverending" in English, please space it in the middle of those two words. Use " Never Ending Story" instead.

00:01:821 - Is there a reason why you didn't map this part? If there isn't please try to convert 00:01:659 (4) - into a 1/2 slider like you did at 00:00:692 (1) - since the instrument at 00:01:821 - and 00:00:853 - is pretty much the same imo.
00:02:143 (2,3) - How about CTRL+G-ing the rhythm? Feels more fitting imo since the sound at 00:02:304 - is softer than 00:02:143 - and 00:02:466 - that it should be unclickable.
00:08:917 (3,4) - Same reason ^
00:14:723 (3,4,5) - 00:17:304 (3,4,5) - Spacings for these triplets seems incredibly large imo, even it's larger than 00:24:400 (6,7,1) - even though they had the same instrument. Consider making it spaced similar with the others? It's around 2.20x~2.60x spacing.
00:39:723 (5) - How about CTRL+G here to maintain the (what movement is it? It's like facing to each other)?
00:49:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looked like an unclean stream imo. 00:49:965 (4,5) -
03:45:207 (1,2,3) - 03:29:723 (2,3) - I don't see why 03:45:529 (2,3) - are single notes but 03:29:723 (2,3) - isn't they're symmetrical each other. Since you put drums at 03:45:368 - , at the end of the slider. I think making 03:45:529 (2,3) - would be alright?

That's all from me. GL~

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-12-05T07:28:56+00:00

William K wrote:
Hi~

[Neverending Story]

For the diff's name, I don't think there's the word "Neverending" in English, please space it in the middle of those two words. Use " Never Ending Story" instead. ~ what about 'Never-ending Story'

00:01:821 - Is there a reason why you didn't map this part? If there isn't please try to convert 00:01:659 (4) - into a 1/2 slider like you did at 00:00:692 (1) - since the instrument at 00:01:821 - and 00:00:853 - is pretty much the same imo. ~ I want to emphasize that 'pause' at 00:01:821 -
00:02:143 (2,3) - How about CTRL+G-ing the rhythm? Feels more fitting imo since the sound at 00:02:304 - is softer than 00:02:143 ~I dont know about this, it is too early to put an antiflow- and 00:02:466 - that it should be unclickable. ~ it is already unclickable (sliderend)
00:08:917 (3,4) - Same reason ^ ~ idk , I want to keep this as well
00:14:723 (3,4,5) - 00:17:304 (3,4,5) - Spacings for these triplets seems incredibly large imo, even it's larger than 00:24:400 (6,7,1) - even though they had the same instrument. Consider making it spaced similar with the others? It's around 2.20x~2.60x spacing. ~ spacing reduced
00:39:723 (5) - How about CTRL+G here to maintain the (what movement is it? It's like facing to each other)? ~ it was facing the other way originally...then I was told to ctrl+g it
00:49:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looked like an unclean stream imo. 00:49:965 (4,5) - ~ will fix the stream
03:45:207 (1,2,3) - 03:29:723 (2,3) - I don't see why 03:45:529 (2,3) - are single notes but 03:29:723 (2,3) - isn't they're symmetrical each other. Since you put drums at 03:45:368 - , at the end of the slider. I think making 03:45:529 (2,3) - would be alright?
~ I see, fixed

That's all from me. GL~

thanks, sorry for late reply!

Nikakis

769 posts

Joined May 2014

Nikakis 2016-12-05T10:53:18+00:00

Really nice mapset,i wish you the best to rank it

!

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2016-12-10T19:12:15+00:00

Rank when?, it feels ready.

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-12-11T01:38:40+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Rank when?, it feels ready.

Not a single BN is interested, so far

If you look back in the thread there are 3 BN mods but no one gave icon whatsoever

T_Rice

1 post

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T_Rice 2016-12-14T18:47:24+00:00

nice map

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-12-16T08:11:42+00:00

kds pls i have a family to feed

04:43 pkhg: 01:03:110 (3,1) - 03:14:723 (3,1) - unstacking these would be cool to emphasize better the start of the kiai imo
04:43 pkhg: music is pretty strong there
04:44 theramdans: ok
04:44 theramdans: should I make a jump
04:44 pkhg: yeah
04:45 pkhg: 00:51:658 (1,2,3) - distance should be larger from 1>2 than 2>3 cuz 2 has a snare
04:45 pkhg: 00:50:852 (2,3,4) - like you did here
04:47 pkhg: 01:44:239 (1) - i think you can remove this nc. previous combo is really short
04:48 pkhg: 01:49:400 (1) - same
04:49 pkhg: 02:04:723 (1) - and maybe this one
04:51 pkhg: 02:07:304 (4,1) - a jump fits better cuz the snare on the sliderhead
04:53 pkhg: 02:07:465 (1,2) - swap nc to keep consistency
04:56 theramdans: 02:04:723 (1) - I didnt NC this
04:56 theramdans: I did all the others, looks and feels better
04:56 pkhg: 01:23:110 (5,1,2) - 02:25:126 (6,1,2,3) - compare ds on those patterns. spacing should be similar but the 2nd one has way lower spacing than the first one
04:57 pkhg: increasing ds on the 2nd its easier cuz the next note is a spinner xd
04:58 theramdans: really?
04:58 theramdans: they are all 0.06x
04:58 pkhg: i mean
04:58 pkhg: the last 3 notes
04:58 pkhg: after the triplet
04:59 theramdans: :O
04:59 theramdans: I see
05:00 pkhg: 02:37:788 (2,3) - i dont see a reason for such a large spacing
05:00 theramdans: done
05:01 theramdans: yeah , true...
05:02 pkhg: 03:36:658 (6,1) - unstack. same reason as previous ones
05:03 theramdans: ok, did a jump instead
05:06 theramdans: crap
05:06 theramdans: I need to take a dump ._.
05:06 pkhg: 03:43:271 (1,2) - 1/2 would be better cuz you were mapping drums for all this section and that sudden change to vocals feels weird
05:06 pkhg: o lol
05:07 theramdans: yeah I know which one is that^
05:07 theramdans: will look at it after I am done
05:07 pkhg: k
05:07 pkhg: thats all i guess
05:07 pkhg: yey
05:07 theramdans: yey ok

-Kyu

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-Kyu 2016-12-16T13:33:34+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Rank when?, it feels ready.

+ ngilangin kutukan 69 di thread

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2016-12-17T09:54:23+00:00

uhhhhhh
short mod cuz u asked

Hard

-Stuff that probably matters more
00:29:078 (6,7,8) - is there a specific reason for this pattern? if not, it looks pretty out of place considering there are no stacks anywhere before this
00:49:239 (4,5) - why DS inconsistent with whatever was before?
00:50:852 (2,3) - ^
00:55:529 (1,2) - fix DS

-Aesthetics
00:10:691 (2,1,2,3) - i think this would look better if you increase DS of 2-1 to match 1-2, 2-3
00:15:852 (5,1) - overlap doesnt look that good
00:23:110 (4,5,6) - these blankets are not the same distance from 4
00:45:691 (2) - stack this on the tail of this 00:44:723 (8)
00:59:562 (4,5,6,7) - adjust this pattern so you can get 7 to stack on 4 for aesthetics
01:22:142 (2,3) - this looks like a poorly executed blanket, so make it more clear that its not a blanket
01:25:046 (4,5,6) - the spacing of 6-4 is really close in comparison to 4-5, make same
01:25:852 (6,7) - copypaste 6 to replace 7, rotate as needed
01:40:852 (4,5,6) - adjust this pattern so the objects appear to be roughly the same distance away (sth like this https://puu.sh/sSnww/40f725a2ae.jpg&#41)
01:58:755 (1,2) - make slider shapes the same? both are guitar
02:58:433 (5,6,7,8,1) - could make pentagon pattern out of this

anyways, as you can probably tell im not really impressed with the aesthetics. theres a lot of things that dont look pretty because of visual spacing contrast and overlaps. in addition, a large number of sliders appear to be made by hand (single white anchor 1/2 beat) which means that the curvature of those sliders keeps changing. so id recommend using only 1 of that type of slider (weird slider-blankets are exceptions) and just copy-paste them for everything, to keep it consistent.

Never-ending Story

cuz i just happened to find it when i was taking a quick look XD
00:22:304 (2,1) - fix stack
Never-ending Story does a much better job with aesthetics than Hard though, so good job on that

Good luck!

Fookiz

157 posts

Joined June 2014

Fookiz 2016-12-27T21:13:47+00:00

random extra diff mod because i m vry nice pers0n

the x t ra diff

00:11:659 (1,2) - ugly overlap, just move 1 a bit to the right and down like so

00:33:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this and 00:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - need some adjusting, flow in some places makes it so it feels really forced to play this compared to the rest of the map. i think in the first pattern coming into the pattern in a sort of wide angle flow makes it unconfortable to get into playing the pattern, and 5,6 kinda makes it feels antiflow. you can make it continue that sort of zigzag pattern on 1,2,3,4 same with 5,6 so basically just move 5 to the right and somwhere under 3 and should do the work. you still need to adjust flow before pattern aswell.
with the second pattern i think ctrl+g 3,4 and 00:39:884 (6,7,1) - somwhere like a bit to the right of 3
that should be a good guidline for those
00:36:497 (2) - edgy slider shape with no corrosponding sound
00:42:626 (1,2,3) - kinda contredicts the the visual style you had so far, horzontal symmetry randomly for a part that is not that prominent to be a differnet visual style.
00:52:304 (4) - i think this should be a kickslider because of the guitar sound, just feels like something is missing afterwards in that 1/4 time that nothing is there. also reccomend to NC this and un NC 00:52:465 (1) -
01:15:046 (2,3) - really big jump compared to other parts of the early kiai
01:33:433 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - i think reajusting this to be 120 degree angle triangle thing would be cool, rn it looks like you tried to make something there look nice but its just like random lol
02:40:691 (5) - whilst testplaying i sb here, idk really why looking back at it, but if someone else mentions it consider a change
03:13:594 (1,2) - i think horizontally flipping this would be better with previously 03:12:626 (1,2) -

i told you im bad at modin
g

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-12-28T15:49:32+00:00

Fookiezi wrote:
random extra diff mod because i m vry nice pers0n

the x t ra diff
00:11:659 (1,2) - ugly overlap, just move 1 a bit to the right and down like so ~ already change somehow in my remap session, thanks for pointing out
00~:33:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this and 00:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - need some adjusting, flow in some places makes it so it feels really forced to play this compared to the rest of the map. i think in the first pattern coming into the pattern in a sort of wide angle flow makes it unconfortable to get into playing the pattern, and 5,6 kinda makes it feels antiflow. you can make it continue that sort of zigzag pattern on 1,2,3,4 same with 5,6 so basically just move 5 to the right and somwhere under 3 and should do the work. you still need to adjust flow before pattern aswell.
with the second pattern i think ctrl+g 3,4 and 00:39:884 (6,7,1) - somwhere like a bit to the right of 3
that should be a good guidline for those ~ it looks nice now
00:36:497 (2) - edgy slider shape with no corrosponding sound ~ huh? This looks fine to me
00:42:626 (1,2,3) - kinda contredicts the the visual style you had so far, horzontal symmetry randomly for a part that is not that prominent to be a differnet visual style. ~ I dont know why, but it fits the vocal line in those parts
00:52:304 (4) - i think this should be a kickslider because of the guitar sound, just feels like something is missing afterwards in that 1/4 time that nothing is there. also reccomend to NC this and un NC 00:52:465 (1) - ~ agree on the guitar thing
01:15:046 (2,3) - really big jump compared to other parts of the early kiai ~ yup,fixed
01:33:433 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - i think reajusting this to be 120 degree angle triangle thing would be cool, rn it looks like you tried to make something there look nice but its just like random lol ~ will fix this
02:40:691 (5) - whilst testplaying i sb here, idk really why looking back at it, but if someone else mentions it consider a change ~ I dont wanna change this
03:13:594 (1,2) - i think horizontally flipping this would be better with previously 03:12:626 (1,2) - ~ that would make the pattern not in line with the sound (the sound goes roght-left-left-right)

i told you im bad at modin
g ~ not bad actuall
y

thank
s
!

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2016-12-28T19:09:10+00:00

[never-ending story]

00:01:498 (4) - mantap ya lupa whistle disini
00:08:433 (1,3) - blanket ini perlu di cek lagi
00:37:949 (2,3) - ^
00:56:013 (3) - lagi, clap
01:03:110 (3) - ga cocok banget kalau lu tambahkan hitsound ny disini, srius

[akitoshit]

00:19:239 (5) - remove whistle pls
00:29:562 (6) - ^
01:54:239 (2,3,4,5,1) - would make the DS more equal here if i were you
03:43:917 (3) - nice missing clap

i'm tired...

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-12-29T06:21:03+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[never-ending story]
00:01:498 (4) - mantap ya lupa whistle disini ~ lupa gan
00:08:433 (1,3) - blanket ini perlu di cek lagi ~ udah betul
00:37:949 (2,3) - ^ ~ ^
00:56:013 (3) - lagi, clap ~ saya lupa lagi
01:03:110 (3) - ga cocok banget kalau lu tambahkan hitsound ny disini, srius ok...
i'm tired... ~ istirahat mas,,,

(y) \o/

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-12-29T06:26:52+00:00

applied from lit's mod, thanks :3

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Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-12-31T12:25:54+00:00

can I just mod like lit does?
//runs

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-12-31T15:04:35+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
can I just mod like lit does?
//runs

technically acceptable mas

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2017-01-06T04:40:49+00:00

ya ga quality banget sih
tapi semoga membantu lah
(sori lama btw)

@Ram

00:02:304 (3) - down curve instead
00:23:110 - patten begini mungkin? https://gyazo.com/0e8aabf5bb17b02bb331f9e101ea867c
00:24:884 (2) - kyknya kedeketan deh, coba stack sama (1) merah yang sebelumnya
00:43:594 (3,5) - nazi
00:46:013 (4) - agak patah gitu menurutku, di x88 y224 aja mungkin?
00:51:658 (1,2,3) - pribadi mau jump rata sih disini wkwk
01:03:110 (1) - nc buat reading
01:10:852 (6) - x428 y40 buat polish flownya
01:12:949 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - pattern suggestionnya agak ngerepotin sih ini, kyk gini nih https://gyazo.com/b34a61cfce124049e836c291e0e15ab5 , jadi itu (3)nya di blanketin sama 01:11:820 (5) - terus treamnya nge blanket (3)nya
01:15:852 (5) - slider light right curve lebih lembut deh buat emphasingnya
01:18:110 (3) - agak naikin 1~2 grid keatas
01:21:658 (2,6,2) - gemes banget ngeliat overlapnya ww
01:28:594 (4,2) - ^
01:37:626 (4,1) - apa gak terlalu patah ini flwnya. . coba begini https://gyazo.com/9e49fcd3131d29598d2c50c90890a59a
02:03:110 (3) - masih bias di apikin lagi ini
02:05:529 - gini mungkin? https://gyazo.com/897c75670ea4eca76f7b65ab11575545
02:10:207 (4,3) - lagi
02:21:336 (3,4) - miss blank?
02:25:529 (2,3) - kalo aku sih lebih prefer gerahan letter V ditu biar ngasih sedikit movement sebelum gapnya
02:48:594 (2) - brhubung di nc jangan tanggung" jumpnya x512 y192
02:56:497 (5) - x224 y164 juga masih enak kok flownya
03:18:110 (3) - ini jadiin stack tanggung aja kyk yang 03:08:755 (3,3) - dll, simplenya buat reading. terus 4nya agak dijauhin mungkin ke x92 y188
03:22:465 (6) - menurutku buat ke (1)nya agak nope sih, lebih kekiri mungkin
03:23:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - kenapa ga rata dsnya uu
03:28:433 (3) - sama kyk sebelumnya
03:38:271 (2) - 3~4 grid ke kiri
03:44:562 (1,2) - ctrl+g terus 03:44:884 (3,4) - ini juga ctrl+g. entah jumpnya itu agak decrase rasanya
03:47:465 (5,6,7) - garis lurus lah

Aki

00:41:497 (2) - move to x356 y360
00:43:594 (3,1,2) - I thought you want to make it similar degrees? idk
01:06:820 (1) - upcurve before angle imo
01:21:013 (5) - prefer x348 y108 jump
02:25:852 (1) - meant to x304 y284?
03:39:078 (1) - add 2 grid more for curve plz

-Kanzaki

889 posts

Joined June 2012

-Kanzaki 2017-01-06T12:48:58+00:00

never-ending story

00:01:498 (4,1) - this flow is so simple as it goes same with the previous part i would suggest you to ctrl+g 1 and put it on a good distance so you emphasize 1 better (just like 00:06:659 (4,1) - you made on this one cool)

00:11:014 - You can try to use slower SV multiplier here since music goes kinda calm and silent for a moment here

00:21:013 (2,4) - These two looks bad to ME you can try CTRL+J 4

02:12:949 (1) - Did you miss a finish here?

theramdans

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Topic Starter

theramdans 2017-01-06T14:11:14+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
ya ga quality banget sih
tapi semoga membantu lah
(sori lama btw)

@Ram
00:02:304 (3) - down curve instead ~ ok
00:23:110 - patten begini mungkin? https://gyazo.com/0e8aabf5bb17b02bb331f9e101ea867c ~ gw coba
00:24:884 (2) - kyknya kedeketan deh, coba stack sama (1) merah yang sebelumnya ~ ok
00:43:594 (3,5) - nazi ~ :3
00:46:013 (4) - agak patah gitu menurutku, di x88 y224 aja mungkin? ~ gw letakin deket situ
00:51:658 (1,2,3) - pribadi mau jump rata sih disini wkwk ~ diratain
01:03:110 (1) - nc buat reading ~ dulu disuruh hapus NC soalnya malah bingung bacanya
01:10:852 (6) - x428 y40 buat polish flownya ~ ok
01:12:949 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - pattern suggestionnya agak ngerepotin sih ini, kyk gini nih https://gyazo.com/b34a61cfce124049e836c291e0e15ab5 , jadi itu (3)nya di blanketin sama 01:11:820 (5) - terus treamnya nge blanket (3)nya ~ gw coba ya, ribet ini stream ngeblanket slider yg sudah lama lewat
01:15:852 (5) - slider light right curve lebih lembut deh buat emphasingnya ~ gw ganti dgn slider curve
01:18:110 (3) - agak naikin 1~2 grid keatas ~ done
01:21:658 (2,6,2) - gemes banget ngeliat overlapnya ww ~ sengaja itu
01:28:594 (4,2) - ^ ~ stacked
01:37:626 (4,1) - apa gak terlalu patah ini flwnya. . coba begini https://gyazo.com/9e49fcd3131d29598d2c50c90890a59a ~ gw coba
02:03:110 (3) - masih bias di apikin lagi ini ~ gw coba sesuatu
02:05:529 - gini mungkin? https://gyazo.com/897c75670ea4eca76f7b65ab11575545 ~ gw coba yg miirip bgitu
02:10:207 (4,3) - lagi ~ ga gw ganti, gw suka yg ini hehe
02:21:336 (3,4) - miss blank? fixed
02:25:529 (2,3) - kalo aku sih lebih prefer gerahan letter V ditu biar ngasih sedikit movement sebelum gapnya ~ ni biar sedikit menjebak
02:48:594 (2) - brhubung di nc jangan tanggung" jumpnya x512 y192 ~ di ujung :3
02:56:497 (5) - x224 y164 juga masih enak kok flownya ~ overlapnya yg ga enak
03:18:110 (3) - ini jadiin stack tanggung aja kyk yang 03:08:755 (3,3) - dll, simplenya buat reading. terus 4nya agak dijauhin mungkin ke x92 y188 ~ gak, nanti jadi ga konsisten, lagian lebih enak distack begitu
03:22:465 (6) - menurutku buat ke (1)nya agak nope sih, lebih kekiri mungkin ~ kiri atasan dikit ya
03:23:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - kenapa ga rata dsnya uu ~ sengaja itu, 4-5 jump
03:28:433 (3) - sama kyk sebelumnya
03:38:271 (2) - 3~4 grid ke kiri ~ 5
03:44:562 (1,2) - ctrl+g terus 03:44:884 (3,4) - ini juga ctrl+g. entah jumpnya itu agak decrase rasanya ~ ok
03:47:465 (5,6,7) - garis lurus lah ~ dah dilurusin mas

suwun mas

-Kanzaki wrote:
never-ending story

00:01:498 (4,1) - this flow is so simple as it goes same with the previous part i would suggest you to ctrl+g 1 and put it on a good distance so you emphasize 1 better (just like 00:06:659 (4,1) - you made on this one cool) ~ yea, imma try that

00:11:014 - You can try to use slower SV multiplier here since music goes kinda calm and silent for a moment here ~ sorrry, no

00:21:013 (2,4) - These two looks bad to ME you can try CTRL+J 4 ~ if that happens, where should I put the 1/4 (3), I cant make a jump that huge

02:12:949 (1) - Did you miss a finish here? ~ Nope

Thanks

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Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2017-01-06T17:36:14+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
Aki
00:41:497 (2) - move to x356 y360 eh i did it for visual preference for 00:41:013 (5) - but i moved a bit somewhere anyway w
00:43:594 (3,1,2) - I thought you want to make it similar degrees? idk fixed
01:06:820 (1) - upcurve before angle imo ok
01:21:013 (5) - prefer x348 y108 jump i prefer mine tho
02:25:852 (1) - meant to x304 y284? nah
03:39:078 (1) - add 2 grid more for curve plz

thanks
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Log Off Now 2017-01-12T12:06:53+00:00

i am soooooo slooooooooooooooooow

[Easy]

00:12:626 (2,3) - ds
00:26:497 (3) - rotate/move up a bit for a cleaner shape?
00:33:917 (2) - maybe red point for a cooler blanket type thing on (1)?
00:36:497 (2) - it's better to angle this towards the next slider since it gives an extra subtle indication of where the flow goes next
00:39:078 (2) - here is a good example of what i mean for the above comment ^
00:44:239 (2) - don't change this one though otherwise flow becomes awkward
00:59:723 (2) - same as 00:36:497 (2) -
01:34:239 (1) - 01:36:820 (1) - 01:39:400 (1) - 01:41:981 (1) - these sliders look a bit boring, maybe add a red point that matches when the snare hits? gives it a feeling of more emphasis
you also might want to change this section up a little more, i know easy diffs can be boring but the same really sparse rhythm for 20+ seconds is a bit far imo, maybe 01:41:981 (1) - here you could try a rhythm like this?. it still hits the main notes you're hitting but matches the vocals a bit better and adds some varience into this section
03:01:336 (3) - this doesn't work very well imo since the red tick is easily the most important note out of the three this hits (even your hitsounding suggests this) and it's unclickable, i would just stick with using your previous rhythm since you add more variety in the bar after this anyway, so monotony doesnt become an issue
03:27:142 (3,2) - idk if this kind of overlap is allowed in an easy since the slider end is obstructed? check with a bn, a quick fix is to give these sliders red points to angle them away from each other

[Normal]

01:23:917 (5) - feels more natural to have this on the left side of the playfield following on from the slider end imo
01:23:917 (5) also NC?
01:54:562 (4,1) - blanket can be improved | (1) slider head x443 y117 // (1) slider red point x372 y192
02:25:852 (6) - NC?
02:40:691 (3) - maybe unrankable? the red points here make a small speed change in the slider
02:51:013 (4) - the grey point in this slider is pretty pointless, would make a better shape if you just removed it

[Hard]

sv seems a little high imo, but apart from that it looks ok

[]

not much to say about the higher diffs they're looking good so i modded the lower diffs since they have less mods on them, also you might wanna put corinn in the tags since its aki's new name? gl!

O-Moei

O-Moei 2017-01-13T03:42:56+00:00

~~titip post modding (reminder diri sendiri) XDXD~~

Ni hao ni hao !

Easy :
00:12:626 (2,3) - aimod Spacingnya
01:56:175 (2,3) - ^
03:28:433 (2,3) - ^

01:39:400 (1) - Mngkin bagus lengkungin dikit lagi

03:31:658 (2,3) - kyknya yg ini masih bagus klo kayak 01:20:046 (2,3) -

Normal :
00:40:046 (1) - Cobain dot merah pertama di x282y289, dot putih kedua di x305y229

01:23:271 (4) - gak lengkung biasa aja ?

Never-ending Story :
02:25:206 (1,2,3) - gak segitiga aja memotong tengah?

02:47:142 (3) - x396y280 ?

Oke, ni sebenernya udh bagus. Moga bermanfaat XDXD
BN mana BN x'D

theramdans

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theramdans 2017-01-16T13:50:00+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
i am soooooo slooooooooooooooooow ~ me2, mate

[Easy]

00:12:626 (2,3) - ds ~ k
00:26:497 (3) - rotate/move up a bit for a cleaner shape? ~ moved just a bit
00:33:917 (2) - maybe red point for a cooler blanket type thing on (1)? ~ I agree!
00:36:497 (2) - it's better to angle this towards the next slider since it gives an extra subtle indication of where the flow goes next ~ yeah, I just realise it was a wrong flow
00:39:078 (2) - here is a good example of what i mean for the above comment ^ ~ nice observation
00:44:239 (2) - don't change this one though otherwise flow becomes awkward
00:59:723 (2) - same as 00:36:497 (2) - ~ same
01:34:239 (1) - 01:36:820 (1) - 01:39:400 (1) - 01:41:981 (1) - these sliders look a bit boring, maybe add a red point that matches when the snare hits? gives it a feeling of more emphasis
you also might want to change this section up a little more, i know easy diffs can be boring but the same really sparse rhythm for 20+ seconds is a bit far imo, maybe 01:41:981 (1) - here you could try a rhythm like this?. it still hits the main notes you're hitting but matches the vocals a bit better and adds some varience into this section ~ not gonna change rhythm, cuz I want this part nerfed personally
03:01:336 (3) - this doesn't work very well imo since the red tick is easily the most important note out of the three this hits (even your hitsounding suggests this) and it's unclickable, i would just stick with using your previous rhythm since you add more variety in the bar after this anyway, so monotony doesnt become an issue ~ fixed
03:27:142 (3,2) - idk if this kind of overlap is allowed in an easy since the slider end is obstructed? check with a bn, a quick fix is to give these sliders red points to angle them away from each other ~ overlap obliterated

[Normal]

01:23:917 (5) - feels more natural to have this on the left side of the playfield following on from the slider end imo ~ Just assume I am kinda obsessed with the position x:256 lol
01:23:917 (5) also NC? ~ yupp
01:54:562 (4,1) - blanket can be improved | (1) slider head x443 y117 // (1) slider red point x372 y192 ~ true
02:25:852 (6) - NC? ~ maybe yes
02:40:691 (3) - maybe unrankable? the red points here make a small speed change in the slider ~ slider simplified
02:51:013 (4) - the grey point in this slider is pretty pointless, would make a better shape if you just removed it ~ crve obliterated

[Hard]

sv seems a little high imo, but apart from that it looks ok ~ the bpm is somewhat kinda low, so I decided to boost the base sv instead

[]

not much to say about the higher diffs they're looking good so i modded the lower diffs since they have less mods on them, also you might wanna put corinn in the tags since its aki's new name? gl! ~ nahhh 'corinn' isnt necessary. Thanks a lot

GG LON

O-Moei wrote:
~~titip post modding (reminder diri sendiri) XDXD~~

Ni hao ni hao ! ~ ni hao ma?

Easy :
00:12:626 (2,3) - aimod Spacingnya ~ udah
01:56:175 (2,3) - ^ ~ ini DS kok
03:28:433 (2,3) - ^ ~ dah beres

01:39:400 (1) - Mngkin bagus lengkungin dikit lagi ~ lengkung nambah

03:31:658 (2,3) - kyknya yg ini masih bagus klo kayak 01:20:046 (2,3) - ~ bener juga

Normal :
00:40:046 (1) - Cobain dot merah pertama di x282y289, dot putih kedua di x305y229 ~ boleh juga

01:23:271 (4) - gak lengkung biasa aja ? ~ done

Never-ending Story :
02:25:206 (1,2,3) - gak segitiga aja memotong tengah? ~ ga tau nih, gw ganti sih

02:47:142 (3) - x396y280 ? ~ 432|280 , biar ga overlap sama 02:47:788 (2) -

Oke, ni sebenernya udh bagus. Moga bermanfaat XDXD ~ emang udah bagus dari kapan tau
BN mana BN x'D

BN jualan kacang kali

Thx

A r M i N

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A r M i N 2017-01-19T16:50:51+00:00

add corinn to tags

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2017-02-14T01:01:02+00:00

story
00:02:143 (2,3) - why not ctrl g rhythm
00:43:110 (2,3) - space the slider a bit further, too close xD
00:59:400 (6,3) - the overlap

03:34:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i think u should try to have a hitsound on every note on the stream, for the ones that are empty u can try drum hitnormal, it works quite well as a softer clap. also imo the stream is a bit overspaced since the sound isnt actually that strong

akitoshit
00:32:304 (1,2,3) - 00:37:465 (1,2) - ?
00:53:110 - i think its better to map these? 00:55:691 -
u map it out here anyway 00:54:239 (1) -
01:58:755 (1) - uh well it doesnt really matter but u can blanket the tail of 01:57:465 (1) - with this
02:52:788 (4,1) - why dont u just use a 1/1 here like everywhere else

theramdans

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theramdans 2017-03-27T08:55:42+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
story
00:02:143 (2,3) - why not ctrl g rhythm I see what u did there
00:43:110 (2,3) - space the slider a bit further, too close xD spaced out a bit
00:59:400 (6,3) - the overlap Agree on the overlap
03:34:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i think u should try to have a hitsound on every note on the stream, for the ones that are empty u can try drum hitnormal, it works quite well as a softer clap. also imo the stream is a bit overspaced since the sound isnt actually that strong I'll try the drum samples. I'll ask around for the spaced streams

thanks :3
Sorry, It's been so long. I've been busy since mid february
~

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Akitoshi 2017-03-27T09:06:03+00:00

@Kibbleru fixed all :3
gonna send updates to ram

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