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theramdans

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-08-18T14:39:52+00:00

Yukiyo wrote:
quick (useless most shittiest you ever seen suck teribble) mod from #meemhalp

Easy
01:52:304 (1,2) - weird angle imo ~ rotate it counter clockwise a bit
01:54:884 - shouldn't this be clickable ... prominent beat ~ I dont think so...
02:06:497 - you could hitsound such parts with "soft-slidertick" etc. (goes for whole map) ~ Sorry I dont hitsound sliderticks
02:54:078 (1) - move the red anchorpoint down abit (it has a slight corner rn) ~ moved down a bit

Normal
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Hard
00:34:723 (7,8,1) - stack correctly ? :^) ~ Whooppss , my bad

Insane
00:00:692 (1,2) - close blanket ... 00:01:659 (3) - far blanket? why
tbh... to tired rn ... Good Night ~ Fixed in a way, somehow

I'm so useless ~ You arent, thank you

CircleChu

190 posts

Joined May 2012

CircleChu 2016-08-26T15:13:01+00:00

Take my stars. You need them more than me

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-08-26T15:27:08+00:00

CircleChu wrote:
Take my stars. You need them more than me

big huge thanks <3

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

domSaur 2016-08-26T15:45:19+00:00

how2mod

[Neverending Story]

00:08:917 (2) - ctrl+g. the beat here is just as strong as the 1/1 before it so maybe you can reverse it for emphasis and also makes the transition to 00:09:240 (3,1) - less awkward.
00:31:981 (6) - maybe you could move this sliiightly away from the head of 00:31:658 (5) -
01:19:562 (4) - not just a clap, but also a vocal start is at a sliderend. maybe switch 01:19:400 (3,4) - ?
01:21:013 (5) - move this slightly lower(just y-axis lower) at least so it doesn't look oddly far from 01:21:175 (6,7,1) -
01:46:013 (2) - ctrl+g as well to maybe follow the up-down motion you've been doing on 01:45:046 (3,4,1) -
02:25:207 (5) - maybe NC. the entire "in your eyes" pretty much sounds like a section of its own anyway.
02:38:029 - note maybe? i think there's a sound here
same thing for 02:40:610 - 02:43:191 - 02:45:771 -
02:43:917 - i have doubts about leaving this unmapped but nvm...
02:50:207 (1,2) - maybe invert these 180 degrees for better flow. the movement between 02:50:046 (5,1) - feels rly awkward and inverting so mimics the motion you'll do in hitting 02:48:594 (6,1) - *
02:54:239 (1) - neaten this up. the right side feels overly curved xd
03:23:594 (3) - also neaten this up as well(may as well level it to the tail of (2).not gonna explain since i think you know wat i mean
03:23:594 (3) - drum at end?
03:31:175 (4) - refer to the 3rd bullet.
the entire last kiai was rly strong so maybe spacing out all the 2-circle hits might be nice

*im probably just talking out of my ass on this.

dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-08-26T17:30:35+00:00

Yo, NM from my queue <3

General

03:50:691 - I think there's a timing decrease or offset change here, it messes up the click time for a note like 03:51:013 (3) - on the easy, please look into this <3

Easy

00:43:917 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't this be the same as 00:32:304 (1,2) - for consistency? I like the break thingy

01:05:852 (4) - NC, you nc'ed every 2nd measure up untill now. for reference, you nc'ed 01:11:013 (1) -
01:15:852 (1,2) - Switch NC
01:24:078 (1) - The spinner seems pretty long for what the song is doing. Maybe not even have it in the first place, and do an extended break? 01:24:884 - The initial break starts on this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5941416 <-- This is the idea.
02:01:981 (3,1) - Think you did a DS fuck up here xd make it 1.1 <3
02:09:723 (4,2) - Make those overlap for aesthetics :3
02:26:013 (1) - The same kind of thing COULD apply here, but here the way you do it works well.
03:04:239 (1,2,3,4) - Feels a little off to follow vocals here imo, since you did pure 2/1's like 8 times before this.

Normal

00:29:723 (1) - Looks a little weird xd (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5941507)
00:34:562 (4,1) - Start the long slider on 00:34:884 - and do a "kickslider" from 00:34:562 - to 00:34:723 -
00:56:497 (3) - Ending's offscreen, it's unrankable like that.
01:05:529 (1) - downbeat on reverse?

01:10:207 (5,1) - omg that looks like my mapping style lol I love this xd
01:15:852 (1) - Same thing as 1:05, I would suggest changing this a bit :3
01:24:078 (1) - Same suggestion about this spinner as before, it seems a little long compared to what the music offers.
01:51:658 (3,1) - Looks a little weird together.
02:38:755 (1) - Hi, I'm off-screen
03:38:755 (2,3,4,5) - do the same here as 03:36:175 (2,3,4) -

Hard

02:38:755 (1) - Off-screen

There's not too much here, but a few of the jumps that are like 0,2x higher than the standard DS are a little weird to play, I understand the emphasis stuff which is why I didn't mention any of them xd.

Akitoshi's Insane

Sup Aki <3

00:33:594 (1,4) - The reverse arrow needs to be visible, also applies to these types of reverses xd
00:57:949 (6) - I'd move this a bit to the right, looks a little weird the way it is atm (Idea: osu.ppy.sh/ss/5941918)
01:54:884 (1) - I'd give this a small SV decrease and then scale the slider down a little bit, 'cause the song doesn't really support a "normal speed" slider that's this long imo :3
02:08:110 (2,1) - The visibility thing again, this time there's no hitburst tho, so it's not unrankable, still not advised tho xd

I like :3

Neverending Story

00:33:917 (5,1) - Inconsistent, I'd advice making making both a kickslider or both a single tap
01:04:078 (4,5,1) - Transition is odd considering 1 is stronger than 5 (5,1 should have more spacing than 4,5)
01:19:884 (1,5,2) - Messy overlaps, I'd do some perfect overlaps here :3
01:34:239 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent with 01:36:820 (1,2,3) - and 01:39:400 (1,2,3) -
02:04:562 (3,1) - Make this spacing the same as 02:04:078 (1,2) - so it's easier to read.
02:43:755 (5,1) - Wouldn't a stack be better here since the break seems very strong here.
02:46:658 (1,2,3,4) - There's some breaks in the song in a section like this too.
03:13:917 (2) - The music doesn't support the last white tick.

I hope I could help, the set is really consistent, and I like it a lot ^^ Good luck with the mapset!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-08-26T17:54:45+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane
Sup Aki <3

00:33:594 (1,4) - The reverse arrow needs to be visible, also applies to these types of reverses xd about this, yeah. gonna hear more opinions since I saw that similar trick (stack with reverse) was used when they qualified before here p/5412693
00:57:949 (6) - I'd move this a bit to the right, looks a little weird the way it is atm (Idea: osu.ppy.sh/ss/5941918) ok
01:54:884 (1) - I'd give this a small SV decrease and then scale the slider down a little bit, 'cause the song doesn't really support a "normal speed" slider that's this long imo :3 deleted slider xd
02:08:110 (2,1) - The visibility thing again, this time there's no hitburst tho, so it's not unrankable, still not advised tho xd ^^

I like :3

Thank you!

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204,227,224884,2,0,L|327:219,1,92.0000017547608,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,208,225207,5,2,0:0:0:0:
338,310,225368,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,166,225529,2,0,B|373:120|373:120|358:56,1,92.0000017547608,10|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
181,36,225852,6,0,B|120:11|37:38|37:38|67:68,1,184.000003509522,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,148,226336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,99,226497,2,0,P|292:57|291:8,1,92.0000017547608,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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205,249,227142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,164,227304,6,0,P|413:153|506:224,1,184.000003509522,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,326,227788,2,0,P|375:320|334:288,1,92.0000017547608,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,183,228110,1,8,0:3:0:0:
191,334,228271,1,8,0:3:0:0:
191,334,228352,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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32,190,228917,1,2,0:0:0:0:
154,127,229078,2,0,B|163:82|163:82|154:22,1,92.0000017547608,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,306,230046,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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341,86,230691,1,2,0:3:0:0:
356,73,230771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,64,230852,1,8,0:3:0:0:
393,60,230933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,59,231013,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,231175,12,0,234884,0:0:0:0:

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-08-27T08:06:20+00:00

domSaur wrote:
how2mod

[Neverending Story]
00:08:917 (2) - ctrl+g. the beat here is just as strong as the 1/1 before it so maybe you can reverse it for emphasis and also makes the transition to 00:09:240 (3,1) - less awkward. ~it goes the other way previously hehe
00:31:981 (6) - maybe you could move this sliiightly away from the head of 00:31:658 (5) - ~okey
01:19:562 (4) - not just a clap, but also a vocal start is at a sliderend. maybe switch 01:19:400 (3,4) - ? ~i wanna emphasize the drums more there, so no change
01:21:013 (5) - move this slightly lower(just y-axis lower) at least so it doesn't look oddly far from 01:21:175 (6,7,1) - ~good point
01:46:013 (2) - ctrl+g as well to maybe follow the up-down motion you've been doing on 01:45:046 (3,4,1) - ~allright
02:25:207 (5) - maybe NC. the entire "in your eyes" pretty much sounds like a section of its own anyway. ~good point too
02:38:029 - note maybe? i think there's a sound here ~there really is a sound here
same thing for 02:40:610 - 02:43:191 - 02:45:771 - ~those places too
02:43:917 - i have doubts about leaving this unmapped but nvm...~filled
02:50:207 (1,2) - maybe invert these 180 degrees for better flow. the movement between 02:50:046 (5,1) - feels rly awkward and inverting so mimics the motion you'll do in hitting 02:48:594 (6,1) - * ~fixed somehow
02:54:239 (1) - neaten this up. the right side feels overly curved xd ~It is, but i changed the slider shape instead
03:23:594 (3) - also neaten this up as well(may as well level it to the tail of (2).not gonna explain since i think you know wat i mean ~done
03:23:594 (3) - drum at end? ~I agree!
03:31:175 (4) - refer to the 3rd bullet. ~same reason
the entire last kiai was rly strong so maybe spacing out all the 2-circle hits might be nice ~might try
*im probably just talking out of my ass on this. ~idk
Spork Lover wrote:
Yo, NM from my queue <3

General

[b]03:50:691 - I think there's a timing decrease or offset change here, it messes up the click time for a note like 03:51:013 (3) - on the easy, please look into this <3 [b]No, there isnt :(

[/b]
Easy
00:43:917 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't this be the same as 00:32:304 (1,2) - for consistency? I like the break thingy I made them same without the break
01:05:852 (4) - NC, you nc'ed every 2nd measure up untill now. for reference, you nc'ed 01:11:013 (1) - that is because the lyrics werent done on that section,but ok, NC
01:15:852 (1,2) - Switch NC just realised it now
01:24:078 (1) - The spinner seems pretty long for what the song is doing. Maybe not even have it in the first place, and do an extended break? 01:24:884 - The initial break starts on this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5941416 <-- This is the idea. No , I like to put spinner here. And the spinner length is same as in normal diff
02:01:981 (3,1) - Think you did a DS fuck up here xd make it 1.1 <3 I think I did
02:09:723 (4,2) - Make those overlap for aesthetics :3 ~icwudt
02:26:013 (1) - The same kind of thing COULD apply here, but here the way you do it works well. ~thanks
03:04:239 (1,2,3,4) - Feels a little off to follow vocals here imo, since you did pure 2/1's like 8 times before this. Im not sure about this too :c

Normal
00:29:723 (1) - Looks a little weird xd (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5941507) ~is that kind of curve in the end not allowed?
00:34:562 (4,1) - Start the long slider on 00:34:884 - and do a "kickslider" from 00:34:562 - to 00:34:723 - No no no, it is ignoring vocal and a bit too complex
00:56:497 (3) - Ending's offscreen, it's unrankable like that. ~ayay captain
01:05:529 (1) - downbeat on reverse? Is that weird? I dont think so. It fits the vocal as well
01:10:207 (5,1) - omg that looks like my mapping style lol I love this xd ~<3
01:15:852 (1) - Same thing as 1:05, I would suggest changing this a bit :3 ~^
01:24:078 (1) - Same suggestion about this spinner as before, it seems a little long compared to what the music offers. I guess I can apply it to the easy diff too
01:51:658 (3,1) - Looks a little weird together. tweaked it a bit
02:38:755 (1) - Hi, I'm off-screen ~what are you talking about? :C
03:38:755 (2,3,4,5) - do the same here as 03:36:175 (2,3,4) - ~the vocal there doesnt provide me to do that

Hard

02:38:755 (1) - Off-screen

There's not too much here, but a few of the jumps that are like 0,2x higher than the standard DS are a little weird to play, I understand the emphasis stuff which is why I didn't mention any of them xd.

Neverending Story

00:33:917 (5,1) - Inconsistent, I'd advice making making both a kickslider or both a single tap ~both kick
01:04:078 (4,5,1) - Transition is odd considering 1 is stronger than 5 (5,1 should have more spacing than 4,5) ~done
01:19:884 (1,5,2) - Messy overlaps, I'd do some perfect overlaps here :3 ~done
01:34:239 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent with 01:36:820 (1,2,3) - and 01:39:400 (1,2,3) - ~the vocal is less significant on 01:36:820, as well as on 01:39:400 compared to the one on 01:34:239
02:04:562 (3,1) - Make this spacing the same as 02:04:078 (1,2) - so it's easier to read. ~done
02:43:755 (5,1) - Wouldn't a stack be better here since the break seems very strong here. made a slider there
02:46:658 (1,2,3,4) - There's some breaks in the song in a section like this too. ~where?
03:13:917 (2) - The music doesn't support the last white tick. ~omg you are right

I hope I could help, the set is really consistent, and I like it a lot ^^ Good luck with the mapset!

thanks, both you deserve some respect ayey

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-08-28T09:54:44+00:00

ayyy

20:21 Rizen: ok
20:21 Rizen: I have my notes ready
20:21 *Rizen is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1054349 nano x buzzG - Dive In Your Eyes [Neverending Story]]
20:21 theramdans: im ready :O
20:21 theramdans: to get scolded ;w;
20:21 theramdans: if any
20:22 Rizen: 00:19:078 (5,6,1) - spacing emphasis is kinda messed up here
20:22 Rizen: should be bigger space between 6-1 than 5-6
20:23 Rizen: try moving 00:19:239 (6) - to somewhere like x:302 y:16
20:23 Rizen: still gives you increased spacing of 6 and fixes spacing ratio
20:23 theramdans: got it
20:23 theramdans: I'll just stack it with the previous (3)
20:23 theramdans: problem solved :P
20:24 Rizen: that would cause unusual flow between 00:19:239 (6,1) - 
20:25 theramdans: hmm
20:25 theramdans: I see
20:25 theramdans: isnt that, too close to the top?
20:25 theramdans: like uuuup there
20:26 Rizen: alternatively, you can do something like [http://puu.sh/qRaQ9/ec8005c146.jpg this]
20:28 theramdans: hmm unstacked back-forth
20:28 theramdans: nice!
20:28 Rizen: oo
20:28 Rizen: carrying on
20:29 Rizen:  00:21:658 (5,6,7,8,1) - can be neater plss
20:29 theramdans: 'w' I tried ;w;
20:29 theramdans: im bad at making streams
20:30 Rizen: here's a tip
20:30 Rizen: 00:21:658 (5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g these
20:30 Rizen: then use distance snapping to make a nice curve
20:31 theramdans: that is what I did
20:31 Rizen: then ctrl+g back when done
20:31 theramdans: but with no ctrl+g ing
20:31 Rizen: http://puu.sh/qRb07/04b4fd73c0.jpg
20:34 Rizen: may i carry on? ;d
20:35 theramdans: I think Im done
20:35 theramdans: go on
20:36 Rizen: 01:04:078 (4) - 
20:36 Rizen: you can probably 
20:36 Rizen: space 01:04:078 (4) - more to the left
20:36 theramdans: more to the left I guess?
20:36 theramdans: i knew it
20:36 Rizen: created more emphasis at 01:04:078 (4,5) - 
20:37 Rizen: 01:07:465 (7,1) - spacing too much ;;
20:40 theramdans: done
20:40 Rizen: 01:39:078 (1,2,3,4,1) - 
20:40 Rizen: neat stream plsss
20:43 theramdans: I think I did
20:43 Rizen: 01:40:852 (3,4,5) - emphasis againn
20:43 Rizen: could stack circle 4 on 01:40:691 (2) - 
20:44 theramdans: what If I
20:44 theramdans: make the 6 a bit apart from 5
20:45 Rizen: 6 isn't even part of this problem ;;
20:45 Rizen: too less spacing between 01:41:175 (4,5) - 
20:45 theramdans: k I'll leave it as it is
20:45 theramdans: oo we need more?
20:46 theramdans: I stacked 4 on 2
20:46 Rizen: 01:41:336 (5,6) - 
20:46 Rizen: can probably make two arrowheads pointing at each other
20:47 theramdans: meaning?
20:47 Rizen: hold on
20:47 theramdans: I dont quite get it..
20:47 Rizen: imma screenshot
20:47 theramdans: ok
20:48 Rizen: http://puu.sh/qRbyp/84c34ed3dd.jpg
20:50 theramdans: ahh
20:50 theramdans: followpoint :D
20:50 theramdans: done
20:51 Rizen: oh, next one is easy
20:51 Rizen: 01:46:013 (2,5) - stack plss
20:51 Rizen: for neatness
20:52 theramdans: 2 to 5 or 5 to 2
20:52 Rizen: 5 to 2
20:52 Rizen: because 2 is already blanketing 01:45:529 (1) - 
20:53 theramdans: it is not neat
20:53 theramdans: overlap with 3 and too close to 4 ;w;
20:54 Rizen: huh?
20:54 Rizen: http://puu.sh/qRbMl/26c7565dac.jpg
20:55 theramdans: did you mean
20:55 Rizen: stack the tails
20:55 theramdans: stack 5's head to 2's tail
20:55 Rizen: tails on tails
20:56 theramdans: oo better flow
20:56 theramdans: sorry for that :D
20:56 Rizen: :v
20:58 Rizen: 01:54:562 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe
20:58 Rizen: creates spacing between 01:54:723 (4,1) - 
20:59 theramdans: oo better flow as well
20:59 Rizen: 01:58:755 (1,2,3) - polarity
21:00 Rizen: the 3/4 transition
21:00 Rizen: currently isn't very obvious
21:00 theramdans: this is the trickiest part in the song
21:00 Rizen: 01:58:271 (4,1,2) - spacings are similar between 4-1 and 1-2
21:00 theramdans: should I make things further apart?
21:01 Rizen: with polarity, try reducing spacing of 01:58:755 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
21:01 Rizen: hold up, lemme find a video explaining it
21:01 theramdans: I'll try
21:01 Rizen: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
21:02 Rizen: audio is trash
21:02 Rizen: but
21:02 theramdans: i cant watch video, bad net + low quota
21:02 Rizen: good tips
21:02 Rizen: oh
21:02 theramdans: just tell me what to do
21:03 Rizen: just reduce size of triangle 01:58:755 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
21:03 Rizen: that will reduce spacing of 01:58:755 (1,2) - and make it easier to read
21:03 Rizen: that it's on blue ticks
21:04 theramdans: I place 2  bit lower
21:04 theramdans: closer to both 1 and 3
21:05 Rizen: ok
21:05 Rizen: consider ctrl+g'ing 02:14:562 (2) - 
21:06 Rizen: by ctrl+Ging, it will create an anticlockwise flow, which would carry on to 02:15:046 (3) - 
21:07 theramdans: yeah it brings an anti flow to the following streams
21:07 theramdans: good job!
21:07 Rizen: PLS
21:08 Rizen: 02:46:819 (2,3) - emphasis would be nice for the two guitar sounds
21:08 Rizen: (spacing)
21:08 theramdans: made 1-2-3 a triangle
21:09 Rizen: the two sounds at 1 and 2 are much more prominent though
21:09 theramdans: yeah the sound on (3) is less significant, but it is there
21:10 theramdans: I could stack 3 to 2...
21:10 Rizen: or
21:10 Rizen: ctrl+g 02:46:819 (2,3) - 
21:10 Rizen: then ctrl+h 02:47:142 (4) - 
21:10 Rizen: and place back in same x/y co-ords
21:13 theramdans: I see
21:13 theramdans: done
21:13 Rizen: do you think it works better?
21:13 Rizen: you are free to decline ya know ;d
21:13 theramdans: it does
21:14 Rizen: 03:02:788 (4,5,1) - same issue with 00:19:078 (5,6,1 - 
21:14 theramdans: nah it does feel better
21:15 Rizen: how spacing between 5-1 should be larger than spacing betweel 4-5
21:15 Rizen: as 03:03:110 (1) - is a downbeat
21:17 theramdans: dine
21:17 theramdans: done
21:18 theramdans: and I think I found another one similar to that
21:18 Rizen: ah
21:18 theramdans: 03:04:239 (5,1) -
21:19 Rizen: with that one, could of explained sharp change in flow is used to emphasis that object
21:19 theramdans: stacked 5 to 3's head
21:20 Rizen: that works too
21:20 theramdans: provides some kind of back-forth combo
21:20 theramdans: but this time it is with sliders
21:20 Rizen: I found some inconsistency things though
21:21 Rizen: 03:15:852 (5,1) -  vs 01:04:239 (5,1) - 
21:21 Rizen: literally same lyrics but you stack in one and not the other
21:21 Rizen: seems you stack for a majority of them
21:22 Rizen: so probably better off stacking them all (or  just the relevant ones)
21:22 theramdans: more back-forth incoming
21:24 theramdans: I did
21:24 theramdans: I think
21:24 Rizen: kk
21:25 Rizen: 03:47:949 - audiable drums ;c
21:25 Rizen: would like an object at this point
21:25 theramdans: really...
21:26 theramdans: sliderend incoming
21:26 Rizen: yeah, that's fine to xdd
21:27 Rizen: 03:49:078 (4) -  maybe a 1/2 slider then circle would be better
21:27 Rizen: you don't do this for any other of the same parts as this in other kiais
21:29 theramdans: crap blanket incoming
21:30 theramdans: done
21:31 Rizen: ok, I think that comes to the ending of the diff
21:31 theramdans: 5.06 :O
21:31 Rizen: ayy
21:31 theramdans: can I update?
21:32 Rizen: go ahead
21:32 theramdans: done
21:34 Rizen: could 00:24:239 (5,6,1) - be another emphasis issue
21:38 Rizen: 02:53:271 (2) - blanket better orz
21:40 Rizen: I thought of a cool idea
21:40 Rizen: 03:12:626 (1,2,1,2) - 
21:40 Rizen: you know how the sounds are right ,left, left, right?
21:40 theramdans: done
21:41 Rizen: (with stereo sound)
21:41 Rizen: could judge placements of these based on those
21:41 theramdans: they are :O
21:41 theramdans: icwudt ~
21:42 theramdans: but the second pair had no pause
21:42 theramdans: the first had
21:44 Rizen: http://puu.sh/qRdyS/4c1593eac4.jpg
21:44 theramdans: I thought the similar idea
21:46 theramdans: done
21:46 theramdans: can I update again
21:46 Rizen: sure
21:47 theramdans: thanks for the awesome idea
21:47 Rizen: no worriesss
21:48 Rizen: duuude
21:48 Rizen: 03:13:594 (1,2) - 
21:48 Rizen: you got them the wrong way round
21:48 Rizen:  right, left, left, right
21:49 theramdans: that is r-l-r-l
21:49 Rizen: pretty sure the sounds are r-l-l-r
21:50 Rizen: I have headphones on mmm
21:50 theramdans: wait
21:50 theramdans: hang on
21:51 theramdans: I am deaf :D
21:51 Rizen: :<
21:51 theramdans: sorry for that ;w;
21:51 Rizen: we all make mistakes :s

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-08-30T11:00:46+00:00

(modded second time by HMT, you are lucky guy)

[highest diff]

00:30:852 (1) - kinda bad flow choose, it looks line linear inconsistent stuff what's playing not so good as could be. http://puu.sh/qTD4Q/f2f2032ec3.jpg. To make it fine you should make constant spacing between 00:30:368 (5) - and 00:30:852 (1) - . For example, something like http://puu.sh/qTDas/3bafc442ee.jpg
00:33:917 (5) - nc should be here instead of 00:34:078 (1) - ?
00:34:078 (1,2,3,4) - they looks kinda randomly, it's not so bad, just you could improve the structure, would be better way if you make 00:34:562 (4) - parallel with 00:34:239 (2) - ,as you did with 00:34:078 (1,3) - (oops they also not perfect parallel, should be fixed I guess)
00:36:497 (2) - for aesthetic you could move it to 161 312. Will look more neat cuz created blanket 00:37:142 (4) -
00:38:755 (4,5,1) - the distance before (5) should be more I guess. (5) is pretty hard beat so moving it to higher would be good idea
00:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - something similar as I said above, you could improve the structure here and do it more consistence
00:40:529 (4,2) - stack their for aesthetic
01:00:852 (1) - pretty ugly slider for me, you could improve the structuhe there, like this http://puu.sh/qTDKw/159bfa0abe.jpg instead
01:22:465 (6,1) - why so large spacing, when beats with more intense sounds have less spacing? I mean these beats 01:21:981 (3,5) - what has strong claps and for me they should be more emphasized. Actually 01:22:465 (6,1) - looks really overspaced now. And as I said you should switch the priority to 01:21:981 (3,6,1) - beats
01:23:594 (2) - this note also has vocal thing, so adding a whistle would be good idea
01:40:691 (2,4) - stacks like these doesn't look fine in game imo. It actually would be interesting if you will make a small overlap like http://puu.sh/qTEs9/c08156dbbc.jpg , it less confused and more interesting imo
01:41:658 (6) - this beat is pretty strong, should be more emphasized and spaced relatively 01:41:336 (5) -
01:41:981 (1) - bad slider share, looks bad, especially relatively 01:42:465 (3) - . Make this form same as 01:42:465 (3) - and it will look much better
01:43:433 (2) - emphasize pls, as I said above
01:58:271 (4,1,2) - given that you used 3/4 rhythm after the slider, this pattern now is reading pretty hard imo. You could make it easier for reading by making the flow and spacing before 01:58:755 (1) - more comfortable. The place like 327 42 should be ok
01:59:400 (5) - nc should be here insead of 01:59:642 (1) -
03:14:723 (3) - whistle cuz vocal
03:30:368 (1) - try to make elbow-sliders symmetrical, it would look more tidy http://puu.sh/qTGt3/bb3bbd8601.jpg
03:49:562 (6,1) - switch these nc's It would has more sense imo
I'd say pretty many repetitive things about linear flow/emphasizing. I think you should less use distance snapping ( especially in kiais) and try to make patterns with free spacing more times. For example, patterns like 01:03:917 (3,4,5) - might get much improvement if you use more spacing http://puu.sh/qTHcQ/8c66aafec0.jpg (it's pretty subjective, you can make some other jumps here). Anyway you have pretty fine patterns with free spacing like 01:07:788 (1,2,3,4) - , so try to use these more and your map will be better

gl

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-08-31T13:12:15+00:00

FCL wrote:

(modded second time by HMT, you are lucky guy)

[highest diff]
00:30:852 (1) - kinda bad flow choose, it looks line linear inconsistent stuff what's playing not so good as could be. http://puu.sh/qTD4Q/f2f2032ec3.jpg. To make it fine you should make constant spacing between 00:30:368 (5) - and 00:30:852 (1) - . For example, something like http://puu.sh/qTDas/3bafc442ee.jpg
00:33:917 (5) - nc should be here instead of 00:34:078 (1) - ?
00:34:078 (1,2,3,4) - they looks kinda randomly, it's not so bad, just you could improve the structure, would be better way if you make 00:34:562 (4) - parallel with 00:34:239 (2) - ,as you did with 00:34:078 (1,3) - (oops they also not perfect parallel, should be fixed I guess)
00:36:497 (2) - for aesthetic you could move it to 161 312. Will look more neat cuz created blanket 00:37:142 (4) -
00:38:755 (4,5,1) - the distance before (5) should be more I guess. (5) is pretty hard beat so moving it to higher would be good idea
00:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - something similar as I said above, you could improve the structure here and do it more consistence
00:40:529 (4,2) - stack their for aesthetic
01:00:852 (1) - pretty ugly slider for me, you could improve the structuhe there, like this http://puu.sh/qTDKw/159bfa0abe.jpg instead
01:22:465 (6,1) - why so large spacing, when beats with more intense sounds have less spacing? I mean these beats 01:21:981 (3,5) - what has strong claps and for me they should be more emphasized. Actually 01:22:465 (6,1) - looks really overspaced now. And as I said you should switch the priority to 01:21:981 (3,6,1) - beats
01:23:594 (2) - this note also has vocal thing, so adding a whistle would be good idea
01:40:691 (2,4) - stacks like these doesn't look fine in game imo. It actually would be interesting if you will make a small overlap like http://puu.sh/qTEs9/c08156dbbc.jpg , it less confused and more interesting imo
01:41:658 (6) - this beat is pretty strong, should be more emphasized and spaced relatively 01:41:336 (5) -
01:41:981 (1) - bad slider share, looks bad, especially relatively 01:42:465 (3) - . Make this form same as 01:42:465 (3) - and it will look much better
01:43:433 (2) - emphasize pls, as I said above
01:58:271 (4,1,2) - given that you used 3/4 rhythm after the slider, this pattern now is reading pretty hard imo. You could make it easier for reading by making the flow and spacing before 01:58:755 (1) - more comfortable. The place like 327 42 should be ok
01:59:400 (5) - nc should be here insead of 01:59:642 (1) -
03:14:723 (3) - whistle cuz vocal
03:30:368 (1) - try to make elbow-sliders symmetrical, it would look more tidy http://puu.sh/qTGt3/bb3bbd8601.jpg
03:49:562 (6,1) - switch these nc's It would has more sense imo
I'd say pretty many repetitive things about linear flow/emphasizing. I think you should less use distance snapping ( especially in kiais) and try to make patterns with free spacing more times. For example, patterns like 01:03:917 (3,4,5) - might get much improvement if you use more spacing http://puu.sh/qTHcQ/8c66aafec0.jpg (it's pretty subjective, you can make some other jumps here). Anyway you have pretty fine patterns with free spacing like 01:07:788 (1,2,3,4) - , so try to use these more and your map will be better
gl

Thanks, all mods accepted, they are really good
Damn Halycon Modding Team has good modders

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2016-08-31T15:17:15+00:00

ayy a free check~

[- -

General - -]

- There's a checked widescreen support on Akitoshi's Insane and Neverending Story diffs, and the others aren't checked so... uncheck them all?
- Okay, seems fine!

[- -

Normal - -]

00:55:207 (1) - Optional objective: Oh, I probably would like to move this slider down a little bit for the small structure and avoiding a little awkward closure of the slider ;p idk because the next slong slider is quite pretty much to the bottom. Nearly close to tiny-overlap imo. But that's just my opinion.
01:36:820 (1) - That anchoring on the slider is pretty steep tbh, more steeper than any other sliders tho. I literally prefer moving those two red slider points away to avoid manipulating SV somehow.
02:05:046 (4,1) - For the patterning consistency, this can possibly be some stacks just as how you did on the other two kiai pre-verses. Don't worry, it is still readable for normal players! As long as the playability is the same as the other similar track patterns~
02:46:658 - I have the feeling that this part of the track is probably mappable imho. Well if it seems a bit hard to map for you because of the complex drumming, you could at least just use some simple long sliders rather than "trying to" follow the drums. Well, how about using this kind of rhythm on this part? It'd sound pretty much better mapping the emptiness~

[- -

Hard - -]

00:45:046 (9,1) - Optional objective: Not very important, not really necessary, and not major. But... ;3/
01:02:626 (1,2,3,1) - I'm just wondering why the opposed spacing took all over the good emphasis here. Like, (3) and (1) has a stronger intensity into the kiai but it's low-spaced. And the previous notes are quite bigger than this tho. So I literally suggest spacing it out, or at least balance it with the 1.35x you've did previously.
01:32:626 (3,5) - You can space this out too, if you can only see it a bit deeper on this one. You should at least try giving it a little more structure for the curving circles on this one. Something like this should do. Watch over the next notes~
01:59:400 (4) - Would've sounded a little better if this were to have a reverse arrow for filling up a little more of the rhythm composition. It won't hurt the playability of the next triplet, dw
02:07:465 (1) - I highly do not recommend these, but skipping sth especially a downbeat is really out of bound of the rhythm, at least to me. You should've used some notes like circles and a single slider here. I probably tried this one, and it literally sounds more better and accurate for this part... IMO.
02:38:755 (1) - I'm very very very sure this slider is totally off-screen on a standard client. Probably it's borders ofc, I highly demand a placement change of this slider or rotating it clockwise by 45.

k i like the song
gl ily ramdans

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-08-31T15:40:36+00:00

Cerulean Veyron wrote:
ayy a free check~

[- - General - -]
- There's a checked widescreen support on Akitoshi's Insane and Neverending Story diffs, and the others aren't checked so... uncheck them all?
- Okay, seems fine!

[- - Normal - -]
00:55:207 (1) - Optional objective: Oh, I probably would like to move this slider down a little bit for the small structure and avoiding a little awkward closure of the slider ;p idk because the next slong slider is quite pretty much to the bottom. Nearly close to tiny-overlap imo. But that's just my opinion. ~ put more down
01:36:820 (1) - That anchoring on the slider is pretty steep tbh, more steeper than any other sliders tho. I literally prefer moving those two red slider points away to avoid manipulating SV somehow. true, too curvy
02:05:046 (4,1) - For the patterning consistency, this can possibly be some stacks just as how you did on the other two kiai pre-verses. Don't worry, it is still readable for normal players! As long as the playability is the same as the other similar track patterns~ ~But I dont like it if the 4 is stacked to 1's head
02:46:658 - I have the feeling that this part of the track is probably mappable imho. Well if it seems a bit hard to map for you because of the complex drumming, you could at least just use some simple long sliders rather than "trying to" follow the drums. Well, how about using this kind of rhythm on this part? It'd sound pretty much better mapping the emptiness~ ~if I mapped that part assuming I map it from the start of the drum sounds, it would have too little recovery time after the spinner before it. More problems lol

[- - Hard - -]
00:45:046 (9,1) - Optional objective: Not very important, not really necessary, and not major. But... ;3/ ~ICWUDT
01:02:626 (1,2,3,1) - I'm just wondering why the opposed spacing took all over the good emphasis here. Like, (3) and (1) has a stronger intensity into the kiai but it's low-spaced. And the previous notes are quite bigger than this tho. So I literally suggest spacing it out, or at least balance it with the 1.35x you've did previously. ~fixed somehow
01:32:626 (3,5) - You can space this out too, if you can only see it a bit deeper on this one. You should at least try giving it a little more structure for the curving circles on this one. Something like this should do. Watch over the next notes~ ~No overlap now
01:59:400 (4) - Would've sounded a little better if this were to have a reverse arrow for filling up a little more of the rhythm composition. It won't hurt the playability of the next triplet, dw ~this is good as it is
02:07:465 (1) - I highly do not recommend these, but skipping sth especially a downbeat is really out of bound of the rhythm, at least to me. You should've used some notes like circles and a single slider here. I probably tried this one, and it literally sounds more better and accurate for this part... IMO. ~ I'm following the vocals here, they are 1/1 there
02:38:755 (1) - I'm very very very sure this slider is totally off-screen on a standard client. Probably it's borders ofc, I highly demand a placement change of this slider or rotating it clockwise by 45. ~ I'm stupid, LOL

k i like the song
gl ily ramdans

~thanks veyron, Love my maps please

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-09-04T09:12:14+00:00

nano is love nano is life <3

Easy

00:29:078 (4) - this kind of killed the flow between 00:28:110 (3,1) - . Make it straight or less bendy (I prefer straight to synchronize the flow with 00:29:723 (1) -

01:12:626 (3) - killed the flow as well, i suggest to copy 01:13:917 (2) - slider or try to blanket 01:12:626 (3) - with 01:14:884 (3) -

02:45:368 (2) - delet this (?)

02:59:239 (1,3) - maybe BN will point out this overlap so let me point this out in advance

Normal

ding!

nothing wrong on this diff

Hard

03:17:465 (1,2) - a 1/2 beat would be ideal instead of this

02:35:529 (1) - ctrL+g

03:13:917 (2) - is there even a beat

03:17:465 (1,2) - same as 03:17:465 (1,2) - mod

Sliders like 00:49:723 (6,7) - aren't supposed to be distanced far, given the fact that it's Hard, also the fact that the BPM is somehow decent, gaining a point out for DT farmers at which they might not FC bcoz dealing with sliders mentioned

wew, i wasted 20 minutes writing this much (wtf, 20 minutes for mod like this only) kds pls tq

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-04T09:23:57+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
nano is love nano is life <3

Easy
00:29:078 (4) - this kind of killed the flow between 00:28:110 (3,1) - . Make it straight or less bendy (I prefer straight to synchronize the flow with 00:29:723 (1) - ~straightened

01:12:626 (3) - killed the flow as well, i suggest to copy 01:13:917 (2) - slider or try to blanket 01:12:626 (3) - with 01:14:884 (3) - Copied slider

02:45:368 (2) - delet this (?) idk

02:59:239 (1,3) - maybe BN will point out this overlap so let me point this out in advance ~better with blanket

Normal
ding! ~DONG!

nothing wrong on this diff

Hard
03:17:465 (1,2) - a 1/2 beat would be ideal instead of this ~ hear that "Mys-tery" ? That is what I am following

02:35:529 (1) - ctrL+g ~really? Doing so made this harder

03:13:917 (2) - is there even a beat ~yes there is. Listen to it again after you sleep

03:17:465 (1,2) - same as 03:17:465 (1,2) - mod ~they are same...

Sliders like 00:49:723 (6,7) - aren't supposed to be distanced far, given the fact that it's Hard, also the fact that the BPM is somehow decent, gaining a point out for DT farmers at which they might not FC bcoz dealing with sliders mentioned I just dont like the overlaps

wew, i wasted 20 minutes writing this much (wtf, 20 minutes for mod like this only) kds pls tq

yeah you got kd for a sleepy mod, thanks

Nelka714

412 posts

Joined October 2014

Nelka714 2016-09-04T13:10:50+00:00

hi there

General

akitoshi's diff ends 1/2 beat longer than yours, but i prefer akitoshi's end time rather than yours. maybe extend all of your diffs' spinner 1/2 beat?
would be cool if every diffs' slider at 02:40:691 - have whistle on their body to emphasize the guitar sound.

00:12:626 (3) - imo it would sounds better if it started 1/2 beat later (at 00:12:788 - ) to follow the guitar sound.
same with another same pattern as 00:15:207 (2) - 00:17:788 (3) - etc.
00:14:239 (1) - from all section at here, this is the only one that mapped with 1/1 repeat slider instead of a circle and slider like 00:11:659 (1,2) - 00:16:820 (1,2) - 00:21:981 (1,2) - etc. maybe change it into circle and slider for consistency?
01:52:304 (1) - would be cool if it doesn't touch the scorebar.
02:45:368 (2) - forwarding it 1/2 beat to match the 3/2 rhythm feedback from 02:44:078 (1) - and shortening it into 1/1 repeat would rhythm better imo. http://puu.sh/qZknM/5d63011368.jpg

Normal

00:29:723 (1,4) - would be cool if 1 blanket 4's tail imo.
01:58:755 (1,2) - unsnapped slider repeat. readjusting both's lenght would fix it.
02:12:949 (1,3) - the overlap looks meh, for me. would be cooler if 3 blanket 1 like this (2 in pic is 3). if you agree, you might need to readjust 02:14:884 (4,5) - for spacing.
02:18:110 (1,3) - maybe try to blanket 1 on 3's tail? not something important tbh.
03:38:110 (1,3,4) - minor, but maybe move 3 into 152|11 so it won't touch 1 while keeping the spacing on 4.

Hard

00:10:691 (2) - i think it was supposed to be 1/4? if you think it's 1/3, then 00:10:691 (1,2,3,4) - on highest diff is supposed to be 1/3, i think. maybe readjust them to balance your snapping spread(?)
00:11:014 (3) - maybe nc this to empasize the downbeat.
00:54:562 (1,4) - swap nc to follow your "nc every 2 measures" patterning? might also want to un-nc 00:55:691 (1) - for it.
02:08:433 (2,3,4) - minor, but maybe equate 3's spacing between 2 and 4.
03:27:465 (1,2) - swap nc to follow your other diffs' nc patterning.

Akitoshi's Insane

00:25:691 (1,3) - isn't perfectly stacked tbh.
same with 01:25:529 (2,5) -
00:35:852 (1,2) - swap nc so the nc change happen at downbeat?
same with 00:41:013 (1,2) - 00:43:917 (4,1) - 00:51:336 (1,2) - 01:01:981 (5,1) - 02:03:917 (5,1) -
01:46:013 (4,1) - maybe swap nc to follow your "nc every after a measure" patterning here?
02:52:788 (4,1) - idk, but swapping the nc looks better, for me. probably because of your "nc every before a measure" patterning here...
also the only pattern that use circle + 1/2 slider rather than simply 1/1 slider in this section, just saying.
03:12:626 (1,2,1,2) - would be cool if the placement is "right-left-left-right". not something important, but i hope you get it.
03:29:723 (3) - a bit touching the health bar, i would say. maybe lower it a bit/others?

Neverending Modding

cs5 for free extra icon

jk pls no h8

00:11:014 (5) - same thing as in Hard.
00:36:497 (2,4) - the blanket could be improved, i guess.
00:39:884 (1,3) - swap nc to match 00:34:723 (6,1) - 's nc-ing.
00:56:820 (7,1) - swap nc?
same with 00:59:400 (6,1) - 01:00:691 (5,1) -
01:33:433 (4,1,4) - maybe either nc both 4 or un-nc 1. no important reason tbh.
01:51:658 (1) - the nc doesn't look important, for me. un-nc it?

i think that's all
i hope this helps a bit

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-04T14:09:26+00:00

Nelka714 wrote:
hi there

General
akitoshi's diff ends 1/2 beat longer than yours, but i prefer akitoshi's end time rather than yours. maybe extend all of your diffs' spinner 1/2 beat? ~good point
would be cool if every diffs' slider at 02:40:691 - have whistle on their body to emphasize the guitar sound.~ I dont like the sound of slider-whistle

00:12:626 (3) - imo it would sounds better if it started 1/2 beat later (at 00:12:788 - ) to follow the guitar sound. ~ It would make an awkward pause and a rather-harder-to-hit red tick slider, so nope
00:14:239 (1) - from all section at here, this is the only one that mapped with 1/1 repeat slider instead of a circle and slider like 00:11:659 (1,2) - 00:16:820 (1,2) - 00:21:981 (1,2) - etc. maybe change it into circle and slider for consistency? ~ Allrighty
01:52:304 (1) - would be cool if it doesn't touch the scorebar. ~ Right
02:45:368 (2) - forwarding it 1/2 beat to match the 3/2 rhythm feedback from 02:44:078 (1) - and shortening it into 1/1 repeat would rhythm better imo. http://puu.sh/qZknM/5d63011368.jpg~ Ugh 1/2 notes, nope

Normal
00:29:723 (1,4) - would be cool if 1 blanket 4's tail imo. ~ Im not really into blankets for this diff
01:58:755 (1,2) - unsnapped slider repeat. readjusting both's lenght would fix it. ~ They are snapped
02:12:949 (1,3) - the overlap looks meh, for me. would be cooler if 3 blanket 1 like this (2 in pic is 3). if you agree, you might need to readjust 02:14:884 (4,5) - for spacing. ~Im not sure too, I'll figure something out later
02:18:110 (1,3) - maybe try to blanket 1 on 3's tail? not something important tbh. ~ nope
03:38:110 (1,3,4) - minor, but maybe move 3 into 152|11 so it won't touch 1 while keeping the spacing on 4. ~ Cool

Hard
00:10:691 (2) - i think it was supposed to be 1/4? if you think it's 1/3, then 00:10:691 (1,2,3,4) - on highest diff is supposed to be 1/3, i think. maybe readjust them to balance your snapping spread(?) ~ Ok I'll skip the 1/3 for consistency
00:11:014 (3) - maybe nc this to empasize the downbeat. ~ Nice
00:54:562 (1,4) - swap nc to follow your "nc every 2 measures" patterning? might also want to un-nc 00:55:691 (1) - for it. ~ thanks for the hint
02:08:433 (2,3,4) - minor, but maybe equate 3's spacing between 2 and 4. ~ Whooops my bad
03:27:465 (1,2) - swap nc to follow your other diffs' nc patterning.~ My bad #2

Neverending Modding
cs5 for free extra icon ~ Sorry I dont do cs5

jk pls no h8
00:11:014 (5) - same thing as in Hard. ~ Kept them as 1/4
00:36:497 (2,4) - the blanket could be improved, i guess. ~ Yeah I thing I did
00:39:884 (1,3) - swap nc to match 00:34:723 (6,1) - 's nc-ing.
00:56:820 (7,1) - swap nc? ~ Sorry nope
same with 00:59:400 (6,1) - 01:00:691 (5,1) - ~ nope for these too
01:33:433 (4,1,4) - maybe either nc both 4 or un-nc 1. no important reason tbh. ~ well, un-ncing (1) is a no-no,so 4 to go
01:51:658 (1) - the nc doesn't look important, for me. un-nc it? ~ It does for me

i think that's all
i hope this helps a bit

thanks you

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-09-04T14:17:26+00:00

Nelka714 wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane
00:25:691 (1,3) - isn't perfectly stacked tbh.
same with 01:25:529 (2,5) -
00:35:852 (1,2) - swap nc so the nc change happen at downbeat?
same with 00:41:013 (1,2) - 00:43:917 (4,1) - 00:51:336 (1,2) - ~~01:01:981 (5,1) -~~ ~~02:03:917 (5,1) -~~ last two is intentional
01:46:013 (4,1) - maybe swap nc to follow your "nc every after a measure" patterning here?
02:52:788 (4,1) - idk, but swapping the nc looks better, for me. probably because of your "nc every before a measure" patterning here...
also the only pattern that use circle + 1/2 slider rather than simply 1/1 slider in this section, just saying.this one is fine imo
03:12:626 (1,2,1,2) - would be cool if the placement is "right-left-left-right". not something important, but i hope you get it. yeah i get it but no thnx xd
03:29:723 (3) - a bit touching the health bar, i would say. maybe lower it a bit/others? I went to testplay and what, they're not tbh.

no comment = fixed thanks

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Blitzfrog

388 posts

Joined March 2016

Blitzfrog 2016-09-05T05:36:10+00:00

I guess I will only do 2 difficulties, too many in there and song is quite long, sorry

Good job though, very nicely mapped

Easy

Perfectly Playable

Normal

03:09:562 (5,6) - I would stack these, makes more sense to me
03:51:013 (1) - I would stack this note as the music has 2 sets of 2 beats in the background, makes it more connected

Neverending Story

00:10:691 (9) - I would remove the combo here as the stanza in the music didn't change at all, it also connects the 2 reverse slider drum beats to the guitar sliders in "1 phrasing"

00:19:239 (6) - I would stack this(Since the drum kind of repeats) or move it away as it looks quite awkward

e.g:

01:53:755 (3) - Swap this hit circle with the slider after it is a strong beat and the music repeats itself without changing, it also doesn't interfere with the jump patterns after it

02:13:594 (3) - Try move this to about (80, 80) and swap positions with 02:13:433 (2) , makes it smoother

03:16:497 (2) ~ 03:17:142 (5) - I would either make this a similar pattern to 03:15:207 (2) ~ 03:16:013 (1) or change the previous back and forth to make more sense.

Hope I was able to help

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-05T15:29:26+00:00

Blitzfrog wrote:
I guess I will only do 2 difficulties, too many in there and song is quite long, sorry

Good job though, very nicely mapped

Easy
Perfectly Playable ~ HOLY- thanks

Normal
03:09:562 (5,6) - I would stack these, makes more sense to me ~ I dont like stacking something after an overlap on Normal
03:51:013 (1) - I would stack this note as the music has 2 sets of 2 beats in the background, makes it more connected hmm,same^

Neverending Story
00:10:691 (9) - I would remove the combo here as the stanza in the music didn't change at all, it also connects the 2 reverse slider drum beats to the guitar sliders in "1 phrasing" ~ good point

00:19:239 (6) - I would stack this(Since the drum kind of repeats) or move it away as it looks quite awkward ~ it was stacked before, and it was placed as if it were a jump before that first before, so Im kinda confused here

e.g:

01:53:755 (3) - Swap this hit circle with the slider after it is a strong beat and the music repeats itself without changing, it also doesn't interfere with the jump patterns after it ~ whoops my bad

02:13:594 (3) - Try move this to about (80, 80) and swap positions with 02:13:433 (2) , makes it smoother ~ I'll try

03:16:497 (2) ~ 03:17:142 (5) - I would either make this a similar pattern to 03:15:207 (2) ~ 03:16:013 (1) or change the previous back and forth to make more sense. ~They are good as it is

Hope I was able to help

You are, thanks a lot

Ashton

Ashton 2016-09-05T15:49:54+00:00

three stars for such a god like you!

I really need to chill on spending my stars xD 3 kudosu remaing

Time to farm kudosu!

btw a mod for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/482860 would be apprecieated because I spent kudosu on you?

birra

359 posts

Joined May 2011

birra 2016-09-06T17:21:38+00:00

happened to pass by after I spoke to an someone who's apparently your friend as well. (surprisingly tbvh?)

I'm not into map checks anymore, but I don't mind the map at all after I played it. Thus I'll just give you my only one left star here.
Please do not disappoint me with it LMFAO SMH. Goodluck. c:

KuroNeko1509

55 posts

Joined July 2014

KuroNeko1509 2016-09-06T20:23:04+00:00

NM from the queue
Nice maps, Mmmmm Nano~ Good luck ranking them <3 o/

Akitoshi's Insane

00:04:240 (4) - slider ends on the large downbeat sound, I think it should be clickable + if you do make it clickable add NC :^)
00:19:239 (5,6) - although triples before this part are ok, I feel like this particular triple doesn't have a sound to both of these notes, so I would suggest removing it >~<
00:52:626 (7) - the sound of this slider that youre following ends one tic after, I think you need to extend it to make one more return so instead of 2 returns you should have 3 :3 cuz it sounds better ->>>> http://puu.sh/r29t5/5ac5995b7d.jpg
00:53:029 (1) - also make this slider 1 tic longer
00:55:529 (1,2) - I think this part should have 3 sliders if youre following vocal, It should probably look like this http://puu.sh/r29KK/18e675a934.jpg ; shes singing kasash taa yoova lol so I think 3 sliders like that fit better than 2 :3
00:57:465 (3,6) - this overlap looks a little messy so I think you should fix it by either making 6 right under 3 or moving 6 a bit farther so it will overlap like 1/2 of a note instead of 4/5 of a note lol
01:01:578 (4,5) - should be a triple imo, it makes tatatan sound lol so I'd suggest shortening slider before these notes and adding a note on red tic here 01:01:497 - to make a triple :3
01:02:142 (1,2,1,2) - I think these notes could be placed more creatively to emphasize the large drum sound ><;;
01:16:175 (1,2,3,4) - are these sliders purposely not straight? Cuz if they are I think they are off by too little, tilt them a little more cuz otherwise it looks like you just wanted to make them straight but didn't. If you wanted to make them straight, fix its a bit so they wont look a bit tilted lol *Nazi mod* J-just look at that http://puu.sh/r2ajc/ebec565b60.jpg lol
02:18:110 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:35:529 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
01:20:933 - fix this overlap too

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6032676
01:23:029 - I think adding a triple here would be better than the way it is rn because rhythm feels a bit off without it imo
02:03:917 (5,1,2,1) - this pattern can also be worked out in a better way, its OK as it is but if you'll think of any better way to place these 4 notes it would be great
02:15:529 (1,2) - fix blanket *Nazi mod*
02:40:122 - add a note cuz theres a sound , you followed the sound here 02:40:610 - but not here 02:40:122 - ; I think you should add a note there as well :3
02:40:184 - also fix this overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6032743
I think this slider 02:43:433 (6) - should start here 02:43:271 (5) - ->>>http://puu.sh/r2bi2/5dde129145.jpg
02:57:949 (1) - 02:55:368 (1) - 03:00:529 (1) - 03:03:110 (1) - 03:05:691 (1) - also I think you shouldn't ignore this large sound inside of these sliders. In most of the other cases where you placed these sliders I barely heard any sound, but in these cases the sound is pretty large, try to make it a reverse slider like this -> http://puu.sh/r2bvb/89c91c2688.jpg

Neverending Story

00:26:417 - I think you should move note 3 a bit to the right to make it look nicer, like this -> http://puu.sh/r2cdC/a832eea2ce.jpg instead of this http://puu.sh/r2cbG/2fb685c393.jpg /w\
00:33:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - If youre following this tiny bell or sound you should follow it here 00:34:723 - as well to be more consistent. What I'd suggest to do is adding one more 1/4 slider and removing those 2 notes that are following the drum sound :3
00:39:884 - same here, add another sound to stay more consistent with a bell sound
00:35:691 - red tic here has pretty large sound so it should be clickable, on the other hand, 00:35:368 - doesn't have much sound to it so id suggest make this into a slider and 00:35:691 - into a note :3 ->> http://puu.sh/r2cDM/b65d37db8b.jpg
01:37:384 - I'd suggest also go over your map and fix all the overlaps like this <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6032947
02:04:562 (3) - this note feels so awkward, I think it would be better if it was a slider that ends to a stream

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6032947 Because you cant ignore the sound it makes but as a single note it really feels awkward, so making it a slider imo is the best solution ><;;
02:25:852 (1) - I think you should delete this note and start spinner there, because it goes "EYEEEEESSS" lol so starting spinner there and ending it on 02:27:142 - would be the best

02:35:610 (2,3,4) - they don't have a sound, so it would be better to delete them.

03:34:884 (1) - I'd suggest replacing this slider with 3 notes cuz the stream sound is still going on until 03:35:046 - and this slider is covering it ><;;
03:51:013 - I think you should start a bootiful slider from here to 03:54:884 - and then from there to 04:00:046 - a spinner :3 I think that would be better;

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-08T14:34:01+00:00

KuroNeko1509 wrote:
NM from the queue
Nice maps, Mmmmm Nano~ Good luck ranking them <3 o/
Neverending Story
00:26:417 - I think you should move note 3 a bit to the right to make it look nicer, like this -> http://puu.sh/r2cdC/a832eea2ce.jpg instead of this http://puu.sh/r2cbG/2fb685c393.jpg /w\ ~ I'll try
00:33:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - If youre following this tiny bell or sound you should follow it here 00:34:723 - as well to be more consistent. What I'd suggest to do is adding one more 1/4 slider and removing those 2 notes that are following the drum sound :3 ~ Those drum sounds are strong, so they need to be clicked actively
00:39:884 - same here, add another sound to stay more consistent with a bell sound ~ Those drums are strong, dude. So strong that I could ignore the bells as well as making risky kikcsliders
00:35:691 - red tic here has pretty large sound so it should be clickable, on the other hand, 00:35:368 - doesn't have much sound to it so id suggest make this into a slider and 00:35:691 - into a note :3 ->> http://puu.sh/r2cDM/b65d37db8b.jpg ~ Slider on that red tick is also awkward to play, so I will just turn the (3) into two circles
01:37:384 - I'd suggest also go over your map and fix all the overlaps like this <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6032947 ~ I guess
02:04:562 (3) - this note feels so awkward, I think it would be better if it was a slider that ends to a stream http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6032947 Because you cant ignore the sound it makes but as a single note it really feels awkward, so making it a slider imo is the best solution ><;; ~ I think your screenshot link is broken. And no, I dont think a kikcslider fits that, a circle is fine as well
02:25:852 (1) - I think you should delete this note and start spinner there, because it goes "EYEEEEESSS" lol so starting spinner there and ending it on 02:27:142 - would be the best ~ nnnope, I dont want to ignore the drums and cymbals sound, they are pretty clickable and should be clicked and a circle is the best to represents them
02:35:610 (2,3,4) - they don't have a sound, so it would be better to delete them. ~ I agree!
03:34:884 (1) - I'd suggest replacing this slider with 3 notes cuz the stream sound is still going on until 03:35:046 - and this slider is covering it ><;; ~ There are 3 'tatatam' sound there, fine
03:51:013 - I think you should start a bootiful slider from here to 03:54:884 - and then from there to 04:00:046 - a spinner :3 I think that would be better; ~ Too long for an outro if you ask me, and I didnt map any sound after 04:00:046, so I'd better keep my consistency by mapping up to 03:54:884 -

thanks thanks!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-09-08T14:48:44+00:00

KuroNeko1509 wrote:
NM from the queue
Nice maps, Mmmmm Nano~ Good luck ranking them <3 o/

Akitoshi's Insane
00:04:240 (4) - slider ends on the large downbeat sound, I think it should be clickable + if you do make it clickable add NC :^) 00:04:240 - is more worthy to be clickable
00:19:239 (5,6) - although triples before this part are ok, I feel like this particular triple doesn't have a sound to both of these notes, so I would suggest removing it >~< i thnk its still audible even i played them with 25% play rate
00:52:626 (7) - the sound of this slider that youre following ends one tic after, I think you need to extend it to make one more return so instead of 2 returns you should have 3 :3 cuz it sounds better ->>>> http://puu.sh/r29t5/5ac5995b7d.jpg that will make players confusing tbh
00:53:029 (1) - also make this slider 1 tic longer im not fan of 3/4 slider ;3
00:55:529 (1,2) - I think this part should have 3 sliders if youre following vocal, It should probably look like this http://puu.sh/r29KK/18e675a934.jpg ; shes singing kasash taa yoova lol so I think 3 sliders like that fit better than 2 :3 00:52:949 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - all of them are instruments so i want to keep my consistency.
00:57:465 (3,6) - this overlap looks a little messy so I think you should fix it by either making 6 right under 3 or moving 6 a bit farther so it will overlap like 1/2 of a note instead of 4/5 of a note lol
01:01:578 (4,5) - should be a triple imo, it makes tatatan sound lol so I'd suggest shortening slider before these notes and adding a note on red tic here 01:01:497 - to make a triple :3 nah
01:02:142 (1,2,1,2) - I think these notes could be placed more creatively to emphasize the large drum sound ><;; but that's how I emphasize them lul
01:16:175 (1,2,3,4) - are these sliders purposely not straight? Cuz if they are I think they are off by too little, tilt them a little more cuz otherwise it looks like you just wanted to make them straight but didn't. If you wanted to make them straight, fix its a bit so they wont look a bit tilted lol *Nazi mod* J-just look at that http://puu.sh/r2ajc/ebec565b60.jpg lol all intentional.
02:18:110 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:35:529 (1,2,3,4) - ^^ ^
01:20:933 - fix this overlap too http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6032676 what
01:23:029 - I think adding a triple here would be better than the way it is rn because rhythm feels a bit off without it imo not really. I can't hear any 1/4 there anyway.
02:03:917 (5,1,2,1) - this pattern can also be worked out in a better way, its OK as it is but if you'll think of any better way to place these 4 notes it would be great my shitty choice of mapping :^)
02:15:529 (1,2) - fix blanket *Nazi mod*
02:40:122 - add a note cuz theres a sound , you followed the sound here 02:40:610 - but not here 02:40:122 - ; I think you should add a note there as well :3 that's too much even it's insane
02:40:184 - also fix this overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6032743 another what, 02:40:046 (1,4) - is stacked perfectly
I think this slider 02:43:433 (6) - should start here 02:43:271 (5) - ->>>http://puu.sh/r2bi2/5dde129145.jpg guitarinos
02:57:949 (1) - 02:55:368 (1) - 03:00:529 (1) - 03:03:110 (1) - 03:05:691 (1) - also I think you shouldn't ignore this large sound inside of these sliders. In most of the other cases where you placed these sliders I barely heard any sound, but in these cases the sound is pretty large, try to make it a reverse slider like this -> http://puu.sh/r2bvb/89c91c2688.jpg making 1/1 slider will create variation and smoothness of the diff. And I emphasized the strong beat enough with sliderhead.

no comment= fixed. thank you!

Kasuga

225 posts

Joined January 2012

Kasuga 2016-09-10T16:08:20+00:00

#RANDOMMODAPPEARS

As per request from theramdans, here's the mod
It's just something personal here, it's not obligatory

Easy

00:36:497 (3) - personally, I kinda confused with this kind of 1/1 slider usage in Easy. Well, it's a good slider tho'. But, I prefer to change it into 2/1 slider

01:24:078 (1) - and 02:26:013 (1) - delete the spinner, too forced for easy diff imo

02:44:078 (1,2) - somehow confusing, it's kind of mismatch with the music. It will confuse the new player

02:46:497 - Why break? I prefer u fill this part onward or delete from 02:36:175 (1) - to 02:45:368 (2) - for the break

Good diff you've got here

________________

Normal

01:24:078 (1) - 02:26:013 (1) - same with easy, I prefer it blank
02:46:497 - same with easy, why break?

That's all i think

I don't found any problems in the other diff
It's all perfect imo

Well, if this mod doesn't helpful for you. Don't mind to give this post a kudos

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-10T16:50:50+00:00

Kasuga wrote:
#RANDOMMODAPPEARS

As per request from theramdans, here's the mod
It's just something personal here, it's not obligatory

Easy

00:36:497 (3) - personally, I kinda confused with this kind of 1/1 slider usage in Easy. Well, it's a good slider tho'. But, I prefer to change it into 2/1 slider ~ well I dont really like the 2/1 choice in here..

01:24:078 (1) - and 02:26:013 (1) - delete the spinner, too forced for easy diff imo ~ really? I dont think it is

02:44:078 (1,2) - somehow confusing, it's kind of mismatch with the music. It will confuse the new player ~ I dont have any choice but to fit the music this way

02:46:497 - Why break? I prefer u fill this part onward or delete from 02:36:175 (1) - to 02:45:368 (2) - for the break ~ mapped somehow

Good diff you've got here

________________

Normal

01:24:078 (1) - 02:26:013 (1) - same with easy, I prefer it blank ~ ^
02:46:497 - same with easy, why break? ~ mapped

That's all i think

I don't found any problems in the other diff
It's all perfect imo

Well, if this mod doesn't helpful for you. Don't mind to give this post a kudos

sasuga mekdi modder, thanx

Kasuga

225 posts

Joined January 2012

Kasuga 2016-09-10T17:15:10+00:00

mekdi modder

lol

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-09-11T12:27:16+00:00

ramdan jaat C:
Hi, my very very very very very very late 🌀NM request OMFG !!! ;w;

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General :
-None-

Easy :
✨01:00:691 (1) - Ini dot ke 4 lekukan slidernya tampak aneh dan menggeliat. Coba di x156y185

✨01:09:723 (2) - Ujungnya kurang pas tu C:

✨01:53:755 (2) - Beat ujung slider ni rasanya penting banget. Cara di map kyk gini 00:52:949 (1,2) - di bagian itu tadi lebih pas

✨02:25:852 (5) - NC (Karena ini juga di NC 01:23:917 (1) - )

✨02:48:110 (3,4) - Ritme begini lebih bagus biar beginners siap mencet downbeatnya kak C:

aaa

Lagian 02:48:433 (4) - kyk gini kyknya kurang bagus buat "Easy"

✨03:08:110 (2,3) - Suara tinggi di (2), rasanya jadi pengen ngedelete (2) trus manjangin (3) C:

Normal :
💥AIMod spacing ka !

✨CS 3,5 gimana ? :>

✨00:29:723 (1) - Slider gini lebih bagus :3

aaa

💧01:38:110 (2,1) - satu-satunya overlapped yg aneh

💧03:09:078 (4,5,6) - Gak di stack tuh sama 03:07:465 (2) - ?

✨03:09:723 (6) - NC

Hard :
✨00:10:369 (1) - Ini kenapa di nc cobak ? owo. dari suara musiknya aja ga ada yg spesial buat nc itu

✨01:22:949 (4) - beat slidertail nya penting banget tuh, mending jadi circle trus di NC
02:24:884 (7) - ^

✨01:28:110 (6) - Kurang ngeblanket

✨03:09:723 (4) - NC

💧03:12:626 (1,2,1) - Entah kenapa rasanya harusnya ini ada 4 hit nya. kyknya ampe blue tick ituh

✨03:23:594 (3) - Ctrl G aja lah xD. kyk gituh ga enak dimainin plus flow broken

Akitoshi's Insane :
-None-

Neverending Story :
✨02:48:432 (5) - NC

✨03:08:755 (2,3,1) - Kurang enak dimainin dan dilihat :V *O-Moei runs...

Dah ah :V

theramdans

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Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-12T15:43:29+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
ramdan jaat C: ~ kok aku jaat
Hi, my very very very very very very late 🌀NM request OMFG !!! ;w;

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General :
-None-

Easy :
✨01:00:691 (1) - Ini dot ke 4 lekukan slidernya tampak aneh dan menggeliat. Coba di x156y185 ~ leh uga

✨01:09:723 (2) - Ujungnya kurang pas tu C: ~ apanya yang kurang pas?

✨01:53:755 (2) - Beat ujung slider ni rasanya penting banget. Cara di map kyk gini 00:52:949 (1,2) - di bagian itu tadi lebih pas ~ ok

✨02:25:852 (5) - NC (Karena ini juga di NC 01:23:917 (1) - ) ~lupa

✨02:48:110 (3,4) - Ritme begini lebih bagus biar beginners siap mencet downbeatnya kak C: ~ justru gw menghindari 1/2 beat yang aktif (dipencet : circle) dari pada yang pasif (ditahan: slider body /dilepas: slider end)
aaa
Lagian 02:48:433 (4) - kyk gini kyknya kurang bagus buat "Easy"

✨03:08:110 (2,3) - Suara tinggi di (2), rasanya jadi pengen ngedelete (2) trus manjangin (3) C: ~ ga paham maksudnya...

Normal :
💥AIMod spacing ka ! ~ yahelah cuma sebiji

✨CS 3,5 gimana ? :> ~ nope

✨00:29:723 (1) - Slider gini lebih bagus :3 ~ bolehlah, tapi ga persis gitu
aaa

💧01:38:110 (2,1) - satu-satunya overlapped yg aneh ~ ok

💧03:09:078 (4,5,6) - Gak di stack tuh sama 03:07:465 (2) - ? ~ stack dibawah slider head, no

✨03:09:723 (6) - NC ~ lupa

Hard :
✨00:10:369 (1) - Ini kenapa di nc cobak ? owo. dari suara musiknya aja ga ada yg spesial buat nc itu ~ soalnya streamnya berhenti

✨01:22:949 (4) - beat slidertail nya penting banget tuh, mending jadi circle trus di NC ~ gak susah apa kalo kayak gini...
02:24:884 (7) - ^ ~ ^

✨01:28:110 (6) - Kurang ngeblanket ~ cukup bgt menurut aku

✨03:09:723 (4) - NC ~ lupa

💧03:12:626 (1,2,1) - Entah kenapa rasanya harusnya ini ada 4 hit nya. kyknya ampe blue tick ituh ~ mudah2an ga terlalu susah

✨03:23:594 (3) - Ctrl G aja lah xD. kyk gituh ga enak dimainin plus flow broken ~ oke

Akitoshi's Insane :
-None-

Neverending Story :
✨02:48:432 (5) - NC ~ tul juga

✨03:08:755 (2,3,1) - Kurang enak dimainin dan dilihat :V *O-Moei runs... ~ tul juga

Dah ah :V

makasih kk moe

Ashton

Ashton 2016-09-14T02:37:31+00:00

bublle

checked this for you, looks pretty goood, gl!

jk I'm not bn

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-14T03:23:54+00:00

Whirl wrote:

bublle

checked this for you, looks pretty goood, gl!

jk I'm not bn

..............
uh but ok thanks

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2016-09-14T03:55:06+00:00

@Whirl 1/someday u will be a BN, I belive

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-09-14T22:39:53+00:00

I hope my moe wont be beaten by anyone
But whirlchan too cute xd
Somebody! Giv me a knife! Brb killin whirlchan xd

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-09-18T23:33:08+00:00

sorry for being so late!! >.<

[Neverending Story]
00:01:982 (4) - probably put an nc here to follow the downbeat nc structure you were going with
00:08:111 (5) - structure would look cleaner if it pointed down without curving imo
00:33:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - its better to space kick sliders out so they visually have similar distances from each other, the sliders on 00:34:078 (2,3,4) - are much closer than others and you should try space these out
00:56:820 (7,1) - swap nc's here for consistency with other instances of this 00:55:207 (4,5,6,7,1) -
01:03:110 (3) - the change from 1/2 to 1/1 comes quite unexpectedly here because it uses the same distance. normally i'd say increase the distance so the player can recognise the gap, but there isn't much room here so you might have to just nc 01:03:110 (3)
01:23:271 (1,2) - ^ same as above, you haven't really shown that the snapping is changing, i would honestly increase the distance by a lot to show this
01:35:207 (1) - 01:36:820 (1) - 01:37:788 (1) - since there are claps every 3/2th note you should add claps to represent them for this section
01:52:626 (2,1) - blanket is quite off
01:58:110 (3,4) - two 1/2 sliders would work much better here so that the clap on 01:58:433 - can be clicked
01:58:755 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - again you could increase the distance by a lot to indicate a rhythm change as people pay more attention to rhythm when they realise the jumps are unrealistically big
02:04:562 (3) - no hitsound? clap or something
03:07:949 (4,5,1) - flow is quite awkward here because of the deceleration at 03:08:110 (5,1) - maybe you could try sharper flow

[Hard]
00:14:239 (1,2) - would look nicer if this were parallel
00:45:691 - i wouldn't ignore this guitar beat since you normally mapped it
01:42:949 (3) - same thing about claps in this section
02:04:562 (3) - clap
02:38:755 (1) - i wouldn't map guitar over drums here

[Normal]
00:02:143 - why dont you have claps in places like these?
00:18:755 (5,1) - spacing
00:34:562 (4,1) - try do a rhythm like 00:36:981 (5,1) - so you can include the clap and the downbeat
00:44:239 (4,1,2) - ^ feels very awkward because the less important beats are mapped while the important ones like the guitar on 00:45:691 - are ignored
00:53:917 (2,3) - spacing
02:46:658 (1,2,3,4) - this can be confusing for newer players because 02:48:110 (4) - fades in while 02:47:142 (2) - gets clicked so beginners might move toward 4

[Easy]
00:02:143 (2) - same thing about including claps here

good luck!

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-19T10:05:46+00:00

Pentori wrote:
sorry for being so late!! >.< ~ being late is way better than never

[Neverending Story]
00:01:982 (4) - probably put an nc here to follow the downbeat nc structure you were going with ~ good point
00:08:111 (5) - structure would look cleaner if it pointed down without curving imo ~ it is
00:33:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - its better to space kick sliders out so they visually have similar distances from each other, the sliders on 00:34:078 (2,3,4) - are much closer than others and you should try space these out ~ uniformly spaced them
00:56:820 (7,1) - swap nc's here for consistency with other instances of this 00:55:207 (4,5,6,7,1) - ~ Agreed
01:03:110 (3) - the change from 1/2 to 1/1 comes quite unexpectedly here because it uses the same distance. normally i'd say increase the distance so the player can recognise the gap, but there isn't much room here so you might have to just nc 01:03:110 (3) ~ NC'd
01:23:271 (1,2) - ^ same as above, you haven't really shown that the snapping is changing, i would honestly increase the distance by a lot to show this ~ I tried showing the distance here, hope it works
01:35:207 (1) - 01:36:820 (1) - 01:37:788 (1) - since there are claps every 3/2th note you should add claps to represent them for this section ~ clap + finish is awesome dude
01:52:626 (2,1) - blanket is quite off ~ hope the fixed one is better
01:58:110 (3,4) - two 1/2 sliders would work much better here so that the clap on 01:58:433 - can be clicked ~ It is clickable now
01:58:755 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - again you could increase the distance by a lot to indicate a rhythm change as people pay more attention to rhythm when they realise the jumps are unrealistically big ~ Spacing increased
02:04:562 (3) - no hitsound? clap or something ~ drum-hitclap sounds great
03:07:949 (4,5,1) - flow is quite awkward here because of the deceleration at 03:08:110 (5,1) - maybe you could try sharper flow ~ flow is sharper now

[Hard]
00:14:239 (1,2) - would look nicer if this were parallel ~ parellel'd
00:45:691 - i wouldn't ignore this guitar beat since you normally mapped it ~ mapped
01:42:949 (3) - same thing about claps in this section ~ done
02:04:562 (3) - clap ~ done
02:38:755 (1) - i wouldn't map guitar over drums here ~ made sexy overlap instead

[Normal]
00:02:143 - why dont you have claps in places like these? ~ fixed
00:18:755 (5,1) - spacing ~ whooppss
00:34:562 (4,1) - try do a rhythm like 00:36:981 (5,1) - so you can include the clap and the downbeat ~ cool
00:44:239 (4,1,2) - ^ feels very awkward because the less important beats are mapped while the important ones like the guitar on 00:45:691 - are ignored ~ tried fixing it
00:53:917 (2,3) - spacing ~ whooppss #2
02:46:658 (1,2,3,4) - this can be confusing for newer players because 02:48:110 (4) - fades in while 02:47:142 (2) - gets clicked so beginners might move toward 4

[Easy]
00:02:143 (2) - same thing about including claps here ~ fixed

good luck!

thanks, very decent mod <3

Akali

639 posts

Joined November 2012

Akali 2016-09-25T16:13:43+00:00

hakuna matata

map seems pretty solid, gonna mod one diff I suppose lower are fine

00:06:337 (3) - keep the curve the same as in other sliders, this looks weird and plays meh. I would move 00:06:175 (2) - to like 118:239 anyway, right now it looks like you wanted to follow the curve and direction of 00:05:853 (1) - but ran out of the playfield, better have sharper exist from (1) if anything.

00:28:271 (1) - seems to wiggly compared to previous ones

00:34:400 (4,5) - move them just a little bit away from 00:34:884 (1) -

00:34:884 (1,2,3) - don't like the arc movement into big jump on 00:35:691 (4,5) - , would rearrange to some jumpy pattern with somehow consistentspacing and sharper movement, 00:35:368 (2) - in bottom left somehwere is a good start

00:40:529 (2,3,4,5) - works a bit better here

00:49:078 (1,2) - ctrl+G, arcy flow from the slider again into very sharp (3) plays a bit weird, but I guess you want to keep 00:49:239 (2,3) - spacing so that would require moving whole stream that comes next, but think of a solution

01:03:594 (2) - they look way better with anchor in the very middle imo

01:46:497 (4,5) - ^ wouldn't force these for the sake of variety, unless you like them then keep them

01:50:207 (3) - little bit less curve

01:52:142 (3,4,1) - a bit lower + move 01:52:626 (2) -

01:59:320 (4) - overmapped, there is some really feint percussion ghostnote but not worth comparing to other 1/4s present in the song

02:40:046 (1,2) - this on the other hand should be a triple

Rest seems fine to me, one thing I don't like are your entrance angles into sliders, for example (that I made) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6178986 you pretty often curve the next slider no matter the flow and direction from the circle, I that with smooth attack angles into the sliders, the slider curve should follow the implied cursor path, like in the yellow combo. It feels more natural, looks better and player will actually follow the curved path a bit better. With the purple placement it seems a bit weird and out of place, also cursor movement through the slider will most likely just cut through it in straight-ish line - might as well do a straight slider then. This doesn't matter that much for sharp attack angles like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6179016 because player will usually snap/stop/and reset the movement.

Examples in map (just few)

01:05:368 (4,5) -

01:19:400 (3,4) -

01:51:497 (4,1) - the worst one I think

02:06:175 (5,6) -

02:08:594 (4,1) -

02:17:626 (4,5) -

maybe more, if you think it's worth changing look for them 8)

This is not crucial but I think it's usually better to do it this way, at least on map that don't have gimmicky themes or something like that.

gllllll if you really need mods on other diffs let me know

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

theramdans 2016-09-29T06:48:44+00:00

Akali wrote:
hakuna matata ~ sorry I didnt read that bit

map seems pretty solid, gonna mod one diff I suppose lower are fine

00:06:337 (3) - keep the curve the same as in other sliders, this looks weird and plays meh. I would move 00:06:175 (2) - to like 118:239 anyway, right now it looks like you wanted to follow the curve and direction of 00:05:853 (1) - but ran out of the playfield, better have sharper exist from (1) if anything. ~ tried fixing it

00:28:271 (1) - seems to wiggly compared to previous ones ~ made it less wiggly

00:34:400 (4,5) - move them just a little bit away from 00:34:884 (1) - ~ avoiding overlaps eh, good point

00:34:884 (1,2,3) - don't like the arc movement into big jump on 00:35:691 (4,5) - , would rearrange to some jumpy pattern with somehow consistentspacing and sharper movement, 00:35:368 (2) - in bottom left somehwere is a good start ~ I'll try

00:40:529 (2,3,4,5) - works a bit better here ~ thanks

00:49:078 (1,2) - ctrl+G, arcy flow from the slider again into very sharp (3) plays a bit weird, but I guess you want to keep 00:49:239 (2,3) - spacing so that would require moving whole stream that comes next, but think of a solution ~ I think this might work

01:03:594 (2) - they look way better with anchor in the very middle imo ~ did that

01:46:497 (4,5) - ^ wouldn't force these for the sake of variety, unless you like them then keep them ~ cool

01:50:207 (3) - little bit less curve ~ roger

01:52:142 (3,4,1) - a bit lower + move 01:52:626 (2) - ~ done

01:59:320 (4) - overmapped, there is some really feint percussion ghostnote but not worth comparing to other 1/4s present in the song ~ agree, a bit overmapped, good job
02:40:046 (1,2) - this on the other hand should be a triple ~ after re-listening it, I agree

Rest seems fine to me, one thing I don't like are your entrance angles into sliders, for example (that I made) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6178986 you pretty often curve the next slider no matter the flow and direction from the circle, I that with smooth attack angles into the sliders, the slider curve should follow the implied cursor path, like in the yellow combo. It feels more natural, looks better and player will actually follow the curved path a bit better. With the purple placement it seems a bit weird and out of place, also cursor movement through the slider will most likely just cut through it in straight-ish line - might as well do a straight slider then. This doesn't matter that much for sharp attack angles like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6179016 because player will usually snap/stop/and reset the movement.

Examples in map (just few)

01:05:368 (4,5) -

01:19:400 (3,4) -

01:51:497 (4,1) - the worst one I think

02:06:175 (5,6) -

02:08:594 (4,1) -

02:17:626 (4,5) -

maybe more, if you think it's worth changing look for them 8) ~ I will look at them thoroughly later, and self-mod it

This is not crucial but I think it's usually better to do it this way, at least on map that don't have gimmicky themes or something like that.

gllllll if you really need mods on other diffs let me know

thanks Akali, I'll let you know if there's anything I need

Bubbleman

60 posts

Joined November 2014

Bubbleman 2016-09-29T17:36:02+00:00

2016-09-30 00:01 theramdans: hello
2016-09-30 00:01 theramdans: cn you testplay for a bit?
2016-09-30 00:06 Bubbleman: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1054349 nano x buzzG - Dive In Your Eyes [Neverending Story]]
2016-09-30 00:06 Bubbleman: this looks really nice
2016-09-30 00:06 theramdans: ohey
2016-09-30 00:07 Bubbleman: 01:13:110 (4,5,6) - this should be a curve because three notes into a stream doesn't look great without a spacing change
2016-09-30 00:07 Bubbleman: 01:37:788 (1,2) - blanket this
2016-09-30 00:07 Bubbleman: 01:39:078 - curve needs checking
2016-09-30 00:07 Bubbleman: 01:42:465 (3,4) - blanket
2016-09-30 00:08 Bubbleman: 01:44:239 (1,2,3,4,1) - curve (unless this was intended)
2016-09-30 00:08 Bubbleman: 01:53:271 (1,2,3) - blanket these
2016-09-30 00:08 Bubbleman: honestly
2016-09-30 00:08 Bubbleman: it's a great map
2016-09-30 00:08 Bubbleman: some cleaning up of this sort of thing and it should be ready for modding by higher level modders
2016-09-30 00:08 theramdans: whoa
2016-09-30 00:09 theramdans: that's a relieve
2016-09-30 00:09 theramdans: I think at first that I will screw things up, after today's self-mod
2016-09-30 00:09 Bubbleman: 02:20:368 (4,5) - why does this spacing drastically decrease?
2016-09-30 00:09 Bubbleman: 02:20:529 (5,1) - and then instantly increase again?
2016-09-30 00:10 Bubbleman: these should be closer to the 1
2016-09-30 00:10 Bubbleman: 02:24:884 (3,4) -
2016-09-30 00:10 Bubbleman: oop
2016-09-30 00:10 Bubbleman: 02:44:078 (1,2) - wtf spacing
2016-09-30 00:13 Bubbleman: yeah just some cleaning and fixing and this seems good to me

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-Zel

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-Zel 2016-09-30T15:04:53+00:00

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16:58 WindZel: This is this feedback thingy
16:58 theramdans: that's what I want
17:00 WindZel: 00:34:562 (5) - minor thing, this would be better around x 182 y 351 facing the next stack
17:01 theramdans: isnt it a bit too far
17:02 WindZel: around there
17:04 WindZel: 00:39:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is confusing, id suggest 00:39:078 (1,2) - these two going and pointing up and 00:39:400 (3,4,5) - these three pointing down and going down
17:05 WindZel: I may be my preference, but the song feels a bit underspaced at the jumps
17:05 theramdans: tried that
17:06 theramdans: anything else?
17:06 WindZel: starting at 01:03:271 the jumps are spaced a bit more, but they could be even more
17:07 WindZel: why did it format like that? oh well
17:08 theramdans: because you didnt put - after the time code
17:08 WindZel: oops
17:09 WindZel: well that time was an just an example but seems like all the kiai times could be buffed as the song is more intense
17:10 theramdans: I think I buffed it enough
17:10 WindZel: personal opinion
17:11 WindZel: 02:22:949 (5) - this doesn't go with the flow, try putting it under the 02:22:788 (4) - maybe so it ends where 02:22:304 (2) -  started
17:13 theramdans: ok
17:14 WindZel: 02:35:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the stream starting at the edge is really sudden control + H 02:35:530 (1,2,3,4) - these and place them on the other side of the stream
17:15 theramdans: I got what you mean
17:16 WindZel: minor but 03:13:110 (2) - NC this so you amplify there not being a gap between 03:13:594 (1,2) - 
17:17 theramdans: cant NC that
17:17 WindZel: howso?
17:17 theramdans: umm
17:18 theramdans: first you have to listen carefully on those 4 sliders
17:18 theramdans: man it is hard to explain
17:19 theramdans: it is like, the sound moves left-right on the first two
17:19 WindZel: I hear that
17:19 theramdans: and right-left on the last two
17:19 theramdans: so I see them as two separate entities and I want each of them in a same combo set
17:20 WindZel: I see what you mean
17:20 WindZel: It's fine as it's really minor anyway
17:21 WindZel: I see no other problems with this diff so I'll check another one
17:22 theramdans: ok
17:22 theramdans: do you think it has good quality for a ranked map?
17:22 WindZel: Yes certanly
17:27 WindZel: I found no complaints on Akitoshi's insane
17:28 theramdans: lower diffs?
17:30 WindZel: on hard I see no reason do not continue with another kickslider here 00:39:723 (7,8) - 
17:33 WindZel: 00:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - should this be a slider like 00:42:304 (9) - 
17:33 theramdans: hang on
17:34 theramdans: on 00:39:723 - it is a transition between bell sound and the vocal
17:35 theramdans: and on the (7) and (8) i follow vocal
17:35 WindZel: fair enough
17:36 theramdans: I kinda want to keep those small stream circles
17:37 WindZel: you can, but then you should make 00:42:304 (9) - one too
17:37 theramdans: I dont want to use the small stream twice :(
17:37 theramdans: too hard
17:38 WindZel: but muh constistency
17:38 theramdans: I know
17:38 theramdans: but..
17:38 WindZel: anyway decide on it yourself
17:39 theramdans: roger
17:39 WindZel: 01:22:626 (4) - this could be turned to a stack on top of 01:22:949 (5) - tough
17:40 theramdans: huh
17:40 theramdans: nah I dont wanna overlap or stack a kickslider with another kickslider
17:40 WindZel: I mean a short stream stack
17:41 WindZel: of hitcircles
17:41 theramdans: no no
17:41 theramdans: circles to slider eh, no :(
17:41 theramdans: too hard
17:41 WindZel: but kiai time should be hard - harder
17:42 theramdans: not always, for me at least
17:42 theramdans: I agree, but 1/4 circles leading to a kickslider, no
17:42 WindZel: but.. muh intensity
17:42 WindZel: your decision though
17:43 theramdans: allright
17:43 WindZel:  but if you decide to keep the 00:42:304 (9) - as is 01:44:239 (6) - should be a short burst then
17:44 theramdans: they are fine and similar, good as they are
17:45 WindZel: I mean if 00:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - is stream 00:42:304 (9) - is stream
17:46 theramdans: ok I'll make the first burst kickslider instead of 1/4 circles
17:46 theramdans: brb
17:47 theramdans: for the sake of consistency
17:47 WindZel: muh consistency
17:47 theramdans: done
17:47 WindZel: 03:13:594 (1,2) - these two a bit closer
17:48 theramdans: done
17:49 theramdans: sorry, I need to take a dump
17:49 WindZel: go ahead

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Osuology

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Osuology 2016-10-01T00:23:02+00:00

Finally I have some time <3

Easy

00:10:369 (3) - So, the space after this slider has a slight piano sound, the only reason I suggest mapping it is because it's a little awkward how this ends suddenly and then how the next note plays, it seems awkward in my opinion.

00:11:659 (1,2) - This is just me, but it would be a little better to have these exactly straight, like the line from 1 to 2 isn't completely straight right now.

00:22:304 (2,3) - The 2 isn't perfectly blanketed into the 3, but that's pretty nitpicky.

01:13:594 (1,3) - These two overlapping, on an easy, I'm not too sure about. On a normal I think it would be fine but on easy it might be too hard.

01:24:078 (1) - I don't know why you have green lines during the spinner, it doesn't change anything does it?

01:58:110 (2) - Probably should move this a little away so that the distance from the 3 slider (in the previous combo) is equal to the distance between the 1 (in this combo) and the 3 in the previous combo.

02:26:013 (1) - The spinner green line thing again

02:44:078 (1,2) - This doesn't sound right at all, and I know having it on the downbeat causes it to be really close but I think as is it's quite awkward.

03:09:884 (1) - And again the spinner lines

03:51:175 (1) - ^

Normal

00:47:788 (1,2,3) - You probably should decrease spacing from 2 to 3 because the player will leave 1 a little early versus going to the very end of the slider, so try eyeballing the distance so that it's the same, either put up the distance from 1 to 2, or put down the distance from 2 to 3.

The same spinner green line deal happens in your other diffs and this one so I won't list them.

01:34:239 (1) - Make this a non repeat and then you can map the other cymbals nicely instead of skipping them with a slider.

01:58:996 () - There's unsnapped repeats here.

Hard

00:11:498 (3,1) - Try to make the distance a little more consistent with the 2-3 distance it looks slightly off.

00:13:917 (7,1) - Ok so it looks like you are doing this on purpose, I can't see why though. Could you please explain your reasoning behind this?

00:16:497 (8,1) - If you're gonna keep the 1.3x DS thing, I would recommend spacing this 1 a little from the 8 because the player will skip a little bit of the 8

00:39:078 (5,6,7,8) - Why don't you map the piano here? You were before so I'm curious why.

00:56:013 (3,4) - I don't like how big this jump is, you probably should reduce it, the 4 doesn't really call for a jump.

01:28:110 (6,7) - You're kinda sacrificing aesthetics for consistency here, which I wouldn't recommend doing. Making it 1.1x DS would be much better, in my opinion.

01:30:691 (5,6) - ^

01:51:981 (7,8,1) - This isn't really consistent with this section, this section didn't do it at all until now... The jump between 8 and 1 I mean.

02:58:433 (5,1) - I don't like how these two are touching, it looks a little ugly in my opinion.

03:09:723 (1) - Either don't make this NC or make 03:08:755 (1) - this NC, 03:09:239 (1) - this not, and then this 03:09:723 (1) - NC. Example pic:
http://image.prntscr.com/image/84fd8611 ... c5257f.png

03:12:626 (1,2,1,2) - With the whistles on these, you could remove them from each individual object and then add whistle to the object as a whole.

Akitoshi's Insane

00:02:143 (4,5) - Why this distance, but then 00:02:627 (5,6,1) - this distance between these objects? Probably should at least increase the spacing between 6 and 1 to where it was before.

00:44:078 (2,3) - This distance doesn't seem right compared to before... reduce a little bit to about 1.3x I think.

01:02:142 (1,2,1,2) - This in a simple insane seems a little bit too much, just change the position of the second line slightly and it's good.

01:23:593 () - Why green line here? Doesn't need to be here.

01:28:594 (4,5) - Distance should be more since the 5 is on a snare drum sound.

01:57:949 (2,3,4) - The whole spacing situation here is kinda weird, I'm not sure what it is though. Distance looks like it's not proper in some parts.

02:04:078 (1,2,1,2) - If you changed the previous one, you need to change this one also.

02:25:529 () - Again, a useless green line. Look out for these, because I'm not listing the rest of them.

Neverending Story

00:20:207 (3,4) - Distance seems a little low don't you think?

01:03:917 (3,4,5,1) - Why isn't the spacing between 5-1 the same as 3-4 or 4-5? I think it should be...

01:12:142 (5,1) - Such a big jump, I don't hear anything to back it up though. I don't see any reason to make this a jump.

01:29:884 (3,4) - ^

01:58:755 (1,2,3) - I misread this on sightread I thought it was a jump... not sure what you could do about it though.

02:01:013 (1,2,3) - Why so much spacing again? It's not the same as most streams...

Other than that, it all seems pretty good! <3

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