JBHyperion
- 00:02:635 (4) - Awkward rhythm, since you leave the more prominent vocal note on 00:02:401 unmapped, as well as ending on the weaker red tick vocal note instead of the stronger white tick at 00:02:870 -. I'd move this back 1/2 ( Fixed )
- 00:04:041 (1,2,3) - Movement to (2) feels awkward to play as it's on the border of requiring dash, and you didn't use dash in the previous combo so it feels inconsistent. If you do want a jump, it should be to (3), but I'd reduce the spacing either way for a clearer to read spacing ( Dragged (1) a bit closer to the next note )
- 00:23:023 - Skipping the kick drum beat here negatively impacts on the rhythm in my opinion, I'd add a circle here at x-336 to emphasise the clap hitsounds on the following notes, or alternatively, shift all of 00:23:023 (4,5,6) back 1/2 ( I choose the former one and added a circle at x:304 instead )
- 00:31:224 - Missing a strong tom drum beat here, adding a circle also allows you to create a fitting dash to the cymbal sound at 00:31:459 (1) ( No changes, looks complicated for a Salad. )
- 00:31:927 (2,3,4) - A little more movement on these would be welcome, although this section of the song is calm, this just feels a little too plain imo ( Made some changes here based on the suggestion )
- 00:42:707 - 00:55:361 - Any reason why you stopped NCing on the downbeat as you did in previous sections? I know you want to avoid too long combos in this section with higher note density, but you can still do this whilst maintaining a 4 beat NC pattern. At present, it feels weird and inconsistent ( Yeah, I probably mislooked that. Fixed. )
- 00:45:988 (6,1) - Please reduce the spacing here a little, the 1/2 dash is quite unexpected and when combined with the antiflow new players are very likely to struggle here ( Fixed )
- 00:57:705 (6) - As above, this is the start of a new stanza and so should really have a NC in my opinion ( Done )
- 00:59:111 (1,2) - Consider reversing the order of these on the timeline so you can add a dash to the strong cymbal sound on the downbeat, consistent with previous patterns ( Done )
- 01:26:294 (1,2,3) - I'd opt for slightly more spacing on these, the current distance makes it a little unclear as to whether dash is needed or not. Try moving (2) to x-352 ( Fixed )
- 01:31:449 (4) - Dash to this note feels strange, even though it's a downbeat note, it's no more prominent than the previous ones.
( Made a minor change here )
Thanks for the mod, JBHyperion~
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