Rukarioman wrote:

Really sorry for this really late mod post, was super busy.Lol I think I've asked first of all my requests in your queue xD. It's ok..
Nibi:
00:19:892 - add a note? ok
00:32:214 - ^.~
00:54:000 (4) - move the end so it is stacked with (1) done
01:24:357 - why not add a note here? hmm.. fine

roflninja's Biju:
01:04:357 (2) - maybe space it like this? you gotta disable grid snap to gotta disable grid snap to get it good in the middle.

SPOILER

Kyubi:
00:23:642 (3,4) - the spacing increased in the combo for now reason. maybe fix that ups, fixed thx

Otherwise fine^^ All of these are just suggestions.
Star~

AeoNRivaS wrote:

Wasabi!

[Nibi]:
you should fill in those extra spaces in the beginning nah, for the easiest diff it is fine.beginner shouldn't click throug the whole map

[roflnina's Biju]:
nothing found.

[Kyubi]:
nothing found either.


good map, but i'm not a fan of naruto, or this music..

• • 00:59:892 - This Inherited Time Section is similar to the previous one. Remove it?
  • 01:21:678 - Same as the previous one again.

• • 01:12:214 - This ITS have a very similar volume to the previous one. Are you sure you need this?

thepianist wrote:

Hello~ Mod4Mod as requested!

Roflninja's Biju~
00:24:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO remove the 2 and 5. debated over this for awhile, but keeping for now
00:43:285 (3) - Consider removing this? ^
01:04:357 (2,3,4) - Consider this placement done

Dragvon wrote:

<roflnina's Biju>
• 01:06:678 - Maybe add a note here? debated over this to, but added

Comments: It's okay, nothing that deserves a huge fix :3

Dragvon wrote:

Queue response: Normal Mod

Hello~
Info
Suggestions! It's up to you!
Problems! You should take a look at these.
Errors! Please fix those.

<General>
• mp3: Your mp3 have a bitrate of 320 kbps. Consider lowering it.
• Video: Your video have the music in it's audio. Please remove it to reduce filesize. I think I'll ask someone here..

<Timing>
• Fine.

<Nibi>
Timing:

• • 00:59:892 - This Inherited Time Section is similar to the previous one. Remove it?
  • 01:21:678 - Same as the previous one again.

• 00:20:250 (3) - Hmm this one isn't a bit too low? Try moving them a bit :3 changed it a bit
• 00:33:107 (1,2) - This feels weird, try moving them 1/2 back to look like this: (Check Timeline)
You can even add something like a slider from 00:34:357 to 00:35:071 then.
• 01:16:857 (2,3) - 3 is closer to the slider end than 2, i've almost miss-clicked it. Maybe you could move 3 somewhere else :3

Comments: It's... fine :3 thx

<roflnina's Biju>
• 01:06:678 - Maybe add a note here?

Comments: It's okay, nothing that deserves a huge fix :3

<Kyubi>
Timing:

• • 01:12:214 - This ITS have a very similar volume to the previous one. Are you sure you need this?

Comments: Awesome :O this diff plays really nice xD! aww thanks

Final Comment: It's a fine mapset. You need some better hitsounds placements tho, some parts don't sound so nice :3!
Good Luck with your map! Thank you!!

Star!

Please vote in my mod queue. I wanna use that information to improve myself ^-^!

thepianist wrote:

Hello~ Mod4Mod as requested!

Nibi~
00:17:749 (6) - Consider making it a long slider without a repeat, or just replacing with a hitcircle~ hmm nah
00:20:964 (5) - Shift right, up a grid.
00:33:107 (1,2) - Shift backwards in time to white tick.

Roflninja's Biju~
00:24:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO remove the 2 and 5.
00:43:285 (3) - Consider removing this?
01:04:357 (2,3,4) - Consider this placement:

SPOILER

Kyubi~
00:00:785 (1,2,3,4) - Consider using triplets as in Biju? But I don't wanna fake roflninja.. ._.
00:05:607 (4) - Move the start of the slider back to previous red tick.
00:06:946 (8) - Shrink end point to white tick
00:18:107 (6) - Make a long slider without repeat~
00:43:107 (6,1) - Spacing

It's a nice mapset. ~Star

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Nibi]
Tick Rate 1 which?HP,overall..?
00:36:857 (1,2) - replace this to one slider,
00:39:714 - ^
00:42:571 - ^
01:13:999 - ^
01:16:857 - ^
Did all of these

[roflninja' Biju]
01:10:428 - put Kiai in this section, or remove it in "Easy"
01:12:214 - distance

[Kyubi]
Easy Insane and Insane not rankable. you think? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/19551 http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15430 http://osu.ppy.sh/s/19495
00:41:142 - distance

lovhin456 wrote:

Woot, better quality mp3 FTW
http://www.mediafire.com/?0edkrq0vu4pu2rz
:3

noneed wrote:

Sory but something is wrong with the link.Could you please link it again?

noneed wrote:

Go for it arien Oh, does this mean I have to put this back to wip?

And thanks lovhin again!<3

arien666 wrote:

Sorry for double-posting but
Pre is Taiko-diff guest diff but

This is NOT regarded with Taiko or WUTEVER :3



[Nibi]
00:15:249 (4,5) - Umm... As this map's diff, these seem little hard imo. Why don't you convert into slider :3? you're right since I changed the other same parts to sliders as well..
00:26:499 (3,4) - ^ but Suggestion

[roflninja's Biju]
01:23:285 (2) - Move to same position on 01:21:142 (4) :3

[Kyubi]
00:11:857 (7) - [Suggestion] http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25422 :3? Wow that looks nice (:
00:22:214 (3,4,5) - How about move 1 grid right? done
00:31:142 (1) - How about move 1 grid down? ^



Okay...
LOTS OF BETTER than first seeing :3 ((:
Then, I should give the star for this yay!

Garven wrote:

As per your request (and thanks btw ): ^^

[General]
Remove sound from video to conserve a bit of space, if you can.
Kinda wish the hit sounds weren't so quiet compared to the song.

[Nibi]
It'd be nice if you could fit a break in here somewhere. I made the first 10 secs very relaxing..
00:00:785 (1,2,3) - Maybe turn these into a single repeat slider? It's semi-fast with no music to help out at the start. fine
00:26:499 (3,1) - These are too close to each other. moved 3 a bit
00:29:178 (1) - This spinner is really short for an easy. And the note after it is way too soon after a spinner for an easy. I'd recommend mapping through the spinner.
01:08:285 (3) - This may be a bit confusing as to when the slider is going to end for newer players. It's rather short with a pretty quick slider speed. deleted 1 rep
01:09:535 - Maybe use a single note here, then move the slider to 01:09:892 - ? Though it would render the spinner rather short afterward... though with the notes being so soon after the spinner, you may want to map through this one too.
01:17:928 (1) - End this at 01:21:142.

[roflninja's Biju]
I read that as bifu initially. Heh.
Holy difficulty jump.
00:00:785 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The second half of the stream doesn't fit to me as there's no more drums going with it.
00:23:107 - I was kind of expecting a note here to go with the bass line.
00:43:285 (3) - This would play better to me if it wasn't stacked.
01:02:571 (3,1) - This jump felt unjustified.
01:06:321 (1,2,3,1) - This would probably feel better going with the vocals instead of just the three beats and then a spinner for the held out note. Feels kind of awkward right now.
01:23:642 (1) - This is kind of short - auto gets 2000, but it doesn't seem to fit with the way you mapped the end part
The end of this was kind of underwhelming. Maybe spruce it up a bit?
This is one of the better maps I've seen of yours, roflninja. Good job!

[Kyubi]
00:32:928 (6,1,2,3,4) - This could be cooler rhythmically if you did what you did with the 6, 1 for each time the singer does a longer note. So a hit at 00:33:642 - , then the slider at 00:33:821 - , etc.
00:36:857 (5,6) - With these, it might be better moving the slider back to the white tick. sry but I think it looks good..
00:39:714 (5,6) - ^
00:42:571 (5) - ^ Oh wait, you did that on this one.
00:55:428 (3) - It'd be neat if you could balance this so it's not lopsided on the left

[aru]
:3

The difficulty spread is really unbalanced (EII). Try to add in a normal and maybe tone down one of the current difficulties?I'm lazy and I really have to remap my other map with right timing (and it's very long) so can we put this problem in 'First Time Mapper' drawer :p

choche wrote:

Hi! I'm going to start with the mod

Things you must do.
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it.

[General]

This map has 41 stars... I think that i won't be able to make a good mod...
I won't mod tako diff

[Nibi]

No problems.

[roflninja's biju]

No problems too.

(I'm not being useful ._.)

[Kyubi]

Perfect <3 I love this difficulty! wow thanks.. o.o' (myself thinks roflninja's is waaaaaaaaay better)

*star*

Garven wrote:

As per your request (and thanks btw ):

[roflninja's Biju]
I read that as bifu initially. Heh.
Holy difficulty jump.
00:00:785 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The second half of the stream doesn't fit to me as there's no more drums going with it. ill change if someone else mentions
00:23:107 - I was kind of expecting a note here to go with the bass line. added
00:43:285 (3) - This would play better to me if it wasn't stacked. ok, changed
01:02:571 (3,1) - This jump felt unjustified. fixed
01:06:321 (1,2,3,1) - This would probably feel better going with the vocals instead of just the three beats and then a spinner for the held out note. Feels kind of awkward right now. changed
01:23:642 (1) - This is kind of short - auto gets 2000, but it doesn't seem to fit with the way you mapped the end part
The end of this was kind of underwhelming. Maybe spruce it up a bit? added a few notes
This is one of the better maps I've seen of yours, roflninja. Good job! glad you liked this one

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

General
it would sound pretty awesome if you started normal hitsounds at this point 00:35:249 or at the chorus

Kyubi

Rename difficulty Kyuubi if you want it to mean nine-tails. oh it's acutally Kyúbi but osu doesn't accept these letters and I thought only one 'u' then.thx for pointing it out! ^^
00:18:107 (6) - (suggestion) move the part of the slider which comes upwards outwards a little, for definition
00:34:089 (3) - this slider starts at an awkward time. please either change it urgh thx..

roflninja's biju

rename difficulty roflninja's Bijuu
thats it

Yonbi
00:02:660 (2,3) - awkwardly placed notes. move back 1/4 beat gwah again.. ~.~
00:15:964 (2) - move forward 1/4 beat
00:21:499 (1) - make neater (suggestion) yeah you're right..
00:24:357 (1) - finish hitsound
00:27:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - not sure how this is meant to sound, but its awkward like this
00:33:821 (2) - make this end on the white tick 1/2 beat before the current end
00:36:053 (1) - move 1/4 beat later
00:39:445 (2) - awkward


you seem to have a lot of awkwardly placed notes. it seems like you had to retime the map and the snapping put them out of place. scan the whole map and find the notes moved. (the ones above arent the only ones)

nibi

fine

i dont mod taiko, i forgot to put that in, but i did now

needs a bit of work still

i cant star this just yet, but fix up the mistimed notes and repost. (reposts are allowed any valid time) then i'll check and star it

Mafiamaster wrote:

[roflninja]
00:00:785 (1) - Add a whistle.
00:00:875 (2) - Remove whistle. It sounds bad.
00:01:142 (1) - Add whistle.
00:01:232 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:24:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing here as well.
00:50:071 (1) - Add a finish only at the beginning of this slider.
01:10:071 (1) - Add a finish.
01:11:321 (5) - Add a finish and remove clap?

James2250 wrote:

Nibi:
00:14:714 (3) - make this a slider like 00:15:249 (4)?
00:17:749 (6) - I wouldn't have a clap at the start of this

Yombi:
00:00:964 (1,2) - sounds odd with music
00:04:714 (1) - extend by 1/2?
00:12:928 - feels kind of empty
00:41:857 (1,2,3,4) - don't overlap any of this
00:55:607 (2) - make symmetrical?
01:02:749 (4) - ^
01:21:499 (1) - could look more creative

roflninja's Biju:
00:12:928 (1) - could be slightly more aligned
otherwise looks pretty nice

Kyubi:
00:09:714 (2,3) - align?
00:11:857 (7) - the repeats on this are hidden by the previous note ,move this slider somehow
00:18:107 (6) - odd looking slider
00:23:999 (4,5) - I wouldn't have this go under previous notes
00:41:321 (6) - add note?
00:48:642 (1) - would prefer if this was a slider, kind of short for a spinner here
00:53:999 (6,1,2) - try and avoid anti jumps
00:55:428 (3) - would look better being more symmetrical
01:12:749 (4) - don't have this go under previous notes?
01:17:928 (1) - don't have this over the endpoint of the next slider?

Taiko:
No errors that I see

1. [Nibi] has different "AudioLeadIn"
2. Delete "....osb" file and full submit.

1. 00:19:892 (2) - Move it one grid down (It overlaps with the last slider).
2. 00:20:964 (5) - Try to align with (4) (Diagonal).
3. 00:44:714 (2) - Fix Spacing.
4. 00:52:928 (1,2,3,4) - This might be confusing for beginners.
5. 01:04:714 (1,2,3,1) - ^ , Try to unstack the last (1).
6. 01:09:535 (5) - Move this note to 01:09:714
7. 01:14:714 (1) - Try to move it, It's behind of the last slider x3.

1. 00:28:821 (1) - Remove New Combo
2. 00:33:642 (X) - A note is missing here, Don't forget to fix spacing after adding it.
3. 00:43:642 (1) - Shorten this to: 00:44:357, then
4. 00:44:357 (X) - Add a note here, and then
5. 00:45:071 (2) - Shorten this one too (00:45:785).
6. 00:46:857 (1) - This spinner should end here: 00:48:642.
7. 01:13:821 (1) - Remove New Combo.

1. 00:01:142 (4) - Remove New Combo.
2. 01:17:928 (1) - New Combo.

1. 00:17:571 (5) - Curve this a bit more so it won't overlap with the next slider.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. [Nibi] has different "AudioLeadIn" It has the same 2.5 o.O
2. Delete "....osb" file and full submit. first of all this and also I'm using sb in the end of the vid..

Ah turned to violet now? ^^
Nibi

1. 00:19:892 (2) - Move it one grid down (It overlaps with the last slider). yup
2. 00:20:964 (5) - Try to align with (4) (Diagonal).
3. 00:44:714 (2) - Fix Spacing. oh, thx
4. 00:52:928 (1,2,3,4) - This might be confusing for beginners. hmmm, they will get it
5. 01:04:714 (1,2,3,1) - ^ , Try to unstack the last (1).
6. 01:09:535 (5) - Move this note to 01:09:714
7. 01:14:714 (1) - Try to move it, It's behind of the last slider x3.

Yonbi

1. 00:28:821 (1) - Remove New Combo
2. 00:33:642 (X) - A note is missing here, Don't forget to fix spacing after adding it.
3. 00:43:642 (1) - Shorten this to: 00:44:357, then
4. 00:44:357 (X) - Add a note here, and then
5. 00:45:071 (2) - Shorten this one too (00:45:785).
6. 00:46:857 (1) - This spinner should end here: 00:48:642.
7. 01:13:821 (1) - Remove New Combo.

roflninja's Biju

1. 00:01:142 (4) - Remove New Combo.
2. 01:17:928 (1) - New Combo.

Kyubi

1. 00:17:571 (5) - Curve this a bit more so it won't overlap with the next slider.

I see improvements since the first time I played this map, GREAT!, Star~ thank you :3

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Nibi]
00:59:714 (1) - Add a finish at the end.
01:21:321 - Enable Kiai Time on this timing section for consistency on all difficulties.

[Yonbi]
00:01:500 - There really should be a note right here.
00:12:571 (4) - The ending on this sounds bad. It would be better if it was shortened to 00:12:928 on the white tick.
00:14:714 (5) - Add a repeat on this slider.
00:15:785 (1) - Add a finish.
00:26:321 (4) - Would sound better on the white tick at 00:26:499.
00:28:821 (6) - Ending of this slider sounds bad. Remove the repeat and add a note at 00:30:071 (on white tick).
00:37:035 (4) - Remove the clap and add a finish.
00:38:999 (1) - Add a clap on the end of this slider like the previous combo.
00:39:892 (3) - Add a finish only at the start of this slider.
00:42:749 (4) - ^
00:43:642 (1) - ^ At end of slider.
00:45:071 (3) - ^ ^
00:50:071 (1) - Add a finish to emphasize the start of Kiai Time.
00:57:214 (1) - Remove a repeat so it ends on a red tick.
00:58:285 (2) - If you fixed what was listed right above, move this farther 1.
00:59:714 (3) - Add a finish at the end.
01:07:214 (2) - Add a finish to the beginning.

[roflninja]
00:42:750 (2) - Add a finish to the start.

[Kyubi]
00:03:285 (5) - Suggestion: New combo?
00:40:964 (4,5,6) - This spacing inconsistency looks real bad.
00:41:499 (x) - Add a note here? If you're going to, add a finish on it.
00:42:571 (5) - Add finish on the end of the slider.
00:59:892 (2) - Finish!
01:01:499 (1) - ^
01:09:714 (1) - ^

[Overall]
It would be much better to use normal hitsounds throughout the map instead of soft. You can barely hear what you hit.
Even adding more hitsounds throughout the difficulties as well is a good idea. roflninja's difficulty is fine on that part.

[SB]
You don't need all these 'lines' to make the SB fade in. This makes the osb file bigger than it needs to be.

But either way, you need to make another file copy of the background picture and resize it down to 800x600 because SB elements shouldn't exceed those dimensions.