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Motohiro Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
noneed
thanks for the help ^^ 8-)
i wasnt very activ the last days but now ive got plenty of freetime and im starting to remake it with the right bpm and offset ^^
arigatou~ :3
Topic Starter
noneed
Well, done :)
Would you like to mod it arken?Pls

.. and eh the flipped video.. sry.I'm trying to find a not flipped one and when I have on, I'll immediately add it!
arien666
[General]
Still fliped video...

[Easy]
Please REMAP with 1/1 or 1/2 rythem...
Prefer Slider Tick Rate : 0.5 or 1

[Normal+]
Same as Easy...



Well?
About fliped video, you can find normal video from youtube or torrent :3
Actually, I recommand Youtube :3
But be careful about quality too ;_;

Whatever...
Unless remapping, I won't mod again...
Sorry...
Topic Starter
noneed
Still thanks :3
Well i found a not flipped video but in the video is written "This version is not mirrored".. but just in the beginning?Does this bother?

Kay, I try to catch the beat :D and reremap it.. lol
Gonzvlo
General:

Please REMAP with 1/1 or 1/2 rythem...
You are using 1/3, Use 1/1 or 1/2

  1. Try using this slider velocity, Easy: 1.20 , Normal: 1.40
Pm Me I'll mod it after you remap with 1/1 or 1/2
Topic Starter
noneed
+added the new Video..
Backstep
Nice song.

Star ~ ;)
Topic Starter
noneed
thx! :3

Erm I know that the "Subsribe.." in the end is annoying..
But that's the only not flipped version of the vid I found.So I want to insert a picture in the end so that the picture is over the Subscribe thing, but because I'm still a beginner in making maps I don't know how to add it in the video.Can somebody please help me out? D':
Abhi_0296
naruto naruto NARUTOOOOO!!! :D
awesome opening!star, good luck!
HolyBoy
hmmm... i went on hard mode and i did the first 35 seconds of the song...

its an example on how u can structure the song. and the notes i added follows the rythm of the music (well, i am 80% sure it does) :P...

Hope this helps you make the map better k :) *cheers* :P


oh.. the notes aren't well put (so u will need to mvoe them around if u decide to keep the design to suite the map better k :)

Download: Motohira Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (noneed) [Hachibi].osu
Topic Starter
noneed

HolyBoy wrote:

hmmm... i went on hard mode and i did the first 35 seconds of the song...

its an example on how u can structure the song. and the notes i added follows the rythm of the music (well, i am 80% sure it does) :P...

Hope this helps you make the map better k :) *cheers* :P


oh.. the notes aren't well put (so u will need to mvoe them around if u decide to keep the design to suite the map better k :)
Sry, Osu can't deal with this type of files..

Guess that you have to change it into a zip file.Do it with Winzip pls.The last time I downloaded Winzip it didn't work out but it worked out with Winrar.I turned it to a rar file.Can you too?But still thx!I know that you're mapping skills are very nice because of Inou Joe-Closer ^^
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

General:
Always work with lvl 3 grid.

Remove countdown.

It shouldn't be mapped using 1/3. Re-map it all using 1/2 snap divisor instead. Pay attention to timing notes right, and spacing them properly. Avoid overlapping notes and sliders, or too confusing patterns.
For Easy: choose a Distance Snapping value (less than 1,0x) and stick to it for the whole song. For an Easy diff, use simple rythms, lots of sliders, and simple patterns.


You can ask for a re-mod when you have re-mapped it all, grab me ingame if possible, or send me a PM.
Topic Starter
noneed
Thx ^^
__
Well I wanna say some things about my map too q:

I think the easy map is fine.Simple combos, no spacing big spacing trouble and also timed the notes properly.. (or?)

Buuut the hard one.. eh
I know there are a lot of spacing mistakes which the AIMod tells me but I think for a map that hard difficult it is playable (I got S)
And there are really some confusing patterns but I really like them.But I'm also ready to delete them but first I want to hear someone else's opinion..
And I managed it to insert a picture to hide the subscribe thing (only not mirrored video I found in youtube) but i did it.. eh not very clean..
If someone finds a better video (not mirrored,better quality..)pls link
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey. Although Im not a fan of Naruto (anymore)... I've come to mod since you asked! :P

[Nibi]
00:13:999 (1,2,3) - move all these notes back 1 tick
00:18:107 (4) - extend this slider to end at 00:18:821
00:19:714 (1,2,3,4) - move these notes back 1 tick
00:19:892 (2) - ^ once done the above, remove this note
00:20:964 (x) - add a note here
00:25:785 (2) - make this a repeating slider that extends to 00:26:142 (and delete note 3)
00:26:499 (x) - replace this repeating slider with 2 hit notes. One here at 00:26:499 and the second at 00:26:678
00:27:214 (x) - add a note here (make it a new combo)
00:27:571 (1) - take off new combo for this note
00:31:678 (2) - move this note to 00:31:499
00:31:214 (3) - move this note to 00:31:857
00:32:749 (4) - move this note to 00:32:571
00:33:285 (5) - move this note to 00:32:928
00:33:821 (6) - move this note to 00:33:464 and change it into a slider that ends at 00:33:999
00:43:285 (1) - move forward 1 tick
00:44:535 (1) - ^ same thing (also i suggest you remove the new combo on this note)
00:57:749 (x) - add a note here
00:57:928 (6) - move note forward 1 tick
01:08:999 (5) - ^ same thing

Spacing is horrible in this map, make sure that you use Distance Snap, and resnap all your notes!!!

[Hachibi]
00:14:178 (x) - add a note here
00:14:535 (5) - move this note forward 1 tick

Same thing! Spacing is horribly done in this map! Make sure that you ARE using Distance Snap!!!

Overall...CHANGE THE HIT SOUNDS! Way to loud!!! I cant even hear the guy sing! Lower the volume, or make it soft!...So fix up all these and you'll be on your way!

~STAR
roflninja
Hi,
your dificulties end at different times, make them end at the same time?
your spacing needs a bit of touching up, look at this if you need an example (distance snap is a good friend)
add some lead in time (song steup>audio>lead in)

[nibi]
hitsounds are really loud (f6> select a timing point>audio>drag the bar down and repeat for every point, some parts can be louder than others, but make it so it fits the song and isnt extremely loud. dont place them on every note either, and mix them up
00:26:499 (4) - remove the repeat imo
00:43:285 (1) - shorten 1 tick and move forward 1/4 tick so it starts at 00:43:464 and ends the same
00:44:535 (1) - shorten 1 tick and move forward 1/4 tick so it starts at 00:44:714 and ends the same
00:57:928 (5) - move to 00:57:750 ?
01:03:464 (5) - shorten 1 tick and move forward 1/4 tick so it starts at 01:03:642 and ends the same
01:08:285 (x) - try something like this?
01:20:964 (1) - remove one of the hitsounds on this

[hachibi]
hitsounds to loud again
notes almost seem to just be randomly placed, make some paterns
alot seem timed to nothing, but that may just be me
00:11:321 (4,5,6,7) - spacing
01:07:749 (x) - try making shapes with the notes to make them more readable
01:16:142 (1,1,1) - all one combo

this needs a bit of work, feel free to ask me (forum pm or ingame) for help if needed
good luck!
Topic Starter
noneed
Well first of all thanks a bunch for your very good help :))
Really liked your mod because I'm still a beginner in mapping and I could understand everything perfectly..

Then I have to say that my Osu really bugged the last times (stucking mouse,editing probs..) so I wasn't able to use Distance Snap.
So i redownloaded Osu and now everthing is fine.I made some scenes new with Distance Snap (:

Nibi:
Sensei:Everything fixed
roflninja:Couldn't fix everything because some things changed after Sensei's mod ^^

Hachibi:
Sensei:Everything fixed
roflninja:Everything fixed

Hitsounds reduced ;)

Ah and Hachibi turned out very hard after the map so I called it to Kyubi.. well speaking of Kyubi pity for you Zetsubou.Naruto is really thrilling at the moment ^.^

So thanks for the star and mod.Really appreciate it :3
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Nibi:
You don't need to use custom overrides if you don't have custom hitsounds.
Don't silence notes this way. It can be confusing for players.
00:14:892 (3) - Move it one grid right so it lines up with (2).
00:17:750 (3,4) - Move them one grid left so they form a square with (1) and (2).
00:27:571 (2) - Move it one grid left.
00:27:928 (3) - Move it one grid up.

00:28:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
00:52:035 (5) - ^

00:52:035 (5,1,2,3,4) - If you want to stack them, stack them properly, although I'd recommend you not to stack them.
00:55:071 (1,2,3) - If you stack objects in a normal diff, avoid stacking objects with different timings like here. It is hard for new players.
00:59:714 (1,2) - Those are hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner.
01:01:499 (1,2,3) - Those three notes are too close to each other. The distance between two consecutive notes shoudl be the same as the distance between (3) and (4).
01:03:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
01:03:642 (5,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack them for the same reason as 00:55:071 - .
01:06:499 (1,2,3) - ^

You should perhaps try adding hitsounds if you feel like it.

Kyubi:
The beat placement makes no sense... You aren't following the vocals nor the music most of the time... Fix that.
Topic Starter
noneed

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Nibi:
You don't need to use custom overrides if you don't have custom hitsounds.
Don't silence notes this way. It can be confusing for players.
00:14:892 (3) - Move it one grid right so it lines up with (2).
00:17:750 (3,4) - Move them one grid left so they form a square with (1) and (2).
00:27:571 (2) - Move it one grid left.
00:27:928 (3) - Move it one grid up.

00:28:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
00:52:035 (5) - ^

00:52:035 (5,1,2,3,4) - If you want to stack them, stack them properly, although I'd recommend you not to stack them.
00:55:071 (1,2,3) - If you stack objects in a normal diff, avoid stacking objects with different timings like here. It is hard for new players.
00:59:714 (1,2) - Those are hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner.
01:01:499 (1,2,3) - Those three notes are too close to each other. The distance between two consecutive notes shoudl be the same as the distance between (3) and (4).
01:03:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
01:03:642 (5,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack them for the same reason as 00:55:071 - .
01:06:499 (1,2,3) - ^

You should perhaps try adding hitsounds if you feel like it.

Kyubi:
The beat placement makes no sense... You aren't following the vocals nor the music most of the time... Fix that.
Fixed.

And about the Kyubi thing.I left the map so because I needed to add some more circles and sliders for more points.I mean 5 stars and not even 1000k?I've seen things like that in some other ranked maps too so I thought it's okay..
Gonzvlo
Hi!

[General]
SPOILER
  1. Preview Point: 00:50:071
  2. You need to insert the wallpaper.
  3. The video is not playing (Insert it again).
  4. Source: Naruto Shippuden (Delete the 2nd "u" from "Shippuuden")
  5. Tags: Delete Naruto Shippuden ( It's already in the source)


[Nibi]
SPOILER
  1. You need to insert a break time!
  2. Add some hitsounds
  3. 00:13:821 (1) - Move this note to 00:13:999
  4. 00:14:892 (3) - Move this note to 00:14:714
  5. 00:15:607 (4) - Move this note to 00:15:428
  6. 00:18:107 (4) - This slider overlaps with (3) you need to move it.
  7. 00:19:535 (1,2,3,4) - You need to place these notes in Beat Snap Divisor: 1/1 (White)
  8. 00:29:535 (1) - Make it end in 00:30:428
  9. 00:44:714 (2) - Fix Spacing
  10. 00:58:285 (1) - Spinner end: 00:59:357 -
  11. Timing Sections:
  12. 01:01:499 - Delete it.
  13. 01:13:285 - ^
  14. 01:13:642 - ^
  15. 01:16:142 - ^
  16. 01:16:499 - ^
  17. 01:16:857 - ^
[Nibi]
SPOILER
  1. Insert a Break Time!
  2. Hitsounds~
  3. 00:15:607 (8,9) - Move these notes because (7) is over them.
  4. 00:18:107 (6) - Move it.
  5. 00:41:142 (11) - ^
  6. 00:30:964 (1,2,3,4) - This stream is a bit confusing.
  7. 00:46:321 (8) - New Combo
  8. 01:09:714 (1) - Spinner end: 01:11:499
  9. 01:17:928 (1) - ^ :01:20:071
  10. Timing Sections:
  11. 01:01:499 - Delete it.
  12. 01:13:285 - ^
  13. 01:13:642 - ^
  14. 01:16:142 - ^
  15. 01:16:499 - ^
  16. 01:16:857 - ^
roflninja
Hi again,

i made a hard dif, just as an example, you can use it if you want, just add it into the song folder (file>open song folder) and exit to the menu, it should appear

I also resized your background to 1024x768



Download: Motohira Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (noneed) [roflninja's Kyubi].osu
Teras
Remove naruto shippuuden from tag.....

And add (TV Size) To Title. I see a video and in the tags I spot opening 7. So you have to add this.
So make it like this... Toumei Datta Sekai (TV Size)

<.<
Topic Starter
noneed
Thx Gonz for the mod ^^
But I didn't add a break.Playtime of 1:25~.. well not really break needed.
And also roflninja for the Background right sized.
Erm I think for a guest diff you need to turn your file into a .rar file.Do it with Winrar
Awesome Diff (:

And to Teras:
When I change the name of the map and I upload it, it comes to a new thread.But what will happen to Toumei Datta Sekei ((not tv size)?
Teras

noneed wrote:

Thx Gonz for the mod ^^
But I didn't add a break.Playtime of 1:25~.. well not really break needed.
And also roflninja for the Background right sized.
Erm I think for a guest diff you need to turn your file into a .rar file.Do it with Winrar
Awesome Diff (:

And to Teras:
When I change the name of the map and I upload it, it comes to a new thread.But what will happen to Toumei Datta Sekei ((not tv size)?
Full submit after you have changed the name. That should do it.
Topic Starter
noneed
nope also new thread.
Vass_Bass
Hi~
Thanks for the mod and star =)

General
Why it's so quiet song? =( i think you need more high quality song...
It is have BG and video..there is black screen оО

Nibi
Too many finish sounds ><sounds terrible
00:20:250 (2,3,4) - move it to 00:20:428 (sounds bad)
00:25:785 (2) - 1 grid right
00:29:535 (1) - i think it's too short spinner for easy diff
00:31:857 (3) - 1 left
00:44:535 (2) - 1 down
00:52:928 (1,3) - 1 down (mb stuck them?)
00:57:928 (6) - 1 up
01:01:857 (2,3) - spacing
01:03:642 - i think it's better

01:04:535 (1) - 1 down

Kyubi
00:02:214 (2) - 1 left
00:05:428 (3) - 1 right
00:08:285 (3,4,5) - spacing
00:16:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2 grids up + spacing
01:04:892 (3,4) - 1 right
01:13:642 (2) - 1 left

star
Curisu
Hi~ :)

[Nibi]
00:00:785 - add a circle
00:01:142 - ^
00:01:500 - ^
00:11:500 (1) - end it at 00:12:928
00:17:035 (1) - spacing
00:29:535 (1) - move to 00:29:178
00:55:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2) - Hitsounds.Don't use too much finish hitsound.
01:06:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:17:035 - Add a circle

[Biju]
Awesome diff~
00:45:249 (10) - Spacing.

00:49:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too hard for hard diff.

[Kyubi]
Clap and finish sounds terrible⊙﹏⊙
Topic Starter
noneed

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~
Thanks for the mod and star =) also ^^

General
Why it's so quiet song? =( i think you need more high quality song... lol I always listen to music very very loud so I didn't notice that at alll.How can I make it louder? ô.ô
It is have BG and video..there is black screen оО ó.ô ?download bug?how should i fix that?

Nibi
Too many finish sounds ><sounds terrible I suck at hitsounds ;_;
00:20:250 (2,3,4) - move it to 00:20:428 (sounds bad) hmm gonz meant it's fine, so I leave it
00:25:785 (2) - 1 grid right ups
00:29:535 (1) - i think it's too short spinner for easy diff might be.I lenghted it
00:31:857 (3) - 1 left kay
00:44:535 (2) - 1 down kay
00:52:928 (1,3) - 1 down (mb stuck them?) lol first i stucked them but someone said thats not that good.
00:57:928 (6) - 1 up done
01:01:857 (2,3) - spacing yop
01:03:642 - i think it's better sry dont think so.would mess up following beats.

01:04:535 (1) - 1 down done

Kyubi
00:02:214 (2) - 1 left ups~
00:05:428 (3) - 1 right yo
00:08:285 (3,4,5) - spacing fixed
00:16:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2 grids up + spacing ^
01:04:892 (3,4) - 1 right but it wouldnt be align with 1 and 2 then..
01:13:642 (2) - 1 left done

star
Topic Starter
noneed

yangzd88 wrote:

Hi~ :)

[Nibi]
00:00:785 - add a circle k
00:01:142 - ^ .^
00:01:500 - ^ .^
00:11:500 (1) - end it at 00:12:928 [color=#BF0000k[/color]
00:17:035 (1) - spacing hmm i just added some notes
00:29:535 (1) - move to 00:29:178 done
00:55:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2) - Hitsounds.Don't use too much finish hitsound. kay
01:06:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ .^
01:17:035 - Add a circle changed the part

[Biju]
Awesome diff~
00:45:249 (10) - Spacing.
[attachment=0:dc057]1.png[/attachment:dc057]
00:49:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too hard for hard diff.

[Kyubi]
Clap and finish sounds terrible⊙﹏⊙
I know I suck at that D: I'll reduce them..
roflninja

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~
Thanks for the mod and star =)

General
Why it's so quiet song? =( i think you need more high quality song...
It is have BG and video..there is black screen оО
reapply the bg and video, then do a full submission. That should fix it
Topic Starter
noneed
Done :)
Topic Starter
noneed
I added in the end of Kyubi a very hard little deathstream.Is it playable?
Topic Starter
noneed
DAMN -.-"
My little brother messed up my laptop and also he deleted some of my osu maps.This one too!And when i redownload it the download takes 0.2 secs and then Osu! says 'an error loading..'
What can I do? D: I don't want to give up the map D:

bah fine now ^^
and very very much thanks to HolyBoy ^^ i just downloaded his suggestion an in its folder i found all the diffs.
everything fine now ^^
wmfchris
This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!


WTF I saw this when I'm going to download this one...So I can't mod that sorry. Full upload that again and I'll mod it.
Topic Starter
noneed
fixed.. i guess o.o'
wmfchris
[insane]
0:02:220 (5) right 1 grid
0:31:591 (5) ^
0:07:877 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) red combo (1,2) and purple combo (3) left 1 grid
0:14:048 (1,2,3,4,5) right 1 grid
0:38:739 (2,3,1,2,3) left 1 grid?
0:56:474 (1,2,3,4) unique the spacing...

nice map, but I think you'll need to re-snap all notes with gird level 3 for most of the diffs~
Topic Starter
noneed

wmfchris wrote:

[insane]
0:02:220 (5) right 1 grid erm there is no (5) at that place.. O.o(and if i move it one grid right it wouldn't be paralel with (1)
0:31:591 (5) ^ again.. wtf?!
0:07:877 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) red combo (1,2) and purple combo (3) left 1 grid i don't have purple colour
0:14:048 (1,2,3,4,5) right 1 grid
0:38:739 (2,3,1,2,3) left 1 grid?
0:56:474 (1,2,3,4) unique the spacing...

nice map, but I think you'll need to re-snap all notes with gird level 3 for most of the diffs~
I think you modded the wrong map.. oO sry.No kudos for that..
lovhin456
Hi~

This color means is important

General;
- Get a louder mp3 please, the hitsounds are louder than the song
- Change the color of the circles for ones that match

- Change the BG ?? but that's your choice
- Delete osb file and full-sub


Nibi;
- An easy/normal- diff ?? Well the stars say is easy but when I played it, I felt like it was a normal+ maybe because of the place of the notes, they're a lot of hide notes and that's what makes it absolutely not an easy diff.
- 00:11:499 >> silence this spinner
- Try to place notes mostly on white ticks
- 00:17:392 >> one tick forward
- 00:17:749 >> one tick forward
- 00:17:108 >> one tick forward and end at 00:18:999
- 00:19:535 (1)(2)(3)(4) >> one tick forward
- 00:21:142 >> add a note
- 00:33:464 >> one tick forward but end at the same place as before
- Just a suggestion, if a map has a lot of short spinner or kind of short spinner, sometimes it annoys people, to make it more clear you have some not-so-useful spinners
- 01:18:107 >> end this spinner at 01:21:499 and silence the whole spinner also end kiai time here

* This is as far as I get since I'm not good when it comes to mod insane or hard or hard+ which is like an insane- LOL
* Anyways Star ~ Good luck with your map and don't let it go to the graveyard :3
Topic Starter
noneed

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi~

This color means is important

General;
- Get a louder mp3 please, the hitsounds are louder than the song
- Change the color of the circles for ones that match[/color] is it that important?well I'll change it
- Change the BG ?? but that's your choice nah I think Naruto and Pain are fine
- Delete osb file and full-sub


Nibi;
- An easy/normal- diff ?? Well the stars say is easy but when I played it, I felt like it was a normal+ maybe because of the place of the notes, they're a lot of hide notes and that's what makes it absolutely not an easy diff. some hidden parts will not kill the beginner...
- 00:11:499 >> silence this spinner [color=#BF4000kay[/color]
- Try to place notes mostly on white ticks
- 00:17:392 >> one tick forward I changed this part and I like how it is..
- 00:17:749 >> one tick forward ^
- 00:17:108 >> one tick forward and end at 00:18:999 ^
- 00:19:535 (1)(2)(3)(4) >> one tick forward yap
- 00:21:142 >> add a note waitwat?when I fix ^ then there is already (4)
- 00:33:464 >> one tick forward but end at the same place as before k
- Just a suggestion, if a map has a lot of short spinner or kind of short spinner, sometimes it annoys people, to make it more clear you have some not-so-useful spinners
- 01:18:107 >> end this spinner at 01:21:499 and silence the whole spinner also end kiai time here kay

* This is as far as I get since I'm not good when it comes to mod insane or hard or hard+ which is like an insane- LOL
* Anyways Star ~ Good luck with your map and don't let it go to the graveyard :3
Thanks for mod and the star ;) I'll do my best to not let it slip to the graveyard!
lovhin456
Here, I made the mp3 you have louder, I think is better ~
Download: Naruto Shippuuden opening 7 HD.mp3
Just place it in the folder with the same name as the old file and it will change.
Topic Starter
noneed
thank you very much for that <3
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