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Motohiro Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (TV Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 03. November 2010 at 21:31:59

Artist: Motohiro Hata
Title: Toumei Datta Sekai (TV Size)
Source: Naruto Shippuuden
Tags: roflninja arken1015 arien666
BPM: 168
Filesize: 16101kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. aru's Taiko Oni (5 stars, 395 notes)
  2. Kyubi (4,94 stars, 235 notes)
  3. Nibi (1,12 stars, 71 notes)
  4. roflninja's Biju (4,86 stars, 192 notes)
  5. Yonbi (3,61 stars, 128 notes)
Download: Motohiro Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (TV Size)
Download: Motohiro Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thats my second beatmap and the first that doesn't suck xD
Acctually this beatmap brought me into mapping,modding and more ^^

I need to thank arien666 who timed it and made a Taiko Diff.Of course roflninja also for his awesome guest diff!
The guys at #modHelp especially Odaril.. ty

And of course all the people who played, starred and modded it!
Last edited by noneed , edited 72 times in total.
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14476
... Fliped video is not good...



BPM = 168.00
offset = 1500
After fixing BPM and offset, resnap :3



No answer...
noneed
546 posts
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noneed
thanks for the help ^^ 8-)
i wasnt very activ the last days but now ive got plenty of freetime and im starting to remake it with the right bpm and offset ^^
arigatou~ :3
noneed
546 posts
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noneed
Well, done :)
Would you like to mod it arken?Pls

.. and eh the flipped video.. sry.I'm trying to find a not flipped one and when I have on, I'll immediately add it!
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
Still fliped video...

[Easy]
Please REMAP with 1/1 or 1/2 rythem...
Prefer Slider Tick Rate : 0.5 or 1

[Normal+]
Same as Easy...



Well?
About fliped video, you can find normal video from youtube or torrent :3
Actually, I recommand Youtube :3
But be careful about quality too ;_;

Whatever...
Unless remapping, I won't mod again...
Sorry...
noneed
546 posts
Joined April 2010
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noneed
Still thanks :3
Well i found a not flipped video but in the video is written "This version is not mirrored".. but just in the beginning?Does this bother?

Kay, I try to catch the beat :D and reremap it.. lol
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
General:

Please REMAP with 1/1 or 1/2 rythem...
You are using 1/3, Use 1/1 or 1/2

  1. Try using this slider velocity, Easy: 1.20 , Normal: 1.40
Pm Me I'll mod it after you remap with 1/1 or 1/2
noneed
546 posts
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noneed
+added the new Video..
Backstep
1,007 posts
Joined September 2009
Backstep
Nice song.

Star ~ ;)
noneed
546 posts
Joined April 2010
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noneed
thx! :3

Erm I know that the "Subsribe.." in the end is annoying..
But that's the only not flipped version of the vid I found.So I want to insert a picture in the end so that the picture is over the Subscribe thing, but because I'm still a beginner in making maps I don't know how to add it in the video.Can somebody please help me out? D':
Abhi_0296
4 posts
Joined February 2010
Abhi_0296
naruto naruto NARUTOOOOO!!! :D
awesome opening!star, good luck!
HolyBoy
104 posts
Joined July 2009
HolyBoy
hmmm... i went on hard mode and i did the first 35 seconds of the song...

its an example on how u can structure the song. and the notes i added follows the rythm of the music (well, i am 80% sure it does) :P...

Hope this helps you make the map better k :) *cheers* :P


oh.. the notes aren't well put (so u will need to mvoe them around if u decide to keep the design to suite the map better k :)

Download: Motohira Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (noneed) [Hachibi].osu
noneed
546 posts
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HolyBoy wrote:

hmmm... i went on hard mode and i did the first 35 seconds of the song...

its an example on how u can structure the song. and the notes i added follows the rythm of the music (well, i am 80% sure it does) :P...

Hope this helps you make the map better k :) *cheers* :P


oh.. the notes aren't well put (so u will need to mvoe them around if u decide to keep the design to suite the map better k :)
Sry, Osu can't deal with this type of files..

Guess that you have to change it into a zip file.Do it with Winzip pls.The last time I downloaded Winzip it didn't work out but it worked out with Winrar.I turned it to a rar file.Can you too?But still thx!I know that you're mapping skills are very nice because of Inou Joe-Closer ^^
Shiro
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4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

General:
Always work with lvl 3 grid.

Remove countdown.

It shouldn't be mapped using 1/3. Re-map it all using 1/2 snap divisor instead. Pay attention to timing notes right, and spacing them properly. Avoid overlapping notes and sliders, or too confusing patterns.
For Easy: choose a Distance Snapping value (less than 1,0x) and stick to it for the whole song. For an Easy diff, use simple rythms, lots of sliders, and simple patterns.

You can ask for a re-mod when you have re-mapped it all, grab me ingame if possible, or send me a PM.
noneed
546 posts
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Topic Starter
noneed
Thx ^^
__
Well I wanna say some things about my map too q:

I think the easy map is fine.Simple combos, no spacing big spacing trouble and also timed the notes properly.. (or?)

Buuut the hard one.. eh
I know there are a lot of spacing mistakes which the AIMod tells me but I think for a map that hard difficult it is playable (I got S)
And there are really some confusing patterns but I really like them.But I'm also ready to delete them but first I want to hear someone else's opinion..
And I managed it to insert a picture to hide the subscribe thing (only not mirrored video I found in youtube) but i did it.. eh not very clean..
If someone finds a better video (not mirrored,better quality..)pls link
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey. Although Im not a fan of Naruto (anymore)... I've come to mod since you asked! :P

[Nibi]
00:13:999 (1,2,3) - move all these notes back 1 tick
00:18:107 (4) - extend this slider to end at 00:18:821
00:19:714 (1,2,3,4) - move these notes back 1 tick
00:19:892 (2) - ^ once done the above, remove this note
00:20:964 (x) - add a note here
00:25:785 (2) - make this a repeating slider that extends to 00:26:142 (and delete note 3)
00:26:499 (x) - replace this repeating slider with 2 hit notes. One here at 00:26:499 and the second at 00:26:678
00:27:214 (x) - add a note here (make it a new combo)
00:27:571 (1) - take off new combo for this note
00:31:678 (2) - move this note to 00:31:499
00:31:214 (3) - move this note to 00:31:857
00:32:749 (4) - move this note to 00:32:571
00:33:285 (5) - move this note to 00:32:928
00:33:821 (6) - move this note to 00:33:464 and change it into a slider that ends at 00:33:999
00:43:285 (1) - move forward 1 tick
00:44:535 (1) - ^ same thing (also i suggest you remove the new combo on this note)
00:57:749 (x) - add a note here
00:57:928 (6) - move note forward 1 tick
01:08:999 (5) - ^ same thing

Spacing is horrible in this map, make sure that you use Distance Snap, and resnap all your notes!!!

[Hachibi]
00:14:178 (x) - add a note here
00:14:535 (5) - move this note forward 1 tick

Same thing! Spacing is horribly done in this map! Make sure that you ARE using Distance Snap!!!

Overall...CHANGE THE HIT SOUNDS! Way to loud!!! I cant even hear the guy sing! Lower the volume, or make it soft!...So fix up all these and you'll be on your way!

~STAR
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,
your dificulties end at different times, make them end at the same time?
your spacing needs a bit of touching up, look at this if you need an example (distance snap is a good friend)
add some lead in time (song steup>audio>lead in)

[nibi]
hitsounds are really loud (f6> select a timing point>audio>drag the bar down and repeat for every point, some parts can be louder than others, but make it so it fits the song and isnt extremely loud. dont place them on every note either, and mix them up
00:26:499 (4) - remove the repeat imo
00:43:285 (1) - shorten 1 tick and move forward 1/4 tick so it starts at 00:43:464 and ends the same
00:44:535 (1) - shorten 1 tick and move forward 1/4 tick so it starts at 00:44:714 and ends the same
00:57:928 (5) - move to 00:57:750 ?
01:03:464 (5) - shorten 1 tick and move forward 1/4 tick so it starts at 01:03:642 and ends the same
01:08:285 (x) - try something like this?
01:20:964 (1) - remove one of the hitsounds on this

[hachibi]
hitsounds to loud again
notes almost seem to just be randomly placed, make some paterns
alot seem timed to nothing, but that may just be me
00:11:321 (4,5,6,7) - spacing
01:07:749 (x) - try making shapes with the notes to make them more readable
01:16:142 (1,1,1) - all one combo

this needs a bit of work, feel free to ask me (forum pm or ingame) for help if needed
good luck!
noneed
546 posts
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Topic Starter
noneed
Well first of all thanks a bunch for your very good help :))
Really liked your mod because I'm still a beginner in mapping and I could understand everything perfectly..

Then I have to say that my Osu really bugged the last times (stucking mouse,editing probs..) so I wasn't able to use Distance Snap.
So i redownloaded Osu and now everthing is fine.I made some scenes new with Distance Snap (:

Nibi:
Sensei:Everything fixed
roflninja:Couldn't fix everything because some things changed after Sensei's mod ^^

Hachibi:
Sensei:Everything fixed
roflninja:Everything fixed

Hitsounds reduced ;)

Ah and Hachibi turned out very hard after the map so I called it to Kyubi.. well speaking of Kyubi pity for you Zetsubou.Naruto is really thrilling at the moment ^.^

So thanks for the star and mod.Really appreciate it :3
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Nibi:
You don't need to use custom overrides if you don't have custom hitsounds.
Don't silence notes this way. It can be confusing for players.
00:14:892 (3) - Move it one grid right so it lines up with (2).
00:17:750 (3,4) - Move them one grid left so they form a square with (1) and (2).
00:27:571 (2) - Move it one grid left.
00:27:928 (3) - Move it one grid up.
00:28:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
00:52:035 (5) - ^
00:52:035 (5,1,2,3,4) - If you want to stack them, stack them properly, although I'd recommend you not to stack them.
00:55:071 (1,2,3) - If you stack objects in a normal diff, avoid stacking objects with different timings like here. It is hard for new players.
00:59:714 (1,2) - Those are hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner.
01:01:499 (1,2,3) - Those three notes are too close to each other. The distance between two consecutive notes shoudl be the same as the distance between (3) and (4).
01:03:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
01:03:642 (5,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack them for the same reason as 00:55:071 - .
01:06:499 (1,2,3) - ^
You should perhaps try adding hitsounds if you feel like it.

Kyubi:
The beat placement makes no sense... You aren't following the vocals nor the music most of the time... Fix that.
noneed
546 posts
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Topic Starter
noneed

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Nibi:
You don't need to use custom overrides if you don't have custom hitsounds.
Don't silence notes this way. It can be confusing for players.
00:14:892 (3) - Move it one grid right so it lines up with (2).
00:17:750 (3,4) - Move them one grid left so they form a square with (1) and (2).
00:27:571 (2) - Move it one grid left.
00:27:928 (3) - Move it one grid up.
00:28:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
00:52:035 (5) - ^
00:52:035 (5,1,2,3,4) - If you want to stack them, stack them properly, although I'd recommend you not to stack them.
00:55:071 (1,2,3) - If you stack objects in a normal diff, avoid stacking objects with different timings like here. It is hard for new players.
00:59:714 (1,2) - Those are hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner.
01:01:499 (1,2,3) - Those three notes are too close to each other. The distance between two consecutive notes shoudl be the same as the distance between (3) and (4).
01:03:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
01:03:642 (5,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack them for the same reason as 00:55:071 - .
01:06:499 (1,2,3) - ^
You should perhaps try adding hitsounds if you feel like it.

Kyubi:
The beat placement makes no sense... You aren't following the vocals nor the music most of the time... Fix that.
Fixed.

And about the Kyubi thing.I left the map so because I needed to add some more circles and sliders for more points.I mean 5 stars and not even 1000k?I've seen things like that in some other ranked maps too so I thought it's okay..
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