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Buta Otome - Tiramisu Cowboy

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 January 2016 at 00:09:45

Artist: Buta Otome
Title: Tiramisu Cowboy
BPM: 192
Filesize: 5041kb
Play Time: 00:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (3.83 stars, 90 notes)
  2. Normal (1.63 stars, 211 notes)
Download: Buta Otome - Tiramisu Cowboy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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INSANE MODE IN PROGRESS. might revive in future?


change history for normal mode
changed timing of beatmap with special thanks to hilmann23.

OD is now 5. AR moved up to 6 instead of 4. (please give any feedback on your opinion of this change :D)

changed notes according to hilmann23's suggestions on thread.

better flow thanks to Andrusowski!

changed first slider to start at the sound of the guitar instead of drum roll from walawala's suggestion.

tried adding in hitsounds( might need some help in this ^^)

hilmann23
Hey bro so ill start modding Eventhough its not done yet :)

Normal mode:

00:04:587 (4) - I think you should flip it horizontally and make the slider like this
00:05:837 (5) - Add another circle here to end it ( you could put it below the slider)
00:12:087 (1) - Change it to this and also delete the next slider and replace it with a circle. as shown in pic
00:17:087 (1,2) - Change these 2 clircle positions to maybe here and 00:17:712 (3) - make it a curve slider adding a reverse like this add one more circle after that too.
00:20:212 (8) - add a reverse
00:20:993 (9) - Remove this ( This type of thing is only on hard modes and abv)replace with 00:20:993 (9,10,11) - like this
00:22:712 (2) - You might want to place this slider further its a long slider. Also, extend the slider so it reaches the white tick.
00:25:212 (7) - Same goes for this^
00:27:087 (1) - this should be removed too and replaced with a curveslider like this?
00:28:649 (10) - add 1 circle on the same spot before 00:28:962 (11) -
00:30:680 (14) - Change circle to a slider like this long
00:31:462 (15) - add a circle below the end slider (can see from the pic)^
- Ill stop here first and maybe continue next time after you finished your map :) -
Overall not bad for a first map! :) you had the rhythm ok except some minor errors and I should recommend you to ALWAYS use distance snap. I think you should set it to like 1-1.2x and use it for the whole map for the placings of the notes as it is all over the place with no flow. :(
Andrus
Soooo, like I said. I'm not a normal expert, but here are some things that bother me.

00:17:712 (3) - move up, so you have a better flow http://i.imgur.com/lXpOL8j.png
00:21:618 (3) - 00:22:087 (1) the spacing is too low here, its the same as between 00:21:305 (2) - 00:21:618 (3) although there is less time between them
00:22:087 (1) - the same as in the first one, try to get a better flow in there
00:22:712 (2) - ^ http://i.imgur.com/tH7R569.png
00:31:774 (1) - ^ http://i.imgur.com/SqPm2aV.png (but within the playing area)
00:39:274 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - the overlapping is kinda confusing for a normal

kiai time looks fine except:
00:56:462 (4) - maybe consider this?
01:03:232 (1) - something went wrong when snapping it I guess
01:04:274 (1) - extend kiai until here

01:25:212 (6) - wrong timing, make something like http://i.imgur.com/FZfdFC9.png
01:30:524 (6) - move down for better flow
01:33:024 (5) - move to the left
01:33:649 (6) - also strange flow
01:40:837 (3) - ^
01:44:587 (1) - ^
01:54:587 (1) - 01:57:712 (6) the overlapping and spacing between 01:55:837 (3) - 01:56:462 (4) is confusing
01:59:274 (1) - extend kiai
01:59:587 (1) - 02:01:462 (4) make them the exact same shape
02:11:930 (1) - not sure about this, a break looks more fitting here
02:23:337 (3) - flow
02:27:087 (5) - ^
02:33:337 (5) - ^ ( http://i.imgur.com/Mp6Fkb1.png for example)
02:37:087 (1) - ^

You also need to work on the hitsounding, I've only found a few notes with hitsounds. Needs to be a lot more.
I ignored the combos, I don't really have that much experience at placing them
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