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After School - Bang! [OsuMania|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
iJXL
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Surono
Halo dari My Qwekwek <(``)

k = Blue
d = Red

[General]
Please Chech AiMod (Ctrl + Shift +A ) because many problem must fix yourself :lol:

[Futsuu]
Nice, but better u must remove long note like this example, 00:40:275 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - kddkdkdkd -> kd kdk k d

[Muzukashii]
hmm, Muzukashii not allowed note like dkddd
00:40:275 (155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - and this, this not not muzukashii :o

hmm.. u must create new Muzukashii, old Muzukashii please change name to Oni
and read this Guide Mapping Taiko : t/152263

Hope helpful xD dont forget give Kudosu~ :lol:
Topic Starter
iJXL

Surono wrote:

Halo dari My Qwekwek <(``)

k = Blue
d = Red

[General]
Please Chech AiMod (Ctrl + Shift +A ) because many problem must fix yourself :lol: Fixed! :)

[Futsuu]
Nice, but better u must remove long note like this example, 00:40:275 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - kddkdkdkd -> kd kdk k d Done!

[Muzukashii]
hmm, Muzukashii not allowed note like dkddd
00:40:275 (155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - and this, this not not muzukashii :o

hmm.. u must create new Muzukashii, old Muzukashii please change name to Oni Okay done! I will make a Muzu diff.
and read this Guide Mapping Taiko : t/152263 Thanks for the link! Will go and check~

Hope helpful xD dont forget give Kudosu~ Its helpful! Thanks for the mod~ ;) :lol:
naoe dami
from Noob at modding queue
[General]
for taiko
d : don (small red)
k : kat (small blue)
D : big don
K : big kat
Note : I just follow the vocal but less at rhythm
And this song actually have repetitive pattern so maybe it has same pattern

[Fuutsu]
00:18:775 (38) - move to 00:19:025 and d
00:19:275 (39) - k
00:19:775 (40) - move to 00:20:125
00:20:775 (42) - ^ 00:21:075
00:21:775 (44) - d
00:22:775 (46) - move to 00:23:025 and d
00:23:275 (47) - k
00:23:775 (48) - move to 00:24:025
00:29:775 (62) - d
00:33:775 (72) - ^
00:37:775 (82) - ^
00:41:025 (90) - move to 00:41:775
00:45:275 (101) - d
00:46:775 (105) - ^
00:50:525 (113) - move to 00:50:025
00:50:275 (112) - k
00:51:025 add k
00:52:525 (118) - delete
00:51:775 (116) - move to 00:52:025 and make same like 00:02:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - or 00:19:025 before in kiai time (just my suggest)
oops, i forget from 02:02:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - don't use d k d k d k, better to change the pattern

[Muzukashii]
you can change this 00:19:025 (59,60,61) - become like 00:05:025 (10,11,12) - and other like that, cuz it's follow the rhthm/notes

OK, just that, sorry I can't mod Oni, and sorry to be rude with your map :')
Topic Starter
iJXL

naoe dami wrote:

from Noob at modding queue
[General]
for taiko
d : don (small red)
k : kat (small blue)
D : big don
K : big kat
Note : I just follow the vocal but less at rhythm
And this song actually have repetitive pattern so maybe it has same pattern

[Fuutsu]
00:18:775 (38) - move to 00:19:025 and d
00:19:275 (39) - k
00:19:775 (40) - move to 00:20:125
00:20:775 (42) - ^ 00:21:075
00:21:775 (44) - d
00:22:775 (46) - move to 00:23:025 and d
00:23:275 (47) - k
00:23:775 (48) - move to 00:24:025
00:29:775 (62) - d
00:33:775 (72) - ^
00:37:775 (82) - ^
00:41:025 (90) - move to 00:41:775 - No sorry, I think it sound better if I dont change it :)
00:45:275 (101) - d
00:46:775 (105) - ^
00:50:525 (113) - move to 00:50:025 - ^ same reason
00:50:275 (112) - k
00:51:025 add k
00:52:525 (118) - delete why delete?
00:51:775 (116) - move to 00:52:025 and make same like 00:02:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - or 00:19:025 before in kiai time (just my suggest) oh i hope i got what u mean there, i changed it a little bit.
oops, i forget from 02:02:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - don't use d k d k d k, better to change the pattern - yeah i have hard time on that part too, i also want to chg the pattern but i dont know what kind of pattern will suit that part xD

[Muzukashii]
you can change this 00:19:025 (59,60,61) - become like 00:05:025 (10,11,12) - and other like that, cuz it's follow the rhthm/notes wow true! applied this to all of the diffs. :)

OK, just that, sorry I can't mod Oni, and sorry to be rude with your map :') No no no , its not rude and it's okay~~ Your mod is very helpful! I applied mostly everything from your mod(and changed it little bit). Thanks for the mod!! :)
YunoFanatic
[NM]
00:11:525 (11525|0) - You might need to add another note in here to be consistent on what you did in 00:11:525 (11525|0) - same with 00:12:025 (12025|5) -
00:13:525 (13525|0,14025|5) - what are these you suddenly stop doing doubles in the same sound.
00:15:525 (15525|0,16025|5) -
there's so many problems like this throughout the diff i think you need to fix it, no reasons to deny this its either you follow on what you did or delete those parts which are doubled to be consistent on what were you doing.
00:41:525 (41525|5,41775|4,42025|3) - would suggest you to control+ H this part cause it has new sound which is " bang bang bang" and i thought it would need a new pattern as there is a new sound.
01:18:650 (78650|3) - end it on 01:20:275 (80275|4) - lol

[HD]
00:11:525 (11525|1,12025|5) - in this diff you arent still following this loud sound? consider adding another note or double these kind of parts since were in hd now.
00:33:275 (33275|6,33525|3,33775|2,33775|1) - i think in this part the pattern here needs to be stair or jacks since that " Ha ha ha" vocal. same with other
02:10:525 (130525|1,130525|2) - i dont get that sudden switch to lns.

the mx diff is pretty neat i like your patterns ! Goodluck!
Topic Starter
iJXL

YunoFanatic wrote:

[NM]
00:11:525 (11525|0) - You might need to add another note in here to be consistent on what you did in 00:11:525 (11525|0) - same with 00:12:025 (12025|5) - Fixed!
00:13:525 (13525|0,14025|5) - what are these you suddenly stop doing doubles in the same sound. Fixed!
00:15:525 (15525|0,16025|5) -
there's so many problems like this throughout the diff i think you need to fix it, no reasons to deny this its either you follow on what you did or delete those parts which are doubled to be consistent on what were you doing. Yeah hehe, added an additional note which has this strong beat~ Thanks! :)
00:41:525 (41525|5,41775|4,42025|3) - would suggest you to control+ H this part cause it has new sound which is " bang bang bang" and i thought it would need a new pattern as there is a new sound. Uhm..... i dont really agree, since i'm not following the vocals. Im following the background music where it has like fast sound/music. :D
01:18:650 (78650|3) - end it on 01:20:275 (80275|4) - lol Fixed!

[HD]
00:11:525 (11525|1,12025|5) - in this diff you arent still following this loud sound? consider adding another note or double these kind of parts since were in hd now. Fixed!
00:33:275 (33275|6,33525|3,33775|2,33775|1) - i think in this part the pattern here needs to be stair or jacks since that " Ha ha ha" vocal. same with other Not following the vocal. :D
02:10:525 (130525|1,130525|2) - i dont get that sudden switch to lns. I can hear that there is a sound which is suitable for the LNs. idk how to explain that sound though :o

the mx diff is pretty neat i like your patterns ! Goodluck! Thank you for the mod!! :)
Hello Yuno! Thanks for mod. I'm quite busy today. I will go through your mod tomorrow. Once again, thanks! :) :D
Aruel
Hi~ mod arrived! :)
After school XD
I suggest put MV just imo
And just my think... take a timing check
Your BG=1228x767 It's not rank condition. change fixel 1280x720 or 1366x768 or... other BG XD

7K MX
00:11:525 - add one for pitch
00:13:525 - ^
00:15:525 - ^
00:17:525 - ^
00:19:525 - ^
00:19:900 - missed note?
00:20:275 - add one for pitch
00:21:525 - ^
00:21:900 - missed note?
00:22:275 - add one for pitch
00:23:525 - ^
00:23:900 - missed note
00:24:275 - add one for pitch
00:41:212 - have sound
00:41:337 (41337|4) - remove
00:52:275 - add one for pitch
00:54:275 - ^
00:57:212 - add one and 00:57:337 (57337|4) - remove
01:05:212 - ^01:05:337 (65337|4) - ^
01:18:650 (78650|3) - change start point 01:18:775 -
01:32:275 - add one for pitch
01:34:275 - ^
01:37:212 - add one and 01:37:337 (97337|4) - remove
01:40:275 - add one for pitch
01:44:275 - ^
02:02:525 (122525|5,122525|6) - Doesn't need two notes. remove one for pitch
02:03:025 (123025|4,123025|5) - ^
02:03:525 (123525|4,123525|3) - ^
02:04:025 (124025|5,124025|6) - ^
02:04:525 (124525|4,124525|5) - ^
02:05:025 (125025|3,125025|4) - ^
02:05:525 (125525|6,125525|5) - ^
02:06:025 (126025|5,126025|4) - ^
02:06:525 (126525|4,126525|3) - ^
02:07:025 (127025|6,127025|5) - ^
02:07:525 (127525|4,127525|5) - ^
02:08:025 (128025|3,128025|4) - ^
02:08:525 (128525|5,128525|6) - ^
02:09:025 (129025|4,129025|5) - ^
02:09:525 (129525|3,129525|4) - ^
02:10:025 (130025|5,130025|6) - ^
02:27:212 - add one and 02:27:337 (147337|4) - remove
02:38:275 - add one for pitch
02:40:275 - ^
02:43:212 - add one and 02:43:339 (163339|4) - remove

I suggest make all.
and notes patterns are too repeated
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
iJXL

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi~ mod arrived! :)
After school XD
I suggest put MV just imo Good idea! But i dont like putting video bcos it will make the file larger xD
And just my think... take a timing check Well I think the timing is good~ :)
Your BG=1228x767 It's not rank condition. change fixel 1280x720 or 1366x768 or... other BG XD Oh thanks! Fixed it! Changed it to 1280x720 :D

7K MX
00:19:900 - missed note?
00:21:900 - missed note?
00:23:900 - missed note

Applied everything, except the 3 above.
Because from 00:18:275 (18275|6,18275|0,18275|2) to 00:25:275 (25275|1,25275|5,25275|4) , actually I'm following the sound like "ching ching ching ching"

I suggest make all.
and notes patterns are too repeated Yea sorry xD, I guess its okay bcos this song have repetitive patterns @.@
Good luck :) Thank you! and thanks for the useful mod!! :) :D
Aruel
Oh my god
My mistake 1024x768 and 1366x768
Sorry. make you confused T^T[list:1337]
Topic Starter
iJXL

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Oh my god
My mistake 1024x768 and 1366x768
Sorry. make you confused T^T[list:1337]
Oh hahaha. gwaenchana Chicken-shi. I will change it to 1024x768 1366x768 soon.
Its okay, no worries! :D :)

EDIT: Changed! :oops:
Kruzon


Hi, my 7k column format is as the following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

NM

the following notes are irrelevant and considered over-mapped to this difficulty:
00:12:025 (12025|5) -
00:14:025 (14025|5) -
00:16:025 (16025|5) -
00:18:025 (18025|5) -
-

00:34:775 (34775|6) - this is better of on 5, pr
00:35:775 (35775|6) - move to 6
00:36:025 (36025|5) - move to 4
00:36:275 (36275|3) - move to 6

00:40:275 (40275|0,40525|1,40775|2,41025|3,41275|4,41525|5,41775|4) - I assume these are plotted based on vocal, i do not recommend full stair pattern on normal, as it maybe bit tad harder for newbie, But this is merely my opinion. In any case, for this stair, you need to delete 00:42:025 (42025|3) - as it's not part of the vocal

the following notes are irrelevant and considered over-mapped to this difficulty (2):
00:46:025 (46025|5) -
00:48:025 (48025|5) -

00:56:275 (56275|0,56525|1,56775|2,57025|3,57275|4,57525|5,57775|4,58025|3) - these stairs.. hmm, over-mapped, try to listen deeply to the song. I'd suggest you to plot single notes based on " Ah Ha, Ah Ha, Ah Ha" vocal

00:59:525 (59525|0,59775|0) - meaningless jacks, i would shift 00:59:775 (59775|0,59900|2) - 1 time to the right

01:00:275 (60275|3) - move to 1, this dual note seem like a hindrance and randomly put to me,
01:00:775 (60775|6) - move to 2
01:01:025 (61025|4,61025|0) - shift them 2 times to the right
01:01:525 (61525|4,61525|0) - shift them 2 times to the right
01:02:025 (62025|2) - meaningless note, delete
01:01:775 (61775|0) - move to 4, and
01:01:900 (61900|1) - move to 6
01:02:275 (62275|4,62275|3) - move to 3 and 7 respectively, pattern consistency

now, implement new pattern variation to avoid boring:
01:02:775 (62775|6) - move to 6
01:03:775 (63775|0) - move to 6
01:03:900 (63900|2) - move to 4

01:06:025 (66025|3) - delete
01:06:275 (66275|1,66275|0) - give wider gap to them to emphasized powerful and loud sound at this point, i suggest move them to 2 and 6 respectively
01:06:525 (66525|2) - move to 1

01:07:275 (67275|3) - move to 6, more reasonable for pr
01:07:775 (67775|6) - move to 5
01:08:025 (68025|4) - move to 4, did you see what pattern I'm trying to tell you here?

01:10:025 (70025|2) - this may has cue sound here, but in the end it still felt over-mapped to me, try to listen the song at this time, and see why i found this note conflicting

01:18:775 (78775|3) - previously you spam single notes for stair pattern, but for here there's sound along the long note- my point is, there's legit reason to plot single notes side by side of the long note, try to listen on this area

01:21:275 (81275|1,81275|5,81775|1,81775|5) - i know this is normal diff, and you're trying to make it easier by reducing notes density in your normal diff map. however, if you simply deleting notes that support the main base instrument, that's a bad idea. 01:21:525 (81525|5) - clearly missing important notes, I suggest to add note there. Solution: Either you reduce notes density here to 1 noter and placed them in zig zag order (2 - 6 - 2), or you can just go ahead with the jacks, but input the missing notes in between 01:21:275 (81275|5,81275|1,81775|1,81775|5) -

- mod ends -

good luck with your map :)
Seijiro
Here I am as request in my queue :3

SPOILER
~ Legend ~

  1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
  2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
  3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this
Please reply with:
  1. Green = Fixed
  2. Red = Didn't fix
  3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

Before I start I'd like to ask you which mapset is the principal one, because based on your reply you'll have to add a new diff or not. I hope that it's the Mania one, because you'll have to make a Kantan otherwise. Keep this in mind, please.

~ Taiko section ~



[General]
  1. Please, try to change your patterns a bit, because it's clear as the sun light that you copy/pasted your first minute of mapping

[Oni]
  1. 00:10:775 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - Man, I know it's hard to come up with something new, but using the same pattern 4 times in a row it's really super booooooring. Convert 00:14:150 (44,64) - into k at least, so your patterns differ a bit from each other
  2. 00:19:150 (69,70) - Ctrl + G on these. The triplet ends with a high pitch...
  3. 00:19:900 - Add a d, there's clearly a note there
  4. 00:21:900 - Add a d, same reason ^
  5. 00:23:150 (89,90) - Another Ctrl + G, as for 00:19:150 (69,70) -
  6. 00:23:900 - Add a d
  7. 00:34:025 (132,133,134) - What... please, try to avoid using this kind of pattern. It clearly states in the Taiko Ranking Criteria that you should avoid them unless there is a really good reason to do that
  8. 00:35:025 (137) - Convert into k
  9. 00:41:275 (167,171,172) - Convert into k, you also have claps in the music, what else do you need to make them kats? xD
  10. 00:40:775 (163,165) - Ctrl + G on these ones
  11. 00:42:275 (175) - Another of those strange endings. Please, try to avoid them
  12. 00:42:775 - 00:55:775 - Copy/pasted section. Use the suggestions I already said to fix this part too
  13. 00:57:775 (249,250) - Convert into k for a better rhythm
  14. 00:58:275 (253) - As I already said, try to avoid them
  15. 01:04:275 (273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289) - Use same pattern used for 00:40:275 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175) -
  16. 01:10:025 (304,305,306) - Avoid these (I already mentioned it before)
  17. 01:21:025 (350,351,352) - Same ^
  18. 01:21:275 (352,353,354) - They should have the same color
  19. 01:22:275 - 01:38:275 - Copy/pasted section
  20. 01:47:275 (465) - Convert into d
  21. 01:49:275 (475) - Convert into d
  22. 01:54:775 - 02:26:025 - You just keep alternating dons and kats in this section. Why? Isn't any better rhythm you could follow? Sorry, but I can't mod something like this, I'm not the mapper. This sections clearly says "Please, what should I do here?" and my answer is that you'll have to find it yourself, sorry :/
  23. 02:26:275 (620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636) - You already used this pattern, please change into something else
  24. 02:28:775 - 02:44:275 - Copy/pasted section, use the suggestion I made before to fix this part
  25. 02:44:275 - Why there's nothing from here on? The music is clearly going on and fort, why stopping here? This song could be mapped till the end, you know?

[Muzukashii]
  1. I can clearly see you just removed some notes from your Oni for this diff, so I'll just point out important stuff regarding the Muzuakashii only. Use the previous mod as a reference for this one too
  2. 00:02:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - kkd or ddk triplets are allowed on this diff, but sparengly, which means that you should avoid them as much as you can. Actually, you should use them only if you have enough pause after one of it, but here they are one after another, so it's a big "no"
  3. 00:34:025 (107,108,109) - This is unrankable. You can't use such a pattern on Muzukashiis. It was barely acceptable for Oni, but for a Muzukashii is really too much
  4. 00:40:275 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - Are you really sure about this pattern? Using an even number of notes for streams here after you used only triplets until now is really a bad idea, trust me. This will make miss a lot of players
    The rest of your diff is basically copy/pasted once again, so there's nothing I haven't covered here. Just pay attention on those things a pointed out before, because they're really worrysome
  5. As for the Oni, finish your map

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:025 (30,31) - Move them 1/2 earlier. The sound from 00:18:775 - is really misleading too...
  2. The rest is just copy/pasted once again, so I have nothing more to add here too
  3. Finish your map

~ Mania section ~



1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10


[General]
  1. Please, try to change your patterns a bit, because it's clear as the sun light that you copy/pasted your first minute of mapping
  2. The general diffspread is way too easy. Consider increasing the overall difficulty a bit. Just to get to the point: your current NM is just an EZ

[7K MX]
  1. 00:09:525 (9525|1,9525|0) - Ctrl + H on these and move on the 3rd column 00:09:900 (9900|5) - this
  2. 00:25:525 (25525|5,25525|4,25900|2,25900|1) - Same ^
  3. 00:26:275 - 00:40:275 - Was this part supposed to be for a HD? It as also just few patterns copy/pasted few times, so why don't you try to make something different maybe?
  4. 00:50:275 - Oh man, from here on you just copy/paste again every pattern you used before :o Please, be more creative :/
  5. 01:53:900 - 02:02:275 - You could add some LNs to follow vocals here. It will fit well imo
  6. 02:10:525 (130525|5) - I don't really understand the meaning of using these LNs repeatedely...
  7. 02:44:275 - Finish your map please

[7K HD]
  1. I can't really say much here, actually, I can't say a thing. Everything flows well, but you once again copy/pasted your patters again and again. Please, be more creative
  2. 01:47:775 - From here on you're using too many notes for the left hand, compared to the right one. Try to balance them...
  3. 02:44:275 - Finish your map please

[7K NM]
  1. Once again is another copy of your upper diffs, but with less notes, so I have nothing to mod here at all
  2. Finish your map please

Alright, that's all.
I'm sorry for this mod, but there isn't much a t all to be modded, since you just copied a couple of patterns all around your map (which you still have to finish)
I hope you can improve this mapset, good luck ~
Topic Starter
iJXL

Kruzon wrote:



Hi, my 7k column format is as the following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

NM

00:40:275 (40275|0,40525|1,40775|2,41025|3,41275|4,41525|5,41775|4) - I assume these are plotted based on vocal, i do not recommend full stair pattern on normal, as it maybe bit tad harder for newbie, But this is merely my opinion. In any case, for this stair, you need to delete 00:42:025 (42025|3) - as it's not part of the vocal Good idea! but I deleted the stair and decided to follow the "Bang! Bang! Bang!" vocal.

00:56:275 (56275|0,56525|1,56775|2,57025|3,57275|4,57525|5,57775|4,58025|3) - these stairs.. hmm, over-mapped, try to listen deeply to the song. I'd suggest you to plot single notes based on " Ah Ha, Ah Ha, Ah Ha" vocal Nice~ Yup, deleted the stairs and I followed the Ah Ha vocal.

01:08:025 (68025|4) - move to 4, did you see what pattern I'm trying to tell you here? Yes~ Nice one! I really like it.

01:10:025 (70025|2) - this may has cue sound here, but in the end it still felt over-mapped to me, try to listen the song at this time, and see why i found this note conflicting Oh, I think it is okay~ I'm trying to be consistent with part like this 01:14:025 (74025|3) :D

01:18:775 (78775|3) - previously you spam single notes for stair pattern, but for here there's sound along the long note- my point is, there's legit reason to plot single notes side by side of the long note, try to listen on this area True! Added some notes here~

01:21:275 (81275|1,81275|5,81775|1,81775|5) - i know this is normal diff, and you're trying to make it easier by reducing notes density in your normal diff map. however, if you simply deleting notes that support the main base instrument, that's a bad idea. 01:21:525 (81525|5) - clearly missing important notes, I suggest to add note there. Solution: Either you reduce notes density here to 1 noter and placed them in zig zag order (2 - 6 - 2), or you can just go ahead with the jacks, but input the missing notes in between 01:21:275 (81275|5,81275|1,81775|1,81775|5) - Okay~ I put them in 2-6-2 patterns.

- mod ends - Thank you so much for modding! It looks much better now! :) I applied mostly everything from your mod, except some of the above~ Once again thank you for the helpful mod!! :) :D

good luck with your map :)

------EDIT 1: Currently going through Mr Sergio's mod!
------EDIT 2: DONE!~ :) :D



[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Here I am as request in my queue :3

SPOILER
~ Legend ~

  1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
  2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
  3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this
Please reply with:
  1. Green = Fixed
  2. Red = Didn't fix
  3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

Before I start I'd like to ask you which mapset is the principal one, because based on your reply you'll have to add a new diff or not. I hope that it's the Mania one, because you'll have to make a Kantan otherwise. Keep this in mind, please. Yeap it is the Mania one :) .

~ Taiko section ~



[General]
  1. Please, try to change your patterns a bit, because it's clear as the sun light that you copy/pasted your first minute of mapping Okay @_@ hehe.

[Oni]
  1. 01:54:775 - 02:26:025 - You just keep alternating dons and kats in this section. Why? Isn't any better rhythm you could follow? Sorry, but I can't mod something like this, I'm not the mapper. This sections clearly says "Please, what should I do here?" and my answer is that you'll have to find it yourself, sorry :/ Okay @_@ I will find a much better pattern~! :) :D
  2. 02:26:275 (620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636) - You already used this pattern, please change into something else Didn't change this, since I already changed most of the patterns like this throughout the whole song, so I guess it is okay to keep this. :D :)
  3. 02:44:275 - Why there's nothing from here on? The music is clearly going on and fort, why stopping here? This song could be mapped till the end, you know?I guess it is good enough to map until here bcos it might take players a long time hehe. :)

Anyway I fixed mostly everything from your mod! (like 99% of it!) Thank you so much for going through my Oni diff! :D :)

[Muzukashii]
  1. I can clearly see you just removed some notes from your Oni for this diff, so I'll just point out important stuff regarding the Muzuakashii only. Use the previous mod as a reference for this one too
  2. 00:02:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - kkd or ddk triplets are allowed on this diff, but sparengly, which means that you should avoid them as much as you can. Actually, you should use them only if you have enough pause after one of it, but here they are one after another, so it's a big "no" I think the pause between them is enough for players to react, so I did not change this. :)
  3. 00:34:025 (107,108,109) - This is unrankable. You can't use such a pattern on Muzukashiis. It was barely acceptable for Oni, but for a Muzukashii is really too muchFixed! :)
  4. 00:40:275 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - Are you really sure about this pattern? Using an even number of notes for streams here after you used only triplets until now is really a bad idea, trust me. This will make miss a lot of playersOkay~ I will change the pattern! :D
    The rest of your diff is basically copy/pasted once again, so there's nothing I haven't covered here. Just pay attention on those things a pointed out before, because they're really worrysome Okay~ Changed some of the patterns~ and fixed most of the things from your mod! :) :D
  5. As for the Oni, finish your map Same reason :)

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:025 (30,31) - Move them 1/2 earlier. The sound from 00:18:775 - is really misleading too... No sorry, it is better to keep it~ :) :D
  2. The rest is just copy/pasted once again, so I have nothing more to add here too Fixed some of the things as mentioned in Oni. Thanks! :) :D
  3. Finish your map

EDIT 1: Thank you so much for modding my Taiko diffs!I will go through ur Mania mod tmrw bcos Im busy now~Thanks again!!~ :) :D
EDIT 2: Mania mod done too! :) Thanks! :D


~ Mania section ~



1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10


[General]
  1. Please, try to change your patterns a bit, because it's clear as the sun light that you copy/pasted your first minute of mapping
  2. The general diffspread is way too easy. Consider increasing the overall difficulty a bit. Just to get to the point: your current NM is just an EZ

[7K MX]
  1. 00:09:525 (9525|1,9525|0) - Ctrl + H on these and move on the 3rd column 00:09:900 (9900|5) - this Fixed!
  2. 00:25:525 (25525|5,25525|4,25900|2,25900|1) - Same ^ Good idea, fixed!
  3. 00:26:275 - 00:40:275 - Was this part supposed to be for a HD? It as also just few patterns copy/pasted few times, so why don't you try to make something different maybe? Changed the patterns~ :)
  4. 00:50:275 - Oh man, from here on you just copy/paste again every pattern you used before :o Please, be more creative :/
  5. 01:53:900 - 02:02:275 - You could add some LNs to follow vocals here. It will fit well imo True but it is hard to follow/map vocal sometimes, so did not change this. :)
  6. 02:10:525 (130525|5) - I don't really understand the meaning of using these LNs repeatedely... Oh~ about this, u can hear the sound at the background. that sound is a bit longer so I decided to put short LNs for that sound. :D
  7. 02:44:275 - Finish your map please Same reason :D

[7K HD]
  1. I can't really say much here, actually, I can't say a thing. Everything flows well, but you once again copy/pasted your patters again and again. Please, be more creative
  2. 01:47:775 - From here on you're using too many notes for the left hand, compared to the right one. Try to balance them... I think it is still alright, it is not too dense on the left side. So did not change this :D
  3. 02:44:275 - Finish your map please

[7K NM]
  1. Once again is another copy of your upper diffs, but with less notes, so I have nothing to mod here at all Changed the patterns a little bit~! :D
  2. Finish your map please

Alright, that's all.
I'm sorry for this mod, but there isn't much a t all to be modded, since you just copied a couple of patterns all around your map (which you still have to finish)
I hope you can improve this mapset, good luck ~ Thank you so much for the mod! I learned a lot from your Taiko mods! Many thanks!! :) :D
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Futsuu]
raise global hitsound volume to 70% please, I can't hear a thing
00:19:025 (30,31) - this should be d k to match the pitch, according to your pattern
00:21:025 (34,35) - and this should be k d to follow pattern

other than that, the futsuu is okay

[Muzukashii]
raise global hitsound volume to 70%
00:02:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - okay hmm, I don't think it's advisable to have these kind of patterns in muzukashii. It's best to change it to ddd and kkk, depending on which you find is good
00:11:775 (29,30,31) - here too, for instance this might be good as kkk. It's best to go through the song and change all the rest of the triples that are not ddd, kkk, ddk and kkd. (Highly recommend you do this, I won't point out the rest, but go through yourself)
01:18:650 (270,271,272) - remove the finish, otherwise the DK is a little hard to read and play for muzu players

outside of that, the muzu is pretty good, the beats all make sense and everything, it's just the use of triples~
If you feel your difficulty has become too easy as a result, you can put a bit more notes in the breaks

[Oni]
Oni's pretty good all around~

well, it's mostly the lower difficulties~
good luck with rank~
Topic Starter
iJXL

Coro wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Futsuu]
raise global hitsound volume to 70% please, I can't hear a thing
00:19:025 (30,31) - this should be d k to match the pitch, according to your pattern
00:21:025 (34,35) - and this should be k d to follow pattern

Fixed everything! :)

other than that, the futsuu is okay

[Muzukashii]
raise global hitsound volume to 70%
00:02:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - okay hmm, I don't think it's advisable to have these kind of patterns in muzukashii. It's best to change it to ddd and kkk, depending on which you find is good
00:11:775 (29,30,31) - here too, for instance this might be good as kkk. It's best to go through the song and change all the rest of the triples that are not ddd, kkk, ddk and kkd. (Highly recommend you do this, I won't point out the rest, but go through yourself)
01:18:650 (270,271,272) - remove the finish, otherwise the DK is a little hard to read and play for muzu players

Fixed everything!

outside of that, the muzu is pretty good, the beats all make sense and everything, it's just the use of triples~
If you feel your difficulty has become too easy as a result, you can put a bit more notes in the breaks

[Oni]
Oni's pretty good all around~ Thanks! I also fixed the hitsound volume for Oni~

well, it's mostly the lower difficulties~
good luck with rank~ Thanks alot for the mod!! It is really helpful~! :) :D
[R]
Suggestion

[Muzukashi]
00:17:275 - d
00:59:775 - k
01:04:275 - d
01:09:775 - k
01:13:775 - k
[Oni]
00:54:275 - d
01:20:650 - k
01:37:775 - k
02:43:900 - k
02:44:275 - D
Topic Starter
iJXL

[R] wrote:

Suggestion

[Muzukashi]
00:17:275 - d No sorry,I purposely put this as k bcos to avoid the repetition of the patterns :D
00:59:775 - k Yup! applied, sounds better now~
01:04:275 - d Nope, it will be too hard for players to play "dkd" since this is Muzu :)
01:09:775 - k I am following vocal here, "oh oh oh." :)
01:13:775 - k
same ^, "ha ha ha"

[Oni]
00:54:275 - d Nope, background music has higher pitch so i put k instead of d.
01:20:650 - k |Applied!
01:37:775 - k |Applied!
02:43:900 - k |Nope, but applied to 02:43:775 (713) instead
02:44:275 - D | Good idea! since that sound is stronger. but i guess it will be too hard for players to play so i did not apply this.
Thanks for the modddd~~ My Taiko diffs looks great now!
Reba
Mania Mod
Apologies for super ultra mega late mod (_ _)
You didn't have to mod my July - Somewhere D: sorry if i made u think that way, message me if u need a mod on another map, i'll do it for you for free without having to do a request.

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

[7K NM]
00:11:900 - add a note here, previous boom beats have 2 notes
00:13:900 - ^ do the same action for the same reason
00:15:900 - ^
00:17:525 (17525|0) - delete
00:17:525 (17525|4) - move to column 6
if you have done the two above, make 00:17:275 (17275|2) - an LN and end it here 00:17:775.
00:18:275 ~ 00:24:025 - i think it's better to make it like this (this image is from 00:18:275 to 00:20:275)
if u agree on this photo, the next pattern is 6, 4, 1. 6, 4, 1. and so on
00:24:275 (24275|3) - add a note here
00:26:275 - i can see that when it's a starting point of a line you always use the pattern 0 and 6, but if u listen until here 00:27:275, the sound pitch goes higher, so i recommend to do the following:
00:26:275 (26275|6) - move to 2
00:26:525 (26525|2) - move to 3
00:26:775 (26775|6) - move to 2
00:27:025 - move to 3
00:27:275 (27275|3) - move to 5 and make it a LN and end it here 00:27:775
00:27:525 (27525|2) - i think you can delete that since it's the easiest difficulty
00:30:275 - add a note here.
00:31:275 (31275|0) - make it a LN until here 00:31:775
00:31:525 (31525|2) - delete
00:34:275 - add a note here
00:38:275 - ^
00:40:275 - add a short note in column 4
00:42:275 ~ 01:52:275 - same patterns over and over again, find and modify the ones you changed above. Here too: 02:28:275 ~ 02:44:275
01:52:275 (112275|5) - delete

[7K HD]
Coming soon.

[7K MX]
Coming soon.



Thank you for waiting :)
Topic Starter
iJXL

iJXL wrote:

- R e b a - wrote:

Mania Mod
Apologies for super ultra mega late mod (_ _) No no no its alright!~ No worries, I can wait~ Take your time~ :) :D
You didn't have to mod my July - Somewhere D: sorry if i made u think that way, message me if u need a mod on another map, i'll do it for you for free without having to do a request. Ahhh, I am so sorry if I made you think that way too >.< & I am really sorry about that my map is longer than your Chilli Con Carne map. No worries~ :) :D I won't take my mod on July-Somewhere as M4M. Please don't give pressure to yourself ;) :D :)

PS: Sorry for my bad English :D


Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

[7K NM]
00:30:275 - add a note here.
00:34:275 - add a note here
00:38:275 - ^

\o/ Applied everything except the 3 above. This is because the sound is similar as the 2 notes ones, so I decided not to add a note. Thanks for the helpful mods! ;)

[7K HD]
Coming soon. No worries~~ Take your time! I can wait~ We are all human, not robots. We all have our real life things to do too. I understand so no worries~~! :) :D

[7K MX]
Coming soon.



Thank you for waiting :) I am the one who should thank you spending your time modding my map despite you are busy~ Thanks alot Reba-shi, & I will go through your NM mod when I am at home!(not at home atm) xD-DONE! :) :D
Topic Starter
iJXL
nooooo sorry double post ...... ;_;
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



MX
00:11:900 - should be 3 notes same emphasis with other 3 notes in terms of beat
00:13:900 - ^'
00:15:900 -
00:17:900 -
00:19:900 - doesnt make any sensse to omit the note here, significant beat.
yet you use 00:20:025 (20025|5) - 3 notes here. this is very inconsistent and does not fit the song very well, please recheck your whole diffs for same pattern issues
00:21:900 - ^
00:23:900 - ^


00:43:525 - should be 3 notes here, you used 3 notes on this phase earlier, keep it consistent for layering
00:43:900 - you do use 2 across whole phase for this one here, but doesn't look consistent to me since in terms of beat strength its the same with the ohter 2 notes, use 3 would be better.

you should recheck your whole diffs for consistency in layering.
good luck :3


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

some stuffs which you need to probably get more familiar with
Osu!mania Ranking Criteria
How to Get Your Map Ranked

extra stuffs to make your beatmap more sophisticated
WARNING: CREDIT GOES TO RESPECTIVE USERS, I DID NOT CLAIM ANY RIGHTS TO THEIR WORKS!
hitsound tutorial + download pack
LordRaika's Hitsound Guide

wants to improve your background / audio / video? visit the link below v
Ringating's BG, Audio and Video Improvement Queue

wants to improve / add video for your beatmap? visit the link below v
Shad0w1and's HD Video Encoding Queue

tools made by Agka for SV / BPM changes calculator (?)
Topic Starter
iJXL

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



MX
00:11:900 - should be 3 notes same emphasis with other 3 notes in terms of beat
00:13:900 - ^'
00:15:900 -
00:17:900 - hmm, for these, i think the sound are little bit softer compared to the 3 notes ones. so i did not add one more note.
00:19:900 - doesnt make any sensse to omit the note here, significant beat.
yet you use 00:20:025 (20025|5) - 3 notes here. this is very inconsistent and does not fit the song very well, please recheck your whole diffs for same pattern issues
00:21:900 - ^
00:23:900 - ^ oh, actually these 00:20:025 (20025|5,20150|4,20275|3) - , im following this sounds 00:04:025 (4025|5,4150|4,4275|3) -



00:43:525 - should be 3 notes here, you used 3 notes on this phase earlier, keep it consistent for layering i used 2 here bcos the sound is not that strong compared to the phase earlier :)
00:43:900 - you do use 2 across whole phase for this one here, but doesn't look consistent to me since in terms of beat strength its the same with the ohter 2 notes, use 3 would be better. same reason ^

you should recheck your whole diffs for consistency in layering.
good luck :3


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~ Thank you so much for modding! :) :D
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

some stuffs which you need to probably get more familiar with
Osu!mania Ranking Criteria
How to Get Your Map Ranked

extra stuffs to make your beatmap more sophisticated
WARNING: CREDIT GOES TO RESPECTIVE USERS, I DID NOT CLAIM ANY RIGHTS TO THEIR WORKS!
hitsound tutorial + download pack
LordRaika's Hitsound Guide

wants to improve your background / audio / video? visit the link below v
Ringating's BG, Audio and Video Improvement Queue

wants to improve / add video for your beatmap? visit the link below v
Shad0w1and's HD Video Encoding Queue

tools made by Agka for SV / BPM changes calculator (?)
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