DJ Okawari - Luv Letter

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Neo Adonis
- Very important - you should pay attention.
- Not so important, but I can help you.
(?) - Just a suggestion or in doubt.
(♥) - Not a problem, but something it liked me ^^

[General]
(♥) - Good skin!!
(*) On "song setup", storyboard tab, select "default" as preferred skin to avoid problems with non-skinned elements.
(*) 02:13:024 (-) - You could add a note here with finish and whistle sound...
(*) 02:25:022 (-) - And add here another volume section add turn up volume half a tick...
(*) 02:27:548 (-) - ^
(*) 02:30:548 (-) - ^

[Bronze]
(*) 01:05:767 (3) - Add whistle sound
(*) 01:07:030 (3) - ^
(*) 01:37:659 (-) - You can add a inherit timing section here and turn up the volume 1 or two ticks to give contrast to the notes along with the piano...
(*) 01:38:290 (-) - ... and return the volume back to the normal here.
(*) 02:12:708 (5) - Remove finish sound.
(*) 02:12:866 (6) - You should put a timing section and reduce the volume 2 tick...
(*) 02:28:180 (1) - New combo here.
(*) 03:09:544 (3) - Add whistle sound.
(*) 03:10:807 (6) - ^
(*) 03:29:752 (3) - ^
(*) 03:31:015 (5) - ^
(*) 03:31:331 (1) - Add finish sound.

[Silver]
(*) 00:40:349 (3) - You should move this slider 3 grids to the right to follow spacing rule...
(*) 00:43:349 (4) - And this circle 1 grid to the left.
(*) 00:47:138 (5,6,7) - And this pieces 1 grid to the right.
(*) 01:01:663 (2) - Sorry if I'm too strict, but move this circle 4 grids to the left and 2 grids down.
(*) 01:07:346 (1) - Move this circle 2 grids to the left...
(*) 01:07:978 (2,3,4) - ...along with this...
(*) 01:09:872 (1,2,3) - ...and trying to keep the same distance between these pieces.
As I'm seeing, from this part, you're using distance snapping, something you didn't do before. I'd recommended that you use custom or fixed snap on all the song, but not mixing these. Well... I won't spoil your mapping, because that isn't too bad at all (at least in this case).
(*) 01:13:030 (6,7,8) - The spacing is different here: you're using more spacing. At least try to use "distance snap" with these objects.
(*) 01:33:870 (2) - Use distance snap or, if you're using again custom spacing, move this object 1 grid to the left.
(?) 01:35:449 (4) - New combo (?)
(?) 01:40:343 (4) - ^
(?) 01:55:657 (4) - ^
(?) 02:00:709 (3) - ^
(*) 02:10:497 (4) - Again (Ctrl+V): Use distance snap or, if you're using again custom spacing, move this object 1 grid to the left.
(?) 02:52:177 (4) - Why don't you add another repetition to the slider with a finish sound?
(!) 03:54:934 (1) - To be extra-precisous, the object should be on 03:54:980 or 03:54:990. Move it by replacing the last line of the .osu file with 256,192,234980,5,2 or adding a non-inherited timing section (73.840 BPM, but it really doesn't matter this) on 234980 and putting there the note.

[Gold]
Again custom spacing (excluding the jumps)... I can't mod this... :(
(*) 01:02:294 (3) - Add a new combo... the draining should be stopped!
(!) 03:52:803 (-) - Add here a new timing section, 85 BPM, and snap the
(!) 03:54:934 (1) - As same as the [Silver] diff, the object should be on 03:54:980 or 03:54:990.


I "luv" the song! Star!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Neo Adonis wrote:

- Very important - you should pay attention.
- Not so important, but I can help you.
(?) - Just a suggestion or in doubt.
(♥) - Not a problem, but something it liked me ^^

[General]
(♥) - Good skin!! Thank you! :)
(*) On "song setup", storyboard tab, select "default" as preferred skin to avoid problems with non-skinned elements. I didn't think of that, thanks
(*) 02:13:024 (-) - You could add a note here with finish and whistle sound... Done
(*) 02:25:022 (-) - And add here another volume section add turn up volume half a tick... Good idea, I've never messed with volume before haha
(*) 02:27:548 (-) - ^
(*) 02:30:548 (-) - ^

[Bronze]
(*) 01:05:767 (3) - Add whistle sound Added
(*) 01:07:030 (3) - ^
(*) 01:37:659 (-) - You can add a inherit timing section here and turn up the volume 1 or two ticks to give contrast to the notes along with the piano...
(*) 01:38:290 (-) - ... and return the volume back to the normal here. I like this :D
(*) 02:12:708 (5) - Remove finish sound. Yes
(*) 02:12:866 (6) - You should put a timing section and reduce the volume 2 tick... Okay
(*) 02:28:180 (1) - New combo here. This is already a new combo o_O
(*) 03:09:544 (3) - Add whistle sound. Done
(*) 03:10:807 (6) - ^
(*) 03:29:752 (3) - ^
(*) 03:31:015 (5) - ^
(*) 03:31:331 (1) - Add finish sound. Okay

[Silver]
(*) 00:40:349 (3) - You should move this slider 3 grids to the right to follow spacing rule... Done
(*) 00:43:349 (4) - And this circle 1 grid to the left. Fixed
(*) 00:47:138 (5,6,7) - And this pieces 1 grid to the right.
(*) 01:01:663 (2) - Sorry if I'm too strict, but move this circle 4 grids to the left and 2 grids down. Sure thing
(*) 01:07:346 (1) - Move this circle 2 grids to the left...
(*) 01:07:978 (2,3,4) - ...along with this...
(*) 01:09:872 (1,2,3) - ...and trying to keep the same distance between these pieces.
As I'm seeing, from this part, you're using distance snapping, something you didn't do before. I'd recommended that you use custom or fixed snap on all the song, but not mixing these. Well... I won't spoil your mapping, because that isn't too bad at all (at least in this case). I don't even know how I did my spacing. Will pay more attention to it in this map
(*) 01:13:030 (6,7,8) - The spacing is different here: you're using more spacing. At least try to use "distance snap" with these objects. Ack you're right, fixed
(*) 01:33:870 (2) - Use distance snap or, if you're using again custom spacing, move this object 1 grid to the left. Done
(?) 01:35:449 (4) - New combo (?) I don't think it's necessary
(?) 01:40:343 (4) - ^ Yes here
(?) 01:55:657 (4) - ^ Not here I think
(?) 02:00:709 (3) - ^ Leaving this one too
(*) 02:10:497 (4) - Again (Ctrl+V): Use distance snap or, if you're using again custom spacing, move this object 1 grid to the left. Okay
(?) 02:52:177 (4) - Why don't you add another repetition to the slider with a finish sound? Added as a new circle
(!) 03:54:934 (1) - To be extra-precisous, the object should be on 03:54:980 or 03:54:990. Move it by replacing the last line of the .osu file with 256,192,234980,5,2 or adding a non-inherited timing section (73.840 BPM, but it really doesn't matter this) on 234980 and putting there the note. Fixed, thanks

[Gold]
Again custom spacing (excluding the jumps)... I can't mod this... :(Will do! Don't worry ... D:
(*) 01:02:294 (3) - Add a new combo... the draining should be stopped! Going to leave this one
(!) 03:52:803 (-) - Add here a new timing section, 85 BPM, and snap the Fixed! This part was giving me trouble XD
(!) 03:54:934 (1) - As same as the [Silver] diff, the object should be on 03:54:980 or 03:54:990. Done


I "luv" the song! Star!
Thank you so much for everything! :D
Doodley
Very pretty song with a very pretty background and very pretty hit circles. I love it. :3

You don't need to change anything if you don't want to.

General Notes
Timing sounds fine to me. Piano refrains are generally hard to time, so kudos to you for managing it.
Very good for your first map.

Bronze
01:40:175: Move this over one blue tick to 01:40:333

Silver
These changes might make the map a little harder.
00:37:024: Replace this with a slider, extending to 00:37:339
00:37:655: Replace this with a slider, extending to 00:37:971
00:39:550: Replace this with a repeating slider, extending to 00:39:708.
00:42:076: Again.
00:52:338: Add a note, I suggest stacking it and then make the slider closer.
00:57:548: Move this slider to 00:57:864, shorten it to 00:58:495
01:34:176: Add a note. I suggest placing it inbetween the next note.
01:36:702: Again.
01:39:228: Again.
01:43:648: Again.
01:46:174: Again.
01:48:700: Again.
01:54:384: Again.
02:01:962: Agai--NO WAIT! Stack it this time.
02:01:594: Again, stack it on 5.

Gold
Flawless!

Star.
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

stickmeister wrote:

Very pretty song with a very pretty background and very pretty hit circles. I love it. :3

You don't need to change anything if you don't want to.

General Notes
Timing sounds fine to me. Piano refrains are generally hard to time, so kudos to you for managing it.
Very good for your first map. Why thank you! I have had the help of some very knowledgeable timers though ... :P

Bronze
01:40:175: Move this over one blue tick to 01:40:333 I can see why, but I think I'll leave this since it's an easier map

Silver
These changes might make the map a little harder.
00:37:024: Replace this with a slider, extending to 00:37:339 Leaving this one, but ...
00:37:655: Replace this with a slider, extending to 00:37:971 ... changing it here
00:39:550: Replace this with a repeating slider, extending to 00:39:708. I'm using single notes to change up the patterns so I'll leave this
00:42:076: Again.
00:52:338: Add a note, I suggest stacking it and then make the slider closer. I'm leaving this as well because this is the "calm" section so I don't want to overload it
00:57:548: Move this slider to 00:57:864, shorten it to 00:58:495 This solider coincides with the change in the violins so I'm going to keep this as well
01:34:176: Add a note. I suggest placing it inbetween the next note. Instead of doing it every time I think I'll use it for emphasis ...
01:36:702: Again.
01:39:228: Again. ... such as here. Added
01:43:648: Again.
01:46:174: Again. Added here as well
01:48:700: Again.
01:54:384: Again.
02:01:962: Agai--NO WAIT! Stack it this time. I like this here :O
02:01:594: Again, stack it on 5. Done, also moved closer to (4) and (1) of next combo

Gold
Flawless!

Star.
Thanks so much for all your suggestions! :D
brikel
Hi~ Hi~ :)

[General]
03:54:980 (1) - add spinner at the end point 03:58:230?
And... If you can edit song, cut after 03:59:855 ??. It's your selection.

[Bronze]

00:38:287 (3) - use finish?
00:58:495 (5) - add finish?
01:13:651 (5) - add finish?
02:37:011 (4) - add finish?

[Silver]

00:38:287 (7) - use finish?
00:48:391 (7) - use finish?
01:13:651 (8) - use finish?
01:44:911 (3) - add finish?
01:47:437 (4) - add finish?
03:53:582 (4) - Is it your mistake? please move 03:53:424.

[Gold]

00:38:287 (5) - use finish?
00:48:391 (3) - use finish?
01:13:651 (9) - use finish?
01:44:911 (6) - add whistle?
01:47:437 (6) - add whistle?
02:37:011 (7) - add whistle?


Um... I like this style song. Star~
Kiddo-Kun

Suggestions wrote:

[Bronze]

00:35:445 (1) - Remove New Combo

01:06:073 (1) - ^

01:07:336 (1) - ^

Star~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

brikel wrote:

Hi~ Hi~ :)

[General]
03:54:980 (1) - add spinner at the end point 03:58:230?
And... If you can edit song, cut after 03:59:855 ??. It's your selection.

[Bronze]

00:38:287 (3) - use finish? Don't want it to sound too heavy early on so leaving this
00:58:495 (5) - add finish? I would but the beat after also has a cymbal, I don't like how it sounds together
01:13:651 (5) - add finish? Added but lowered the volume
02:37:011 (4) - add finish? I don't think it fits here

[Silver]

00:38:287 (7) - use finish? Same as Bronze
00:48:391 (7) - use finish? I think clap sounds better here
01:13:651 (8) - use finish? Done, lowered volume
01:44:911 (3) - add finish? I think it sounds too close to the one before
01:47:437 (4) - add finish? I don't think this sounds good here
03:53:582 (4) - Is it your mistake? please move 03:53:424. Oops, it must have been snapped wrong. Fixed

[Gold]

00:38:287 (5) - use finish? Added and reduced volume
00:48:391 (3) - use finish? Not here
01:13:651 (9) - use finish? Yes here
01:44:911 (6) - add whistle? Okay, added
01:47:437 (6) - add whistle? Done as well
02:37:011 (7) - add whistle? Added here as well


Um... I like this style song. Star~
Thank you for all your hitsound suggestions, I'm not very good at those :P

Death_the_kid wrote:

Suggestions wrote:

[Bronze]

00:35:445 (1) - Remove New Combo Done

01:06:073 (1) - ^

01:07:336 (1) - ^ Leaving this one

Star~
Thanks! :)
TheVileOne
Bronze

01:41:438 - Add a note here and stack it on 3. 01:40:806 (2) - can be moved to account for the spacing difference. I think it could work.

Eh other than that it's fairly fine.

Silver

00:33:235 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Move these up 1 unit. The problem here is that you create an pattern of having 1 note that is 1 unit greater than the others. Note 3 is supposed to continue that pattern. The rest of the notes should be moved with it. It will also fix the one unit spacing issue with this 00:37:024 (5,6) -

Gold

Fine



I think the song is repetitive, but the mappings are good. Star.
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. BPM: 95 (Flat)
  2. Offset: 29450
  3. KIAI should be the same on all difficulties.


~Bronze~
  1. 00:40:502 (2,3) - Wrong stuck
  2. 00:41:450 (4,1,2,3) - 1 grid down.
  3. 00:57:871 (4,5) - 1 grid right.
  4. 01:12:397 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
  5. 01:15:555 (2,3) - Re-stuck them.
  6. 02:45:239 (4) - Wrong stuck
  7. 02:45:555 (5,1) - ^
  8. 03:05:450 (4) - 1 grid up


~Silver~
  1. 00:36:555 (4,5,6) - Spacing.
  2. 01:20:292 (2) - Move it down a bit.
  3. 02:23:134 (1,2,3) - Spacing.


Rest is fine. Nice job.
Krisom
/late mod x_x

HiHi ^^!

[General]
Is the osb. in use? If not, delete.
I think a Normal HitClap would sound better than the soft hitclaps, you'd have to tune down the volume a bit though <_<. (attached the one I think it would suit better at the end, feel free to refuse it)

[Bronze]
Overall, some whistles seem to be placed awkwardly, but the nice placement on claps makes up for it and it even makes them feel ok
02:09:856 (4) - /Nazi/ Spacing. Too close to (3)
Whoa, I really, and I mean REALLY enjoyed playing this ^^!

[Silver]
03:18:059 (4) - You forgot a clap here ._.
Nothing to say here, great~

[Gold]
I can hear some repeat sliders with Whistles and Claps at the same repeat. Try to use just one hitsound per sliderpoint/circle.
03:46:477 (1) - UnWhistle the end.
03:47:109 (2) - Whistle the start, unwhistle the second repeat
03:47:740 (3) - Whistle the start, unwhistle the first repeat
03:48:372 (4) - UnWhistle the second repeat
Great ^^!

~I'm in love with this song and this map. Do you mind if I make a guest difficulty? Forum PM me if I can and I'll start working on it as soon as possible ^^!

Of course I'll star this~!

Download: soft-hitclap.rar
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

TheVileOne wrote:

Bronze

01:41:438 - Add a note here and stack it on 3. 01:40:806 (2) - can be moved to account for the spacing difference. I think it could work. I don't really like this here, sorry :S

Eh other than that it's fairly fine.

Silver

00:33:235 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Move these up 1 unit. The problem here is that you create an pattern of having 1 note that is 1 unit greater than the others. Note 3 is supposed to continue that pattern. The rest of the notes should be moved with it. It will also fix the one unit spacing issue with this 00:37:024 (5,6) - Thanks for explaining to me, moved

Gold

Fine



I think the song is repetitive, but the mappings are good. Star.
Thanks! :)

Midget wrote:

~Overall~
  1. BPM: 95 (Flat) Okay
  2. Offset: 29450 Done
  3. KIAI should be the same on all difficulties.


~Bronze~
  1. 00:40:502 (2,3) - Wrong stuck Erm I don't really know what you mean by this but I'm guessing spacing?
  2. 00:41:450 (4,1,2,3) - 1 grid down. Moved
  3. 00:57:871 (4,5) - 1 grid right. Fixed
  4. 01:12:397 (3,4,5) - Spacing. (3) moved one grid down, (5) one up
  5. 01:15:555 (2,3) - Re-stuck them. Sorry again but what do you mean by "stuck"? >_<
  6. 02:45:239 (4) - Wrong stuck
  7. 02:45:555 (5,1) - ^
  8. 03:05:450 (4) - 1 grid up Okay, moved


~Silver~
  1. 00:36:555 (4,5,6) - Spacing. (4, 5) moved one grid up
  2. 01:20:292 (2) - Move it down a bit. Moved one grid down and right
  3. 02:23:134 (1,2,3) - Spacing. (2) moved two grids down and one left


Rest is fine. Nice job.
Thank you very much, especially for timing (I'm not very good at that) :P
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Krisom wrote:

/late mod x_x

HiHi ^^!

[General]
Is the osb. in use? If not, delete.
I think a Normal HitClap would sound better than the soft hitclaps, you'd have to tune down the volume a bit though <_<. (attached the one I think it would suit better at the end, feel free to refuse it)

[Bronze]
Overall, some whistles seem to be placed awkwardly, but the nice placement on claps makes up for it and it even makes them feel ok
02:09:856 (4) - /Nazi/ Spacing. Too close to (3) Moved one grid left
Whoa, I really, and I mean REALLY enjoyed playing this ^^!

[Silver]
03:18:059 (4) - You forgot a clap here ._. LOL. Added XD
Nothing to say here, great~

[Gold]
I can hear some repeat sliders with Whistles and Claps at the same repeat. Try to use just one hitsound per sliderpoint/circle.
03:46:477 (1) - UnWhistle the end. Sorry but I like the syncopations of the whistles here :P
03:47:109 (2) - Whistle the start, unwhistle the second repeat
03:47:740 (3) - Whistle the start, unwhistle the first repeat
03:48:372 (4) - UnWhistle the second repeat
Great ^^!

~I'm in love with this song and this map. Do you mind if I make a guest difficulty? Forum PM me if I can and I'll start working on it as soon as possible ^^!

Of course I'll star this~!
Thanks so much! Reply again or PM me your difficulty when you're done and I'll add it :)
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Why has Bronze got a different offset than Silver and Gold? All difficulties should have the same offset. The offset for Silver/Gold sounds like it would work (Offset: 29,446)
  2. No tags? Perhaps you could put "Piano Orchestral" in there. (I can't come up with many for this song. I don't know it too well :o)


[BRONZE]

Nicely mapped, but it still seems a bit hard for the easiest difficulty. Perhaps you could make a "Beginner" difficulty of sorts? (Not called beginner, of course. Copper, maybe?)

[SILVER]

Looks good to me

[GOLD]

02:33:222 (1) - Is there anyway that you could close this jump? Even a small spacing jump like this in the middle of a stream can be disorientating, since the player would be focusing on doing the stream rather than anything else afterwards.

Well, this was a pleasant surprise. This was actually pretty nice. I wasn't expecting much, but this was pretty good. Nice one

Starred
Lilac
Alright, let's start. AND FINALLY, SOMEONE PMs ME FOR A MOD REQUEST. THANK YOU!!!

[General]
Current BG Colours should be brown for [Bronze], grey for [Silver] and yellow for [Gold].

Surprised you haven't used any spinners. On top of that, you've only used 1.4 slider velocity but that's beside the point...

Suggestion that you remove all claps before 00:49:66 and replace them with the appropriate hitsound.

[Bronze]
Iffy. Like Doomsday, I probably wouldn't call this an Easy. However, making another difficulty seems unreasonable. I don't mind you keep it, if you make an easier difficulty, replace this one.

[Silver]
Not a great fan of short sliders.

00:40:33 (2,3) - The spacing...is too close... .-.

[Gold]
The breaks here are pretty awkwardly placed. You should really map 01:03:54 -

Nothing really major wrong with the map. The song is great but I'm kinda disappointed with this map. Nevertheless, it can be ranked.
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Why has Bronze got a different offset than Silver and Gold? All difficulties should have the same offset. The offset for Silver/Gold sounds like it would work (Offset: 29,446) Ack X_X Guess I forgot to change all the difficulties. Thanks, fixed
  2. No tags? Perhaps you could put "Piano Orchestral" in there. (I can't come up with many for this song. I don't know it too well :o) I put "piano instrumental", hope it's appropriate :P


[BRONZE]

Nicely mapped, but it still seems a bit hard for the easiest difficulty. Perhaps you could make a "Beginner" difficulty of sorts? (Not called beginner, of course. Copper, maybe?) Ah ... well I suppose I could ... I'll see how my summer schedule goes, I'm going to be pretty busy the next few weeks but after that if I have some time I'll think about this

[SILVER]

Looks good to me

[GOLD]

02:33:222 (1) - Is there anyway that you could close this jump? Even a small spacing jump like this in the middle of a stream can be disorientating, since the player would be focusing on doing the stream rather than anything else afterwards. Okay I continued the pattern with the start of the slider and re - designed it so that it's just a curve (instead of a squiggle) so that the end is about the same place

Well, this was a pleasant surprise. This was actually pretty nice. I wasn't expecting much, but this was pretty good. Nice one

Starred
Thanks! :)

MarioBros777 wrote:

Alright, let's start. AND FINALLY, SOMEONE PMs ME FOR A MOD REQUEST. THANK YOU!!! Lol, no problem? XD

[General]
Current BG Colours should be brown for [Bronze], grey for [Silver] and yellow for [Gold]. Hey, nice idea. Done

Surprised you haven't used any spinners. On top of that, you've only used 1.4 slider velocity but that's beside the point... I wasn't really sure how to deal with slider velocity / tick rate, so I guess I'll experiment on my next map or something >_<

Suggestion that you remove all claps before 00:49:66 and replace them with the appropriate hitsound. All right, but what do you mean by "appropriate hitsound"? I'll keep this for now I guess

[Bronze]
Iffy. Like Doomsday, I probably wouldn't call this an Easy. However, making another difficulty seems unreasonable. I don't mind you keep it, if you make an easier difficulty, replace this one. Will do if my schedule permits :O

[Silver]
Not a great fan of short sliders.

00:40:33 (2,3) - The spacing...is too close... .-. Moved (3) one grid right (actually fixes spacing between (3) and (4) so it's the same as (1) and (2) now too :P)

[Gold]
The breaks here are pretty awkwardly placed. You should really map 01:03:54 - I was thinking about this break too. Will do

Nothing really major wrong with the map. The song is great but I'm kinda disappointed with this map. Nevertheless, it can be ranked.
Thanks for your input :) Hoping to find some BATs and get their opinions, haha
roflninja
Hi,

[bronze]
Fine, but maybe line 03:10:814 (6) up with (1)?
maybe increase the note size? seeing as it's the easiest dif in your set. your choice

[silver]
fine to me

[gold]
also fine
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

roflninja wrote:

Hi,

[bronze]
Fine, but maybe line 03:10:814 (6) up with (1)? After Kiai time it's supposed to be "messy" (but I prefer "free", as in it's not ligned up perfectly and stuff to suit the music)
maybe increase the note size? seeing as it's the easiest dif in your set. your choice Ehmm I'll think about it but I think current size is fine

[silver]
fine to me

[gold]
also fine
Thanks for your time :)
Sallad4ever
Hai bubble :D
Sorry I'm late

[General]
- in the mp3 name I saw " Music by DJ OKAWARI,TSUKINO SORA,TSUNENORI", if the other two name is also the arranger, I suggest you to put them on the tags
- The countdown in Bronze diff is enable, but the other 2 is not (it's better to remove the countdown, it doesn't really fit with the song)
- whoops, the most stack (Always stack) is unrankable, decrease it by 3 ticks. Do this for all diff
- whoopsx2, Bronze have different BPM than the other 2. Gold & Silver's BPM is good
- whoopsx3, Gold diff have 3 offsets, while the other 2 diff only have 2 offsets. Unfortunately I can't help you about which one is correct
- too bad the slider velocity is the same on all diff, it's already this far so you can keep it


[Skin]
some problem with the skin here

- the score-numbers touch the score bar and the progress bar (as pointed out by the arrow), this happened because of the font size. As for the accuracy number that touch the progress bar, you just have to moved the score-numbers down a bit (btw if you change the your screen resolution to standard you'll notice this problem)
- the easy way to check if the score number touch the bar or not, use the progress bar as a comparison. If the score numbers is longer than the progress bar, then something is wrong.
- some strange thing I found is how number 5 is smaller compared to other numbers, is the original font is also like that or you use a different font size for number 5?
- another thing is how pause-retry is almost invincible because of the silver color background, I suggest you to border the text with a black or any other darker color to make it more visible


[Bronze]
This is normal right?
01:08:603 (4) - this doesn't really fits the song IMO, maybe divide it into 2 slider like this?

03:54:980 (1) - I really think finish is much better than whistle here, beside this is the end of your map, so finish is more appropriate. Your choice

[Silver]
00:57:232 (3,4) - is this a jump or a spacing error? if its a jump I think it's to small
03:54:980 (1) - same as above

[Gold]
03:32:584 (4) - add another repeat and also finish at the end
03:54:980 (1) - same as above

Mostly technical stuff be sure to double check everything ;)
if you need help PM me and I gladly help you, cause this song is truly beautiful*sigh I wish I saw this sooner so I can make a diff
Good Luck and sorry for posting an essay here :o
Lilac
I'm sorry that my mod was useless...

I wish I could mod it better. Think I'm losing the touch.
Powerdrone
I feel bad for not really being able to mod this, I didn't notice anything that needed to be changed really. It's really well done, and I like that all the difficulties sort of follow the same style which is nice.

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