1. Easy (1,76 stars, 118 notes)
2. Hard (2,97 stars, 213 notes)
3. Insane (4,35 stars, 299 notes)
4. Kibboo's Insane (4,66 stars, 309 notes)
5. Normal (2,09 stars, 136 notes)
6. Shoonskyres' Extra (5,2 stars, 381 notes)

1. General
   • Felt like there was a general lack of symmetry
   • Sometimes I was embarassed with the changements of the slider's velocity
   • I found that your normal diff. was pretty hard for a normal diff -lol-
   
   
   
2. Insane
   Design & stuff
   • Shape of the slider at 00:07:523 (3) is unpleasant..
   - Same for 01:15:023 (6) -overlap..-
   - Also for those three 00:44:555 (5,7,2)
   • Perhaps you could make this one more symmetrical 00:31:742 (1)
   
   Circles
   • I feel like this circle hasn't its place here 00:17:836 (2)
   • I don't feel really comfortable with the rythm of those three circles, 00:21:742 (3,4,5)
   -but maybe it's because I'm not really good in hard diffs.-
   
   Sliders
   • This one seems not to be in rhythm 00:16:430 (2)
   
   
3. Hard
   Design & stuff
   • I would have liked to have seen more symmetry -it's a pity-
   • The pattern seemed fuzzed to me but it's k
   
   Sliders
   • I feel like those sliders are too abrupt, as if they didn't fit in the rhythm 00:40:336 (5,6)
   
   
4. Normal
   Design & stuff
   • The shape of this slider disturbs me... 00:00:805 (1)
   • Perhaps you can reorganize those elements to make them more symmetrical 00:18:305 (1,2,3)
   • Personnally I'd change this slider 00:56:742 (1) to make it look like this one 00:57:836 (2)
   
   Circles
   • You put few circles at 3/4 of a bar, and it doesn't sound good -sometimes it's too hard to feel them,
   when there is no voice or battery to help- for example:
   - 00:04:398 (4)
   - 00:19:398 (2)
   • I felt like a circle was missing before 00:23:617 (2) and before 01:21:273 (1)
   • Seemed to me that those circles were not easily findable intuitively (could break combos):
   - 00:58:461 (3,4)
   - 01:18:773 (2,3)
   
   Sliders
   • Same as last point ↑
   - 01:19:398 (4)
   • This slider doesn't fit with the rhythm playing. 00:26:898 (2)
   -I'd rather see circle+slider or stuff like that.-
   - Same for here 01:07:680 (1)
   • This. 00:31:742 (1) Seemed weird because it passes through the beginning of a bar, and it's a bit like last points.

Alliiiiiiiance wrote:

1. General
   • Felt like there was a general lack of symmetry I Agree
   • Sometimes I was embarassed with the changements of the slider's velocity I will look for it
   • I found that your normal diff. was pretty hard for a normal diff -lol-[/color] Personaly I found it normal, but I will try to work on it.
   
   
   
2. Insane
   Design & stuff
   • Shape of the slider at 00:07:523 (3) is unpleasant..
   - Same for 01:15:023 (6) -overlap..-
   - Also for those three 00:44:555 (5,7,2)
   
   • Perhaps you could make this one more symmetrical 00:31:742 (1)
   I did it
   
   Circles
   • I feel like this circle hasn't its place here 00:17:836 (2) It have for me, but I will keep it in mind if found sometime to fit
   • I don't feel really comfortable with the rythm of those three circles, 00:21:742 (3,4,5) Ok
   -but maybe it's because I'm not really good in hard diffs.-
   
   Sliders
   • This one seems not to be in rhythm 00:16:430 (2) I agree
   
   
3. Hard I will look at this
   Design & stuff
   • I would have liked to have seen more symmetry -it's a pity-
   • The pattern seemed fuzzed to me but it's k
   
   Sliders
   • I feel like those sliders are too abrupt, as if they didn't fit in the rhythm 00:40:336 (5,6)
   
   
4. Normal I change many things you suggest to me and I'll try to updrade it in the few days.
   Design & stuff
   • The shape of this slider disturbs me... 00:00:805 (1)
   • Perhaps you can reorganize those elements to make them more symmetrical 00:18:305 (1,2,3)
   • Personnally I'd change this slider 00:56:742 (1) to make it look like this one 00:57:836 (2)
   
   Circles
   • You put few circles at 3/4 of a bar, and it doesn't sound good -sometimes it's too hard to feel them,
   when there is no voice or battery to help- for example:
   - 00:04:398 (4)
   - 00:19:398 (2)
   • I felt like a circle was missing before 00:23:617 (2) and before 01:21:273 (1)
   • Seemed to me that those circles were not easily findable intuitively (could break combos):
   - 00:58:461 (3,4)
   - 01:18:773 (2,3)
   
   Sliders
   • Same as last point ↑
   - 01:19:398 (4)
   • This slider doesn't fit with the rhythm playing. 00:26:898 (2)
   -I'd rather see circle+slider or stuff like that.-
   - Same for here 01:07:680 (1)
   • This. 00:31:742 (1) Seemed weird because it passes through the beginning of a bar, and it's a bit like last points.

Thanks for this summary, I change many things and the beatmap looks better now

PhoniexPvP wrote:

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Normal
I would consider adding a easy map to it if you can. I will look at it

00:26:898 - Consider moving it a bit off the other one its in a weird position. I tried something, still need to be confirm
00:48:617 - Same as above!. same as above
00:58:930 - Consider making it rotate one more time (This isn't wrong its just a suggestion). I'll let it like that, if someone say me the same thing ill do it
01:07:680 - Consider moving it a bit off 01:07:211. I agree
Other then that! PERFECT!

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Hard
00:32:211 - Consider moving the start of it to 00:32:289. I think you mean <To 00:32:367 - >
00:45:961 - Delete. I did it
Thats it!PERFECT!

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Insane
00:07:367 - (Suggestion) Put it on top of the circle xD I don't know what do you mean by on the top, but if it a joke, I know what you mean
00:53:851 - Delete the circle 2 is to much. Agree
01:27:523 - The end is just not strong enough to hold onto this one. Ok
Thats it!PERFECT!

Thank you very much for this mod

RifdiAN wrote:

Easy

EASY
I changed everything that you said and ty for the advice of no stacking
00:04:398 (3) I woud really avoid stacking notes on easy diffs. Did one time, and modders said "nope"

00:13:305 (1) Same as this one ^

00:17:992 The gap between the spinner and the note after is a bit too short imo. It may be hard for some new players, so i'd suggest leave a bigger gap

00:23:617 (1) Yap, i'd still avoid stacking notes, even though its good .-.

00:28:305 Maybe put a break here?

00:39:555 (1) Another stacked note

00:41:742 (1) ^

00:48:617 (2) Maybe you want to put the same distance snap just like from here 00:47:055 (4) to here 00:47:836 (1)

00:47:836 (1,2) This two shouldn't be a new combo, just let the slider in 00:49:555 (1) be the new combo

00:49:555 (1) Put this one further from the last note, since this slider doesn't come immedeatly after.

01:15:492 (4) Another stacked note

01:22:992 (3) ^

Normal

NORMAL
I changed those 3 things but im not sure if I did it well for the third one.
00:04:398 (4) I don't know about this 1/4 jump man, maybe just make it closer to the previous note?

00:28:305 Put a break here maybe?

00:47:836 (5) This slider also, maybe just put it closer so it's easier to read?

Hard

HARD
I changed what you said and thx :3
00:30:180 (2) You could make this a little further, currently its a bit hard to read, since there's another note after this, placed like this but have a much faster beat (This one 00:32:211 (1) )

00:40:336 (6) This slider also need to be closer to circle 5 since it has a faster beat

01:16:742 (5) Nice jump :3

01:24:086 love this intense part man, good job :v

Insane

INSANE

00:22:055 You could add one more note here to make the jumps even more intense :3 I add a note, but still need to be confirm if it is to much intense

01:13:930 This sudden stop here is a bit awkward, maybe place a note here?Same as above ^

01:23:930 Since its near the ending, why not spice it up and add another note here as a jump ?Same as above ^, but I add another one here 01:21:430 - to fit with the same part

Thank you for this mod who help me a lot for the speed/distance of note .
Thanks to modders ! You are awesome ...

1. I can see you've done well to complete a full mapset. But I think you still need a lot of work :3
2. Timing is great.
3. You might want to add some combo colours
4. Holding Ctrl+Shift+a on the keyboard will bring up aimod. This will help you fix most of your general technical issues. Make sure to tick the box for distance snapping
5. The best way I can tell you to learn mapping without people telling you to keep mapping, is to look at how other 'animappers' are able to map songs of similar genre and just copy their ideas and experiment with it. Another way to tell your mapping is good is being able to play the map yourself and enjoy it. I had a hard time reading the maps, especially when they got to insane and its simply because you didn't have enough experience in playing insane maps :/
6. There are a lot of random NC's on the map. The NC should be used when one phrase has ended and the next begins or generally after a 4/4 has finished. It shouldn't be used for emphasis early on and when there really is a part you can emphasise, you can do it, especially on choruses.
7. A lot of the tips I'm pointing out can be just copy pasted and I will not be bothering going through every single nitpick because you get the idea.
8. You can also just map to the rhythm instead of the vocals early on because it is quite hard for beginners to predict what the singer is going to sing, let alone what time the player should click the circle, probably why it was quite hard to play the mapset on the easier difficulty. You can map the vocals much better on hard and insane but you need to apply consistency to your maps first or else the later difficulties you map will just break down and become unplayable.

1. On easy, most of your notes should be starting from the big white tick in the timing. Generally, starting on a red tick should not be done unless the music forces you to do it. If there's any options to use the white tick over the red, do it. There also the issue of ending the slider on the big white tick which is bad for mapping easy. So please do fix that. I will address some of them in the mod
2. Circles and high density of notes will increase difficulty by a lot. I'm sure you can tone down the difficulty to below 1.5 although this is more of a preference rather than a necessity.
3. Ctrl+Shift+a and clean up the distance snapping. Kiai time isnt a big issue
4. 00:04:398 (3) Hard to read due to being on a red tick
5. 00:08:930 (4,5,6) Hard to red due to no distance snapping
6. 00:05:805 (2) Start this slider on the big white tick to the left. It will feels much better to play.
7. 00:07:055 (3) ^
8. 00:08:305 (4) ^ You get the idea on using large white ticks.
9. 00:32:055 (1)
10. Other than that, I don't see any issues with placement except just be careful about overlaps on circles.

1. Same issues are pointed out from Easy which should be applied to Normal: snapping, big white tick emphasis etc.
2. 00:32:992 (3) Add circle here and shift 3 sliders 1/1 beat to the right. You get the idea. It should be applied to a lot of your map.
3. I wouldn't change slider velocity as a personal opinion. I think keeping constant SV in the Easy and Normal maps is fine and is generally used in higher difficulties, gradually getting used more as preference as difficulty increases.

How about changing the rhythm to this?

Like this

• How about
  00:42:680 - add a circle here
  00:42:836 (4) - make this slider finish here 00:43:305
  ??

How about this?

Just a suggestion

Thanks for your Help !!!

DankHomie wrote:

General

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Try to NC where it fits the song the most, instead of when it fits the beat the most, often same thing, but there is a difference. Working on it
Really nice spread of circles and sliders.
Stacking on circles are well done, but try to make sliders not overlap on each other unless doing a stack. Working on it

Easy

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00:10:805 (1) - Unrankable. Slider is out of bounds, fix. fix
00:10:805 (1) - Remove NC and NC 00:13:305 (2) - fix
00:21:117 (4) - NC fix
00:26:898 (5) - Would move slightly to the left to avoid half stacking, looks unprofessional. fix
00:41:742 (5) - NC would probably fit better. fix
01:11:117 (3) - ^ fix

Normal

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00:13:305 (3) - NC
01:07:680 (3) - Not spaced properly, small change :3 fix
01:18:773 (2,3) - Doesn't really fit well with the vocals, consider changing fix

Something like this?

Hard

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00:09:555 (3) - Move this slider slightly upwards, having it overlap with 00:08:930 (2) - looks somewhat unproffesional. fix
00:30:492 (3) - Unrankable. slider is out of bounds fix. fix
00:38:930 (5) - NC and remove NC from 00:39:555 (1) - ? Having a SV change without a NC here seems off. fix
01:00:961 (6) - NC fix

Insane

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00:12:992 (6) - Might wanna add a slider here as the vocals start before your map does, might confuse players.
Could possibly space out 00:23:305 (1) - and 00:23:617 (2) - a bit, to show the difference in timing compared to 00:23:617 (2) - and 00:23:773 (3) - . Would make it easier to read, as players wouldnt click the circle too early. fix
00:40:805 (1,2,3,4) - Curving this line slighly would somewhat improve the flow, imo. fix
00:47:758 (3) - Remove, having this instanly after the slider as well as having a quad in a 4 star map doesn't fit. A triple is fine. fix
01:12:680 (4) - Unrankable. Slider is out of bounds, fix. fix

Chamue wrote:

Thanks for your help
Hi~ From #modreqs

General

SPOILER

The size of the Background should be 1366*768 Fix by scaling another bg, due to the low resolution
Uncheck Widescreen support and Letterbox in breaks on all diffs fix

Easy

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00:07:055 (3) - You can reduce this slider to 00:07:680 fix
00:08:930 (4) - move to 00:08:305 fix
00:10:180 - to put a circle fix
00:13:305 (1) - better to move to another place,so will be easier for beginners to play fix
00:14:555 (1) - I think the spinner should end at 00:17:680 I want to let time for beginers
00:31:742 (1) - I think instead of a slider to put the circle on 00:31:742 and the slider starts at 00:32:055 and ending at 00:32:367 fix
00:39:242 (1) - To move so as not to overlap fix
00:43:617 (1) - Same as above fix
00:53:930 (4,1) - Same as above fix
01:06:430 (2,3) - Same as above fix
01:08:305 (1) - Move in x:140 y:280 fix
01:09:242 (2) - Move in x:44 y:124 fix

Normal

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00:31:742 (2) - I think instead of a slider to put the circle on 00:31:742 and the slider starts at 00:32:055 and ending at 00:32:367 fix

LukerMaster wrote:

[Insane]
00:05:804 (1,2) - Change the order between this pattern. It'll be more playable if slider starts at white point. fix
00:14:084 (5) - Add NC fix
00:14:084 (5,6) - Higher distance between circles. fix
00:25:177 (3,4,1) - This pattern doesn't look good. Change it into something more creative. fix
00:27:442 - Maybe add spinner or something? fix
00:47:206 (1,2) - Replace first slider with circle and move second slider by 1/2 backward. This two sliders must starts from white points. fix
01:00:954 (3) - Add NC fix
01:09:547 (1,2) - Move first slider to the right and second to the left. (Only a bit) fix
01:10:485 (4) - Ctrl+G fix
[Hard]
00:26:896 (4,5) - Move slider closer to previous one. Try to surround it. fix
00:20:802 (1) - Remove slider and put circle here. Move next two sliders by 1/2 backward. Fill gaps with circles. fix
01:07:048 (7) - Ctrl+G fix
01:07:360 (8) - Ctrl+G fix
01:28:139 (8) - Why overlap? Make higher distance. fix
[Normal]
00:03:304 (3,1) - This looks bad. Put second slider somewhere else. fix
00:10:803 (1,2) - lengthen the first slider to point where current second slider starts and put circle on point where second slider ends. fix
00:48:143 Put slider here instead of 00:47:987 (4) fix. example: http://puu.sh/hFlYx/98b1b5d2d6.jpg
[General]
Map is good but in higher diffs there is a problem with sliders starting at red points. This is often annoying in play. Fix some part.
Good luck with ranking!

1. some few spacing inconsistencies 00:00:805 (1,2) - 00:05:804 (2) - 01:09:860 (3,1) -
2. 00:00:805 (1) - I really feel like you need to map 00:02:054 - ;w; it gives another melody to the song. Maybe try this instead? http://puu.sh/hILcA/18b3a903f4.jpg or something like you did on normal
3. 00:10:803 (1,1) - with the current AR you can see 00:13:303 (1) - before 00:10:803 (1) - is finished, which can make problems reading. You may want to move 00:13:303 (1) - way more away.
4. On easy you most of time should map every big white tick, cuz these have a very strong impact on the song and the map itself. Thus, i recommend you to map 00:20:802 - 00:23:302 - . Not neccesary with just a circle, you can do something like thisif you wanna have a 2/1 gap (refering to 00:23:302 - on that example.)
5. 00:40:644 (3) - i'd end it at 00:41:113 - and maybe add a circle at 00:41:425 - instead. so you cover vocals more nicely
6. 00:42:675 (3,1) - here you can try doing this instead http://puu.sh/hIJxa/db4bc9c19b.jpg as there's no real sound at 00:43:300 - and rhythm doesnt play very natural on this way
7. 00:47:050 (7) - It ends basically on nothing cuz the cymbal at 00:48:143 - . I'd do something like this i think http://puu.sh/hIJGp/92a292f3fa.jpg
8. 00:52:674 (3,1) - this overlap is really ugly and unnecessary ;w; do you mind avoiding it? Or atleast make it not to cover (1)'s hitcircle
9. 01:00:798 (1,2,3) - what about something different? http://puu.sh/hIK5c/d732d859f5.jpg (or use just a circle if you don't like 1/2 sliders) having clear cymbals unclickable is weird and doesn't fit at all, in addition that 01:02:048 (3) - should start at 01:01:892 -
10. 01:11:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - im a bit lost on this part. By not mapping 01:10:797 - you make me think you're mapping vocals here, which is fine. But afterwards you map around the music i think(? It's a bit weird.. I guess this would work better(? http://puu.sh/hIKNU/a1a2a27fd4.jpg
11. 01:17:671 (4,5) - something similar happens here. Mapping stanza with a slider end isn't a good idea at all
12. 01:24:077 (2) - it's weird cuz you ignore vocals at 01:24:390 - , which is what you intent to map i think. Maybe this works better http://puu.sh/hIL5z/70028fcd77.jpg

1. 00:05:179 - to 00:14:397 - ; and 00:49:549 - to 00:53:299 - these sections feel a bit overdone to what they offer. Spacing speaking. I'd recommend you to lower the spacing of those section, and make them less jumpy. So, they aren't as similars as other sections(with higher impact and stuff) are.
2. 00:07:366 (2,3,4) - this feels a bit overdone as i said, in terms of rhythm as well. This may work better http://puu.sh/hIMiO/65c11eb769.jpg as you did on similar spots.
3. 00:08:772 (5) - vs 00:10:022 (6,7) - would be nice if both were the same rhythm, as the music is the same.
4. 00:25:489 (4,1) - i'd move (1) a bit more away cuz the impact this note has, maybe?
5. 00:26:739 (4) - really consider changing this into 2 circles, 00:27:208 (5) - this possible too. Feels a bit awkward not having enough emphasis on those notes by using simple sliders
6. 00:38:144 (6,1,2,3) - the transition here feels a bit "rushed". Something that plays more natural towards (3) would help. for example, 00:38:301 (1,2) - ctrl+g.
7. 00:39:394 - add note, cuz this section hasn't ended yet and you mapped these rhythms the whole time.
8. 00:39:550 - to 00:44:550 - you don't really define what you're mapping at all. For intance, 00:41:113 (2,3) - these should be 1/2 to cover the guitar strings at 00:41:269 - and 00:41:582 - ; 00:42:050 (1,2,3) - suddenly you follow vocals and more suddenly you go back to intruments 00:43:300 (1) -
9. 00:40:175 (3,4,1) - offbeat sliders would really fit here. I mean this http://puu.sh/hINnA/dff7d2e1ab.jpg that's how the music is there imo
10. 00:45:800 (1,2,3) - you could make (2) a lot less curved so it fits with the others :3
11. 00:47:050 - this should (or must) be clickable to give proper emphasis and feedback. You can do this i guess http://puu.sh/hINNy/cab3be6c93.jpg. Same here 00:54:236 (5,1) - altho this may be a bit more passable uhm, still better to change it tho imo. And others that i didn't mention like 00:55:486 (1) - could do the same/similar.
12. 00:47:675 (2) - would be nice if you map this stream tho /w\
13. 00:52:049 (1,2) - as i said, this section also feels a bit overdone, some rhythms could be more simple as well. like that to this http://puu.sh/hIO6a/5913598d08.jpg prob
14. 00:57:986 (4,1) - this rhythm is a bit awkward cuz the cymbal at 00:58:142 - but no real beat at 00:58:299 - . Try thisinstead
15. 01:00:017 - instruments are very noticiable here, not mapping it ends on a awkward gap ><
16. Similar here 01:00:798 - 01:01:267 - 01:01:736 - not mapping these kicks is weird >< cuz you can hear them easly but aren't mapped, ): this is what i'd do myself.
17. 01:10:797 (1,2) - having more distance between these notes than 01:11:422 (3,1) - feels random to me. It doesnt give proper emphasis to the right beats. You can try stacking 01:11:266 (2,3) - on 01:10:485 (4) - head
18. 01:19:078 - like you didnt mapp this you may want to do the same here then 01:18:453 - so 01:18:296 (1,2) - would follow the intruments nicely. I mean this http://puu.sh/hIOHv/6e1110a34c.jpg . Similar here 01:20:796 (3,4,5) -
19. 01:21:343 - map this triple out?
20. 01:21:109 (5,6,7) - flow is kinda bad and the overlap make it worse. i think i'd do something like this http://puu.sh/hIOSO/01f6cf6602.jpg (well in case you map that triple it'll change xD, k)
21. 01:24:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the pattern looks cool and all but doesnt really have sense. The music does like a crescendo, and your pattern goes from high distance to low distance. you may want to move 01:25:639 (8) - somewhere else, like x356 y32

Milan- wrote:

hi

[easy]

1. some few spacing inconsistencies 00:00:805 (1,2) - 00:05:804 (2) - 01:09:860 (3,1) - fix
2. 00:00:805 (1) - I really feel like you need to map 00:02:054 - ;w; it gives another melody to the song. Maybe try this instead? http://puu.sh/hILcA/18b3a903f4.jpg or something like you did on normal fix
3. 00:10:803 (1,1) - with the current AR you can see 00:13:303 (1) - before 00:10:803 (1) - is finished, which can make problems reading. You may want to move 00:13:303 (1) - way more away. fix
4. On easy you most of time should map every big white tick, cuz these have a very strong impact on the song and the map itself. Thus, i recommend you to map 00:20:802 - 00:23:302 - . Not neccesary with just a circle, you can do something like thisif you wanna have a 2/1 gap (refering to 00:23:302 - on that example.) fix
5. 00:40:644 (3) - i'd end it at 00:41:113 - and maybe add a circle at 00:41:425 - instead. so you cover vocals more nicely fix
6. 00:42:675 (3,1) - here you can try doing this instead http://puu.sh/hIJxa/db4bc9c19b.jpg as there's no real sound at 00:43:300 - and rhythm doesnt play very natural on this way fix
7. 00:47:050 (7) - It ends basically on nothing cuz the cymbal at 00:48:143 - . I'd do something like this i think http://puu.sh/hIJGp/92a292f3fa.jpg fix
8. 00:52:674 (3,1) - this overlap is really ugly and unnecessary ;w; do you mind avoiding it? Or atleast make it not to cover (1)'s hitcircle fix
9. 01:00:798 (1,2,3) - what about something different? http://puu.sh/hIK5c/d732d859f5.jpg (or use just a circle if you don't like 1/2 sliders) having clear cymbals unclickable is weird and doesn't fit at all, in addition that 01:02:048 (3) - should start at 01:01:892 - fix
10. 01:11:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - im a bit lost on this part. By not mapping 01:10:797 - you make me think you're mapping vocals here, which is fine. But afterwards you map around the music i think(? It's a bit weird.. I guess this would work better(? http://puu.sh/hIKNU/a1a2a27fd4.jpg Fix, im kinda ****top sometime
11. 01:17:671 (4,5) - something similar happens here. Mapping stanza with a slider end isn't a good idea at all Fix
12. 01:24:077 (2) - it's weird cuz you ignore vocals at 01:24:390 - , which is what you intent to map i think. Maybe this works better http://puu.sh/hIL5z/70028fcd77.jpg since it is an easy dif, I wanted to do the music

[insane]

1. 00:05:179 - to 00:14:397 - ; and 00:49:549 - to 00:53:299 - these sections feel a bit overdone to what they offer. Spacing speaking. I'd recommend you to lower the spacing of those section, and make them less jumpy. So, they aren't as similars as other sections(with higher impact and stuff) are. fix
2. 00:07:366 (2,3,4) - this feels a bit overdone as i said, in terms of rhythm as well. This may work better http://puu.sh/hIMiO/65c11eb769.jpg as you did on similar spots. fix
3. 00:08:772 (5) - vs 00:10:022 (6,7) - would be nice if both were the same rhythm, as the music is the same. fix
4. 00:25:489 (4,1) - i'd move (1) a bit more away cuz the impact this note has, maybe? fix
5. 00:26:739 (4) - really consider changing this into 2 circles, 00:27:208 (5) - this possible too. Feels a bit awkward not having enough emphasis on those notes by using simple sliders fix
6. 00:38:144 (6,1,2,3) - the transition here feels a bit "rushed". Something that plays more natural towards (3) would help. for example, 00:38:301 (1,2) - ctrl+g. fix
7. 00:39:394 - add note, cuz this section hasn't ended yet and you mapped these rhythms the whole time. fix
8. 00:39:550 - to 00:44:550 - you don't really define what you're mapping at all. For intance, 00:41:113 (2,3) - these should be 1/2 to cover the guitar strings at 00:41:269 - and 00:41:582 - ; 00:42:050 (1,2,3) - suddenly you follow vocals and more suddenly you go back to intruments 00:43:300 (1) - fix
9. 00:40:175 (3,4,1) - offbeat sliders would really fit here. I mean this http://puu.sh/hINnA/dff7d2e1ab.jpg that's how the music is there imo fix
10. 00:45:800 (1,2,3) - you could make (2) a lot less curved so it fits with the others :3 fix
11. 00:47:050 - this should (or must) be clickable to give proper emphasis and feedback. You can do this i guess http://puu.sh/hINNy/cab3be6c93.jpg. Same here 00:54:236 (5,1) - altho this may be a bit more passable uhm, still better to change it tho imo. And others that i didn't mention like 00:55:486 (1) - could do the same/similar. fix
12. 00:47:675 (2) - would be nice if you map this stream tho /w\ fix
13. 00:52:049 (1,2) - as i said, this section also feels a bit overdone, some rhythms could be more simple as well. like that to this http://puu.sh/hIO6a/5913598d08.jpg prob fix
14. 00:57:986 (4,1) - this rhythm is a bit awkward cuz the cymbal at 00:58:142 - but no real beat at 00:58:299 - . Try thisinstead ___ I did something different
15. 01:00:017 - instruments are very noticiable here, not mapping it ends on a awkward gap ><
16. Similar here 01:00:798 - 01:01:267 - 01:01:736 - not mapping these kicks is weird >< cuz you can hear them easly but aren't mapped, ): this is what i'd do myself. The worst in that, is that I did it for my hard, but not for the Insane ( cuz i remaped the hard ) Also, I ajusted my hard with this same slider/note patern
17. 01:10:797 (1,2) - having more distance between these notes than 01:11:422 (3,1) - feels random to me. It doesnt give proper emphasis to the right beats. You can try stacking 01:11:266 (2,3) - on 01:10:485 (4) - head fix
18. 01:19:078 - like you didnt mapp this you may want to do the same here then 01:18:453 - so 01:18:296 (1,2) - would follow the intruments nicely. I mean this http://puu.sh/hIOHv/6e1110a34c.jpg . Similar here 01:20:796 (3,4,5) - fix
19. 01:21:343 - map this triple out? fix
20. 01:21:109 (5,6,7) - flow is kinda bad and the overlap make it worse. i think i'd do something like this http://puu.sh/hIOSO/01f6cf6602.jpg (well in case you map that triple it'll change xD, k) fix
21. 01:24:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the pattern looks cool and all but doesnt really have sense. The music does like a crescendo, and your pattern goes from high distance to low distance. you may want to move 01:25:639 (8) - somewhere else, like x356 y32 Fix

also, You should rework your New comboing. they are pretty random at the moment. The easiest way is just to NC every 2 big white tick on lower diffs and every 1 on higher diffs. You do this sometimes, but sometimes you dont. I will work on it

Work more on the rhythms on every diff i''d say. I will work on it The map plays cool overall tho :3

R4UP1 wrote:

Hi im here for modding your map

[Easy]

00:47:362 i would place a circle here Fix

[Normal]

00:57:830 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - please change this part ... the rythm feels extremly wired in my opinion~ Fix

[Hard]

00:08:304 (2,3) - the transition between these sliders is not good ... i think its a to big distance for this short time The distance is the same for each slider in this zone (1.4x) , I will ask to other person and if they think the samething ill change it

[Insane]

looks great in my opinion