Mod by -Neptune-'s request, second time modding a map of this song in a week but oh well (: I'll just look at metadata, timeline, some basic patterning and such since this is beyond my ability to playtest and I'd hate to give you bad suggestions.
Cosmic MindJust a heads up that there will likely need to be a lot of minor note placement changes once you get the hitsounding finished, since you''ll generally want to have smaller spacing between regular sounded notes, and larger spacing/Hdashes to notes that are strongly emphasised such as with claps or finishes - but this can come later as I said.
00:42:949 (5,6,7) - Consider making these into a 1/8 note stream instead of 1/4, since the drumroll speeds up here, and continue the stream for another 1/4 until 00:43:195 to complete this sound
00:45:736 (1) - Remove NC, this note doesn't need any extra emphasis
00:45:736 (1,1) - A lot of the rhythms in this section are actually 1/4 triplets that you're missing out on. Try listening carefully to these two notes at 25% speed and you'll hear another drum note between them. You could map a lot of these into either triplet streams so repeat sliders to develop some more interesting and varied patterns. Another example would be between 00:49:014 (2,3) - and so on.
01:01:146 (5,6,7) - Consider adding some more notes in between these to make a 1/4 or 1/8 stream for the drumroll if you feel it fits
01:14:916 (1) - I don't feel you need the NC here
01:23:932 (1,1) - The slider head and tail here occur at exactly the same time, which is unrankable, so consider ending 01:23:932 (1) - 1/8 earlier to avoid this
01:25:244 (2) - NC here for the downbeat, as well as the SV change
01:32:785 - I'd add a note here for the snare drum, it feels weird to leave this space empty to me
01:34:424 - ^
01:34:752 - ^ Though if you feel this is too boring, consider making one or both pairs of notes into 1/2 sliders
01:36:228 (1,1) - NC selection in this section seems a bit random to me. Remove NC from both of these and put it on 01:37:047 (4) for the downbeat, then remove NC from 01:37:539 (1) and put it on 01:38:359 (4) for the next downbeat
01:48:195 (5) - Consider making this a 1/2 slider for the quieter piano note at 01:48:359 - then make another 1/2 slider at 01:48:523 for the second set of piano notes
01:50:818 (5) - ^
01:53:441 (5) - ^ This also makes your break start closer to the downbeat at 01:54:096 which flows nicer in my opinion
01:57:375 until 02:07:211 - As above really, there are a lot of interesting piano notes you could map here to make this section a little more interesting. Don't go overboard though, since you want to keep this quiet period as a calmer "breather" section. You've done this in a few places, such as 02:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - but I personally still feel it's a little empty
02:20:326 (6) - Move the second red anchor point so the direction change occurs at 02:20:982 - I feel this flows nicely with the drum beat. I put it at [x-152,y-160]. You may need to extend another point of this slider to bring it back to it's original length
02:26:228 (1) - Remove the last repeat from this slider, the drum pattern suggests a 4 stroke roll to me rather than 5. If you do this, bring 02:26:555 (1) back 1/4 and make it repeat only 3 times as well. Then switch to using 1/8 repeat sliders for the buildup of the drum roll like you have at 02:27:211 (1)
02:42:785 - Add a note here (or make this a 1/2 slider) for the bass guitar sound, like you have at 02:41:473 (1)
03:20:326 (1,1) - I don't really feel like you need either of these NCs, since there's no noticeable change in the music here to justify it
03:59:834 (1) - Remove NC here and put it on 03:59:998 (2) -for the downbeat and the start of the next vocal line
04:22:293 (1,2) - These two sliders overlap on the timeline at the head/tail, which is unrankable - consider doing the same as what I suggested for 01:23:932 (1,1)
04:34:752 (1) - Remove the NC here and put it on 04:35:408 (2) for the downbeat
04:37:211 (1) - NC here is unnecessary to me, I'd remove it
This is all from me. Give me another shout if there's anything I didn't explain properly or if you need anything else and best of luck getting this approved! (: