00:51:043 (2) - Not sure if I agree with this slider being in there like that. It feels forced in there and it disrupts the rhythm of the map. Maybe you could try just adding a hit circle before this (00:51:369 (1)) slider and see how it sounds.

01:15:500 (5) - I feel like this slider shouldn't be as small as you left it. You've snapped it to 1/8 but it'd be just fine or even better if it was snapped to 1/4. If you leave the slider how it is, it wouldn't match the sound or beat of anything going on in the background. The sound you were trying to map actually goes at the speed of a 1/4 slider.

1. 00:03:109 (1,2,3), 00:04:087(1,2,3), 00:05:065(1,2,3,4) - Counter-clockwise flow, clockwise and then counter-clockwise again. I don't know if it's only me, but I feel like it becomes a bit tiresome to switch the way of circular rotation so much back and forth.
2. 00:13:543(1,2,3,1,2,3) - I like what you're doing with these sliders, but I have a suggestion at 00:16:641:
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3. 01:25:935 - Maybe shorten the spinner by 1 white tick(so that the spinner ends when his voice fades out), so that you can place a single note there instead? Like so:
   ..

   

1. 02:07:674(1,2,3,4,5) - I think the spacing between 4 and 5 is a bit too large, even though it's readable because of the pattern. Maybe increase the spacing gradually or decrease the DS from 4 to 5 to 1.5x?
2. 01:35:228(3,4,5,6,7) - There are other places like this in the map, but I'll use this as an example: I would suggest adding less spacing between the notes that you have to wait a bit for and turning the others into small jumps, so something like this:
   img

   
   Imo that would emphasize the notes quite a bit more.
   

Dazardz wrote:

Just want to be sure that you still want it ranked right?

If I earn kudosu, I'll be putting it in here rather than my own maps if you're still ranking this.

ohyeahitsjustme wrote:

hi!
m4m with dazardz.

general.

1. mp3

mp3 should be 192kbs maximum. change it with goldwave or smth like that. unrankable!

2. bg

bg size should be 1366x768. so change it pls. unrankable!

3. dadarddz insane has another preview and tags. fix it, make it similar through all the diffs. unrankable!

4. combo colours

im not sure abot 4th and 5th combo colours. i cant fing them on the bg, so i guess the have to be changed.

normal.

i like the quality of this map. its really cool done!
but its too low because ur hard has very high * for this set (ur normal has 1,94* and hard 3,54*. in some cases, that could be unrankable).
and im not sure why are u using 1/6 x_x in normal.. x_x

AR-1

1. 00:04:740 (2,3) - this imposition in unrankable for this diff. try to do smth with this

2. 00:23:001 (1) - so fast spinner in a normal diff? no-no-no, change it.

3. 00:53:164 (4,5) - check spacing here

4. 00:59:849 (5,1) - this jump is bad for normal unrankable!

5. 01:04:086 (8,9) - here should be a flow like here

6. 01:26:262 (1) - this appears too fast after the spinner. u should wait at least 2000ms befor putting a note in a normal diff.

7. 01:34:903 (1,3) - make these sliders parralel

(yeah, a bit sorry, ill take hard later)

insane.

HP+1~2

1. 00:06:206 (6) - dont like this slider at all. it looks weird. it would be nice if u will change it on similar to this 00:05:717 (5) (ctrl+g, ctrl+j)

2. 00:06:859 (8,1) - feeling bad about the distance i mean this
u can also stack 00:07:348 (1) - with 00:08:000 (5) - and make some other jumps:

3. i dont like that jumps either: xmpl

4. 00:10:282 (4) - i think u should stack that with the beginning of this 00:09:304 (1)

5. 00:10:935 (1,2) - make them similar (1^)

6. 00:15:826 (6) - stack that with the end of this 00:16:152 (1)

7. 00:16:152 (1,2) - bad blanket, need to fix that

8. 00:17:946 (6) - stack the end of that with the end of this 00:16:152 (1)

9. 00:18:272 (7) - NC here

10. 00:21:369 (4,1) - i think u should stack the beginnings of these sliders

11. 00:31:152 (3) - this slider will look comfortable if this 00:30:826 (2) - would be smth like this

12. 00:40:119 (2,3,4) - i dont like this jump also u need to correct the impostion of this note with this slider 00:39:630 (1) - 00:40:446 (4)

13. 00:42:239 (1,2) - i think these sliders will look better if u will change their form: xmpl

14. 00:46:641 (3) - stack with 00:47:456 (1)

15. 00:48:109 (4) - with 00:47:456 (1)

16. 00:50:391 (2,3) - look at №13

17. 00:56:750 (1,2) - make a flow here, it will look nicer: xmpl

18. 01:09:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think here should be jumps xmpl

19. 01:13:869 (4) - stack with the end of 01:14:032 (5)

20. 01:29:196 (1) - stack the end with 01:28:869 (5) - and 01:28:543 (3)

21. 01:32:945 (7) - stack with the end of 01:33:109 (1)

22. 01:43:543 (5,1) - make a flow here (look at №17)

23. 02:02:293 (6) - u have imposition with this slider 02:01:641 (4) - here, so fix it

24. 02:10:283 (1) - dont like this slider, maybe u will do it similar to 02:14:522 (5)?

25. 02:12:891 (8) - ^ same

26. 02:15:174 (2) - check №11

27. 02:18:924 - u are missing an important note here.

28. 02:24:794 (4) - check №12

nice set, gl!

PurpleHawk wrote:

Dazardz's Insane

1. 00:03:109 (1,2,3), 00:04:087(1,2,3), 00:05:065(1,2,3,4) - Counter-clockwise flow, clockwise and then counter-clockwise again. I don't know if it's only me, but I feel like it becomes a bit tiresome to switch the way of circular rotation so much back and forth.
2. 00:13:543(1,2,3,1,2,3) - I like what you're doing with these sliders, but I have a suggestion at 00:16:641:
   img

   
3. 01:25:935 - Maybe shorten the spinner by 1 white tick(so that the spinner ends when his voice fades out), so that you can place a single note there instead? Like so:
   ..

   

Hard

1. 02:07:674(1,2,3,4,5) - I think the spacing between 4 and 5 is a bit too large, even though it's readable because of the pattern. Maybe increase the spacing gradually or decrease the DS from 4 to 5 to 1.5x?
2. 01:35:228(3,4,5,6,7) - There are other places like this in the map, but I'll use this as an example: I would suggest adding less spacing between the notes that you have to wait a bit for and turning the others into small jumps, so something like this:
   img

   
   Imo that would emphasize the notes quite a bit more.
   

Normal: 00:23:000 - this spinner is unrankable, it needs to be longer :/
Easy: 01:26:261 - Too little time for the player to recover from the spinner

In general it's a really nice mapset, looking forward to getting some scores on this mapset when it's ranked

Good luck

PS: The hitsounding is awesome!

Dazardz wrote:

Just want to be sure that you still want it ranked right?

If I earn kudosu, I'll be putting it in here rather than my own maps if you're still ranking this.

- Frontier - wrote:

Hi!
I somehow found this map randomly. I hope this mod will useful for you.

[General]

1. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms: soft-hitclap.wav.
   I think you could cut this audio. Also, the file size is kinda large (136kb) compared with the other audio files.
2. Difficulties end time is not consistent:
   
   1. 02:11:022 - Easy
   2. 02:21:456 - Normal
   3. 02:29:119 - Hyper
   4. 02:29:120 - Dazardz's Insane
   5. 02:29:120 - Link's Insane
   Your difficulties should all end at the same spot.
3. Your background image should be 1366x768. (or 4:3 scale) Your current background image is 1334x768.
4. Your background image has a credit on right-bottom of the image. Better find a new background if you can! https://puu.sh/vPIC0/de8d2fc6c5.jpg
5. I think "one piece opening 18 generations from exile tribe hard knock days" should be deleted in tags. Because it has already been used in Artist, Title and Source.
6. The difficulty spread is inconsistent. I recommend to make the spread in a consecutive order.
7. If your mapset is ready for mods and suggestions, you could move it to pending section.

[Overall Difficulties]

1. Circle size in Easy is bigger than Normal. Making CS in Normal big might make the map easy. I recommend to adjust CS to 3.5.
2. Approach Rate in Normal is as same as Easy. Approach rate 4 in Normal is too slow, should be about 6 instead.
3. Every Difficulty settings (CS, AR, OD, HP and Slider Velocity) in Dazardz's Insane and Link's Insane are exactly the same! Try to make some variety by changing it.
4. You could rename Hyper to Hard. It might look more appropriate than before. Hyper usually use for a diff which is harder than Hard but still easier than Insane.

Good luck~