Iguchi Yuka - Hey World (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Chobo wrote:

NM from Chobo's Modding Queue

Easy
00:25:744 (8) - overmapped - remove Sure then
00:41:744 (2) - ends at an awkward time - consider making it two ticks shorter Alright

Normal
00:13:744 (3) - this slider should start two ticks earlier
00:52:410 (4) - make this slider two ticks longer
00:55:744 (5) - ^
01:21:577 (4) - awkward gap after this slider, could add something here

All Applied


Insane
fix hitsounds Like how?

00:08:077 (1) - recommend not changing slider velocity, it throws you off Fixed
00:17:577 (3) - this stack feels awkward, breaks flow Lined up
00:24:244 (4) - recommend adding another circle two ticks after this noteAdded
00:30:244 (1) - add spacing to this k
00:36:244 (7) - add spacing to this k
00:52:077 (3) - ^ May consider

good luck!
Thanks For your modding :D
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

suanriz wrote:

[Easy]
00:03:244 (1) - 尾巴拉長到00:04:911 聽起來有點怪
00:05:911 (2) - 尾巴拉長到00:07:577 同上
00:09:577 加個Note? 好的
00:10:911 加個Note? 好的
00:17:244 (4) - 頭拉到
00:16:244 - 00:17:577 試試這樣 喔~
00:21:911 (3) - 這裡00:21:744開始 好的
00:25:744 (8) - Del 好的
00:25:911 (1) - 直角 好的
00:39:911 - 00:40:244 加個滑條 嗯嗯
01:01:577 - 01:02:577 拆成單點加滑條
嗯嗯
01:15:244 - 01:16:244拆成單點加滑條
嗯嗯

[Normal]
00:15:244 - 00:16:077 試試這樣?
嗯嗯
00:25:911 (3) - 同Easy直角 嗯嗯
01:06:161 - 01:06:911試試這樣? 嗯嗯

01:09:911 (3) - 有歌聲有重音,只用滑條帶過感覺彆扭 改了
01:15:244 (3) - 拆成單點加滑條 嗯嗯
謝謝摸圖喔~ :oops:
Lazer

Chobo wrote:

Lazer's Hard
00:00:578 (1) to 00:03:244 (1) - beginning feels overmapped - the beginning of a song should gradually add more intensity into chorus so consider toning it down I really like the beginning, however if someone points it out again I'll try toning it down
00:07:244 (1) - awkward spacing, add spacing or another note I disagree, it plays very well for me!
00:14:911 (7) - theres an audible beat on the red tick mark after this note, consider adding a note Added note
00:16:577 (1) - this combo suddenly is a lot less easier than the combo prior to this one. breaks the flow of the map I don't think it breaks the flow of a map
00:24:244 (3) - awkward gap after this note b-but its not awkward :^<
00:57:577 (3) - ends on the wrong side Turned around
Sorry for making you update so much tako ;^>
_handholding
Hi from my modding queue


Hard
00:07:577 (2) - I cant tell if your mapping to the drums or guitar here but if your mapping mapping to the guitar delete this slider and place a note at 00:07:744
00:09:911 (1) to 00:18:911 (1) - How about using the 'soft' hitsounds for this section? This applies to your Insane aswell
00:29:911 (4) - I think this would look better if it didnt overlap with (2)
00:36:077 (2) - Try deleting this note and see if you like it
The flow in your chorus is really good and so is the rhythm

Insane
00:01:577 (4) - NC here? Since your combos at the beginning are very short
00:29:411 (2) - A jump this big doesnt seem to suit this part of the song
00:49:244 - Place a note here


Thats all I have time for atm. if you want me to mod your other 2 diffs just PM me

I hope this mod was helpful
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Lazer wrote:

Chobo wrote:

Lazer's Hard
00:00:578 (1) to 00:03:244 (1) - beginning feels overmapped - the beginning of a song should gradually add more intensity into chorus so consider toning it down I really like the beginning, however if someone points it out again I'll try toning it down
00:07:244 (1) - awkward spacing, add spacing or another note I disagree, it plays very well for me!
00:14:911 (7) - theres an audible beat on the red tick mark after this note, consider adding a note Added note
00:16:577 (1) - this combo suddenly is a lot less easier than the combo prior to this one. breaks the flow of the map I don't think it breaks the flow of a map
00:24:244 (3) - awkward gap after this note b-but its not awkward :^<
00:57:577 (3) - ends on the wrong side Turned around
Sorry for making you update so much tako ;^>
It's alright :D
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

Hi from my modding queue

Insane
00:01:577 (4) - NC here? Since your combos at the beginning are very short Okay
00:29:411 (2) - A jump this big doesnt seem to suit this part of the song I think its alright
00:49:244 - Place a note here Kinda overmapping


Thats all I have time for atm. if you want me to mod your other 2 diffs just PM me

I hope this mod was helpful
Thanks for your mods :D
Doormat
Hello, from my modding queue victim list


I really need to start watching this series lol
here click on me for some fun
General
- In my opinion, the flow could be a lot better on all difficulties. I've pointed out some of the spots where you can improve the flow, but you don't need to follow through on them if you believe that the flow is fine.

Easy
- Consider adding a note at the following places:
  • - 00:05:244
    - 00:14:911
    - 00:29:577
    - 00:33:577
    - 00:36:244
    - 00:38:911

- Consider making the note at 00:11:244(4) into a 2/1 slider
  • :idea:Something like this maybe?

    You don't need to make the slider exactly like that if you are going to take this suggestion

- Consider reversing (Ctrl + G) the slider at 00:17:951(1)
- Consider making the note at 00:27:911(3) into a 1/1 slider
- The slider at 00:44:411(1) feels off with the flow. Consider changing it?
  • :idea:Maybe you can change the pattern to something like this? Try it out for yourself :)
    Before

    After

- The slider at 00:48:577(2) can be a blanket for the note at 00:49:577(3) for a more aesthetically pleasing pattern

Normal
- Consider moving the note at 00:17:577(5) to 00:17:411 and make it a 1/2 slider
- Consider making 00:24:577(4) a 1/1 slider. Alternatively you can add a note at 00:24:911
- Consider moving the note at 00:30:411(4) to 00:30:244 and make it a 1/2 slider, as well as making the note at 00:30:744(5) into a 1/2 slider
  • :idea:Something like this perhaps? Try it out for yourself :)
    Before

    After

- Consider making 00:33:244(3) a 1/1 slider. Alternatively you can add a note at 00:33:577
- Consider adding a note at 00:45:577

Lazer's Hard
- Consider making the note at 00:05:077(3) a 1/2 slider
- Consider making the note at 00:06:911(5) a 1/2 slider
- Consider making the note at 00:14:911(7) a 1/2 slider
- Consider making the note at 00:16:244(5) a 1/2 slider
- Consider making the note at 00:17:577(3) a 1/2 slider. Note that you should probably reverse (Ctrl + G) the slider at 00:17:911(4) if you do this
- ^^ at 00:21:911(5) I'm getting too lazy to type down the same thing over and over lol
- ^^ at 00:24:244(3)
- ^^ at 00:26:411(5)
- ^^ at 00:30:744(6)
- ^^ at 00:48:244(4)
- ^^ at 00:51:744(2)
- ^^ at 00:53:577(3)
- ^^ at 01:01:577(3)
- ^^ at 01:04:244(3)
- ^^ at 01:05:577(6)
- Consider making the slider at 00:39:577(6) a repeating slider
  • :idea:Try it out for yourself :)


Insane
- Consider adding a note at 00:23:077. Alternative, you could make the note at 00:22:911(4) a 1/2 slider
- Consider making the note at 00:26:911(5) a 1/2 slider
- *Consider adding a note at 00:30:077 and 00:30:161. If you do follow through on this one, make the NC start at 00:30:077 and not 00:30:244(1)
- *Consider making the note at 00:30:744(2) a 1/2 slider
  • :idea:Something like this? Note that the image below shows both changes marked with a red asterisk (*)

    Once again you don't need to use these exact sliders; they're just placeholders for an idea you can use

- Consider adding a 1/2 slider at 00:33:577
- Consider making the note at 00:36:244(6) a 1/2 slider
- ^^ at 00:52:077(3)
- Make the note at 01:16:577(7) a NC instead of at 01:16:911(1)

Hope this helps you out, and good luck with your map ;)

edit: if the images don't load, let me know and I'll send you them :o
Lazer

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

Hard
00:07:577 (2) - I cant tell if your mapping to the drums or guitar here but if your mapping mapping to the guitar delete this slider and place a note at 00:07:744 Not mapping to the guitar :^>
00:09:911 (1) to 00:18:911 (1) - How about using the 'soft' hitsounds for this section? This applies to your Insane aswell It's fine this way
00:29:911 (4) - I think this would look better if it didnt overlap with (2) If someone else mentions it I will change it
00:36:077 (2) - Try deleting this note and see if you like it Eh, they both sound alright, however I prefer the one inbetween
The flow in your chorus is really good and so is the rhythm

Doormat wrote:

Lazer's Hard
- Consider making the note at 00:05:077(3) a 1/2 slider It's on a weak beat, I'd rather not
- Consider making the note at 00:06:911(5) a 1/2 slider nah
- Consider making the note at 00:14:911(7) a 1/2 slider Changed
- Consider making the note at 00:16:244(5) a 1/2 slider nah
- Consider making the note at 00:17:577(3) a 1/2 slider. Note that you should probably reverse (Ctrl + G) the slider at 00:17:911(4) if you do this nah
- ^^ at 00:21:911(5) nah
- ^^ at 00:24:244(3) it goes against the way i mapped this
- ^^ at 00:26:411(5) weak beat so,no
- ^^ at 00:30:744(6) ???
- ^^ at 00:48:244(4) nah
- ^^ at 00:51:744(2) let me map my own style!!!111
- ^^ at 00:53:577(3) cant have all these sliders because it would make the map ridiculously hard
- ^^ at 01:01:577(3) ^
- ^^ at 01:04:244(3) kills the map style
- ^^ at 01:05:577(6) too hard if slider
- Consider making the slider at 00:39:577(6) a repeating slider thats would make it repeat on a downbeat tick, not good!
  • :idea:Try it out for yourself :)
Thank you for the mods~, my responses to the mod might be a bit on the shitty side but it is currently very late and I am tired

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47119
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Hey World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Hey World (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:井口裕香
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:Lazer's Hard
Source:ダンジョンに出会いを求めるのは間違っているだろうか?
Tags:opening anime is it wrong to try to pick up girls in a dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru Darou ka
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BeatmapSetID:301497

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6.4
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Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-
I gonna update Lazer's diff first and I'll make changes to my diffs when I get back home. :D Although It's lesson time now ZZZZ
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue victim list


I really need to start watching this series lol
here click on me for some fun
General
- In my opinion, the flow could be a lot better on all difficulties. I've pointed out some of the spots where you can improve the flow, but you don't need to follow through on them if you believe that the flow is fine.

Easy
- Consider adding a note at the following places: All added :)
  • - 00:05:244
    - 00:14:911
    - 00:29:577
    - 00:33:577
    - 00:36:244
    - 00:38:911

- Consider making the note at 00:11:244(4) into a 2/1 slider okay
  • :idea:Something like this maybe?

    You don't need to make the slider exactly like that if you are going to take this suggestion
Sure
- Consider reversing (Ctrl + G) the slider at 00:17:951(1) Not sure
- Consider making the note at 00:27:911(3) into a 1/1 slider Okay
- The slider at 00:44:411(1) feels off with the flow. Consider changing it? Changed
  • :idea:Maybe you can change the pattern to something like this? Try it out for yourself :)
    Before

    After

- The slider at 00:48:577(2) can be a blanket for the note at 00:49:577(3) for a more aesthetically pleasing pattern I changed the position of some note due to the previous changes,including this one.

Normal
- Consider moving the note at 00:17:577(5) to 00:17:411 and make it a 1/2 slider Did it
- Consider making 00:24:577(4) a 1/1 slider. Did it Alternatively you can add a note at 00:24:911
- Consider moving the note at 00:30:411(4) to 00:30:244 and make it a 1/2 slider, as well as making the note at 00:30:744(5) into a 1/2 slider Cool :D
  • :idea:Something like this perhaps? Try it out for yourself :)
    Before

    After

- Consider making 00:33:244(3) a 1/1 slider. Did it Alternatively you can add a note at 00:33:577
- Consider adding a note at 00:45:577 Did it


Insane
- Consider adding a note at 00:23:077.Did it Alternative, you could make the note at 00:22:911(4) a 1/2 slider
- Consider making the note at 00:26:911(5) a 1/2 slider Did it
- *Consider adding a note at 00:30:077 and 00:30:161. If you do follow through on this one, make the NC start at 00:30:077 and not 00:30:244(1)Did it
- *Consider making the note at 00:30:744(2) a 1/2 sliderDid it
  • :idea:Something like this? Note that the image below shows both changes marked with a red asterisk (*) Nice, but I used different way

    Once again you don't need to use these exact sliders; they're just placeholders for an idea you can use

- Consider adding a 1/2 slider at 00:33:577 Did it
- Consider making the note at 00:36:244(6) a 1/2 slider Did it
- ^^ at 00:52:077(3)
- Make the note at 01:16:577(7) a NC instead of at 01:16:911(1)Aright

Hope this helps you out, and good luck with your map ;)

edit: if the images don't load, let me know and I'll send you them :o
Thanks for the nice gif and detailed mod XD
Ritsuru
Hi! :)

I was just thinking (it is actually ranking criteria) that spinner in Easy should have a little pause (recovery time) of one or two ticks.

So I suggest to start it here 00:07:577 (1) - and finish 00:08:577 - or 00:08:911 - but it's up to you

Good luck and no kds for this xD
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Rina-desu wrote:

Hi! :)

I was just thinking (it is actually ranking criteria) that spinner in Easy should have a little pause (recovery time) of one or two ticks.

So I suggest to start it here 00:07:577 (1) - and finish 00:08:577 - or 00:08:911 - but it's up to you

Good luck and no kds for this xD
Sure :D Thanks
SoGa
[General]

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  1. normal-hitfinishba.wav
I don't see green , orange , neither purple on the background , maybe u can change them to another colorsDissable widescreen support if ur not gonna use storyboardDissable Letterbox during breakLazer's Hard "Tag" is different than other diff , fix it Pls add Lazer to the Tag

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:578 (1,2) - This slider is noisy , change them to another sample and use slider-slide
  2. 00:07:577 (1,1) - Unrankable , u have to left 4 gaps of white ticks after a spinner for the following note
  3. 00:12:577 (2) - feel a little bit ugly , change it like this , it is more smoothly compare the one u have currently
  4. 00:13:911 (4) - Move this to x78 y324 instead
  5. 00:16:911 (4,1) - wow ,this is such a jump , u cant use jump in an Easy diff , just use Distance Snap in whole map
  6. 00:20:244 (4,2) - Don't let them overlap , it seems quite bad , and avoid usiing this kind of rhythm in an Easy diff 00:21:577 (2,3) -
    i think i will probably make something like this instead ,00:21:911 (3) - start (3) here instead 00:21:744 (3) -
  7. 00:27:911 (3,1) - Jump is too big , fix pls
  8. 00:29:911 (3,4) - Wrong ds , use distance snap pls , this might cause misreading for newb player
  9. 00:33:911 (1,2,3) - just stack the 3 in to the 1 slider tail Do something like this for aesthetics pls
  10. 00:36:577 (1,2,3) - same as above
  11. 00:39:244 (1) - If u use ↑ this one , u will probably have to move this onr for not overlapping , and change this hitsound to Finish instead of Clap pls
  12. 00:41:577 (2,3) - Prevent using this kind of rhythm
  13. 00:47:244 (1,2) - Blanket this one
  14. 00:55:911 (2,1) - don't overlap them , seems bad

    Need more works on this diff

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:911 (1,2) - Stop jumping in Normal diff
  2. 00:08:411 (1,1) - Same as i mentioned in Easy diff Unrankable,but in normal diff 2 gaps instead of 4
  3. 00:17:911 (1,2) - Make perfect blanket
  4. 00:18:911 (2,3,4,5,1) - such bad rhythm u have here , try something simple http://puu.sh/hr7YX/fddd89a6e3.jpg
  5. 00:22:244 (4,1) - Use distance snap , the jump is real
  6. 00:30:244 (4,5) - The down beat start at both red ticks tho ,the rhythm u have feel weird
  7. 00:33:911 (1) - Change this to a 2/1 slider instead of reverse
  8. 00:50:911 (2,3,4) - at least make something like this
  9. 00:53:911 (2,3) - Make perfect blanket


[Lazer's Hard]
  1. Think 1.6sv is too fast
  2. 00:00:578 Decrease volume here
  3. 00:03:744 (2) - delete this slider and turn to a note starting here 00:03:911 (3) -
  4. 00:07:077 add a note here
  5. 00:07:577 (2,3) - prefer to put 2 notes here 00:07:744 (2) - 00:08:077 (3) -
  6. 00:11:744 (1) - NC
  7. 00:29:911 (1) - Nc here , such a downbeat
  8. 00:29:911 (1,2,3,4) - prefer to make this rhythm
  9. 00:31:744 (2,3,4,5) - ??? is this really necessary ?
  10. 00:33:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  11. 00:39:411 (5) - Delete this note , i hear nothin there
  12. 00:40:244 (1,2) - ^


Still need more works tho
Good Luck
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

SoGa wrote:

[General]

  • The following hitsound is unused:
  1. normal-hitfinishba.wav
I don't see green , orange , neither purple on the background , maybe u can change them to another colorsDissable widescreen support if ur not gonna use storyboardDissable Letterbox during breakLazer's Hard "Tag" is different than other diff , fix it Pls add Lazer to the Tag

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:578 (1,2) - This slider is noisy , change them to another sample and use slider-slide
  2. 00:07:577 (1,1) - Unrankable , u have to left 4 gaps of white ticks after a spinner for the following note
  3. 00:12:577 (2) - feel a little bit ugly , change it like this , it is more smoothly compare the one u have currently
  4. 00:13:911 (4) - Move this to x78 y324 instead
  5. 00:16:911 (4,1) - wow ,this is such a jump , u cant use jump in an Easy diff , just use Distance Snap in whole map
  6. 00:20:244 (4,2) - Don't let them overlap , it seems quite bad , and avoid usiing this kind of rhythm in an Easy diff 00:21:577 (2,3) -
    i think i will probably make something like this instead ,00:21:911 (3) - start (3) here instead 00:21:744 (3) -
  7. 00:27:911 (3,1) - Jump is too big , fix pls
  8. 00:29:911 (3,4) - Wrong ds , use distance snap pls , this might cause misreading for newb player
  9. 00:33:911 (1,2,3) - just stack the 3 in to the 1 slider tail Do something like this for aesthetics pls
  10. 00:36:577 (1,2,3) - same as above
  11. 00:39:244 (1) - If u use ↑ this one , u will probably have to move this onr for not overlapping , and change this hitsound to Finish instead of Clap pls
  12. 00:41:577 (2,3) - Prevent using this kind of rhythm
  13. 00:47:244 (1,2) - Blanket this one
  14. 00:55:911 (2,1) - don't overlap them , seems bad

    Need more works on this diff

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:911 (1,2) - Stop jumping in Normal diff
  2. 00:08:411 (1,1) - Same as i mentioned in Easy diff Unrankable,but in normal diff 2 gaps instead of 4
  3. 00:17:911 (1,2) - Make perfect blanket
  4. 00:18:911 (2,3,4,5,1) - such bad rhythm u have here , try something simple http://puu.sh/hr7YX/fddd89a6e3.jpg
  5. 00:22:244 (4,1) - Use distance snap , the jump is real
  6. 00:30:244 (4,5) - The down beat start at both red ticks tho ,the rhythm u have feel weird
  7. 00:33:911 (1) - Change this to a 2/1 slider instead of reverse
  8. 00:50:911 (2,3,4) - at least make something like this
  9. 00:53:911 (2,3) - Make perfect blanket


Still need more works tho
Good Luck
Thanks for your mods :) I've applied all the changes, gonna work hard on it
Lazer
Sorry, have no time to answer mod :^<, I've applied most things though!

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Nines
Yahello~ from my modding queue

[Insane]

  • 00:09:911 - 00:16:911 - The hitsounds in this section sound really odd to me. Try finding hitsounds that suit this better than the current ones.
    00:15:244(1,3) - Fix 3's blanket with 1. (Use the tools at hand to get that perfect blanket; approach circles, slider ball indicators, etc.; place circles wherever if you need guidance)
    00:16:577(1,2) - Fix 2's blanket with 1.
    00:17:911(2) - This kind of flow doesn't feel right for this kind of song (having the slider-end point somewhere other than somewhat in the direction of the next hitobject).
    00:35:244(2,3,4,5,6) - This part looks really bad to me. The curve is very imperfect. If you need to, use a slider to create a perfect curve, then adjust the placement of the circles to the slider.
    00:50:327(2,3) - These circles aren't even beats in the song. You should remove these.
    00:50:577(1,2) - Fix 5's blanket with 4.
    00:50:577(4,1) - Fix 1's blanket with 4's slider-end.
    00:52:411(1,2) - Fix 2's blanket with 1's slider-end.
    00:55:161 - Here's an example of where there IS a triplet beat that can be mapped.
    01:01:327 - Another weird mapping-a-beat-that's-not-actually-there place.
    01:01:911(7,8) - Fix 8's blanket with 7's slider-end.
    01:03:827 - There's a beat here. you should map this.


[Lazer's Hard]
Mechanically, I think the map would be okay IF... IFFFF... the slider velocity were lower. This slider velocity is too high for the approach rate, and because of this, the map becomes very uncomfortable to play in my opinion.
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Lazer wrote:

Sorry, have no time to answer mod :^<, I've applied most things though!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hey World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47119
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Hey World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Hey World (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:井口裕香
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:Lazer's Hard
Source:ダンジョンに出会いを求めるのは間違っているだろうか?
Tags:opening anime is it wrong to try to pick up girls in a dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru Darou ka Nardoxyribonucleic Lazer
BeatmapID:678494
BeatmapSetID:301497

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6.4
ApproachRate:7.4
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"dungeon.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"dungeon2.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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52411,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
57911,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
67244,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0


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Combo1 : 255,114,0
Combo2 : 214,3,46
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 0,255,0
Combo5 : 148,69,201

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Sry for idling for a long time, updated :D

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Yahello~ from my modding queue

[Insane]

  • 00:09:911 - 00:16:911 - The hitsounds in this section sound really odd to me. Try finding hitsounds that suit this better than the current ones. I will try to :U
    00:15:244(1,3) - Fix 3's blanket with 1. (Use the tools at hand to get that perfect blanket; approach circles, slider ball indicators, etc.; place circles wherever if you need guidance)Did it
    00:16:577(1,2) - Fix 2's blanket with 1.Did it
    00:17:911(2) - This kind of flow doesn't feel right for this kind of song (having the slider-end point somewhere other than somewhat in the direction of the next hitobject).Fixed
    00:35:244(2,3,4,5,6) - This part looks really bad to me. The curve is very imperfect. If you need to, use a slider to create a perfect curve, then adjust the placement of the circles to the slider.gonna work on it
    00:50:327(2,3) - These circles aren't even beats in the song. You should remove these.Did it
    00:50:577(1,2) - Fix 5's blanket with 4.Did it
    00:50:577(4,1) - Fix 1's blanket with 4's slider-end.Did it
    00:52:411(1,2) - Fix 2's blanket with 1's slider-end.Did it
    00:55:161 - Here's an example of where there IS a triplet beat that can be mapped. I think it's alright
    01:01:327 - Another weird mapping-a-beat-that's-not-actually-there place. Removed
    01:01:911(7,8) - Fix 8's blanket with 7's slider-end. Did it
    01:03:827 - There's a beat here. you should map this. Did it
Thanks for the great mod :D
Lazer
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Cloudchaser
From my modding queue! Modding only 3 difficults because it was on my rules.

General
  1. 00:01:577 - It's too loud


Insane
  1. 00:03:911 (1) - Can you remove this stack? It feels a bit uncomfortable to play.
  2. 00:04:577 - Remove NC, there's no a reason to put a new one.
    00:06:577 - ^
  3. 00:07:744 (1,2) - *Suggestion: http://puu.sh/hwS99/d473cd81db.jpg A small jump would look awesome and it fits with the rhythm well.
  4. 00:09:911 (1,2,3,4) - I highly suggest you to increase the DS! because this part followed, the distance in each note is much higher than right here.
  5. 00:23:911 (3) - Move it away some grids left maybe x:128 y:64
  6. 00:47:911 (3) - Improve this curve *suggestion: http://puu.sh/hwSvk/bd01f73ab7.jpg
  7. 00:46:744 (1) - Hmm, this note needs to be more far. I will tell you, appart of adding a NC (because of speedchange), I want you to move it away. I have an idea for you http://puu.sh/hwSOB/3782ec992f.jpg It seems more readable.
  8. 00:48:577 - I'd remove this NC.
  9. 00:49:244 - Add a note, it feels a bit empty.
  10. 00:49:911 (1) - these sliders are way too outdated but nothing than a beautiful rounded slider would fix! http://puu.sh/hwTiF/bb7eba6c83.jpg
  11. 00:51:911 - Add note
  12. 00:59:244 (3,4) - Increase the distance between these notes. The flow plays weird.
  13. 01:01:911 (6,7) - Fix blanket! http://puu.sh/hwTzK/14461db852.jpg
  14. 01:05:077 (4) - >n< fix this please!
  15. 01:16:577 (1,2) - You shouldn't be stacking here, improve the flow over here.
  16. 01:17:911 - Add NC (according to your pattern and also downbeat).

    My view: My view is very simple to this map, you need to effort a bit more in the aesthetic part. the rhythm is very accurated, may not perfect but it's more than enough. Returning to the part of aesthetics, there are some parts like 01:01:911 (6) - or 01:13:911 (1) - that you could improve some aspects like blankets in this case. Yeah, this diff need more needs improvement but it's on the good road!


Lazer's Hard
  1. 00:01:911 (1) - I think it would look better if you try something like this http://puu.sh/hwUZT/3a4b0af0d9.jpg
  2. 00:11:744 (3) - ctrl+j for a better transition (and beauty)
  3. 00:12:577 (1,2,3) - I was thinking that 1/2 rhythm is a bit overused here. My first idea was to follow the vocal doing: http://puu.sh/hwVrh/73461ec202.jpg
  4. 00:24:577 (4) - this slider doesn't make much sense here, keep trying with another rhythm IMO
  5. 00:29:577 (3) - Improve this blanket! http://puu.sh/hwVxn/2272a9f2f3.jpg and after you add this point, take advantage of fixing this as well: 00:29:911 (1) - http://puu.sh/hwVBn/f28a866ac3.jpg
  6. 00:36:244 (3) - Stack on 00:34:911 (4) - 's space . In my opinion, it looks better at this way.
  7. 00:43:244 (7) - Insta NC due of downbeat. After it, remove NC here 00:43:911 (1) -
  8. 01:00:577 (9) - Here the NC starts, not after or before, here.
  9. 01:03:077 (7) - Same case from above and also remove the nc 01:03:911 -
  10. 01:24:577 (1) - Silence this spinner for obvious reason that there's no music anymore.

    My view: In my opinion, it's very neat. The two trouble that I would mention are some NCs, they are a bit inconsistent. Meanwhile, the hitsounds are a bit poor. I could hear some cymbals but instead of putting some finishes (soft at least) you left them there. Just that, well done.


Normal
  1. 00:05:411 (5) - Fix the distance of this note here, it's not similar to the others. Remember to usse always the same DS on all the map. *I forgot to say to fix the distance of this as well 00:05:577 (6) -
  2. 00:06:577 (1,2,3) - I don't really suggest to stack more than 2, it looks boring as well. The thing you can do is: move (1) to a place similar to x:380 y:296 and let (2) and (3) stacked.
  3. 00:16:577 (4) - I highly suggest you to remove this stack. It's not because I don't like them, it's just, hard to read sometimes. It makes the normal harder than it's already. Consider this point!
  4. 00:22:244 (4,1) - The flow seems weird, my simple suggestion is: http://puu.sh/hwWva/42ca0cc2fd.jpg
  5. 00:30:244 (4) - ctrl+g
  6. 00:30:744 (5) - Move this to x:96 y:208 making a small triangle http://puu.sh/hwWzt/1908c43007.jpg
  7. 00:57:911 - Add finish here
  8. 01:08:577 (1) - outdated slider :c
  9. 01:29:077 - silence this spinner.

    My view: Very simple but good enough. I think it just need improve some sliders' shapes weirds over there but actually it's not a big problem, just a knack of mine.


Anything that you don't understand, feel free to catch me In-game or just post here. Wishing you the best!
Lazer

Cloudchaser wrote:

Lazer's Hard
  1. 00:01:911 (1) - I think it would look better if you try something like this http://puu.sh/hwUZT/3a4b0af0d9.jpg I'll have to move (2) aswell and that would make it ugly :^<
  2. 00:11:744 (3) - ctrl+j for a better transition (and beauty) Applied
  3. 00:12:577 (1,2,3) - I was thinking that 1/2 rhythm is a bit overused here. My first idea was to follow the vocal doing: http://puu.sh/hwVrh/73461ec202.jpg I've tried many places on where to put the 1/1 slider but there's just no spot :^<
  4. 00:24:577 (4) - this slider doesn't make much sense here, keep trying with another rhythm IMO Changed
  5. 00:29:577 (3) - Improve this blanket! http://puu.sh/hwVxn/2272a9f2f3.jpg and after you add this point, take advantage of fixing this as well: 00:29:911 (1) - http://puu.sh/hwVBn/f28a866ac3.jpg Can't believe I haven't thought of this one, great one
  6. 00:36:244 (3) - Stack on 00:34:911 (4) - 's space . In my opinion, it looks better at this way. You're right~
  7. 00:43:244 (7) - Insta NC due of downbeat. After it, remove NC here 00:43:911 (1) -
  8. 01:00:577 (9) - Here the NC starts, not after or before, here.
  9. 01:03:077 (7) - Same case from above and also remove the nc 01:03:911 -
  10. 01:24:577 (1) - Silence this spinner for obvious reason that there's no music anymore.

    My view: In my opinion, it's very neat. The two trouble that I would mention are some NCs, they are a bit inconsistent. Meanwhile, the hitsounds are a bit poor. I could hear some cymbals but instead of putting some finishes (soft at least) you left them there. Just that, well done.
Might need a hitsound mod, I'm not too great at hitsounding :^>
Thank you for great suggestions!

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Source:ダンジョンに出会いを求めるのは間違っているだろうか?
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292,224,68577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,328,68911,5,0,0:0:0:0:
108,280,69077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,212,69244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,88,69577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,69744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,204,69911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,244,70244,6,0,P|64:316|144:340,1,160
212,324,70744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,276,70911,2,0,P|300:240|304:192,1,80
300,124,71244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,40,71577,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,100,71744,2,0,P|92:184|136:244,1,160
200,284,72244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,72411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,288,72577,2,0,P|412:220|400:116,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,73077,6,0,L|244:168|240:168,1,80
176,168,73411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,200,73577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,248,73744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,252,73911,2,0,P|296:256|348:248,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,228,74244,2,0,P|444:196|456:164,1,80
336,52,74744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,76,74911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,140,75077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,212,75244,6,0,P|172:276|260:340,2,160,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,148,76077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,124,76244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,76411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76577,2,0,P|473:264|400:333,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,252,77077,2,0,B|316:240|316:272|232:252,1,160
160,232,77577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,80,77911,6,0,P|276:40|348:80,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,78411,2,0,L|280:220,1,80
280,360,78911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,272,79244,6,0,B|388:192|424:192|384:112,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,48,79744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,120,79911,2,0,B|262:195|298:195|270:275,1,160
232,348,80411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,80577,2,0,B|148:208|184:208|144:128,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,81077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,96,81244,6,0,P|300:140|288:200,1,80
280,240,81577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,288,81744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,81911,2,0,P|84:240|120:152,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,220,82411,2,0,P|316:180|336:160,1,160
444,268,83077,6,0,L|276:328,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,83577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,200,83911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,156,84244,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84577,12,2,88911,0:0:0:0:
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