Iguchi Yuka - Hey World (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-
I gonna update Lazer's diff first and I'll make changes to my diffs when I get back home. :D Although It's lesson time now ZZZZ
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue victim list


I really need to start watching this series lol
here click on me for some fun
General
- In my opinion, the flow could be a lot better on all difficulties. I've pointed out some of the spots where you can improve the flow, but you don't need to follow through on them if you believe that the flow is fine.

Easy
- Consider adding a note at the following places: All added :)
  • - 00:05:244
    - 00:14:911
    - 00:29:577
    - 00:33:577
    - 00:36:244
    - 00:38:911

- Consider making the note at 00:11:244(4) into a 2/1 slider okay
  • :idea:Something like this maybe?

    You don't need to make the slider exactly like that if you are going to take this suggestion
Sure
- Consider reversing (Ctrl + G) the slider at 00:17:951(1) Not sure
- Consider making the note at 00:27:911(3) into a 1/1 slider Okay
- The slider at 00:44:411(1) feels off with the flow. Consider changing it? Changed
  • :idea:Maybe you can change the pattern to something like this? Try it out for yourself :)
    Before

    After

- The slider at 00:48:577(2) can be a blanket for the note at 00:49:577(3) for a more aesthetically pleasing pattern I changed the position of some note due to the previous changes,including this one.

Normal
- Consider moving the note at 00:17:577(5) to 00:17:411 and make it a 1/2 slider Did it
- Consider making 00:24:577(4) a 1/1 slider. Did it Alternatively you can add a note at 00:24:911
- Consider moving the note at 00:30:411(4) to 00:30:244 and make it a 1/2 slider, as well as making the note at 00:30:744(5) into a 1/2 slider Cool :D
  • :idea:Something like this perhaps? Try it out for yourself :)
    Before

    After

- Consider making 00:33:244(3) a 1/1 slider. Did it Alternatively you can add a note at 00:33:577
- Consider adding a note at 00:45:577 Did it


Insane
- Consider adding a note at 00:23:077.Did it Alternative, you could make the note at 00:22:911(4) a 1/2 slider
- Consider making the note at 00:26:911(5) a 1/2 slider Did it
- *Consider adding a note at 00:30:077 and 00:30:161. If you do follow through on this one, make the NC start at 00:30:077 and not 00:30:244(1)Did it
- *Consider making the note at 00:30:744(2) a 1/2 sliderDid it
  • :idea:Something like this? Note that the image below shows both changes marked with a red asterisk (*) Nice, but I used different way

    Once again you don't need to use these exact sliders; they're just placeholders for an idea you can use

- Consider adding a 1/2 slider at 00:33:577 Did it
- Consider making the note at 00:36:244(6) a 1/2 slider Did it
- ^^ at 00:52:077(3)
- Make the note at 01:16:577(7) a NC instead of at 01:16:911(1)Aright

Hope this helps you out, and good luck with your map ;)

edit: if the images don't load, let me know and I'll send you them :o
Thanks for the nice gif and detailed mod XD
Ritsuru
Hi! :)

I was just thinking (it is actually ranking criteria) that spinner in Easy should have a little pause (recovery time) of one or two ticks.

So I suggest to start it here 00:07:577 (1) - and finish 00:08:577 - or 00:08:911 - but it's up to you

Good luck and no kds for this xD
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Rina-desu wrote:

Hi! :)

I was just thinking (it is actually ranking criteria) that spinner in Easy should have a little pause (recovery time) of one or two ticks.

So I suggest to start it here 00:07:577 (1) - and finish 00:08:577 - or 00:08:911 - but it's up to you

Good luck and no kds for this xD
Sure :D Thanks
SoGa
[General]

  • The following hitsound is unused:
  1. normal-hitfinishba.wav
I don't see green , orange , neither purple on the background , maybe u can change them to another colorsDissable widescreen support if ur not gonna use storyboardDissable Letterbox during breakLazer's Hard "Tag" is different than other diff , fix it Pls add Lazer to the Tag

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:578 (1,2) - This slider is noisy , change them to another sample and use slider-slide
  2. 00:07:577 (1,1) - Unrankable , u have to left 4 gaps of white ticks after a spinner for the following note
  3. 00:12:577 (2) - feel a little bit ugly , change it like this , it is more smoothly compare the one u have currently
  4. 00:13:911 (4) - Move this to x78 y324 instead
  5. 00:16:911 (4,1) - wow ,this is such a jump , u cant use jump in an Easy diff , just use Distance Snap in whole map
  6. 00:20:244 (4,2) - Don't let them overlap , it seems quite bad , and avoid usiing this kind of rhythm in an Easy diff 00:21:577 (2,3) -
    i think i will probably make something like this instead ,00:21:911 (3) - start (3) here instead 00:21:744 (3) -
  7. 00:27:911 (3,1) - Jump is too big , fix pls
  8. 00:29:911 (3,4) - Wrong ds , use distance snap pls , this might cause misreading for newb player
  9. 00:33:911 (1,2,3) - just stack the 3 in to the 1 slider tail Do something like this for aesthetics pls
  10. 00:36:577 (1,2,3) - same as above
  11. 00:39:244 (1) - If u use ↑ this one , u will probably have to move this onr for not overlapping , and change this hitsound to Finish instead of Clap pls
  12. 00:41:577 (2,3) - Prevent using this kind of rhythm
  13. 00:47:244 (1,2) - Blanket this one
  14. 00:55:911 (2,1) - don't overlap them , seems bad

    Need more works on this diff

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:911 (1,2) - Stop jumping in Normal diff
  2. 00:08:411 (1,1) - Same as i mentioned in Easy diff Unrankable,but in normal diff 2 gaps instead of 4
  3. 00:17:911 (1,2) - Make perfect blanket
  4. 00:18:911 (2,3,4,5,1) - such bad rhythm u have here , try something simple http://puu.sh/hr7YX/fddd89a6e3.jpg
  5. 00:22:244 (4,1) - Use distance snap , the jump is real
  6. 00:30:244 (4,5) - The down beat start at both red ticks tho ,the rhythm u have feel weird
  7. 00:33:911 (1) - Change this to a 2/1 slider instead of reverse
  8. 00:50:911 (2,3,4) - at least make something like this
  9. 00:53:911 (2,3) - Make perfect blanket


[Lazer's Hard]
  1. Think 1.6sv is too fast
  2. 00:00:578 Decrease volume here
  3. 00:03:744 (2) - delete this slider and turn to a note starting here 00:03:911 (3) -
  4. 00:07:077 add a note here
  5. 00:07:577 (2,3) - prefer to put 2 notes here 00:07:744 (2) - 00:08:077 (3) -
  6. 00:11:744 (1) - NC
  7. 00:29:911 (1) - Nc here , such a downbeat
  8. 00:29:911 (1,2,3,4) - prefer to make this rhythm
  9. 00:31:744 (2,3,4,5) - ??? is this really necessary ?
  10. 00:33:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  11. 00:39:411 (5) - Delete this note , i hear nothin there
  12. 00:40:244 (1,2) - ^


Still need more works tho
Good Luck
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

SoGa wrote:

[General]

  • The following hitsound is unused:
  1. normal-hitfinishba.wav
I don't see green , orange , neither purple on the background , maybe u can change them to another colorsDissable widescreen support if ur not gonna use storyboardDissable Letterbox during breakLazer's Hard "Tag" is different than other diff , fix it Pls add Lazer to the Tag

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:578 (1,2) - This slider is noisy , change them to another sample and use slider-slide
  2. 00:07:577 (1,1) - Unrankable , u have to left 4 gaps of white ticks after a spinner for the following note
  3. 00:12:577 (2) - feel a little bit ugly , change it like this , it is more smoothly compare the one u have currently
  4. 00:13:911 (4) - Move this to x78 y324 instead
  5. 00:16:911 (4,1) - wow ,this is such a jump , u cant use jump in an Easy diff , just use Distance Snap in whole map
  6. 00:20:244 (4,2) - Don't let them overlap , it seems quite bad , and avoid usiing this kind of rhythm in an Easy diff 00:21:577 (2,3) -
    i think i will probably make something like this instead ,00:21:911 (3) - start (3) here instead 00:21:744 (3) -
  7. 00:27:911 (3,1) - Jump is too big , fix pls
  8. 00:29:911 (3,4) - Wrong ds , use distance snap pls , this might cause misreading for newb player
  9. 00:33:911 (1,2,3) - just stack the 3 in to the 1 slider tail Do something like this for aesthetics pls
  10. 00:36:577 (1,2,3) - same as above
  11. 00:39:244 (1) - If u use ↑ this one , u will probably have to move this onr for not overlapping , and change this hitsound to Finish instead of Clap pls
  12. 00:41:577 (2,3) - Prevent using this kind of rhythm
  13. 00:47:244 (1,2) - Blanket this one
  14. 00:55:911 (2,1) - don't overlap them , seems bad

    Need more works on this diff

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:911 (1,2) - Stop jumping in Normal diff
  2. 00:08:411 (1,1) - Same as i mentioned in Easy diff Unrankable,but in normal diff 2 gaps instead of 4
  3. 00:17:911 (1,2) - Make perfect blanket
  4. 00:18:911 (2,3,4,5,1) - such bad rhythm u have here , try something simple http://puu.sh/hr7YX/fddd89a6e3.jpg
  5. 00:22:244 (4,1) - Use distance snap , the jump is real
  6. 00:30:244 (4,5) - The down beat start at both red ticks tho ,the rhythm u have feel weird
  7. 00:33:911 (1) - Change this to a 2/1 slider instead of reverse
  8. 00:50:911 (2,3,4) - at least make something like this
  9. 00:53:911 (2,3) - Make perfect blanket


Still need more works tho
Good Luck
Thanks for your mods :) I've applied all the changes, gonna work hard on it
Lazer
Sorry, have no time to answer mod :^<, I've applied most things though!

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Title:Hey World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Hey World (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:井口裕香
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:Lazer's Hard
Source:ダンジョンに出会いを求めるのは間違っているだろうか?
Tags:opening anime is it wrong to try to pick up girls in a dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru Darou ka Nardoxyribonucleic Lazer
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Nines
Yahello~ from my modding queue

[Insane]

  • 00:09:911 - 00:16:911 - The hitsounds in this section sound really odd to me. Try finding hitsounds that suit this better than the current ones.
    00:15:244(1,3) - Fix 3's blanket with 1. (Use the tools at hand to get that perfect blanket; approach circles, slider ball indicators, etc.; place circles wherever if you need guidance)
    00:16:577(1,2) - Fix 2's blanket with 1.
    00:17:911(2) - This kind of flow doesn't feel right for this kind of song (having the slider-end point somewhere other than somewhat in the direction of the next hitobject).
    00:35:244(2,3,4,5,6) - This part looks really bad to me. The curve is very imperfect. If you need to, use a slider to create a perfect curve, then adjust the placement of the circles to the slider.
    00:50:327(2,3) - These circles aren't even beats in the song. You should remove these.
    00:50:577(1,2) - Fix 5's blanket with 4.
    00:50:577(4,1) - Fix 1's blanket with 4's slider-end.
    00:52:411(1,2) - Fix 2's blanket with 1's slider-end.
    00:55:161 - Here's an example of where there IS a triplet beat that can be mapped.
    01:01:327 - Another weird mapping-a-beat-that's-not-actually-there place.
    01:01:911(7,8) - Fix 8's blanket with 7's slider-end.
    01:03:827 - There's a beat here. you should map this.


[Lazer's Hard]
Mechanically, I think the map would be okay IF... IFFFF... the slider velocity were lower. This slider velocity is too high for the approach rate, and because of this, the map becomes very uncomfortable to play in my opinion.
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Lazer wrote:

Sorry, have no time to answer mod :^<, I've applied most things though!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hey World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47119
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Hey World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Hey World (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:井口裕香
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:Lazer's Hard
Source:ダンジョンに出会いを求めるのは間違っているだろうか?
Tags:opening anime is it wrong to try to pick up girls in a dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru Darou ka Nardoxyribonucleic Lazer
BeatmapID:678494
BeatmapSetID:301497

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6.4
ApproachRate:7.4
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"dungeon2.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Sry for idling for a long time, updated :D

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Yahello~ from my modding queue

[Insane]

  • 00:09:911 - 00:16:911 - The hitsounds in this section sound really odd to me. Try finding hitsounds that suit this better than the current ones. I will try to :U
    00:15:244(1,3) - Fix 3's blanket with 1. (Use the tools at hand to get that perfect blanket; approach circles, slider ball indicators, etc.; place circles wherever if you need guidance)Did it
    00:16:577(1,2) - Fix 2's blanket with 1.Did it
    00:17:911(2) - This kind of flow doesn't feel right for this kind of song (having the slider-end point somewhere other than somewhat in the direction of the next hitobject).Fixed
    00:35:244(2,3,4,5,6) - This part looks really bad to me. The curve is very imperfect. If you need to, use a slider to create a perfect curve, then adjust the placement of the circles to the slider.gonna work on it
    00:50:327(2,3) - These circles aren't even beats in the song. You should remove these.Did it
    00:50:577(1,2) - Fix 5's blanket with 4.Did it
    00:50:577(4,1) - Fix 1's blanket with 4's slider-end.Did it
    00:52:411(1,2) - Fix 2's blanket with 1's slider-end.Did it
    00:55:161 - Here's an example of where there IS a triplet beat that can be mapped. I think it's alright
    01:01:327 - Another weird mapping-a-beat-that's-not-actually-there place. Removed
    01:01:911(7,8) - Fix 8's blanket with 7's slider-end. Did it
    01:03:827 - There's a beat here. you should map this. Did it
Thanks for the great mod :D
Lazer
.
Cloudchaser
From my modding queue! Modding only 3 difficults because it was on my rules.

General
  1. 00:01:577 - It's too loud


Insane
  1. 00:03:911 (1) - Can you remove this stack? It feels a bit uncomfortable to play.
  2. 00:04:577 - Remove NC, there's no a reason to put a new one.
    00:06:577 - ^
  3. 00:07:744 (1,2) - *Suggestion: http://puu.sh/hwS99/d473cd81db.jpg A small jump would look awesome and it fits with the rhythm well.
  4. 00:09:911 (1,2,3,4) - I highly suggest you to increase the DS! because this part followed, the distance in each note is much higher than right here.
  5. 00:23:911 (3) - Move it away some grids left maybe x:128 y:64
  6. 00:47:911 (3) - Improve this curve *suggestion: http://puu.sh/hwSvk/bd01f73ab7.jpg
  7. 00:46:744 (1) - Hmm, this note needs to be more far. I will tell you, appart of adding a NC (because of speedchange), I want you to move it away. I have an idea for you http://puu.sh/hwSOB/3782ec992f.jpg It seems more readable.
  8. 00:48:577 - I'd remove this NC.
  9. 00:49:244 - Add a note, it feels a bit empty.
  10. 00:49:911 (1) - these sliders are way too outdated but nothing than a beautiful rounded slider would fix! http://puu.sh/hwTiF/bb7eba6c83.jpg
  11. 00:51:911 - Add note
  12. 00:59:244 (3,4) - Increase the distance between these notes. The flow plays weird.
  13. 01:01:911 (6,7) - Fix blanket! http://puu.sh/hwTzK/14461db852.jpg
  14. 01:05:077 (4) - >n< fix this please!
  15. 01:16:577 (1,2) - You shouldn't be stacking here, improve the flow over here.
  16. 01:17:911 - Add NC (according to your pattern and also downbeat).

    My view: My view is very simple to this map, you need to effort a bit more in the aesthetic part. the rhythm is very accurated, may not perfect but it's more than enough. Returning to the part of aesthetics, there are some parts like 01:01:911 (6) - or 01:13:911 (1) - that you could improve some aspects like blankets in this case. Yeah, this diff need more needs improvement but it's on the good road!


Lazer's Hard
  1. 00:01:911 (1) - I think it would look better if you try something like this http://puu.sh/hwUZT/3a4b0af0d9.jpg
  2. 00:11:744 (3) - ctrl+j for a better transition (and beauty)
  3. 00:12:577 (1,2,3) - I was thinking that 1/2 rhythm is a bit overused here. My first idea was to follow the vocal doing: http://puu.sh/hwVrh/73461ec202.jpg
  4. 00:24:577 (4) - this slider doesn't make much sense here, keep trying with another rhythm IMO
  5. 00:29:577 (3) - Improve this blanket! http://puu.sh/hwVxn/2272a9f2f3.jpg and after you add this point, take advantage of fixing this as well: 00:29:911 (1) - http://puu.sh/hwVBn/f28a866ac3.jpg
  6. 00:36:244 (3) - Stack on 00:34:911 (4) - 's space . In my opinion, it looks better at this way.
  7. 00:43:244 (7) - Insta NC due of downbeat. After it, remove NC here 00:43:911 (1) -
  8. 01:00:577 (9) - Here the NC starts, not after or before, here.
  9. 01:03:077 (7) - Same case from above and also remove the nc 01:03:911 -
  10. 01:24:577 (1) - Silence this spinner for obvious reason that there's no music anymore.

    My view: In my opinion, it's very neat. The two trouble that I would mention are some NCs, they are a bit inconsistent. Meanwhile, the hitsounds are a bit poor. I could hear some cymbals but instead of putting some finishes (soft at least) you left them there. Just that, well done.


Normal
  1. 00:05:411 (5) - Fix the distance of this note here, it's not similar to the others. Remember to usse always the same DS on all the map. *I forgot to say to fix the distance of this as well 00:05:577 (6) -
  2. 00:06:577 (1,2,3) - I don't really suggest to stack more than 2, it looks boring as well. The thing you can do is: move (1) to a place similar to x:380 y:296 and let (2) and (3) stacked.
  3. 00:16:577 (4) - I highly suggest you to remove this stack. It's not because I don't like them, it's just, hard to read sometimes. It makes the normal harder than it's already. Consider this point!
  4. 00:22:244 (4,1) - The flow seems weird, my simple suggestion is: http://puu.sh/hwWva/42ca0cc2fd.jpg
  5. 00:30:244 (4) - ctrl+g
  6. 00:30:744 (5) - Move this to x:96 y:208 making a small triangle http://puu.sh/hwWzt/1908c43007.jpg
  7. 00:57:911 - Add finish here
  8. 01:08:577 (1) - outdated slider :c
  9. 01:29:077 - silence this spinner.

    My view: Very simple but good enough. I think it just need improve some sliders' shapes weirds over there but actually it's not a big problem, just a knack of mine.


Anything that you don't understand, feel free to catch me In-game or just post here. Wishing you the best!
Lazer

Cloudchaser wrote:

Lazer's Hard
  1. 00:01:911 (1) - I think it would look better if you try something like this http://puu.sh/hwUZT/3a4b0af0d9.jpg I'll have to move (2) aswell and that would make it ugly :^<
  2. 00:11:744 (3) - ctrl+j for a better transition (and beauty) Applied
  3. 00:12:577 (1,2,3) - I was thinking that 1/2 rhythm is a bit overused here. My first idea was to follow the vocal doing: http://puu.sh/hwVrh/73461ec202.jpg I've tried many places on where to put the 1/1 slider but there's just no spot :^<
  4. 00:24:577 (4) - this slider doesn't make much sense here, keep trying with another rhythm IMO Changed
  5. 00:29:577 (3) - Improve this blanket! http://puu.sh/hwVxn/2272a9f2f3.jpg and after you add this point, take advantage of fixing this as well: 00:29:911 (1) - http://puu.sh/hwVBn/f28a866ac3.jpg Can't believe I haven't thought of this one, great one
  6. 00:36:244 (3) - Stack on 00:34:911 (4) - 's space . In my opinion, it looks better at this way. You're right~
  7. 00:43:244 (7) - Insta NC due of downbeat. After it, remove NC here 00:43:911 (1) -
  8. 01:00:577 (9) - Here the NC starts, not after or before, here.
  9. 01:03:077 (7) - Same case from above and also remove the nc 01:03:911 -
  10. 01:24:577 (1) - Silence this spinner for obvious reason that there's no music anymore.

    My view: In my opinion, it's very neat. The two trouble that I would mention are some NCs, they are a bit inconsistent. Meanwhile, the hitsounds are a bit poor. I could hear some cymbals but instead of putting some finishes (soft at least) you left them there. Just that, well done.
Might need a hitsound mod, I'm not too great at hitsounding :^>
Thank you for great suggestions!

osu file format v14

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Source:ダンジョンに出会いを求めるのは間違っているだろうか?
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216,116,12577,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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276,88,14911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,208,15577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,284,15744,2,0,P|108:328|148:336,1,80
204,348,16077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,16244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,112,20077,2,0,P|208:116|152:132,1,80
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360,300,21077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,112,23077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,316,24077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,284,50411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,200,58577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,92,61244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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301,103,62911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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210,184,63911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,232,64077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,307,64244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,311,64577,2,0,P|383:248|346:159,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,233,65077,2,0,P|246:187|250:102,1,160
288,41,65577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,137,65911,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,213,66077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,160,67410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,228,67744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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292,156,69744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,204,69911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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232,148,76077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,124,76244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,76411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76577,2,0,P|473:264|400:333,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,252,77077,2,0,B|316:240|316:272|232:252,1,160
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212,80,77911,6,0,P|276:40|348:80,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,48,79744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,348,80411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,68,81077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,84577,12,2,88911,0:0:0:0:
Mio_chan
Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢,或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[General]

[Insane]
00:03:244 (3) –我覺得同00:02:911 (1) – 個end有D近,不過無所謂既0.0
00:07:744 (1,2) – 我個得呢度用兩個都淨係用circles會好D,音樂呢兩個音落得好重用slider怪怪地,不過如果你都係諗住用SLIDER我覺得呢兩個SLIDER隔開D好玩D
00:11:911 (4,5,6,7) - – SPACING細番D好似好D,首歌呢度好平淡咁大JUMP有D怪
00:34:911 (1) – Remove NC, NC放喺00:35:244 (2) –
00:40:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – 聽音樂咁樣好似好D , (1) 至 (5) 個SPACING可以漸大
00:42:911 (1) – NC放喺00:43:077 (2) – 同埋呢個CIRCLE可以放喺離00:43:077 (2) -遠 D既地方
00:48:577 (1,2,3) – 好似正D咁樣
00:50:411 – 加 circle
01:01:911 (6) – NC
01:24:744 (1) – 個spinner玩漸細聲?

[Lazer’s Hard]
I almost forget to use English when modding this diff LOL
00:03:744 (2,3,4) – change to something like this? I think it suits the music better.
00:07:077 – add something, the guitar sounds is quite clear here
00:09:911 to 00:13:744 – I think the beat is too intense here, and the stacking does not play very nice (you seldom use them in the other part) the music is quite quiet here and the patterns are hard to read (since you use AR7) I am not suggesting you to increase the AR, but to simplify the patterns a bit.
00:39:244 (4) – NC?
00:41:911 (2) – delete this and add a circle at 00:42:077 –I think it is better to leave 00:41:911 – blank
00:44:411 (4,1) –same as above
00:49:077 (1) –remove NC
00:49:911 (4) – NC
00:52:577 (6) –NC here, remove NC at 00:52:911 (1) –
00:53:911 (4) – NC
00:55:744 (2) –(nazi) can be made into a better blanket
00:57:577 (3) – Ctrl + G?
00:59:244 (5) – NC
01:00:577 (9) – NC, remove NC at 01:01:244 (1) –
01:06:244 (3) –feel empty here, may be delete the slider and make this point a circle or the start point of slider ?
01:08:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) – quite strange, I suggest following the vocal line more?
01:12:577 (5) – NC, remove NC at 01:13:077 (1) –
01:13:911 (5) – NC
01:16:577 (5) – NC

[Normal]
HP - 1
你用左好多stack, 有D 1/1 有D 1/2, 我覺得normal唔好用咁多Stack比較好
00:05:411 (5) – delete
00:05:577 (6,1,2) – 跟番結他?你前面都跟
00:08:411 (1) –太短啦…對於normal黎講,用slider?
00:17:411 (5) – 唔好指向(4)個slider end
00:22:244 (4) – 唔好指住 (1)
00:44:244 (1,2,3) – 對新手黎講有D難read,至少(3)唔好stack喺(1)下面
你首歌個chorus 一時跟vocal一時無玩落唔係咁好,不過如果你係諗清楚先咁MAP就算啦
01:21:577 (4) – NC

[Easy]
首歌個spacing一定要consistent ,姐係1.3x就成首都要1.3x,我見過有map差0.1x都比人DQ,因為成首都係我講唔曬同埋決定唔到你個spacing,你自己check番
00:07:577 (1) – Easy spinner唔好咁短,你用SLIDER仲好
00:28:577 (1) – 唔好 stack
00:40:577 (1,2,3,1,2) –我覺得紅線拉slider唔係咁好,但係我都諗唔到有咩可以做
00:46:911 (3) – 唔好有1/2
01:15:577 (3) –出界(我唔知放唔放紅色好,所以放紫色XD)
01:21:911 (1,2,3) –呢個beat對新手黎講好難捉摸,可以試下用repeating slider處理左佢
呢個diff要重新汁一次…因為D spacing唔consistent

[Nardo’s Oni]
垃圾mod黎啦~ 第一次mod taiko得屎唔好嬲 ;_;
00:24:411 (114) – k?
00:38:577 – 加 k?
00:57:744 (292) - k?同埋00:57:827 -加 k?
01:03:827 (338) - k?
01:11:827 (393) - k?
01:14:494 (414) - k?
01:20:577 (455) - k?
01:22:244 (469) - k?

[Nardo’s Muzukashii]
我搵唔到野mod ;_;

加油~
Lazer

Mio_chan wrote:

[Lazer’s Hard]
I almost forget to use English when modding this diff LOL :^>
00:03:744 (2,3,4) – change to something like this? I think it suits the music better.
Changed it to that
00:07:077 – add something, the guitar sounds is quite clear here Nah, that'll go against the way I mapped this
00:09:911 to 00:13:744 – I think the beat is too intense here, and the stacking does not play very nice (you seldom use them in the other part) the music is quite quiet here and the patterns are hard to read (since you use AR7) I am not suggesting you to increase the AR, but to simplify the patterns a bit. I actually really like this part myself, however I suppose I will change it if other people tell me to
00:39:244 (4) – NC?
00:41:911 (2) – delete this and add a circle at 00:42:077 –I think it is better to leave 00:41:911 – blank That would destroy the buildup imo, so no :^<
00:44:411 (4,1) –same as above Also same ^
00:49:077 (1) –remove NC
00:49:911 (4) – NC
00:52:577 (6) –NC here, remove NC at 00:52:911 (1) –
00:53:911 (4) – NC
00:55:744 (2) –(nazi) can be made into a better blanket
00:57:577 (3) – Ctrl + G?
00:59:244 (5) – NC
01:00:577 (9) – NC, remove NC at 01:01:244 (1) –
01:06:244 (3) –feel empty here, may be delete the slider and make this point a circle or the start point of slider ? idk what that means
01:08:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) – quite strange, I suggest following the vocal line more? You can hear a 1/2 beat in the background if you listen closely
01:12:577 (5) – NC, remove NC at 01:13:077 (1) –
01:13:911 (5) – NC
01:16:577 (5) – NC
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Hey World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Hey World (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:井口裕香
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:Lazer's Hard
Source:ダンジョンに出会いを求めるのは間違っているだろうか?
Tags:opening anime is it wrong to try to pick up girls in a dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru Darou ka Nardoxyribonucleic Lazer
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I've redone the NCs, I've no clue what i was thinking when i made them, anyway- Thanks for the mod~
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-
Well, sorry guys... I don't really have time to reply all the mods right now...but I've made some changes, I will reply to your mods when I have time. Thanks :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

Mio_chan wrote:

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢,或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[General]

[Nardo’s Oni]
垃圾mod黎啦~ 第一次mod taiko得屎唔好嬲 ;_;
00:24:411 (114) – k? Retained to make a contrast to 00:21:744 (97) -
00:38:577 – 加 k? I think a 2/1 break would work better.
00:57:744 (292) - k?同埋00:57:827 -加 k? d would result in a better flow imo.
01:03:827 (338) - k? The music is flat here, so ddd would be fine.
01:11:827 (393) - k? ^
01:14:494 (414) - k? ^
01:20:577 (455) - k? d would be better because of the low-pitched vocal.
01:22:244 (469) - k? Keeping it as d could emphasize the next K nicely.

[Nardo’s Muzukashii]
我搵唔到野mod ;_;

加油~
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Wafu

From modding queue

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Rename the song title to Hey World (TV size) because "size" is not supposed to be capitalized. You might check this on original CD case.
  2. Remove the '?' mark from source as it is not official part of the anime name. This can be confirmed on official website.
  3. I suggest you to add ダンまち and Danmachi to tags because it is very often used abbreviation for the anime name and is used even by its developer.
  4. normal-hitclap is delayed by 10ms which is higher than rankable 5ms delay. You might check it on screenshot below. Obviously, there is a fixed version of the hitsound, so you might use it.
  5. normal-hitnormal has exactly the same issue as above file. You might check it below again and you can get the fixed file here.
  6. You have to delete normal-hitfinishba.wav as it has completely no usage in the map. 'hitfinishBA' is not even read by the game.
  7. normal-sliderslide is using wrong file for muting hitsounds. If muting, you are only allowed to use this file. There is some noise in your .wav, but it is not audiable, so it counts as muting which is allowed only by this file.
  8. Remove all whistles from your map. Even on sliders for example 00:09:911 (1,2,3,4) - it is competely insensible placement. Reason is both normal-hitwhistle and normal-sliderwhistle are muted, but you are still using them in your map. That makes insensible things load but play nothing at all. Check it through all the maps apart from Taiko and remove it. When it is done, remove also normal-hitwhistle.wav and normal-sliderwhistle.wav files, because if you can mute the hitsound by removing them from map, why would there be additional files. Also this is also the hitsound with noise thingy as above, which is unrankable anyway.
  9. mp3 file is very low quality. It seems it was re-encoded multiple times. It was definitely encoded from an mp3 within 80-90kbps range. Because the song's album was officially released, it is not a problem to get higher quality mp3. You might use this mp3 which I re-encoded from EAC version of the CD. You might compare the loss difference below (more kHz = more important informations carried by the mp3. Human ear is sensitive up to 18-22kHz depending on age and health of the ear, that means the difference can be noticed quite easily).
  10. Up to 30MB filesize is alowed for a map with video. Actually, your video is quite low quality, low resolution, yet the filesize is still 8.35MB. I am not saying it is unrankable, this depends completely on you, but I think if you can, you should use the best qualities possible in all sides of your map. Using DivX today is quite out of the ordinary because of its low compression level and high loss - Or simplier, there are codecs with much better qualities and compression than DivX. You can get fairly better video file here if you agree with me.
  11. Because you are using soft sampleset in start of the song, which is quiet - there is almost only piano, so a noise from the sliderslide is quite loud. You should probably replace it with this file and tick 'Custom 1' in audio settings for first two timing points which use soft.


Insane


  1. 00:12:577 (1) - Try to keep the distances visually similar in the same part. You might notice you keep the DS beetween 1.6 and 1.7, but here you just go to 1.0 suddenly, while the song doesn't show any significant change.
  2. 00:13:577 (4) - Similar thing as above, jumps or antijumps don't fit calm parts.
  3. Because there are no rare sounds or changes as previously, the music stays constant, you should probably remove this NC as you are just giving player more HP than needed. For example on 00:18:577 (1) - it at least fitted the music, but here it feels kind of random.
  4. 00:41:244 (5) - Placement of this circle can be a bit confusing, because the distance looks like it might be 1/4, while it is 1/2. It would be maybe better if you stacked it with 00:41:411 (6) - so the player can see the approach circles better and he will recognize it really is 1/2. I suppose many players would judge by distance, because you didn't use such a low spacing on 1/2 pattern, but if you are using stacks, they will most likely check the approach circle and that will reduce the chance to mess up the accuracy here.
  5. 01:16:911 (2) - This is a bit similar as above. I recommend to stack this circle with 01:17:077 (3) - because the gaps between objects are constant and everything is 1/2, but this swaps to 1/1 while keeping the same distance. Making something special here could warn player a bit - You didn't use stacks for this part before, but you didn't even use the 1/1 notes. Now you are using them so making a stack would make a sensible difference. Or you can increase the spacing like you did on 01:22:411 (4,5,6) -
  6. Fade the spinner on the end the same way as it is on Hard. It is quite loud considering there is almost no music.


Lazer's Hard


  1. You cannot use the same slider velocity as Insane. It made the spread quite off. There should be something like 1.4 or 1.3, but not the same as insane. It doesn't make sense for easier difficulty to be the same difficult as harder one.
  2. 00:00:578 - Clap here doesn't really fit there because there is only piano in background.
  3. 00:01:911 (1) - Same as above.
  4. Well... your hitsounds are completely messed up. You just put clap on each new combo and you ignore the song. For example there is a snare on 00:02:577 (4) - but you put it rather on 00:02:577 (4) - because you want to keep consistency and put it all on NC, which doesn't work well in this map. You can completely remake the hitsounds by yourself or I can recommend you to use grumd's Hitsound Copier and take the hitsounds from Insane (when the whistle hitsound issue on his maps is fixed).


Normal


  1. Hitsound might be improved by hitsounding sliderticks, but that's up to you. Also in some parts it seems the hitsounds are a bit inconsistent with the song so you might use grumd's Hitsound Copier as I recommended on Hard.
  2. 00:03:244 (2) - You have to avoid inconsistent spacing in normal difficulty. This could be maybe tolerated, but why? It is 'normal' because it is for inexperienced players.
  3. 00:08:577 (5,1) - Just said it above, though 4.2x jump is quite extreme for normal difficulty. You barely see such a jump on insane. Form this pattern to such a shape which will make the spacing nice and consistent. You cannot really make jumps there.
  4. 00:31:244 (1) - I would call this 'ideal place for a combo break'. Jumps are hard for newbies, but lower spacing will confuse them the same way. Because there is only a little difference between regular 1/1 gap and 3/2 gap - to be simplier, it looks like 00:31:244 (1) - and 00:30:244 (4) - are the same far from 00:30:744 (5) - but time between 00:30:744 (5,1) - is 1/2 note longer. That means regular newbie would play this with the same speed as previous notes, thus he would click like it was 1/1, which would be 1/2 earlier and that would result in a miss. Even a low spacing can be dangerous, for that reason, keep it consistent throughout easy and normal difficulties.
  5. 00:40:577 (1) - This is the same as above. I know there is not enough place for regular spacing, but adjust it a bit so there is not that low distance while the time gap is so huge.
  6. If you want to make your difficulty perfect, check for other distance snap differences. AIMod can check for them if you tick it on the top of it, but it will ignore the distance on new combos.
  7. Same thing about the spinner as on insane.


Easy


  1. HP -1 or -2. It cannot be the same as normal, that's insensible and there mostly was approximately 2 difference between AR and HP, so one-diff inconsistency would look unreasonable
  2. Slider velocity should be lower or normal's should be higher to make a better spread, currently there are big gaps between the hard diffs, but the problem is also that Hard should have lower SV, because currently it's the same as Insane.
  3. I can still suggest you to use slidertick hitsound. Normal was quite okay, but in easy there are so many sounds missing so it sounds empty and thus you used it on places where it doesn't even fit. You can also copy the hitsound from insane as I recommended on other diffs to avoid the inconsistencies. Insane fits quite well apart from that whistle issue.
  4. Check for little spacing inconsistencies. There are not so many as on Normal, but there are still some little changes which might be confusing.
  5. Same thing about spinner as on insane and normal.


Conclusion: Unrankable
The map will need a lot of improvement, there were many unrankable things and you should take a look at them. Overally there is some mapping skill, some sensibility, but it needs to be smoothed a bit. Consistency is also very important and you should care more about not doing obvious mistakes, like 4.2x jump on normal or using hitsounds which you muted etc. If you need some help or didn't understand anything from the map, feel free to ask me in-game, if I am online, I'll be glad to help you out. :3
Lazer
Thanks Wafu!, changing the slider velocity does indeed make it play better, I'll start re-doing(copying :^>) the hitsounds once the MP3 has been updated

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47119
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Hey World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Hey World (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:井口裕香
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:Lazer's Hard
Source:ダンジョンに出会いを求めるのは間違っているだろうか?
Tags:opening anime is it wrong to try to pick up girls in a dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru Darou ka Nardoxyribonucleic Lazer
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:6.4
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Nitrousdragon
i think it looks awesome, dude, star 4 you :)
Lazer
Project dead? ;w;
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