Peachtrees wrote:no more placeholders!=w=Beginner:
00:21:886 (1,2) - the overlap is most likely fine, I'm just personally dislike overlaps like this so I feel obligated to suggest a different pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3023373 kinda intended to do that~
00:37:159 (2) - very nazi, but see if you can have the little bump exactly in the middle of the slider for perfect symmetry? fixed?
00:40:795 (2) - I think slightly de-curving this would look a tad bit nicer done
00:56:795 (4) - this feels very strong uwu not sure if try to cover this sound, I think the current rythm is fine too! .w.
01:08:432 (1) - wouldnt it be super neat to have the change in the sliders shape right here 01:08:795 (1) - because it'd go along with song I think >< well, just try new things maybe?
01:42:613 (4,1) - blanket /me runs fixed?
01:42:977 (1,1) - what's with the uneven spacing? is this intentional? fixed a bit
00:16:068 (1,2) - I'd personally feel like de-curving this would end up making this blanket look neater, though this is 100% fine as it is and my personal preference. The same obviously applies to similar blankets later on. again, I this is just MY prefence ~ fixed
00:39:341 (1,1) - kinda just me again, but I feel as though both of these slider could use a little more...uuh power i guess? I mean they're mapped to represent a very strong sound so I curve seems a bit blunt Q.Q
01:05:523 (1,2) - I'm guessing this wasn't supposed to be blanekting? fixed
00:22:977 (4,5,1) - nazi blanket ;c uuh not 100% if this was supposed to be blanketing though..being a nazi is hard ><
00:38:977 (4,1) - aaah the tiny overlap is driving me crazy >< me too, fixed
01:03:341 (2) - minor suggestion: why not give this a liiiitle downward curve to match the next slider and to go for a little 'swing' into the next slider yes
I'm not going to nazi out on every single blanket just to make this look longer ><
01:09:704 (10,1) - idk, but I feel as though this feels strong enough to justify a little jump, especially since it's the build-up so making this a bit more intense should be fine yes? fixed in another way
00:22:977 (7,1) - ^ keep this first~~
01:40:068 (1,2,3,4) - note sure if you want this to be a straight line, but it looks a little bit uneven? well, you're right
01:43:341 (4) - any particular reason for the 20% HSV? I just followed extra and fixed
01:45:886 (4,5) - I feel as though this should feel a bit more intense hmmm, I will reconsider it :3
00:47:341 (3,5) - nazi stack..I guess >< done
01:08:068 (7,8,2) - ^ /me runs done
01:10:613 (1,2) - I feel like this could bit a little more intense same as hyper
Tried testplaying but tensing my arm up causes pain so I couldn't ><. I don't think I can come up with anything for this one, sorrry!
I hope I could atleast give ONE proper suggestion..very neat set ;w;