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Hey Sora san^^ Mod here as requested from ハナヤマタ Modding Queue ~
Everything here are just suggestion~ Sorry for my bad English :<
|1|2|3|4|* 00:20:521 (20521|0,20843|1) - I suggest to delete them since you don't put any drums after this~ And leave the middle one for snare :3 It is more clear and easier imo.
* 00:32:779 (32779|3,33101|2,33424|1) - I suggest to delete them to follow your pattern (kick sound). Beside that the sound isn't that clear and too suddenly for NOVICE. ok then, and i also adjust the notes for row balance
* 00:53:908 (53908|1) - I suggest to split this LN here 00:54:230 - to follows the vocal
* 00:55:037 - I suggest to add a note here to follow your pattern after this (vocal) ok, and i adjust a note
* 01:06:650 - ^
* 01:09:553 (69553|1) - I suggest to delete this or change that note to LN until 01:10:037 - and delete 01:09:714 (69714|2,69876|1) - to follow the drum stream.
* 01:10:521 - I suggest to add a note here to follow your pattern after this (vocal)
* 01:15:682 - ^ same with 01:05:359 -
* 01:16:972 - ^
* 01:20:843 - ^
* 01:26:337 (86337|2) - I suggest to delete this and consistently follows vocal~
* 01:33:231 (93231|0) - I think this LN should start at 01:33:070 - i followed the loud sound there and i also cut the LN
* 01:34:521 (94521|3) - I suggest to split this LN on 01:34:683 - because the pitch changing there. Also just use a simple LN, not something like these 01:34:199 (94199|0,94521|3) - this is my example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3064414 ^^ no thanks, i just fllowed the main melody and i changed it to simple LN
* 01:35:812 (95812|2) - ^ ^
* 01:36:779 (96779|3) - i suggest to change into a note because all of them 01:36:779 (96779|3,96941|0,97102|2,97263|1,97424|0) - has different pitch~ ok, LN removed
* 01:38:392 (98392|1) - I think it should start at 01:38:231 - no, like before, main melody
* 01:39:682 (99682|2) - same with before^^ noI think that's all from us, hope could helpful :3* 00:17:214 - there's a beat here. i dont hear anything, if there is, it is not that loud
* 00:18:989 (18989|2) - I suggest to move this on 00:18:908 - (make it double) i hear no 1/4 stream here. The stream start from 00:19:069 - no, there is a sound there and i put the double there because it is the start of the stream
* 00:20:440 - there's a beat here. no, drums only
* 00:42:134 - why double in here? the other red line has single note. oh yeah, deleted
* 00:42:940 - you could double here to follow your pattern.
* 00:47:134 - ^ it has loud sound (snare)
* 00:52:134 - add a note here on 2, there's a beat there. Beside that let it flow :3 lol, right
* At the kiai time - I don't get it why the red line has double notes :3 Ex: 00:55:682 - this 00:56:972 - etc
* 01:25:601 (85601|2,85682|1,85763|0) - I suggest to delete them, i hear no sound for them ^^ no, i made it on purpose
* 01:34:521 (94521|1) - same as before, i suggest to split it. no
* 01:35:812 (95812|1) - ^ ^
* 01:39:682 (99682|3) - ^ ^
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Shiranai shiranai :'3