kemu feat. IA - Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story [OsuM

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schwarzvgrune
Hi ~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



00:20:440 - add a note
ill focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance

00:13:747 - http://puu.sh/hkD5W/020f165d01.jpg
00:21:489 - http://puu.sh/hkDd7/5fc5ca0865.jpg
00:21:972 - http://puu.sh/hkDdH/940958b8e7.jpg
00:22:456 - http://puu.sh/hkDe5/97ec1d8155.jpg

others looks fine.!!!


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
I LOVE THIS SONG PLEASE GET THIS RANKED... >_<b
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



00:20:440 - add a note no, i followed the drum there
ill focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance

00:13:747 - http://puu.sh/hkD5W/020f165d01.jpg no, jacks will break the flow
00:21:489 - http://puu.sh/hkDd7/5fc5ca0865.jpg no same flow from the previous so i change it that way
00:21:972 - http://puu.sh/hkDdH/940958b8e7.jpg ok but the last note i just it to 2 to avoid the same column with the next note
00:22:456 - http://puu.sh/hkDe5/97ec1d8155.jpg the same reason like the second one

others looks fine.!!!


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~ Thanks
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
I LOVE THIS SONG PLEASE GET THIS RANKED... >_<b
Thanks for the mod!!! :):):)
Kagu-chan
heyho - ill overview it later again :3 Hope i can full mod this time.
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Kagu-chan wrote:

heyho - ill overview it later again :3 Hope i can full mod this time.
Thanks Kagu-chan :3
x M e l
Hey :3 mod for req via queue

1|2|3|4

00:33:585 (33585|3) - move to 3
00:42:295 (42295|2) - move to 4
00:53:908 (53908|1) - what are u following with this ln?
00:40:682 - add note in 2
00:41:005 (41005|3) - delete
00:46:166 - add note
00:53:908 (53908|1) - same than NOVICE with this ln
01:44:521 (104521|2) - move to 4

That's all :) good luck
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hey :3 mod for req via queue

1|2|3|4

00:33:585 (33585|3) - move to 3
00:42:295 (42295|2) - move to 4
00:53:908 (53908|1) - what are u following with this ln? there will have a long rest here so i decided to put ln even if it is a vocal, but ill remove it when others also complain in this one
00:40:682 - add note in 2
00:41:005 (41005|3) - delete no its the bass
00:46:166 - add note
00:53:908 (53908|1) - same than NOVICE with this ln same reason
01:44:521 (104521|2) - move to 4

That's all :) good luck
Thanks for the mod! :):):)
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hiii, Sora o/
Request from PM

4K = |1|2|3|4|



NOVICE


Looks good =w=)b

ADVANCED


00:54:553 - add note because begin the turn of pitch
01:10:037 - add note for cymbal?
01:14:876 - ^
01:15:521 - ^
01:20:359 - ^

EXHAUST


00:16:972 (16972|3,17134|3,17295|3,17456|3,17618|3,17779|3) - hueee,, low balance, I suggest 00:17:295 (17295|3) - move to 1 for balance
00:20:359 (20359|3) - move to 1 for hand balance
01:24:876 - add note for cymbal
01:32:263 - ^
01:36:779 - add note for consistensy because 01:35:489 (95489|0,95489|3,95489|1) - and 01:34:199 (94199|3,94199|0,94199|1) -
01:42:263 (102263|0) - move to 4 for balance

Overall Nice map.
Good Luck =w=)b
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii, Sora o/
Request from PM

4K = |1|2|3|4|



NOVICE


Looks good =w=)b

ADVANCED


00:54:553 - add note because begin the turn of pitch
01:10:037 - add note for cymbal? no, its not that heavy, and not suited for 3 notes
01:14:876 - ^ ^
01:15:521 - ^
01:20:359 - ^ ^

EXHAUST


00:16:972 (16972|3,17134|3,17295|3,17456|3,17618|3,17779|3) - hueee,, low balance, I suggest 00:17:295 (17295|3) - move to 1 for balance lol, rihgt thanks for noticing those
00:20:359 (20359|3) - move to 1 for hand balance no thanks, balance for the flow will be broken cuz there will be many notes will coming for the left hand in the next part
01:24:876 - add note for cymbal
01:32:263 - ^
01:36:779 - add note for consistensy because 01:35:489 (95489|0,95489|3,95489|1) - and 01:34:199 (94199|3,94199|0,94199|1) - no i have a mistake there, the reason i put 3 notes there because of the cymbals, so fixed
01:42:263 (102263|0) - move to 4 for balance fixed

Overall Nice map. thanks
Good Luck =w=)b
Thanks for the mod! :):):)
Crono
Hi Sora~ o/ mod via queue

While you did ask for a NM mod I decided to help out with the intro.

Here are my BPM timings for the intro



No need for these on NOVICE but you should definitely add them to EXHAUST and perhaps ADVANCED. That decision is up to you though of course

00:00:630 00:01:009
--------------------------------
00:01:389 * 00:01:436-(on EXHAUST)* 00:02:148
-------------------------------------------------
00:02:514 * 00:02:847-(on EXHAUST)* 00:02:894
---------------------------------------------------------------
00:03:606 00:04:006 * 00:04:343 -(on EXHAUST)* 00:04:391
-------------------------------------------------------------------
00:04:727 00:05:087 00:05:471 00:05:856
-------------------------------------------------------------------
* 00:05:904 (on EXHAUST)* 00:06:721 00:07:106 00:07:538
-------------------------------------------------------------------
00:07:923 00:08:308 00:08:692 00:09:077 00:09:702 00:09:798 00:09:894 00:10:375
-------------------------------------------------------------------

Alternatively you can download this to test it out.
http://puu.sh/hnNRK/f8eef3c1cd.osu Mutilate it as you please :D

Good luck~
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
Thanks, but no thanks :3
i already had decided to not include the intro... it will be a pain for me to include the intro...
and some of your timings are still not timed well, some our late and some are too early.... Sorry :(
(no change)
lenpai
OK since a lot of experienced mappers checked this out ill do a very quick mod.
Placeholder
I can't select and copy notes since im doing this mod in a mac sorry :/

Testplay: a great improvement as compared to your first map (which isnt really bad but did needed a lot of improvements)
Has awkward minijakcs that are already good since there's no possible way to improve that
00:15:118 move 4 to 1 and for the note in the next snap, move it to 4
00:16:327 move 3 to 4 and for the next note, move it to 1
00:29:359 add a note
00:51:811 move to 1
01:02:779 do ([14][23][14])
01:13:101: ctrl H if you applied the suggestion above to avoid repetition
01:13:908 LN in 4 and 1 becomes a normal note. If applied, ctrl H 01:14:069 until 01:14:876 ignoring the note at 3 in 0:14:876
i guess that's it
00:33:263 add note to 4?
yup just that
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Lenfried- wrote:

OK since a lot of experienced mappers checked this out ill do a very quick mod.
Placeholder
I can't select and copy notes since im doing this mod in a mac sorry :/

Testplay: a great improvement as compared to your first map (which isnt really bad but did needed a lot of improvements) hahaha lol, im still studying how things works those time, and im suck at mapping
Has awkward minijakcs that are already good since there's no possible way to improve that
00:15:118 move 4 to 1 and for the note in the next snap, move it to 4 ill stick to the original
00:16:327 move 3 to 4 and for the next note, move it to 1 i just repattern that part
00:29:359 add a note no
00:51:811 move to 1 keep, maintaining the flow there
01:02:779 do ([14][23][14]) ok
01:13:101: ctrl H if you applied the suggestion above to avoid repetition
01:13:908 LN in 4 and 1 becomes a normal note. If applied, ctrl H 01:14:069 until 01:14:876 ignoring the note at 3 in 0:14:876 remain
i guess that's it
00:33:263 add note to 4? no, i will have trouble at exhaust diff, and maintaining the flow there
yup just that
Thanks for the mod!!! :):):)
Kagu-chan


Please Replay soon and point out what is rejected and why

1|2|3|4

NOVICE


00:34:230 - Add note
00:34:876 - ^
00:35:521 - ^
00:36:166 - ^
00:36:811 - ^
00:37:456 - ^
00:38:101 - ^
00:38:747 - ^
00:39:392 - ^
00:40:037 - ^
00:40:682 - ^
00:38:989 (38989|0) - if you use this note, then you should use it here 00:40:924 - too
00:41:327 - ^
00:41:972 - Add Note
00:42:618 - ^
00:43:101 - ^
00:51:166 - ^


00:40:924 - Add Note
00:51:247 - ^

Im not sure, but you should ask ringating for MP3 check ._. (refrain seems a bit... dont know how to say xD like you put a mp3 player / headphones into water - quality goes down xD )
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Kagu-chan wrote:



Please Replay soon and point out what is rejected and why

1|2|3|4

NOVICE


00:34:230 - Add note no, i just made it simple since its the easiest diff
00:34:876 - ^ ^
00:35:521 - ^ ^
00:36:166 - ^ ^
00:36:811 - ^ ^
00:37:456 - ^ ^
00:38:101 - ^ ^
00:38:747 - ^ ^
00:39:392 - ^ ^
00:40:037 - ^ ^
00:40:682 - ^ ^
00:38:989 (38989|0) - if you use this note, then you should use it here 00:40:924 - too i dont hear any sound
00:41:327 - ^ ^
00:41:972 - Add Note ^
00:42:618 - ^ ^
00:43:101 - ^
00:51:166 - ^


00:40:924 - Add Note i dont hear any sound either
00:51:247 - ^

Im not sure, but you should ask ringating for MP3 check ._. (refrain seems a bit... dont know how to say xD like you put a mp3 player / headphones into water - quality goes down xD lol ) it seems fine to me, i tried to listen on the other std version of this song, it seems like the same, but ill try asking
no reps means done.

Thanks for the mod!!! :):):)
Zevioz-
hallo req from my PM~

i will mod only 2 diff Adv and Exh
seriously diff novice good for me :3
Good Song soraaaa~

00:23:908 (23908|2) - move 2
00:24:069 (24069|0) - move 3
00:26:327 - add note to 3 (i think have a same sound maybe like a guitar)(?)
00:26:972 - ^to 2
00:29:553 - ^to 1
00:30:198 - ^to 3
00:30:843 - ^to 2
00:31:489 - ^to 1/2
00:32:134 - ^to 2
00:47:134 (47134|2,47295|1) - ctrl+g
00:47:618 (47618|1,47779|2) - ^ same (its just my opinion)
00:52:779 (52779|2) - move to 1
00:53:101 (53101|1) - move to 3
01:01:972 (61972|3) - ^3
01:17:940 (77940|1) - ^4
01:33:634 (93634|2,93715|1) - ctrl+g
01:35:086 (95086|2,95166|1) - ^
01:35:328 (95328|2) - move to 4
01:35:489 (95489|3) - move to 3
01:37:102 (97102|2,97183|1) - ctrl+g
00:33:908 (33908|3) - delete
01:13:182 (73182|2,73182|1) - not strong voice maybe just one note
01:22:134 (82134|1,82214|2) - ctrl+g
01:22:295 (82295|1) - move to 4
01:22:376 (82376|3) - ^to 2
01:25:037 - and 01:25:118 - no note (?) *my opinion , place add note ._.


be sure test my mod first before reject my mod :D

Goodluck :)
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Zevioz- wrote:

hallo req from my PM~

i will mod only 2 diff Adv and Exh
seriously diff novice good for me :3
Good Song soraaaa~

00:23:908 (23908|2) - move 2 i move it to 1, cuz it will be epty
00:24:069 (24069|0) - move 3
00:26:327 - add note to 3 (i think have a same sound maybe like a guitar)(?) no, its not that loud and i made it like that on purpose same with the next below
00:26:972 - ^to 2
00:29:553 - ^to 1
00:30:198 - ^to 3
00:30:843 - ^to 2
00:31:489 - ^to 1/2
00:32:134 - ^to 2
00:47:134 (47134|2,47295|1) - ctrl+g
00:47:618 (47618|1,47779|2) - ^ same (its just my opinion)
00:52:779 (52779|2) - move to 1 no its a good opportunity for jacks there
00:53:101 (53101|1) - move to 3 ^
01:01:972 (61972|3) - ^3 no, col 4 will be likeless empty
01:17:940 (77940|1) - ^4 will break the balance and the variation
01:33:634 (93634|2,93715|1) - ctrl+g i tried but the flow will be hard for the fingers, i just want to make it a bit relaxing
01:35:086 (95086|2,95166|1) - ^ ^
01:35:328 (95328|2) - move to 4 followed variation there
01:35:489 (95489|3) - move to 3 ^
01:37:102 (97102|2,97183|1) - ctrl+g ^
00:33:908 (33908|3) - delete no, cymbals
01:13:182 (73182|2,73182|1) - not strong voice maybe just one note no, for consistency, and im not following vocals
01:22:134 (82134|1,82214|2) - ctrl+g no, for pattern consistency
01:22:295 (82295|1) - move to 4
01:22:376 (82376|3) - ^to 2
01:25:037 - and 01:25:118 - no note (?) *my opinion , place add note ._. oh, right, also added in adv diff


be sure test my mod first before reject my mod :D

Goodluck :)
Thanks for the mod! :):):)
Zevioz-

-SoraGami- wrote:

Zevioz- wrote:

hallo req from my PM~

i will mod only 2 diff Adv and Exh
seriously diff novice good for me :3
Good Song soraaaa~

00:23:908 (23908|2) - move 2 i move it to 1, cuz it will be epty
00:24:069 (24069|0) - move 3
00:26:327 - add note to 3 (i think have a same sound maybe like a guitar)(?) no, its not that loud and i made it like that on purpose same with the next below
00:26:972 - ^to 2
00:29:553 - ^to 1
00:30:198 - ^to 3
00:30:843 - ^to 2
00:31:489 - ^to 1/2
00:32:134 - ^to 2
00:47:134 (47134|2,47295|1) - ctrl+g
00:47:618 (47618|1,47779|2) - ^ same (its just my opinion)
00:52:779 (52779|2) - move to 1 no its a good opportunity for jacks there
00:53:101 (53101|1) - move to 3 ^
01:01:972 (61972|3) - ^3 no, col 4 will be likeless empty
01:17:940 (77940|1) - ^4 will break the balance and the variation
01:33:634 (93634|2,93715|1) - ctrl+g i tried but the flow will be hard for the fingers, i just want to make it a bit relaxing
01:35:086 (95086|2,95166|1) - ^ ^
01:35:328 (95328|2) - move to 4 followed variation there
01:35:489 (95489|3) - move to 3 ^
01:37:102 (97102|2,97183|1) - ctrl+g ^
00:33:908 (33908|3) - delete no, cymbals
01:13:182 (73182|2,73182|1) - not strong voice maybe just one note no, for consistency, and im not following vocals
01:22:134 (82134|1,82214|2) - ctrl+g no, for pattern consistency
01:22:295 (82295|1) - move to 4
01:22:376 (82376|3) - ^to 2
01:25:037 - and 01:25:118 - no note (?) *my opinion , place add note ._. oh, right, also added in adv diff


be sure test my mod first before reject my mod :D

Goodluck :)
Thanks for the mod! :):):)
your wel :3
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
lol, for some reason i cant update the map, maybe bcuz of my internet, ill UPDATE it maybe tomorrow

UPDATED, lel
Ringating
from my queue:

your mp3 is 128 kbps, which is less than ideal. However, it doesn't sound particularly bad anywhere so it's probably fine as-is.

the bg, however, is full of visible compression artifacts. I used this version of the image to make you a new bg.
no kds
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
Thanks Ringating!!! :)
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