Hey~
[Overall]
It's a nice map, too much greens for a first map, haha
[Timing]
Only from this section 00:26:244:
Offset: 26 244 ; BPM: 70,00
Offset: 27 852 ; BPM: 60,00
Offset: 28 352 ; BPM: 50,00
Offset: 29 102 ; BPM: 42,00
Offset: 29 816 ; BPM: 38,00
Offset: 30 605 ; BPM: 38,00 <- you don't need this one
[Hard]
Played pretty well, major suggestions on hitsounds. (keep in mind suggestion!)
00:36:010 - Inherit this section.
00:57:497 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2, it sounds better.
01:31:308 (4) - Finish?
01:21:038 (6) - ^
01:21:512 (1,2,3,4) -
Instead of this:
Try this:
With finish hitsounds on end point of sliders.
01:21:512 - Kiai time starts here (It should start on the note).
01:31:624 - ^
02:17:758 - ^
02:19:022 - ^
02:27:238 - ^
03:17:796 - ^
02:19:654 - Kiai time end?
01:30:676 (2,3,4) - Finish + finish on end point of slider?
02:26:290 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:290 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:57:573 - Starting from here, all along the slow part, you should make a 2 beats rhythms with whistle.
Hitsounds-wise with whistles, here's my suggestions:
00:47:385 (5) - Whistle on start point.
00:48:649 (2) - ^
00:49:913 (3) - ^
00:51:177 (2) - ^
01:00:025 (1) - ^
01:01:763 (2) - Whistle on start and end.
01:03:817 (1,2) - Whistle.
01:04:449 (4,5) - ^
01:05:080 (7) - Whistle on start point.
01:05:712 (8) - ^
01:06:344 (1) - Whistle.
01:06:976 (3,4) - ^
01:07:608 (6) - ^
01:08:240 (8,9) - ^
01:08:872 (1) - ^
01:09:504 (3) - ^
01:11:874 (2,3) - ^
01:12:348 (4) - Whistle on end point.
01:12:822 (5) - Whistle.
01:13:296 (8) - ^
01:13:454 (9) - Whistle on start point.
Okay.....
I think you got it, just try these hitsounds, if you like it, do it with the rest of the song.
[Normal]
Pretty cool as well ^^
01:20:248 (8) - Finish on end point?
01:30:360 (2,3,4,5) - Finish?
02:15:862 (8) - ^
02:25:974 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:27:238 - Kiai time starting here.
02:45:565 (2) - Remove note.
03:17:796 - Kiai time starting here.
[Easy]
Hmmm... Nothing wrong~
I'll star after the fixes you'll do~
EDIT: Star~
[Overall]
It's a nice map, too much greens for a first map, haha
[Timing]
Only from this section 00:26:244:
Offset: 26 244 ; BPM: 70,00
Offset: 27 852 ; BPM: 60,00
Offset: 28 352 ; BPM: 50,00
Offset: 29 102 ; BPM: 42,00
Offset: 29 816 ; BPM: 38,00
Offset: 30 605 ; BPM: 38,00 <- you don't need this one
[Hard]
Played pretty well, major suggestions on hitsounds. (keep in mind suggestion!)
00:36:010 - Inherit this section.
00:57:497 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2, it sounds better.
01:31:308 (4) - Finish?
01:21:038 (6) - ^
01:21:512 (1,2,3,4) -
Instead of this:
Try this:
With finish hitsounds on end point of sliders.
01:21:512 - Kiai time starts here (It should start on the note).
01:31:624 - ^
02:17:758 - ^
02:19:022 - ^
02:27:238 - ^
03:17:796 - ^
02:19:654 - Kiai time end?
01:30:676 (2,3,4) - Finish + finish on end point of slider?
02:26:290 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:290 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:57:573 - Starting from here, all along the slow part, you should make a 2 beats rhythms with whistle.
Hitsounds-wise with whistles, here's my suggestions:
00:47:385 (5) - Whistle on start point.
00:48:649 (2) - ^
00:49:913 (3) - ^
00:51:177 (2) - ^
01:00:025 (1) - ^
01:01:763 (2) - Whistle on start and end.
01:03:817 (1,2) - Whistle.
01:04:449 (4,5) - ^
01:05:080 (7) - Whistle on start point.
01:05:712 (8) - ^
01:06:344 (1) - Whistle.
01:06:976 (3,4) - ^
01:07:608 (6) - ^
01:08:240 (8,9) - ^
01:08:872 (1) - ^
01:09:504 (3) - ^
01:11:874 (2,3) - ^
01:12:348 (4) - Whistle on end point.
01:12:822 (5) - Whistle.
01:13:296 (8) - ^
01:13:454 (9) - Whistle on start point.
Okay.....
I think you got it, just try these hitsounds, if you like it, do it with the rest of the song.
[Normal]
Pretty cool as well ^^
01:20:248 (8) - Finish on end point?
01:30:360 (2,3,4,5) - Finish?
02:15:862 (8) - ^
02:25:974 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:27:238 - Kiai time starting here.
02:45:565 (2) - Remove note.
03:17:796 - Kiai time starting here.
[Easy]
Hmmm... Nothing wrong~
I'll star after the fixes you'll do~
EDIT: Star~