Strawberry Jam - Peak of hope (Full Ver.)

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Noob Man
J'aime beaucoup ton Normal, il est équilibré et bien construit. Staaar. ~
Kazey
Yop,

Mod Infos :

~Suggestions~
~You should fix it~

[ General ]

- Met un preview point à toutes tes diffs.

[ Normal ]

- Efface les timing sections qui servent à rien :
00:27:923 à 00:30:626.

- 00:54:179(2) : Recule le d'un tick (00:54:021) sur le timeline.
- 00:54:337(x) : Ajoute un circle.
- 00:54:653(3) : 1 Grid up.
- 00:54:969(4) : ^
- 01:01:605(2) : Efface, et créer en un avec reverse ( End at 01:02:869 )
- 01:02:553(3) : Efface.
- 01:08:556(3) : 1 Grid left.
- 01:34:151(2) : Reduit le de 1/2.
- 01:35:415(x) : Ajoute un circle.
- 01:57:219(1 & 2) : Efface les, creer en un (1/4) à 01:57:219 et ajoute un reverse ( End at 01:58:483 )
- 02:15:862(8) : Efface, creer en un (1/2), et ajoute 2 reverse ( End at 02:16:810 )
- 02:42:089(8) : New combo.
- 02:45:249(9) : New combo.
- 02:45:407(2) : Efface.
- 03:15:429(1) : Recule le d'un tick ( 03:15:268 ) sur le timeline.
- 03:37:387(5) : Créer une timing section, et arrête le Kiai time là.

[ Hard ]

Mod IRC.

Voilà,
Bonne chance,

Star~
Topic Starter
Drafura

Noob Man wrote:

J'aime beaucoup ton Normal, il est équilibré et bien construit. Staaar. ~
Merci. :)

Slanox wrote:

[ General ]

- Met un preview point à toutes tes diffs. Fait

[ Normal ]

- Efface les timing sections qui servent à rien : Fait
00:27:923 à 00:30:626.

- 00:54:179(2) : Recule le d'un tick (00:54:021) sur le timeline. Fait
- 00:54:337(x) : Ajoute un circle. ^
- 00:54:653(3) : 1 Grid up. Remodelé pour éviter erreur de spacing du au changement sur la timeline
- 00:54:969(4) : ^ ^
- 01:01:605(2) : Efface, et créer en un avec reverse ( End at 01:02:869 ) Remodelé
- 01:02:553(3) : Efface. ^
- 01:08:556(3) : 1 Grid left. J'ai réaligné tout le passage
- 01:34:151(2) : Reduit le de 1/2.Fait
- 01:35:415(x) : Ajoute un circle. ^
- 01:57:219(1 & 2) : Efface les, creer en un (1/4) à 01:57:219 et ajoute un reverse ( End at 01:58:483 ) Remodelé
- 02:15:862(8) : Efface, creer en un (1/2), et ajoute 2 reverse ( End at 02:16:810 ) Celui là je l'aime bien j'attend de voir si ya d'autres gens du même avis pour le changer.
- 02:42:089(8) : New combo. Fait (rofl j'étais fatigué quand j'ai finis de mapper ça xD)
- 02:45:249(9) : New combo. ^
- 02:45:407(2) : Efface. Remodelé
- 03:15:429(1) : Recule le d'un tick ( 03:15:268 ) sur le timeline. ^
- 03:37:387(5) : Créer une timing section, et arrête le Kiai time là. Fait

[ Hard ]

Mod IRC.

Voilà,
Bonne chance,

Star~
Merci. :)
Melpomena
I liked Normal very much , and "jumps' in Hard, very nice map, so here you are - a star :D
Good luck with ranking! ^^
Inozuma
Hey~

[Overall]
It's a nice map, too much greens for a first map, haha :D

[Timing]
Only from this section 00:26:244:
Offset: 26 244 ; BPM: 70,00
Offset: 27 852 ; BPM: 60,00
Offset: 28 352 ; BPM: 50,00
Offset: 29 102 ; BPM: 42,00
Offset: 29 816 ; BPM: 38,00
Offset: 30 605 ; BPM: 38,00 <- you don't need this one

[Hard]
Played pretty well, major suggestions on hitsounds. (keep in mind suggestion!)
00:36:010 - Inherit this section.
00:57:497 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2, it sounds better.
01:31:308 (4) - Finish?
01:21:038 (6) - ^
01:21:512 (1,2,3,4) -
Instead of this:


Try this:

With finish hitsounds on end point of sliders.
01:21:512 - Kiai time starts here (It should start on the note).
01:31:624 - ^
02:17:758 - ^
02:19:022 - ^
02:27:238 - ^
03:17:796 - ^

02:19:654 - Kiai time end?

01:30:676 (2,3,4) - Finish + finish on end point of slider?
02:26:290 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:290 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:57:573 - Starting from here, all along the slow part, you should make a 2 beats rhythms with whistle.

Hitsounds-wise with whistles, here's my suggestions:
00:47:385 (5) - Whistle on start point.
00:48:649 (2) - ^
00:49:913 (3) - ^
00:51:177 (2) - ^
01:00:025 (1) - ^
01:01:763 (2) - Whistle on start and end.
01:03:817 (1,2) - Whistle.
01:04:449 (4,5) - ^
01:05:080 (7) - Whistle on start point.
01:05:712 (8) - ^
01:06:344 (1) - Whistle.
01:06:976 (3,4) - ^
01:07:608 (6) - ^
01:08:240 (8,9) - ^
01:08:872 (1) - ^
01:09:504 (3) - ^
01:11:874 (2,3) - ^
01:12:348 (4) - Whistle on end point.
01:12:822 (5) - Whistle.
01:13:296 (8) - ^
01:13:454 (9) - Whistle on start point.
Okay.....
I think you got it, just try these hitsounds, if you like it, do it with the rest of the song.

[Normal]
Pretty cool as well ^^
01:20:248 (8) - Finish on end point?
01:30:360 (2,3,4,5) - Finish?
02:15:862 (8) - ^
02:25:974 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:27:238 - Kiai time starting here.
02:45:565 (2) - Remove note.
03:17:796 - Kiai time starting here.

[Easy]
Hmmm... Nothing wrong~


I'll star after the fixes you'll do~
EDIT: Star~
Mystearica
Hey, it's from Spiral!

Cool I love this anime :3

@ Inozuma: That's a beasty post ._.
Topic Starter
Drafura

Melpomena wrote:

I liked Normal very much , and "jumps' in Hard, very nice map, so here you are - a star :D
Good luck with ranking! ^^
Thank you.

Inozuma wrote:

Hey~

[Overall]
It's a nice map, too much greens for a first map, haha :D

[Timing]
Only from this section 00:26:244:
Offset: 26 244 ; BPM: 70,00
Offset: 27 852 ; BPM: 60,00
Offset: 28 352 ; BPM: 50,00
Offset: 29 102 ; BPM: 42,00
Offset: 29 816 ; BPM: 38,00
Offset: 30 605 ; BPM: 38,00 <- you don't need this one

Timing fixed on all diff

[Hard]
Played pretty well, major suggestions on hitsounds. (keep in mind suggestion!)
00:36:010 - Inherit this section. Fixed on all diff
00:57:497 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2, it sounds better. oh yeah added a clap too and a soft finish in the next spinner
01:31:308 (4) - Finish? added
01:21:038 (6) - ^ added
01:21:512 (1,2,3,4) - Remapped
Instead of this:


Try this:

With finish hitsounds on end point of sliders.
01:21:512 - Kiai time starts here (It should start on the note). Fixed
01:31:624 - ^ ^
02:17:758 - ^ ^
02:19:022 - ^ ^
02:27:238 - ^ ^
03:17:796 - ^ ^

02:19:654 - Kiai time end? Oo thanks yes i wanted to put one here but i forgot

01:30:676 (2,3,4) - Finish + finish on end point of slider? I added on the (2) only cuz imo Finishes are very loud when used quickly
02:26:290 (1,2,3) - ^ same on (1) and (3)
02:26:290 (1) - Remove new combo. done
02:57:573 - Starting from here, all along the slow part, you should make a 2 beats rhythms with whistle. done first 1 white over 2 then each white when the drums comes harder <- wth ! is this english ? hmm tell me french version if you don't get it xD

Hitsounds-wise with whistles, here's my suggestions:
00:47:385 (5) - Whistle on start point.
00:48:649 (2) - ^
00:49:913 (3) - ^
00:51:177 (2) - ^
01:00:025 (1) - ^
01:01:763 (2) - Whistle on start and end.
01:03:817 (1,2) - Whistle.
01:04:449 (4,5) - ^
01:05:080 (7) - Whistle on start point.
01:05:712 (8) - ^
01:06:344 (1) - Whistle.
01:06:976 (3,4) - ^
01:07:608 (6) - ^
01:08:240 (8,9) - ^
01:08:872 (1) - ^
01:09:504 (3) - ^
01:11:874 (2,3) - ^
01:12:348 (4) - Whistle on end point.
01:12:822 (5) - Whistle.
01:13:296 (8) - ^
01:13:454 (9) - Whistle on start point.
Okay.....
I think you got it, just try these hitsounds, if you like it, do it with the rest of the song.

used Whistle on "slow" parts.

[Normal]
Pretty cool as well ^^
01:20:248 (8) - Finish on end point? Yep
01:30:360 (2,3,4,5) - Finish? Same as in [hard]
02:15:862 (8) - ^ Yep
02:25:974 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Same as in [hard]
02:27:238 - Kiai time starting here. Great hesitation but done
02:45:565 (2) - Remove note. done
03:17:796 - Kiai time starting here. Great hesitation but done

[Easy]
Hmmm... Nothing wrong~


I'll star after the fixes you'll do~
Merci Ino :)

Mystearica wrote:

Hey, it's from Spiral!

Cool I love this anime :3

@ Inozuma: That's a beasty post ._.
oh thanks for star btw i love the maps you made for Mizuki Nana so it's a great honor for me :3
[Myrh]
Super, beau travaille continue comme ça ;) ~Star
Scar

Slanox wrote:

[ Normal ]
- 02:15:862(8) : Efface, creer en un (1/2), et ajoute 2 reverse ( End at 02:16:810 )
C'est pas mapper sur le vocal, donc le 1/4 va parfaitement

J'ai voulu mod mais finalement j'ai plus envie de dormir qu'autre chose, et si je l'aurais pas fait tout de suite j'aurais oublié de la regarder plus tard >.<

donc, j'ai juste une suggestion à deux balle à proposer °.°

[Hard]

03:15:271 (x) - Peut être rajouté une note ?


Elle est plutôt cool pour une première map :D
Topic Starter
Drafura

[Myrh] wrote:

Super, beau travaille continue comme ça ;) ~Star
Merci [Myrh].

scar1410 wrote:

[Hard]

03:15:271 (x) - Peut être rajouté une note ? Celle la j'ai beaucoup hésité car moi même ça m'arrive de me planter dessus. Mais au final je me suis conforté dans l'idée qu'il valait mieux suivre la musique (stepmania mapper inside xD). Donc je ne pense pas la rajouter sauf si un BaT me dit que sans ça la map ne sera jamais rankée évidemment ^^"

Elle est plutôt cool pour une première map :DMerci ça me motive beaucoup toutes vos bonnes impressions pour ma seconde map :)
Et merci aussi pour la star :3
Blazevoir
I just finished modding this map, and this is all I have to say:

There wasn't anything worth fixing in my opinion, and I also loved the creative use of hitsounds. My only complaint is that you have two .osb files in the song folder (and I don't see any use of storyboarding in any of the difficulties). Delete both and then do a full submission.

You deserve both a normal star AND a kudosu star~
Topic Starter
Drafura
Thanks you Blazevoir, I have deleted the osb (idk why they was here i don't even try to make a sb on this map *.*). As I said i'm a new beatmapper idk if your post deserve kudosu so mp me if so.
Krisom
Modding as requested

[General]
Kiai Time is not the same during all the difficulties!! Make them the same!!

[Easy]
You have some minor mistakes during all the map...
Compare these spacings. They are not even.
This is a really minor mistake, and it's not mandatory for you to fix it, but at least watch out when this happens during the same combo (By example: 00:17:445 (5) )
01:22:147 (Kiai) - This fountain is not needed imo.
01:23:411 (Kiai) - ^
01:39:842 (Slidertick) - Unclap this slidertick.
01:44:898 (Slidertick) - Unclap this slidertick.

[Normal]
01:22:147 (Kiai) - This fountain is not needed imo.
01:23:411 (Kiai) - ^
02:17:682 (Kiai) - ^
02:18:946 (Kiai) - ^
02:59:469 (3) - Avoid using whistle+finish on the same note. I'd leave the finish here.
03:01:996 (4) - ^
03:04:524 (4) - ^
03:07:055 (4) - ^
...and so on.
Be sure to check spacing as on Easy, but here it's not that noticeable, so don't worry that much.

[Hard]
Well, great! Just fix some Kiai times here and we're good to go.

I'm really suprised by the fact that this is your first map and your hitsounds are like this. You should ask for more mods before a BAT checks this though, Its really good, but I could have missed lots of mistakes.

Star! You've earned it! I'll ask some other modders to check this.
Topic Starter
Drafura

Krisom wrote:

Modding as requested

[General]
Kiai Time is not the same during all the difficulties!! Make them the same!!

[Easy]
You have some minor mistakes during all the map...
Compare these spacings. They are not even.
This is a really minor mistake, and it's not mandatory for you to fix it, but at least watch out when this happens during the same combo (By example: 00:17:445 (5) ) Fixed as i can, i think i have found them all i have moved more than half of objects
01:22:147 (Kiai) - This fountain is not needed imo. Not the first time this is said so i removed
01:23:411 (Kiai) - ^ ^
01:39:842 (Slidertick) - Unclap this slidertick. Fixed
01:44:898 (Slidertick) - Unclap this slidertick. ^

[Normal]
01:22:147 (Kiai) - This fountain is not needed imo. As in easy
01:23:411 (Kiai) - ^ ^
02:17:682 (Kiai) - ^ ^
02:18:946 (Kiai) - ^ ^
02:59:469 (3) - Avoid using whistle+finish on the same note. I'd leave the finish here. finish removed
03:01:996 (4) - ^ ^
03:04:524 (4) - ^ ^
03:07:055 (4) - ^ whistle removed sounds a little better imo
...and so on.
Be sure to check spacing as on Easy, but here it's not that noticeable, so don't worry that much. I found some. I'll recheck it latter more patiently.

[Hard]
Well, great! Just fix some Kiai times here and we're good to go. Kiai fixed

I'm really suprised by the fact that this is your first map and your hitsounds are like this. You should ask for more mods before a BAT checks this though, Its really good, but I could have missed lots of mistakes.

Star! You've earned it! I'll ask some other modders to check this.
Thank you a lot for modding, explanations of yesterday, star and support :)
roflninja
Hi,
please resnap all nots in every dificulty (timing>resnap all notes)

other than than, i found nothing to note on, nice map ;)
Topic Starter
Drafura

roflninja wrote:

Hi,
please resnap all nots in every dificulty (timing>resnap all notes) done

other than than, i found nothing to note on, nice map ;)
Thank you.
deepsea
Overall map is good to me but still shaky about timing so star atm :3
Topic Starter
Drafura

deepsea wrote:

Overall map is good to me but still shaky about timing so star atm :3
Thanks for starring deepsea. I understand that the timing is not confortable yet. I will be glad if someone can help me to fix it.
Noobita
Star, good map ;)
EvianBubble
Not pro timing help :o (using easy)

  1. Change first offset to 7225
  2. Change second offset to 26252 (unsure about this one, but do you really need it? All you have is one note and a break ...)
  3. Change third offset to 34775


I think that's it ... remember this is NOT PRO timing help XD Hope it helps though
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