Hello there, from my M4M queue
This is a very catchy song~
from a very lewd anime series lol Anyways let's get started, shall we..?
Easy- You're missing a lot of the quarter beats, which I'm not sure if that was intentional. Consider adding notes at the following time stamps:
Put inside a box so this post doesn't become gigantic- - 00:08:183*
- 00:09:702*
- 00:14:259
- 00:17:297
- 00:20:335
- 00:26:411
- 00:27:930
- 00:29:449
- 00:30:968
- 00:32:486*
- 00:34:005*
The ones marked with a red asterisk (*) are optional notes you can place; the pattern here works fine without them regardless
- Consider replacing the notes at 00:41:980(1) and 00:42:740(2) with 1/1 sliders
- Something like this perhaps?
SPOILERYou don't need to use these exact sliders; they're just placeholders for an idea you can use
- Some combo fixes:
Put inside a box so this post doesn't become gigantic- - begin a new combo at 00:10:081(3) ONLY if you decide to add the two notes that are marked with a blue asterisk (*)
- begin a new combo at 00:13:119(2) rather than at 00:12:360(1)
- begin a new combo at 00:19:195(1) rather than at 00:20:714(1)
- begin a new combo at 00:22:233(3) rather than at 00:23:752(1)
[list:1337]- begin a new combo at 00:25:271(2) ONLY if you did the above
- new combo at 00:28:309(4) instead of at 00:29:828(1)
- new combo at 00:31:347(2) instead of at 00:29:828(1)
- new combo at 00:34:385(4)
ONLY if you added the notes marked with a
red asterisk (*)- new combo at 00:37:423(2) instead of at 00:35:714(1)
- new combo at 00:40:461(3) instead of at 00:41:980(1)
- new combo at 00:43:499(3)
- new combo at 00:52:613(4) instead of at 00:52:993(1)
- new combo at 01:22:993(2) instead of at 01:22:613(1)
- if you're worried about the combo being too big (since it's 5 notes), replace the notes at 01:21:094(2,3) with a 1/1 slider
- Some blanketing issues, such as the slider at 01:15:778(1) not properly blanketing the note at 01:16:537(2). There are quite a few more of these throughout the map and on the other difficulties as well.
Normal- Similarly to Easy, you need to fix your combos here. Listen to some of the other modders for suggestions on where to place your combos. I've already provided you with some ideas on how you can fix your combos in the Easy section of my mod, but you're on your own for Normal/Hyper.
- A lot of distance snapping issues on this difficulty. Fix them
- Your pattern from 00:00:968(1) to 00:03:436(5) is rather confusing
- Perhaps you can try a pattern like this? Try it out for yourself and see if you like it
- Your slider at 00:04:005(1) is too long. The beat ends on 00:04:290, not 00:04:385
- Consider adding notes and sliders at the following time stamps:
- - Note at 00:43:309. Alternatively, you can make 00:42:930(6) a 1/1 slider. (I recommend you do the slider over the extra note)
- A 1/2 slider at 00:59:638
- Note at 01:20:145
- Delete the note at 00:08:562(5) and move the slider from 00:08:752(1) in its place.
- Move the slider at 00:09:512(2) to 00:09:322
- Consider replacing the 1/1 sliders at 00:25:651(4), at 00:26:411(5), and at 00:27:170(6) with repeat 1/2 sliders, perhaps? I feel that this might flow better than your current setup
- Try out this pattern for yourself and see if you like it
- You can do the same thing above to the sliders at 00:29:069(3, 4) if you wish, but it's fine as it currently is as well
- Consider deleting the slider at 00:46:537(3) and stretch the spinner so that it starts at 00:46:537 to 00:48:056
Hyper- Just like in Easy and Normal, your need to fix your combos! Listen to the other modders suggestions. I've already provided you with some ideas on how you can fix your combos in the Easy section of my mod, but you're on your own for Normal/Hyper.
- Consider adding/replacing/adjusting notes and sliders at the following time stamps:
Put inside a box so this post doesn't become gigantic- - Add a note at 00:08:752. Alternatively, you can delete 00:08:847(4, 5) and put in a repeat 1/4 slider at 00:08:752
- Replace the notes at 00:15:398(5, 6) with 1/2 sliders
- Replace the note at 00:18:436(1) with a 1/2 slider
- Replace the note at 00:19:955(5) with a 1/2 slider
- Make 00:20:904(3) a repeat slider
- Replace the note at 00:22:613(1) with a 1/2 slider
- Replace the note at 01:00:398(1) with a 1/1 slider
- Add a note at 01:15:588
- Add a note at 01:25:271
- Overlap at 00:14:069(1, 2). You can fix this by moving 00:14:449(2) from its current position (x296, y240) to (x298, y240)
- Overlap at 00:34:955(5, 8). You can fix this by moving 00:35:335(6, 7, 8) three units to the left
- Overlap at 00:39:132(4, 5, 6, 7). You can fix this by moving (5) two units to the left; (6) two units to the left + one unit down; and (7) five units to the left + three units down
- Not really a big deal, but you can have a little more fun with the sliders at 00:57:170(6, 7, 1)!
- Maybe you can reverse (Ctrl + G) the (7) slider to achieve something like this?
- Or maybe you can play around with the slider velocities to achieve something like this?
Well, that's about it. Hope this helps you out!
Also, since I modded your map first, I'm expecting a mod from you on my map in the future