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BlackY - FLOWER -SPRING Long VER.- [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Kawawa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 8월 10일 목요일 at 오전 11:39:28

Artist: BlackY
Title: FLOWER -SPRING Long VER.-
Source: REFLEC BEAT
Tags: DJ YOSHITAKA Piano Marathon TRANCE CORE jubeat knit APPEND BeatStream
BPM: 170
Filesize: 10279kb
Play Time: 06:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. As Flowers Bloom And Fall - 7Key (6.3 stars, 6371 notes)
Download: BlackY - FLOWER -SPRING Long VER.-
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Chart
I thought of a chart that changed visually according to the feel of the title and theme.
so I wanted to express through chart. how It is bloom and fall.

First of all. I seperated the main part as 5 phase!
Each patterning changes, and add some notes on the specfic part.
Normally they have an increasingly difficult structure.

1 Phase :: 01:53:157 -
Simple BMS Patterning. focused on the main melody than drums.
That's how It goes.

2 Phase :: 03:23:510 -
Added the shorter LN on the each jump part.
It's a bit harder, and looks more highlight than 1 phase.

3 Phase :: 03:23:510 -
Half-part became the LNs.
It invokes a lot of changes as visual effect.
but It's relatively easy to play. because It's based on the stream and stair.

4 Phase :: 04:56:686 -
Anchor density and structure is almost same with phase 3.
However, some of them maintaining the same stair. and trill.
It has a different structure, and is somewhat difficult.

5-1 Phase :: 05:19:274 -
Fully done LNs. It is not so difficult to handle than thinking, but I might It will make down your accuracy.
Anyway This visual effect shows the Song's climax.

5-2 Phase :: 05:31:098 -
no more LNs here. Re-do from 1 Phase.

hope you enjoy!
Lirai
Akasha-


Topic Starter
Kawawa
hey, I will not buy flower!
Akasha-
Ayachi-

Kuo Kyoka wrote:




Kawawa wrote:

hey, I will not buy flower!
Mines free
Wonki
황금ㅎ사과
Reba
Remuring
Chex
Topic Starter
Kawawa
HA.....
Reba
어머! 꽃밭이 너무 이쁘잖아?
Topic Starter
Kawawa

- R e b a - wrote:

어머! 꽃밭이 너무 이쁘잖아?
너의 꽃ㅜ도 비틀어 제껴 버리겠어!
DeletedUser_259972

Impregnate my seeds
Garalulu
Reba

Kawawa wrote:

- R e b a - wrote:

어머! 꽃밭이 너무 이쁘잖아?
너의 꽃ㅜ도 비틀어 제껴 버리겠어!
아흥 예 제발요 <3
Sandalphon

I'm done with flower meme
Critical_Star

SanadaYukimura wrote:


I'm done with flower meme
Ichigaki

Critical_Star wrote:

SanadaYukimura wrote:


I'm done with flower meme
Aruel
Hi, can I buy some flowers?
Reba

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Hi, can I buy some flowers?
Sure, 10 ddal ddal for each
Topic Starter
Kawawa
OMG! I will throw away all the flower.
Reba
What a mean boy↗♂♥
You need some punishment boy↗♂♥

Topic Starter
Kawawa

- R e b a - wrote:

What a mean boy↗♂♥
You need some punishment boy↗♂♥
Fuck you!
Reba
히야아앗!
Akasha-

- R e b a - wrote:

What a mean boy↗♂♥
You need some punishment boy↗♂♥

Aruel

- R e b a - wrote:

What a mean boy↗♂♥
You need some punishment boy↗♂♥

Remuring
Hi pony boy


01:58:539 - 여기 노트 추가하셔도 되겠네요
01:58:715 - ^ 여기도 하시면 되겟네요
02:04:186 - 여기도 노트하나 추가하세요
02:04:363 - 여기도 추가
02:09:833 - 여기도 추가하세요
02:10:010 - 여기도 추가
이 위는 편하신대로 하시면됩니다. 굳이 추가 안해도 어색한게 없으니

02:38:333 - 5콜에 추가 하셔도될거같네요 탕!하는 소리가 좀 크니

03:48:657 - 여기서 뿌아아앙 소리가 나요 그래서 노트 이렇게 추가하면 괜찮을거 같네요 클릭하세요
03:51:480 - 여기도 마찬가지로 클릭하세요
03:54:304 - ^ 클릭하세요

수고하셨습니다.
Niks
뭔 포스트 1페이지가 똥포스트들 뿐입니까..
모딩 스타트

확실한 문제점이아니라 다 애매한것들이네요... 혹시모르니 almost 적어봅니다



  • halo forcing mod request :D
  1. Offset :: 어예o/

    1ㅣ2ㅣ3ㅣ4ㅣ5ㅣ6ㅣ7
  2. 키아이타임 마지막꺼 스냅안맞아요

  3. 02:03:745 - 4번라인에 노트가 한개 더 있으면 좋겠네요 (02:04:010 - 요놈때문에 더 필요하다 생각합니다)

  4. 02:50:774 (170774|4,170863|6,172186|6,172274|4) - 얘들은 서로 5번라인이 7번 7번라인이 5번으로가는게 더 리듬감있게 쳐지는데...
    안바꾸시는 이유라도?

  5. 02:59:951 (179951|0) - 이거 02:59:863 - 여기두는게 어때요 저는 이게 맘에드는데 그리고 03:00:039 (180039|6) - 이거 지우고..
    드럼소리가 점점커지는것도 거의 들리지도않으니 3개로 안늘려도 되지않을까 싶네요

  6. 03:00:921 - 여기서부터 들리는 1스냅마다 나오는 드럼소리... 2개는 좀 약하지않을까요? 그냥 전부 3개 때려박고싶은데

  7. 03:02:157 - 하이햇+피아노 = 2놋이였는데 여기서는 노트가 한개네요, 패턴 망가질까봐?
    03:02:863 - ^
    03:05:333 - ^
    03:08:157 - ^

  8. 03:08:863 - 여기는 하이햇o 피아노x 인데 노트가 2개네요, 저가 잘못해석하고있는걸지도..?
    아니면 뒤에 낮은음으로 깔리는 피아노음?
    03:09:568 - ^
    03:15:215 - ^


    03:27:215 - ^ 이부분은 뒤에 낮은음으로 깔리는 피아노음이 있는데 노트가 한개네요
    03:30:039 - ^
    03:31:451 - ^
    03:32:863 - ^
    03:35:686 - ^
    03:38:510 - ^

  9. 03:11:745 (191745|2,191804|1) - 여기 6스냅으로 오던 피아노소리가 약간 늦게들리는거같은데..... 기분탓인가

  10. 03:13:451 - 여기는 계속 2개 아니면 1개로 이어져왔는데 왜 3개가됐나요? 혹시 뒤에 낮은음으로 깔리는 피아노음?

  11. 03:15:921 - 노트한개 추가? 100%로 눈으로 봐도 쳐봐도 약간 위화감이 있는거같은데

  12. 03:24:833 - 03:25:098 - 노트추가 어떤가요 03:24:921 (204921|6) - 위치를 옮겨본다던가..

  13. 03:00:215 - 이곳은 피아노음이 들어가있는데 04:33:392 - 이곳은 없네요

  14. 04:39:657 - 노트한개 추가?

  15. 04:47:686 (287686|2) - 여기에는 롱노트로 표현할만한 음이 없는데요? 아.. 낮게깔리는 음이있구나
잡을건없고 의문만 남기고갑니다


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qodtjr
모딩 간단하게 하러 왔습니다.

moding
01:34:274 (94274|4,94274|2,94363|1,94363|5,94451|0,94451|6,94539|2,94539|4,94627|1,94627|5) - 여기는 이밑에있는거와 같이해주고 이런패턴은 01:35:686 (95686|1,95686|5,95774|2,95774|4,95774|3,95863|0,95863|6,95951|5,95951|1,96039|3,96039|4,96039|2) - 여기부터 시작하는게 좋은거같네요

02:27:039 - 여기부터는 좀더다른느낌으로 롱노트를 오르간? 피아노? 긴음으로들리는거로 바꿔서하는건 어떨까요

03:40:627 (220627|1,220627|5,220804|6,220804|0,220804|3,220892|1,220892|5,220980|6,220980|0,221157|5,221157|1,221157|3,221333|1,221333|5,221421|0,221421|6,221510|3,221510|1,221510|5) - 이부분 약간 손꼬일거같은데 2,6콜에있는걸 가운데쪽으로당겨서 3,5콜은 어떨까요
정말 언제봐도 잡을게 별로없네요
짱짱맵!
Comet_M
모딩 배달입니닷 ;)

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

As Flowers Bloom And Fall


- 00:05:863 (5863|6), 00:17:157 (17157|6) 및 유사한 부분 : 이 두 부분에는 피아노 음이 없는데 노트를 두신 것 같아요.
- 00:19:980 ~ 00:20:686 : http://puu.sh/wEyIo/aac47f7bda.png // 드럼은 똑같이 1번에 두었습니다.
- 00:21:392 ~ 00:22:804 : http://puu.sh/wEyMm/6708323ff1.png // Sub bass 부분이 00:22:098 까지길래 앞 패턴 그대로 유지했고, 뒷 부분도 조금 바꿔 봤습니다.
- 00:57:039 (57039|4) : 주 멜로디 부분 (1옥타브 윗부분)에는 비어 있습니다.
- 01:47:510 ~ 01:48:127 : https://puu.sh/wEyVu/82a49d1beb.png // 조금 변화를 줘 봤어요.
- 01:56:686 (116686|4,116774|3) : 한 칸씩 오른쪽으로 이동 // 스페이스바가 덜 바쁘고, 01:56:951 (116951|6,116951|5,116951|3) 랑도 덜 충돌할 것 같아요.
- 01:58:098 ~ 01:58:804 : http://puu.sh/wEyYc/091ca9e7f0.png // 노트 간격을 붙였고, 윗부분도 멜로디에 맞춰서 살짝 바꿔 봤습니다.
- 02:01:804 ~ 02:02:863 : http://puu.sh/wEz3e/1f6ea7eb29.png // 앞부분 왼손이 1-2-3-2-1-2-3 이런 형태길래 살짝 변화를 줘 봤고, 윗 부분도 원래 의도하신 노트 배치나 흐름과 맞게 살짝 변화를 줘 봤습니다.
- 02:04:274 : 2, 3, 5, 6으로 이동 // 02:04:098 → 02:04:274 → 02:04:451 이렇게 가면서 움츠러들었다가 확 만개하는 이펙트를 주려고...?
- 02:09:921 : 2, 3, 5, 6으로 이동 // ^^^
- 03:40:274 : 2, 4, 6으로 이동
- 03:57:039 : 박수 소리가 있네요.
- 05:02:157 : 2, 3, 5, 6으로 이동
- 05:07:274 ~ 05:07:980 : https://puu.sh/wEzoC/03b06bad10.png


나머지는 괜찮아 보여요!

Good Luck with Your Beatmap!
Topic Starter
Kawawa

R e m u r i n g wrote:

Hi pony boy NO


01:58:539 - 여기 노트 추가하셔도 되겠네요
01:58:715 - ^ 여기도 하시면 되겟네요
02:04:186 - 여기도 노트하나 추가하세요
02:04:363 - 여기도 추가
02:09:833 - 여기도 추가하세요
02:10:010 - 여기도 추가
이 위는 편하신대로 하시면됩니다. 굳이 추가 안해도 어색한게 없으니
이 메인 멜로디 파트의 단계는 총 5부분으로 구분되는데 여기에서는 사용하지 않았음을 의도 하였습니다! 의견 고맙소

02:38:333 - 5콜에 추가 하셔도될거같네요 탕!하는 소리가 좀 크니
고려!

03:48:657 - 여기서 뿌아아앙 소리가 나요 그래서 노트 이렇게 추가하면 괜찮을거 같네요 클릭하세요
03:51:480 - 여기도 마찬가지로 클릭하세요
03:54:304 - ^ 클릭하세요
거기서 부터 뿌아아앙으로 해당하는건 맞지만, 아래 1/8 딜레이을 고려하여 1/2로 완화 했또, 고려해보겠다.

수고하셨습니다. 고맙오
피드백 감사합니다!
Topic Starter
Kawawa

Niks wrote:

뭔 포스트 1페이지가 똥포스트들 뿐입니까..
모딩 스타트

확실한 문제점이아니라 다 애매한것들이네요... 혹시모르니 almost 적어봅니다



  • halo forcing mod request :D halo and balo :x
  1. Offset :: 어예o/

    1ㅣ2ㅣ3ㅣ4ㅣ5ㅣ6ㅣ7
  2. 키아이타임 마지막꺼 스냅안맞아요 수정 완료

  3. 02:03:745 - 4번라인에 노트가 한개 더 있으면 좋겠네요 (02:04:010 - 요놈때문에 더 필요하다 생각합니다)
    확실한 의도였으나, 언급을 통해 추가하는게 더 나을듯 해서 추가 완료.
  4. 02:50:774 (170774|4,170863|6,172186|6,172274|4) - 얘들은 서로 5번라인이 7번 7번라인이 5번으로가는게 더 리듬감있게 쳐지는데...
    안바꾸시는 이유라도? 윗부분과 어느정도의 일관성을 유지한 의도 였으나, 전체적으로 구조를 변경해봤습니다. 피드백 땡스!

  5. 02:59:951 (179951|0) - 이거 02:59:863 - 여기두는게 어때요 저는 이게 맘에드는데 그리고 03:00:039 (180039|6) - 이거 지우고..
    드럼소리가 점점커지는것도 거의 들리지도않으니 3개로 안늘려도 되지않을까 싶네요
    드럼의 느낌이 점점 강해지지 않는 것을 고려하여, 3개 부분은 2개로 삭감 완료.

  6. 03:00:921 - 여기서부터 들리는 1스냅마다 나오는 드럼소리... 2개는 좀 약하지않을까요? 그냥 전부 3개 때려박고싶은데
    피아노를 기반으로한 노트양을 조절 했으며, 메인, 서브 피아노에 따라 2놋 및 1놋 스트림을 변경해서 강약을 조절했습니다. 고려

  7. 03:02:157 - 하이햇+피아노 = 2놋이였는데 여기서는 노트가 한개네요, 패턴 망가질까봐?
    1배속을 중심으로 한 메인 피아노의 구조 :: https://puu.sh/wEGqi/b69d4147ac.jpg
    03:02:863 - ^
    동일한 이유로써 :: https://puu.sh/wEGt6/b7b1dae78a.jpg
    03:05:333 - ^
    동일한 이유로써 :: https://puu.sh/wEGv7/9076c4ebf5.jpg
    03:08:157 - ^
    동일한 이유로써 :: https://puu.sh/wEGwN/fa0eeea4b3.jpg

  8. 03:08:863 - 여기는 하이햇o 피아노x 인데 노트가 2개네요, 저가 잘못해석하고있는걸지도..?
    아니면 뒤에 낮은음으로 깔리는 피아노음?
    03:09:568 - ^
    동일한 이유로써 :: https://puu.sh/wEGA2/76382e91ab.jpg
    03:15:215 - ^
    동일한 이유로써 :: https://puu.sh/wEGAZ/43647411e8.jpg

    스샷을 올려 설명 드린 부분은 1배속으로 재생하는 경우 피아노가 그 섹션에서 튀는 부분 입니다.
    대강 의미를 아실 것 같아요. 그리고 저는 거기를 드럼보다 부각 시키고 있습니다.



    03:27:215 - ^ 이부분은 뒤에 낮은음으로 깔리는 피아노음이 있는데 노트가 한개네요
    03:30:039 - ^
    03:31:451 - ^
    03:32:863 - ^
    03:35:686 - ^
    03:38:510 - ^
    01:53:157 - 첫번째 메인 멜로디 파트를 기준으로 조금 더 난이도가 업 된 파트라 구조에 이상은 없습니다.
  9. 03:11:745 (191745|2,191804|1) - 여기 6스냅으로 오던 피아노소리가 약간 늦게들리는거같은데..... 기분탓인가
    약간 지연이 있다고 하더라도 6스냅으로 인지 될 수 있다고 생각합니다.

  10. 03:13:451 - 여기는 계속 2개 아니면 1개로 이어져왔는데 왜 3개가됐나요? 혹시 뒤에 낮은음으로 깔리는 피아노음?
    1배속을 중심으로 한 메인 피아노의 구조. 위와 동일한 이융. :: https://puu.sh/wEGJ4/fd1241b5f9.jpg

  11. 03:15:921 - 노트한개 추가? 100%로 눈으로 봐도 쳐봐도 약간 위화감이 있는거같은데
    추가 완료!
  12. 03:24:833 - 03:25:098 - 노트추가 어떤가요 03:24:921 (204921|6) - 위치를 옮겨본다던가..
    위치 약간 변경 완료했습니다.
  13. 03:00:215 - 이곳은 피아노음이 들어가있는데 04:33:392 - 이곳은 없네요
    변속을 기반으로한 구조기 때문에 피아노는 의도적으로 생략!
  14. 04:39:657 - 노트한개 추가?
    No!
  15. 04:47:686 (287686|2) - 여기에는 롱노트로 표현할만한 음이 없는데요? 아.. 낮게깔리는 음이있구나
    Yes!
잡을건없고 의문만 남기고갑니다

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포스트 하고나니까 2쿠도가 사라짐


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모딩 정말 감사합니다! 많은 도움 되었습니다.
Topic Starter
Kawawa

qodtjr wrote:

모딩 간단하게 하러 왔습니다.

moding
01:34:274 (94274|4,94274|2,94363|1,94363|5,94451|0,94451|6,94539|2,94539|4,94627|1,94627|5) - 여기는 이밑에있는거와 같이해주고 이런패턴은 01:35:686 (95686|1,95686|5,95774|2,95774|4,95774|3,95863|0,95863|6,95951|5,95951|1,96039|3,96039|4,96039|2) - 여기부터 시작하는게 좋은거같네요

02:27:039 - 여기부터는 좀더다른느낌으로 롱노트를 오르간? 피아노? 긴음으로들리는거로 바꿔서하는건 어떨까요
위 두 부분은 고려해볼게요. 더 나은 표현이 나오면 좋겠지만, 아직 마땅히 생각을 가지고 있지는 않습니다!

03:40:627 (220627|1,220627|5,220804|6,220804|0,220804|3,220892|1,220892|5,220980|6,220980|0,221157|5,221157|1,221157|3,221333|1,221333|5,221421|0,221421|6,221510|3,221510|1,221510|5) - 이부분 약간 손꼬일거같은데 2,6콜에있는걸 가운데쪽으로당겨서 3,5콜은 어떨까요
요기는 괜찮은것 같아요!
정말 언제봐도 잡을게 별로없네요
짱짱맵!
피드백 감사합니다!
Topic Starter
Kawawa

CometicRush wrote:

모딩 배달입니닷 ;)

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

As Flowers Bloom And Fall


- 00:05:863 (5863|6), 00:17:157 (17157|6) 및 유사한 부분 : 이 두 부분에는 피아노 음이 없는데 노트를 두신 것 같아요.
저는 낮은 피아노음이 들리는것으로 인지하고 있으나, 없는 경우라 할지라도 약간의 울림식 표현으로써 납득이 되지 않을까 싶어요!

- 00:19:980 ~ 00:20:686 : http://puu.sh/wEyIo/aac47f7bda.png // 드럼은 똑같이 1번에 두었습니다.
변경 완료! 좋아보입니다.

- 00:21:392 ~ 00:22:804 : http://puu.sh/wEyMm/6708323ff1.png // Sub bass 부분이 00:22:098 까지길래 앞 패턴 그대로 유지했고, 뒷 부분도 조금 바꿔 봤습니다. 이 부분을 고려 할 듯 합니다.
일찍이 만들어진 패턴의 구조가 https://puu.sh/wEHaJ/67fd437e3e.jpg 이와 같이 메인 드럼 목적을 기반으로 같은 컬럼에 배치한지라


- 00:57:039 (57039|4) : 주 멜로디 부분 (1옥타브 윗부분)에는 비어 있습니다.
맞네요, 수정완료!

- 01:47:510 ~ 01:48:127 : https://puu.sh/wEyVu/82a49d1beb.png // 조금 변화를 줘 봤어요.
추후 변경할지 여부는 모르겠으나, 고려해볼게요!

- 01:56:686 (116686|4,116774|3) : 한 칸씩 오른쪽으로 이동 // 스페이스바가 덜 바쁘고, 01:56:951 (116951|6,116951|5,116951|3) 랑도 덜 충돌할 것 같아요.
스페이스 쪽을 완화하기 위해, 일정 파트 변경하였씁니다. 수렴 완료!

- 01:58:098 ~ 01:58:804 : http://puu.sh/wEyYc/091ca9e7f0.png // 노트 간격을 붙였고, 윗부분도 멜로디에 맞춰서 살짝 바꿔 봤습니다.
- 02:01:804 ~ 02:02:863 : http://puu.sh/wEz3e/1f6ea7eb29.png // 앞부분 왼손이 1-2-3-2-1-2-3 이런 형태길래 살짝 변화를 줘 봤고, 윗 부분도 원래 의도하신 노트 배치나 흐름과 맞게 살짝 변화를 줘 봤습니다.
여러 방면으로 시도 해보았으나, 제 개인적인 키배치상 유지 할듯 합니다!

- 02:04:274 : 2, 3, 5, 6으로 이동 // 02:04:098 → 02:04:274 → 02:04:451 이렇게 가면서 움츠러들었다가 확 만개하는 이펙트를 주려고...?
변경 완료!
- 02:09:921 : 2, 3, 5, 6으로 이동 // ^^^
여기는 고려해볼게요! 01:58:451 - 여기와 일관성을 둔 것도 있습니다.
- 03:40:274 : 2, 4, 6으로 이동
약간 수정하여 변경 완료!
- 03:57:039 : 박수 소리가 있네요.
뭔가 넣을 경우, 리듬이 애매해질 것 같아 의도적 스킵 해보았습니다!
- 05:02:157 : 2, 3, 5, 6으로 이동
변경 완료!
- 05:07:274 ~ 05:07:980 : https://puu.sh/wEzoC/03b06bad10.png
여기는 갠적으로 마음에 들어 킵할듯 합니다 ㅠ

나머지는 괜찮아 보여요.

Good Luck with Your Beatmap!
덕분에 전체적으로 한번 더 볼 수 있는 계기가 되었네요. 또한 모딩 감사합니다!
Topic Starter
Kawawa
Unicode Title: FLOWER -SPRING Long VER.-
Unicode Artist: BlackY
Source: REFLEC BEAT

References:
+ http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/nm17124108
+ http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/reflecbeat/disc1.html
+ http://www.konami.jp/bemani/jubeat/knit ... ap_fes.php
+ http://www.konami.jp/bemani/reflecbeat/1/information/

Thanks to IamKwan :)
Made it correct metadata in advance!
Maxus

Hello blopblopwawa

[As Flowers Bloom And Fall]
00:52:980 (52980|5) - I don't think this as same column as 00:52:451 (52451|5) - Due to them being quite different, i suggest move to col 7?
00:57:215 (57215|4) - Since the pitch is really high, this will suited better at col 7 too, and basically you can make 1-4-7 LN structure with 00:57:215 (57215|4) - which aesthetically better imo.
01:02:598 - Missing note here? since you usually make 1 note + 1 LN for piano and secondary piano like 01:02:333 (62333|4,62333|0) -
01:12:215 (72215|4) - Not move to col 6? to mirror 01:12:568 (72568|1,72568|0) -
01:33:745 - Should be triple here, since you put "kick" and "chi!" hitsound, which usually you make for triple like 01:32:333 -
02:58:186 - This should be single note imo, because if you want this double, then 02:58:539 - 02:58:892 - should be double note too.
03:03:833 (183833|3,183833|1,183921|2,183921|4,184010|5,184010|3) - I think the pitch doesn't supposed to be expressed by these bracket stream to the right side since the melody of 03:03:833 - is actually higher. I recommend https://puu.sh/wFrnW/9be5ca11f7.png instead.
03:05:333 - Should be double and 03:05:421 - should be single? since you usually make hithat double note like 03:05:686 - and 03:04:980 -
03:05:951 (185951|5,186127|1) - I think it's alright make these into double note, the piano still intense here.
03:08:157 - Should be double note too for hithat
03:11:745 (191745|2,191804|1) - Tbh i can't hear piano sound for these notes, i can hear the previous and after these, but not these 2 notes.
04:05:686 - until 04:09:921 - I think you can actually make the notes into 1/4 LN instead. because of how the music gets even more intense and intense at the timing section, i felt the notes started to kinda underwhelming in how it expresses the atmosphere of the song that's getting more intense.
04:22:098 - I find you can make it more neater by trying http://puu.sh/wFsfK/efaeefb0f8.png
06:04:142 (364142|4,364186|2) - Not make into col 4 and col 5? I think it will give better symmetry towards the pattern.

Really solid pattern, amazing one blopblop owo
Call me back~
Topic Starter
Kawawa

Maxus wrote:


Hello blopblopwawa Helowalo! :blobblob:

[As Flowers Bloom And Fall]
00:52:980 (52980|5) - I don't think this as same column as 00:52:451 (52451|5) - Due to them being quite different, i suggest move to col 7?
Early on, I like to put the same column as intention. so wanna keep!

00:57:215 (57215|4) - Since the pitch is really high, this will suited better at col 7 too, and basically you can make 1-4-7 LN structure with 00:57:215 (57215|4) - which aesthetically better imo.
Thanks for the opinion. Moved to 6! by 00:58:098 (58098|6) -

01:02:598 - Missing note here? since you usually make 1 note + 1 LN for piano and secondary piano like 01:02:333 (62333|4,62333|0) -
Ah, this one. I realized now.
by the way I think I can skip it as intention. Since I do not think It will affect to rhythm for the playable.
And I actually like this expression. :)


01:12:215 (72215|4) - Not move to col 6? to mirror 01:12:568 (72568|1,72568|0) -
Alright. make it looks clean!

01:33:745 - Should be triple here, since you put "kick" and "chi!" hitsound, which usually you make for triple like 01:32:333 -
It's true what you said, but 01:33:392 - to 01:36:215 - this part only I made a specific structure as based on the "BaSS" and "Crash"
If I add a note here (01:33:745 - 01:34:451 - ), then the feeling cant be seperate with this BaSS. so I cared it. :?


02:58:186 - This should be single note imo, because if you want this double, then 02:58:539 - 02:58:892 - should be double note too.
Why here is two? oops. Fixed! like that :: https://puu.sh/wFA7B/622d555435.jpg

03:03:833 (183833|3,183833|1,183921|2,183921|4,184010|5,184010|3) - I think the pitch doesn't supposed to be expressed by these bracket stream to the right side since the melody of 03:03:833 - is actually higher. I recommend https://puu.sh/wFrnW/9be5ca11f7.png instead.
Fair. I arranged some after consider your feedback! Thanks

03:05:333 - Should be double and 03:05:421 - should be single? since you usually make hithat double note like 03:05:686 - and 03:04:980 -
Yeah, generally I made the structure as you said,
And when I feel the singularity piano(almost high pitch than others. and louder) on the some section. I focused on them as main rhythm.
When I consider with above parts, It would be better to change it as you said! Fixed.


03:05:951 (185951|5,186127|1) - I think it's alright make these into double note, the piano still intense here.
before It was 2 notes. and now would be back! thanks for understand my intention. Added

03:08:157 - Should be double note too for hithat
Fair, Added at 7.

03:11:745 (191745|2,191804|1) - Tbh i can't hear piano sound for these notes, i can hear the previous and after these, but not these 2 notes.
I understand the pitch of this piano. It actually low pitch, and fainted by drum. but If you're really unsure to that, then can discuss it in case!

04:05:686 - until 04:09:921 - I think you can actually make the notes into 1/4 LN instead. because of how the music gets even more intense and intense at the timing section, i felt the notes started to kinda underwhelming in how it expresses the atmosphere of the song that's getting more intense.
Nice Idea!! Applied after consider your feedback.

04:22:098 - I find you can make it more neater by trying http://puu.sh/wFsfK/efaeefb0f8.png
The one I tried before, so I want to this. :blobblob: -w-

06:04:142 (364142|4,364186|2) - Not make into col 4 and col 5? I think it will give better symmetry towards the pattern.
by the way, I added a note here 06:04:407 - And removed a note 06:04:451 -
like this. I wanted to this shape :: https://puu.sh/wFBOg/49faef242f.jpg


Really solid pattern, amazing one blopblop owo OWO
Call me back~


And I fixed a part 04:31:980 - to 04:32:510 - I realized that It was a wrong rhythm.
should be followed 04:31:980 - 04:32:068 - 04:32:245 - 04:32:333 - 04:32:510 - hope you see it again in case!
Thank you for your time! :)
Maxus


Bubblopbop!!
My Angel Koishi
I'm sorry I'm so late. :(

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

As Flowers Bloom And Fall
02:43:098 (163098|3) - Please move this LN to |2| because I felt a little strange. It was hard to press...
04:05:863 ~ 04:10:098 - Please change all of notes to hold notes. I think it looks more beautiful.

That's all because I think your map is almost perfect so I can’t find a place to fix. :oops:
I'm looking forward to this ranked! :)
Topic Starter
Kawawa

Sar7 wrote:

I'm sorry I'm so late. :(

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

As Flowers Bloom And Fall
02:43:098 (163098|3) - Please move this LN to |2| because I felt a little strange. It was hard to press...
wanted to move it, but hmm kinda hard by around structure. ;w;
04:05:863 ~ 04:10:098 - Please change all of notes to hold notes. I think it looks more beautiful.
Ah, it was that. I changed it by maxus' suggestion. but I want to keep as now!

That's all because I think your map is almost perfect so I can’t find a place to fix. :oops:
I'm looking forward to this ranked! :)
Don't worry. I'm so glad to see any opinion!
by the way I can't update right now.
so I surely will consider this things before qualify check.
Thanks for the opinion! and your time! :) :) :) :)
Mordu
As Flowers Bloom And Fall
1) I feel that from 05:36:392 to 05:41:863 is non-stop, for example, there has to be a note in 05:36:480 line, the sounds can't be ignored I think :d, another examples are these lines too: 05:37:363 , 05:37:539 | | Do not think I don't know what you want to express, though!

2) You would feel that part better like this


3) From 05:46:098 to 05:52:980 is also non-stop, you can add notes, for example in these lines 05:47:421 , 05:48:127 , 05:48:833. All the way like that for non-stop until the previously said 05:52:980

4) I dont feel these parts being a straight stair, I feel it must be more ~~~ "meandering" (I don't know if that is the correct english word :d)



I feel the rhythm "meassier", like this or something, but only for those two parts!


5) 05:46:098 (346098|6,346098|3,346098|0) Those notes have no sounds on that place, the songs continues in the next line, but is not that important!, you don't even feel it when playing! only when testing near that part, I just wanted to point that out just in case.

That's all. This map is already awesome.
Really amazing map!
Topic Starter
Kawawa

Mordu wrote:

As Flowers Bloom And Fall
1) I feel that from 05:36:392 to 05:41:863 is non-stop, for example, there has to be a note in 05:36:480 line, the sounds can't be ignored I think :d, another examples are these lines too: 05:37:363 , 05:37:539 | | Do not think I don't know what you want to express, though! I ignored them as an intention. because I wanted to make a rest at here a bit before burst.
I actually know what it is, so there is no change.
by the way your opinion is also valid, but it is the style of my structure. so wanna keep!


2) You would feel that part better like this
I played yours too. but I still want to keep.


3) From 05:46:098 to 05:52:980 is also non-stop, you can add notes, for example in these lines 05:47:421 , 05:48:127 , 05:48:833. All the way like that for non-stop until the previously said 05:52:980
I actually did a lot of research on this structure. yeah, You're right. it is a non-stop.
But I did not focus on it.
I mean I buffed some notes to piano when it has a high pitch or impacted than around.
and in the process, I ignored some. for what?
I wanted to express the jump when It goes low pich from high pich.
like 05:41:951 (341951|4,341951|5,342215|4,342215|5,342480|5,342480|4,342745|5,342745|4) -
Actually it does not give much feeling when I play it as x1.0 playback rate.
I have the skills to play this enoughly, and I can understand exactly because I can feel the feeling.


4) I dont feel these parts being a straight stair, I feel it must be more ~~~ "meandering" (I don't know if that is the correct english word :d)
It depends on each thinking how it accept as a theme of song.



I feel the rhythm "meassier", like this or something, but only for those two parts!


5) 05:46:098 (346098|6,346098|3,346098|0) Those notes have no sounds on that place, the songs continues in the next line, but is not that important!, you don't even feel it when playing! only when testing near that part, I just wanted to point that out just in case.
This is the main section. can be impacted, and it gives a feeling to player enoughly.
because I have described those things on the above, so I will not comment much it. :(


That's all. This map is already awesome.
Really amazing map!
I was able to get a feedback, and that will help me in the future!
Thanks for your opinion!
:) :)
Critical_Star
some irc check
14:29 Critical_Star: u wanted to ask me?
14:29 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1330572 BlackY - FLOWER -SPRING Long VER.- [As Flowers Bloom And Fall]]
14:30 Kawawa: 05:31:804 - I missed a note here.
14:30 Kawawa: should be three in this part like 05:33:215 - 05:34:627 -
14:30 Kawawa: I just noticed -w-
14:31 Kawawa: so changed like this http://puu.sh/wV8Dr/401f092814.jpg
14:31 Critical_Star: okay
14:31 Kawawa: 05:36:215 - and from this, I ignored the main synth sounds like 05:36:480 - 05:37:363 - 05:37:539 - 05:37:892 - 05:38:774 - 05:38:951 -
14:32 Kawawa: It's good to you?
14:32 Kawawa: 05:39:039 - And again here, I mixed them at here only(main synth + drum) till 05:41:863 -
14:32 Critical_Star: here is the beat phase
14:32 Critical_Star: i think is fine to keep it
14:32 Critical_Star: i see your intention for each double white tick line
14:33 Kawawa: yeah, If I should add here like 05:38:951 -
14:33 Kawawa: then It can't get a rest
14:33 Kawawa: I did not want "non-stop"
14:33 Critical_Star: yea make a break there is good so player can regain the momentum
14:33 Kawawa: alright!
14:34 Critical_Star: 06:04:142 (364142|4,364186|2) - CTRL+G?
14:34 Critical_Star: i thought same direction would play much comfortable
14:34 Kawawa: 06:04:186 (364186|2,364230|0,364274|1,364318|2) - It's hard
14:37 Critical_Star: 06:04:407 (364407|4) - kinda bother me a bit too short to play
14:37 Kawawa: yeah, same thinking.
14:38 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/wV8QT/0d7fb31bc5.jpg
14:38 Kawawa: waht do you think about it then?
14:38 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/wV8RL/eb11fe8409.png how about this
14:38 Critical_Star: oh sure that is okay too
14:39 Kawawa: I tried yours but why it make up SR 6.29 to 6.32?
14:39 Kawawa: -w-
14:40 Kawawa: actually weird SR system.
14:40 Critical_Star: haha
14:40 Critical_Star: LN spike
14:40 Critical_Star: it is really easy to spike with LN
14:40 Critical_Star: like my sennen kotowari
14:40 Critical_Star: if i remove the LN at the end
14:40 Critical_Star: less than <5
14:40 Critical_Star: u wanted to keep the SR?
14:41 Kawawa: yeah I don't want to up SR
14:41 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/wV8QT/0d7fb31bc5.jpg
14:41 Kawawa: this one is seems keep
14:41 Critical_Star: because 06:03:745 (363745|3,363789|4,363833|5,363877|6) -
14:41 Critical_Star: so i thought it will be nice to make something like that
14:41 Critical_Star: sure
14:42 Kawawa: I made some shorter LN when It followed with piano like 03:22:804 - 03:45:392 -
14:43 Kawawa: First time I tried 1/12 snap for the piano, but It was too weird. and something.
14:43 Critical_Star: 1/12 kind hard
14:43 Critical_Star: 1/8 is already short
14:44 Kawawa: 01:41:510 - will add at 4
14:44 Kawawa: for bass drum.
14:45 Critical_Star: ok
14:45 Kawawa: okay I guess that's all
14:46 Critical_Star: alright nice
14:46 Critical_Star: let me make a short post for this
14:47 Kawawa: okay!
:)
Oscyy
just a quick simple suggestion here

04:56:510 (296510|2,296510|4) - umm, somewhat i always got noteblocked on this part since you put a jack (and its 3 notes in a row) and quite strong bump (1.8x - 0.2x), can you switch them to col 1 and 5?
Ryzen_old_1

Another Lie wrote:

Another epic map after Black or White >/////<
Mod
03:50:510 - missing note?
03:57:392 (237392|0,237392|5,237392|2,237392|1,237392|4,237392|6) - i didn't catch the feeling at the end of LN, maybe like this https://puu.sh/wXXuJ.png (if that accept, 04:00:215 - should be double 35)
05:55:627 (355627|5,355627|3,355745|3,355863|3) - swap col for hand balance (tbh i hate spamming 4th col XD)
sorry if i'm using quote (because this is not my account, also my account is ded)
Topic Starter
Kawawa

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

just a quick simple suggestion here

04:56:510 (296510|2,296510|4) - umm, somewhat i always got noteblocked on this part since you put a jack (and its 3 notes in a row) and quite strong bump (1.8x - 0.2x), can you switch them to col 1 and 5?
I earliy tried some stuff for it, but wanna keep this.
Since I really like the feeling of highlight with those three jack.
I'm still thinking that It's already has a convenience and concept of the chart reasonably! Thanks for your opinion! :)
Topic Starter
Kawawa

Ryzen wrote:

Another Lie wrote:

Another epic map after Black or White >/////<
Mod
03:50:510 - missing note? was considering it, did not. I focused on the snare drum at there.
and I used the expression them as bundle, like a jump! [I can not explain this as word, but I know it by feeling]


03:57:392 (237392|0,237392|5,237392|2,237392|1,237392|4,237392|6) - i didn't catch the feeling at the end of LN, maybe like this https://puu.sh/wXXuJ.png (if that accept, 04:00:215 - should be double 35) It is okay! note amounts are depends on each structure. can be changed as intention.


05:55:627 (355627|5,355627|3,355745|3,355863|3) - swap col for hand balance (tbh i hate spamming 4th col XD)
I'm so sorry. I was trying to change this. but It looks hard by conception of the chart.

I seperated them one by one, I mean one hand is piano, other one is drum mostly.
05:53:157 - here is the one which right hand follows the piano bundle.
05:54:568 - and again, next case which left hand follows. about 4th col (because I use left hand for space key) uwu
05:55:980 - to 05:58:627 - and It becomes center.
sorry if i'm using quote (because this is not my account, also my account is ded)
It's okay! but I'm so sorry If I had no change them.
but It will be a feedback in the future. Thanks for your opinion! :) :)
Critical_Star

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Lirai
congratz wowo
Shima Rin
Congratz and CS is funny hahahaha ;)
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