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Mr.Kitty - After Dark

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meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 18, 2015 at 1:00:14 AM

Artist: Mr.Kitty
Title: After Dark
Tags: new wave gothic piano TIME synthpop ByBy_ChAn
BPM: 70
Filesize: 3392kb
Play Time: 02:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Heavy (1.63 stars, 120 notes)
  2. Light (1.24 stars, 118 notes)
Download: Mr.Kitty - After Dark
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My third ranked map (｡･ ω<)ゞ


Ready for mods ~!
EDIT : Please redownload before 27/06/2015 mp3 changed


Thanks for BG -Bakari- ~ :3


  1. Light by me
  2. Heavy by me

Thanks for modding
  1. Snaggletooth
  2. Nekomata
  3. Euny
  4. Wafu
  5. Mackenzie
  6. Yuii-
  7. baraatje123
  8. A Mystery
  9. Mackenzie
  10. BeatofIke
  11. Kuron-kun
    The end ♥
Last edited by meii18 , edited 58 times in total.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
New BG, a few suggestions about rhythm, some general stuff, discussion about tags. It all was done via IRC. Also, I attach new combo colours for the BG.

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[Colours]
Combo1 : 86,101,112
Combo2 : 193,208,187
Combo3 : 143,146,186
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
Thanks again -Bakari- for combo colours ~ I'll update tomorrow

Snapped some 3/2 sliders to 1/4 sliders and added notes but I kept the 3/2 sliders with reverse because I don't want to make same rhythm 1/4 slider -> note to this map not being so boring ==

anyway thanks again ;D
Snaggletooth
491 posts
Joined November 2012
Snaggletooth
M4M? Sorta, kinda owo"


I feel like your offset is slightly off. A bit too early. I found 30.930 to be a better option.
Maybe even 30.931, but I'm not a timing pro so... Maybe try it and see if this suits you better.


[Light]
  1. NC to keep the Combos down


    • Since this is acctually an Easy, I don't think that combos over 4/5 should be made. They should be kept
      as short as possible. But I'm sure you know that~
    1. 00:34:358 (4)
    2. 00:41:215 (5)
    3. 00:48:072 (5)
    4. 00:54:930 (5)
    5. Well basically every Major White Downbeat. Just to keep this mod shorter. :3
  2. Hitsounds
    1. 01:06:501 - 01:11:644: The claps should be removed replaced. Right now they sound more distracting and
      don't really add to the song imo. I think a soft whistle would support the song much more than claps and
      it wouldn sound so cringy afterwards.
    2. 02:20:644 (1) - Remove the whistle. This song is fading out, it'd be cringy to all of the sudden hear a louder
      noise than the actual song.

[Heavy]
  1. Rhythmical Issues
    1. 00:31:784 - This is quite a major beat. The snare is really strong compared to the actual song, which
      makes skipping it seem quite uncomfortable. The Rhythm from 00:34:355 (7,8,9) should be applied here
      as well. I personally don't think that alternating between mapping vocals and the beat that often is a
      good Idea on difficulties like Easy and Normal. Just my thoughts.
    2. 00:33:498
    3. 00:40:355
    4. 00:42:069
    5. 00:45:498
    6. 00:48:926
    7. 00:50:641
    8. 00:55:784
    9. 00:57:498

Since this is still WIP this mod wont get any shorter. But I wish you good luck with this set c: <3
Poke me once this set is finished, so I can complete my mod
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
@Snaggletooth sorry for late reply =w= I fixed all NCs thanks so much

I'm done with hitsounding just let's wait for Pjecoo to finish his part in heavy diff =w=/

EDIT: Pjecoo has finished his parts and this map is officially READY FOR MODS \:D/
Nekomata
807 posts
Joined December 2013
Nekomata
[General]
  1. as discussed in irc, most accurate offset is 30937 (+10ms). my mod is with the current offset.
  2. tick rate 4 fits better
[Light]
  1. also some very noticeable blanket issues on areas i would think you intended to blanket.
  2. 00:39:069 (2) - distance is notably not balanced
  3. 00:44:641 (1) - blanket issue. 2nd point to (274,142) and 3rd (red) point to (228,163).
  4. 00:56:641 (2) - stack perfectly on 00:54:498 (4).
  5. 00:44:641 (1) - stack perfectly on 00:42:498 (2).
  6. 01:00:069 (3,1,2) - this seems better to me: http://puu.sh/i5fKU.png http://puu.sh/i5fMd.png
  7. 01:45:926 (3) - distance
  8. nothing else, just some minor blanket issues for the rest of the map
[Heavy]
  1. 2.60 SV fits way better IMO.
  2. there are numerous blanket issues (at least, on areas i would think you intended to be blanket) throughout the whole map that are very noticeable.
  3. 01:07:355 (5) - make this 1/2, and circle at 01:07:784. better rhythm flow.
  4. 01:04:355 (7) - suggest using two 1/2 sliders (one starting here, and other at 01:04:784.) for better rhythm. you can also choose to make a 1.7x jump here.
  5. 01:18:069 (6) - similar to ^
  6. 01:22:784 (2) - 1/2, and follow with circle just like 01:07:355 (5).
  7. 02:01:784 (4) - try curving this upwards. looks better http://puu.sh/i5e8C.png
  8. i think you should make the rhythm in second kiai similar to first one after adjustments
  9. (Pjecoo) 00:57:069 (6) - i feel this section needs emphasis. try two circles, it's better for that stop at 00:57:498 (7).
  10. 00:58:355 (1) - stack on top of 00:57:498 (7) - matches better with the music :)
  11. (Pjecoo) 00:57:498 (7) - you can jump this 1.7x if you choose to keep the slider before it
  12. 01:07:784 (6) - (if you added this circle) see if you can make a triangle (not necessarily an equilateral) formation instead of going in a line.
  13. (Pjecoo) 01:51:498 (4,5) - similar suggestion to 00:57:069 (6).
  14. 01:53:212 (1) - similar to 00:58:355 (1).
hope this helps :P
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
I'll fix tomorrow anyway thanks for mod Nekomata Fixed all for Light diff but you modded Heavy like an hard diff so no changes unfortunately ;_;

Thanks for mod Nekomata Updated~
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
@Nekomata
Thank you for mod but I didn't fix your mentioned things in my part.
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Euny

as your request!♥ my little sis!!


  • General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - drum-hitnormal.wav
    - soft-slidertick.wav
  2. for metadata : why ' -bakari- ' in tag? he/she mapped with you? if or not, remove it.
  3. check-out the both letterbox during breaks and widescreen support please
    -light diff

    -heavy diff
  • Light
  1. looks fine to me.
  • Heavy

    to.Pjecoo
  1. 00:44:641 (1) - rotate this slider with 63 degrees(with selection centre) for corver 00:45:284 (2) - this? i think it makes flow feels better
  2. 01:47:212 (3) - hope you changing it for this. its really fit for vocal imo.


    to.cutie
  3. 01:06:926 (4) - curve more improve this flow.
  4. 01:12:712 (2,3) - i hate blanket mod. but i think you can make it better than now. please check it all again.
    SPOILER


sorry for short mod.
cant find other stuffs.
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem

Euny wrote:

to.Pjecoo
[*]00:44:641 (1) - rotate this slider with 63 degrees(with selection centre) for corver 00:45:284 (2) - this? i think it makes flow feels better - Fixed.
[*]01:47:212 (3) - hope you changing it for this. its really fit for vocal imo. - Not fixed.
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osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58355
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 30926,58355
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:After Dark
TitleUnicode:After Dark
Artist:Mr.Kitty
ArtistUnicode:Mr.Kitty
Creator:ByBy_ChAn
Version:Heavy
Source:
Tags:new wave gothic electronic piano pjecoo -bakari-
BeatmapID:673968
BeatmapSetID:300508

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:2.8
SliderTickRate:1

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354,201,99498,6,0,P|416:208|451:195,2,70,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,251,100141,2,0,P|224:258|189:245,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,302,100569,2,0,P|135:264|146:208,1,70
255,115,101212,2,0,P|257:71|247:35,2,70
172,99,101855,2,0,P|170:143|180:179,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,201,102284,2,0,P|297:203|333:193,1,70
470,274,102926,5,0,0:0:0:0:
405,327,103141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,336,103355,2,0,P|279:333|241:305,1,70
236,237,103784,2,0,P|278:240|316:268,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,230,104212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,74,104641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,105,104855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,80,105069,2,0,P|249:68|214:68,1,70
236,149,105498,2,0,P|199:164|172:186,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,250,105926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,325,106355,6,0,P|346:311|423:326,1,140,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,262,106998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,202,107212,2,0,P|342:216|265:201,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,150,108069,2,0,P|102:220|117:297,1,140
172,346,108712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,286,108926,2,0,P|245:216|230:139,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,64,109784,6,0,P|411:92|428:124,1,70
345,143,110212,2,0,P|317:175|285:192,1,70
260,111,110641,2,0,P|221:93|112:99,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,248,111498,2,0,P|86:271|127:276,1,70
186,226,111926,2,0,P|159:203|118:198,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,323,113212,6,0,P|335:295|332:212,1,140,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,161,113855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,129,114069,2,0,P|122:95|117:91,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
343,58,114926,2,0,L|417:27,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,87,115355,2,0,L|455:170,1,70
440,238,115784,2,0,B|394:244|357:211|357:211|328:256|293:245,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
171,167,116641,6,0,B|154:122|111:115|111:115|112:63|148:46,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,15,117284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,57,117498,2,0,P|321:106|309:185,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
255,326,118355,2,0,L|194:369,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,368,118784,2,0,P|88:309|129:229,2,140,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
268,305,120069,6,0,B|301:283|342:286|342:286|374:317|419:303,1,140,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,265,120712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,201,120926,2,0,P|390:160|288:145,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
146,102,121784,2,0,L|66:63,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,39,122212,2,0,P|3:105|41:173,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,240,122855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,305,123069,1,8,0:1:0:0:
286,367,123498,6,0,B|327:336|372:338|372:338|368:290|396:269,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,213,124141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
481,169,124355,2,0,P|444:137|399:123,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
405,319,125212,2,0,B|338:349|338:349|302:351|264:328,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,283,125855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,219,126069,2,0,P|124:246|122:281,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
201,155,126712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,113,126926,6,0,P|176:73|255:90,1,140,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,122,127569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,175,127784,2,0,B|435:207|437:243|437:243|402:263|388:303,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
236,320,128641,2,0,L|155:290,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,219,129069,2,0,P|90:260|92:327,2,140,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
300,156,130355,6,0,L|439:74,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,26,130998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,9,131212,2,0,L|256:89,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
164,204,132069,2,0,P|188:268|278:290,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,316,132712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,255,132926,2,0,L|423:104,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
297,62,133784,6,0,L|231:41,1,70,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,39,134212,2,0,P|155:78|247:125,2,140,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
69,189,135498,2,0,B|81:241|60:270|60:270|76:304|122:313,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,337,136141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,367,136355,2,0,P|261:317|243:290,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
174,219,137212,6,0,P|240:186|306:200,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,225,137855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,285,138069,2,0,P|458:263|426:156,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
301,61,138926,2,0,L|229:46,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,28,139355,2,0,P|134:94|159:169,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,239,139998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,314,140212,1,8,0:1:0:0:
256,192,140641,12,2,147498,0:0:0:0:
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
no reply=fixed

Euny wrote:


as your request!♥ my little sis!!


  • General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - drum-hitnormal.wav
    - soft-slidertick.wav
  2. for metadata : why ' -bakari- ' in tag? he/she mapped with you? if or not, remove it. because she/he made the SB in heavy diff
  3. check-out the both letterbox during breaks and widescreen support please
    -light diff

    -heavy diff
I enabled the widescreen support on Light since there's SB on heavy diff and I don't want to have conflicts
  • Light
  1. looks fine to me. yay \w/
  • Heavy

    to.Pjecoo
  1. 00:44:641 (1) - rotate this slider with 63 degrees(with selection centre) for corver 00:45:284 (2) - this? i think it makes flow feels better
  2. 01:47:212 (3) - hope you changing it for this. its really fit for vocal imo.


    to.cutie
  3. 01:06:926 (4) - curve more improve this flow. the current flow is fine
  4. 01:12:712 (2,3) - i hate blanket mod. but i think you can make it better than now. please check it all again.I moved (3)-'s tail to correct the blanket \w/
    SPOILER
Thanks for mod sis :3 Updated~




sorry for short mod.
cant find other stuffs.
Ooops forgot to say : I changed the offset with +10 ms
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu

Mod as requested

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Could you please use the highest quality of mp3 available? Your mp3 is 128kbps, which means it cuts all frequencies on 15kHz, while the highest available quality is lossless, so you are able to convert it to 192kbps, thus it is cut on +-18.5kHz instead, which then produces slightly more pleasant sound. If you want an mp3 without offset change, you might get it there.
  2. You should remove soft-sliderslide, spinnerbonus and spinnerspin, because these are exactly the same sounds as provided by default skin. Additionally, I think that soft-sliderslide should be anyway replaced with muted one provided on RC wiki. That's because the noise on sliders doesn't fit to the music as there are no sounds which sound similar or those long sounds.
  3. To be honest, the colors choice doesn't fit the background very much. The background is quite low saturation, but the colors are just shiny and some of these don't even reflect the background. Try less shiny colors and similar to the background.
  4. Add TIME to tags because it is album where the song was released.
  5. 02:24:079 - Decreasing the spinner volume here? I would not be so sure, I can surely say it should be higher than start of spinner, because if you listen to 02:24:079 - and then 02:20:651 - the start is much more quite than this point. I would add 20% on start of spinner, 40% on 02:24:079 - , 20% on 02:25:794 - , 10% on 02:26:651 - and 5% on 02:27:508 - . It is not fading instantly there is variable volume during the spinner, so it should reflect the song, not just fading-off as music doesn't matter.
  6. Did -Bakari- really want him to be in tags just for making names and putting them into a SB? If yes, it's okay, but I don't think that's that much work to be consider him as a real participant.
  7. Synthpop in tags would not hurt I think, it is one of the main genres Mr.Kitty produces.

Heavy


  1. Please, cut the .png files or tell -Bakari- but the transparency around the names is so huge, while it just increses the SB - when I cut it and saved, it decreased SB load to 1.4x, which is a big difference when no-objects is 1.33x and current with objects is 1.92x. Nevertheless, it doesn't have any usage, so why should it increase SB load for nothing?
  2. Možná by byla tahle forma trochu smyslnější co se týče flowu. Navazuje to líp na ten slider a zároveň je tam lepší oval-flow s předchozím sliderem, kdyby si tam dal ten samý slider obráceně, aby si měl nejlepší flow, měl by podobný tvar.
    Screenshot
  3. I think the kiai is too repetitive when it goes in a circle all the time - respectively from left to right, there is only change in kiai which is on 01:13:794 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - , but that's all, I think you should put more variety there, it feels really like nothing changes and you just go the same way all the time.
  4. If you check this on 4:3 resolution, you can notice the pattern is hidden under score, I don't think that's really cool and in some cases this could be unrankable if we consider that you cannot hide slider under HP bar, that's the same case.

Light


  1. I don't see any reason why the difficulty gap is quite decent, but the settings gap is minimal - AR on light is also equal to AR on heavy diff, that's all pointless. I can recommend putting everything on 2.5 apart from circle size, keep that. Definitely decrease the AR to 3 or 2.5, you cannot just use same as higher diff. Then the settings gap should be okay, but if you kept other settings on 3, do +0.5 on all settings on normal, there cannot be that low gap between settings while the gap between the pattern difficulty is much bigger.
  2. 02:20:222 (3) - The circle is covered by accuracy on 4:3 resolution - that's the same as hidden under the HP bar, which is unrankable, I don't see any reason why should be anything covered by the UI.
  3. Some rhythms were too repetitive. I would not really recommend to spam 3/4 sliders just to cover vocals but ignore all the drums which are more important than vocals, especially on lower diffs. I think you should use some 1/2 sliders and get a rid off following vocal so much, instead map the strong drums after it, that's much better to play and fits the songs rhythm more than this.

Conclusion: Rankable
Have my star. But you should definitely fix the settings gap and maybe the rhythms on normal, they could be too difficult and they also feel quite out of the rhythm, but it's your choice anyway. Good luck~
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem

Wafu wrote:

[*]Možná by byla tahle forma trochu smyslnější co se týče flowu. Navazuje to líp na ten slider a zároveň je tam lepší oval-flow s předchozím sliderem, kdyby si tam dal ten samý slider obráceně, aby si měl nejlepší flow, měl by podobný tvar.
Screenshot
- Opraveno.
code.
238,203,48937,2,0,P|302:227|381:194,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,63,49794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,100,50008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,77,50222,2,0,P|248:91|208:84,1,70
154,77,50651,2,0,L|67:193,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
I'll fix the stuff soon but thanks for mod Wafu. You forgot to shot that star whoch you said that i have it I'll fix when I'll have time
Last edited by meii18 , edited 2 times in total.
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
Couldn't shoot a star before I got it, everytime I get a star I shoot it either on map where I got it or to different map I want to be ranked :) Here it is~
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
Thanks for modding Wafu did everything also change some rhythms in light and removed some notes in heavy

Updated ~
Gordon123
1,038 posts
Joined June 2013
Gordon123
\ㅇwㅇ/
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
m4m

General

  1. Your soft-hitwhistle.wav is almost the same with the default soft whistle, except the volume. I really think that normal whistle sounds actually fine in the map,and i cant really tell the difference of using ur hitsound or not, so i suggest deleting it
  2. I think your gap between Light and Heavy is too large, especially on the sv and ds, heavy has a really dense rhythm compare to your light and the sv is doubled what you had in light, i know you are trying to make a normal but this kinda like a hard, if you add more jumps in to your heavy diff then its a hard, ar 4 for the heavy diff is way to slow,ar6 fits it nice. i think you really need a medium diff to qualify the map under the foolish diff spread rules

Light

  1. 00:48:024 (1,2) - i dont usually nazi, but for this one i have to tell you to fix the blanket lmao,this is way too ugly
  2. 00:59:596 (2) - i dont think the hitsound here fits the music, it just a noise imo, and i think deleting it is making the music nicer and quieter(since the music is really quiet), there is alot hitsound like this in kiai and really i dont think they are nice, also there are no such a sound like this in the bgm,so i suggest you to delete all the hitsound like this

Heavy

  1. 00:46:311 (5) - i looked over your diff and i see no such thing as this except this one, suggest change to normal rhythm
nice map though,but i think that you should really take some issues in the diff spread
good luck
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
Alex Li and Wafu were here, so I decided to mod this as well since we are the new Standard BNs. Chaoslitz, where are you!?

General



  1. The current combo colours don't fit in both difficulties, and even with that, the are not that good with the background used. After thinking for a while what would be the best choice, I actually ended up in almost nothing as I'm not perfect with these topics, however, I still think that the ones suggested below make a big difference with the ones you're using:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 196,196,0
    Combo2 : 64,0,0
    Combo3 : 192,192,192
    In addition to this, the colours of the difficulties are not the same.

Light



  1. 00:44:596 (1) - Maybe you could remove the penultimate tick from this slider as it has nothing to do right there.
  2. 01:05:167 (1) - ^
  3. 01:20:596 (3) - ^
  4. 01:30:882 (2) - ^

  5. 01:36:024 (1) - This is almost touching the HP bar, and as this will be probably played by newbie players, I'd strongly recommend you to move it some pixels below.
Personal comment:

I actually have to disagree with some parts in which you're following the vocals instead of the drums, that they sound stronger than the vocal itself. In lower difficulties this is not that bad, however it could be misinterpreted by the new players as they will not understand what you're trying to follow. Also, you use a lot of repetitive sliders omitting other important beats throught the map. This is only causing vocals to overshadow beats that they definitely have more impact in this song, as it's a very calm one. I'd also like to add the fact that this is more a "spamming sliders" map that then it gets completely gainsaying with the "Heavy" diff, as you use lots of 3/4 sliders and some circles in the middle of them.
Nah, this is not a flame, just a little suggestion on how you could improve the map if you are looking further to.

Heavy



General: A lot of unsnapped objects in this map, they are actually not snapped by a few ms, but they actually appear in the AiMod, so that's something to fix.
Hmmm... difficulty spread, yeah.

I think the map is really good, but there's a big difference if you compare it with the "Light" difficulty. Some parts feel quite overmapped after playing the other diff. and for it could be considered as a gap between them.

Additionally, let me suggest you the usage of AR "5,0" (or even "6,0" - but that would make a bigger difference between the diffs.) as it will definitely fit better with the current rhythm / placement of the objects.

Rhythm and Gameplay

  1. 00:56:597 (4,5,6,7) - The current flow of this part is way too different from the one you use during the whole map, you respect the 1.20x ds, but this is such a linear section.

  2. 01:44:597 (6) - Let me also suggest you a NC here in order to avoid unnecessary huge combos (it's the only one in which you are using a combo of 10 objects).
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18
@Yuii- and Mackenzie thanks for modding but I remapped heavy diff since I changed the SV to 'remove' the spread gap

EDIT: Changed some rhythms in light diff and removed soft-hitwhistle since I use now normal-hitwhistle
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
We did a quick IRC mod (of 1 hour).
We changed some patterns / flow / deleted one unnecessary green line aaaand... nothing else I think.

damn logs
2015-07-05 04:10 Yuii-: 00:57:470 (2) - Try finishing it at 00:57:898 - there's no need to map a 1/4 slider there, isn't following anything. This will definitely follow the vocals better.
2015-07-05 04:10 Yuii-: 01:00:041 (4) - You COULD convert this into a circle to emphasise the drum kick.
2015-07-05 04:10 Yuii-: 01:03:470 (4) - This should definitely follow the same part as 01:01:756 (1,2) - as it sounds better, so add a circle in the middle.
2015-07-05 04:10 ByBy_ChAn: ahh sure
2015-07-05 04:10 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:11 Yuii-: 01:05:184 (1) - ^
2015-07-05 04:11 ByBy_ChAn: wait a bit on light no ?
2015-07-05 04:11 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/673968 Mr.Kitty - After Dark [Heavy]]
2015-07-05 04:11 Yuii-: heavy
2015-07-05 04:11 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:12 Yuii-: 01:20:613 (3) - same
2015-07-05 04:13 ByBy_ChAn: wait
2015-07-05 04:13 Yuii-: 01:34:327 (3) - what about making 2 circles instead? firstly, you will be emphasising the beat in 01:34:327 - and then you will go back to the vocals in 01:34:756 -
2015-07-05 04:13 Yuii-: 02:01:756 (3) - wow the whistle
2015-07-05 04:14 Yuii-: 02:10:970 (2) - again?
2015-07-05 04:14 ByBy_ChAn: okay wait to apply
2015-07-05 04:14 Yuii-: that's all I think
2015-07-05 04:14 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:15 Yuii-: btw, Letterbox during breaks, you sure want to keep it?
2015-07-05 04:15 ByBy_ChAn: yes
2015-07-05 04:15 Yuii-: oki
2015-07-05 04:15 ByBy_ChAn: there's a break before offset
2015-07-05 04:19 ByBy_ChAn: fixed almost everything except 1/4 sliders and 01:34:327(3,4)-
2015-07-05 04:19 Yuii-: oki~
2015-07-05 04:19 Yuii-: Still checking the offset
2015-07-05 04:19 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:21 Yuii-: I didn't know who changed the .mp3
2015-07-05 04:21 Yuii-: Sorry about that weird offset
2015-07-05 04:21 Yuii-: 30.944
2015-07-05 04:21 Yuii-: try with that!
2015-07-05 04:21 ByBy_ChAn: I changed the mp3
2015-07-05 04:21 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-07-05 04:21 ByBy_ChAn: wait
2015-07-05 04:22 ByBy_ChAn: (you can check light diff till then
2015-07-05 04:22 Yuii-: Oki
2015-07-05 04:22 Yuii-: It seemed good for me though
2015-07-05 04:24 Yuii-: 00:30:934 (1) - can you try something different? the flow in this part is completely different from 00:34:363 (1,2,3) - and the one you use during the map. I SUCK at mapping, but what do you think ofhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3345086
2015-07-05 04:28 Yuii-: 01:01:792 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think you should remap this part, you are only using 1/4 of the screen, I don't think that's really cool. I really believe you can do a better job
2015-07-05 04:28 ByBy_ChAn: okay wait
2015-07-05 04:30 Yuii-: I think that there's an unnecessary green line at the end of the map
2015-07-05 04:30 Yuii-: That's all!
2015-07-05 04:31 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-07-05 04:37 ByBy_ChAn: the offset works now
2015-07-05 04:37 Yuii-: yay!
2015-07-05 04:38 ByBy_ChAn: about 00:30:934 (1)- I prefer the current
2015-07-05 04:43 Yuii-: hmm well okay
2015-07-05 04:43 ByBy_ChAn: wait I remap that part now
2015-07-05 04:51 ByBy_ChAn: can you wait a bit ? I put the claps now
2015-07-05 04:51 Yuii-: Sure, take your time
2015-07-05 04:52 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:56 ByBy_ChAn: updated :D
2015-07-05 04:57 ByBy_ChAn: see it
2015-07-05 05:03 Yuii-: let me just finish this
2015-07-05 05:03 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-07-05 05:06 ByBy_ChAn: btw what finishing "
2015-07-05 05:06 ByBy_ChAn: \?
2015-07-05 05:13 Yuii-: league match
2015-07-05 05:13 ByBy_ChAn: ahh ok
2015-07-05 05:13 ByBy_ChAn: you finished it ?
2015-07-05 05:15 Yuii-: just now
2015-07-05 05:16 Yuii-: the green line was removed aa
2015-07-05 05:16 ByBy_ChAn: oh no it wasn't
2015-07-05 05:16 Yuii-: ByBy
2015-07-05 05:16 ByBy_ChAn: on light right
2015-07-05 05:16 ByBy_ChAn: ?
2015-07-05 05:16 Yuii-: It's perfect!
2015-07-05 05:16 Yuii-: yup
2015-07-05 05:16 ByBy_ChAn: really ? :O
2015-07-05 05:17 Yuii-: Yup, you really did a good job right there
2015-07-05 05:17 Yuii-: It got fixed pretty good
2015-07-05 05:17 Yuii-: And the offset fits perfectly
2015-07-05 05:18 ByBy_ChAn: ok just wait to delete the last green line
2015-07-05 05:18 Yuii-: oki!
2015-07-05 05:18 Yuii-: You should ask for more mods, though
2015-07-05 05:20 ByBy_ChAn: and updated ~
2015-07-05 05:20 Yuii-: Let me just do a quick rechec
2015-07-05 05:20 Yuii-: k
2015-07-05 05:21 Yuii-: Natsu is online, he may help you!
2015-07-05 05:21 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-07-05 05:25 ByBy_ChAn: I updated again
2015-07-05 05:26 Yuii-: saw it!

No kudos, of course!
Call me in a couple of days~
meii18
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Topic Starter
meii18

Yuii- wrote:

We did a quick IRC mod (of 1 hour).
We changed some patterns / flow / deleted one unnecessary green line aaaand... nothing else I think.

damn logs
2015-07-05 04:10 Yuii-: 00:57:470 (2) - Try finishing it at 00:57:898 - there's no need to map a 1/4 slider there, isn't following anything. This will definitely follow the vocals better.
2015-07-05 04:10 Yuii-: 01:00:041 (4) - You COULD convert this into a circle to emphasise the drum kick.
2015-07-05 04:10 Yuii-: 01:03:470 (4) - This should definitely follow the same part as 01:01:756 (1,2) - as it sounds better, so add a circle in the middle.
2015-07-05 04:10 ByBy_ChAn: ahh sure
2015-07-05 04:10 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:11 Yuii-: 01:05:184 (1) - ^
2015-07-05 04:11 ByBy_ChAn: wait a bit on light no ?
2015-07-05 04:11 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/673968 Mr.Kitty - After Dark [Heavy]]
2015-07-05 04:11 Yuii-: heavy
2015-07-05 04:11 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:12 Yuii-: 01:20:613 (3) - same
2015-07-05 04:13 ByBy_ChAn: wait
2015-07-05 04:13 Yuii-: 01:34:327 (3) - what about making 2 circles instead? firstly, you will be emphasising the beat in 01:34:327 - and then you will go back to the vocals in 01:34:756 -
2015-07-05 04:13 Yuii-: 02:01:756 (3) - wow the whistle
2015-07-05 04:14 Yuii-: 02:10:970 (2) - again?
2015-07-05 04:14 ByBy_ChAn: okay wait to apply
2015-07-05 04:14 Yuii-: that's all I think
2015-07-05 04:14 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:15 Yuii-: btw, Letterbox during breaks, you sure want to keep it?
2015-07-05 04:15 ByBy_ChAn: yes
2015-07-05 04:15 Yuii-: oki
2015-07-05 04:15 ByBy_ChAn: there's a break before offset
2015-07-05 04:19 ByBy_ChAn: fixed almost everything except 1/4 sliders and 01:34:327(3,4)-
2015-07-05 04:19 Yuii-: oki~
2015-07-05 04:19 Yuii-: Still checking the offset
2015-07-05 04:19 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:21 Yuii-: I didn't know who changed the .mp3
2015-07-05 04:21 Yuii-: Sorry about that weird offset
2015-07-05 04:21 Yuii-: 30.944
2015-07-05 04:21 Yuii-: try with that!
2015-07-05 04:21 ByBy_ChAn: I changed the mp3
2015-07-05 04:21 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-07-05 04:21 ByBy_ChAn: wait
2015-07-05 04:22 ByBy_ChAn: (you can check light diff till then
2015-07-05 04:22 Yuii-: Oki
2015-07-05 04:22 Yuii-: It seemed good for me though
2015-07-05 04:24 Yuii-: 00:30:934 (1) - can you try something different? the flow in this part is completely different from 00:34:363 (1,2,3) - and the one you use during the map. I SUCK at mapping, but what do you think ofhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3345086
2015-07-05 04:28 Yuii-: 01:01:792 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think you should remap this part, you are only using 1/4 of the screen, I don't think that's really cool. I really believe you can do a better job
2015-07-05 04:28 ByBy_ChAn: okay wait
2015-07-05 04:30 Yuii-: I think that there's an unnecessary green line at the end of the map
2015-07-05 04:30 Yuii-: That's all!
2015-07-05 04:31 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-07-05 04:37 ByBy_ChAn: the offset works now
2015-07-05 04:37 Yuii-: yay!
2015-07-05 04:38 ByBy_ChAn: about 00:30:934 (1)- I prefer the current
2015-07-05 04:43 Yuii-: hmm well okay
2015-07-05 04:43 ByBy_ChAn: wait I remap that part now
2015-07-05 04:51 ByBy_ChAn: can you wait a bit ? I put the claps now
2015-07-05 04:51 Yuii-: Sure, take your time
2015-07-05 04:52 ByBy_ChAn: ok
2015-07-05 04:56 ByBy_ChAn: updated :D
2015-07-05 04:57 ByBy_ChAn: see it
2015-07-05 05:03 Yuii-: let me just finish this
2015-07-05 05:03 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-07-05 05:06 ByBy_ChAn: btw what finishing "
2015-07-05 05:06 ByBy_ChAn: \?
2015-07-05 05:13 Yuii-: league match
2015-07-05 05:13 ByBy_ChAn: ahh ok
2015-07-05 05:13 ByBy_ChAn: you finished it ?
2015-07-05 05:15 Yuii-: just now
2015-07-05 05:16 Yuii-: the green line was removed aa
2015-07-05 05:16 ByBy_ChAn: oh no it wasn't
2015-07-05 05:16 Yuii-: ByBy
2015-07-05 05:16 ByBy_ChAn: on light right
2015-07-05 05:16 ByBy_ChAn: ?
2015-07-05 05:16 Yuii-: It's perfect!
2015-07-05 05:16 Yuii-: yup
2015-07-05 05:16 ByBy_ChAn: really ? :O
2015-07-05 05:17 Yuii-: Yup, you really did a good job right there
2015-07-05 05:17 Yuii-: It got fixed pretty good
2015-07-05 05:17 Yuii-: And the offset fits perfectly
2015-07-05 05:18 ByBy_ChAn: ok just wait to delete the last green line
2015-07-05 05:18 Yuii-: oki!
2015-07-05 05:18 Yuii-: You should ask for more mods, though
2015-07-05 05:20 ByBy_ChAn: and updated ~
2015-07-05 05:20 Yuii-: Let me just do a quick rechec
2015-07-05 05:20 Yuii-: k
2015-07-05 05:21 Yuii-: Natsu is online, he may help you!
2015-07-05 05:21 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-07-05 05:25 ByBy_ChAn: I updated again
2015-07-05 05:26 Yuii-: saw it!

No kudos, of course!
Call me in a couple of days~
Sure thanks for rechecking :3
Bara-
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Joined April 2013
Bara-
Mod as requested in-game
I couldn't find much, so this might be a little nazi, sorry


[General]
I miss the claps (every other beat)
Why not use this hitsound http://puu.sh/iNNPW/f13cb8aefb.wav
The previewpoint is unsnapped, set it to 58372 (not 58355)

[Light]
00:34:372 (1,3) - This blanket seems really off, move (3) back in time so you can see it properly (I'm re-starting to point out blankets, cause a map with my diff got dq'ed because 2 blankets weren't good O.o (okay, main reason was timing was incorrect)
02:01:372 (2,3) - And another blanket which needs improving
This diff is really neat

[Heavy]
00:33:301 (4) - This can follow the vocals better

00:36:729 (4) - ^^
00:38:443 (2) - ^^
etc... (This happens almost everywhere, even at 2 minutes in, please check whether you think it fits or not, and then according to that, change it all (or not ofcourse)
00:51:515 (1,2) - Please make the movement a little smoother here, add a grey node at 212:300 so it flows better
02:03:515 (1,2,3) - Align these better, the fact that (3) doesn't follow the "line"(1,2) make is a little weird, move it to 196:120 for example
02:20:443 - Add a circle here, to follow the oo~~~~o (this is weird to explain)

Sorry I couldn't help you much >.<

The map is really good
Good luck!
meii18
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Topic Starter
meii18
no reply=fixed

baraatje123 wrote:

Mod as requested in-game
I couldn't find much, so this might be a little nazi, sorry


[General]
I miss the claps (every other beat) not so :p
Why not use this hitsound http://puu.sh/iNNPW/f13cb8aefb.wav I listened and it really doesn't fit the song
The previewpoint is unsnapped, set it to 58372 (not 58355)

[Light]
00:34:372 (1,3) - This blanket seems really off, move (3) back in time so you can see it properly (I'm re-starting to point out blankets, cause a map with my diff got dq'ed because 2 blankets weren't good O.o (okay, main reason was timing was incorrect)
02:01:372 (2,3) - And another blanket which needs improving
This diff is really neat

[Heavy]
00:33:301 (4) - This can follow the vocals better it is fine

00:36:729 (4) - ^^ ^
00:38:443 (2) - ^^ ^
etc... (This happens almost everywhere, even at 2 minutes in, please check whether you think it fits or not, and then according to that, change it all (or not ofcourse)
00:51:515 (1,2) - Please make the movement a little smoother here, add a grey node at 212:300 so it flows better I prefer the current
02:03:515 (1,2,3) - Align these better, the fact that (3) doesn't follow the "line"(1,2) make is a little weird, move it to 196:120 for example I'll keep
02:20:443 - Add a circle here, to follow the oo~~~~o (this is weird to explain) no I'll keep as it is

Sorry I couldn't help you much >.<

The map is really good
Good luck!
Thanks for modding baraatje

Updated ~
A Mystery
868 posts
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A Mystery
Hello, random mod because I saw this and some things that can be improved (Yuii brought me here, blame him)

General

  1. I don't know the original source of this mp3, but if you could, please convert to 192 kbps as it will always sound better, unless the source isn't better of course.
Heavy

  1. Such heave, much hard, wow
00:33:301 (4) - Try to curve it less so the cursor can flow nicely to the next slider (like this one 00:36:729 (3,1) - )
00:59:229 (3) - Hmm maybe move the curve point a little more to the middle, it will look better http://puu.sh/iOfD7/5266a4392a.jpg
01:00:086 (4,5) - I don't see a reason not to use the same rhythm as here 00:58:372 (1,2,3) - . 01:00:515 (5) - Really ignores the vocals which the previous pattern follows perfectly D: Actually, I don't really feel like this is a good rhythm to use at all, because it will ignore the vocals, which is really the only interesting rhythm in this song.
01:13:801 (4,5) - ^
01:21:301 (5) - Please align this more properly http://puu.sh/iOg3A/38d6434e6b.jpg
02:01:801 (4) - Remove the whistle from the slider-body
02:11:229 (3) - ^

Light

00:35:658 (2) - Why is there a default whistle here :(
00:47:658 (4) - And here?
00:49:372 (2,4) - ^
00:51:086 (4) - ^
00:54:515 (4) - ^
00:54:944 (1) - And the slider end here
01:00:086 (3) - Sliderhead
01:01:801 (1,3) - And these sliderheads
02:01:801 (3) - Sliderhead
02:13:801 (1) - Sliderend
Please fix these inconsistencies
00:42:944 (3) - Ctrl+J? I think it will look better
02:05:229 (3) - Curve this less because of the same reason as 00:33:301 (4) - in the heavy diff
02:17:229 (1,3) - You could make these sliders the same

Good luck!
meii18
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Topic Starter
meii18
I'll fix when I'll get back home thanks for mod Mystery

no reply=fixed

A Mystery wrote:

Hello, random mod because I saw this and some things that can be improved (Yuii brought me here, blame him)

General

  1. I don't know the original source of this mp3, but if you could, please convert to 192 kbps as it will always sound better, unless the source isn't better of course.Wafu gave me the mp3 so I'll keep it as 128kpbs because if I convert the mp3 to 192kpbs,it's possible to destroy the quality of it
Heavy

  1. Such heave, much hard, wow
00:33:301 (4) - Try to curve it less so the cursor can flow nicely to the next slider (like this one 00:36:729 (3,1) - )
00:59:229 (3) - Hmm maybe move the curve point a little more to the middle, it will look better http://puu.sh/iOfD7/5266a4392a.jpg
01:00:086 (4,5) - I don't see a reason not to use the same rhythm as here 00:58:372 (1,2,3) - . 01:00:515 (5) - Really ignores the vocals which the previous pattern follows perfectly D: Actually, I don't really feel like this is a good rhythm to use at all, because it will ignore the vocals, which is really the only interesting rhythm in this song. it fits the vocals also I wanted to use different rhythm
01:13:801 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:21:301 (5) - Please align this more properly http://puu.sh/iOg3A/38d6434e6b.jpg
02:01:801 (4) - Remove the whistle from the slider-body
02:11:229 (3) - ^

Light

00:35:658 (2) - Why is there a default whistle here :(
00:47:658 (4) - And here?
00:49:372 (2,4) - ^
00:51:086 (4) - ^
00:54:515 (4) - ^
00:54:944 (1) - And the slider end here
01:00:086 (3) - Sliderhead
01:01:801 (1,3) - And these sliderheads
02:01:801 (3) - Sliderhead
02:13:801 (1) - Sliderend
Please fix these inconsistencies
00:42:944 (3) - Ctrl+J? I think it will look better
02:05:229 (3) - Curve this less because of the same reason as 00:33:301 (4) - in the heavy diff keep because pattern with 02:03:515(1)-
02:17:229 (1,3) - You could make these sliders the same

Good luck!
Thanks for modding A Mystery :3

Updated~
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
quick recheck

General

  1. seems like you dont have your slider silenced, how about try that
  2. cancel letterbox

Heavy

  1. 02:01:801 (4) - sup
  2. 02:11:229 (3) - ^
  3. i suggest AR5
call me back
meii18
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Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
meii18

Mackenzie wrote:

quick recheck

General

  1. seems like you dont have your slider silenced, how about try that
  2. cancel letterbox

Heavy

  1. 02:01:801 (4) - sup
  2. 02:11:229 (3) - ^
  3. i suggest AR5
call me back
done ~ thanks updated~
MirinH
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