-Dave Strider- wrote:

m4m!!

General

+the mp3 cuts off really abruptly and doesn't sound good, but if you can't change that it's fine i just wanted to point it out :0 - I'll try to change that

Easy

+ 00:17:494 (3) and 00:19:072 (1) are overlapping It's Normal

Hard

+make the AR 6.5 instead? AR 7.5 seems too big for a Hard diff - Change it to 7 though
+00:14:339 (1) - is too close to the notes before and after it, it might be too hard for the player to get to 00:16:114 (1) in time after the spinner It's okaay.
+00:39:385 (1,2) - are probably too far apart -It's a short jump
+00:46:485 (2) - is too far from 00:46:978 (3,4) - Changed it a bit
+00:47:866 (1) - the Finish hitsound on this sounds random?? - Didn't changed it
+01:09:165 (3) is too close to 01:08:376 (2) - Done
+01:10:940 (4) - doesnt sound right with the song - Didn't changed it

super short mods, sorry all easy and normal look pretty great to me! good luck!!

CelsiusLK wrote:

you give kds only one time

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

LEGEND
BLUE - Small nazi suggestions
BLACK - Real problems

[General]
BG image where I have removed the "zulwarn Anime wallpapers.com" in the bottom left corner - http://puu.sh/hfG6T/27b29f0854.jpg ~ THANKS for this~!

[Easy]
Good. I just don't like the breaks at the beginning, there is a lot going on and you can definitely map something there

00:03:294 - 00:06:844 - 00:13:155 - you can probably fill these breaks up with something - Done. But I'm not sure of what I added.
00:17:494 (3) - missing hitsounds - Done
00:25:383 (3) - missing hitsounds - Done

[Hard]
Looks nice and plays pretty well.

AR = 6.5 ~ 7 - I think it is a little high right now for a Hard at 152bpm - Changed to 7
00:03:294 - 00:14:339 - the NCs are a little inconsistent here. delete all the NCs you have and use this list here: 00:03:294 - 00:04:872 - 00:06:450 - 00:08:028 - 00:09:605 - 00:11:183 - 00:12:761 - Done ~ Placed all
00:12:761 (3) - forgot a hitsound here 00:13:155 - Done
00:20:058 (4,5,1) - try a placement like this http://puu.sh/hfDWr/b4e26734be.jpg - this note placement looks strange ~ Changed it but a different one
00:36:033 (1,2,3) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hfE2P/2406de62f1.jpg. Also notice the different NC. - I dont think the 1/1 sliders sound right here. After changing it you have to move the other sliders forward a bit and add a circle - Done
00:46:485 (2,3,4) - why not put (3) like this http://puu.sh/hfEaR/64d5cacd99.jpg ~ Changed it but a different one
00:59:896 (2) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hfEkN/948b5ad749.jpg - Again i don't think the slider fits with the music ~ Changed it but a different one
01:01:671 (3) - ^ - Done

Total time spent on mod: 1:00 ~ 1:15

That's all! Good luck

blueloniess wrote:

Well man ,IDK what's wrong with my internet , I can't open reply webside anyway ><
so I sent my suggestions here ,hope you don't mind -Haha. Nope

00:13:155 - - clap - Done
00:44:513 - 00:46:682 - suggest you make it like this : -Didn't make it like that because that's too fast for the voice
00:47:866 (1) - clap ? - I'm bothered with finish in that too~ It feels wrong. But I decided to stay with finish
00:50:430 (2) - ended this slider here ?00:50:824 then put a clap here 00:51:021 - - Done
00:51:218 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - well same with the second make some small jumps ,not short sliders ^ Same as above~
01:06:010 - end kiai time 01:06:404 - start kiai time I'll ask Celsius and Davided
01:09:165 (3) - finish sound - too noisy with finish
01:10:940 (4,5) - this two long silder isn't good ....i think ....put four short slider here ? - made the second long slider to 1 short slider then a circle

CelsiusLK wrote:

I will keep my kiai

it's ok to have different kiai on gds

you can change your diffs kiai to that if you want , up to you xD

eeezzzeee wrote:

This is really good, fun to play. I do think it needs a higher AR though

AR = 8.5 ~ 8.8 - try it I think 8,2 works better since it's not that fast of a song.
01:18:237 (1) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hfFM4/a640748606.jpg - (1/2 slider starting on the red) Follows the fast snare drum roll
That's all! Good luck

AsakuraNe wrote:

This made me laugh a bit

TheBronyGames wrote:

AsakuraNe wrote:

This made me laugh a bit ~ I know right xD haha

I come from the land of #modreqs
This map grabbed my attention instantly, cause one of my friends is OBSESSED with K-On!
I'm only modding one difficulty, since i'm a 4+ star player and i dont wanna make the easier diffs soo hard that they become unrankable

TheBronyGames wrote:

I come from the land of #modreqs
This map grabbed my attention instantly, cause one of my friends is OBSESSED with K-On!
I'm only modding one difficulty, since i'm a 4+ star player and i dont wanna make the easier diffs soo hard that they become unrankable


Insane

00:06:253 (7,8) - This triplet don't seem to fit with the music, just keep the one slider after the marked circles

00:10:986 (7,8) - ^^

00:12:564 (7,8) - ^^

00:25:186 (6,7) - ^^

00:29:229 (5) - Unlike the above, (4) does seem to fit, but this still doesn't

00:32:286 (3,4) - Again with the unnecessary Triplets

00:35:441 (4,5) - ^^

00:42:541 (5,6) - ^^

00:44:119 (6,7) - ^^

00:48:852 (5,6) - ^^

00:50:430 (6,7) - ^^

I'd recommend that you could listen to the track again in 50%. No changes made.


Overall, a decent map with some potential, but just be careful of unesecary things like those many triplets Personally, it's not that big of a deal but I'll keep that in mind in future mapping.

DavidEd wrote:

I'd recommend that you could listen to the track again in 50%.

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

Hi from my queue

Hard
00:27:947 (4) - Maybe have this slider vertical? -Oh. I thought that was vertical. Fixed

Your new update doesnt have a background for some reason. ~ Eh really? In my osu, there is~

This is a really good mapset. I actually played it several times before today forgetting where I got it from The Insane is reall fun and the other diffs are good too. Gonna shoot a star. GL getting ranked

Thanks For the star and the Mod~

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

Insane
00:42:541 (5,6,1) - Fix stack fix
The inherited point at 1:15:491 isnt snapped properly Saw that this wasnt the only inherited point that wasnt snapped correctly

George wrote:

---General---
Does the opening / outro / whatever this is normally end so abruptly? ~ Fixing that~

---Easy---
I believe the distance spacing is too high for an easy diff, try making it lower (But it isnt needed) - didn't changed it~
00:03:294 (1) - I'd prefer this slider to be more rounded - ^
00:06:450 (1) - ^ (if you do this then make it blanket 00:08:028 (2) - ^
00:10:394 - Add something here - Done
00:11:183 - ^ - Done
00:27:750 (3,4) - Fix the distance spacing here >>>> Just copy and paste 00:26:961 (1,2) and move it over<<<< - Done

---Hard---
00:18:677 (4) - I'd suggest making this less acute - Done
00:40:371 (4,5) - I'd also suggest to fix this spacing - Done

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. Timing points on Celsius' Normal (Ctrl+Shift+A) ~ That's on hold because of mp3 change
2. Disable Widescreen Support - Done
3. The music is definitely cut off, it should never end before a downbeat. I doubt this will get ranked if you don't fix this. ~ Fixing it but about the *it should never end before a downbeat* I checked a lot of maps going for ranked and just ranked~ there are though~ ending before and after a downbeat
4. So whilst you did say that you didn't want anyone commenting about the exclusion of backgrounds, it's an unrankable matter. ~ Oh. I told you it's not like i'm ranking it without bg, it's just i'm fixing it for a moment and i'm gonna put it back again~ because the old bg is stuck in the main menu~
   
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   You must have a background image on every difficulty of your map. If your map has a storyboard, then you can easily fade the background out, but one is still required for the song selection menu, online thumbnail icon, and for players not downloading with video (if the map has one).

Hard

2. 00:16:705 (3,1) - Maybe make these symmetrical? - Done
3. 00:27:947 (4,1) - I can't quite put my finger on it, but this part sounds off. I'd maybe ask someone else about this, but the slider sounds like it's late. (I think maybe putting the finish on the blue tick, but as I said it's hard to explain) I figured it out. I'm certain it's to do with the BPM. In only rare cases will the BPM reach a hundredth digit. Get this checked out ASAP ~ Okok~ I'm changing the mp3 so the timing will change
4. 00:33:074 (1) - Fix blanket - Done
5. 01:18:237 (3) - Fix up the curve at the end of this S-slider - Done

George wrote:

---Insane---
00:06:450 (1) - I don't really like / agree with this slider shape its supposed to blanket the upcoming slider, but maybe ill think of something to make it play better

DahplA wrote:

DavidEd's Insane

1. 00:17:494 (1,2) - Fix symmetry couldnt find anything
2. 00:36:427 (1) - Not stacked properly fixed
3. 00:57:727 (3,4) - Fix symmetry couldnt find anything
4. 01:18:237 I think this works much better (also the green tick here is not stacked) fixed green tick
   
   SPOILER

   [img]puu.sh/hhRAf/5ff253d541.PNG[/img]

Sword Hunter wrote:

Insane
01:15:476 (8,1,2,3) - I don't know, please tidy it up a bit, Don't think comfortable for players IMO. aiai
BEST diff of all! less mistakes!

Sword Hunter wrote:

All right, my turn...\

SPOILER

GENERAL:

-Try adding: "vocal" "Japanese" "ladies" "girls" "anime" etc. at the tag. - Anime will be put in the genreand I didn't changed anything~
- Celcius normal, try uhm, fixing your timing point, u got a diffrence timing point with all other diff's - Fixed
- Easy distance snap is 1,2 x, while normal is 1,0x (wtf.?) - Haha. It's because of the slider velocity. Even though easy have high distance snap, it's close than normal.

EASY:
00:27:750 (1) - Remove NC (new combo) -Oh. Didn't see that~
00:41:160 (1,2,3) - Those 3 -breaks in easy IMO is quite, inappropriate, why don't try this:

00:41:160 (1,2) - ( 1 long slider with reverse and 1 short slider,) I think would be more nice , just an example dont copy my bad slider xD - Looks fine to me
00:47:471 (1,2,3,4) - same as above - Looks fine to me
nice~

HARD
00:27:947 (4) - Too stacky, reduce 1 reverse arrow please. The beat is also 5 times, that would make the slider fit with the song even more. - Done
01:09:165 (3) - feels so empty.. try changing into a short slider start at white tick, end at red tick - Sounds and Looks fine to me~
01:13:011 (3) - 01:14:589 (3) - 01:15:772 (2) - DELETE. - Sounds fine. It adds more to the music though

nice~

thats all dude, I hope this helps, I'm just a noob modder...

Chobo wrote:

NM from Chobo's Modding Queue

Easy
Flawless. - Thanks

Hard - Changed the spacing suitable to the Difficulty
00:27:365 (1) - spacing here is a bit too tight -Fixed
00:35:845 (4) - spacing of this note is too tight -Fixed
00:38:015 (1) - spacing of this combo is awkward(too tight? weird shape?) -Fixed the spacing but the shape stays
00:40:381 (4) - dont really like the transition into the next slider. make them closer possibly? -Fixed
01:14:303 (2) - make this slider point more towards the next note -Fixed
01:15:486 (1) - ^ -Fixed

Kocari wrote:

Here from my modding queue



[Easy]

• 2.8 CS? How about just making it 3? - Fixed~
  00:06:460 (1) - Wrong DS - oh. didn't checked that~ Sorry abot the DS. Didn't rechecked it.
  00:11:982 (1) - Same as ^ - Fixed~
  00:19:082 (1) - Overlap is really unappealing and will be mentioned by BN if this is here I suggest just flipping this note 00:17:504 (3) - and making them blanket that single note in the; middle sorta like this http://puu.sh/hkcuk/49e9bc0646.jpg - Look fine to me~
  00:20:265 - Gap is empty with suitable note material - It's an easy. It's not suggested to map all the beats~ It might overmap~
  00:21:054 (6) - Awkward positioning of this note since it goes directly into the previous note, which doesn't look good - Look fine to me~
  00:24:604 (2) - DS - Fixed~
  00:26:971 (1,2,3,4,1) - Keep all DS the same, many DS changes in easy can result to unrankable issues - Fixed~
  00:56:159 (1) - The way this note is positioned makes it look unclean becaus enote (4) is being affected with how the flow will go - Look fine to me~
  
  Sorry but this is as far as I can possibly mod, there are many tweaks that needs to be adjusted, don't take this the wrong way but the song itself isn't as appealing to me since of the nightcore, and that this map is still made by a beginner, with a little more work you can make it a lot better and you can call me back again, I'm in the same position as you. All my maps are garbage and deserves better treatment but I can't do that since I suck I also said in my modding queue that beginner maps, I will have to do tons of changes that will result in changes made by me so instead I'll give feedback on what needs to be worked in a difficulty and apply that information to the other difficulties. Sorry I couldn't be of much help

Sword Hunter wrote:

All right, my turn...\

[spoilerbox]GENERAL:

-Try adding: "vocal" "Japanese" "ladies" "girls" "anime" etc. at the tag.
- Celcius normal, try uhm, fixing your timing point, u got a diffrence timing point with all other diff's
- Easy distance snap is 1,2 x, while normal is 1,0x (wtf.?) it's fine imo while the ds we use is different, the actual spacing is ok

NORMAL
00:37:231 (5,1,2) - Now, now, don't u think this is too much for normal , u can change 00:38:414 (2) - into a hit circle and 3 into a slider,
IN OTHER WORD, swap 2 and 3, making 2 a hit circle and 3 a slider. this fine imo , normal player can still manage to play this

00:43:148 (4) - kinda annyoing, make 3 into a longer slider ends at 00:43:148 I want to do some transition from vocal to instrument here , it sound fine tho
u can add anything u want in beetween.

Nice~!

Chobo wrote:

NM from Chobo's Modding Queue

Celcius' Normal
00:24:407 (4) - doesn't feel right in relation to all the other slider lengths prior to this one. what ? I think this is fine imo lol
00:25:393 (1) - consider rotating this slider a tad bit clockwise for better flow to the next slider I prefer current flow

@AsakuraNe use offset 3305 on other diffs too , not only my diff ;w;

Easy

1. 00:26:971 (1,2) replace with slider ? cause new player loves slider lol.
2. 00:27:760 (3,4) ^

Celsius' Normal
Great diff
very well-made

Hard

1. 00:38:212 (2,3,4) replace with reflected slider ?
2. 01:15:782 (2) remove it ?. No need to double it imo.
3. 01:13:021 (3) ^
4. 01:14:599 (3) ^
5. 00:47:087 (4) add "finish" tail instead at (1)

sodarose wrote:

M4M

[Hard]
00:56:751 (4,1) - Why use a large distance snap -It's a short jump
00:56:751 (4) - on a fix, Try and 00:56:751 (4,4) - Stack -^
01:06:414 (1,2) - Blanket -Fixed
01:11:147 note -Done

[Easy]
01:23:769 (1) - Replace 1/1 ? -sounds fine to me~

I hope this could help you !
Good luck

Thanks for the STAR and Mod

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Hi From My Modding Queue

Nice AMV btw -Thanks

General

1. Using a Custom Slidertick would be better imo -I'll fix that~
2. DS 1.1x would be better at Easy Difficulty imo -Done

Easy

1. 00:03:304 (1,1) - Stack these sliders would be great imo -Done
2. 00:05:277 - Add Note Here, there's a Sound in there 00:06:066 - And Here too -I think my map is overmapped now. xD haha
3. 00:08:038 (2) - Blanket with 00:06:460 (1) - -Done
4. 00:09:615 (1,2,3,1) - Convert this into 1/1 Slider would be good imo -Done
5. 00:10:010 - I Think you should add notes here, 00:10:799 - 00:11:588 - and here 00:12:377 - -^Same as above
6. 00:26:971 (1,2,3,4) - This Zig Zag Jump would be tricky for Newbies -Didn't change it~
7. 00:32:098 (2) - Make the slider more smoother -Done
8. 01:03:259 (2) - ^ -Done
9. 01:11:147 (3) - CTRL+G would be better imo -Done
10. 01:17:458 (4) - Make the slider more smoother -Done

Hard

1. 00:04:093 (4) - 1/2 slider would be good imo -Looks fine to me
2. 00:09:615 (1) - ^ -^
3. 00:13:363 (2,3,4,5) - This jumps sure looks tricky >.> -yeah. but it looks awesome though xD
4. 00:17:504 (1) - 1/2 slider please? -Looks fine to me
5. 00:23:026 (2) - Remove the reverse please? and add note here -Looks fine to me
6. 00:30:915 (4) - 1/2 slider fits better imo -Done
7. 00:33:676 (2) - ^ -Looks fine to me
8. 00:34:070 - add note here -^
9. 00:36:043 (5) - 1/2 slider with reverse will be better imo -^
10. 00:39:790 (2) - Spacing here -Done
11. 01:18:247 (3) - Improve this slider plz -Done

That's all i can found on this mapset, nice mapset btw
Good luck on Ranking
and thank you for being my first customer lol -xD Haha. No problem.

makemek wrote:

From MakeMEK's Modding Queue



Hello again AsakuraNe -Hii~~!

Easy

1. 00:26:971 (1,2) replace with slider ? cause new player loves slider lol. -Haha. xD That's a nice reason~
2. 00:27:760 (3,4) ^ -^

Hard

1. 00:38:212 (2,3,4) replace with reflected slider ? -Sounds fine to me
2. 01:15:782 (2) remove it ?. No need to double it imo. -^
3. 01:13:021 (3) ^ -^
4. 01:14:599 (3) ^ -^
5. 00:47:087 (4) add "finish" tail instead at (1) -Nice~ Didn't think of that.

Good Luck

Thanks for Modding

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Normal

Great Diff
i think if you use DS 0,9x it would be good when playing with HR i think
lol hmm I guess I will stick with 1.0x ds since the spacing looking good here for me

Chobo wrote:

NM from Chobo's Modding Queue
DavidEd's Insane
00:19:279 (1) - consider spacing this from previous note for flow
01:00:892 (5) - could blanket this slider to 6 better by rotating fixed
This diff has a lot of 3-note stacks in which some can be spaced out to improve flow of the map and naturalness of the cursor i kind of like it the way it is right now.

sodarose wrote:

[DavidEd's Insane]
00:10:996 (7,8,7,8,1) - Stack fix
00:28:746 (2,1) - ^ fix
00:57:539 (2,2) - ^ fix
01:05:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why use 1/4? 1/12 would've ruined the flow
01:06:809 (2,4) - Parallel
01:13:514 (3,5) - Stack fix

1. 00:09:615 (1) - How about make the end node to x:408 y:312? so it can look like this http://puu.sh/hkAqx/9b2f79e864.jpg
2. 00:11:982 (1,2) - Swap NC? for consistency NC on every two downbeat or measurement
3. 00:17:504 (3,1) - Reverse arrow on (1) is hidden under slider end (3) while we playing, consider to change that? because as far as I know it's unrankable
4. 00:25:393 (3,1) - 00:38:015 (4,1) - 00:56:159 (1,2) - 00:59:709 (1,2) - 01:02:864 (1,2) - 01:15:486 (1,2) - Swap NC? for consistency reason
5. 01:06:414 (1) - I guess you forget to add finish sound on head
6. 00:54:581 (2,3,4,1) - The flow a bit cramped, you can spread the notes into something like this http://puu.sh/hkAR5/6ebd5273fc.jpg or something else that have better flow than curent
7. 01:17:458 (4) - Add whistle on end might emphsized the drum sound better here
8. 01:21:008 (4,5,1) - DS error? 0.05 diffrent is quite noticeable imo
9. 01:23:769 (1,2) - Somehow not flow naturaly, how about you ctr+< the (1) so it'll look like this http://puu.sh/hkBaQ/0c276d28d1.jpg so it'll flow better
10. 01:23:769 (4) - Should not be NC imo
    
    If you make a move of the notes, make sure to recheck your DS

1. 00:33:084 (3) - I think that one should be a 1/1 slider instead, because you miss to map strong vocal here 00:33:479 - so maybe you can try to have this kind of rhythm instead http://puu.sh/hkCfW/1b4913d279.jpg emphsized well with the vocal
2. 01:06:414 (1) - Add finish? because the song itself have same rhythm as 00:53:792 (1) - so maybe it's better to add one
3. 01:18:247 (5) - Delete clap at end? I believe it's better if on that one is silence or you can add green line and lower the volume there, take a look on Insane for example on what I mean
4. 01:24:558 (5) - Same case as above

1. 00:27:562 (2,3) - For a better jump, I guess you san do ctrl+g on those two and it's a bit tricky when circle (2) is suddenly hidden under that slider imo
2. 00:31:309 (5) - Forget whistle?
3. 00:40:776 (5,1) - The placing is no good between them, so how about a bit re-arrange into something like this http://puu.sh/hkCYI/ddf5870510.jpg besides if you make the notes arranged like on the pict it help player to distinguish the rhythm
4. 00:44:523 (3) - Move to x: 108 y:80, then 00:44:720 (1) - make that one straight slider and move to x:108 y:168 so on the end it'll have better symetric shape http://puu.sh/hkDcr/65b21757a3.jpg
5. 01:18:247 (3) - Delete clap at end? I believe it's better if on that one is silence or you can add green line and lower the volume there, take a look on Insane for example on what I mean
6. 01:24:558 (3) - Same as above

1. 00:10:602 (5,6) - Ctrl+g them? Idk why but it seems those jumps will flow better on next notes here 00:10:996 (7,8,1) - if you continue the triangle patern once more http://puu.sh/hkEBj/8e78365bff.jpg I hope you understand :p
2. 00:47:481 (1) - Add finish? pretty fit the song imo and same as finish you have here 00:41:170 (1) -
3. 01:18:247 (1) - Not sure, but sounds good hahaha XD
4. 01:24:558 (3) - Delete clap at end? I believe it's better if on that one is silence
   
   David your diff always so lovely <3

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:10:602 (5,6) - Ctrl+g them? Idk why but it seems those jumps will flow better on next notes here 00:10:996 (7,8,1) - if you continue the triangle patern once more http://puu.sh/hkEBj/8e78365bff.jpg I hope you understand :p not the kind of flow i wanted and i dont think it would work well with the upcoming triangle pattern
2. 00:47:481 (1) - Add finish? pretty fit the song imo and same as finish you have here 00:41:170 (1) - youre right
3. 01:18:247 (1) - Not sure, but sounds good hahaha XD
4. 01:24:558 (3) - Delete clap at end? I believe it's better if on that one is silence fixed
   
   David your diff always so lovely <3 naw stawp it you

Btw you can take a look on Normal or Insane diff if you need hitsounding reference, pretty sound nice on those two noticed some issues. ty ;o
Goodluck~

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo from my queue~
Some small sugestion from me,

[Easy]

1. 00:09:615 (1) - How about make the end node to x:408 y:312? so it can look like this http://puu.sh/hkAqx/9b2f79e864.jpg -Fixed
2. 00:11:982 (1,2) - Swap NC? for consistency NC on every two downbeat or measurement -Fixed
3. 00:17:504 (3,1) - Reverse arrow on (1) is hidden under slider end (3) while we playing, consider to change that? because as far as I know it's unrankable -Fixed
4. 00:25:393 (3,1) - 00:38:015 (4,1) - 00:56:159 (1,2) - 00:59:709 (1,2) - 01:02:864 (1,2) - 01:15:486 (1,2) - Swap NC? for consistency reason -Fixed
5. 01:06:414 (1) - I guess you forget to add finish sound on head -Fixed
6. 00:54:581 (2,3,4,1) - The flow a bit cramped, you can spread the notes into something like this http://puu.sh/hkAR5/6ebd5273fc.jpg or something else that have better flow than curent -Fixed
7. 01:17:458 (4) - Add whistle on end might emphsized the drum sound better here -Finish sounds better for me
8. 01:21:008 (4,5,1) - DS error? 0.05 diffrent is quite noticeable imo -Fixed
9. 01:23:769 (1,2) - Somehow not flow naturaly, how about you ctr+< the (1) so it'll look like this http://puu.sh/hkBaQ/0c276d28d1.jpg so it'll flow better -Fixed
10. 01:23:769 (4) - Should not be NC imo -Fixed
    
    If you make a move of the notes, make sure to recheck your DS -Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:27:562 (2,3) - For a better jump, I guess you san do ctrl+g on those two and it's a bit tricky when circle (2) is suddenly hidden under that slider imo -Done
2. 00:31:309 (5) - Forget whistle? -Fixed but it's a clap though
3. 00:40:776 (5,1) - The placing is no good between them, so how about a bit re-arrange into something like this http://puu.sh/hkCYI/ddf5870510.jpg besides if you make the notes arranged like on the pict it help player to distinguish the rhythm -Fixed
4. 00:44:523 (3) - Move to x: 108 y:80, then 00:44:720 (1) - make that one straight slider and move to x:108 y:168 so on the end it'll have better symetric shape http://puu.sh/hkDcr/65b21757a3.jpg -Fixed
5. 01:18:247 (3) - Delete clap at end? I believe it's better if on that one is silence or you can add green line and lower the volume there, take a look on Insane for example on what I mean -Did it like insane
6. 01:24:558 (3) - Same as above -Fixed

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Btw you can take a look on Normal or Insane diff if you need hitsounding reference, pretty sound nice on those two
Goodluck~

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Good to see you, Here are the mods. (I'll cut the nonsense and start typing for myself)

Mods

Easy

• 
  00:26:971 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer to use 1/2 beats sliders here -By 1/2 beats, i will be using red tick then it would make it a pattern for normal though
  00:47:481 (1) and 00:49:059 (3) - Give about -5 degrees rotation here, it'll look more interesting rather than that. It'll make the map pattern orientation better -Done
  00:49:059 (3) - Remove Finish -Done
  01:21:403 (5) - Tweak this a little to the right, so it'll look more tidy -Fixed
  01:23:769 (1,2) - Rotate the slider 1 (30 degrees), add anchor point at x:236 and y :316 ; Rotate the slider 2 (60~70 degrees), and add anchor point at x:248 and y:204. Reason : Will give a better pattern -Fixed but another pattern

Hard

• 
  00:13:560 (3,4) - I'll use slider at here -I prefer mine
  00:16:124 (1,2) - (Suggestion) Remove hitcircle 2 and move the slider 1 to x:240 and y:208, add anchor point at x:232 and y:240 and Ctrl+G -I will miss a beat
  00:46:101 (1) - Move the slider anchor point end at x:112 and y:372. It'll look more solid -Fixed the upper slider so it will be the same
  00:51:228 (2,4) - (Caution) Avoid 2 touching the 4 They're not touching though.
  01:03:062 (2,3) - This pattern will be odd an not fun in nowadays mapping since overlapping is not a really good mappping style. I hope you have an idea for that. -looks fine to me~
  01:12:725 (2,3,4) - A small tweak. Move the hitcircle 3 at x:72 and y:128 -Done
  01:14:303 (2,3,4) - Another small tweak. Move the hitcircle 3 at x:320 and y:336 -Done but in a differen axis
  01:15:486 (1,2,3) - Another small tweak (AGAIN!!). But this is diffrent. Move the slider 1 to x:224 and y:188 and add anchor point at x:276 and y:180, and make sure the anchor point end is at x:328 and y:192; Move hitcircle 3 at x:340 and y:200 -Done

Allright, that's all. I have to double time everything due to my exams

Mod Time : 44m 10~15s

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo from my queue~
Some small sugestion from me,

[Normal]

1. 00:33:084 (3) - I think that one should be a 1/1 slider instead, because you miss to map strong vocal here 00:33:479 - so maybe you can try to have this kind of rhythm instead http://puu.sh/hkCfW/1b4913d279.jpg emphsized well with the vocal ok
2. 01:06:414 (1) - Add finish? because the song itself have same rhythm as 00:53:792 (1) - so maybe it's better to add one ok
3. 01:18:247 (5) - Delete clap at end? I believe it's better if on that one is silence or you can add green line and lower the volume there, take a look on Insane for example on what I mean ok
4. 01:24:558 (5) - Same case as above deleted whistle at head

Goodluck~

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