[Beginning]
http://puu.sh/h4mbS.png b-b-baka~ fix distance issue here XD
00:37:715 (1) - the reverse being a sound really feel weird, since the instrument sound really really low, if your matching vocal, can find another part more important maybe? ><
00:45:689 (3) - delete? since you been matching vocal mostly~ xD
00:49:107 (1) - I think you forgot your finish hitsound here, since you add it on your other difficulty~
01:09:613 (4) - Put that red slider point on the last stars like this :
http://puu.sh/h4mBL.jpg , so you can hear it change direction at 01:10:373 - 01:11:132 - (2 important sound
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01:21:386 (2) - tapping this feel a bit weird , I don't find this sound 01:21:386 - really that important ><
01:55:183 (4,5,1) - not suggest stacking these, because you didn't do it at 01:49:867 (1,2,3) - . Is a bit hard for beginner to follow the rhythmn, distance spacing help them a lots usually, and mostly when it come to beginner trying HD XD
02:02:018 (1) - haha cute slider, but maybe try to make it flow with 02:04:297 (2) - ?
02:46:449 (2) - the reverse really feel weird, because of the kick sound being more loud then the bass @.@
03:21:006 (1,2,3) - probably want to change that, doesn't flow really well and can be confusing too, because while doing this slider 03:21:006 (1) - you can see the end of 03:22:525 (3) - right beside the end of 03:21:006 (1) - XD.
[Middle]
00:37:335 (1,2,3) - can make it a better flow? Feel like 00:38:854 (3) - close to the end of 00:37:335 (1) - .
http://puu.sh/h4ojQ.jpg00:52:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this really feel to turning around for a normal? XD Feel a bit to crowd I guess
00:54:424 (5,6,1) - different drum sound, not sure why is stack xD.
01:06:955 (1,2) - I'm pretty sure you try to blanket this, from the way your mapping there is so much nice blanket <3!! Probably want to use one point to blanket instead of 2 point on this slider 01:06:955 (1,2) - . That's how it look right now
http://puu.sh/h4qlB.jpg ><
02:04:677 (5,1,2,3) - Pattern don't really look great in-game XD
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298371902:35:056 (1,2,3) - Probably not suggest stacking these for a normal level, usually when you put 3 notes you don't stack them except here XD.
02:45:880 (3) - delete, really minor instrument sound ><. You probably try to match the vocal, this part 02:45:500 - more easy to hear for beginner/normal player, so probably suggest deleting that note XD.
02:51:955 (3,4,5,1) - this part can be pretty confusing for normal player
http://puu.sh/h89Dj.jpg , the 1 appear fast and from the flow of 02:50:626 (2,3,4) - is easier to reach (1) then (5) xD. (mostly when play on FL, but thats the player choice haha)
03:19:487 (4) - end it here 03:19:867 - ? more easy to play, important vocal part and also have nice drum sound there.
03:49:867 (1,2,3) - could make something more original the stack? since 03:49:867 (1) - different instrument then 03:50:056 (2,3) - XD
[End]
00:49:677 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Oh gawd, nice blanket and all, but all the slider same placement and circles too, make it too crowded uwah xD.
01:07:905 - Suddendly no note, really lose a lots of rhythmn here. Suggest adding something.
01:09:139 (2) - no sound ><, triplet here suddendly feel weird because there isn't any new sound at all.
01:55:943 (4,5,1) - Could do something more original then stack 3 times, the 3 of them have different sound~
01:58:221 (5) - Not sure if is a mistake, but judging from your placement I don't think is an accident. I don't suggest suddendly ending this slider on a blue stick, doesn't play well, and here 01:58:411 - you have a nice bass sound + vocal. While here 01:58:506 - is just a continuation of vocal of this part 01:58:411 -.
02:35:056 (1,2,3) - nice symetrie pattern, but the song doesn't fit much, moslty for the vocal part, example : vocal start here 02:35:056 - while it doesn't start here 02:35:626 - . Can pretty much feel it while playing xD. Also NC should be here 02:35:436 (2) - .
03:18:727 (4) - same rason as 01:58:221 (5) -
[My Story]
00:15:500 (4,2) - Make these more symetrie? XD
00:24:993 (2) - no new sound ><, feel like tapping empty sound. So maybe remove?
00:36:196 (6) - since you been matching the voice a lots like this one 00:35:436 (5) - , end this at 00:36:575 - . Also because you aren't mapping every bass sound, so stoping there feel really empty here 00:36:575 - . Important instrument sound there too.
00:57:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Feel like this distance is really to high D:...it get higher and higher but thats a bit to much ><.
01:11:892 (8,1,2) - no anti-jump here? xD
01:12:651 (2,3,4) - really feel to crowded? xD Mostly this part 01:13:031 (3,4) - can be higher due to the cymbal sound after, probably a jump will be nice here O.O
03:02:493 (1) - start spinner here 03:02:778 - ? That's where the weird sound start XD. Still feel some drum here 03:02:493 -
http://puu.sh/h3J5t.jpg03:50:816 - Not mapping piano sound suddendly feel weird xD