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S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This

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NazuSan
89 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
NazuSan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 7. Mai 2016 at 15:12:25

Artist: S3RL feat. Tamika
Title: Nightcore This
Tags: emfa music
BPM: 160
Filesize: 9377kb
Play Time: 03:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hardcore (2,54 stars, 397 notes)
  2. Hypercore (3,52 stars, 536 notes)
  3. Mediumcore (2,11 stars, 318 notes)
  4. Nightcore (4,45 stars, 798 notes)
  5. Softcore (1,44 stars, 216 notes)
Download: S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Status:
->This map is back again!<-
->WIP until I think it's ready to move it to pending<-
->Mods appreciated!<-

Softcore: Done!
Mediumcore: Done!
Hardcore: Done!
Hypercore: Done!
Nightcore: Done!

All maps finished and ready to mod!

Osu! needs more S3RL!

Thanks to all mods!
  1. sewe21
  2. Juuujuba
  3. -Nya-
  4. Lethargy
Last edited by NazuSan , edited 31 times in total.
sewe21
9 posts
Joined January 2014
sewe21
Hi, this will be my first attempt at a modpost so you'll have to excuse me if it's lacking in various ways.

General
01:48:713 - The flashing sidelights needs to be toned down, in my opinion it doesn't fit with the rest of the storyboard since this is the only piece of storyboard that is "all up your face" and it's more disturbing than it is impressive. Lower the opacity or size of the white by a moderate amount and it should be really good.

The beatmaps end too ealry. Make it so the last spinner starts spinning after the beat has died out somewhere around 03:43:580

Insane
00:48:095 (1,2,3) - This isn't really that big of a deal but it's something I would like to see changed. It's kind of an annoying pattern that I feel doesn't fit with a slow part for a 4.13 difficulty map.

03:34:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - There needs to be more spacing between each triplet, it's hard to read because of the cluster. Hard to read patterns doesn't seem to be and shouldn't be a theme to this difficulty.

Hard
01:46:595 (8) - This piece throws me out of sync http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046437 consider switching to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046362

Normal
03:16:970 (1) - Maybe raise this slider a little so that it starts at the same level as where the last slider ended. This might improve the clarity a bit.

Not sure what I think about the circle size. Smaller circle sizes more often than not makes a map harder than its star rating and this might be frustrating or unappealing for newer players.

Easy
01:13:595 (1,1,1) - Make these into a single slider. It sounds and feels more in sync with the music, also end the spinner at the green line. If you're worried that it'll be too hard you can start the slider coming after the spinner closer to the center of the screen to make it easier.

After every spinner but the first there's a giant empty space between the spinner and coming circle and it doesn't fit well with the music in my opinion. Either fill up the empty space(putting the circle/slider closer to the middle after the end of a spinner makes it easier) or remove the spinners. If you find another solution that works well you can just do that.(Or ignore this completely rofl)

03:15:845 (3) - This reverse slider takes block view of this circle 03:17:720 (2) - I highly advise you to change this, anyway is fine as long as it doesn't obstruct the view of coming circles.
NazuSan
89 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
NazuSan

sewe21 wrote:

Hi, this will be my first attempt at a modpost so you'll have to excuse me if it's lacking in various ways.

General
01:48:713 - The flashing sidelights needs to be toned down, in my opinion it doesn't fit with the rest of the storyboard since this is the only piece of storyboard that is "all up your face" and it's more disturbing than it is impressive. Lower the opacity or size of the white by a moderate amount and it should be really good.

The beatmaps end too ealry. Make it so the last spinner starts spinning after the beat has died out somewhere around 03:43:580

Insane
00:48:095 (1,2,3) - This isn't really that big of a deal but it's something I would like to see changed. It's kind of an annoying pattern that I feel doesn't fit with a slow part for a 4.13 difficulty map.

03:34:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - There needs to be more spacing between each triplet, it's hard to read because of the cluster. Hard to read patterns doesn't seem to be and shouldn't be a theme to this difficulty.

Hard
01:46:595 (8) - This piece throws me out of sync http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046437 consider switching to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3046362

Normal
03:16:970 (1) - Maybe raise this slider a little so that it starts at the same level as where the last slider ended. This might improve the clarity a bit.

Not sure what I think about the circle size. Smaller circle sizes more often than not makes a map harder than its star rating and this might be frustrating or unappealing for newer players.

Easy
01:13:595 (1,1,1) - Make these into a single slider. It sounds and feels more in sync with the music, also end the spinner at the green line. If you're worried that it'll be too hard you can start the slider coming after the spinner closer to the center of the screen to make it easier.

After every spinner but the first there's a giant empty space between the spinner and coming circle and it doesn't fit well with the music in my opinion. Either fill up the empty space(putting the circle/slider closer to the middle after the end of a spinner makes it easier) or remove the spinners. If you find another solution that works well you can just do that.(Or ignore this completely rofl)

03:15:845 (3) - This reverse slider takes block view of this circle 03:17:720 (2) - I highly advise you to change this, anyway is fine as long as it doesn't obstruct the view of coming circles.
thank you for the very helpful mod :)
I've tried to apply all your suggestions :)

~Changes~
+adjusted the flashing lights of the SB (colors+lower opacity)
+applied all suggestions of sewe21

[easy difficulty] please take a look at the distance of the first notes after the spinners; I'm not sure if they are to close now

I would appreciate more mods! :) thanks in advance!
Jujuba
29 posts
Joined November 2013
Jujuba
Hello~ from #modreqs

Easy

:)

  • 00:13:595 (1) - blanket with 00:15:845 (3) -
    00:14:720 (2,3) - try to blanket another way, this way is weird and looks irregular.. maybe like this?

    00:21:845 (4,5) - make both equal.. a easy way, you can just copy and paste one of them and rotate until get the way you want. And maybe Ctrl+G if necessary
    00:31:595 (5,6) - sliders unequal :( delete (6), copy (5), paste it where (6) were, click on (6) and press Ctrl+H, now you're sure they're equal
    00:31:595 (5,6) - rotate this slider a little bit, cause this way is a little overmapped for an easy diff
    00:31:595 (5,6) - blanket
    00:31:595 (5,6) - blanket
    00:31:595 (5,6) - move this slider to x:160 y:156 (avoiding overlap with those hitcircles)
    01:14:345 (2) - What about just rotate this slider something like 35º clockwise (with selection centre), to improve your flow?
    01:22:595 (1,2) - make them equal (copy one and paste it etc)
    01:26:345 (2,1) - blanket
    01:33:095 (3) - i do not recommend to use a slider with more than one repeat on easy diffs
    01:38:720 (2) - move this slider to x:164 y:64 and blanket with 01:37:595 (1) -
    01:40:970 (5,7) - be careful with this kind of overlaps on easy diffs
    02:18:095 (4) - spacing
    02:20:720 (3,4) - overlap
    02:19:595 (2,3) - what do you think about doing (3) equal (2)? copy (2), paste it where (3), then select (3) and press Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G http://puu.sh/imsAt/8856d22638.jpg :)
    02:25:220 (1,4) - blanket
    03:21:845 (2,3) - what do you think about doing like this? http://puu.sh/imysW/86ad8bcc46.jpg
    03:36:095 (3,1) - stack
    03:47:345 - i think the spinner should end here..

Normal

:D
  • 00:18:470 (4,1) - normal with jumps?
    00:49:595 (1,2) - blanket
    01:16:970 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - overmapped
    01:25:970 - this beat is important, i think shouldn't be empty
    01:27:845 (5,1) - blanket
    01:43:595 (1,2) - blanket
    01:52:595 (1,2) - fiz this blanket
    02:28:220 (1,3) - stack
    02:58:970 (1,2) - blanket

    That's all here.. i think ;w;
    Also, most of normal uses CS:3, so maybe you want to consider this

Hard

;)
00:21:658 (3) - blanket this with something, this way is just weird
00:23:908 (3) - move to x:295 y:64
00:31:595 (5,6) - fix this blanket, make it like this

00:54:095 (3) - almost right, move a tick down
00:58:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - change this pattern.. to something more simetrical maybe
01:16:970 (2,3,4,7) - blanket
01:28:783 (1,2,3) - symmetry
01:40:220 (1,1,2,3) - spacing correctly (1) and (1) will flow better
03:38:158 (2,3) - blanket
03:47:345 - again, i think spinner should end here
[/list]

So, i'm out of time to mod Insane diff, and i'm just a beginner at modding so i think i'm not able to mod Insanes very well yet... :o
But i hope this help you >///<
And sorry for bad grammar, i'm not very good in english :(

///Editing post to say that i love this music and your storyboard :P qq///
NazuSan
89 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
NazuSan

Juuujuba wrote:

Hello~ from #modreqs

Easy

:)

  • 00:13:595 (1) - blanket with 00:15:845 (3) -
    ?!
    00:14:720 (2,3) - try to blanket another way, this way is weird and looks irregular.. maybe like this?

    done ;)
    00:21:845 (4,5) - make both equal.. a easy way, you can just copy and paste one of them and rotate until get the way you want. And maybe Ctrl+G if necessary
    done :D
    00:31:595 (5,6) - sliders unequal :( delete (6), copy (5), paste it where (6) were, click on (6) and press Ctrl+H, now you're sure they're equal
    ;)
    00:31:595 (5,6) - rotate this slider a little bit, cause this way is a little overmapped for an easy diff
    wrong link? maybe a copy mistake
    00:31:595 (5,6) - blanket
    ---
    00:31:595 (5,6) - blanket
    ---
    00:31:595 (5,6) - move this slider to x:160 y:156 (avoiding overlap with those hitcircles)
    ---
    01:14:345 (2) - What about just rotate this slider something like 35º clockwise (with selection centre), to improve your flow?
    done something similar
    01:22:595 (1,2) - make them equal (copy one and paste it etc)
    yeah
    01:26:345 (2,1) - blanket
    do not have a clue again... xD
    01:33:095 (3) - i do not recommend to use a slider with more than one repeat on easy diffs
    changed
    01:38:720 (2) - move this slider to x:164 y:64 and blanket with 01:37:595 (1) -
    01:40:970 (5,7) - be careful with this kind of overlaps on easy diffs
    sry for overlapping maps but it has something to do with the spacing... I cant change this
    02:18:095 (4) - spacing
    02:20:720 (3,4) - overlap
    02:19:595 (2,3) - what do you think about doing (3) equal (2)? copy (2), paste it where (3), then select (3) and press Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G http://puu.sh/imsAt/8856d22638.jpg :)
    interesting idea... done something similar
    02:25:220 (1,4) - blanket
    03:21:845 (2,3) - what do you think about doing like this? http://puu.sh/imysW/86ad8bcc46.jpg
    03:36:095 (3,1) - stack
    03:47:345 - i think the spinner should end here..
    I got such a recommend before to change it like it is now... I won't change it again hopefully you'll accept this :)

Normal

:D
  • 00:18:470 (4,1) - normal with jumps?
    sorry ^^ little mistake
    00:49:595 (1,2) - blanket
    01:16:970 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - overmapped
    changed!
    01:25:970 - this beat is important, i think shouldn't be empty
    cant do this because of the distance to the spinner... I changed this part so that it fits now
    01:27:845 (5,1) - blanket
    01:43:595 (1,2) - blanket
    01:52:595 (1,2) - fiz this blanket
    02:28:220 (1,3) - stack
    02:58:970 (1,2) - blanket
    applied everything I cound comprehend

    That's all here.. i think ;w;
    Also, most of normal uses CS:3, so maybe you want to consider this

Hard

;)
00:21:658 (3) - blanket this with something, this way is just weird
I dont think that this is a problem
00:23:908 (3) - move to x:295 y:64
done...although I dont know the sense xD
00:31:595 (5,6) - fix this blanket, make it like this

maybe better... sooo done :)
00:54:095 (3) - almost right, move a tick down
00:58:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - change this pattern.. to something more simetrical maybe
tried to create the shape of a kite xD
01:16:970 (2,3,4,7) - blanket
01:28:783 (1,2,3) - symmetry
01:40:220 (1,1,2,3) - spacing correctly (1) and (1) will flow better
03:38:158 (2,3) - blanket
03:47:345 - again, i think spinner should end here
---
[/list]

So, i'm out of time to mod Insane diff, and i'm just a beginner at modding so i think i'm not able to mod Insanes very well yet... :o
But i hope this help you >///<
And sorry for bad grammar, i'm not very good in english :(

///Editing post to say that i love this music and your storyboard :P qq///
Thank you 4 modding my map :) I appreciate this :)
Unfortunately I didn't realize whats the problem you mentioned ....sometimesxD
but I've tried to apply all suggestions I found necessary :)
thanks for everything!

Edit: After intensively watching other beatmaps I've understood what you meant by "blanket" and fixed them ;)
-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-
Hey, NazuSan~
Responding to your mod request in #modreqs.

General:
  1. Personally, I would disable “Enable countdown”. Not really a reason; it’s just that most beatmaps these days doesn’t have this option enabled.
  2. Your Easy and Normal has the same slider velocity which is a bit weird. I suggest you lower the SV of the Easy to maybe 0.80 (since a SV of 1.00 for an Easy is maybe a bit too fast imo) and keep the SV of the Normal at 1.00.
  3. The correct resolution for a background is 1366X768. Sounds silly, but it’s better to make sure everything in your mapset is perfect.
  4. Add these soundfiles into your song’s folder to get rid of that annoying sliderslide sound:
    http://puu.sh/is9YR/ba8e30cbf0.wav
    http://puu.sh/isa0Q/01a9ea7892.wav
    http://puu.sh/isa3o/889e2d0282.wav
    The files are exactly the same, the filenames are just different to accommodate the soft, normal and drum hitsounds that you used.
  5. I suggest you find an expert storyboarder or someone that’s great at modding storyboards to just check your storyboard, cuz that’s something that I can’t do and I think the storyboard will require fixing.
  6. Perhaps you should think about placing your storyboard files into a separate folder and name it “SB”.

Easy:
  1. The distance spacing that you used in this diff is too small. As you can see, the objects are touching each other and it looks rather messy and crammed. Your current distance spacing is 0.8 but I suggest you use a distance spacing of 1.0.
  2. 01:25:595 – Just make sure there is one green line on this point. Duplicated green lines are not allowed.
  3. The comboing (new combos) of this diff can be improved. Imo, you should try to not let the number of combos reach higher than 7. I’ll give you an example of the combo pattern that I would follow:
    00:16:595 (4) – New combo
    00:19:220 (1) – Remove new combo
    00:19:595 (2) – New combo
    00:22:970 (5) – New combo
    00:25:220 (1) – Remove new combo
    00:25:595 (2) – New combo
    00:28:595 (5) – New combo
    00:29:345 (1) – Remove new combo
    00:31:595 (5) – New combo
    00:34:970 (8) – New combo
    And so on. (Hopefully you catch on to the pattern that I follow)
  4. 00:24:470 (7) – I don’t think this kind of repeat slider is really unrankable but it’s not adviseable. You should always try and keep your easiest diff as easy as possible and a rhythm like that can be quite tricky for beginners. Perhaps you can try a rhythm like this one:
    Picture
    I just changed that repetitive slider into two circles.
  5. 00:36:095 (10) –Not a very attractive slider at all. If you feel you could do with some assistance on how to make nice sliders, try this forum: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
  6. 00:37:595 (1) -^
  7. 00:37:595 (1,2,1,2) –Your combos here aren’t consistent with your combos here: 00:49:595 (1,1,1,1) – Make sure they are the same. It’s weird if you use different combo patterns in every section for the same rhythm. Consistency in comboing is very important.
  8. 00:58:595 (1) –Hmm, this spinner is pretty short for an easy diff. I suggest you remove this circle: 01:01:595 (1) – and just lengthen your spinner till it’s here: 01:01:595 –
  9. 01:19:595 (1,1) –Hmm, the reaction time between the spinner and the next note is too short. Remember that it’s important that the player has enough time to recover before playing again. For beginners, a short reaction time would be uncomfortable. Perhaps you can remove the spinner and map that area out by placing a long slider there.
  10. 01:23:345 – Referring to the storyboard now: Is it just me, or does the flashing of the red happen too quickly here?
  11. 01:30:845 (5) – Refer to my explanation here: 00:24:470 (7) – There are other places where you used those repetitive sliders but I’m not going to point them all out.
  12. 01:36:470 (8,9,2) – Be careful of unnecessary overlapping here.
  13. 01:40:595 (4,1) - ^, by overlapping I mean notes that overlap previous notes and that’s not spread out nicely across the entire grid (that’s also why the correct distance spacing is so important.)
  14. 02:12:095 (9) – Uhrrr, not a good slidershape idea.
  15. 02:15:095 (1,3) – Again, the unnecessary overlap.
  16. 02:25:220 (1) –Stack this note on 02:23:720 (6) – I usually like it when the next note after a pause is stacked on the previous note. It just looks tidier.
  17. 02:25:595 (2,3,4,5,6) – The notes here feel so crammed into one little space. Try spacing the notes out a bit more to avoid overlaps and chaos.
  18. 02:36:283 (1) – Very short spinner. 0-0 Not advised. Rather remove it and map that area out instead.
  19. 02:49:595 – I suggest you start mapping here again. It’s weird that you didn’t since it’s such a nice beat and possible to place notes there. The current break there is also very, very long.

Overall, the main problem is your distance spacing in this diff. If you fix that, this diff will already look 100 times better. Your rhythm patterns look decent, but your comboing still requires a lot of work. I did drop an example, but I’m not sure if that’ll be enough to fix it. Just remember that consistency in placing combos is key and that you should try and place new combos there where a strong beat starts again. I gave you a link to a slider-forum which will guide you and show you excellent slidershapes that you can use in your mapset. Your hitsounding isn’t bad but I noticed that you didn’t use any custom hitsounds. Imo, custom hitsounds will sound excellent with certain beats in this song. Like here: 00:38:345 - 00:39:845 - 00:41:345 - 00:42:845 - 00:44:345 - 00:47:345 - 00:48:845 –
There are other places as well of course. I usually scan through other songs’ folders and search for nice hitsounds that will fit with my song best.

I just scanned through your other diffs: In the Normal, you should consider changing your circle size to 3 for a more balanced diff spread and also cuz your circle size is just currently too small imo.
00:23:720 (6,1,3) – Avoid unnecessary overlapping in your Normal too. It looks untidy and messy.

The spacings in your Hard are very inconsistent. Even though it’s a Hard and distance spacing is not really required, the diff should still be organized and not plagued with random jumps everywhere. What I usually do is use the same distance spacing and then just place small jumps at places in the music where a jump is hinted. In this case you can place small jumps here:
00:16:595 (1) –
00:17:908 (1) –
00:19:595 (3) –
00:20:720 (1) –
00:25:595 (1) –
And so on.

The hardest diff (Insane) is usually your own mapping style and can’t really be influenced by certain rules but I guess I can just point out that you should be careful of using too many random jumps (almost like in the Hard, except the jumps in this diff are bigger). Even though it’s an Insane, the song should still hint a possible jump and the jump must feel natural and not forced. My best suggestion would be that you take a look at recently ranked Insanes and catch a few tips. That’s how I improved my Insane-mapping by seeing how other mappers mapped theirs.

I hope this mod helped you in some way. If you have any questions for me, just poke me in-game (I don’t really like private messaging :P )
Lethargy
159 posts
Joined December 2013
Lethargy
Had a little chat

IRC MOD
14:21 Geronimaa: want a mod?
14:22 NazuSan: yeah :D would be nice ^^
14:22 Geronimaa: alright
14:22 *Geronimaa is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672528 S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This]
14:22 Geronimaa: ill start with easy
14:23 NazuSan: so you do an IRC mod? ^^
14:23 Geronimaa: yeah
14:23 Geronimaa: is that a problem?
14:23 NazuSan: ok nice :) no prob :D
14:23 Geronimaa: fine
14:23 Geronimaa: first and foremost
14:23 Geronimaa: why do you have at the end
14:23 Geronimaa: that 1 sec kiai?
14:23 Geronimaa: after spinner
14:23 Geronimaa: 03:46:970 - 
14:24 NazuSan: because of the effect when the kiai starts xD I thought it looks nice
14:24 Geronimaa: not really sure if its rankable
14:24 Geronimaa: add more tags
14:25 Geronimaa: os cs2 really necessary?
14:25 NazuSan: should it be smaller?
14:25 Geronimaa: well
14:25 Geronimaa: it doesnt have to be
14:25 Geronimaa: but i think this is way too hard for cs2
14:26 Geronimaa: like cs2 is used when the song is ultra easy
14:26 Geronimaa: plus
14:26 Geronimaa: all those circles are overlapping 
14:26 NazuSan: maybe its better cause there is a little problem that circles overlap
14:26 NazuSan: yeah xD
14:26 Geronimaa: so making circles smaller would solve the problem
14:26 Geronimaa: yeah
14:27 Geronimaa: i think cs3 is fine
14:27 Geronimaa: in this casef
14:33 Geronimaa: yea?
14:34 NazuSan: looks good
14:34 NazuSan: :)
14:34 Geronimaa: ok
14:34 Geronimaa: these two 00:20:720 (3,5) - 
14:34 Geronimaa: quite hard for beginners since they overlap
14:34 Geronimaa: 00:26:345 (3) - 
14:34 Geronimaa: improve this shape
14:34 Geronimaa:  this as well 00:30:095 (3) - 
14:35 Geronimaa: 00:33:845 (7) - 
14:35 Geronimaa: these two overlap as well 00:32:720 (6,8) - 
14:35 Geronimaa: these two slidershapes shouldnt be in easy 00:36:095 (10,1) - 
14:35 Geronimaa: this could be prettier 00:40:595 (1) - 
14:35 Geronimaa: same here 00:43:970 (5) - 
14:35 Geronimaa: same ehre 00:51:095 (1) - 
14:36 Geronimaa: same 00:55:970 (4) - 
14:36 Geronimaa: same 01:22:595 (1,2) - 
14:37 Geronimaa: these two overlap even at cs3 01:22:595 (1,2,2,2) - 
14:37 Geronimaa: these two 01:26:345 (2,2) - 
14:37 Geronimaa: these overlap as well 01:28:220 (3,4) - 
14:37 Geronimaa: same here 01:30:095 (4,1) - 
14:37 Geronimaa: improve shape 01:37:595 (1) - 
14:37 Geronimaa: these overlap as well 01:37:595 (1,2) - 
14:37 Geronimaa: improve shape V
14:37 Geronimaa: 01:39:470 (3) - 
14:38 Geronimaa: make a triangle 01:40:970 (5,6,7) - 
14:38 Geronimaa: improve shape 01:43:595 (2) - 
14:38 Geronimaa: shape 01:43:595 (2) - 
14:38 Geronimaa: dont stack
14:38 Geronimaa: 01:46:220 (5,2) - 
14:38 Geronimaa: its easy
14:38 Geronimaa: improve shape 01:49:595 (1) - 
14:38 Geronimaa: shape 01:55:970 (3) - 
14:38 Geronimaa: correct spacing 01:59:345 (2,3) - 
14:38 NazuSan: do you mean by improve the shape -> make it easier or make it prettier?
14:38 Geronimaa: pretties and easier
14:39 Geronimaa: no complex shapes for easy
14:39 NazuSan: ok :)
14:39 Geronimaa: this is a perfect shape for easy
14:39 Geronimaa: 01:54:095 (1) - 
14:39 Geronimaa: use these
14:39 Geronimaa: or
14:39 Geronimaa: this is als oreally cool
14:39 Geronimaa: 01:51:095 (1) - 
14:39 Geronimaa: same this 01:52:595 (1) - 
14:39 Geronimaa: shape 02:07:970 (5) - 
14:39 Geronimaa: flow 02:09:095 (6,7) - 
14:39 Geronimaa: shape 02:12:095 (9) - 
14:40 Geronimaa: flow 02:13:595 (1,2) - 
14:40 Geronimaa: overlap 02:15:095 (1,3) - 
14:40 Geronimaa: and 02:16:970 (3) -  shape
14:40 Geronimaa: overlap 02:20:720 (3,5) - 
14:40 Geronimaa: overlap
14:40 Geronimaa: 02:27:095 (4,6) - 
14:40 Geronimaa: shape 02:29:345 (6) - 
14:41 Geronimaa: overlap 02:32:720 (3,4) - 
14:41 Geronimaa: improve shape 02:34:595 (5) - 
14:41 Geronimaa: this shape is fine
14:41 Geronimaa: like difficulty wise
14:41 Geronimaa: just make it prettier and symmetric
14:41 NazuSan: okay :D
14:41 Geronimaa: overlap 03:12:845 (3,1) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: correct spacing 03:28:595 (1,2) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: spacing 03:30:095 (1,2) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: shape 03:31:970 (4) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: overlap 03:31:595 (3,5) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: make a triangle 03:31:595 (3,4,5) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: shape 03:37:595 (1) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: shape 03:39:095 (3) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: shape 03:40:595 (1) - 
14:42 Geronimaa: no stacking 03:41:720 (2,4) - 
14:43 Geronimaa: well
14:43 Geronimaa: quite intensive mod :D
14:43 Geronimaa: do you want other diffs as well?
14:44 NazuSan: definitely insane xD
14:44 Geronimaa: ok
14:44 *Geronimaa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717552 S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This [Nightcore]]
14:44 Geronimaa: it is then
14:44 NazuSan: yes
14:49 Geronimaa: ghmm
14:49 Geronimaa: this should be mapped
14:49 NazuSan: ? :s
14:49 Geronimaa: jsut go from start of the song
14:50 Geronimaa: put the speed on 25%
14:50 Geronimaa: and listen
14:50 Geronimaa: places where you dont have notes
14:50 Geronimaa: but there is still sound
14:50 Geronimaa: those need to be mapped
14:50 Geronimaa: i can  give you few examples
14:50 Geronimaa: 00:13:876 (4) - 
14:50 Geronimaa: 00:14:251 (6) - 
14:50 Geronimaa: 00:14:626 - 
14:50 Geronimaa: 00:15:376 - 
14:50 Geronimaa: 00:15:751 - 
14:50 Geronimaa: 00:16:033 - 
14:50 Geronimaa: 00:16:126 - 
14:50 Geronimaa: well
14:51 Geronimaa: this song is composed mainly of triples
14:52 Geronimaa: do you understand me?
14:52 Geronimaa: oh shit
14:52 NazuSan: but maybe its a little bit too hary if I consider all of them :/
14:52 Geronimaa: hmm
14:52 Geronimaa: bakari mapped nightcore version of this song
14:52 Geronimaa: its pretty much the same
14:52 Geronimaa: you can get your inspiration from there
14:52 Geronimaa: you want it?
14:52 NazuSan: yeah pls send a link o:
14:53 Geronimaa: its deleted 
14:53 Geronimaa: ill upload it
14:53 Geronimaa: wait
14:53 NazuSan: kk
14:55 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/iscGu/d3541b9caf.osz
14:55 Geronimaa: and fyi
14:55 NazuSan: lol whats that? xD
14:55 Geronimaa: what?
14:56 NazuSan: just random symbols xD
14:56 Geronimaa: you cant downlaod it or what?
14:57 NazuSan: no it opens a tab with a text composed of symbols i've never seen before xD
14:57 Geronimaa: hmm
14:57 NazuSan: which browser do you use?
14:57 Geronimaa: chrome
14:57 Geronimaa: btu wait
14:58 NazuSan: ?
14:58 Geronimaa: ill send you rar file
14:59 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/iscSx/5560e77d55.rar
14:59 NazuSan: works ;)
14:59 Geronimaa: alright
15:00 Geronimaa: also
15:00 Geronimaa: get rid of these sliders 01:57:095 (9) - 
15:00 Geronimaa: use this pattern more 01:59:908 (1,2) - 
15:00 Geronimaa: you know what
15:00 Geronimaa: if i write S
15:00 Geronimaa: it means shape ok :D?
15:00 Geronimaa: 00:14:908 (7) - S
15:00 NazuSan: kk xD
15:01 Geronimaa: 00:17:908 (6) - 
15:01 Geronimaa: S
15:01 Geronimaa: decrease spacing here 00:21:283 (2,3,4) - 
15:01 Geronimaa: 00:22:595 (8) - S
15:01 Geronimaa: 00:32:720 (6) S
15:01 Geronimaa: 00:39:095 (3) - S
15:02 Geronimaa: 00:40:595 (1) - S
15:02 Geronimaa: 00:41:345 (2) - this shape is quite interesting and fine
15:02 Geronimaa: 00:53:345 (3) - S
15:02 Geronimaa: 00:55:970 (3) - S
15:03 Geronimaa: get rid of these sliders 01:22:595 (2,3) - 
15:03 Geronimaa: uset his pattern a LOT 01:27:095 (1,2,3) - 
15:03 Geronimaa: this is by far best pattern in your map
15:03 Geronimaa: like not in note placement
15:03 Geronimaa: but by stackign that second note on top of slider
15:03 Geronimaa: this is even better xample 01:27:845 (4,5,6) - 
15:04 Geronimaa: 02:02:345 (3) - S
15:04 Geronimaa: 02:14:908 (6) - S
15:04 Geronimaa: 02:17:908 (1) - S
15:05 Geronimaa: 03:11:345 (4) - S
15:05 Geronimaa: 03:14:345 (6) -  S
15:05 Geronimaa: 03:20:345 (3) - S
15:06 Geronimaa:  03:40:595 (5) - S
15:06 Geronimaa: 03:41:345 (7) - S
15:06 NazuSan: seems that I'll have something to do... xD
15:06 Geronimaa: :D
15:06 Geronimaa: yea
15:06 Geronimaa: well tahts it
15:07 Geronimaa: nice SB by the way
15:07 Geronimaa: all from me
15:07 NazuSan: thanks :) was hard work for me :D
15:07 NazuSan: (the SB)
15:07 Geronimaa: seems that way
15:07 Geronimaa: even map
15:07 Geronimaa: seems like you have put some effort in it
15:08 Geronimaa: thats good
15:08 Geronimaa: improve

Nice work, gl
NazuSan
89 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
NazuSan
I think I'll have something to do for the next time :)
But thanks to -Nya- and Geronimaa!!
You mods will help me to improve this map much more :)


I'll answer this thread if all is done ;)
MetaPixel
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Joined August 2013
MetaPixel
what happen to insane diff? why it was deleted? :(
NazuSan
89 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
NazuSan
Update 2.0 :D


Well.... It was hard work but I finally upgraded all difficulties

sometimes I had to find some compromises on the latest mods but I think this map is definitely better now :)
In the "Nightcore" diff I've tried to consider the most of the trippletts the song is composed of so it gets a bit harder :lol:
additionally I've added costume hitsounds :) and edited the storyboard :D

Hopefully you'll like my new mapset ^-^

@MetaPixel:
The old "Insane" diff was in my eyes not really accurate so I remapped it :) please take a look at the "Nightcore" diff but it's a bit harder than the former "Insane" ;)

I'm looking forward to the next mods :)
Person
104 posts
Joined November 2012
Person
Hello there~
Nice song xD

~General~
Starting timing point should be moved to 00:13:595 - since no notes are being played here for any of the diffs
Remove the inherited point at 03:47:345 -
You can use the approach circles to help guide you when you blanket sliders and circles. Just match up the edge of the slider with the line of the approach circle. ;D
Also, this is a good read to know where and when to place stuff and combos
Generally, it's better to map the background drum beats or other instruments rather vocals since vocals can provide strange and awkward timings and note placements
~Easy~
00:15:845 (3) - Blanket this slider around 00:14:720 (2) -
00:23:345 (1) - A little close to the previous slider, move it out a little
00:27:470 (3) - Move the start of the slider down a little and the end over to the left so that the slider matches the shape of the previous one
00:33:845 (3) - Rotate by 2 degrees for better blanket
00:33:845 (3) - Add a circle here for the song's kick
00:51:095 (2,1) - Move one of these so that the 1st part of the 1st slider can blanket the second
01:13:220 - Maybe a hit circle here where 01:13:595 (1) - is
01:19:595 (1) - Move the end to the right slightly
01:25:595 (1) - Slightly more curve
01:27:095 (3,4) - Fix blanket (but see below)
01:25:595 (1,2,3,4,1) - Song suggests 01:28:220 (1) - to start on 01:28:595 - Consider moving 01:27:470 (4,1) - forward in the song and adding a hit circle at 01:27:470 - (You may need to adjust other parts such as reducing the number of hit circles at 01:30:845 (3,4) - )
01:28:220 (1) - Make a wider curve to blanket 01:30:095 (2) - better
01:39:470 (3) - Move slightly to the left
01:49:595 (1) - Fix blanket of the 1st part of the slider
01:49:595 (1) - Add a hit circle
01:52:595 (1,3) - Fix blanket slightly
01:55:220 (4) - Change to 2 Hit circles and place new combo on 01:55:220 (4) -
02:00:095 - Add a hit circle
02:00:095 - Consider curving it to something like this
02:07:220 (4) - Change to 2 Hit circles and place new combo on 02:07:220 (4) -
02:09:095 (2,3,4,5) - Blanket these a little better, they look a little off
02:16:220 (4) - Move to the right slightly
02:16:595 (1,2) - Fix blanket
02:19:595 (1,2) - ^
02:19:595 (1,2) - Add hit circle
02:30:845 (3) - Move left slightly
02:31:220 (4,1) - Fix Blanket
02:35:908 (1) - Start spinner at 02:36:095 -
02:56:345 (2,3) - Fix Blanket
03:03:095 (3) - I suggest making the repeating slider shorter (to end at 03:03:845 - ) and adding a hit circle at 03:04:220 -
03:04:970 (2) - Move up slightly
03:08:345 (2,3) - Fix Blanket
03:10:595 (1) - Rotate by -2 degrees
03:15:845 (4) - Slider shouldn't repeat and should end on 03:16:220 - Add circles/sliders after with a new combo on 03:16:595 -
03:18:845 (3) - Shorten to end on 03:19:595 -
03:26:720 - Add circle
03:28:595 (1,2) - Fix blanket at the end of the
03:36:095 (5,6) - Maybe switch around the circle's and the slider's time and move them accordingly
03:41:720 (2) - Consider moving or fixing the blanket
03:42:095 (3,4) - Fix blanket
03:46:970 - Extend Spinner to here
~Normal~
00:24:095 (4) - More upwards
00:26:533 - Add a hit circle maybe and move 00:26:720 (3) - from being stacked
00:28:970 (2) - Maybe instead, duplicate 00:28:595 (1) -
00:34:595 (1) - Repeating slider suggested like 00:34:970 (2) - Consider rearranging
00:42:470 (3) - Move down slightly
00:42:845 (4,1) - Fix Blanket
00:45:095 (3,4) - ^
00:49:595 (1,2) - ^
00:50:345 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:470 (4,5) - ^
01:16:595 (5) - New combo
01:16:970 (6) - Move to 368,292
01:17:345 (7) - Move to 456,228
01:19:595 (1) - End spinner at 01:22:220 -
01:26:720 (3,4) - Make into a repeating slider
01:29:720 (3) - Angle up more
01:30:095 (4,5) - Fix Blanket
01:32:345 (2,3) - Change into circle>slider like 01:29:345 (2,3) -
01:36:095 (4) - Make end of slider horizontal to match 01:36:845 (5) -
01:38:345 (2,3,4) - Make into something like 01:26:345 (2,3,4) - it's to keep the clicking/tapping pattern consistent
01:43:220 (7) - Angle in more
01:51:470 (5) - Move down slightly to make 01:50:345 (3,4,5,6) - to make into a straight line
01:53:345 (2,4) - Fix blanket
02:04:595 (1,2) - ^
02:07:970 (1,2,3) - Consider spacing it out without stacks
02:14:720 (4) - Hit circle suggested
02:14:908 (5,6,7) - Fix blanket. Use approach circle at 02:15:470 - as a guide
02:14:158 (2,3) - Remove and place a hit circle where 02:14:345 (3) - starts
02:20:158 (2) - Make a repeating slider that extends to 02:20:533 -
02:21:095 (4,5) - Replace with repeating slide that goes to 02:21:658 -
02:22:970 (2,3,4,1) - Fix Square
02:25:595 (4,5) - Make same angle
02:34:595 (3) - Fix slider to be symmetrical
02:35:908 (1) - Start spinner at 02:36:095 -
02:51:845 (5) - Don't do repeating sliders like this, they aren't very intuitive based on the music. Consider make them separate sliders (like 02:25:595 (4,5,6) - ) or something similar
02:55:595 (1,2) - One long slider might be better
02:57:845 (6) - Same as 02:51:845 (5) -
03:03:845 (6,1) - ^
03:12:845 (6) - One repeat
03:13:970 (2,3) - Fix blanket
03:15:845 (6,1) - " " (03:03:845 (6,1) -)
03:19:970 - Hit circle suggested
03:24:283 (1) - Start on 03:24:470 -
03:25:970 - Hit circle suggested
03:30:095 (4) - Maybe make the 1st part of the slider slightly more curvy
03:33:095 (3,1) - Consider blanketing these too
03:39:095 (4,5) - Fix blanket
03:39:845 (5,2) - ^
03:40:970 (2,3) - ^
03:46:970 - End slider here
Good luck~ :D
Draftnell
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Joined October 2013
Draftnell
didn't try rank this ?

this map seems like ready for rank o/
NazuSan
89 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
NazuSan
I don't have motivation to push this forward atm. Maybe I will try ranking this once but not now.

Edit: Great news! For more information read the first post :'D

Edit2: The map is back again :3
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