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Iguchi Yuka - Waikyou - Senshou Jing

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Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Wintermute
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, December 16, 2015 at 7:15:57 PM

Artist: Iguchi Yuka
Title: Waikyou - Senshou Jing
Source: Senki Zesshō Symphogear G
Tags: Miku Kohinata Symphogear
BPM: 160
Filesize: 6628kb
Play Time: 04:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Distorted Mirror (5.29 stars, 1042 notes)
  2. Hard (3.22 stars, 605 notes)
  3. Insane (4.56 stars, 924 notes)
  4. Normal (2.16 stars, 455 notes)
Download: Iguchi Yuka - Waikyou - Senshou Jing
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Time for mods, yay~!

Updates forever.
Last edited by Wintermute , edited 84 times in total.
FMEillusion
1 post
Joined March 2014
FMEillusion
I think you should change the heart sliders into a spinner imo, i feel like its too long of a slider and a spinner would be perfect place for it. But overall i think its a fun song, granted im not the best player out there but, still a great. There are other iffy parts towards the ending as well.
Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Wintermute

FMEillusion wrote:

I think you should change the heart sliders into a spinner imo, i feel like its too long of a slider and a spinner would be perfect place for it. But overall i think its a fun song, granted im not the best player out there but, still a great. There are other iffy parts towards the ending as well.

I've tried going both ways with it, but the spinner felt funny with the vocals carrying. I wanted the spinners to work, but they just didn't feel right. ;_;
Alheak
910 posts
Joined November 2013
Alheak
o/

[General]
  1. Put 歪鏡・シェンショウジン in the title metadata
  2. Put 井口 裕香 in the artist metadata
  3. I don't think you need a countdown here, uncheck it, same for letterboxes imo
  4. Find a 1366x768 bg but you already know that :3
  5. .mp3's bitrate is okay I guess but if you can find a 192kbps one it'd be better
  6. 01:24:603 - Why stop kiai here? It's still kiai, plus resnap your timing section so it's on the beat
  7. 02:48:603 - Same
  8. 03:18:603 - This isn't kiai, or if you want kiai anyway, it should last until 03:30:603 -
  9. As previously stated, resnap your sections on their corresponding beats
  10. 01:18:603 - Timing -> Set current position as preview point?
[Insane]

  • Reduce the volume everywhere by ~20%, it's really too loud
    I dont know if you're using Compose -> Convert slider to stream but try to abuse it, also listen to the song to know where you should increase SV in the stream, for example:
    SPOILER
    This can make some really good looking streams, which are also very fun to play

    00:17:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - I think this stream isn't really justified, I know there's a weird sound behind in 1/8 but a spinner or just ignoring it would fit better imo
    00:19:353 (5,6) - You have quite a lot of energy coming from the jumps just before, and this DS just kinda breaks it, plus you could make a nice circular flow with by just ctrl+g (5) or (6). Here's a suggestion:
    SPOILER
    As you can see, place (5) so it makes a blanket with 00:20:103 (1) - , improve the blanket, ctrl+g it, and do the same with (6) and (4), just don't ctrl+g this time
    00:20:103 (1,2,3,4) -
    00:20:103 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure this pattern plays well, the DS between (1) and (2) is too small and breaks the flow. Or if you wanna keep this DS I'd suggest making a square pattern instead:
    SPOILER
    Or for a jumpier one:
    SPOILER
    00:30:603 (1) -
    SPOILER
    :3
    SPOILER
    osu file format v14

    [General]
    AudioFilename: Waikyou Shenshoujin.mp3
    AudioLeadIn: 0
    PreviewTime: -1
    Countdown: 1
    SampleSet: Normal
    StackLeniency: 0.7
    Mode: 0
    LetterboxInBreaks: 1
    WidescreenStoryboard: 1

    [Editor]
    Bookmarks: 6574,18574,24040,31728,32103,98119,198573,210573,225631,228573,240573,255631,264630,276573
    DistanceSpacing: 0.8
    BeatDivisor: 4
    GridSize: 8
    TimelineZoom: 1.9

    [Metadata]
    Title:Waikyou-Senshou Jing
    TitleUnicode:Waikyou-Senshou Jing
    Artist:Iguchi Yuka
    ArtistUnicode:Iguchi Yuka
    Creator:neveragainagain
    Version:heart
    Source:Symphogear
    Tags:
    BeatmapID:0
    BeatmapSetID:299681

    [Difficulty]
    HPDrainRate:6
    CircleSize:4
    OverallDifficulty:7
    ApproachRate:9.3
    SliderMultiplier:1.4
    SliderTickRate:1

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"song-bg temp.jpg",0,0
    //Break Periods
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples

    [TimingPoints]
    603.292119621445,375,4,1,0,100,1,0
    17126,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    24603,-50,4,1,0,100,0,0
    25165,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    30603,-114.942528735632,4,1,0,100,0,0
    33978,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,85,0,0
    45603,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    62049,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    62426,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
    63603,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    65103,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
    67353,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    69550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    78550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
    84550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    90603,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
    96550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    98103,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,100,0,0
    98478,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    98853,-50,4,1,0,100,0,0
    99603,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    114596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,80,0,0
    129596,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    153081,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    155103,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
    155846,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
    162542,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
    168550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    174550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
    180550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    182096,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
    182103,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,100,0,0
    182478,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    182853,-50,4,1,0,100,0,0
    183603,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    189603,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
    189603,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
    197103,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    198550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
    202300,-50,4,1,0,100,0,1
    203050,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
    204550,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    205300,-50,4,1,0,100,0,0
    206050,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    207550,-50,4,1,0,100,0,0
    209050,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    210603,-100,4,2,0,90,0,0
    219603,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    222603,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
    228596,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,85,0,0
    239096,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    248103,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
    248478,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
    248853,-50,4,1,0,100,0,0
    249603,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0


    [HitObjects]
    256,352,32103,6,0,B|313:173|544:315|447:-70|256:83|256:83|70:-62|-21:277|176:201|231:309,1,974.40000817749
    Just create a new .osu file, put this code inside, open this diff in the editor and copy/paste the heart to your diff via File -> Open Difficulty, if you like it ofc. Also change the section 00:30:509 - to 00:30:603 - and change the SV to x0.87.

    00:35:103 (1,2,4) - those circles are badly stacked (also recheck your map for stacks like those, there are quite a lot)
    00:44:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Same as earlier
    01:09:228 (6,7) - Invert them for a better flow with 01:09:603 (1) -
    01:26:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - How about this (for flow and shit):
    SPOILER
    (4) is stacked with (1)
    01:34:728 (5,6) - invert them for better flow
    01:37:915 (4) - i hate this ;_;
    01:41:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - invert it
    02:13:353 (2) - ctrl+g?
    02:50:853 (3) - and 02:51:228 (4) - ^ (one by one, not the two at once)
    02:54:509 (10,1) - You shouldn't stack those imo
    02:56:103 (1) - just ctrl+h for epic flow
    02:58:728 (5,6,7) - heh (feels a little out of nowhere imo, plus the flow doesn't help)
    03:27:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    04:10:165 (3) - ctrl+g and ctrl+j for flow
    04:35:853 (5,6) - DS pls
Alright, that should be it for now, I haven't mentionned everything though, I want you to understand some of the things (about flow and such) I reported so you can spot yourself the nazi things in your map (you can call it lazyness too).

Your mapping has greatly improved tho, it's nice to see, good luck
ddfgit
113 posts
Joined April 2015
ddfgit
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS HERE DOING?
delete it or riot
Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Wintermute

ddfgit wrote:

WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS HERE DOING?
delete it or riot

Oh yeah, I sorta forgot about that... :? Fixed.
Cyllinus
196 posts
Joined March 2013
Cyllinus
HELLO! for some reason distorted mirror shows up before normal and hard

[Distorted Mirror]
00:29:853 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Try using 'convert slider to stream' (ctrl+shift+f) to make this look cleaner. You need to make a slider shape first.
00:47:103 (1,2,3) - You can improve this pattern by using 'rotate by'(ctrl+shift+r). First duplicate 00:47:103 (1) then rotate it by 120. repeat for (3). You can make shapes by using this equation (360 / # of sides), and rotating objects by the number you get. Here is a video.
01:08:853 (1) - Maybe extend this slider to the white tick? If you do then lower the slider velocity.
01:38:853 (1) - ^
02:32:853 (1) - ^
03:02:853 (1) - ^
04:08:853 (1) - ^
02:01:915 (4,1) - turn this into a slider
02:44:103 (1,2,3,4) - this is different from the first kiai
02:52:165 (3) - extend to the next red tick
02:53:103 (1) - turn this into a 1/1 slider and do something like
this
03:01:353 (3) - reposition this somewhere lower, because it could be confusing to play
Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Wintermute

Cyllinus wrote:

HELLO! for some reason distorted mirror shows up before normal and hard

[Distorted Mirror]
00:29:853 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Try using 'convert slider to stream' (ctrl+shift+f) to make this look cleaner. You need to make a slider shape first.
00:47:103 (1,2,3) - You can improve this pattern by using 'rotate by'(ctrl+shift+r). First duplicate 00:47:103 (1) then rotate it by 120. repeat for (3). You can make shapes by using this equation (360 / # of sides), and rotating objects by the number you get. Here is a video.
01:08:853 (1) - Maybe extend this slider to the white tick? If you do then lower the slider velocity.
01:38:853 (1) - ^
02:32:853 (1) - ^
03:02:853 (1) - ^
04:08:853 (1) - ^
02:01:915 (4,1) - turn this into a slider
02:44:103 (1,2,3,4) - this is different from the first kiai
02:52:165 (3) - extend to the next red tick
02:53:103 (1) - turn this into a 1/1 slider and do something like
this
03:01:353 (3) - reposition this somewhere lower, because it could be confusing to play

AHHH. I-it's Cyllinus-sama :? Thanks. :3

And yeah, I'm not exactly sure why that's happening either, nor do I know how to adjust it.
ddfgit
113 posts
Joined April 2015
ddfgit
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Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Wintermute

ddfgit wrote:

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I agree!
ddfgit
113 posts
Joined April 2015
ddfgit

Wintermute wrote:

ddfgit wrote:

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I agree!
Seni
713 posts
Joined August 2014
Seni
Hi o/

Mod from my qeueue.

Distorted Mirror


00:18:603 to 00:30:603 - This part has larger spacing than kiai even though the music is much more lively in kiai.

00:25:353 (5,6) - Spacing randomly way larger than that of other jumps without the music changing at all.
00:25:540 (6,7) - Spacing randomly less than half that of other jumps without the music changing at all.

00:33:978 to 00:42:228 - For this slow part I suggest using distance snap since the spacing you used makes it quite confusing.

00:57:603 (1) - If this is supposed to be a blanket tidy it up a bit.

02:59:103 (1) - Same as above

03:31:353 (4) - 03:32:853 (5) - 03:34:353 (4) - You use these to emphasize the snare, but on 03:35:853 (5) - there is no such sound.

04:12:415 (15,16,1,2,3,4) - This is pretty ridiculous since the music doesn't change whatsoever. It's just overmapping and trying to make the map harder instead of following the music.

There are lots of beats unmapped for no reason, which makes the flow really weird at some places. For example:
02:52:353 - 01:28:540 - 03:11:290 The sound on these ticks is exactly the same as the ones you've mapped, but you left them unmapped for no reason.

Also generally the spacing often changes randomly with no correlation to the music.

Normal


Can't mod Normal since it has too many AiMod errors. + You might want to make it a tad bit easier because the game recognizes it as a hard.

Hope my mod helps. GL :)
Acme Deizd Void
64 posts
Joined March 2013
Acme Deizd Void
Oh YASS...Osu needs more Symphogear ! ! !
I will try to mod this once I'm free(most likely on weekend), hope this one will get ranked
Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Wintermute

Acme Deizd Void wrote:

Oh YASS...Osu needs more Symphogear ! ! !
I will try to mod this once I'm free(most likely on weekend), hope this one will get ranked
OH wow, thank you! <3 :)
Acme Deizd Void
64 posts
Joined March 2013
Acme Deizd Void
Okay...time to mod /o/
Few words about my modding
I did some modding for my friends back then but I didn't actually make any modding reply so this one is could be choppy and some are my personal preferences plus I'm still an amateur so..... .-.

Normal + Hard
Normal:
02:09:603 - check the distance spacing for better flow
Hard:
Make it to HP6 or 5.5 or around the neighbor instead of 5

Insane

01:41:494 to 01:41:681- the disconnected stream fits with the flow of the song but i'm not sure for some players
03:17:681 to 03:18:619- the first part of the deathstream is too close(from 1 to 9) (also it would be also confusing if you overlay in the same note all over for 9 beat) , consider spreading it a little bit
01:07:353 - timing is off the beat

Distorted Mirror
00:44:119 to 00:44:494 - distance spacing is a bit longer than the previous beat
00:45:431 - The small slider disrupts the flow
03:17:665 - timing is off the beat
04:16:369 to 04:16:556 - those 2 beat are too closes for spacing

There are when you tries deathstream(regular stream then spaced one with slider at the end). I like that, but just don't reuse it too many times, which will make players easily get bored.
The same with the lengthy sliders too (2 hearts and distorted heart idk how's it called xd).

Hope this will help :D
Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Wintermute

Acme Deizd Void wrote:

Okay...time to mod /o/
Few words about my modding
I did some modding for my friends back then but I didn't actually make any modding reply so this one is could be choppy and some are my personal preferences plus I'm still an amateur so..... .-.

Normal + Hard
Normal:
02:09:603 - check the distance spacing for better flow
Hard:
Make it to HP6 or 5.5 or around the neighbor instead of 5

Insane

01:41:494 to 01:41:681- the disconnected stream fits with the flow of the song but i'm not sure for some players
03:17:681 to 03:18:619- the first part of the deathstream is too close(from 1 to 9) (also it would be also confusing if you overlay in the same note all over for 9 beat) , consider spreading it a little bit
01:07:353 - timing is off the beat

Distorted Mirror
00:44:119 to 00:44:494 - distance spacing is a bit longer than the previous beat
00:45:431 - The small slider disrupts the flow
03:17:665 - timing is off the beat
04:16:369 to 04:16:556 - those 2 beat are too closes for spacing

There are when you tries deathstream(regular stream then spaced one with slider at the end). I like that, but just don't reuse it too many times, which will make players easily get bored.
The same with the lengthy sliders too (2 hearts and distorted heart idk how's it called xd).

Hope this will help :D


Thank you! Admittedly I'm skipping over the Hard and Normal for now because I still haven't actually mapped them to the new offset yet the way I want to. :? Admittedly I don't like re-using the long sliders either (the one was an attempt at a butterfly that didn't go too well :| ), but there's really nothing else to do during that timing section. Spinners feel really awkward during it in my opinion. The same sort of logic applies to where I'm stuck reusing the longer streams. The stream at 03:17:681 was intentionally made more closer than the rest of it-- I think it's fun to have a stream that kickstarts like that.

And as for the timing points, oops. I thought I had them all fixed :o
Sylvette
332 posts
Joined July 2015
Sylvette
:3

A few words about my modding
A lot of ^s in the final difficulty.
Normal

I'm horrible at modding normals so I'll just leave you with that...
Hard

You really should check AiMod more often.
00:16:181 (2) - Overmapped.
00:37:744 (3) - ^
01:57:431 (5) - ^
Maybe add a hitcircle at 01:42:431
00:34:744 (2) - Should be moved one space to the right in timeline, so that it is at 00:34:931 and if you do this, move it closer to the next slider.
00:41:119 (1) - Should be moved one space to the left in timeline, so that it is at 00:40:931 and if you do this, move it farther from the next slider.
00:40:931 (1) - Maybe make this slider longer? It sounds sort of weird in my opinion.

Idk
Distorted Mirror
00:08:119 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks kind of strange in my opinion. Maybe could be changed.
00:18:619 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:15:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
02:20:494 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:24:994 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:39:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
02:54:994 (2,3,4,5) - ^
03:45:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
04:00:994 (6,7,8,9) - ^
04:02:119 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:27:994 (2,3,4,5) - ^
04:29:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
04:32:494 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
04:33:994 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:06:619 (1) - Slider looks a bit strange, should be more curved in my opinion.
00:55:744 (6) - ^
01:06:619 (1,2) - ^
03:09:619 (1) - ^
03:23:869 (9,10) - ^
03:41:869 (3) - ^
04:00:619 (5) - ^
04:01:744 (10) - ^
00:28:744 (6) - Curve should be removed in my opinion.
01:19:556 (5) - ^
01:26:119 (1) - ^
01:26:869 (1) - ^
01:27:619 (1) - ^
04:16:556 (5,7) - These anti-jumps should be turned into jumps in my opinion.
You should either make 04:31:556 (5) - closer to 04:31:931 (7) - or 04:31:744 (6) - farther from 04:31:369 (4) -
I couldn't really find anything wrong with insane diff, maybe it was just that good, or maybe my eyes and ears are broken.
I really hope this mod helped at least a tiny bit.
Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Wintermute

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

:3

A few words about my modding
A lot of ^s in the final difficulty.
Normal

I'm horrible at modding normals so I'll just leave you with that...
Hard

You really should check AiMod more often.
00:16:181 (2) - Overmapped.
00:37:744 (3) - ^
01:57:431 (5) - ^
Maybe add a hitcircle at 01:42:431
00:34:744 (2) - Should be moved one space to the right in timeline, so that it is at 00:34:931 and if you do this, move it closer to the next slider.
00:41:119 (1) - Should be moved one space to the left in timeline, so that it is at 00:40:931 and if you do this, move it farther from the next slider.
00:40:931 (1) - Maybe make this slider longer? It sounds sort of weird in my opinion.

Idk
Distorted Mirror
00:08:119 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks kind of strange in my opinion. Maybe could be changed.
00:18:619 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:15:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
02:20:494 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:24:994 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:39:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
02:54:994 (2,3,4,5) - ^
03:45:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
04:00:994 (6,7,8,9) - ^
04:02:119 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:27:994 (2,3,4,5) - ^
04:29:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
04:32:494 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
04:33:994 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:06:619 (1) - Slider looks a bit strange, should be more curved in my opinion.
00:55:744 (6) - ^
01:06:619 (1,2) - ^
03:09:619 (1) - ^
03:23:869 (9,10) - ^
03:41:869 (3) - ^
04:00:619 (5) - ^
04:01:744 (10) - ^
00:28:744 (6) - Curve should be removed in my opinion.
01:19:556 (5) - ^
01:26:119 (1) - ^
01:26:869 (1) - ^
01:27:619 (1) - ^
04:16:556 (5,7) - These anti-jumps should be turned into jumps in my opinion.
You should either make 04:31:556 (5) - closer to 04:31:931 (7) - or 04:31:744 (6) - farther from 04:31:369 (4) -
I couldn't really find anything wrong with insane diff, maybe it was just that good, or maybe my eyes and ears are broken.
I really hope this mod helped at least a tiny bit.

Ugh, timing points always. I was super lazy with my Hard diff so it's probably the worst :?
A lot of the stuff in Distorted Mirror was a matter of personal aesthetic, but I agree some of them needed to be tweaked.
JuanCR2912
37 posts
Joined April 2015
JuanCR2912
hello, I will try to mod you

Basic
You need to lower the difficulty in Normal difficult because The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars according to the rules. if not, it will be hard to get this map ranked


:) I hope I've helped even just a Little :)
RVMathew
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Joined December 2013
RVMathew
Hi there. 6 months ago you posted a NM request in my queue t/336458/start=60. Here I am 6 months later with a mod.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say. I will not mod the last difficulty as my speed has gone down the drain.

General
1) 04:00:619 No kiai. This here is a chorus, so I would assume adding kiai here would make sense.

Normal
1) 00:11:494 (1,2) - Not aligned properly. Shift 2 to (56, 328)

2) 00:19:369 (3) - Why not make this slider a smooth curve? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4342701 The advantage of the new shape is that 00:19:369 (3,1,2,3) looks a lot better compared to before; the slider ended too close to note 2 which looked bad in my opinion.

3) 00:24:244 (4) - No whistle in the sliderbody? I assume this was an oversight.

4) 00:26:119 (1,2,3) - These notes have different distances so it looks quite weird. And note 2 has some overlap with 00:25:369 (2) which does not look good.

5) 00:29:119 (1,2,3) - Align this properly.
- Note 2: Shift to (456,158)

6) 01:16:744 (3,1) - Considering the previous notes, this here seems like bad flow, and the overlap makes it look worse imo.
- Applies to 02:40:744 (3,1) and 03:46:744 (3,1).

Hard
1) 00:12:619 (1,2) - Not aligned properly. Shift 2 to (152,131)
- Applies to 00:14:119 (1,2,3) - I think

2) 00:21:994 (2,4) - I would try and tuck 4 underneath 2 like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4342808 It looks better.

3) 00:23:119 (1,2,3) - Different distances. I would have them all at 1.1x distance apart.

4) 00:50:119 (1,2,3) - You can try a zig zag type of pattern like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4342813 (Actually an irregular zig zag)

5) 00:59:119 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps 3 and 4 can be further apart: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4342822

6) 01:02:869 (3,4) - Make them parallel.

7) 01:15:619, 01:16:369, 01:17:119 and 01:17:869. I was thinking here add timing points, with each successive timing point having a 3-5% increase in volume, to have a build up effect. The music also builds up in volume so it does reflect that.
- Applies to: 02:39:619 onwards.

8) 02:50:119 (1,2) - Make it the same shape.

Other parts of the map may have the same issues I have mentioned above. In terms of rhythm, this map is very good. I like this difficulty.

Insane
1) 00:20:119 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe make a star pattern or 00:20:119 (1,2,3,4) a square pattern to spice up the beatmap?

2) 01:06:619 (1,2) - I am curious as to why note 2 is weirdly placed after note 1?

3) 01:08:119 (1,1) - Silence the sliderends to emphasize the vocals.
- Applies to 01:38:119 (1,1) -
- Applies to 02:32:119 (1,1) -
- Applies to 02:50:119 (1,1,1,1) -
- Applies to 03:02:119 (1,1) -
- Applies to 03:38:119 (1,1) -
- Applies to 04:08:119 (1,1) -


4) 01:20:119 (1) - Why does this note have a very low volume?

Hitsounding
Hitsounding feels different across the diffs. I would just use the hitsounds copier tool to copy the hitsounds from one diff to another, to have consistent histounds.

Final thoughts
While the beatmap set is rhythmically fine, the aesthetics are a different story. I did like the hard difficulty though.

Good luck and sorry for replying 6 months later.
Sylvette
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Joined July 2015
Sylvette
Resurrect please
Acme Deizd Void
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Joined March 2013
Acme Deizd Void
*Edited:

I might be wrong but I saw this BM just got qualified for a few sec.
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