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Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Yuriyurarararayuruyu...

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Moo-Chan
405 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 10, 2024 at 12:37:28 AM

Artist: Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu
Title: Yuriyurarararayuruyuri Daijiken
Source: ゆるゆり
Tags: yuru yuri op opening fizz rizia p_a_n 2015 oldmap loli anime cute short japanese anime
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3584kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2015) (1.56 stars, 108 notes)
  2. Fizz's Normal (2015) (2.09 stars, 160 notes)
  3. P A N's Light Insane (2015) (4.5 stars, 320 notes)
  4. Rizia's Hard (2015) (3.63 stars, 272 notes)
  5. Yuri (2015) (5.15 stars, 376 notes)
  6. Yuriyuri (2024) (5.57 stars, 443 notes)
Download: Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Yuriyurarararayuruyuri Daijiken
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Lets Go 2015 Mapping !!
Yuriyuri is new <3
Easy (2015):myself
Normal (2015):Fizz
Hard (2015):Rizia
Light Insane (2015):P A N
Yuri (2015):myself
Yuriyuri (2024):myself


The two amazing BN's
BN1~
BN2~



Ready for ranking~!
Last edited by Moo-Chan , edited 67 times in total.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
http://puu.sh/h2c5C/91dce47d72.rar
hard
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz
not quite first but still
kds please
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
from pm
no kds
Moo-Chan
405 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

Ringating wrote:

from pm
no kds
Thanks (:
Arphimigon
1,650 posts
Joined December 2014
Arphimigon
YuruYuri returns!

[Easy]
This feels like a hard normal wtf based star system
00:16:279 (2,1,2,1) - I think this is a tad hard for an easy *based star system skipping slider ends* esp the curve from 00:17:308 (2,1) -
00:17:994 (1,3) - Never a fan of start and ends overlapping, but easies esp might get confused (yes I know this is a pixel overlap but it takes 1 second to fix
00:22:108 (1) - Naziblanket this on the start of 2 better pls
00:39:937 (1) - I can see why this slider was done so but honestly it looks ugly, move the second point down left a little?
00:42:679 (1) - ... ^
01:08:737 (1,2,3) - The law of curves say slider 3 should be more down-right and curve more up!
01:20:394 (1,3) - Fix stack

[Smug's Normal]
The second half this is one long ass stream pretty much. It feels WAY too dense for a normal and a pain for normal players, most would give up quickly imo.
00:16:622 (1,3) - Lol I see you did this on purpose but still ya know... nvrmnd its good w/e
00:26:908 (2) - Try and not overlap these starts and ends. Also the start and ends dont go over the last slider end equally, you might wanna have a look. Overall this is a weird reading section

[wykik's Hard]
Liked it except the overmap at the start
00:01:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Imo this should be mapped calmly to fit the lack of speedy instrumentals, the overmap is bad. Add this density of objects later! (yes it was mapped to instruments but imo it hardly fits)
00:20:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Should have a jump and NC the same as 00:15:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - but with even more emphasis!
00:26:222 (1,2,3,4) - Meh don't stack hardly fits music here
00:53:308 (3,4,1) - Fix this start into a better triangle with more consistent DS pls
01:24:508 (1,2,3,4,1) - And slight changes of DS here affect aesthetic

[PAN's Light Insane]
No words, loved it.
00:02:394 (3,4,5) - Make that like: 00:05:479 (4,5,6) -
00:34:622 (2,3,4) - Rip Stacking causes this to play badly, manually stack it to flow better?

[Lewd (Yuri)]
00:04:794 (3,1,2,3) - Should increase spacing overall similarly to the first sliders at: 00:02:051 (3,1,2,3) -
00:08:565 (3) - Similarly feels too close
00:39:422 (1,2,3,1) - Ya slider feels too close after momentum of sudden jumps
01:11:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Difficulty spike much?

...I like this.
Moo-Chan
405 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
arfimigon

Arphimigon wrote:

YuruYuri returns!

[Easy]
This feels like a hard normal wtf based star system
00:16:279 (2,1,2,1) - I think this is a tad hard for an easy *based star system skipping slider ends* esp the curve from 00:17:308 (2,1) - its not all that hard. ive seen it in other easys, so if i change these then im gonna have to change them all
00:17:994 (1,3) - Never a fan of start and ends overlapping, but easies esp might get confused (yes I know this is a pixel overlap but it takes 1 second to fix fixed
00:22:108 (1) - Naziblanket this on the start of 2 better pls ok
00:39:937 (1) - I can see why this slider was done so but honestly it looks ugly, move the second point down left a little? i like this one
00:42:679 (1) - ... ^ changed it a bit
01:08:737 (1,2,3) - The law of curves say slider 3 should be more down-right and curve more up! wot
01:20:394 (1,3) - Fix stack its not noticeable though

[Lewd (Yuri)]
00:04:794 (3,1,2,3) - Should increase spacing overall similarly to the first sliders at: 00:02:051 (3,1,2,3) - ima keep cause consistancyy
00:08:565 (3) - Similarly feels too close moved it down a bit
00:39:422 (1,2,3,1) - Ya slider feels too close after momentum of sudden jumps thats because it transitions into a slower part
01:11:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Difficulty spike much? ♥

...I like this. ;)
thanks for the mod!
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz

Arphimigon wrote:

YuruYuri returns!

[Smug's Normal]
The second half this is one long ass stream pretty much. It feels WAY too dense for a normal and a pain for normal players, most would give up quickly imo. I agree it's a little dense, I removed a few circles, but for the sake of difficulty spread I think it's fine. Besides it's not that hard to play, I remember playing maps like this just fine when I was new
00:16:622 (1,3) - Lol I see you did this on purpose but still ya know... nvrmnd its good w/e ye
00:26:908 (2) - Try and not overlap these starts and ends. Also the start and ends dont go over the last slider end equally, you might wanna have a look. Overall this is a weird reading section fixed
thanks for the mod~

update
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51422
Countdown: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Yuriyurarararayuruyuri Daijiken
TitleUnicode:ゆりゆららららゆるゆり大事件
Artist:Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu
ArtistUnicode:七森中☆ごらく部
Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:Smug's Normal
Source:ゆるゆり
Tags:yuru yuri op opening smug- kawaiwkyik p_a_n
BeatmapID:674456
BeatmapSetID:299651

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Want 2 Buy Avon
264 posts
Joined February 2014
Want 2 Buy Avon

Modding because Tori

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:879 (3,4) - This 3 kinda flows away from the 4, so you could reshape the slider to make it flow better
  2. 00:49:879 (1,1) - The fact that the slider is visable before the spinner is 100% done might be unrankable, pishi mentioned something related to it in pm to me once so I'd double check with someone
  3. 00:53:651 (3,1) - You could blanket the 1 around the follow circle of the 3
[Smug's Normal]
  1. 00:01:537 (1,3) - I'm not a fan of tiny overlaps like this :< they seem unintentional and messy
  2. 00:13:879 (1,1) - Same thing here
  3. 00:56:051 (3,2,3) - I'm not so sure about this overlap, if the slider fully disappeared before the notes I'd be ok with it but as it is now it could be confusing
  4. 01:13:365 (2) - I'm not really sure what this is mapped to tbh
  5. 01:21:765 (5,1) - You could touch up this blanket some
[wkyik's Hard]
  1. 00:35:651 (6,1) - You could make this blanket a little better near the tail of 1
  2. 01:27:594 (5) - Maybe make this a jump for the big finish
[Handome Pan's light Insane]
  1. 00:10:965 (5,6) - You could fix up this blanket
  2. 00:23:651 (2,4) - This one could be a tiny bit better too
  3. 00:25:022 (2,4) - This one too ;;
  4. 00:49:537 (1) - I feel like this slider could be more interesting ><
  5. 00:58:108 (2,3) - Blanketu
[Yuri]
  1. 00:27:937 (2,3,4,5) - I'd make these 2 sepereate stacks
  2. 00:55:022 (1) - I'd make this a little less curved so the slider head and tail don't overlap
  3. 01:19:708 (1,1) - Blanketu
Good luck getting it ranked The Tordster
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
M4M

[General]
  1. No video? You probably could ask people around to give you one.
[Yuri]
  1. Blankets such as 00:03:079 (3) - and 00:05:822 (3) - are incorrect, I suggest going over the map once more to fix such things.
  2. 00:06:508 (2) - I honestly dislike such overlaps since they're visible in-game, but they play well so I just wanted to mention them.
  3. 00:10:451 (3,4) - I think you really could emphasis the finish on 00:10:622 (4) - with a (much) larger jump. Consider this? http://puu.sh/hajap/bd5844b618.jpg
  4. 00:16:965 (1,1) - Since the slider velocity increase is so small, the NCs are pointless. You could increase the SV more per slider, to make it more interesting aswell. Furthermore, the NCs now just make the pattern confusing to play.
  5. 00:23:137 (5,6,7,8,1) - Could be a better blanket for 00:22:794 (4) - if you want to.
  6. Cool
[P A N]
  1. 00:09:422 (8) - Why does this have a different curve than 00:09:079 (7) - ? I'd suggest you to copy 00:09:079 (7) - . It's just for the sake of looks, this is quite unappealing imo.
  2. 00:28:108 (3) - Could be more symmetrical, like this. http://puu.sh/hajxU/83c1b7df61.jpg
  3. Cool
[wkyik]
  1. Neat, well done
[Smug]
  1. 00:17:308 (3) - The overlap is really, really bad, especially because the hitburst covers most of the note. That being said, I suggest you find another placement for that note.
  2. 00:33:079 (1) - Remove NC? This currently breaks your NC patterning.
  3. 00:38:565 (1) - ^?
  4. 00:55:022 (1) - The flow would feel much better if this wasn't stacked, it's kind of awkward to make a stop there imo. It'd also help players to read this pattern better.
  5. 01:05:994 (1) - ^
  6. Neat diff, nicely mapped
[Easy]
  1. The NC seems kind of random to me, like... 00:15:251 (1,2,1,2) - Why isn't this consistent with 00:12:508 (1,2,3,4) - ? Why do you have a note that's only 1 combo long @00:11:822 (1) - ? 00:20:737 (1,2,1,2) - Why isn't this consistent with 00:17:994 (1,2,3,4) - etc...
  2. 00:42:679 (1) - Curve looks sloppy... any way you could make it look neater?
  3. 00:49:879 (1,1) - There's not enough recovery time, this is unrankable. It should have AT LEAST a measure recovery time.
  4. I could've gone in detail with transitions and such, but eh.... it's fine
Cool set, didn't check any of the hitsounds and if they have a delay so you can do that yourself, gl!
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
fixed 2nd, thanks :3

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Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz

Asphyxia wrote:

[Smug]
  1. 00:17:308 (3) - The overlap is really, really bad, especially because the hitburst covers most of the note. That being said, I suggest you find another placement for that note. done
  2. 00:33:079 (1) - Remove NC? This currently breaks your NC patterning.
  3. 00:38:565 (1) - ^? both fixed
  4. 00:55:022 (1) - The flow would feel much better if this wasn't stacked, it's kind of awkward to make a stop there imo. It'd also help players to read this pattern better.
  5. 01:05:994 (1) - ^ fixed both
  6. Neat diff, nicely mapped thanks!

Xellie wrote:

[Smug's Normal]
  1. 00:01:537 (1,3) - I'm not a fan of tiny overlaps like this :< they seem unintentional and messy fixed
  2. 00:13:879 (1,1) - Same thing here I think this one is less of a problem, and I'm also having a hard time figuring out how to fix it
  3. 00:56:051 (3,2,3) - I'm not so sure about this overlap, if the slider fully disappeared before the notes I'd be ok with it but as it is now it could be confusing should be fine for now, I mean this is a 2.1 star normal
  4. 01:13:365 (2) - I'm not really sure what this is mapped to tbh It's to act as a fill/transition for the spinner
  5. 01:21:765 (5,1) - You could touch up this blanket some fixed
thanks for the mods~

updoot
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Moo-Chan
405 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
dirk

Xellie wrote:


Modding because Tori

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:879 (3,4) - This 3 kinda flows away from the 4, so you could reshape the slider to make it flow better k
  2. 00:49:879 (1,1) - The fact that the slider is visable before the spinner is 100% done might be unrankable, pishi mentioned something related to it in pm to me once so I'd double check with someone fixed
  3. 00:53:651 (3,1) - You could blanket the 1 around the follow circle of the 3 i wasnt going for a blanket
[Yuri]
  1. 00:27:937 (2,3,4,5) - I'd make these 2 sepereate stacks nein. itll mess up the pattern i have
  2. 00:55:022 (1) - I'd make this a little less curved so the slider head and tail don't overlap it looks ahhhh when its changed
  3. 01:19:708 (1,1) - Blanketu idk man
Good luck getting it ranked The Tordster
assfixia

Asphyxia wrote:

M4M

[General]
  1. No video? You probably could ask people around to give you one.
[Yuri]
  1. Blankets such as 00:03:079 (3) - and 00:05:822 (3) - are incorrect, I suggest going over the map once more to fix such things. they're so little off i dont think it makes much of a difference
  2. 00:06:508 (2) - I honestly dislike such overlaps since they're visible in-game, but they play well so I just wanted to mention them.
  3. 00:10:451 (3,4) - I think you really could emphasis the finish on 00:10:622 (4) - with a (much) larger jump. Consider this? http://puu.sh/hajap/bd5844b618.jpg ok
  4. 00:16:965 (1,1) - Since the slider velocity increase is so small, the NCs are pointless. You could increase the SV more per slider, to make it more interesting aswell. Furthermore, the NCs now just make the pattern confusing to play. got rid of the slider ncs
  5. 00:23:137 (5,6,7,8,1) - Could be a better blanket for 00:22:794 (4) - if you want to. i'll see
  6. Cool
[Easy]
  1. The NC seems kind of random to me, like... 00:15:251 (1,2,1,2) - Why isn't this consistent with 00:12:508 (1,2,3,4) - ? Why do you have a note that's only 1 combo long @00:11:822 (1) - ? 00:20:737 (1,2,1,2) - Why isn't this consistent with 00:17:994 (1,2,3,4) - etc... made the map consistent
  2. 00:42:679 (1) - Curve looks sloppy... any way you could make it look neater? i think i did?
  3. 00:49:879 (1,1) - There's not enough recovery time, this is unrankable. It should have AT LEAST a measure recovery time. just removed the spinner
  4. I could've gone in detail with transitions and such, but eh.... it's fine
Cool set, didn't check any of the hitsounds and if they have a delay so you can do that yourself, gl!
Garven
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Garven
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SPOILER
2015-04-20 01:16 ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672188 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Yuriyurarararayuruyuri Daijiken]
2015-04-20 01:16 Moo-Chan: =w=
2015-04-20 01:16 Garven: ACTION already has this
2015-04-20 01:17 Moo-Chan: ACTION knows
2015-04-20 01:17 Garven: ACTION /me's
2015-04-20 01:18 Garven: In easy
2015-04-20 01:18 Garven: 00:09:765 (3) - I'd recommend something like this for a rhythm: http://puu.sh/hkjrn/7ed148df10.jpg
2015-04-20 01:19 Moo-Chan: ahhhh, but i dont use red ticks in this
2015-04-20 01:19 Moo-Chan: i think
2015-04-20 01:19 Garven: So?
2015-04-20 01:19 Moo-Chan: i would assume it would break consistancy
2015-04-20 01:19 Garven: It works a lot better for that section, and the slider is ending on it so it's not going to be a play issue.
2015-04-20 01:20 Garven: Let me put it this way: where the slider ends right now, there's nothing in the music.
2015-04-20 01:21 Garven: 00:39:937 (1) - With sliders like this with a curve into a red anchor, 5 points produce the smoothest curves
2015-04-20 01:21 Moo-Chan: fixed the first thing
2015-04-20 01:22 Moo-Chan: and oh for the slider
2015-04-20 01:22 Moo-Chan: idk how to make sliders
2015-04-20 01:22 Garven: 00:42:679 (1) - [http://puu.sh/hkjxH/52bec75dd3.jpg this] vs. [http://puu.sh/hkjyz/0ebcacdc37.jpg this]
2015-04-20 01:22 Garven: t/37194
2015-04-20 01:23 Garven: This goes into a lot of detail on how to make good looking sliders
2015-04-20 01:23 Garven: This was before the easymode curve sliders we have now
2015-04-20 01:23 Moo-Chan: ive seen this thread
2015-04-20 01:23 Moo-Chan: so many times
2015-04-20 01:23 Garven: In general, just remember that curves love 5 points.
2015-04-20 01:24 Moo-Chan: fixed the second slider too
2015-04-20 01:24 Moo-Chan: and alright
2015-04-20 01:25 Garven: 01:21:251 (2) - no red ticks huh? ;)
2015-04-20 01:25 Moo-Chan: ahhhh
2015-04-20 01:25 Moo-Chan: that
2015-04-20 01:25 Moo-Chan: i guess was an accident
2015-04-20 01:25 Garven: Most likely hehe
2015-04-20 01:25 Moo-Chan: whoopsie
2015-04-20 01:26 Moo-Chan: is that it for easy?
2015-04-20 01:26 Garven: Pretty much
2015-04-20 01:26 Moo-Chan: oki
2015-04-20 01:26 Garven: It's fairly bland overall, but with how you chose to hitsound it, it works
2015-04-20 01:27 Moo-Chan: i dont play easy so idk what stands out and what doesnt when it comes to mapping it
2015-04-20 01:28 Moo-Chan: idek how to map nm or hd
2015-04-20 01:28 Moo-Chan: btw, i changed the cs in yuri to 4.2
2015-04-20 01:29 Garven: Those stacks in the Kiai section bugged me
2015-04-20 01:30 Garven: They felt inconsistently used so it was more disruptive to the general flow
2015-04-20 01:30 Garven: 00:56:394 (1,2) - You stop here which felt strange considering what's going on in the music.
2015-04-20 01:30 Garven: 00:57:765 (1,2) - Then you stop here where it makes more sense, but at this point I"m not sure what you're trying to follow anymore so it just feels random
2015-04-20 01:31 Moo-Chan: uhm, so should i like, fill in the space on the first one you pointed out?
2015-04-20 01:31 Garven: I'd keep motion flowing there
2015-04-20 01:32 Garven: And I'd use stacking during that second part to help emphasize the big gaps for the vocals
2015-04-20 01:32 Moo-Chan: mmm would adding a note on the red tick work? and which second part
2015-04-20 01:32 Garven: Most likely adding the note on the red tick and keeping the flow moving instead of at a standstill would work best to me, yeah
2015-04-20 01:33 Garven: Let me make a mockup of what I'm thinking
2015-04-20 01:33 Moo-Chan: alright
2015-04-20 01:33 Garven: So something like this http://puu.sh/hkjZt/842d2b8bc8.jpg
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: Though slider is stupid because it's copy/paste, but the concept is there
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: Simple rhythm, simple pattern
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: both vocal hits are stops in the flow with a stack
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: Gives a better emphasis with that part imo
2015-04-20 01:34 Moo-Chan: 00:57:765 (1,2) - here?
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: and once it moves to with 00:59:137 (1) - you can just move it forward again
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: 00:57:765 (1) - yeah
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: Give it a try and see what you think
2015-04-20 01:35 Garven: Think you could use something else besides that light gray? It gets a little hard to see against the BG
2015-04-20 01:35 Garven: Maybe match the R in the lettering
2015-04-20 01:35 Moo-Chan: yeah ill see
2015-04-20 01:35 Moo-Chan: thats what i was aiming for haha
2015-04-20 01:35 Garven: Darker then ;)
2015-04-20 01:35 Moo-Chan: and i tried it out, and i do like it, but imo it feels kidna empty
2015-04-20 01:36 Garven: That's the point of doing it like that
2015-04-20 01:36 Moo-Chan: mmm, lemme try to make a good pattern out of it
2015-04-20 01:37 Garven: You could use a 1/2 repeat slider and it would accomplish the same thing with stopping the flow
2015-04-20 01:37 Moo-Chan: is it fine to only have one repeat sloder though?
2015-04-20 01:37 Garven: It would feel weird tbh
2015-04-20 01:37 Garven: Since both of those vocal lines are pretty much the exact same thing besides the syllable
2015-04-20 01:37 Moo-Chan: yeah probably
2015-04-20 01:38 Moo-Chan: im not too keen on using repeat sliders
2015-04-20 01:38 Moo-Chan: one sec
2015-04-20 01:38 Garven: I avoid using them unless it's on a long slider myself hehe
2015-04-20 01:39 Moo-Chan: http://puu.sh/hkkam/ebad0e24ad.jpg
2015-04-20 01:39 Moo-Chan: would this work?
2015-04-20 01:40 Moo-Chan: or is [http://puu.sh/hkkct/31062038f6.jpg this] better
2015-04-20 01:40 Garven: Is this at 00:57:765 - ?
2015-04-20 01:40 Moo-Chan: mhm
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: its the second 1/1 slider you suggested
2015-04-20 01:41 Garven: Oh oh, so 00:58:451 -
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: yis
2015-04-20 01:41 Garven: So the starts of both sliders are stacked?
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: going into the next slder
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: wot
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: http://puu.sh/hkkg3/469c12515b.jpg
2015-04-20 01:41 Garven: Oh no, bored girl's head is further left
2015-04-20 01:42 Moo-Chan: wait what
2015-04-20 01:42 Garven: My reference was off, don't mind me
2015-04-20 01:43 Garven: So like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034256
2015-04-20 01:43 Moo-Chan: o
2015-04-20 01:43 Garven: It helps to reduce AR for screenshots of patterns
2015-04-20 01:43 Moo-Chan: ahh
2015-04-20 01:43 Moo-Chan: uhm
2015-04-20 01:43 Moo-Chan: can i update quick? so you can see it and tell me if it seems fine
2015-04-20 01:43 Garven: Suer
2015-04-20 01:45 Moo-Chan: updated
2015-04-20 01:46 Garven: Yeah, that plays much better
2015-04-20 01:47 Moo-Chan: i changed it here too
2015-04-20 01:47 Moo-Chan: 01:09:422 (2) -
2015-04-20 01:47 Garven: I saw
2015-04-20 01:47 Garven: Thank you for that
2015-04-20 01:47 Garven: So the intro
2015-04-20 01:47 Garven: Where it's just 'ra ra ra ra'
2015-04-20 01:48 Garven: With like no musical difference
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: :D
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: oh and
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: 01:12:165 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
2015-04-20 01:48 Garven: I'm having a hard time figuring out why the spacing is changing
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: point where? and back to that thing
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: http://puu.sh/hkksG/0c8f2bb544.jpg
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: tried to even them out symetrically
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: ignore the (2)
2015-04-20 01:49 Garven: What's symmetrical about it?
2015-04-20 01:50 Moo-Chan: it used to be uneven
2015-04-20 01:50 Garven: Like uneven spacing? I'm not following, sorry
2015-04-20 01:50 Moo-Chan: er, uneven on the gride
2015-04-20 01:50 Garven: Or do you mean returns to stacking?
2015-04-20 01:50 Moo-Chan: grid*
2015-04-20 01:50 Garven: Oh, heh
2015-04-20 01:50 Garven: So it used to be like 00:16:622 (1,3) - ?
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: wait what
2015-04-20 01:51 Garven: Slightly off grid compared to the previous hitobjects?
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: no i mean
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: in a straight line
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: lol
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: 01:11:994 (4,6,8) -
2015-04-20 01:52 Moo-Chan: 01:13:022 (2,3) -
2015-04-20 01:52 Moo-Chan: they wernt all straight
2015-04-20 01:52 Moo-Chan: 01:12:337 (6,1) -
2015-04-20 01:52 Moo-Chan: same with these
2015-04-20 01:52 Garven: Well, I guess I'll take your word for it. I didn't really recall that part much. q:
2015-04-20 01:53 Moo-Chan: didnt know if you were gonna be nazi about it ;-;
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: Nah
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: I've given up on nazi mods
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: Takes waaaay too much time that I don't have anymore hehe
2015-04-20 01:53 Moo-Chan: ah, ueaj
2015-04-20 01:53 Moo-Chan: yeah*
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: That and nobody uses distance snap anymore, plus the new slider calculations
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: there isn't nearly as much to really nazi anyway
2015-04-20 01:54 Garven: At least that I would care about hehe
2015-04-20 01:55 Moo-Chan: hmm, alrighty
2015-04-20 01:55 Moo-Chan: and yeah, i barely use ds anymore
2015-04-20 01:55 Garven: It's pretty obvious
2015-04-20 01:55 Garven: Makes a lot of your jumps make no sense q:
2015-04-20 01:55 Moo-Chan: >~>
2015-04-20 01:55 Moo-Chan: cmon, i suck at mapping
2015-04-20 01:56 Garven: This is how you get better~
2015-04-20 01:56 Garven: Well, I could rant about the jump use for a while
2015-04-20 01:56 Moo-Chan: fair enough :P
2015-04-20 01:56 Moo-Chan: so anything else?
2015-04-20 01:56 Garven: but that would be highlighting a large portion of the map
2015-04-20 01:57 Garven: Other than that there aren't really large issues
2015-04-20 01:57 Moo-Chan: aaaaa, are my junps considered unrankable?
2015-04-20 01:57 Moo-Chan: and woo
2015-04-20 01:57 Moo-Chan: jumps*
2015-04-20 01:57 Moo-Chan: i cant type
2015-04-20 01:57 Garven: Everybody maps like this now.
2015-04-20 01:57 Garven: It's annoying, but it's how things have evolved
2015-04-20 01:57 Garven: /getoffmylawn
2015-04-20 01:58 Moo-Chan: idk what to say to that considering i began playing osu in late 2013
2015-04-20 01:58 Garven: But as I was illustrating before with the stacking thing, consistency is the core
2015-04-20 01:58 Garven: So as long as you use the same bad spacing for the same musical phrasing, it should be okay
2015-04-20 01:59 Moo-Chan: are they not consistant?
2015-04-20 01:59 Moo-Chan: consistent*
2015-04-20 01:59 Garven: Well, mostly they don't make sense to me but they felt consistent for the most part
2015-04-20 02:01 Moo-Chan: mmm alright
2015-04-20 02:01 Garven: There's my late-night crap mod for ya q:
Moo-Chan
405 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

Garven wrote:

*grumbles something about having to post a chatlog*

SPOILER
2015-04-20 01:16 ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672188 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Yuriyurarararayuruyuri Daijiken]
2015-04-20 01:16 Moo-Chan: =w=
2015-04-20 01:16 Garven: ACTION already has this
2015-04-20 01:17 Moo-Chan: ACTION knows
2015-04-20 01:17 Garven: ACTION /me's
2015-04-20 01:18 Garven: In easy
2015-04-20 01:18 Garven: 00:09:765 (3) - I'd recommend something like this for a rhythm: http://puu.sh/hkjrn/7ed148df10.jpg
2015-04-20 01:19 Moo-Chan: ahhhh, but i dont use red ticks in this
2015-04-20 01:19 Moo-Chan: i think
2015-04-20 01:19 Garven: So?
2015-04-20 01:19 Moo-Chan: i would assume it would break consistancy
2015-04-20 01:19 Garven: It works a lot better for that section, and the slider is ending on it so it's not going to be a play issue.
2015-04-20 01:20 Garven: Let me put it this way: where the slider ends right now, there's nothing in the music.
2015-04-20 01:21 Garven: 00:39:937 (1) - With sliders like this with a curve into a red anchor, 5 points produce the smoothest curves
2015-04-20 01:21 Moo-Chan: fixed the first thing
2015-04-20 01:22 Moo-Chan: and oh for the slider
2015-04-20 01:22 Moo-Chan: idk how to make sliders
2015-04-20 01:22 Garven: 00:42:679 (1) - [http://puu.sh/hkjxH/52bec75dd3.jpg this] vs. [http://puu.sh/hkjyz/0ebcacdc37.jpg this]
2015-04-20 01:22 Garven: t/37194
2015-04-20 01:23 Garven: This goes into a lot of detail on how to make good looking sliders
2015-04-20 01:23 Garven: This was before the easymode curve sliders we have now
2015-04-20 01:23 Moo-Chan: ive seen this thread
2015-04-20 01:23 Moo-Chan: so many times
2015-04-20 01:23 Garven: In general, just remember that curves love 5 points.
2015-04-20 01:24 Moo-Chan: fixed the second slider too
2015-04-20 01:24 Moo-Chan: and alright
2015-04-20 01:25 Garven: 01:21:251 (2) - no red ticks huh? ;)
2015-04-20 01:25 Moo-Chan: ahhhh
2015-04-20 01:25 Moo-Chan: that
2015-04-20 01:25 Moo-Chan: i guess was an accident
2015-04-20 01:25 Garven: Most likely hehe
2015-04-20 01:25 Moo-Chan: whoopsie
2015-04-20 01:26 Moo-Chan: is that it for easy?
2015-04-20 01:26 Garven: Pretty much
2015-04-20 01:26 Moo-Chan: oki
2015-04-20 01:26 Garven: It's fairly bland overall, but with how you chose to hitsound it, it works
2015-04-20 01:27 Moo-Chan: i dont play easy so idk what stands out and what doesnt when it comes to mapping it
2015-04-20 01:28 Moo-Chan: idek how to map nm or hd
2015-04-20 01:28 Moo-Chan: btw, i changed the cs in yuri to 4.2
2015-04-20 01:29 Garven: Those stacks in the Kiai section bugged me
2015-04-20 01:30 Garven: They felt inconsistently used so it was more disruptive to the general flow
2015-04-20 01:30 Garven: 00:56:394 (1,2) - You stop here which felt strange considering what's going on in the music.
2015-04-20 01:30 Garven: 00:57:765 (1,2) - Then you stop here where it makes more sense, but at this point I"m not sure what you're trying to follow anymore so it just feels random
2015-04-20 01:31 Moo-Chan: uhm, so should i like, fill in the space on the first one you pointed out?
2015-04-20 01:31 Garven: I'd keep motion flowing there
2015-04-20 01:32 Garven: And I'd use stacking during that second part to help emphasize the big gaps for the vocals
2015-04-20 01:32 Moo-Chan: mmm would adding a note on the red tick work? and which second part
2015-04-20 01:32 Garven: Most likely adding the note on the red tick and keeping the flow moving instead of at a standstill would work best to me, yeah
2015-04-20 01:33 Garven: Let me make a mockup of what I'm thinking
2015-04-20 01:33 Moo-Chan: alright
2015-04-20 01:33 Garven: So something like this http://puu.sh/hkjZt/842d2b8bc8.jpg
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: Though slider is stupid because it's copy/paste, but the concept is there
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: Simple rhythm, simple pattern
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: both vocal hits are stops in the flow with a stack
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: Gives a better emphasis with that part imo
2015-04-20 01:34 Moo-Chan: 00:57:765 (1,2) - here?
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: and once it moves to with 00:59:137 (1) - you can just move it forward again
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: 00:57:765 (1) - yeah
2015-04-20 01:34 Garven: Give it a try and see what you think
2015-04-20 01:35 Garven: Think you could use something else besides that light gray? It gets a little hard to see against the BG
2015-04-20 01:35 Garven: Maybe match the R in the lettering
2015-04-20 01:35 Moo-Chan: yeah ill see
2015-04-20 01:35 Moo-Chan: thats what i was aiming for haha
2015-04-20 01:35 Garven: Darker then ;)
2015-04-20 01:35 Moo-Chan: and i tried it out, and i do like it, but imo it feels kidna empty
2015-04-20 01:36 Garven: That's the point of doing it like that
2015-04-20 01:36 Moo-Chan: mmm, lemme try to make a good pattern out of it
2015-04-20 01:37 Garven: You could use a 1/2 repeat slider and it would accomplish the same thing with stopping the flow
2015-04-20 01:37 Moo-Chan: is it fine to only have one repeat sloder though?
2015-04-20 01:37 Garven: It would feel weird tbh
2015-04-20 01:37 Garven: Since both of those vocal lines are pretty much the exact same thing besides the syllable
2015-04-20 01:37 Moo-Chan: yeah probably
2015-04-20 01:38 Moo-Chan: im not too keen on using repeat sliders
2015-04-20 01:38 Moo-Chan: one sec
2015-04-20 01:38 Garven: I avoid using them unless it's on a long slider myself hehe
2015-04-20 01:39 Moo-Chan: http://puu.sh/hkkam/ebad0e24ad.jpg
2015-04-20 01:39 Moo-Chan: would this work?
2015-04-20 01:40 Moo-Chan: or is [http://puu.sh/hkkct/31062038f6.jpg this] better
2015-04-20 01:40 Garven: Is this at 00:57:765 - ?
2015-04-20 01:40 Moo-Chan: mhm
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: its the second 1/1 slider you suggested
2015-04-20 01:41 Garven: Oh oh, so 00:58:451 -
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: yis
2015-04-20 01:41 Garven: So the starts of both sliders are stacked?
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: going into the next slder
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: wot
2015-04-20 01:41 Moo-Chan: http://puu.sh/hkkg3/469c12515b.jpg
2015-04-20 01:41 Garven: Oh no, bored girl's head is further left
2015-04-20 01:42 Moo-Chan: wait what
2015-04-20 01:42 Garven: My reference was off, don't mind me
2015-04-20 01:43 Garven: So like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3034256
2015-04-20 01:43 Moo-Chan: o
2015-04-20 01:43 Garven: It helps to reduce AR for screenshots of patterns
2015-04-20 01:43 Moo-Chan: ahh
2015-04-20 01:43 Moo-Chan: uhm
2015-04-20 01:43 Moo-Chan: can i update quick? so you can see it and tell me if it seems fine
2015-04-20 01:43 Garven: Suer
2015-04-20 01:45 Moo-Chan: updated
2015-04-20 01:46 Garven: Yeah, that plays much better
2015-04-20 01:47 Moo-Chan: i changed it here too
2015-04-20 01:47 Moo-Chan: 01:09:422 (2) -
2015-04-20 01:47 Garven: I saw
2015-04-20 01:47 Garven: Thank you for that
2015-04-20 01:47 Garven: So the intro
2015-04-20 01:47 Garven: Where it's just 'ra ra ra ra'
2015-04-20 01:48 Garven: With like no musical difference
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: :D
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: oh and
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: 01:12:165 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
2015-04-20 01:48 Garven: I'm having a hard time figuring out why the spacing is changing
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: point where? and back to that thing
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: http://puu.sh/hkksG/0c8f2bb544.jpg
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: tried to even them out symetrically
2015-04-20 01:48 Moo-Chan: ignore the (2)
2015-04-20 01:49 Garven: What's symmetrical about it?
2015-04-20 01:50 Moo-Chan: it used to be uneven
2015-04-20 01:50 Garven: Like uneven spacing? I'm not following, sorry
2015-04-20 01:50 Moo-Chan: er, uneven on the gride
2015-04-20 01:50 Garven: Or do you mean returns to stacking?
2015-04-20 01:50 Moo-Chan: grid*
2015-04-20 01:50 Garven: Oh, heh
2015-04-20 01:50 Garven: So it used to be like 00:16:622 (1,3) - ?
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: wait what
2015-04-20 01:51 Garven: Slightly off grid compared to the previous hitobjects?
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: no i mean
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: in a straight line
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: lol
2015-04-20 01:51 Moo-Chan: 01:11:994 (4,6,8) -
2015-04-20 01:52 Moo-Chan: 01:13:022 (2,3) -
2015-04-20 01:52 Moo-Chan: they wernt all straight
2015-04-20 01:52 Moo-Chan: 01:12:337 (6,1) -
2015-04-20 01:52 Moo-Chan: same with these
2015-04-20 01:52 Garven: Well, I guess I'll take your word for it. I didn't really recall that part much. q:
2015-04-20 01:53 Moo-Chan: didnt know if you were gonna be nazi about it ;-;
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: Nah
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: I've given up on nazi mods
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: Takes waaaay too much time that I don't have anymore hehe
2015-04-20 01:53 Moo-Chan: ah, ueaj
2015-04-20 01:53 Moo-Chan: yeah*
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: That and nobody uses distance snap anymore, plus the new slider calculations
2015-04-20 01:53 Garven: there isn't nearly as much to really nazi anyway
2015-04-20 01:54 Garven: At least that I would care about hehe
2015-04-20 01:55 Moo-Chan: hmm, alrighty
2015-04-20 01:55 Moo-Chan: and yeah, i barely use ds anymore
2015-04-20 01:55 Garven: It's pretty obvious
2015-04-20 01:55 Garven: Makes a lot of your jumps make no sense q:
2015-04-20 01:55 Moo-Chan: >~>
2015-04-20 01:55 Moo-Chan: cmon, i suck at mapping
2015-04-20 01:56 Garven: This is how you get better~
2015-04-20 01:56 Garven: Well, I could rant about the jump use for a while
2015-04-20 01:56 Moo-Chan: fair enough :P
2015-04-20 01:56 Moo-Chan: so anything else?
2015-04-20 01:56 Garven: but that would be highlighting a large portion of the map
2015-04-20 01:57 Garven: Other than that there aren't really large issues
2015-04-20 01:57 Moo-Chan: aaaaa, are my junps considered unrankable?
2015-04-20 01:57 Moo-Chan: and woo
2015-04-20 01:57 Moo-Chan: jumps*
2015-04-20 01:57 Moo-Chan: i cant type
2015-04-20 01:57 Garven: Everybody maps like this now.
2015-04-20 01:57 Garven: It's annoying, but it's how things have evolved
2015-04-20 01:57 Garven: /getoffmylawn
2015-04-20 01:58 Moo-Chan: idk what to say to that considering i began playing osu in late 2013
2015-04-20 01:58 Garven: But as I was illustrating before with the stacking thing, consistency is the core
2015-04-20 01:58 Garven: So as long as you use the same bad spacing for the same musical phrasing, it should be okay
2015-04-20 01:59 Moo-Chan: are they not consistant?
2015-04-20 01:59 Moo-Chan: consistent*
2015-04-20 01:59 Garven: Well, mostly they don't make sense to me but they felt consistent for the most part
2015-04-20 02:01 Moo-Chan: mmm alright
2015-04-20 02:01 Garven: There's my late-night crap mod for ya q:
♥ :D
Setz
1,419 posts
Joined August 2013
Setz
m4m

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:451 (4,5) - things like this you really want to avoid in the lower diffs. going from a red tick rhythm to a white tick causes something that Charles dubbed "polarity" which makes players hit the next note too early, making them get a 100 or miss. if you still dont understand what I mean, see https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
    as far as a suggestion goes to remedy this here, try this
    SPOILER
  2. the rhythms in the diff could use alot of improvement, there are some reverse sliders that dont really make much sense. the best example I can provide is 00:39:937 (1) - . it would make much more sense to shorten this by one tick, it follows the music much much better. there is alot of this in the map, but I am sure you can catch most of them with the example I gave you instead of me writing a wall of text. Stuff like this also places the strong beats on slider tails which makes the map less awesome to play. 00:28:965 (1) - being an example of this as well.
[smug's Normal]
  • Very nice diff, I like it :D just a few things
  1. 00:17:308 (3,4,1) - you are going to want to unstack this, because you have 2 kinds of stacks in this map. this, and 00:18:851 (3,4) - . I've seen this cause DQs in the past and I am sure here it will be no different, so you should just play it safe here and unstack those notes.
  2. 00:26:908 (2) - I think it would be better to have this as a 1/1 slider, with 2 1/2 circles at end so that the strong beat at the end is a click.
[wkyik's Hard]
  1. no complaints here, very nice. I only have one suggestion, maybe consider using spinner at 00:49:537 (1) - to 00:50:908 (1) - and removing the notes on this combo, just so that the scores dont stay the same after the first week of the map being ranked.
[P A N's insane]
  1. 00:39:937 (1) - add finish on head
  2. 00:49:537 (1,1) - oh my. lol as funny as this is, I think you should use a spinner instead, just so the scores dont stay stagnant after the first few days of the map being ranked.
[Yuri]
  1. 00:25:879 (5,6) - should remove this, there's no stream sound here.
  2. 00:39:937 (1) - finish on head
  3. 00:49:537 (1) - as i said with the other diffs, consider spinner here, just so that the scores don't stay stagnanat after the first few days of the map being ranked.
  4. 01:01:022 (4) - should move this further away, I know you want the stack, but the huge jump from the 2 objects right before this one, and suddenly this much smaller spacing for no good reason makes this very uncomfortable to play.
    a lot of forced difficulty in this map which i am not really a fan of. but hey, if that's your thing, more power to ya.
Mikii
393 posts
Joined August 2013
Mikii
Heya! Sorry for the late M4M

[Easy]
  1. 00:39:937 (1) Want to make this slider look the same with the next slider? This one looks a bit too messy
  2. 00:49:879 (2) Slight overlap
  3. 01:26:394 (3) I think ending the slider here would fit better to the vocals
[Smug's Normal]
  1. No issues here
[wkyuk's Hard]
  1. No issues here either :D
[P A N's Light Insane]
  1. 00:31:194 (5) Stack at the 1HC to the right for zigzag flow? You're making a square pattern but this was more enjoyable for me to play
  2. 00:37:879 (5) I didn't do the best job here, but if you can move the 5 HC to make the pattern form a diamond shape, I think that would be nice. Also you can shift the slider back into a blanket for the 5 HC and obviously shift everything else
    SPOILER
[Yuri]
  1. I think in general, some overlaps can be avoided. Basically I'm not a big fan of overlaps when they can be placed in a better position because it can cause confusion and readability issues for players, like at 00:03:422 or 00:24:508
  2. There are a LOT of curved slider. Why not try to vary your slider shapes.
  3. 00:56:394 (1) Blanket
  4. 00:02:394 (1) Weird area to place a NC. Actually there are a lot of NC's. Why not try to half the NC's? Follow points are useful if you want to use HR mod.
  5. My biggest gripe would be that there are a lot of overlaps and the map aesthetically isn't the best looking, but the playability is fine and I just hope that this doesn't set back the map from being ranked because of it. Since obviously with an extra map, these issues become more apparent and I don't think i can sum it up to specific areas since the mapping style is bouncy, consistent and doesn't get in the way of the actual fun of the map
Overall, this mapset is great but it would look like the Yuri map would need the most work unless others have a different opinion to mine. Sorry if I couldn't point out a lot, the rest of the maps were very clean without too many unnecessary overlaps and play to my liking
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz

Setz wrote:

m4m

[smug's Normal]
  • Very nice diff, I like it :D just a few things thanks!
  1. 00:17:308 (3,4,1) - you are going to want to unstack this, because you have 2 kinds of stacks in this map. this, and 00:18:851 (3,4) - . I've seen this cause DQs in the past and I am sure here it will be no different, so you should just play it safe here and unstack those notes.
  2. 00:26:908 (2) - I think it would be better to have this as a 1/1 slider, with 2 1/2 circles at end so that the strong beat at the end is a click.
fixed everything above and other cases of the same problem

updoot
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51422
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15765,28965,87594
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

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Title:Yuriyurarararayuruyuri Daijiken
TitleUnicode:ゆりゆららららゆるゆり大事件
Artist:Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu
ArtistUnicode:七森中☆ごらく部
Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:Smug's Normal
Source:ゆるゆり
Tags:yuru yuri op opening smug- kawaiwkyik p_a_n
BeatmapID:674456
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
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Moo-Chan
405 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
setz

Setz wrote:

m4m

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:451 (4,5) - things like this you really want to avoid in the lower diffs. going from a red tick rhythm to a white tick causes something that Charles dubbed "polarity" which makes players hit the next note too early, making them get a 100 or miss. if you still dont understand what I mean, see https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
    as far as a suggestion goes to remedy this here, try this fixed
  2. the rhythms in the diff could use alot of improvement, there are some reverse sliders that dont really make much sense. the best example I can provide is 00:39:937 (1) - . it would make much more sense to shorten this by one tick, it follows the music much much better. there is alot of this in the map, but I am sure you can catch most of them with the example I gave you instead of me writing a wall of text. Stuff like this also places the strong beats on slider tails which makes the map less awesome to play. 00:28:965 (1) - being an example of this as well. ill look into this stuff
[Yuri]
  1. 00:25:879 (5,6) - should remove this, there's no stream sound here. would break consistency with the previous sliders like this
  2. 00:39:937 (1) - finish on head ok
  3. 00:49:537 (1) - as i said with the other diffs, consider spinner here, just so that the scores don't stay stagnanat after the first few days of the map being ranked. added a spinner but not where you told me to add one
  4. 01:01:022 (4) - should move this further away, I know you want the stack, but the huge jump from the 2 objects right before this one, and suddenly this much smaller spacing for no good reason makes this very uncomfortable to play.
    a lot of forced difficulty in this map which i am not really a fan of. but hey, if that's your thing, more power to ya. i kinda intended an anti-jump though
mikii

Mikii wrote:

Heya! Sorry for the late M4M

[Easy]
  1. 00:39:937 (1) Want to make this slider look the same with the next slider? This one looks a bit too messy i cleaned it up a bit but didnt make it the same
  2. 00:49:879 (2) Slight overlap where o.o
  3. 01:26:394 (3) I think ending the slider here would fit better to the vocals created something different
Overall, this mapset is great but it would look like the Yuri map would need the most work unless others have a different opinion to mine. Sorry if I couldn't point out a lot, the rest of the maps were very clean without too many unnecessary overlaps and play to my liking ♥
thanks for the mods. sorry i didnt take any suggestions from mikii on yrui. with the overlapping, most overlaps arent noticeable in game so it doesnt really matter to fix them imo, and im keeping the ncs how they are just because its how i do ncs. and that blanket suggestion was declined because i wasnt going for a blanket :P suggestions were good though

thanks again modders
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
M4M
oh my god I'm finally doing M4M BECAUSE I FINISHED A MAPSET FOR ONCE

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/322176

rawr

General

Leave this for BNs lolol

Easy

Oh dear you had to force yourself to map liek this cus diffspread :<
  1. 00:01:537 - to 00:09:079 - imho, this rhythm is much more interesting
  2. 00:11:308 (5) - fancy something like this?
  3. 00:15:251 (1) - how about making this red jointed slider since the synth changes here?
  4. 00:16:622 (3,4) - make these identical so that they symmetrical diagonally :S
  5. 00:21:422 (2,3) - OH MY GOD ITS BEEN SO LONG SINCE I SAID THIS WORD: check blanket
  6. 00:27:937 (4) - imo you should make this 2 circles with 2/1 gap, to put heavier emphasis on those two white ticks :3
  7. 00:31:022 (3) - I wouldn't make this a curved slider, but a simple straight slider, since your diff is kinda one sided with all the curves :< put some variety :D
  8. 00:34:794 (1) - since this doesn't blanket anything, consider using red joint instead of simple joint to put some slider shape variety
  9. 01:04:622 (3) - red joint slider?
  10. 01:08:737 (1) - more variety pls ;w;
  11. 01:11:479 (1,2,3) - would have been 420x more 1337 if you blanket'd 3's end with 1 B)
  12. 01:16:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - imo its ok to just follow exact same pattern as the intro (IF you are going to apply what I suggested previously at the intro)
  13. 01:26:737 (4) - you could actually remove this to put more pause emphasis on the last note, its up to you (ew this moment when the song forces you to use 1/2)

    more slider variety pls, there are a lot more places where you can easily play around with the slider shapes without having to rearrange AT ALL or just little bit owo

-gums

  1. 00:11:822 (2,3,4) - god dang it i was going to point out pitch relevant placement but you already did it
  2. 00:27:937 - I told you about this in IRC, still a major concern for me
  3. 00:47:822 (3,1,2,3,4) - a bit intensive for a normal imo, you could substitute 2,3,4 with 2 reverse sliders, just keep it in mind when you need to tone this diff down for some reason later
  4. 01:03:079 (4) - you could actually remove this and still have it connect well to the next pattern. I would actually prefer you remove this to give some break.
sasuga -gums

wkyik

o7

P A N

YOUR GUINEAQ REQS FROM #modreqs CAME TRUE
  1. 00:01:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - personally this felt quite awkward for me compared to 01:16:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , maybe you can use the same rhythm here?
  2. 00:36:851 (5) -
    maybe?
  3. 00:49:537 (1) - I literally laughed so hard ily
o7 that's it

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Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

Arphimigon wrote:

[wykik's Hard]
Liked it except the overmap at the start
00:01:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Imo this should be mapped calmly to fit the lack of speedy instrumentals, the overmap is bad. Add this density of objects later! (yes it was mapped to instruments but imo it hardly fits) i think it is not overmap here
00:20:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Should have a jump and NC the same as 00:15:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - but with even more emphasis! i think it's enough
00:26:222 (1,2,3,4) - Meh don't stack hardly fits music here ^
00:53:308 (3,4,1) - Fix this start into a better triangle with more consistent DS pls it's good now
01:24:508 (1,2,3,4,1) - And slight changes of DS here affect aesthetic ^

Xellie wrote:

[wkyik's Hard]
  1. 00:35:651 (6,1) - You could make this blanket a little better near the tail of 1 it good enough
  2. 01:27:594 (5) - Maybe make this a jump for the big finish will too hard
@setz: i don't want any spinner there, so no fix

thankls for mod
http://puu.sh/hq2pK/c72a758e7c.rar
also i want to use default whistle in my diff
don't add any whistle on S:C88
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
mhmm sorry, I didn't fix both of your mod but I tried tho and I feel like it's... weird somehow :P

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Moo-Chan
405 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
hamsterpig
[quote="guineaQ"]M4M
oh my god I'm finally doing M4M BECAUSE I FINISHED A MAPSET FOR ONCE nice!

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/322176

rawr

General

Leave this for BNs lolol

Easy

Oh dear you had to force yourself to map liek this cus diffspread :<
  1. 00:01:537 - to 00:09:079 - imho, this rhythm is much more interesting i think ill keep this
  2. 00:11:308 (5) - fancy something like this? sure
  3. 00:15:251 (1) - how about making this red jointed slider since the synth changes here? ;w;
  4. 00:16:622 (3,4) - make these identical so that they symmetrical diagonally :S ye
  5. 00:21:422 (2,3) - OH MY GOD ITS BEEN SO LONG SINCE I SAID THIS WORD: check blanket oki
  6. 00:27:937 (4) - imo you should make this 2 circles with 2/1 gap, to put heavier emphasis on those two white ticks :3 im kinda following the background noise at that part >.<
  7. 00:31:022 (3) - I wouldn't make this a curved slider, but a simple straight slider, since your diff is kinda one sided with all the curves :< put some variety :D sure
  8. 00:34:794 (1) - since this doesn't blanket anything, consider using red joint instead of simple joint to put some slider shape variety it would disrupt the flow of all the other curved sliders though
  9. 01:04:622 (3) - red joint slider? nope
  10. 01:08:737 (1) - more variety pls ;w; sure
  11. 01:11:479 (1,2,3) - would have been 420x more 1337 if you blanket'd 3's end with 1 B) boom
  12. 01:16:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - imo its ok to just follow exact same pattern as the intro (IF you are going to apply what I suggested previously at the intro) mmk
  13. 01:26:737 (4) - you could actually remove this to put more pause emphasis on the last note, its up to you (ew this moment when the song forces you to use 1/2) ok

    more slider variety pls, there are a lot more places where you can easily play around with the slider shapes without having to rearrange AT ALL or just little bit owo
=w=
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz

guineaQ wrote:

-gums

  1. 00:11:822 (2,3,4) - god dang it i was going to point out pitch relevant placement but you already did it
  2. 00:27:937 - I told you about this in IRC, still a major concern for me still thinking about it, given the difficulty of the rest of the diff I think it's fine to keep this empty
  3. 00:47:822 (3,1,2,3,4) - a bit intensive for a normal imo, you could substitute 2,3,4 with 2 reverse sliders, just keep it in mind when you need to tone this diff down for some reason later changed now
  4. 01:03:079 (4) - you could actually remove this and still have it connect well to the next pattern. I would actually prefer you remove this to give some break. The less dense sections earlier were designed as kind of a break part, but I'll think about it
sasuga -gums sausage to you too
updoot
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TitleUnicode:ゆりゆららららゆるゆり大事件
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Sharkie
343 posts
Joined May 2014
Sharkie
m4m as requested and cuz yuri (even tho I prefer yaoi :3)
uhh A-ANYWAY!
(Pls no Kudosu, I don't deserve ;__________;)

Easy
00:21:422 (2,4) - This tiny overlap might be too hard for some people to read.
00:53:651 (3) - (THIS IS NAZI I HATE BEING A NAZI BUT YA GOTTA DO WHAT YA GOTTA DO)
http://puu.sh/hsqjW/5cbc2b4f4d.jpg Blanket not perfect.
00:53:651 (3,4,1) - These don't make a perfect triangle (but it doesn't matter at all)

(Yay more easies for me to FL)

Smug's Normal
01:07:022 (3,2) - This overlap might be too hard to read. What about this? http://puu.sh/hsqGt/7f23983c74.jpg
01:09:422 (2,2) - (More nazi, IM SOWWY ;w;) I really don't like these two touching.

I like it ^^

Wkyik's Hard
Wkyik is my hero >w<
(Perfect Diff~)

P A N's Light Insane
00:56:394 (1,2) - This spacing is kinda deceptive because all the other patterns earlier in the song where the slider is underneath a slider end, the rhythm was different. (Although you do use it again later in the song) Just a suggestion.
00:59:137 (1,2,3) - This flows fine, but the sharp angle from 2-3 I do not like. What about something similar to this? http://puu.sh/hsrCe/af1caf5173.jpg
01:14:222 (1) - The center points of this slider have different X values.

Anyway, very fun map :3
Inappropriate Diff Name not suitable for ages younger than 18 (Insert Meme Here)
00:11:308 (1,2) - If you Ctrl+G these two, you get a circular motion instead of an X-motion. I think circular motion works better for this since its the intro, and generally "x" patterns are harder (from what I've seen from watching relatively low ranking players' streams)
00:56:051 (4,1) - you can blanket these two, then move the notes after accordingly. (I think, maybe? I dunno ;_;)
01:03:251 (1) and 01:08:051 (3) - Ok, everything between these notes, it flow well, it looks nice, I like it. The problem is, you stay in the top right corner of the map for about 5 seconds, and I really don't care but some players might find it not interesting. Just a thought.
01:10:108 (1,2,3,4) - Remove 2,3,4. Copy/paste 1, then Rotate the new slider by 90 degrees and continue process for all four slider.
01:26:737 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for emphasis :3
01:27:079 (4,1) - This does provide emphasis, but this spacing is a bit deceptive. I'd say bring it closer, but I dunno.

Very fun map, I love playing it. ^^

Good luck on mapset Moo-Chan and others! o/
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz

Nerodae wrote:

m4m as requested and cuz yuri (even tho I prefer yaoi :3) ikr yaoi is the purest form of love

Smug's Normal
01:07:022 (3,2) - This overlap might be too hard to read. What about this? i think it's fine, only because I'm having a hard time figuring out what I want to do about it
01:09:422 (2,2) - (More nazi, IM SOWWY ;w;) I really don't like these two touching. they had a special bond how could you break them up like that

I like it ^^ thanks~
I feel like I'm spamming the thread

updoot
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TitleUnicode:ゆりゆららららゆるゆり大事件
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124,208,59137,6,0,P|120:252|136:340,2,115.49999647522,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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296,184,60508,6,0,P|344:204|416:180,1,115.49999647522,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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328,300,61879,6,0,P|284:292|192:312,1,115.49999647522,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,236,63079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,184,63251,6,0,L|28:56,1,115.49999647522,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,40,63765,2,0,B|128:64|128:64|208:56,1,115.49999647522
236,32,64279,2,0,L|320:36,1,57.7499982376099,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,76,64622,6,0,P|328:136|340:208,1,115.49999647522,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,52,66508,2,0,P|180:40|264:52,1,115.49999647522
288,84,67022,2,0,L|368:80,1,57.7499982376099,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,112,67365,6,0,B|408:180|408:180|392:244,2,115.49999647522,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,60,68222,2,0,L|288:64,1,57.7499982376099,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,140,68737,6,0,B|168:164|168:164|92:160,1,115.49999647522,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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116,352,70108,6,0,P|172:364|240:348,2,115.49999647522,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,244,71137,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,172,71479,6,0,L|284:180,1,115.49999647522,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,224,71994,2,0,B|376:256|376:256|440:244,1,115.49999647522,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,72508,2,0,L|448:120,1,57.7499982376099,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,88,72851,6,0,L|296:95,1,115.49999647522,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,116,73365,2,0,B|204:148|184:176|184:176|127:150|127:150|84:164|28:144,1,230.99999295044
256,192,74222,12,8,75593,0:0:0:0:
116,64,76965,6,0,L|124:180,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,77479,2,0,P|216:192|280:200,2,110,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,292,78508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
8,224,78851,1,2,0:0:0:0:
8,224,79022,2,0,L|0:100,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,56,79708,6,0,P|144:44|216:72,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,88,80222,2,0,P|299:104|352:92,2,110,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,160,81251,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,240,81594,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,240,81765,2,0,B|296:236|296:236|342:263,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,344,82451,6,0,P|449:294|444:222,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,192,82965,2,0,L|436:76,2,110,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,236,83994,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,180,84337,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,180,84508,2,0,L|122:183,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,132,85194,6,0,P|12:184|37:255,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,304,85879,2,0,L|184:300,1,55,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,332,86394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,332,86565,6,0,L|326:335,2,55,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,292,87079,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,128,87594,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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