DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. Offset is wrong. It should be 00:07:645 so that the big white tick is in its proper position. Therefore you have to re-do NCs (and don't say this is wrong, because it's not. Listen to when the finishes are) no, it is wrong. listen to the clap pattern. well its not like this matters much :p
2. That background is already been used for another map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/90647 ok
   Try and find another different one

SNAFU

1. In regards to the streams at the start of the map, having a hit circle above the stream on a different beat is very hard to read.
   Eg. 00:07:990 (2,3) - You should probably move the first circle away from the stream didn't see people struggling with it
2. 00:19:197 (2) - Not stacked properly done
3. 00:39:025 (5) - This looks hard to read. Maybe move it away from the previous slider didn't see people struggling with it
4. 00:49:197 (1) - Not stacked properly ok
5. 01:04:714 (3) - Move this down a bit what for?
6. 01:20:749 (1) - Damn, I'm impressed. What an amazing slider thanks <3

Insane

1. 00:13:680 (2) - Not stacked properly ok
2. 00:17:990 (1) - Deletethere is a sound
3. 00:31:266 (1) - Not stacked properly ok
4. 00:47:818 (1) - ^ ok
5. 01:01:266 (4) - ^ ok

Hard

1. 01:27:473 (1) - Try and make this more circular it would kill readability, imo.

CelsiusLK wrote:

As requested

[General]

1. preview point is unsnapped on every diffs fixed`
2. add silent sliderslide hitsound? nope

[easy]

1. 00:15:404 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo , delete nc so it make pattern easier to read no fix
2. 00:20:059 (2) - end this slider here 00:20:921 - sound better imo really dont like to switch polarity @_@
3. 00:22:818 (2) - end this slider here 00:23:676 - sound better imo , don't worry about polarity if the beat there is really emphasized beginners can still play that note perfectly ( apply to others too ) really dont like to switch polarity @_@
4. 00:54:714 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo , delete nc so it make pattern easier to read no fix
5. 01:22:301 (1,2) - this overlap might be too tricky for beginner fixed~

[normal]

1. 00:15:921 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo, delete nc so it make pattern easier to read no fix
2. 00:20:404 (1,2) - stack play better imo no fix, its consistent rhythm/pattern.
3. 00:54:714 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo , delete nc so it make pattern easier to read no fix
4. 01:02:990 (1,2) - this overlap might be a bit tricky for normal fixed.
5. 01:20:749 (1,2) - ^ fixed.

[hard]

1. 00:06:439 (1,2) - lower spacing a bit so it a bit easier to play for hard diff ? done.
2. 00:15:921 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo, delete nc so it make pattern easier to read i think NC makes it easier to read, lol.
3. 00:41:611 (2,3,1) - anti-jumps is a bit weird here for hard diff , stacking or spacing would work better imo stacked
4. 00:47:128 (2,3,1) - ^ stacked
5. 00:54:714 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo, delete nc so it make pattern easier to read why ;-;
6. 00:54:714 (1) - add a note ? sound better imo what
7. 01:10:921 (4,5,6,7) - 1/4 repeat slider work better here , stream is kinada a bit too hard for hard diff imo i think it is okay, there is good builldup.

[insane]

1. 00:41:611 (3) - curve at tail a bit ? would make pattern looks nice cool
2. 00:56:094 (1,2) - swap place of these two notes so the flow here 00:55:749 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - might be better imo altho its nice, it makes 00:55:749 (8,1) - unplayable

[snafu]

1. 01:08:163 (5) - place it somewhere around x24 y160 would make flow here 01:07:818 (4,5) - nice i like the back and forth
2. 01:21:956 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here might be too much , it a bit weird for , I'd use 0.8x spacing stream here instead i think its good for emphasis!

I think hitsound pattern can be improved a bit

good luck thanks~

DavidEd wrote:

Just a beginner modder looking through pending. Love oregairu and yanaginagi!

• General

1. Why does every map need an extra? xD why not
2. add tags: anime, op, opening added anime, others are there already.
3. Title: 春擬き its already the title.
4. Please do map the vocals in the beginning, it's such a short song too. don't like mapping to vocals.
   
   Easy and Normal is fine
   
   Hard
   
5. 00:06:439 - this beginning part plays weird, maybe map it like this? i like the whoosh as it is.
6. 01:22:214 - didnt see that it was a double before i looked twice. delete and space the incoming slider? its a regular 'pseudo-triple', it should be understandable.
   
   Insane
7. 00:20:749 - add note there's nothing.
8. 00:26:266 - ^ there's nothing.
   
   And for both extra difficulties I wont even go into since I personally hate extras xD
   Just space those intro streams out, they're too boring. low intensity.

Sorry for bad mod, couldnt really find that many issues. But I still hope it helped somehow.
Good luck with your map man! ;3 thanks!

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neonat wrote:

General

Kiai could totally use Soft instead of Normal, Normal hits sound as solid as the clap, which just makes it have less impact, and the hit is pretty noisy as well
00:46:089 - could use something like the drum clap ok1

Easy

00:45:059 (2) - this bugs me, in regards to rhythm, too long imo. Even if it's an Easy, it shouldn't undermine the rhythm that much, try and have it like this: i did this on purpsoe, so that the song felt calmer during the slow portion.
00:50:921 (3) - remove that finish at the end there's a finish!
01:11:266 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - lay off the claps lol, only have them on the 2nd and 4th beats like you did before, it really makes things cleaner, especially those off beats at 01:19:542 (1,2,3) -> this affects all the other diffs as well ok

Normal

00:26:956 (4) - you always NC when there's a long break or there's a long spinner, why differ here fixed
00:50:921 (2) - remove finish at the end nooooo
00:59:887 (1) - remove the finish, takes away the impact of the finish on 01:00:232 (1) which should be the one with the emphasis used softfinish instead
Same as easy about those claps keeping because every white tick is mapped!

Hard

00:10:404 (1) - remove clap on end of slider sounds good to me
00:13:163 (1) - ^ sounds good to me
00:12:990 (5,1) - the way you placed the stuff beforehand, this spacing shouldn't be similar to 00:12:645 (3,4,5) yep, changed.
00:24:714 (3,4) - have them more side by side: uhm ok
00:51:611 (4) - remove the finish noooo
00:59:887 (2) - remove that finish, rather use a clap instead softfinish
The claps are still fine here, since there are the 1/2 beats as well, so it's not too over-consuming in sound, but make sure to use Soft instead of Normal

Insane

00:20:059 (1) - I actually find this angle very weird, I think a angle facing downwards would be better, also a spacing like 00:25:232 (4,1) is more even moved a little
00:37:645 (5,1) - spacing more constant for 1/4 sliders please this is swag for triangles tho
00:41:611 (3,1) - shift up no, y
00:50:921 (2) - remove finish from slider end noooo
00:59:887 (3) - remove that finish, add clapsoft~
The claps are still fine here, since there are the 1/2 beats as well, so it's not too over-consuming in sound, but make sure to use Soft instead of Normal
01:20:059 (3) - have it to the left of the circle, something like this but with a more even line made: i like how it is!

Extra

Just gonna state it right here right now, those streams at the start are really redundant... no u

00:26:951 (1) - faster sv don't like playing with SV, made it straight tho
00:51:606 (4) - remove finish nonono
00:50:571 (1) - you made it an extra, at least also fully follow the music, split this like this and have a clap on the slider start: this is intetional to make the rhythm more relaxed and follow the slow vocals.
That full stream section doesn't represent the song well, you need to diversify the clicking with repeat slider, specifically 1/4 sliders with 2 repeats (last 4 1/4 beats), I would suggest at places like i like my streams death and without rest.
Even before this ^ you left out a clap at 00:55:227 had it originally, but i removed cuz it sounded weird.
00:59:882 (3) - remove finish add clap soft
01:07:813 (4,5,1) - very very straight direction, really not very nice the whole 'theme' of the diff is back and forth
The claps are still fine here, since there are the 1/2 beats as well, so it's not too over-consuming in sound, but make sure to use Soft instead of Normal
But do note, for this section 01:15:571 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think it would be better to have the claps on the off beat instead of the on beat to go more with the focus in the music here (strings) creative but i think it'll play weird.

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, requested via form... iirc

[> General <]

1. - Timing Check: Ehh, just my suggestion, but couldn't the offset should be on 916? mehh idk wtf doesn't really matter
2. - What are you using widescreen support for?!? Disable it!! sure
3. - Everything seems fine.

[> Easy <]

1. 00:33:847 (2,1) - Idk, but recorrect blanket, or maybe do a different pattern than this.. uhm ok~
2. - Perfectionist.

[> Normal <]

1. 00:13:675 (2,1) - Idk but.. symmetry? sure
2. 00:15:399 (3) - You could also use the drum clap on the head of this slider, the drums on the song track sound greater. nah, i'm fine with the hitsounds
3. 00:36:606 (1,2,3,4) - I feel this pattern is weird. I might not understand your flow, but maybe you could just curve one of the sliders here mehh curved 1
4. 00:39:882 (2) - Why adding finish here? i know there's this ride on the song track here, but it's quite small. alright
5. - Waow, it gets better during.

[> Hard <]

1. 00:20:399 (2,3) - Idfk, recorrect blanket or sth. alright looks perfect to me
2. 00:26:089 (3,4) - Eh... is this spacing on purpose, i guess you should change slider (1)'s position. i guess it looked weird, fixed.
3. 00:36:089 (3) - I think this rhythm looks offbeat, maybe you could follow a little bit of vocals here? Just shoerten this slider to 1/2 and maybe add a circle next to it. fixed
4. 00:41:606 (2,3,1) - It feels a bit odd when this is stacked while staying in just one grid, unstack and remake sth better here. antijumps instead~
5. 00:47:123 (2,3,1) - ^ antijumps instead~
6. 01:17:296 (3,4,1) - Why spacing is differed here? i though you're using 1.4x on the start... jumps~
7. 01:26:261 (1,2,3) - Spacing~ for calmness, low spacing.
8. - Ehhk, some distance spacing issues, but quite a nice diff.

[> Insane <]

1. 00:16:434 (3) - Are you serious about this slider?!?! This is overrating the player's cursor. fun to play!
2. 00:42:813 (2,3,4) - Spacing... or maybe not? no stressing needed~
3. 00:50:571 (1) - Ctrl + G? oh.. nice!
4. - Nothing much to say, but great diff!

... I'm tired... e_e

Uhh, bad mod imo. Good Luck!

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]

1. 01:10:054 (3) - Even the surrounding rhythm to click this object is a 1/1, the drum rhythm is pretty complexed to catch as an easy difficulty imo. I personally suggest removing this note to make beginners more comfortable to play, and to also emphasize the finish sounds at 01:09:709 and 01:10:399 by placing in a row. fixed!
2. 01:21:951 - Are you sure about this whistle sound? It feels pretty loud and redundant. removed

[Normal]

1. 00:31:089 (1,3) - 00:33:847 (1,3) - 00:36:606 (1,3) - Regarding the comboes, I think starting the combo from the current (3) will be more appropriate to seperate the instrument part better. In the previous rhythm section, the seperation is done well like 00:20:571 (2,3) and such consistency can be maintained. well its just basic 1 measure 1 nc, i wanna keep it as it is.
2. 00:44:192 - Consider adding a note here since there is both a big drum sound and a vocal. Maybe the orginal intention of you might been to make the rhythm consistent with 00:45:054 (1,2), but unlike 00:45:571, the drum sound of 00:44:192 feels important to get ignored. done
3. 01:21:951 - Same with Easy. removed

[Hard]

1. 00:25:916 (2,3) - I definitely believe the flow can be better than this. changed

[Insane]

1. 00:16:434 (3) - The volume feels quite high here. Lessening to 30% will be enough. changed to c:1, which is softer.
2. 01:18:847 (5) - Consider adding a NC since the rhythm changes, but the distance of the note remains the same. ok

[SNAFU]

1. 00:13:502 (2,3) - Stack unreadable due to the merge with the BG. Changing the combo color by using color hax is most recommended. done!
2. 01:11:261 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Pretty interesting xD

hehe

Flower wrote:

A quick silly check


[snafu]
I feel sick when hitting complete overlapped 1/2 notes. maybe increase stack leniency to 4? as you don't have any significant patterns that requires preventing 1/2 stack lol, ok

[Insane]
as this is lower difficulty, I suggest also let 1/1 notes stack, so increase the leniency to 5. what do you think? ok
00:59:882 (3,4) - make parallel or like this? ss is snafu diff, so erm im not sure what you're saying. no change

wake me when you need me.

Josde wrote:

Here's a small mod, sorry if I'm doing something wrong as it's the first time I do something like this.
[General]
Here's the full res version of the background in case you want to use it. quality has been compromised for filesize.
The MP3 is a bit quiet, so you should possibly make it louder. its fine as it is
Also maybe put the preview point in 1:00:227 (the kiai) directly? why? doesn't sound good
AFAIK, the title is "Harumodoki", not "Haru Modoki" pretty sure the current is correct
Add "opening" and "single" to the tags? already have opening, single isn't necessary

[Snafu]
00:07:985 (2) - New combo to make it easier to sightread? It'd make it clearer that there's a space between those two notes. nc spam, nah.
00:10:744 (2) - ^ nc spam, nah.
00:13:502 (2) - ^ nc spam, nah.

[Insane]
01:19:882 (2) - Move the note to prevent a confusing overlap with the sliderend? intentional

[Hard]
00:46:434 (1) - Risky object, not totally sure if it's rankable. good catch, however its not outside so its fine.

thanks for taking your time, however! you're on the right track ^^