[Easy]
Inherit timing sections musn't be on the top of the beats.
00:38:609 - make it like arc?

[Normal]
01:55:850 - 20+ break unrankable =/
03:26:884 - ^

Spinner circle is not perfect?

nice

RISE FROM YOUR GRAVE!

(moved from Graveyard)

└(｀・ω・´)┘

nice
i love the comboburst pic

0.0

All suggestions

Lunatic

01:13:092 (3,4,5) - 間距?
01:16:713 (8) - remove?
01:26:368 (2,3) - ctrl+r?
01:27:747 (2,3) - ^
01:34:298 - add?
01:45:333 - ^
01:50:678 (2) - 移到左邊紅線上?
02:06:540 (4) - 加個finish在尾巴?
02:29:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ._.(如果不打算改間距的話 就加new combo :< (或者移除4和8 後面改下間距
03:04:815 - 爲什麽突然break ._.
03:21:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 改成這樣的節奏? (或者改下排列..很難讀哎http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42546
04:39:471 (4,5,6,7) - ._.(玩了4分半 突然這麼個跳..坑爹啊
04:47:057 (1) - 結束在大白線上?

kaouji's Hard

01:05:505 (4,5) - spacing?
01:16:195 (5) - 結束在白線?
01:24:815 - add?
01:27:574 - ^
01:55:850 - ^

kaouji's Normal

Stack不能0 (全難度統一?
00:28:953 (3,5,1,2) - 去吃滑調上的whistle
貌似每個slider都這樣..算了 無視掉吧Orz
01:16:022 (6) - 移到右邊的紅線上?

Easy

Stack 全難度統一?

fixed~

Going for approval? (4:30 length can't be ranked)
Include a spinner approach circle in your folder
Does Easy need halved bpm?

Easy:
Looks good

kaouji's Normal:
Make HP Drain higher than Easy
01:27:229 (6,1) - space out slightly more
01:32:057 (8,1) - ^
01:33:091 (9) - add note?
01:33:781 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be stacked neater
03:36:540 (1,2,3) - separate to make it slightly more interesting?
03:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:41:884 (3,1) - spacing

kaouji's Hard:
Personally I don't like all the breaks at the end with just 1 note in between them
00:55:333 (5,6,7) - spread these out more to make them easier to read?
01:16:195 (5,1) - try and avoid anti jumps
03:08:609 (8,1) - ^

Lunatic:
Looks nice

Pretty good mapset
Star'ed~

funfun sliders for hard
good luck!

Hi

Easy:

1. 00:33:091 (1)-Remove that whistle. Add a finish instead?
2. 01:06:195 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning of that slider. Add a finish instead?
3. 01:21:367 (2)-Remove that finish from the end of that slider. Add a whistle instead??
4. 01:49:643 (5)-Remove that whistle from the end of that slider. Add a finish instead?

kaouji's Normal:

1. 00:54:815 (3)-Remove that whistle from the end of that slider. Add a finish instead?
2. 01:18:609 (4)-Add a whistle.
3. 01:19:988 (2)-^
4. 01:22:057 (1, 2)-Add a timing point (green line) on 01:21:971 and have it custom override 2. Remove that finish from 1 and add a whistle instead? I believe it sounds better in my opinion. And add a finish on 2.
5. 01:49:988 (2)-Add a finish on the end of that slider?
6. 02:22:747 (4)-Add a clap on the beginning of that slider.
7. 02:35:160 (6)-^
8. 02:37:919 (9)-^
9. 02:52:402 (11)-Add a clap on the end of that slider?
10. 02:53:781 (3)-Add a finish.
11. 03:21:367 (2)-Remove that clap. Add a finish instead?
12. 03:26:884 (9)-Add a finish.
13. 04:24:815 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.

kaouji's Hard:

General:
-Uh... The slider velocity is kinda fast for a Hard. And I'm surprised that it has more speed then Lunatic does. O_o Its not hard to read, its just pretty fast. Maybe reducing the speed to 1.60 or 1.50 would be great.

1. 01:06:195 (5)-Remove that whistle from the beginning of that slider. Add a finish instead?
2. 01:22:747 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
3. 01:55:505 (3)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
4. 02:24:815 (2)-Add a whistle on the beginning of that slider.
5. 02:31:712 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning of that slider. Add a finish instead?
6. 03:59:988 (3)-Add a finish.
7. 04:13:609 (5)-Remove that whistle from the end of that slider. Add a finish instead?
8. 04:19:298 (1)-^
9. 04:24:815 (3)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
10. 04:34:471 (2)-Remove that whistle from the end of that slider. Add a finish instead?
11. 04:41:022 (1)-^
12. 04:46:540 (4)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.

Lunatic:

1. 01:00:678 (3)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
2. 03:37:919 (1)-Add a finish.
3. 03:43:436 (1)-Remove new combo?
4. 03:44:815 (1)-^
5. 03:45:505 (1)-^
6. 03:48:953 (1)-Add a finish.
7. 03:51:712 (2)-Add a finish on the end of that slider?
8. 04:13:781 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?
9. 04:26:884 (4)-Add a clap on the beginning of that slider.

Pretty cool storyboard.

Good luck getting this ranked, I suppose.

Star.

thanks for modding~ all fixed.

james2250@: 4:30 length is rankable, such as http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12027 .
about spinner approach circle, the default one is fine
and.. thanks for modding~

Roddie@: thanks for hitsounds help~

[General]
- L-1s.png, too much of transparency, please crop them.
- spinner-circle.png look like it's spin around when spining @_@
- add spinner approach circle? just asking because someone didn't use a default skin (such as me)

[Easy]
- use bpm like other diff? use 174 as BPM, and change green line to 0.5x silder speed
01:58:609 [SB] maybe fade it?

[kaouji's Normal] - look fine, a bit hard for a normal though

[kaouji's Hard] - isn't this should be Insane, a bit too hard for hard diff imo
- suggest you to add some new combo a bit more
- delete some useless green lines?

[Lunatic] - nice
- delete some useless green lines?

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- L-1s.png, too much of transparency, please crop them. it seems a hard work and it's fine imo...
- spinner-circle.png look like it's spin around when spining @_@ O.O
- add spinner approach circle? just asking because someone didn't use a default skin (such as me) sure.

[Easy]
- use bpm like other diff? use 174 as BPM, and change green line to 0.5x silder speed fixed~
01:58:609 [SB] maybe fade it? fixed~

- delete some useless green lines?

remove some useless green lines. but too many green lines here, maybe I miss some.>_>

thanks for modding~

star

SB美图美歌美 恩

As per your request:

[General]
Can you delete the extra transparency off the top of the comboburst? I giggle every time it pops out, haha
With L-1s.png, maybe delete the bottom-end of the transparency?
There's a Thumbs.db file in the SB -> BG folder, if you want to take care of that.
The center of the spinner dot is a little off, if you want to address that.
Add a spinner approach circle too. My custom one blends in too much. ><
I really like the idea for the SB lyrics. Though there are strange cuts with some of the lyrics like at here:
The SB load steadily grows higher and higher the further into the song you go. It breaches 5.0 at 04:06:884 - and I don't know why. Maybe it's because of the large lyrics image?

[Easy]
So short. ;_;
00:41:367 - This slider tick intended to be the custom one?
01:24:126 (3) - Remove clap on start of slider?
01:37:919 (2,3,4) - I'm wary of stacks in easy difficulties - but this one might be pushing it. Maybe try something else?

[kaouji's Normal]
01:29:643 (4) - Tiny overlap here, if you want to address that
01:33:436 (1) - Maybe stack this with the 8 slider?
01:08:264 (1) - Compare hitsounds here to 02:39:298 (1) -
03:07:919 (7,8,9) - Miiight be confusing as to when 9 hits since the stacks are with different rhythms.
03:17:057 (2,3) - Not stacked properly
03:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are these the reason for the super-low stack leniency? Maybe just start them lower and to the right a bit to compensate for the stacking positioning to keep the diamond shape. If you don't change it, at least make sure they are ALL in the same spot. There are a couple that are slightly off and it's easily noticed.
04:07:919 (2,4) - Tiny overlap
Really nice.

[kaouji's Hard]
So much greeeen. :D There are a few that are unnecessary though, if you want to comb through this and delete them.
AR 8 seems a bit high, but if I lower it it makes things like 00:51:712 (6,1,2,3,4) - really messy. :/ Oh well.
01:22:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I <3 these motions
02:40:678 (4,5) - Maybe position these so that the hitcircle part of the sliders aren't overlapping with the slider bodies? They'll look 200% better. :D
03:40:678 (5) - Hrm, maybe add new combo here and remove new combo on 03:42:747 (1) - ?
Good~

[Lunatic]
More greeeen
01:43:953 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Wow, awesome
02:34:987 (2,3) - It looks cool, but the jump doesn't flow very well to me. Maybe reduce the jump distance to 2.0-2.1x?
02:41:539 (3,4) - but this one read just fine for me. I don't understand. ;_; You use that pattern a lot. Maybe just nevermind. :P
03:53:781 (3,4,5) - These don't look good unstacked like that.

Just nitpicking about small stuff here. Great mapset!

[General]
Can you delete the extra transparency off the top of the comboburst? I giggle every time it pops out, haha
With L-1s.png, maybe delete the bottom-end of the transparency? it will change all position and do not reduce SB laod
There's a Thumbs.db file in the SB -> BG folder, if you want to take care of that.
The center of the spinner dot is a little off, if you want to address that.done
Add a spinner approach circle too. My custom one blends in too much. ><done
I really like the idea for the SB lyrics. Though there are strange cuts with some of the lyrics like at here:done
The SB load steadily grows higher and higher the further into the song you go. It breaches 5.0 at 04:06:884 - and I don't know why. Maybe it's because of the large lyrics image?3.62x in my and xier's PC

[kaouji's Normal]
01:29:643 (4) - Tiny overlap here, if you want to address that fixed
01:33:436 (1) - Maybe stack this with the 8 slider? fixed
01:08:264 (1) - Compare hitsounds here to 02:39:298 (1) - fixed
03:07:919 (7,8,9) - Miiight be confusing as to when 9 hits since the stacks are with different rhythms.fixed
03:17:057 (2,3) - Not stacked properly it is stacked in my sight
03:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are these the reason for the super-low stack leniency? Maybe just start them lower and to the right a bit to compensate for the stacking positioning to keep the diamond shape. If you don't change it, at least make sure they are ALL in the same spot. There are a couple that are slightly off and it's easily noticed.fixed
04:07:919 (2,4) - Tiny overlapnot , Ctrl+A will know why

[kaouji's Hard]
So much greeeen. There are a few that are unnecessary though, if you want to comb through this and delete them.fixed
AR 8 seems a bit high, but if I lower it it makes things like 00:51:712 (6,1,2,3,4) - really messy. :/ Oh well.01:22:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I <3 these motions
02:40:678 (4,5) - Maybe position these so that the hitcircle part of the sliders aren't overlapping with the slider bodies? They'll look 200% better.
03:40:678 (5) - Hrm, maybe add new combo here and remove new combo on 03:42:747 (1) - ?fixed
Good~

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
So short. ;_;
00:41:367 - This slider tick intended to be the custom one? it's the custom one, just low volume >_>
01:24:126 (3) - Remove clap on start of slider? kk~
01:37:919 (2,3,4) - I'm wary of stacks in easy difficulties - but this one might be pushing it. Maybe try something else? it's fine imo >_>

[Lunatic]
More greeeen removed unused green lines >_>
01:43:953 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Wow, awesome @w@
02:34:987 (2,3) - It looks cool, but the jump doesn't flow very well to me. Maybe reduce the jump distance to 2.0-2.1x? >_>
02:41:539 (3,4) - but this one read just fine for me. I don't understand. ;_; You use that pattern a lot. Maybe just nevermind.
03:53:781 (3,4,5) - These don't look good unstacked like that. changed ~

thanks for modding~ fixed.

star 做ED吧

我觉得 OP 比 ED 好一点。

Great work, really improved since I last saw it, however, still got quite a way to go sadly. D:

[Easy]
A lot of things are unsymmetrical, is that on purpose? Because they're like...one grid off.

[Normal]

kaouji wrote:

The SB load steadily grows higher and higher the further into the song you go. It breaches 5.0 at 04:06:884 - and I don't know why. Maybe it's because of the large lyrics image?3.62x in my and xier's PC

I can explain why the SB breaches 5.0 and only 3.62 in just your's and xier's PC. It's because Normal has this "mark.png" which isn't there in any of the other difficulties. You might want to remove it in this difficulty.

[Hard]
Seems very hard for a Hard. I think you could also change some patterns that are confusing. Also, the SV in this is 1.80 which Lunatic is 1.60. D:

[Lunatic]
00:49:298 (1) - Return arrow is hidden by previous combo 3. I cried when that was a return arrow, can you change it?

I might mod more later. Kinda not into it today.

Lilac wrote:

我觉得 OP 比 ED 好一点。

Great work, really improved since I last saw it, however, still got quite a way to go sadly. D:

[Easy]
A lot of things are unsymmetrical, is that on purpose? Because they're like...one grid off.

[Normal]

kaouji wrote:

The SB load steadily grows higher and higher the further into the song you go. It breaches 5.0 at 04:06:884 - and I don't know why. Maybe it's because of the large lyrics image?3.62x in my and xier's PC

i'm sorry,3.62x & over 5.0x version is the old one, wiill update a max=3.28x version.

[Hard]
Seems very hard for a Hard. I think you could also change some patterns that are confusing. Also, the SV in this is 1.80 which Lunatic is 1.60. D: almost all slider,i think it will be a normal+ if SV under1.6,but now look like hard or hard+,i guess it's time to remake it

I might mod more later. Kinda not into it today.

At last,Thx.

I actually meant there was something in [Normal] which shouldn't be in there...

Which is the "mark.png" things.

backup

Download: TOKINE - Soko ni Aru Mono (xierbaliti) [kaouji's Hard mk.2].osu

uploaded.

[General]
Remove either "touhou" or "Touhou" from tags.

[Easy]
So short. ;_;

[Normal]
02:06:884 - Maybe add a note here?
02:34:557 - Sudden volume increase here. Doesn't sound intentional
I'm still getting that 5x + SB load on this difficulty. :/
04:46:884 (1) - End this with the other difficulties?

[Hard]
Maybe add in breaks like the other difficulties? The play time is really high (252 seconds!)
00:48:264 (6,1) - This jump intentional? There aren't any jumps around this until the chorus later in. :/
01:01:712 (2,4,6,8) - Erm, are these positioned the way you want them to be? Looks accidental while playing.
02:17:747 (1) - Start this at 02:17:919 -

[Lunatic]
03:04:988 - Uh... is this break intentional? It completely destroys the pace you have, and it's right at the start of a chorus.

fixed~

Aaah, you logged off.

Check 02:39:384 - for the volume on Normal too. ><


Edit:
kk, all good now.

:U

good SB+song+mapset
so many green lines XD
ranked

btw Normal is really epic

finallyyyyy

I waiting for play this ~ XD

fffffffinally

Gratz btw Touhou should have been in source, and Musou Kakyou should be in tags ^^

Gabi wrote:

Gratz :) btw Touhou should have been in source, and Musou Kakyou should be in tags ^^

@#$*(

Oh well, haha. gratz anyway, Xier~

thanks >_<

Actually, since this song is from a touhou anime i guess the source is fine

May I ask.... ....why is there an approach circle if there are not hitcircle nor hitcircleoverlay? I use a custom approach circle so this caught my attention.

If there is no special reason you could try to get a BAT/Gmod to hacksubmit the file wihout the approachcircle?
Good SB btw.

Hey, this is very cool o:
nice sb-map