I tend to give object placement options for almost everything so you can ignore them, do a variation of them, or copy them exactly as is, but please consider my points regardless of placement suggestions o3o
[Flower-Viewing Party]
00:17:802 (4) - ctrl G? i think it would fit very well with 00:17:288 (2) - for a sort of repeating jump pattern kind of flow. at the same time, the jump and angle to 00:18:145 (1) - isnt as strong so the (1) slider isnt emphasized as much as before, which i think would make it better since you didnt add a finish there like 00:16:774 (1) - 00:19:516 (1) - . so two birds with one stone ?
- 00:30:488 (5,1,2,3) - uhhh this is pretty hard to read mostly because its so clumpy there without a pattern that i can see and partially because the long reverse slider doesnt set up for such a drastic change into 1/4ths o-o buuuut thats not too important if its read well. soooo maybe you could move it out of that little spot like so?
- 00:37:859 (2) - hidden reverse arrow at the tail. almost certain this is unrankable o-o if you want to keep similar flow, maybe try something like this
- 00:43:688 (3,4,5,6,7) - mmm there really isnt a reason for these 1/8ths! theyre kinda way too crazy lol theres barely even 1/4ths here. not only that but starting at 00:43:859 - is a triplet so those beats are completely missed o-o consider using a rhythm like this?
- 02:55:345 (3,4) - imo this would play better if you ctrl G these two and then ctrl G them individually for smoother transitions according to the slider shapes. the (4) slider could also set up with the downward motion onto 02:56:031 (1) - . try it out!
- 03:04:259 (1,2) - this plays a bit awkwardly for me. try ctrl G for these two? the transition between 03:04:088 (6,1) - will have a sharper angle to break rotation and better emphasize 03:04:259 (1) - which is like the "start" of the new section of the dingdingding parts if you know what i mean LOL i think its a xylophone? anyways it would be similar to what you did so nicely at 03:02:202 (4,5) -. another thing is that i noticed youre trying to lead your sliders with the note before so you might want to move 03:04:431 (2) - too lol. ALL IN ALL!! try something like this and see if oyu like it heh
- 03:57:402 (3) - this part could be made to fit the music better. 03:56:888 (2,3) - these two notes play very similarly but its very different in the music. (3) is much more powerful, and the start of the new section in the new measure is at the reverse arrow or tail. consider this rhythm and placement instead?
- 04:01:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i can play this map perfectly fine but i have a lot trouble reading this part if i dont remember the rhythm in the music. 100s everywhere orz. please consider adding NCs to 04:03:231 - 04:05:974 - so the different rhythms are at least sectioned in terms of NC o-o iiiiiim not sure if thatll completely fix it though because its stuck in my head now and i memorized it lol
- 04:08:716 (3,4) - this only an opinion!: i think itd be better aesthetically if this was the mirrored pattern of 04:07:345 (1,2) - . of course this is just what i would prefer and if you dislike it, really, just forget this point lol. i just wanted to make sure this option was properly considered~ c:
- 04:58:945 (3,4,5,1) - this smooth flow of circles doesnt really sit well with me.. it feels a bit out of place o-o all the other circle patterns in this part of the music is mapped with this.. jumpy/edgy feel? if that makes any sense. and its great! it fits well in those parts! but this part plays very differently to me and is lacking. maybe consider a pattern like this instead
- 05:51:059 (1,2) - this kills the soul and spirit of players ;-; a bit out of the blue and harder to hit since its after a slider like that, especially at the end of the map to kill the FCs. i am guilty of trying this once in my map. i wish i could remove it lol
- 01:05:802 (7) - NC for better representation of change in music and pattern?
- 01:38:545 (4) - NC for clearer patterns?
- 01:48:488 (4) - should remove NC here imo. notes are still part of the previous musical section with no change in rhythm
- 02:10:774 (6) - this NC is highly based off preference. it doesnt matter too much but i would NC here for the slight change in music as it gets a bit more intense
- 02:33:574 (1) - ^ same here
- 02:37:516 (3) - NC? cuz this is the same rhythm as 01:20:716 - and that has an NC. soo uh one or the other please make these two consistent o3o
- 02:42:316 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - errr these are a bit strange since the NCs are on red ticks and this poor guy 02:42:316 (1) - is just all alone. :c i know youre NCing off pattern but i think this still works, just a bit more cleanly
- 03:17:288 (7) - NC for clearer patterns?
- 03:21:916 (1) - NC? you did a double measure NC here when the only ones i could find so far are from slow sections and this is very much not a slow section heh
- 03:28:602 (1) - NC for clearer patterns?
- 03:43:688 (3) - NC? im not sure why you switched into double measure NCs.. 2 measures after the section in the music starts lol its also not a slow parttt
- 03:46:602 (4) - ^
- 03:52:088 (4) - ^
- 03:54:831 (5) - ^ and if youre worried about it b/c there arent enough notes in the combo, i would say NC consistency is more important o-o
- 03:57:574 - ^ just gave the time stamp in case you did the change mentioned up there somewhere o3o
- 04:31:859 (6,1) - swap NC? this is where the pattern and measure sorta starts
- 04:33:745 (1,2) - swap NC? 04:33:745 (1) - still feels like its part of the previous section in the music
- 04:39:574 (3) - remove NC? this one doesnt seem too important as it isnt much of a jump pattern by 2s. you also havent done these kinds of NCs in previous choruses... i dont think o-o
- 04:54:659 (1) - i would personally NC this for the increasing intensity but thats just me! this suggestion pretty much doesnt matter at all! l0l
- 04:56:031 (1) - NC to mark kind of a sudden SV change?
- 05:04:431 (1) - remove NC? again, this isnt much of a jump pattern thing and its a bit inconsistent with the previous parts of this section of music
- 05:18:659 - mmmm from this point onwards i would follow a regular 1 NC per measure pattern only o-o since you havent done any special NCs for patterns like this on the similar section of music in the beginning if ya know what i meannn.. and there isnt anything special in the music either :/ your NCs here are kinda all over the place with NCs for 2 note patterns 05:04:431 - .. like once in the whole section orrrr double measure NCs 05:28:259 - ,,,,,,, aaaa
- 00:21:059 - clap?
- 03:53:288 - are you sure you want to map over the clap here? its the only missed clap you have.. maybe a 1/2 slider and a note added at 03:53:459 - would be better
imo, it just needs some cleaning up, not only NCs but also some notes that are half touching sliders. like baaaaarely touching em but still touching like 01:13:516 (2,3) - . it seems kinda messy like that but its not too important right now and i didnt want to fill up the mod post with "EY MOVE THIS 2 CM!"
this map is popular in the strawberry mousse lol ok bye!