Demetori - Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura ~ Border of L

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Ameth Rianno
I think the diff name should be "Perfect Ink-Black Cherry Blossom"/"Repository of Hirokawa"/"Butterfly Delusion"/"Law of Mortality". Flower Party viewing is for Prismriver Sisters, not Yuyuko Saigyouji. Check this: http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Perfect_C ... ds/Stage_6

I hope this map get approved!
Topic Starter
Alheak
Naming the diff after one of the spell cards isn't a bad idea, I'll consider this.

I like the current name though, and I don't see where it'd be more appropriate for the Prismriver Sisters than for Yuyuko. I think it's the "party" bit but flower-viewing parties are more of something I'd see Yuyuko participate in. I can understand that it'd be a bit inappropriate for the track though.

Thanks for the help
Lethargy
Yo, IRC mod.

19:36 Lethargy: can you mod?
19:36 Alheak: i guess
19:36 Alheak: m4m?
19:36 Lethargy: could be
19:37 Alheak: what do you need help with?
19:37 Lethargy: its not really help
19:37 Lethargy: we just need mods, to polish the map
19:38 Alheak: it was a way of speaking lol
19:38 Alheak: just /np the map
19:38 Lethargy: yea
19:38 Lethargy: wait
19:38 *Lethargy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/770940 yanaginagi - Koibumi]
19:46 Alheak: alright
19:46 Alheak: ill do a mod
19:46 Lethargy: nice
19:46 Lethargy: btw
19:46 Lethargy: why do you hate me
19:46 Alheak: do i?
19:46 Alheak: do i sound that way
19:46 Alheak: lol
19:46 Lethargy: you do
19:46 Alheak: welp
19:47 Alheak: dont worry
19:47 Alheak: i dont hate you
19:47 Lethargy: i was asking
19:47 Lethargy: just in case
19:47 Alheak: alright
19:47 Alheak: my map then
19:47 *Alheak is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/705038 Demetori - Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura ~ Border of Life]
19:48 Alheak: mod isn't mandatory
19:48 Lethargy: ill do a mod
19:48 Lethargy: need kds
19:48 Alheak: but id like you at like to play it and give it your general opinion of it
19:48 Alheak: at least
19:48 Lethargy: so just testplay?
19:48 Alheak: alright
19:48 Alheak: at least yes
19:49 Alheak: testplay + feedback
19:54 Lethargy: im not gonna lie to you now
19:54 Alheak: lmao
19:54 Lethargy: i quit playing osu soem time ago cuz most of the maps i played were boring
19:55 Lethargy: this one was pretty fun to play
19:55 Alheak: well thanks
19:55 Alheak: do you play mouse?
19:55 Lethargy: no
19:55 Lethargy: im tablet player
19:55 Lethargy: im just too lazy to take out my tablet
19:55 Lethargy: so this was a mouse play :D
19:55 Alheak: oh okay i see
19:55 Lethargy: why?
19:56 Alheak: your movements were wery mouseplayer-like
19:56 Lethargy: oh
19:56 Lethargy: true
19:56 Alheak: snappy but kinda awkward
19:56 Lethargy: lmao
19:56 Lethargy: yea
19:56 Lethargy: i cant really play withi tablet anymore
19:56 Lethargy: as my hand hurts from some reason when i play with it
19:57 Alheak: muscles pain or something RSI-like?
19:59 Alheak: brb
20:04 Lethargy: probably
20:04 Lethargy: it just hurts
20:15 Alheak: welp
20:15 Alheak: mouse isnt so bad when you get used to it
20:16 Lethargy: i guess
20:19 Alheak: quick question about your map
20:19 Lethargy: sure
20:20 Alheak: even though it's only like 1.9 stars
20:20 Alheak: what guidelines did you follow?
20:20 Alheak: insane's?
20:20 Lethargy: hard
20:21 Alheak: alright
20:21 Lethargy: so no spacing restriction etc
20:21 Lethargy: its more like
20:21 Lethargy: kind of free diff
20:21 Lethargy: as it is low bpm
20:21 Alheak: yeah i see
20:26 Lethargy: ok
20:26 Lethargy: so lets do it
20:26 Lethargy: this was quite awkward to play 00:01:708 (1,2) -
20:27 Alheak: alright
20:32 Lethargy: lets púlay it again
20:34 Lethargy: this slidershape is pretty awkward 00:29:651 (2) -
20:34 Lethargy: how about ctrl g this 00:32:565 (1) -
20:34 Lethargy: this is also pretty akwards 00:35:136 (2) -
20:35 Lethargy: 00:42:679 (7) - would recommend either stacking this
20:35 Lethargy: or moving it a bit further
20:36 Lethargy: http://puu.sh/kdyg0/25771a1ea2.jpg
20:36 Lethargy: 00:45:594 (1) -
20:37 Lethargy: maybe this way it is slightly better?
20:38 Alheak: you mean more curved?
20:38 Lethargy: more curved
20:38 Lethargy: and the first red point further from the circle
20:38 Alheak: i see
20:38 Alheak: alright
20:39 Lethargy: same here 00:48:336 (1) -
20:39 Lethargy: this slider definitely deserves some really nice guitar riff shape 00:53:822 (1) -
20:39 Lethargy: this also like before 00:56:565 (1) -
20:39 Lethargy: increase spacing here 01:05:736 (6,7) -
20:40 Lethargy: also the shape her 01:15:765 (1) -
20:40 Lethargy: this is quite awkward shape
20:40 Lethargy: 01:20:394 (3) -
20:40 Lethargy: this one is quite hard to read 01:33:079 (3) -
20:40 Lethargy: you decide what to do with it
20:41 Lethargy: maybe put these five a bit more up 01:38:565 (1,2,3,4,5) -
20:41 Lethargy: =
20:41 Lethargy: increase a bit spacing between 01:38:479 (3,1) -
20:42 Lethargy: consider this shape? 01:44:565 (1) - http://puu.sh/kdyD9/e1f490a65f.jpg
20:43 Lethargy: 02:24:336 (1) - maybe a bit more curved? http://puu.sh/kdyIH/5f93055859.jpg
20:43 Lethargy: this shape, just like before 02:27:079 (1) -
20:43 Lethargy: dude, are you ignoring me?
20:44 Alheak: nope im just correcting as you are modding
20:44 Alheak: you're pretty fast
20:44 Lethargy: well
20:44 Lethargy: when i get in the mood
20:44 Lethargy: i do stuff quite quickly
20:45 Alheak: yea i see that lol
20:45 Alheak: i've changed most of it
20:46 Lethargy: maybe icnrease spacing here? 02:32:565 (1,2,3) -
20:46 Lethargy: shape again 02:38:051 (1) -
20:47 Lethargy: ;slightly more curved? 02:49:022 (1) - http://puu.sh/kdz0C/f2ac43c507.jpg
20:47 Lethargy: another awkward shapes
20:47 Lethargy: 02:53:136 (5) -
20:48 Lethargy: this is the problematic part 03:18:336 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
20:49 Alheak: lmao
20:49 Lethargy: try 03:20:051 (1,2,3,4) -
20:49 Lethargy: kickback here instead
20:49 Lethargy: and here could be some sliderstream 03:20:394 (1,2,3,4) -
20:49 Lethargy: lmao jk
20:49 Lethargy: just kicksliders could work
20:50 Lethargy: but if you want to be experimental then go for sliderstream
20:50 Lethargy: and this definitely needs more spacing 03:20:651 (4,1) -
20:51 Alheak: it's 1/4 though
20:51 Lethargy: yea
20:51 Lethargy: some people do sliderstreams even though stuff is 1/4
20:51 Lethargy: and its ranked
20:52 Lethargy: 03:21:936 (1) - http://puu.sh/kdzl3/51ffd28ea1.jpg
20:52 Lethargy: also
20:52 Lethargy: i would say that
20:52 Alheak: are sliderstreams 1/8 sliders?
20:52 Lethargy: yea
20:52 Lethargy: but dont use them
20:52 Lethargy: the more intense guitar, the more curved slider
20:56 Lethargy: 03:23:479 (1) - this way http://puu.sh/kdzCZ/f0fef8574b.jpg
20:57 Lethargy: this could be a bit more curved 03:28:536 (5,6,7,8,9,1) -
20:57 Lethargy: like this http://puu.sh/kdzFx/eb6999e4af.jpg
20:57 Lethargy: same here 03:31:708 (1) - http://puu.sh/kdzHi/94d726ec6f.jpg
20:58 Lethargy: maybe this 03:32:908 (1) - http://puu.sh/kdzKk/a9e4e79a54.jpg
20:58 Lethargy: oh
20:58 Lethargy: that sucks
20:58 Lethargy: how about this http://puu.sh/kdzLu/619661ae9a.jpg
20:58 Lethargy: is it curved this way intentionally? 03:35:822 (1,2,3) -
20:59 Lethargy: d00d
21:00 Lethargy: d000000000000000000000000000d
21:00 Alheak: yes yes
21:01 Lethargy: cuz it was kind of awkward to play it
21:01 Alheak: well i think i was more interesting that just straight streams
21:01 Alheak: it was*
21:01 Lethargy: well
21:01 Lethargy: if you look at it
21:01 Lethargy: flown this way
21:01 Lethargy: it ends up as two doubles
21:02 Lethargy: cuz there is the jerky movement
21:02 Lethargy: when you do the transition from 2 to 3
21:02 Lethargy: also this part 03:37:451 (1,4) -
21:02 Lethargy: i would do it this way http://puu.sh/kdA5C/1caad89538.jpg
21:03 Lethargy: as the sound in the middle is different
21:03 Lethargy: and it confused the hell otu of me when i way testplaying it
21:04 Lethargy: anyway
21:04 Alheak: i see but it seems fine
21:04 Lethargy: well
21:04 Alheak: at least the way it plays
21:04 Lethargy: have you played it yourself?
21:05 Lethargy: 03:41:136 (1) - http://puu.sh/kdAeF/388a374d1f.jpg
21:05 Alheak: well of course
21:05 Lethargy: it wasnt really working for me
21:05 Lethargy: but if you want wanna do it
21:05 Lethargy: dont
21:05 Lethargy: its my opinion after all :D
21:06 Lethargy: 04:22:279 (1) - http://puu.sh/kdAmv/0cbed1a0bf.jpg
21:07 Lethargy: this slidershape isnt really pretty in my opinion at all 04:29:136 (1) -
21:07 Lethargy: and dont really know how to to make it better
21:07 Lethargy: try doing smth with it
21:08 Alheak: yea
21:08 Lethargy: increase spacing here a bit? 04:56:051 (5,6) -
21:09 Lethargy: 05:05:479 (3,4) - swap these two?
21:09 Lethargy: like this http://puu.sh/kdAA4/fb36163242.jpg
21:10 Lethargy: ok thats it
21:10 Lethargy: nice work again
21:11 Lethargy: gonna post the log, k?
21:12 Alheak: alright
21:12 Alheak: thanks for the help

Nice map d00d
pkhg
i clicked that ^

[General]


  • delete osbbb

  1. 00:14:222 (1,2) - ctrl+g them for placement, flows better imo
  2. 00:31:536 (5,6) - theres nothing on the taillsss, im against that
  3. 00:32:908 (3,4) - 4 is strong enough to emphasize it with moar spacing, the stack kills it
  4. 01:13:536 (2,3) - i dont like how this flows but meh
  5. 01:32:736 (2,3) - i dont like this kind of stacks
  6. 01:49:365 - y u ignored this, it even has a cymbal sound so pls
  7. 02:39:936 (2,3) - u know, also the overlap makes it worst
  8. 03:01:536 (1) - 03:16:279 (6) - dude thats c00L
  9. 03:16:879 - add notee
  10. 03:17:222 (6) - pls delete
  11. 03:20:651 (4,1) - slider > circle 1/4 jumps are fine but circle > slider are awkward to play, isnt even too spaced idk why i pointed out this
  12. 03:27:165 - add circlesss
  13. 03:28:194 - u were following the guitar in the prev section so its better if u do it here too aka add circle
  14. 03:37:365 - ^ same, theres a guitar sound here, also it helps to not leave that 3/4 gap which can cause a miss cuz spacing doesnt help too much to distinguish it
  15. 03:50:136 (3,6) - those are overmapped
  16. 05:05:308 (2,3,4,5) - the tailsss, y u do this
  17. 05:36:508 (5) - wheres the nc
  18. 05:40:708 (1,1) - make this one so players can get happy30'd


gl
Topic Starter
Alheak

pkhg wrote:

i clicked that ^

[General]


  • delete osbbb fukken osb

  1. 00:14:222 (1,2) - ctrl+g them for placement, flows better imo yep
  2. 00:31:536 (5,6) - theres nothing on the taillsss, im against that it's debatable, i think the guitar kinda suggests those kick sliders, so i'll keep them for now
  3. 00:32:908 (3,4) - 4 is strong enough to emphasize it with moar spacing, the stack kills it changed
  4. 01:13:536 (2,3) - i dont like how this flows but meh changed this part a bit
  5. 01:32:736 (2,3) - i dont like this kind of stacks i feel you but when read correctly it plays pretty well
  6. 01:49:365 - y u ignored this, it even has a cymbal sound so pls wow tru
  7. 02:39:936 (2,3) - u know, also the overlap makes it worst yes
  8. 03:01:536 (1) - 03:16:279 (6) - dude thats c00L thx
  9. 03:16:879 - add notee yes
  10. 03:17:222 (6) - pls delete dam you have good ears
  11. 03:20:651 (4,1) - slider > circle 1/4 jumps are fine but circle > slider are awkward to play, isnt even too spaced idk why i pointed out this redone this part since nobody liked it (not even me)
  12. 03:27:165 - add circlesss yes
  13. 03:28:194 - u were following the guitar in the prev section so its better if u do it here too aka add circle tru
  14. 03:37:365 - ^ same, theres a guitar sound here, also it helps to not leave that 3/4 gap which can cause a miss cuz spacing doesnt help too much to distinguish it changed this part
  15. 03:50:136 (3,6) - those are overmapped ill admit those drum beats are kinda thuds but they're here
  16. 05:05:308 (2,3,4,5) - the tailsss, y u do this same as earlier, they're strongly suggested imo
  17. 05:36:508 (5) - wheres the nc it escaped but i caught it
  18. 05:40:708 (1,1) - make this one so players can get happy30'd no please not again


gl
thanks for mod
LigerZero
Added in Tags name album this beatmap "Sinen ni Nozomu ga Gotoshi 如臨深遠 ~雨縒煙柳~"
jonathanlfj
just a small recheck no kd

[100%]
00:55:022 (6) - try two 1/4 sliders here
01:27:508 (3,1) - way too much spacing here, people will get 100 on the slider
02:42:336 (1,1,2,3) - combo group these into 2s, the random single NC feels really awkward
03:37:194 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these are really hard to grasp rhythm wise, so you should shrink the distance a bit to make it easier aim wise
04:39:765 (5) - silence the end
05:15:936 (1) - the stream felt a little random, there are no constant 1/4s in the background
05:51:079 (1,2) - could use a little more spacing to emphasize the halt in music

let me know afterwards
Topic Starter
Alheak

jonathanlfj wrote:

just a small recheck no kd

[100%]
00:55:022 (6) - try two 1/4 sliders here wouldn't that be a bit overmapped? I do hear the guitar slide here but that doesn't seem enough to justify it, though the idea is great. i checked your map to see what has been done there and there was a stream, so I guess if yours got ranked with it that should be fine
01:27:508 (3,1) - way too much spacing here, people will get 100 on the slider changed
02:42:336 (1,1,2,3) - combo group these into 2s, the random single NC feels really awkward changed
03:37:194 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these are really hard to grasp rhythm wise, so you should shrink the distance a bit to make it easier aim wise changed
04:39:765 (5) - silence the end done
05:15:936 (1) - the stream felt a little random, there are no constant 1/4s in the background I do agree that it feels a bit random, but the 1/4's are there (guitar shreds), changed for something more appropriate
05:51:079 (1,2) - could use a little more spacing to emphasize the halt in music I was reluctant at first since it's already tricky that those objects are placed just after the last spinner at the end of the song, but with slider leniency i think it should be okay

let me know afterwards
jonathanlfj
Good stuff
#1
Krfawy
#2
pishifat
2015-11-11 13:44 pishifat: are you using
2015-11-11 13:45 pishifat: the same mp3 as jonathan's map
2015-11-11 13:45 Alheak: yes
2015-11-11 13:45 pishifat: kgood
2015-11-11 13:54 pishifat: 02:32:822 (2) - 02:56:051 (1,2) -
2015-11-11 13:54 pishifat: are my complaints
2015-11-11 13:54 pishifat: do you need explanations
2015-11-11 13:55 Alheak: i guess i understand the first one
2015-11-11 13:55 Alheak: yeah maybe the second too
2015-11-11 13:55 pishifat: g
2015-11-11 13:56 pishifat: ran it through the fancy unrankable checking programs
2015-11-11 13:56 pishifat: realized i have some other diff of yours
2015-11-11 13:57 pishifat: flower-viewing party
2015-11-11 13:57 pishifat: when did that get there
2015-11-11 13:57 Alheak: all ded
2015-11-11 13:57 Alheak: i dont know
2015-11-11 14:00 Alheak: updated just now
2015-11-11 14:00 pishifat: any final words
2015-11-11 14:00 pishifat: before you burn
2015-11-11 14:01 Alheak: i like guy's too
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