7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.) [OsuMania]

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azrxx

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : (⊙o⊙)? this is only a guideline, but it's better to raise your NM star rating to >1.50 and HD to >2.25
at the moment it's still rankable but the distance between each diff's star rating is somewhat too close imo
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


there is no big issue in your map, but i personally think there are a lot of things which you could improve.
there is no emphasis on many parts of your song, which makes it rather dull to be played.
based on my reasons above and additional reason written, i'll point out some of the stuffs that maybe you can recheck
00:03:947 (3947|4) - move to 4 no reason to put it here, pitch is different

00:14:063 - piano here, add a note

00:27:668 - why 3 notes? the emphasis is very light (probably p or mp for the piano)
use 1 or 2 notes

00:30:807 (30807|4,31156|0,31200|1) - snap it. it's too difficult for HD
00:35:342 (35342|2,35386|4,35386|5) - ^ iknow you're following the sound accurately, but imo it's not suitable for HD


00:31:200 (31200|1,31505|1) - no reason to jack


00:36:738 (36738|5,36738|6,37435|5) - here as well,


00:36:738 - obviously has more emphasis than 00:37:435 - and yet you only use 1 SN to express them. please recheck your whole diffs and reconsider especially for emphasis

00:43:714 - strong emphasis
00:48:598 - weak emphasis why 3 notes?

00:49:645 - ^

and so on, there are too many to mention one by one. please do a self-mod and check all your diffs thoroughly :)


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

some stuffs which you need to probably get more familiar with
Osu!mania Ranking Criteria
How to Get Your Map Ranked
LordRaika's Hitsound Guide
UPDATED ^^
thank you grunee :3 btw can you re-check my map again? :3
schwarzvgrune
you can do a thorough self-mod first and ask others for a couple of mods.
good luck :)

be sure to read the link that i gave you! :3
troke

General


no kudos if my mod didn't help anything
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[NM]
  1. 00:00:459 (459|0,459|6,3249|6) - ctrl+h
  2. 00:04:296 (4296|1) - move to 6
  3. 00:07:784 (7784|6) - move to 5
  4. 00:09:528 (9528|6) - move to 5
  5. 00:13:017 (13017|0) - move to 4
  6. 00:14:063 (14063|3) - move to 2
  7. 00:16:854 - like this http://prntscr.com/73lj1v ?
  8. 00:18:947 (18947|1) - move to 6
  9. 00:29:063 (29063|0) - move to 5 (biar gampang)
  10. 00:33:598 (33598|3,33772|5) - geser ke kiri 1 langkah
  11. 00:40:226 (40226|2,40400|1,40575|2,40749|3) - http://prntscr.com/73ljv9 kek gini dah menurut ane
  12. 01:03:947 (63947|5,63947|2) - geser ke kanan 1 langkah dan 01:04:296 (64296|3) - move to 6
ok segitu doang yaw, GL !! :)
Topic Starter
azrxx

-Troke- wrote:

General


no kudos if my mod didn't help anything
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[NM]
  1. 00:00:459 (459|0,459|6,3249|6) - ctrl+h
  2. 00:04:296 (4296|1) - move to 6
  3. 00:07:784 (7784|6) - move to 5
  4. 00:09:528 (9528|6) - move to 5
  5. 00:13:017 (13017|0) - move to 4
  6. 00:14:063 (14063|3) - move to 2
  7. 00:16:854 - like this http://prntscr.com/73lj1v ?
  8. 00:18:947 (18947|1) - move to 6
  9. 00:29:063 (29063|0) - move to 5 (biar gampang)
  10. 00:33:598 (33598|3,33772|5) - geser ke kiri 1 langkah
  11. 00:40:226 (40226|2,40400|1,40575|2,40749|3) - http://prntscr.com/73ljv9 kek gini dah menurut ane
  12. 01:03:947 (63947|5,63947|2) - geser ke kanan 1 langkah dan 01:04:296 (64296|3) - move to 6
ok segitu doang yaw, GL !! :)
Update:D
makasih yaa
Topic Starter
azrxx

schwarzvgrune wrote:

you can do a thorough self-mod first and ask others for a couple of mods.
good luck :)

be sure to read the link that i gave you! :3
Already read the link :3 btw thanks for helping :D hehe
Topic Starter
azrxx
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Topic Starter
azrxx
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ArcherLove
halo~

col = 1~7

[ez]

00:00:459 (459|0) - pindah ke 3, buat enak di jari~
00:04:296 (4296|5) - pindah ke 5
00:10:226 (10226|5) - move to 4
00:11:621 (11621|1) - ini baru di 6
01:06:738 - add note
01:07:435 (67435|0) - berhenti di sini 01:08:831 - terus kasih long note di sini sampai 01:10:226 -

[nm]

00:07:784 (7784|4) - pindah ke 1 aja, lebih enak
00:14:063 (14063|1) - pindah ke 3
00:39:528 (39528|5) - ini di 7 saja
01:24:179 - tammbah long note 1 lagi dong, biar sama seperti sebelahnya

[hd]

00:04:296 (4296|0) - delete, overnote (sound cuma 1 dan pelan, tapi 2 note itu ... tidak baik
00:05:342 (5342|1) - ^
00:06:040 (6040|2) - ^
00:07:784 (7784|5) - ^
00:08:133 (8133|6,8133|1,8133|4) - ^
00:19:819 - add note
00:35:865 - add note
00:36:563 - add note di 2
00:37:086 - add
00:37:610 - add
01:13:365 (73365|3,73714|2,73714|4) - overnote ?

done~
Topic Starter
azrxx

ArcherLove wrote:

halo~

col = 1~7

[ez]

00:00:459 (459|0) - pindah ke 3, buat enak di jari~
00:04:296 (4296|5) - pindah ke 5
00:10:226 (10226|5) - move to 4
00:11:621 (11621|1) - ini baru di 6
01:06:738 - add note
01:07:435 (67435|0) - berhenti di sini 01:08:831 - terus kasih long note di sini sampai 01:10:226 -

[nm]

00:07:784 (7784|4) - pindah ke 1 aja, lebih enak
00:14:063 (14063|1) - pindah ke 3
00:39:528 (39528|5) - ini di 7 saja
01:24:179 - tammbah long note 1 lagi dong, biar sama seperti sebelahnya

[hd]

00:04:296 (4296|0) - delete, overnote (sound cuma 1 dan pelan, tapi 2 note itu ... tidak baik
00:05:342 (5342|1) - ^
00:06:040 (6040|2) - ^
00:07:784 (7784|5) - ^
00:08:133 (8133|6,8133|1,8133|4) - ^
00:19:819 - add note
00:35:865 - add note
00:36:563 - add note di 2
00:37:086 - add
00:37:610 - add
01:13:365 (73365|3,73714|2,73714|4) - overnote ?

done~
UPDATED :D
thanks for mod AL :D
kagiii
Mark for my mod >w< , daisuki! daisuki! daisuki! *lagu ny :V
Topic Starter
azrxx

ExKagii- wrote:

Mark for my mod >w< , daisuki! daisuki! daisuki! *lagu ny :V
Ditunggu ^^ hehee :v
Frim4503

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

don't forget to add hs
00:40:924 (40924|2) - make double. same sound as 00:39:528 (39528|6,39528|0) -
01:01:854 (61854|6) - move to 6
01:04:470 (64470|3,65342|5) - move to 5,2
01:20:342 - add note
01:20:691 - ^
00:01:156 - add note
00:35:342 (35342|2) - make double. same sound as 00:31:156 (31156|6,31156|0) - IMO
00:55:226 - http://puu.sh/hNeRb/d11deeeb6c.png
01:20:691 (80691|1) - remove. pre pattern 01:19:296 (79296|5,79296|1) -
00:00:459 (459|1) - mvoe to 1
00:31:505 (31505|0,31679|1,31854|2) - move to 1,2,3
01:01:854 (61854|1,62203|0) - move 1 co. to right

that's all
idk how to mod slow song
Topic Starter
azrxx

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

don't forget to add hs
00:40:924 (40924|2) - make double. same sound as 00:39:528 (39528|6,39528|0) -
01:01:854 (61854|6) - move to 6
01:04:470 (64470|3,65342|5) - move to 5,2
01:20:342 - add note
01:20:691 - ^
00:01:156 - add note
00:35:342 (35342|2) - make double. same sound as 00:31:156 (31156|6,31156|0) - IMO
00:55:226 - http://puu.sh/hNeRb/d11deeeb6c.png
01:20:691 (80691|1) - remove. pre pattern 01:19:296 (79296|5,79296|1) -
00:00:459 (459|1) - mvoe to 1
00:31:505 (31505|0,31679|1,31854|2) - move to 1,2,3
01:01:854 (61854|1,62203|0) - move 1 co. to right

that's all
idk how to mod slow song
Updated :D
thanks for mod Frim :D
Julie
Tuturuu~
You said your new mapper? I'm really really impress and satisfy how your going, probably going to accept BN mod for this map :D!! I'm willing to put a lots of time on this map :P, so let's not rush

Don't mind if you have less then 15 mods in each diff, my policy check is helping mapper~ Of course, please continue try get more mods, might take a while with me LOL.

I'm just going to post HD for the moment, I want to check your comment on my mods before continuing to NM and EZ. Mod might be long, and feel like Im poiting out each second, but that's because I can EASILY understand what your mapping which is GOOD :D!! Easy to understand your pattern, the way you map. Love the piano part of the song <3!

BN AREN'T PERFEFCT, you can always decline, or sometimes I make mistake on the copy paste.

[HD]

00:04:296 (4296|4,4993|2) - Suggestion, since your matching for instrument *thumbs up!* and these 2 you listen nice, piano only :D! These 2 piano are the same note, you can jack these. Of course you are not force to jack, just suggestion ^^

00:17:900 - want to add one more note, because it doesn't only have the "tick~~" sound right now, also have a piano xD. Like here 00:23:482 -

00:19:296 - have to have more note then 00:18:947 - , because you beeen mapping for piano <3.

00:19:645 (19645|4,19645|5) - Do you hear piano? Since I don't hear any here ><, except if you suddendly mapping it for vocal.

00:20:691 - andn 00:26:272 - same reason as 00:17:900 -

00:28:249 (28249|3,28307|4,28365|5) - Ok, this is really really tricky, that's what happen a lots in piano beatmap...1/12 or 1/16 =w=...Try 1/16, mostly noticable on the 2nd and 3rd notes, 1st note 00:28:235 - , 2nd note 00:28:278 - , 3rd note 00:28:322 - . Visual : http://puu.sh/hNPIG.png

00:29:645 (29645|6,29703|5,29761|4) - ^ , this one is easy to notice on the 1st note, you can hear the 1st note go before the actual sound. 1st note 00:29:674 - , 2nd note 00:29:717 - 3rd note 00:29:761 - . Visual : http://puu.sh/hNPVa.png

00:28:235 (28235|3,28278|4,28322|5,28365|6,29674|6,29717|5,29761|4) - Since your mapping piano, and you been following chord nicely~ (Impress). Shouldn't 00:28:235 (28235|3,28278|4,28322|5,28365|6) - go to right to left and 00:29:674 (29674|6,29717|5,29761|4) - left to right?

00:29:238 - miss a piano sound~

00:30:458 (30458|1) - Why this LN, try listen this sound and this here 00:31:854 - , normal note should be enough if your still following the instrument~

00:31:040 (31040|4,31098|5,31156|6) - 1/16, 1st note 00:31:113 - 2nd note 00:31:156 - , tricky part this time it doesn't stop at white stick or start here 00:31:069 - ><, 3rd note is here 00:31:200 - http://puu.sh/hNQd6.png

00:32:377 (32377|5,32435|4,32493|3) - 1/16, Okii now reason nearly the same, already point out the possibility to check this issue, so imma just send you the visual of the snapping :3. Visual : http://puu.sh/hNQid.png

00:33:598 - if you want to follow this piano keys, add the note here 00:33:772 - like in your NM

00:33:831 (33831|0,33889|1,33947|2) - 1/16, Visual http://puu.sh/hNQrk.png , trickyy, check the one in select as well, is above white stick xD.

00:35:284 (35284|2,35342|3,35400|4) - 1/16 Visual http://puu.sh/hNQxG.png, but also in screenshot you can see 00:35:211 - = end of LN, end of LN in mania = not tapable, while there is a piano sound here, so I let you choose to see how you will do this :3

00:36:040 - miss a sound? you did map it on NM.

00:36:563 (36563|1) - not sure about this note, I don't hear any piano, except if your hearing some minor one, but really low, like these you didn't map 00:34:296 - and 00:34:470 - , so suggest removing it.

00:39:528 - No one of your note LN? You also put one on your NM

00:40:226 (40226|2) - not sure why LN here, I really hope your not doing it for vocal www, really like how you do your stuff so far, um this 00:40:226 - and this 00:40:400 - same piano key, can jack it and be normal notes

00:41:970 - miss a piano sound, must be from the left of this note 00:41:796 (41796|3) -

00:43:017 (43017|2,43017|1,43017|6) - overchord, delete at least 1 note xD

00:44:586 - miss important piano sound, the sound is lower then this 00:44:761 (44761|1) - and this 00:44:412 - , just to give you an idea how to put your note ^^

00:44:935 - ^ same for sound and piano note.

00:46:505 (46505|0) - delete if your still following just the instrument, since none here. Keep it if is for vocal, I suggest delete for instrument like you did on NM :3

00:47:377 (47377|4,47552|2) - ctrl+g for piano pitch~

00:50:691 - AHH, don't do like NM!! so good piano stream, can hear clearly!! GO MAP IT :D!! LAST LEVEL~~

01:03:947 (63947|2,64296|3) - these sound your matching with LN, I also hear it here 01:04:121 - O.O

01:05:691 (65691|6) - LN here I think is for the long continue sound that started here 01:05:342 - , also here 01:06:214 - there is a new sound, should be the end of your LN~

01:16:679 - miss a piano sound, that should continue with 01:16:854 (76854|2,77028|4,77203|5) -

Feel free to catch me in-game, if there is some stuff you want to ask, or if you think I'm going in the wrong way lolol.

Thanks for showing me this beatmap~ :D

I didn't notice XD

Topic Starter
azrxx

Julie wrote:

Tuturuu~
You said your new mapper? I'm really really impress and satisfy how your going, probably going to accept BN mod for this map :D!! I'm willing to put a lots of time on this map :P, so let's not rush

Don't mind if you have less then 15 mods in each diff, my policy check is helping mapper~ Of course, please continue try get more mods, might take a while with me LOL.

I'm just going to post HD for the moment, I want to check your comment on my mods before continuing to NM and EZ. Mod might be long, and feel like Im poiting out each second, but that's because I can EASILY understand what your mapping which is GOOD :D!! Easy to understand your pattern, the way you map. Love the piano part of the song <3!

BN AREN'T PERFEFCT, you can always decline, or sometimes I make mistake on the copy paste.

[HD]

00:04:296 (4296|4,4993|2) - Suggestion, since your matching for instrument *thumbs up!* and these 2 you listen nice, piano only :D! These 2 piano are the same note, you can jack these. Of course you are not force to jack, just suggestion ^^ i think it suits nicely with jack so i decide to changed into jack hihii. thanks for the suggestion ^^

00:17:900 - want to add one more note, because it doesn't only have the "tick~~" sound right now, also have a piano xD. Like here 00:23:482 - added ^^

00:19:296 - have to have more note then 00:18:947 - , because you beeen mapping for piano <3. added ^^

00:19:645 (19645|4,19645|5) - Do you hear piano? Since I don't hear any here ><, except if you suddendly mapping it for vocal. yep its for vocal. should i delete it? or change into normal note? :3

00:20:691 - andn 00:26:272 - same reason as 00:17:900 - added ^^

00:28:249 (28249|3,28307|4,28365|5) - Ok, this is really really tricky, that's what happen a lots in piano beatmap...1/12 or 1/16 =w=...Try 1/16, mostly noticable on the 2nd and 3rd notes, 1st note 00:28:235 - , 2nd note 00:28:278 - , 3rd note 00:28:322 - . Visual : http://puu.sh/hNPIG.png fixed :3

00:29:645 (29645|6,29703|5,29761|4) - ^ , this one is easy to notice on the 1st note, you can hear the 1st note go before the actual sound. 1st note 00:29:674 - , 2nd note 00:29:717 - 3rd note 00:29:761 - . Visual : http://puu.sh/hNPVa.png fixed :3

00:28:235 (28235|3,28278|4,28322|5,28365|6,29674|6,29717|5,29761|4) - Since your mapping piano, and you been following chord nicely~ (Impress). Shouldn't 00:28:235 (28235|3,28278|4,28322|5,28365|6) - go to right to left and 00:29:674 (29674|6,29717|5,29761|4) - left to right? should it be like this? http://puu.sh/hNTiv/48dc60d3f8.jpg and this? http://puu.sh/hNTiQ/b04653a8a7.jpg

00:29:238 - miss a piano sound~ added ^^

00:30:458 (30458|1) - Why this LN, try listen this sound and this here 00:31:854 - , normal note should be enough if your still following the instrument~ fixed ^^

00:31:040 (31040|4,31098|5,31156|6) - 1/16, 1st note 00:31:113 - 2nd note 00:31:156 - , tricky part this time it doesn't stop at white stick or start here 00:31:069 - ><, 3rd note is here 00:31:200 - http://puu.sh/hNQd6.png fixed :D

00:32:377 (32377|5,32435|4,32493|3) - 1/16, Okii now reason nearly the same, already point out the possibility to check this issue, so imma just send you the visual of the snapping :3. Visual : http://puu.sh/hNQid.png fixed :D

00:33:598 - if you want to follow this piano keys, add the note here 00:33:772 - like in your NM should it be like this? http://puu.sh/hNWfr/262cf9e4a5.png

00:33:831 (33831|0,33889|1,33947|2) - 1/16, Visual http://puu.sh/hNQrk.png , trickyy, check the one in select as well, is above white stick xD. fixed :3 btw is it okay if the note doesn't snap on white stick? ._.

00:35:284 (35284|2,35342|3,35400|4) - 1/16 Visual http://puu.sh/hNQxG.png, but also in screenshot you can see 00:35:211 - = end of LN, end of LN in mania = not tapable, while there is a piano sound here, so I let you choose to see how you will do this :3 how about this? ._. http://puu.sh/hNU4B/085034498c.jpg

00:36:040 - miss a sound? you did map it on NM. added

00:36:563 (36563|1) - not sure about this note, I don't hear any piano, except if your hearing some minor one, but really low, like these you didn't map 00:34:296 - and 00:34:470 - , so suggest removing it. fixed

00:39:528 - No one of your note LN? You also put one on your NM like this? http://puu.sh/hNWWZ/a60bc412b0.png

00:40:226 (40226|2) - not sure why LN here, I really hope your not doing it for vocal www, really like how you do your stuff so far, um this 00:40:226 - and this 00:40:400 - same piano key, can jack it and be normal notes fixed :3

00:41:970 - miss a piano sound, must be from the left of this note 00:41:796 (41796|3) - fixed

00:43:017 (43017|2,43017|1,43017|6) - overchord, delete at least 1 note xD deleted xD

00:44:586 - miss important piano sound, the sound is lower then this 00:44:761 (44761|1) - and this 00:44:412 - , just to give you an idea how to put your note ^^ fixed._.

00:44:935 - ^ same for sound and piano note. fixed :3

00:46:505 (46505|0) - delete if your still following just the instrument, since none here. Keep it if is for vocal, I suggest delete for instrument like you did on NM :3 fixed :D

00:47:377 (47377|4,47552|2) - ctrl+g for piano pitch~ fixed

00:50:691 - AHH, don't do like NM!! so good piano stream, can hear clearly!! GO MAP IT :D!! LAST LEVEL~~ fixed :3

01:03:947 (63947|2,64296|3) - these sound your matching with LN, I also hear it here 01:04:121 - O.O i don't understand what you said in here._. should i change the LN to normal note? or what? :3

01:05:691 (65691|6) - LN here I think is for the long continue sound that started here 01:05:342 - , also here 01:06:214 - there is a new sound, should be the end of your LN~ changed :D

01:16:679 - miss a piano sound, that should continue with 01:16:854 (76854|2,77028|4,77203|5) -added :D

Feel free to catch me in-game, if there is some stuff you want to ask, or if you think I'm going in the wrong way lolol.

Thanks for showing me this beatmap~ :D

I didn't notice XD

thanks you so much for your opinion about my map Julie :'D this is my favorite song so i work hard on this beatmap :'3 and also thank you for the star :'D. can you re-check this diff again? :3 tell me if i did it wrong :3
once again thank you so much Julie :'D you motivate me to improve my mapping skill :3
resuner
Hi aisya

Column 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7
[NM]
00:22:784 - put it to 1 3 6
00:30:807 - adjust 1 column to right
00:32:900 - add note
00:37:086 - ^
00:41:796 - ^
00:41:970 - remove
00:43:889 - add note
00:44:238 - ^
01:00:284 - ^
01:03:075- ^
01:04:993 - ^
01:06:040 - ^
01:06:912 - ^
01:16:156 - ^
01:16:854 - add 1 note to 4
01:17:028 - add 1 note to 5
01:18:947 - add note
01:19:645 - ^

Just a small mod from me, i notice this map because of Julie :)
I like this song too, goodluck! :D
Topic Starter
azrxx

resuner wrote:

Hi aisya

Column 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7
[NM]
00:22:784 - put it to 1 3 6
00:30:807 - adjust 1 column to right
00:32:900 - add note
00:37:086 - ^
00:41:796 - ^
00:41:970 - remove
00:43:889 - add note
00:44:238 - ^
01:00:284 - ^
01:03:075- ^
01:04:993 - ^
01:06:040 - ^
01:06:912 - ^
01:16:156 - ^
01:16:854 - add 1 note to 4
01:17:028 - add 1 note to 5
01:18:947 - add note
01:19:645 - ^

Just a small mod from me, i notice this map because of Julie :)
I like this song too, goodluck! :D
Updated :D
thanks for mod my beatmap :D
Frim4503
yes of course Julie
he is good mapper :)
i'm still can't map slow song like this -_-
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Frim4503 wrote:

yes of course Julie
he is good mapper :)
i'm still can't map slow song like this -_-
i'm a girl btw :'v hihii
thank you frim :3 but i still need to learn more about mapping :3 hehe
Julie
"00:33:831 (33831|0,33889|1,33947|2) - 1/16, Visual http://puu.sh/hNQrk.png , trickyy, check the one in select as well, is above white stick xD. fixed :3 btw is it okay if the note doesn't snap on white stick? ._."

When I went to sleep, realize I wasn't clear on this www. Yes there is one on white (the LN on my pic was the white stick sound haha), I'm just showing you it should be all on 1/16, and 4 notes on 1/16, I didn't move the pattern orz, I wanted to let you on pattern haha, yeah and will be better if it make a stair. Sorry for confusion LOL, I didn't have space to make a stairs and screenshot it haha

If I had space : http://puu.sh/hOhfi.png, or since there one sound same at 00:33:947 - and 00:33:990 - . Could be like this too http://puu.sh/hOhjb.jpg . and left to right here is good~ ^^

Pm me when everything is update~ I'll re-check HD
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