- Bad Apple - wrote:

Surprise!


I thought I'll take a look at this map, since it came such a long way (also I really like the song and want to make you happy senpai)

here is what I found; keep in mind everything is my personal opinion, there's nothing unrankable

- Onozuka's Journey on the why is this diffname so long -

General:
HP 8,5 seems a bit too much I think, how about using HP 8? Will keep for now because i think this map is kinda easy to play
Also, do you want to add a storyboard? If not, you can uncheck "Widescreen-Support" (idk if you need it for the Taiko-Diff tho!)

00:09:595 - move 3 and...
00:09:942 (9942|2,10116|3) - Ctrl + J for Pitch? Sure
00:22:948 - (optional) add one? since it's piano + very silent snare (which you mapped for the stream) I think its fine
00:27:110 (27110|2,27283|2,27457|2) - try to rearrange them, this triple-jack is really standing out! kay
00:35:434 - add on 1 for the piano!
00:40:983 - ^
00:43:757 - ^ No to all. I think it just play better like this c:
00:45:145 - (optional) add one? piano + stream~ Like above
00:46:358 (46358|1) - move to 3 Okay // Even when i don't see any problem here
00:46:705 - add for the hihat Sure
00:48:613 - there is a hi-hat on some red-lines aswell.. you could add those! (00:51:387 - and so on...) I simply don't want I can hear them but i just don't want to map them in the Redlines
00:57:803 (57803|3) - move to 1 for balance I think it would be even worser when i move them to 1 (When you look at col 1) i will rearrange it later a bit here. But still good catch!
01:17:225 - since you have cymbal, but no kick here, you could remove one note! Keep. cymbal 3-noted chords here o:
01:32:832 - you could add one here, since you always used 3 for the snare (not sure though) okay added
01:42:023 - add for the piano?
01:47:572 - ^ Nope :/
01:50:520 (110520|2) - move 1? Yeah why not
02:17:486 - add one here, pretty loud hi hat! Keep for now
02:34:913 - same as before, cymbal but no kick, could remove one! See above
02:48:092 - should be 3 notes i havent 3 notes here in the last kiai too o.o
03:19:884 (199884|2) - this could become a LN that ends here; 03:21:387 - Actually this sound starts earlier i think but i'm not sure since no headphones so i will not change it for now xD
03:38:555 - add for the piano
03:39:942 - ^ Ayy no
04:15:491 - should be 2 notes, youve always used 2 for the kick here I think that wouldn't fit here. When you look at other LN beginnings
04:22:428 - ^ I never have two notes + LN begin in this part. You see it? D:
04:28:497 - add for the piano?
04:34:046 - ^ Again no

That's everything I found. I hope it helped! Good luck with this map, it has improved SO much since you first uploaded it, my friend!
Apple <3

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi Feenyan 'w')/
just a quick glance for your map

Free Room Journeyy

00:21:561 (21561|0,21561|1) - reduce a note since there is no kick sound, refer 00:18:786 - or make both of them double for piano if u like Oke
00:44:624 (44624|3,44798|1) - CTRL+G for different pattern variation? make a little different from 00:44:277 (44277|0,44277|3,44451|1,44451|2) - Oke
00:57:110 - triple for crash? Oke
00:57:803 (57803|3) - move to 1? why?
01:04:913 (64913|2,65087|1,65260|2,65434|1) - CTRL+H? feels cool!
01:07:688 (67688|3,67688|2,67688|0,67861|1,67861|3) - CTRL+G? i think the white line sound are much louder here cx Ohhh my mistake
01:24:855 (84855|2,84855|1) - reduce a note? i see u only place double for like 01:21:734 (81734|0,81734|3) - +LN Good point
01:20:173 (80173|2) - i feel is nice if u can double this sound here, it goes nicely with the LN pattern :3 No don't want. Only snare is mapped with doubles while LN
01:25:723 (85723|1) - ^ and so on if u like~ see above
01:28:497 - double like u do at 01:21:561 (81561|1,81561|0) - Mh.. i don't really want a double here. It feels simply misplaced while i emphasize the violin
01:30:405 - triple for crash? i think is fine to have triple here :3 Feels okay
01:44:624 (104624|3,104624|2,104798|0,104798|1,104971|2,104971|3,105145|1,105145|0) - i think is too monotune here qwq maybe rearranging them at different column could be better I don't see a problem here
02:16:098 - 02:17:486 - 02:18:873 - 02:19:913 - 02:21:647 - add for snare sound? is nice to play~ No i don't want to have triples here :/
02:20:867 (140867|1,141214|3) - i think is nice if u can double these for guitar Not loud enough. While playing it doesn't feel like it should be emphasized.
02:25:202 - add a note? i heard a sound here Yeah, me too. But i thought it's simply pretty cool to have a little break
02:44:104 (164104|3,164277|1) - CTRL+G? err just 3-4-3-4 mmm yea abavf Ok
03:19:884 (199884|2) - make a LN end 03:21:387 - ? will consider it but for now no
03:35:173 - add a note for drum? Good catch
03:34:827 - 03:35:173 - intention missing it? but there is drum sound which u are followuing :p Hmm.. don't know if i did it right but fixed i think
03:38:382 (218382|2,218382|0,219075|1,219075|3,219769|0,219769|2,220462|3,220462|1) - u can make triple note here if u like, the sound are much more louder :3 Naah
03:43:237 - whoopss miss a note here? refer 01:18:960 (78960|1) - whoops
03:46:358 (226358|0,226705|3,227052|0,227399|2) - not a 1/2 LN? i think u missed out this one, the sound are still clear to follow here like 03:47:746 (227746|3,228092|1,228439|2,228786|0) -
03:57:457 (237457|0,237803|2,238150|0,238497|2) - here too ^ I had it before like this but i changed it. I like the way how the doubles emphasize the fast vocals and after the vocal ends i have really nice violin i emphasize with my LN's
04:19:740 (259740|2,259913|0) - since u are not following stream sound i guess u can delete these note, here kinda sudden stream But i like it Will keep it until more will say to remove it
04:42:197 (282197|0,282370|1) - make LN? refer 04:47:399 (287399|3,287572|0) - No. Look here 01:55:723 -
04:48:439 - triple? Yap

nice and solid map ok give me a room now good luck! hope it helps~

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arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' Osumania Mod Nest Of Mappers"

Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles

Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggestion and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.



[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

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[Onozuka's Journey on the Sanzu River]

SPOILER

00:25:029 (25029|1) - move to 1 for better vision and to remove the awkwardness in the 2nd column where 00:24:335 (24335|1,25029|1,25202|1) - . Moving to 1 can solve the awkward feeling plus it fits to the sound of bass which is similar to 00:30:405 (30405|2,30578|2) - Yeah that's really cool, it also follows the bass pretty good.

00:43:757 (43757|1,43931|2) - move to 3 and 1 respectively as it feels awkward in this part because of 00:43:410 (43410|0,43584|0,43584|1,43757|1) - Changed

00:45:231 (45231|1,45318|2) - move to 1 and 4 respectively as they are different percussion sounds and feels weird if just trill in 2 columns. Actually i liked this 3-2-3-2-3 trill because it follows pretty cool the snare but i like this suggestion

01:06:821 - add note to 1? pretty strong sound to finish this phase and it fits well.

01:08:208 - atlast 1/4ths for the hihat-like sounds yay. // YES! I thought it would fit really good here such a jumpstream

01:18:266 - add note to 3 since snare-like sound + that additional sound that is echoing. Uhh here i don't want to add a note. The reason is i think it would be a bit too hard to hit for the ending of the JS Part. I have two chords, 4 single notes and fast 1/8. That should be enough D:

01:21:734 (81734|0,81734|1) - swap column notes for better view and already LN occured at 2nd column: 01:20:694 (80694|1) - which is kind off to repeat again at the same column. Applied!

01:41:503 (101503|1) - move to 3 seems more comfortable for 01:41:676 (101676|1) - and also not repeating the note pattern of the different sound at 01:41:156 (101156|1,101156|0,101156|3) - Done!

02:02:832 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/p4Tw7/b6e98c8d81.png for clearer vision and not awkward to execute. For now i have to reject this. Your suggestion don't really feel like it would fit for the fast 1/4 drum here But i will consider here to arrange it.

02:14:798 - add note to 3, strong cymbal sound which gives more impact and also to differ with 02:14:451 (134451|0,134451|1) - . It is similar to 02:20:347 (140347|0,140347|2,140347|1) - The reason why i doesn't add here a 3 Noted chord is because i don't wanted to make a 1/2 Jack at the end D: But after trying it a few times i think it's okay that's why i add it haha

02:46:705 (166705|2) - move to 4 to give 02:46:705 (166705|2) - a better execution. that's cool

02:56:069 (176069|1,176243|2) - move to 4 and 2 respectively for more comfortable pattern in this part. Oki!

02:59:191 - until 03:21:387 - I suggest to change those single notes to long notes as the flute sounds give the long sound feeling that you should hold them like you hold an actual flute. Still up to you, Sir. Well, i already had it like this. I also had both as LN's. I tried a lot of things here and i think this one plays best But still thanks for the suggestion!

03:35:087 (215087|1,215260|1) - move to 3 where the kick sound in 03:35:260 - felt more with two fingers at right hand. Oki!

03:36:647 (216647|3) - move to 1, same feeling above but left hand. Yeah accepted. Really cool!

04:08:555 (248555|2,248728|2,248902|2) - kinda hard to execute, suggesting to rearrange some notes here like you did at 04:19:653 (259653|1,259827|1,260000|2) - . i swap the both next short ln's. Fit also way better to PR

Though I am wondering about 04:08:642 (248642|1,248815|3) - because all of sudden 1/4 notes appeared here and it feels awkward imo. I also suggest to remove them. Same with 04:19:740 (259740|2,259913|0) - . It is still up to you, sir. Will keep them for now. Even when they appear pretty sudden they still fit really good, especially when i arranged now the LNs like you mentioned above

04:19:740 (259740|2,259913|0) - add note to 1 strong cymbal sound. If added, move 04:26:763 (266763|0) - to 2 which the note will become 1/2 jack in 2nd column, fits for the percussion sound. Ayy you linked the wrong timing but i think i found it and added

04:27:457 (267457|1) - move to 1, same reason a previous, different percussion sound and pitch. Accepted

04:31:272 (271272|0) - move to 2 to avoid that sudden 3-note stack at 1st column. Oh i thought i used these 3-Jack pattern already before but i didn't so i remove these too, thanks. Arranged them a bit different

04:43:931 (283931|1) - move to 3 for clearer vision. Oki

04:49:306 - suggesting http://puu.sh/p4UXY/487f78422e.png which is hand balance, alternative pattern for the percussion and comfortable to execute where it does not conflict with 04:49:913 (289913|2,290000|1,290087|0) - Ok this is nice!

05:00:405 (300405|2,300578|3) - move to 4 and 1 respectively as this part is kinda awkward and the vision is too confusing. Oki!

[Overall]
Atlast, a Genryuu Kaiko o!m map hooray~ been waiting for this. Although I believe it can be harder but this marathon is actually fun to play and enjoyable atleast for most of mania players. Thanks for the request and good luck, Sir Feerum ^o^)/

~ END OF MOD ~

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Had check also some talking with Fee in Discord (Actually almost nothing lol)

Really good completeness map! Good luck!

DE-CADE wrote:

Hello Feerum here's Check as requested ... In Game yesterday

[General]

Everything is fine for me


Almost got me nice try web This is a Bug. The Game didn't cound the holds at the end (In standard same with Slider and Spinner). It ends there where the Hold beginns. Pretty weird bug but it's okay here :3 The Drain Time from the 1st note until last hold release is over 5min

[Onozuka's Journey on the Sanzu River]

00:43:757 - This need 1 note to represent the piano, pls add note at 4 01:50:347 see, i guess you did mapped for piano too Done

00:48:266 (48266|0,48266|3,48266|1,48439|2,48439|1) - Only these chord which i saw them wrong mapped, Snare sounds mostly used 3Notes from what you mapped, while kick only 2Notes here's the example >> 00:53:815 Oh wow really good catch. I did check the whole Map for wrong chords few times and i everytime overlook this.

from here 01:54:509 - I still didnt feel good about how this mapped, 01:54:509 (114509|1,114682|1) - sometimes u didnt not mapped jack after piano sound but after snare , i think it's better map jack after snare Oki arranged here

Image

it's like i dont have any choice for suggest lool

02:02:659 (122659|0,122832|1,122919|0) - I think could be better to play,
02:02:659 (122659|0) - Move to 2
02:02:832 (122832|1) - Move to 1
02:02:919 (122919|0) - Move to 3 I didn't see really a problem here. I tried already pretty often to arrange a bit and this is the best solution i had here :3 I like how the notes switches the hands pretty fast to emphasize the drum

02:13:150 - Add note for guitar ? You can use stair for this 3 Notes are here enough. There is actually no 4th Guitar sound. The "4 Notes" i already used 02:08:988 - would be next at 02:14:538 - but since i have here a hold i avoided the 1/4 guitar.

02:50:173 (170173|1,170347|0,170520|1,170694|0,170867|1,171040|0,171214|1) - aw, wanna try something that more balance to play
02:51:040 (171040|0) - Move to 3
02:51:214 (171214|2) - Move to 1 Accepted until here
02:51:387 (171387|2) - Move to 4 to keep your jack But this one i did move to 1. I dislike the jack on 4 right after the jack on 3

04:44:798 (284798|0) - Move to 3
04:44:971 (284971|2) - Move to 2 Arranged
^ The jack placement would be same as what you mapped for snare an piano.

04:48:613 - Add note to 3 with Whistle Hitsound, for Hat sounds Done

04:55:376 - Add note to 4,
05:00:925 - Add note to 3 Both no. I don't like this. Even when i have there a snare hitsound i love how it flows with a simple roll here for the bell sounds
^ addition for snare sound

04:11:503 (251503|1) - Move to 2
04:18:439 (258439|0) - Move to 3
04:18:613 (258613|2) - Move to 4
04:22:428 (262428|2,262601|1) - Move one column to left All done
^ clean and nice to play, pretty subjective because it's kind of hard to play jacks with LNs ayyy killed me as player

Well Mapped, call me back after fix, i think everything is ready even before i give you my qualification check

Starry- wrote:

Oh hey I remember this from last year. x) Congrats Feerum~ <3