Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
General
- I think you need to add audio lead in time. I'm not sure on the specifications, but I believe is was 2000ms.
- The storyboard is amazing. I can only think of a few other storyboards that come close to this. Stunning effort.
- 00:06:007 (1) - You're a god...holy...
- 00:45:674 (6) - Make symmetrical to 00:45:007 (4) - (as in, fix it so they both face the exact same angle)
- 01:27:007 (5,6,7) - This part feels odd. All the same shape, yet different spacing. I'd recommend changing up this part
- 00:00:008 (1) - Fix blanket
- 00:01:007 (3) - ^
- 00:02:674 (2) - Fix stack
- 00:04:007 (1) - Fix blanket
- 00:06:007 (1) - ^
- 00:42:341 (1) - Fix stack
- 00:43:674 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow?
- 01:25:674 (1) - Fix stack
- 01:41:007 (4) - Maybe change this from 2/1 to a 1/1 with repeat?
plz rank soon