DJ TOTTO - Windy Fairy

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Arzenvald
*w* it's really awesome to see another superb storyboard..
hope this mapset get ranked soon.. (too bad i cant check standard mapset ;w;)

and if its possible, you might want to move the the title screen on 00:20:007 - & 01:54:292 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3033848 & https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3033851 because some sprites cropped on 4:3 screen resolution..

good luck!
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

ExUsagi wrote:

*w* it's really awesome to see another superb storyboard..
hope this mapset get ranked soon.. (too bad i cant check standard mapset ;w;)

and if its possible, you might want to move the the title screen on 00:20:007 - & 01:54:292 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3033848 & https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3033851 because some sprites cropped on 4:3 screen resolution..

good luck!
800*600 resolution Storyboard couldn't have good visual effects in widescreen since there has two black areas both sides. so sometimes we couldn't get good effects to watch one widescreen sb via 800*600 resolution either..

Thanks for your interest and star :)
Karen
M4M
[Hyper]
  1. 00:19:007 (2) - 这里这个三连的音不建议漏掉吧,后面类似的地方都是三连
  2. 01:02:007 (1,2,3) - 看你排版非常工整感觉不太会喜欢这种overlap吧,建议分开点
  3. 01:38:007 (1,1,1) - ^


[Beginner]
  1. 01:14:174 (1,1) - 这种难度,这种bpm转盘后面空4拍才行,建议问问别人。
  2. 01:46:007 (1,1) - ^


[Standard]
  1. 01:14:174 (1,1) - 同理,standard 空两拍
  2. 01:46:007 (1,1) - ^
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

Kagamine Ren wrote:

M4M
[Hyper]
  1. 00:19:007 (2) - 这里这个三连的音不建议漏掉吧,后面类似的地方都是三连 这个..我感觉还好,容我日后再想一下
  2. 01:02:007 (1,2,3) - 看你排版非常工整感觉不太会喜欢这种overlap吧,建议分开点 还好吧,因为sv这段比较低。
  3. 01:38:007 (1,1,1) - ^


[Beginner]
  1. 01:14:174 (1,1) - 这种难度,这种bpm转盘后面空4拍才行,建议问问别人。索性删掉..
  2. 01:46:007 (1,1) - ^


[Standard]
  1. 01:14:174 (1,1) - 同理,standard 空两拍
  2. 01:46:007 (1,1) - ^
Haruto
Hello from my modding queue :)
Sorry if im late, my connection is slow :<
I dont found too much here
so i just give you a suggestion then :>

[Beginner]
  1. 00:09:007 (3,1) - These Sliders are a bit touching, maybe move them a bit
  2. 00:12:674 (2,3) - fix blanket please
  3. 00:33:675 (4) - make this curved please?
  4. 00:38:007 (1,2) - fix blanket please
  5. 01:04:007 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:05:674 - add note here please?
  7. 01:17:007 (3,1) - Fix Blanket
  8. 01:22:007 (1,2) - blanket this would be better


[Standard]
EDIT : Please Use AR5 or 4, it's really hard when you play with HR also, use CS 3, PLEASE for the sake of beginners :)
  1. 00:02:007 (1,2) - looks ugly, move (2) to x112,y148 would be better imo
  2. 00:15:341 (1) - Ugly Slider, try this http://puu.sh/hlDGy/f7a2a24377.jpg
  3. 00:16:674 (6) - Then you can blanket this with ^
  4. 00:24:341 (2) - 1/2 fits better imo
  5. 00:24:674 - then add 1/2 slider here
  6. 00:30:007 (1,2) - These Kinda Confusing, transform these into 1/2 sliders would be better imo
  7. 00:32:341 (2) - 1/2 fits better
  8. 00:38:007 (1,2) - Same as 00:30:007 (1,2) -
  9. 00:46:007 (1,2) - ^
  10. 01:36:007 (1,2) - ^


[Hyper]
I dont found too much Issues in this Difficulty, Really Nice Mapset, just need a BN look at this mapset :3
EDIT: Please just use AR7 or AR6, ar8 is too fast when you play it with HR, HP Drain should be 4 and OD should be 5
  1. 01:31:007 (3) - Please the slider looks ugly, you might wanna try this http://puu.sh/hlE6p/141f7179fc.jpg


OMG really nice mapset, i just wanna cry look at this mapset ;w; nice SB and nice rhythm placing, that really motivate me to map better ;w;
here's my star
and sorry if my mod was'nt helpfull :<
Frey
故事版不能再好了。对了,我也想报告一下,1024x768的分辨率也不能得到最佳体验,有字是看不到的。

图看了看,觉得没什么可挑的,赶紧找几个水摸,快点把这个rank了吧。

简直是我偶像了,加油!
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Hello from my modding queue :)
Sorry if im late, my connection is slow :<
I dont found too much here
so i just give you a suggestion then :>

[Beginner]
  1. 00:09:007 (3,1) - These Sliders are a bit touching, maybe move them a bit I cant see any hides , maybe your skin is a little bigger than default.
  2. 00:12:674 (2,3) - fix blanket please fixed
  3. 00:33:675 (4) - make this curved please? unnecessary for me
  4. 00:38:007 (1,2) - fix blanket please fixed
  5. 01:04:007 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  6. 01:05:674 - add note here please? I would add note here in my normal diff.
  7. 01:17:007 (3,1) - Fix Blanket fixed
  8. 01:22:007 (1,2) - blanket this would be better unnecessary for me


[Standard]
EDIT : Please Use AR5 or 4, it's really hard when you play with HR also, use CS 3, PLEASE for the sake of beginners :) Accept 1st suggestion but i have no plan to change CS unless this is unrankable since this inconsistent CS.
  1. 00:02:007 (1,2) - looks ugly, move (2) to x112,y148 would be better imo hmm..not ugly for me..
  2. 00:15:341 (1) - Ugly Slider, try this http://puu.sh/hlDGy/f7a2a24377.jpg
  3. 00:16:674 (6) - Then you can blanket this with ^ slider is okay for me , and i have much blanket in other parts , so more verifies in this diff .
  4. 00:24:341 (2) - 1/2 fits better imo you know , Rhythm of this part is similar to kiai s . so This done could distinguish them .
  5. 00:24:674 - then add 1/2 slider here
  6. 00:30:007 (1,2) - These Kinda Confusing, transform these into 1/2 sliders would be better imo I didnt miss notes here and too many 1/2 ll increase the star rating to be one hard web icon.
  7. 00:32:341 (2) - 1/2 fits better
  8. 00:38:007 (1,2) - Same as 00:30:007 (1,2) -
  9. 00:46:007 (1,2) - ^
  10. 01:36:007 (1,2) - ^


[Hyper]
I dont found too much Issues in this Difficulty, Really Nice Mapset, just need a BN look at this mapset :3
EDIT: Please just use AR7 or AR6, ar8 is too fast when you play it with HR, HP Drain should be 4 and OD should be 5
  1. 01:31:007 (3) - Please the slider looks ugly, you might wanna try this http://puu.sh/hlE6p/141f7179fc.jpg i found my shape is acceptable :-p


OMG really nice mapset, i just wanna cry look at this mapset ;w; nice SB and nice rhythm placing, that really motivate me to map better ;w;
here's my star
and sorry if my mod was'nt helpfull :<
Thanks for your mod and star , suggestions r useful :D

Frey wrote:

故事版不能再好了。对了,我也想报告一下,1024x768的分辨率也不能得到最佳体验,有字是看不到的。

图看了看,觉得没什么可挑的,赶紧找几个水摸,快点把这个rank了吧。

简直是我偶像了,加油!
谢谢关注和星星 :)
确实歌曲标题显示不全,包括横向频谱。不过满足了低分辨率,再看widescreen时,效果也不是太好,感觉太空了。兼顾的话..挺难的 :?
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
General
  1. I think you need to add audio lead in time. I'm not sure on the specifications, but I believe is was 2000ms.
  2. The storyboard is amazing. I can only think of a few other storyboards that come close to this. Stunning effort.


alacat's Another
  1. 00:06:007 (1) - You're a god...holy...
  2. 00:45:674 (6) - Make symmetrical to 00:45:007 (4) - (as in, fix it so they both face the exact same angle)
  3. 01:27:007 (5,6,7) - This part feels odd. All the same shape, yet different spacing. I'd recommend changing up this part


Hyper
  1. 00:00:008 (1) - Fix blanket
  2. 00:01:007 (3) - ^
  3. 00:02:674 (2) - Fix stack
  4. 00:04:007 (1) - Fix blanket
  5. 00:06:007 (1) - ^
  6. 00:42:341 (1) - Fix stack
  7. 00:43:674 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow?
  8. 01:25:674 (1) - Fix stack
  9. 01:41:007 (4) - Maybe change this from 2/1 to a 1/1 with repeat?

plz rank soon :)
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
General
  1. I think you need to add audio lead in time. I'm not sure on the specifications, but I believe is was 2000ms. okay.
  2. The storyboard is amazing. I can only think of a few other storyboards that come close to this. Stunning effort.


alacat's Another
  1. 00:06:007 (1) - You're a god...holy...
  2. 00:45:674 (6) - Make symmetrical to 00:45:007 (4) - (as in, fix it so they both face the exact same angle)
  3. 01:27:007 (5,6,7) - This part feels odd. All the same shape, yet different spacing. I'd recommend changing up this part


Hyper
  1. 00:00:008 (1) - Fix blanket all blanket misplaces have been fixed
  2. 00:01:007 (3) - ^
  3. 00:02:674 (2) - Fix stack okay
  4. 00:04:007 (1) - Fix blanket
  5. 00:06:007 (1) - ^
  6. 00:42:341 (1) - Fix stack
  7. 00:43:674 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow? it is unnecessary for me to change..
  8. 01:25:674 (1) - Fix stack
  9. 01:41:007 (4) - Maybe change this from 2/1 to a 1/1 with repeat? hmm..i followed other instruments instead of which you hear.

plz rank soon :) thank you .. and i had never seen so many stars in my map.. holy god.. :)
alacat
Sorry for the delay , complete my diff : http://puu.sh/hw24L/e5f3fdca19.zip

Then, Additional Modding ~

[General]
  1. Please remove some unused picture files.
  2. Consider adding "DanceDanceRevolution ddr" to Tags.
    You can check wiki https://remywiki.com/AC_DDR_2013
Rize V Arcrondo
做的真的很赞,不管是难度还是SB都非常好,真的希望能早点RANK,我觉得这有可能上Best of 2015
:):):):)射星毫不犹豫
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

alacat wrote:

Sorry for the delay , complete my diff : http://puu.sh/hw24L/e5f3fdca19.zip

Then, Additional Modding ~

[General]
  1. Please remove some unused picture files.
  2. Consider adding "DanceDanceRevolution ddr" to Tags.
    You can check wiki https://remywiki.com/AC_DDR_2013
mod has been done .. Thanks for your another cat .. that s amazing :oops:

feverset wrote:

做的真的很赞,不管是难度还是SB都非常好,真的希望能早点RANK,我觉得这有可能上Best of 2015
:):):):)射星毫不犹豫
谢谢星星,best of 2015 可能性不太大吧 :oops:
Lavender
全部都是个人建议,不喜欢请无视

[General]
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - normal-sliderslide.wav


[Hyper]
  1. 00:19:007 (2,3,4) - 建议用三个滑条,感觉有点漏鼓点,和00:29:007 (1,2,3) - 是不一样的


[alacat's Another]
  1. 01:12:674 (3,4,5) - Because you've placed some 1/3 sliders before that, so this spacing will be confusing because it looks like there is an 1/3 between 3 and 4, so I suggest stack 4 to 5's head.
  2. 00:34:007 (8) - NC here and delete NC at 00:34:341 (1) - like you did at 00:26:007 (1) -
  3. 01:50:007 (1) - idk why use 50% volume here, it should be a heated part in the song. 01:52:007 (1) - and I can hardly hear this 40% volume soft-finish here.


Awesome map and storyboard, 想射星结果发现因为自己懒比没星可射了
Autumn
great storyboard
感谢楼上的推荐 让我看到这么棒的图
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

[Teichan] wrote:

全部都是个人建议,不喜欢请无视

[General]
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - normal-sliderslide.wav
    修改过音效忘记删除了 多谢提醒 :0


[Hyper]
  1. 00:19:007 (2,3,4) - 建议用三个滑条,感觉有点漏鼓点,和00:29:007 (1,2,3) - 是不一样的 好的


[alacat's Another]
  1. 01:12:674 (3,4,5) - Because you've placed some 1/3 sliders before that, so this spacing will be confusing because it looks like there is an 1/3 between 3 and 4, so I suggest stack 4 to 5's head.
  2. 00:34:007 (8) - NC here and delete NC at 00:34:341 (1) - like you did at 00:26:007 (1) -
  3. 01:50:007 (1) - idk why use 50% volume here, it should be a heated part in the song. 01:52:007 (1) - and I can hardly hear this 40% volume soft-finish here.


imo.. alacat has his own thought to map, variety of patterns r more playable.

Awesome map and storyboard, 想射星结果发现因为自己懒比没星可射了
谢谢星星和mod :3

Autumn wrote:

great storyboard
感谢楼上的推荐 让我看到这么棒的图
感谢关注 :3
Karen
这么棒的图当然要尽我所能帮一下,需要泡的话pm我=w=
Karen

General

  1. fine

Hitsound

  1. 01:32:007 (1) - Finish here fits more imo.

Hyper

  1. 00:40:507 - 1/6,改成1/6折返吧,参照alacat的diff。
  2. 00:48:507 - ^
  3. 00:01:007 (3,2) - nazi,叠好

alacat's Another

  1. 00:38:841 (3) - consider to delete this note? Because it seems that you follow the piano because there is no note at00:37:841 - , so for consistency i suggest to delete this.

Standard

  1. 00:06:007 (1) - 没必要NC
  2. 00:30:007 (1,2) - 这个安全起见不要用这么多次折返,换成1/2折返+1/2滑条或者别的什么。
  3. 00:38:007 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:46:007 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:54:007 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:36:007 (1,2) - ^抱歉让你改这么多,但是最近查低难度查的很紧,这个是很敏感的东西,有些图因为这种东西被dq。

Beginner

  1. 01:38:674 - 滑条为什么不停在这里,想不出什么理由。

forum pm.
alacat

[Teichan] wrote:

[alacat's Another]
  1. 01:12:674 (3,4,5) - Because you've placed some 1/3 sliders before that, so this spacing will be confusing because it looks like there is an 1/3 between 3 and 4, so I suggest stack 4 to 5's head. fixed this part, I made 1/3 rhythm at this part again.
  2. 00:34:007 (8) - NC here and delete NC at 00:34:341 (1) - like you did at 00:26:007 (1) - fixed~
  3. 01:50:007 (1) - idk why use 50% volume here, it should be a heated part in the song. 01:52:007 (1) - and I can hardly hear this 40% volume soft-finish here. turned up volumes!

Kagamine Ren wrote:

Hitsound

  1. 01:32:007 (1) - Finish here fits more imo. added my diff.

alacat's Another

  1. 00:38:841 (3) - consider to delete this note? Because it seems that you follow the piano because there is no note at00:37:841 - , so for consistency i suggest to delete this. I feel it's empty if it's removed from here. and I took background sound at here!
Thank you for checking, guys~

http://puu.sh/hKGCL/a98e029fd9.zip
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

Kagamine Ren wrote:

General

  1. fine

Hitsound

  1. 01:32:007 (1) - Finish here fits more imo. 我的diffs里,该时间点是开头,所以finish对我来说有点别扭。

Hyper

  1. 00:40:507 - 1/6,改成1/6折返吧,参照alacat的diff。 好的
  2. 00:48:507 - ^ 不只是这里,00:24:507 (2,3) - 00:32:507 (2,3) - 也做了改变,移除了之前的三连.
  3. 00:01:007 (3,2) - nazi,叠好 fixed

alacat's Another

  1. 00:38:841 (3) - consider to delete this note? Because it seems that you follow the piano because there is no note at00:37:841 - , so for consistency i suggest to delete this.

    这里是为了不漏掉蜂鸣声, 请再仔细听一下。应该不是大问题。

Standard

  1. 00:06:007 (1) - 没必要NC 好的
  2. 00:30:007 (1,2) - 这个安全起见不要用这么多次折返,换成1/2折返+1/2滑条或者别的什么。
  3. 00:38:007 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:46:007 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:54:007 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:36:007 (1,2) - ^抱歉让你改这么多,但是最近查低难度查的很紧,这个是很敏感的东西,有些图因为这种东西被dq。 全部都改了。

Beginner

  1. 01:38:674 - 滑条为什么不停在这里,想不出什么理由。Uh..主要是01:38:507 - 有鼓声不宜漏掉,根据之前rank图的经验,滑条对新手来讲很友好.. 应该不是大问题。

forum pm. 感谢check,辛苦了 (:
Karen
不不不,24秒那个不是1/6,是1/8,所以你那个对的,我没笨到漏掉这个,问了很多人才确认。
所以可以保持原样。
顺便我之前摸过这个图所以不用给kd了,我就deny了。

edit,有点记不住了,明天再看下吧先别改了

edit2: Everything looks perfect to me.
Bubbled~
And to next bn: Please check the awesome storyboad carefully because I don't know much about sb, sorry:<
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