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TtmnZk
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月25日 星期六 at 下午 8:40:05

Artist: ASSEYLUM VERS ALLUSIA starring SORA AMAMIYA
Title: Harmonious -Short Ver.-
Source: アルドノア・ゼロ
Tags: Aldnoah.Zero T-Mac 澤野弘之 OST ending ed2
BPM: 156
Filesize: 13805kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.13 stars, 57 notes)
  2. Hard (2.95 stars, 214 notes)
  3. Insane (4.1 stars, 285 notes)
  4. Normal (1.86 stars, 148 notes)
  5. tm's Insane (3.65 stars, 288 notes)
Download: ASSEYLUM VERS ALLUSIA starring SORA AMAMIYA - Harmonious -Short Ver.-
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#3
Just for Hiroyuki Sawano
2nd insane T-Mac
done~
special thanks to Narcissuand jonathanlfj's timing check XD
changed hitsound on 2015.4.11
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http://www.aldnoahzero.com
Blu-ray & DVD Vol.6



Fu*K slaine
买CD送动画
sodarose
没我份 :(


辅导员晒妹我要大肆他
Narcissu
M4M :https://osu.ppy.sh/s/293888

[general]

前奏似乎是長調(沒有小節線),沒有鼓點我分不清楚得去找妹妹……總之從00:04:993 - 開始就肯定是華爾茲了(3/4,個人感覺不太可能是6/8),必須在這裡加紅線修正,也可以直接第一根線就3/4拍號,然後你就會發現kiai的人聲重音全都壓上長白線了!

注意需要把所有綠線全部重新下一邊,因為綠線自帶拍號設定

然後NC需要全部重新下,還是根據長白线法則

儘管是如此卻不用更換音效設置我也只能說厲害

去掉藍線減少文件體積

很少見華人做這麼乾淨的風格……我一直感覺都是在比誰的梗難打……

[easy]

00:20:762 (2) - ds

[insane]

00:05:185 (2,4) - 可以疊好

我盡力了!
Kencho
M4M =w=
[General]
測了offset應該是370才對
[Insane]
00:00:378 (1,2,3) - 這幾個間距明顯不太對吧,考驗讀圖能力(我猜是故意的
00:02:685 (3,4,1) - 這個也是,但因為NC了所以容易看
00:21:916 (1,3) -blanket
00:58:070 (5,1) - 遮HP條了,改一下滑條吧


沒疊好的一堆
00:05:185 (2,4) -
00:12:108 (4,1) -
00:17:878 (3,5) -
00:32:685 (1,6) -
00:33:839 (6,5) -
01:12:493 (4,5) -
01:12:685 (1,4) -
01:19:224 (2,1) -
01:25:762 (3,3) -
01:27:108 (4,2) -

[tm’s Insane]
這個Insane看上去根本就是hard嘛=A=
然而節奏填的挺滿,max combo比最高難度還多

00:14:993 (1,2,3,4) - 我覺得2疊在1會好點,然後3和4移到這裡00:19:608 (1,2,3,4) - 和上面差不多,也是2疊到1,3和4自己移動一下
00:26:147 (8,9) - 這兩個移下面一點,大概這樣01:19:224 (2) - 這個明顯放遠一點好吧
[Hard]
00:04:801 (4,1,2) - 1疊到2上會更好
00:06:916 (2,3,4) - 3疊到4
00:23:454 (1,2) - 沒疊好
00:47:108 (2,3) - ^
01:10:762 (4,2) - ^

[Normal]
原來Normal還可以這樣做!學到了,真心做的很好
HP-1會好點吧

01:00:185 - 加個圈

[Easy]
OD+1吧,HP反而應該-1


00:20:762 (2) - 這個放遠了吧
01:24:608 (5,6) - 沒blanket好

神圖;w;
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
fixed
thank youuuuuu!! XD
Updated
Litharrale
From my queue~

[Insane]
00:04:993 (1,2) - Too large of a space between these
00:05:185 (2,4) - stack
00:02:685 (1) - delete NC or make it longer till it reaches the 4
00:29:608 (4,5) - shift 5 up or blanket it to the right (feel free to ignore this)
00:32:685 (1) - Whistle instead of clap
00:41:916 (1) - Too fast, tone it down by 0.10x
01:00:378 (1) - add clap?

[tm's insane]
00:05:185 (2) - no finish
00:05:762 (1) - delete NC 00:06:531 (3) - add NC
00:07:301 (1) - delete NC
Lot of NC problems
00:08:070 (1,2,3,4) - unstack? seems too simple for an insane for these to be stacked
00:10:378 (1) - offscreen possible unrankable
00:27:685 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - unstack again
00:39:993 (1,1,1) - Fix NC and don't overlap. It's ugly
00:49:224 (4,5,1,2) - Smooth it out, rest of the map is nice and flowy but this is right angles
01:08:647 (2,3,4,5,6) - don't stack triples then a double right after
EncoreW

ken2010123 wrote:

M4M =w=


[tm’s Insane]
這個Insane看上去根本就是hard嘛=A= 我也没办法啊要求是3.5-3.6我还超标了
然而節奏填的挺滿,max combo比最高難度還多

00:14:993 (1,2,3,4) - 我覺得2疊在1會好點,然後3和4移到這裡 改了 00:19:608 (1,2,3,4) - 和上面差不多,也是2疊到1,3和4自己移動一下 这地方改了似乎不太干净,而且梗稍微变一下也没什么不好的吧
00:26:147 (8,9) - 這兩個移下面一點,大概這樣 改了01:19:224 (2) - 這個明顯放遠一點好吧 其实差不多
神圖;w;
thx a lot
EncoreW

Litharrale wrote:

From my queue~


[tm's insane]
00:05:185 (2) - no finish okay
00:05:762 (1) - delete NC 00:06:531 (3) - add NC okay
00:07:301 (1) - delete NC okay
Lot of NC problems because timing changed
00:08:070 (1,2,3,4) - unstack? seems too simple for an insane for these to be stacked it's not an insane map , more like a hard one , tt mouse asked me to control the difficulty between 3.5-3.6 XD
00:10:378 (1) - offscreen possible unrankable (175,384) is not offscreen
00:27:685 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - unstack again unstack will overdrive D:
00:39:993 (1,1,1) - Fix NC and don't overlap. It's ugly fixed but i don't think that's ugly
00:49:224 (4,5,1,2) - Smooth it out, rest of the map is nice and flowy but this is right angles fixed
01:08:647 (2,3,4,5,6) - don't stack triples then a double right after okay

thx a lot !!
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
[Insane]
00:04:993 (1,2) - Too large of a space between these i think it fit song and ok in the hardest diff
00:05:185 (2,4) - stack fixed
00:02:685 (1) - delete NC or make it longer till it reaches the 4 keep for the different rhythm
00:29:608 (4,5) - shift 5 up or blanket it to the right (feel free to ignore this)
00:32:685 (1) - Whistle instead of clap keep
00:41:916 (1) - Too fast, tone it down by 0.10x its ok for this diff
01:00:378 (1) - add clap? keep
thxs mod and updated !
Starfall9908
From Chaoslitz's modding team :3

[General]
  1. Turn of the widescreen support. You don't have a storyboard
[Normal]
  1. Circle sie is to small for Nomal. Put it on 3
  2. 00:15:378 (4) - blanket
  3. 00:21:147 (5) - I don't think this kind of slider is suited in a song like this. And the moslty of the sliders in this diff are curves so having a sharp turn like that isn't recommended.
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:916 (6,1) - don't stack (1) right under (6) right on the start of the map the player will miss the note.
  2. 00:29:993 (4,5,1) - instead of stacking them do a triangle here. It's more interesting to play it then.

Easy was perfect and I'm still not able to mod insane.

Good luck with ranking ^w^
Topic Starter
TtmnZk

nadapan wrote:

From Chaoslitz's modding team :3

[General]
  1. Turn of the widescreen support. You don't have a storyboard
fixed
[Normal]
  1. Circle sie is to small for Nomal. Put it on 3
  2. 00:15:378 (4) - blanket ok
  3. 00:21:147 (5) - I don't think this kind of slider is suited in a song like this. And the moslty of the sliders in this diff are curves so having a sharp turn like that isn't recommended. i think is fine, for flow
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:916 (6,1) - don't stack (1) right under (6) right on the start of the map the player will miss the note. changed
  2. 00:29:993 (4,5,1) - instead of stacking them do a triangle here. It's more interesting to play it then. ok

Easy was perfect and I'm still not able to mod insane. no problem, thxs your mod! XD

Good luck with ranking ^w^

>w< updated
Saoji
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:608 (1) - Improve blanket
  2. 00:11:916 (3) - Ctrl+H, maybe, for better flow with 00:14:224 (1) -
  3. 00:20:762 (2) - Improve blanket
  4. 01:00:378 (1) - Try to place it around x104y152 for better look. And then 01:02:685 (2) - around x432 y304 for spacing
Pretty good. You can improve the blankets though, it's quite important for an easy diff.

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:993 (3) - Improve blanket.
  2. 00:54:608 (2) - Improve blanket
  3. 01:08:070 (5) - ^
  4. 01:19:993 (2) - This is a nice blanket, as you can see the approach rate totally follows the shape of the slider, which makes your pattern look neater
Good, but still this little problem of those blankets.

[Insane]
  1. 00:59:801 (7,8) - Ctrl+G might improve the flow?
  2. 01:27:685 (9) - Move it around x128y240 ?
Really nice map

Good luck!
Topic Starter
TtmnZk

Yales wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:608 (1) - Improve blanket
  2. 00:11:916 (3) - Ctrl+H, maybe, for better flow with 00:14:224 (1) -
  3. 00:20:762 (2) - Improve blanket
  4. 01:00:378 (1) - Try to place it around x104y152 for better look. And then 01:02:685 (2) - around x432 y304 for spacing keep
other fixed
Pretty good. You can improve the blankets though, it's quite important for an easy diff.

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:993 (3) - Improve blanket.
  2. 00:54:608 (2) - Improve blanket
  3. 01:08:070 (5) - ^
  4. 01:19:993 (2) - This is a nice blanket, as you can see the approach rate totally follows the shape of the slider, which makes your pattern look neater
fixed
Good, but still this little problem of those blankets.

[Insane]
  1. 00:59:801 (7,8) - Ctrl+G might improve the flow?
  2. 01:27:685 (9) - Move it around x128y240 ?
sorry for no change

Really nice map

Good luck!
mod thxs! XD
updated!
Shushan
HI THERE!
you requested a reverse m4m from my queue! t/304087/start=75
[u][i][b]easy[/b][/i][/u]
00:00:378 (1,2) - i srsly thing these both are useless to use just start from here
00:14:224 (1) - fix DS
00:18:839 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:23:454 (1,2,1,2) - fix ds
[u][i][b]normal[/b][/i][/u]
00:05:762 (3) - nc?
00:15:378 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:18:454 (7) - http://prntscr.com/6rxqb3 for better flow?
00:32:685 (1) - ds?
00:40:762 (4) - nc?
01:12:685 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:23:070 (3,4) - ^^
[u][i][b]hard[/b][/i][/u]
00:05:762 (3) - nc?
00:07:301 (1) - x193 stack
00:08:839 (6,7) - blanket them?
00:09:608 (1,2) - ^^
00:12:108 (2,1) - ^^
00:20:762 (2) - 147 292 stack
00:31:531 (3,4,1) - fix blanket
00:34:608 (5,6) - ^^
00:35:762 (1,2) - ^^
00:40:378 (1,2) - ^^
00:43:454 (1,3) - ^^
00:47:108 (2,3) - stack?
[u][i][b]tms insane[/b][/i][/u]
00:42:301 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:50:378 (4,5) - ^^
00:54:608 (9,10,1) - ^^
01:03:647 (2,3) - ^^
01:04:993 (1) - http://prntscr.com/6rxt5i better flow?
[u][i][b] insane[/b][/i][/u]
00:06:147 (5) - 466 stack
00:37:685 (3,5) - blanket those?
00:40:570- http://prntscr.com/6rxu8w ?
01:02:300 (6,1) - fix blanket
01:02:300 (6,3) - stack
01:04:224 (5,7) - ^^
01:21:147 (1) - remove nc and put here 01:21:916 (3) - ^^
01:24:224 (3) - 234 249 stack
gl!
ill send you my map in PM
xxdeathx
nice
Topic Starter
TtmnZk

xxdeathx wrote:

nice
XD
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
thxs mod!
fixed somethings ,and changed hitsounds
updated!
EncoreW

ohad1881 wrote:

HI THERE!
[u][i][b]tms insane[/b][/i][/u]
00:42:301 (2,3) - fix blanket fixed
00:50:378 (4,5) - ^^ fixed
00:54:608 (9,10,1) - ^^ fixed
01:03:647 (2,3) - ^^ it's a perfect blanket
01:04:993 (1) - http://prntscr.com/6rxt5i better flow? it's better but i think it's not necessary , DS changed a lot if i fix that , i can't accept this change in a very light insane , it's too hard D:

ill send you my map in PM
THX A LOT !!
Karen
M4M

[General]
  1. TAG里没有 tm1209
  2. 我听了几遍没发现用到 normal-hitclap.wav 这个音效,你看看是不是

[Easy]
  1. 01:09:608 (1) - 前面那个滑条是朝右上的方向,这个ctrl+g更顺一点
  2. 01:25:762 (6) - ^ 另外看起来blanket没修好?

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:454 - 为什么NC呢,建议去掉

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:147 (4) - ctrl+g,因为00:06:531 (5,6) - 这两个是反向的,前后保持一致比较好
  2. 00:09:224 (7,1,2) - 这个flow感觉不太好,建议把00:09:608 (1) - 放到100,180左右。
  3. 00:12:685 (1) - 这为什么NC
  4. 00:20:570 (1) - ^
  5. 00:26:147 (2,3,4) - nazi,一看就不平行
  6. 00:34:224 (4,5) - 这样的摆法不太好看的感觉,不如干脆直的

[tm's Insane]
  1. 00:34:224 (5,6,7,8) - 直着的无聊,建议像你前面一样弄个弯点的flow,而且00:33:647 (4,5,6) - 这个flow不好
  2. 00:46:916 (2,3,4) - 我觉得可以试试这样
  3. 00:56:147 (4,5,6,7) - 跟第一条一样,可以好玩一点,比如

[Hard]
  1. 00:22:878 (6) - 小建议,可以试试217,172左右,感觉会有趣一点
  2. 00:32:301 (7) - 建议ctrl+g,00:31:531 (4,7) - 这两个同向总觉得哪里不对
  3. 00:40:762 (1) - 感觉可以离前面远一点,毕竟这个音还是比较重,配合减速应该能更好表现这里
  4. 01:10:185 (2,6) - nazi....明显没包好

音效看不太懂,就不写了...
Topic Starter
TtmnZk

Kagamine Ren wrote:

M4M

[General]
  1. TAG里没有 tm1209
  2. 我听了几遍没发现用到 normal-hitclap.wav 这个音效,你看看是不是
fixed
[Easy]
  1. 01:09:608 (1) - 前面那个滑条是朝右上的方向,这个ctrl+g更顺一点 影响不是很大就不改了
  2. 01:25:762 (6) - ^ 另外看起来blanket没修好? 修了修

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:454 - 为什么NC呢,建议去掉 大白线

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:147 (4) - ctrl+g,因为00:06:531 (5,6) - 这两个是反向的,前后保持一致比较好
  2. 00:09:224 (7,1,2) - 这个flow感觉不太好,建议把00:09:608 (1) - 放到100,180左右。
  3. 00:12:685 (1) - 这为什么NC
  4. 00:20:570 (1) - ^
  5. 00:26:147 (2,3,4) - nazi,一看就不平行
  6. 00:34:224 (4,5) - 这样的摆法不太好看的感觉,不如干脆直的
all fixed
[tm's Insane]
  1. 00:34:224 (5,6,7,8) - 直着的无聊,建议像你前面一样弄个弯点的flow,而且00:33:647 (4,5,6) - 这个flow不好
  2. 00:46:916 (2,3,4) - 我觉得可以试试这样
  3. 00:56:147 (4,5,6,7) - 跟第一条一样,可以好玩一点,比如

[Hard] <orz
  1. 00:22:878 (6) - 小建议,可以试试217,172左右,感觉会有趣一点 不了
  2. 00:32:301 (7) - 建议ctrl+g,00:31:531 (4,7) - 这两个同向总觉得哪里不对
  3. 00:40:762 (1) - 感觉可以离前面远一点,毕竟这个音还是比较重,配合减速应该能更好表现这里 不了,flow不怎么好改
  4. 01:10:185 (2,6) - nazi....明显没包好 ok

音效看不太懂,就不写了... ...
thxs mod XD updated
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