1. Lv.15 - 4Key (2.99 stars, 1202 notes)
2. Lv.22 - 4Key (3.58 stars, 1526 notes)
3. Lv.28 - 4Key (4.11 stars, 1877 notes)
4. Lv.8 - 4Key (1.93 stars, 649 notes)

Draftnell wrote:

wew masih baru xD

oke req mod from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/259841/start=60

and here~
My Simple Mod

Lv.8

00:11:548 - umm i think add note 1
00:12:882 - ^
00:14:215 - ^
00:15:548 - ^
00:16:882 - ^
00:18:215 - ^
all keep, 1 note's fine

00:30:548 (30548|1) - move to 4
00:36:215 (36215|2) - move to 1
00:42:548 - add LN start 00:42:548 - >>> 00:42:882 - // looks good, changed note 4 to LN

01:10:215 - add note
01:11:548 - ^
01:12:882 - ^ at col 1
01:14:215 - ^ at col 3
all keep, 1 note's fine

01:16:548 - add note for sound finish >w<
01:33:882 (93882|1) - for diff ..i think delete // sure

wew baru bikin map udah bagus bngt pattern nya >w<
GG LNP- (y) !!!

Lv.15

00:28:715 - add note ?
00:29:048 - ^
both no, follow drum sounds

00:34:715 (34715|3) - ?? delete ? // no, hihat sound

00:42:965 - add note
00:43:132 - ^
both keep

01:08:715 (68715|2,68798|1) - delete
01:08:882 - add note at col 2
01:30:132 (90132|3,90215|0) - delete
all keep
lel mntapp !!!

Lv.20

00:13:798 (13798|0) - move to 3
00:13:882 (13882|1) - ^ to 1
00:34:382 (34382|0) - ^ to 2
00:46:715 (46715|3) - ^ to 1 keep
00:46:882 (46882|0) - delete keep

00:54:715 (54715|1) - ^
00:55:382 (55382|3) - ^
00:56:048 (56048|3) - delete
00:57:382 (57382|1) - delete
00:58:048 (58048|3) - ^
all keep

00:55:382 (55382|3,113382|0,113465|1) - use snap 1/8 and 01:53:548 (113548|3,113548|2) - CTRL+H // eh , i dont hear 1/8 sound in there @.@

ew Nicee !!!

Lv.32

sorry ane kehabisan waktu T.T
gk sempet

mntap map nya !!!!
and here take my stars ~

GOOD LUCK

- R e b a - wrote:

Hi~ came to mod from queue

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3

Lv.8

01:16:548 add a note // 2 notes's fine
01:18:548 ^
01:34:548 there's a sound, put a single note there. // added LN

01:35:548 stronger sound, add a note
01:37:215 ^
01:39:882 ^
All keep

Lv.15

00:33:215 add a note // keep
01:33:548 should have more notes than here 01:33:882 // keep
01:35:548 add a note
01:37:215 ^ // keep, but note changed to LN
01:38:215 ^ // keep
01:39:882 ^ // keep, but note changed to LN
01:40:882 ^ // keep

Lv.20

No issues in my point of view.

Lv.32

01:29:272 (89272|3) - delete
01:29:438 (89438|3) - delete
02:04:595 (124595|0) - delete
02:04:761 (124761|0) - delete
all keep

Nice map! Good luck on this

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[Normal MOD]

Uncheck > Song setup > Design > Widescreen support (This only applies to storyboard) // lol why i always forgot this :V
Remove kiai in this part 00:11:219 AiMOD and not necessary // keep

|1|2|3|4|
[Lv.8]
Seems fine to me~

[Lv.15]
Seems fine to me~

[Lv.20]
02:14:052 (134052|3,134136|3) - Move to |2| for pattern just like the pattern before

[Lv.32]
00:00:886 (886|3,886|0,1052|0,1052|3,1219|2,1219|0,1386|3,1386|1) - Better pattern because of the rhythm. Continuous flow of rhythm, not necessary to be stacked because they don't have the specific same beats or rhythmic instrument for it.

00:57:886 (57886|1) - Move to |1| this part is not necessary to be stack with the upper 2 noted one because they don't have the same rhythm with it.

02:03:261 (123261|0) - Move this to 02:03:302 continuous rhythm/Piano pitch

You can just not give me kudosu to this one Nice mapset!
Good luck!~ =w=)b

-Sandy Corzeta- wrote:

I like messing the hardest diff

Lets make this classic way
Lane Notes : 0|1|2|3

Lv 32 diff

SPOILER

1. 00:52:802 (52802|2) - Moving it to 3 i think ... suddenly chord stairs is quite killing // keep

2. 01:09:802 (69802|0) - Move to 2
3. 01:09:886 (69886|2) - Move to 0
both change another way

4. 00:15:886 (15886|0) - Start here to 00:16:219 (16219|0) - Finish here, make it a single trill (following goat mbeekkk sounds quite cool).... and delete one of the note from 00:16:219 (16219|0) - that will be suited with the trill pattern before .. so it will be left 3 notes. // LOL mbeeeek sound :V , not following goat, i mean mbeek sound, so keep

5. 00:16:219 (16219|0) - This // removed , 00:53:719 (53719|0) // keep , i hear a sound - This, 00:53:802 (53802|3) - And This // keep... better be remove... doesn't represent any instruments i think.

6. 01:14:552 (74552|0) - Start Here to 01:14:886 (74886|0) - Finish here, do the same thing like number 4, make it mirrored (Ctrl +H) would be okay and interesting :3.. // same as number.4

7. 01:25:469 (85469|2) - Same as number 1 // keep
8. 01:25:469 (85469|2) - Anything note that starts here, 01:29:886 (89886|3) - to here are better made it as like stairs instead of chords and trails.... // keep

9. 01:31:552 - Add note at 2 // keep for rest
10. 01:31:719 - Add note at 1 // ^
11. 01:31:886 - Add Slide note at 3 until 01:32:552 - // ^

12. 02:04:636 (124636|1) - Add note at 3
13. 02:04:719 (124719|3) - Add note at 0
14. 02:04:802 (124802|1) - Add note at 3
all keep, 3 note make kill players

15. 02:17:552 (137552|0) - to 02:17:886 (137552|0) - make the outro as a double trill ? .... (this is not necessary but if you find it interesting, better be apply it :3) // keep, ending note nya udah pass
.

So far that's all i think... please reconsider my mod back before applying it, if you doesn't feel right with my mod better find a better alternate mod to other modders , since im quite noob at modding, // you mod is good, tapi butuh improve lagi kedepan nya supaya tau apa yang mapper inginkan , setidaknya bisa menemukan major problem

Please get ranked soon... and this might be the best i try to mod before exam will be started next Monday , have a nice day LNP-kun

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~
From my queue
Here's my mod

Click me :3

Lv.32

01:33:552 - Add on 3 // keep, 2 note is fine

Lv.20

00:05:219 - Suggestion // great, but keep, because 00:05:052 (5052|3,5219|2) - different sound


01:33:552 - Add on 3 // keep, 1 note for bass is fine

Lv.15

00:04:219 - A beat. add?
00:04:719 (4719|0) - Move to 4
00:04:886 (4886|1) - Delete
01:33:552 - add on 3 // keep

Lv.8
01:33:552 - add on 3 // keep
01:33:886 - add on 2 // keep

Tbh, quite hard to find issues on your map. Maybe you can get Speedrank? maybe
Anyways, Good luck with your Beatmap

Raediaufar wrote:

from this queue

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

[Lvl. 15]
00:16:052 (16052|3) – remove 4 // keep, hihat sound
00:34:719 (34719|3) - ^ // ^
01:14:719 (74719|2) – remove 3 // ^
01:35:219 – add 4 // keep, 1 note is fine for bass sound

have also check another diffs but it seems ok. Since you not fully give the hs on Lvl. 8 and 15 I'm not modding your hs

if this mod is useless, pls don't give me kds

Brian_Ex wrote:

Yo! LNP-, Mod From Request

|1|2|3|4|

Lv.8

00:34:886 (34886|3,35052|2,35219|1) - gw tau lu ikutin suara tong teng tong :v, tapi pas di selanjutnya lu ngikutin bassnya lagi, dan ngk ngikutin suarang teng tong lagi, dan itu rasanya awkward..... kalau mau lu bisa delete note ini 00:35:052 (35052|2) -
00:53:386 (53386|0,53386|3) - buat jadi 2,3 biar lebih menarik 'w' // keep, nada nya sama 'w'
01:30:719 (90719|3,90719|0) - ^ ^

Lv.15

00:33:386 (33386|1) - ini ngikutin suara yg mana? // deleted
00:53:386 (53386|3,53386|0) - bikin sama kye di lv.8 tadi // keep

Lv.20

00:53:386 (53386|2,53386|0,53386|3) - Ctrl+H // keep
00:56:219 (56219|1) - jadikan LN (ngikutin suara synth) endnya di 00:56:552 - situ // nice, applied to all diff
00:56:386 (56386|0) - delete
01:30:719 (90719|0,90719|1,90719|3) - Ctrl+H lagi XD // keep
01:33:886 - bikin 3 note soalnya di 01:31:219 - situ elu bikin 3 note // keep buat rest

ya sampai situ aja modku, sorry kalau pendek2 ;w; soalnya banyak urusan irl
moga bermanfaat

Good Luck~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi LNP- (rajin amat ngereq di queueku) >.<)/
NM as requested from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( ✔ )
Mapset : ( ✘ ) star Lv.8 mencapai 2, reduce plz
Metadata : ( ? ) msih blum dpat sourcenya T_T
Timing : ( ? ) kiaimu yg pertama di 00:11:219 - msa cuma smpe disini 00:11:302 :v dan bisa tmbahin lg kiai di 01:09:886
Audio : ( ✔ )
Background : ( ✔ ) BGmu agak kurang fit dngan lagunya, coba gmbar dri lahan peternakan krena ada suara hewan ternak lol :v (just kidding)

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

Lv.8

fokus : reduce your star diff
00:31:886 (31886|2) move to 2
00:32:052 (32052|1,32219|0) geser 2 kolom kekanan yaitu di (4 & 3)
00:32:552 (32552|2) move to 1 (ikutin variasi pattern yg bertolak belakang dr 00:26:552 (26552|2,26719|0,26886|1,27052|2,27219|0,27219|3) - )
00:37:219 coba seperti ini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3027208
00:38:552 (38552|3) remove? check 00:39:219 atau sbliknya klu mau ditmbahin // keep, 00:39:219 - disini gk ada cymbal sound
00:49:386 (49386|1,49469|2,49552|3) jadiin LN? biar bisa reduce star diffmu // nice, added LN 4
00:53:386 (53386|0,53386|3) move to 2 & 3 ^ //keep
00:53:886 (53886|1) move to 4 dan 00:54:052 (54052|2) move to 1 (biar variatif patternmu) // keep, sama sound dengan sebelumnya
00:56:552 (56552|3) move to 2 dan 00:56:719 (56719|0) move to 2 ^ // ^
01:09:219 (69219|1) patahin LN 01:09:552 streamnya soundnya beda sy dnger

01:20:719 (80719|1) remove low pitch sound
01:22:719 (82719|1) ^
01:23:386 (83386|1) ^
01:26:052 (86052|0) ^
01:28:052 (88052|3) ^
Remap biar bisa turun SR nya
01:30:719 (90719|0,90719|3) move to 2 dan 3 // keep

Lv.15

01:19:552 add note, high pitch sound check 01:19:219 // keep
01:19:886 ^ // ^
01:20:386 remove slah satu? suaranya hnya 1 klu gak slah // keep
01:31:886 gak tmbah LN/note, suara sapi? :v // no, buat rest z :v
01:37:886 add note, cymbal sound check 01:35:886
01:38:552 ^
01:40:552 ^
01:41:219 ^

Lv.20

00:08:386 - 00:08:552 klu gak slah disini ada suara stair deh? // lihat level pls, gk mungkin disamain sama lv.32
00:14:052 (14052|3,14136|3) move to 3, dan 00:14:219 (14219|2) move to 4, more fit & balance // keep, pattern nadanya
00:41:052 (41052|1,41219|2) Ctrl + G
00:45:052 (45052|0) pindah ke 3, lalu 00:45:219 (45219|2) 2, balance
01:31:886 mbooo lg // keep, for rest
01:35:219 add note cymbal here (sama sperti di diff sblumnya)
01:35:886 ^
01:37:886 ^
01:38:552 ^
01:40:552 ^
01:41:219 ^
02:05:386 - 02:05:552 stair sound? // lihat level pls, gk mungkin disamain sama lv.32
02:05:719 missing note here? // sengaja kosong, fokus ke 3 note aja

Nice hewani instrument music :v
Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Kagu-chan wrote:

Please Replay soon and point out what is rejected and why

1|2|3|4

All in one you should try to be more consistent with Double-Notes (Chords) - I havent really seen a system, often you could use one, sometimes i dont really get chord. I dont pointed it out much, here you should seldmod to improve.

Lv.8

00:43:552 - Add Note // keep, rythm thing
00:45:552 - ^ // ^
00:48:886 - ^ // ^
00:49:552 - ^
00:59:052 (59052|2,59219|3) - Swap to avoid Jack (No same sound)
01:06:886 - Add Note
01:48:886 (108886|1,109052|1,109219|2,109386|2) - Rearrange to avoid Jacks (no same Sound)
01:55:052 - Add Note in 2
In KIAI i would use more Chords since it is supposed as highlight in song
Look this :p https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jofNR_WkoCE

Lv.15

00:03:052 - until LN: Add Notes // keep for rest
00:10:886 (10886|0,10886|1) - Remove one (sound not so strong as before)
00:13:636 (13636|2) - To 4
00:18:969 (18969|0) - To 3
00:40:219 - Add in 4
02:08:302 (128302|0) - To 3

No issues found in Lv. 20, other diff is too hard for me :/

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi~ mod for req via queue

columns 1|2|3|4

[Lv.8]
00:43:052 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3053586 // Keep, rythm thing
00:45:719 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3053587 // keep
00:49:552 - add note in 2 // keep, not make double note for bass sound in this part
00:53:386 - put this double in columns 2 - 3 // keep, same sound with 00:53:219 (53219|3,53219|0) -
01:00:386 (6386|2) - move to 1 keep
01:04:386 (64386|0) - move to 2
01:30:719 - put this double in columns 2 - 3 // same as 00:53:386 -

[Lv.15]
00:04:552 (4552|0) - move to 4
00:27:052 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3053634 // looks good
00:32:386 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3053638 // ^
01:09:052 - why this double? // aww, deleted one note
01:34:552 - add note // keep, 2 note just for symbal+bass sound in this part
01:37:219 - ^ // ^
01:39:886 - ^ // ^

good luck

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

sup

u sure about the lv names? // dunno, i need help about level ;w;
col: 1|2|3|4

[Lv.8]
00:14:219 (14219|2) - 4
00:24:886 - http://puu.sh/hzuJj/db86339cfa.jpg // nice, applied
00:31:886 - for pattern variability~ http://puu.sh/hzuNT/c651639c83.jpg // =w=)b
00:38:886 - http://puu.sh/hzuS3/77e9b41eb8.jpg OR http://puu.sh/hzuVW/b895050b47.jpg
01:00:386 (60386|2) - 1. then 01:01:219 (61219|1,61386|2) - swap col
01:01:219 (61219|1,61386|2) - this should be 2 notes, emphasizing the cymbals
01:41:886 (101886|3,102052|2,102219|0,102386|0,102552|3,102719|2,102886|1,103052|1,103219|0,103386|1,103552|3,103719|3,103886|0,104052|1) - do a 2 consectutive mini jacks, except the last 2 notes. like this~ http://puu.sh/hzvi4/773dfe6202.jpg // nice
01:45:552 (105552|3,105719|3) - unusual point for a jack, considering this section doesnt have one. move 01:45:552 (105552|3) - to 1. then~ http://puu.sh/hzvqc/e8dbc9b223.jpg
01:56:552 (116552|2) - this ln actually ends at 01:56:719 - . end it there, then add a note on 01:56:719 - at col 1
01:56:886 (116886|3) - i suggest you turn this into a single note, since this one followed the synths, and 01:57:052 (117052|1,117219|0,117386|1,117552|2) - dont, which create an awkward transition. then move 01:57:052 (117052|1) - to 3
02:04:552 - better flow and pattern~ http://puu.sh/hzvGC/60f09cba9f.jpg

[Lv.15]
00:15:219 (15219|0) - 4
00:37:469 (37469|1) - 3, better triplet positioning
00:50:219 (50219|2,50386|0) - swap col
00:52:886 (52886|2) - try moving this to 1, to accent the synths, instead of the bass. (for comfortability also)

[Lv.20]
00:29:469 -i suggest removing the note here, which creates an awkward start for the stream. also, try this~ http://puu.sh/hzwJX/835f6c04ca.jpg // added note in red line
00:32:052 (32052|1,32219|2) - swap col // keep
00:39:886 (39886|0) - try ending this ln on 00:40:219 - , to make the entire part less crowded, then this~ http://puu.sh/hzx1O/de5180634b.jpg
00:44:552 (44552|2,45052|0,45219|2) - 1, 3, 2
00:47:052 (47052|1) - 1
00:47:719 (47719|1) - single note, then note at 00:47:802 - on 3

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi here's my check as requested

[General]

Fix unsnapped Preview Time // fixed


You can add "Oriental Core" to Tag // added

[Lv.32]

00:08:636 (8636|1) - delete, i suggest you to only follow the drumpad

00:08:719 (8719|0,8775|1,8830|2) - Ctrl+H and then move one coloumn to right

00:10:052 (10052|0) - Move to 3

00:29:386 - http://puu.sh/hEtBY/ffb6c6c25d.jpg , anyway you miss note here // changed another way

00:46:469 (46469|0) - Move to 3
00:46:552 (46552|1) - Move to 1

00:49:886 (49886|2) - Move to 1
00:49:969 (49969|0) - Move to 3

00:53:219 (53219|3) - Remove F

01:07:219 - http://puu.sh/hEtTu/a427c7c431.jpg , actually it's easier for me if like that // looks pretty

01:20:719 (80719|2) - Add to 4 F // ? i dont hear symbal sound @.@

[Lv.20]

00:40:219 - http://puu.sh/hEufQ/33cd321a53.jpg

00:46:719 (46719|3) - Move to 3

00:52:802 (52802|1,52886|2) - Ctrl+H

00:58:886 (58886|1) - Move to 3
00:59:052 (59052|1) - Move to 1 and change C to W

01:54:052 (114052|0,114136|1) - Move to 3 n 4

01:57:719 (117719|2,117802|1) - Ctrl+H very fit with instrument

02:13:219 (133219|1) - Move to 1

I'll come back for other diff and HS consistency