Tomatsu Haruka - courage · forum

Silky

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Silky 2015-03-27T12:13:55+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年2月20日 at 23:57:27

Artist: Tomatsu Haruka
Title: courage
Source: ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags: sword art online anime opening minakami yuki depths image-- meg enjoy enju -_e_n_j_u_-
BPM: 196
Filesize: 21131kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

Depths' Rosario (5.64 stars, 384 notes)
Easy (1.6 stars, 115 notes)
Enjoy's Expert (5.33 stars, 376 notes)
Insane (4.59 stars, 320 notes)
Meg's Another (4.95 stars, 316 notes)
Normal (2.22 stars, 175 notes)
Yuki's Hard (3.31 stars, 237 notes)

Download: Tomatsu Haruka - courage
Download: Tomatsu Haruka - courage (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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アニメ見てないです

fuyuyu-

Minakami Yuki

fuyuyu-, Meg

Enjoy, Depths

Last edited by Silky 2018-05-30T17:34:56+00:00, edited 100 times in total.

Kiriel

6 posts

Joined July 2014

Kiriel 2015-03-29T17:33:11+00:00

Hello! I'm new to this modding business, so my mod will not be extensive but it will highlight a couple things which stood out to me as I tested the completed Insane difficulty.

I will suggest some changes that you could make to the map to make it fit to the song more, and to make it more enjoyable for the player.

The slider pattern from 00:42:823 to 00:44:277 does not fit the beat of the song and are positioned awkwardly, in my opinion.

Perhaps you could shorten the slider at 00:42:823 by one beat, as shown here:

Remove the rest of the slider pattern up to 00:44:277, and replace with the following beat layout...
Slider from 00:43:129 to 00:43:282, with 2 extra circles instead at 00:43:435 and 00:43:588, like this:

Make sure these notes are adequatly spaced, perhaps just a bit further than the note snap allows.

After, do something similar, like a slider from 00:43:741 to 00:43:894, then a circle at 00:44:048. However what's different is that there will be a triplet at the end instead of just 2 notes. (Note at 00:44:201 and 00:44:277), like this:

Move the slider at 00:44:354 more towards the end of the triplet if you need to do so, the difficulty will still be there and it will still be fun to play this part.
The ending of the song doesn't have enough punch, and doesn't really fit.

A good idea would be to shorten the slider at 01:28:129 by a beat, like you did before:

Shorten the slider at 01:28:894 by 2 beats this time, but add 2 seperate spaced out notes at 01:29:201 and 01:29:354, perhaps with a finish sound effect on the last note, like so:

As before, make sure these notes are spaced out. To me, it seems like this change would feel much more satisfying to play, and the final note at 01:29:354 is also closer to the time when the actual song finishes.

Thanks for reading, I hope my modding will help you to make your map better.

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Silky 2015-03-29T22:16:48+00:00

何言ってるかわからんけどどっちも変えたくないからno change

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-04-05T15:03:16+00:00

hi~
http://puu.sh/h2owl/a1bb613ca5.rar

Edit: oh forget to change settings.... help me set it as ar8, hp5 and od6 please.

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Silky 2015-04-05T15:19:01+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
hi~
http://puu.sh/h2owl/a1bb613ca5.rar

Edit: oh forget to change settings.... help me set it as ar8, hp5 and od6 please.

ok, update! thanks Yuki~

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-05T11:42:46+00:00

nya~

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Silky 2016-01-05T13:41:43+00:00

Depths wrote:
nya~

(´ฅ•ω•ฅ｀)

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-06T09:34:45+00:00

Depths Rosario

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: OP.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49634
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7619,8843,9150,9303,9609,9915,10068,30578,30884,37619,48027,68231,87211,88741,89201
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 3.499999

[Metadata]
Title:courage
TitleUnicode:courage
Artist:Tomatsu Haruka
ArtistUnicode:戸松遥
Creator:fuyuyu-
Version:Depths' Rosario
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags:sword art online anime opening minakami yuki
BeatmapID:871592
BeatmapSetID:297698

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.4
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.9
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301,235,44048,6,0,L|426:235,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,327,44354,6,0,P|274:282|205:165,1,190,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,144,44813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
183,257,44966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,345,45119,1,2,0:0:0:0:
197,256,45272,5,12,0:0:0:0:
8,197,45425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,255,45578,2,0,B|341:290|341:290|300:227,1,190,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,347,46037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
218,347,46114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,347,46190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
249,184,46343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,288,46497,2,0,L|441:276,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,151,47721,5,12,0:0:0:0:
40,151,47874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,61,48027,5,12,0:0:0:0:
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408,239,48486,5,8,0:0:0:0:
189,71,48639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,42,48945,5,8,0:0:0:0:
305,331,49099,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49252,12,0,50017,0:0:0:0:
344,102,50170,5,4,0:3:0:0:
344,102,50476,2,0,B|383:224|383:224|317:198,1,190,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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394,320,51088,1,2,0:0:0:0:
325,201,51241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
481,274,51394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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451,229,52007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,164,52160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,268,52772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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3,215,55068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,305,55221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,365,55374,6,0,L|33:194,1,142.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,195,55680,2,0,P|91:214|140:205,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,225,55986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,134,56139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
135,305,56292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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383,140,57211,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,320,57364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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406,271,58129,2,0,L|394:367,1,95,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,365,58359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,365,58435,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,349,58588,5,2,0:0:0:0:
369,175,58741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
349,318,58894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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447,267,59201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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196,104,59660,5,8,0:3:0:0:
398,213,59813,1,8,0:3:0:0:
250,273,59966,1,4,0:3:0:0:
345,124,60119,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,294,60272,6,0,P|384:306|489:198,1,190,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,56,60731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,173,60884,2,0,P|331:211|368:210,1,95,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,39,61190,2,0,P|171:51|145:77,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,126,61497,2,0,L|469:118,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,119,61726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,119,61803,1,8,0:0:0:0:
398,268,61956,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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112,74,62568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,84,62721,2,0,B|423:113|423:113|396:59,1,190,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,211,63180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,211,63257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,211,63333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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169,222,63639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,63,63792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,267,63945,6,0,L|180:328,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,116,64252,2,0,L|78:153,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,42,64864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,219,65017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,219,65093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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51,325,65629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,130,65782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,292,65935,5,2,0:0:0:0:
38,146,66088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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27,258,66394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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24,141,66701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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52,57,67466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,240,67848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,240,67925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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35,72,68384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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212,213,68690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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185,102,71139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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214,236,73741,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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299,132,83843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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386,179,86522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,179,86599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
366,352,86752,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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264,134,87517,5,8,0:0:0:0:
223,334,87670,1,2,0:0:0:0:
119,218,87823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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99,218,88129,5,12,0:0:0:0:
397,332,88282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,140,88435,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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126,188,89048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,203,89201,6,0,L|440:193,1,71.2500027179719,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,110,89507,1,0,0:0:0:0:

made some small fixes in my diff

zyoi

631 posts

Joined May 2014

zyoi 2016-01-06T15:10:04+00:00

gogo (｡í _ ì｡)

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-01-06T15:10:33+00:00

. finally?

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-06T22:34:59+00:00

:3/

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2016-01-12T19:32:09+00:00

Hello, M4M here!

General

Desable Widescreen Support in every difficulty

Depths' Rosario

00:14:813 (2,3,4,5) - I'm presonally agains this kind of overmapping, the song is really calm and some of those circles are hitting the complete silence, but you decided to even add jumps lol. It's not that big problem because of the high star rating, but it was really awkward while I testeplayed.
00:20:782 - Although there isn't any drums here, the vocals are hitting strongly here and I found it really weird not to have this beat mapped, When you play it you feel like something is definetly missing here and I found myself running with the cursor to try to get the "ghost circle".
00:25:833 (5) - NC Missing, and besides, the distance between this and the previous note is really small, which I found really weird since this is a downbeat which I kinda expected more emphasis there.
00:45:578 (3) - Another missing NC, you should remove the one here 00:46:037 (1) - and swap to the (3).
01:01:497 (5) - 01:02:721 (4) - Missing NC (I'm starting to think that this is proposital, but I couldn't understand the different NCing you applied. Eg.: What's the reason for a NC here: 01:01:956 (1) - 01:03:486 (1) - ? I think you should rework a bit in NC consistency through all the song.

Enjoy's Expert

00:07:007 (2) - I'm not quite sure about this slider, you're missing a sound here 00:07:160 - which is quite important since the piano is making the song build up.
00:12:823 (2) - ^ And besides there's even vocals on the red tick, If I were you I'd map this so the red tick get some oportunity to shine :3

Awesome difficulty, my favorite yet.

Meg's Another

00:01:956 (2,3) - For an Insane this is quite confusing since you used similar spacing from this gap 00:01:497 (1,2) - but the gap is different on the first case which makes it really confusing.
00:11:292 - 01:10:068 - Breaks are extremely awkward for TV sizes songs, and this is completely mappeable, so why not map? :3
00:33:333 (1,2) - Due to small spacing and big gap, this is a bit confusing, everytime I played this part I thought it was common 1/2, but in fact this is 1/1. You could easily stack a circle with the slider to solve this problem.
00:38:231 (1,2) - ^

Insane

00:49:252 (3) - This circle sounds a bit out of place, removing it would make much more sense. It's just weird that you click in such a soft beat with a huge jump like this.
01:19:864 (3) - NC missing there, and besides, the spacing is a bit awkward here. You used such a big jump for 01:19:711 (2) - but for 01:19:864 (3) - which is the strongest downbeat there, you reduced the spacing which makes it looks really weird and inconsistent.

Yuki's Hard

00:50:170 (3) - NC to notice SV change is needed there.

Now this is my favorite difficulty of the mapset o3o

Good beatmap,
Good Luck!

Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2016-01-13T08:49:03+00:00

[Easy]

00:42:517 (4,1) - improvable overlap

[Normal]

x

[Yuki]
01:06:394 (1,3) - you may want to avoid overlapped

[fyy]
01:22:772 (2,3,4,5,1) - フレイするとき、すこし不自然な感じがします。。Flowてきに。。ね

[Meg]
00:28:282 - fill up this rhythm?
01:29:201 (4,5) - well..... you can make more good status about visual.

[Enjoy]
00:27:823 (5,6,7,8) - seem unnatural flow me..

[Depth]
00:38:843 (1) - look like NC spam, according to 00:33:333 (1,2,3) -
00:50:935 (3) - remove clap
00:56:445 (6,1) - imo, unstacking is better flow in here.
01:10:527 (1) - move to x:85 y326 for regular placement with 01:10:068 (1,2,3) -

thx, fyy. my map for m4m

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Silky 2016-01-13T08:55:49+00:00

Lumael wrote:
Hello, M4M here!

General
Desable Widescreen Support in every difficulty k

Insane
00:49:252 (3) - This circle sounds a bit out of place, removing it would make much more sense. It's just weird that you click in such a soft beat with a huge jump like this.　I don't think this jump is huge and to be bad flow if I bring it close
01:19:864 (3) - NC missing there, and besides, the spacing is a bit awkward here. You used such a big jump for 01:19:711 (2) - but for 01:19:864 (3) - which is the strongest downbeat there, you reduced the spacing which makes it looks really weird and inconsistent. added NC, I'll think later about spacing

Good beatmap,
Good Luck!

thanks

Lami wrote:
[Easy]
00:42:517 (4,1) - improvable overlap fixed

[Normal]

x

[fyy]
01:22:772 (2,3,4,5,1) - フレイするとき、すこし不自然な感じがします。。Flowてきに。。ね変えてみました

thx, fyy. my map for m4m ok~ I'll modding back later!

thanks~

edit:updated depths' diff

Last edited by Silky 2016-01-13T10:27:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-13T09:19:35+00:00

Lumael wrote:
Hello, M4M here!

Depths' Rosario
00:14:813 (2,3,4,5) - I'm presonally agains this kind of overmapping, the song is really calm and some of those circles are hitting the complete silence, but you decided to even add jumps lol. It's not that big problem because of the high star rating, but it was really awkward while I testeplayed. I'll keep this for now and ask others for test plays
00:20:782 - Although there isn't any drums here, the vocals are hitting strongly here and I found it really weird not to have this beat mapped, When you play it you feel like something is definetly missing here and I found myself running with the cursor to try to get the "ghost circle". removed the circles here
00:25:833 (5) - NC Missing, and besides, the distance between this and the previous note is really small, which I found really weird since this is a downbeat which I kinda expected more emphasis there. fixed NC, I'll think of a way to fix spacing
00:45:578 (3) - Another missing NC, you should remove the one here 00:46:037 (1) - and swap to the (3). fixed
01:01:497 (5) - 01:02:721 (4) - Missing NC (I'm starting to think that this is proposital, but I couldn't understand the different NCing you applied. Eg.: What's the reason for a NC here: 01:01:956 (1) - 01:03:486 (1) - ? I think you should rework a bit in NC consistency through all the song. fixed NC stuff
thanks for the mod
Good beatmap,
Good Luck!

Axey

1,216 posts

Joined October 2009

Axey 2016-01-13T11:37:50+00:00

M4M

OMG so many diffs here lol

Depths' Rosario

00:02:568 (4) - how about x:416 y:184
00:12:670 (3) - how about http://puu.sh/mu1OK/2192a0a83f.jpg
00:13:282 (1) - there has a strong vocal here I think you can add whistle
00:11:905 (1) - 00:12:670 (3) - add whistle?
00:13:741 (1) - put this slider at (412,80) and C+G is better?
00:15:119 (4,5) - use slider is better
00:15:502 - there hasnt a beat.. so it's bettter to del it
00:16:190 (1) - the slider ends at 00:16:497 - ; and add note at 00:16:650 (2) - or use slider and lengthen it till 00:17:109 -
00:19:558 (2) - if me i will put it at x:480 y:232
00:22:772 (3,4,5,6) - try this? http://puu.sh/mu2hv/45c821f4ac.jpg
00:24:379 (6) - the note puts on 00:24:532 - is better
00:29:889 - remove note..doesnt have a beat here
00:32:568 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/mu2Rk/0b515691dc.jpg try this?
00:40:297 (2) - it's covered by 00:39:915 (1) - is this rankable?
00:46:037 (4,5,1) - bad flow.. i think i will put these at x:160 y:64

Enjoy's Expert

00:17:568 (2,3,4) - i think it's better.. http://puu.sh/mu38y/291361580b.jpg

Meg's Another

00:38:690 - too close between (1,2)- you can add note here
00:51:012 - i'm disagree with 3 hits here.. del the note on 00:51:012 - or use slider
00:51:241 (3,4) - I prefer C+G on the timeline

Insane

00:49:252 (3) - I prefer del this..
00:54:609 (4) - have a little strange.. http://puu.sh/mu3Gb/91da69e76c.jpg maybe it's better?

great map and i havent seen this mapping style for so long LOL

Yuki's Hard

00:09:762 (3,1) - 有种迷之没叠好的感觉
00:33:639 (2) - 这个我会选择用00:33:333 (1) - 的滑条然后C+G

Normal

00:06:394 (6) - how about x:380 y:324

GL~

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-01-14T02:11:00+00:00

aimod about tag

[Easy/Normal]

01:08:997 (1) - spinner too short for newplayer （only 1s）, i suggest remove it same as meg's another

[Yuki's Hard]

00:05:323 (1) - 差不多這種感覺↓↓↓，前奏夠簡單了多扔點圈也沒什麼

SPOILER
00:12:364 (3) - 以前我肯定會吐槽出界，直到我發現標屏其實挺寬的
00:50:476 - kiai 明顯比主歌了啊，SV1.01 plz , and OD 6.1 plz
01:12:823 (2) - 雖然是滑條我覺得安靜的段落還是不要扔跳

[Insane]

00:29:966 (3) - i can't stop here when 1pc lol , i prefer use bad flow or antijump or NC or big DS
horizontal and vertical kill modder ...

[Meg's Another]

00:08:843 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4) - for violin , i prefer use slider ↓↓↓ , about the prelude , look like you wish map for fun but , maybe lost enjoy

SPOILER
00:30:731 (2) - same space more beautiful than same ds ↓↓↓

SPOILER

[Enjoy's Expert]

hate 1/4 slider jump ……中間掉了個串ACC 直接墜毀
SPOILER

[Depths' PP Rosario]

1/4 slider less than enjoy's expert ><
SPOILER

good luck

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-14T08:09:38+00:00

lol PP Rosario, tbh not my intention at all

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-14T08:50:05+00:00

Axey wrote:
M4M

OMG so many diffs here lol

Depths' Rosario

00:02:568 (4) - how about x:416 y:184 sure
00:12:670 (3) - how about http://puu.sh/mu1OK/2192a0a83f.jpg fix
00:13:282 (1) - there has a strong vocal here I think you can add whistle added
00:11:905 (1) - 00:12:670 (3) - add whistle? added
00:13:741 (1) - put this slider at (412,80) and C+G is better? debated some time but sure
00:15:119 (4,5) - use slider is better ok, though I like the current patter ;w;
00:15:502 - there hasnt a beat.. so it's bettter to del it ok
00:16:190 (1) - the slider ends at 00:16:497 - ; and add note at 00:16:650 (2) - or use slider and lengthen it till 00:17:109 - mapped this way intentionally
00:19:558 (2) - if me i will put it at x:480 y:232 this is nice ok~
00:22:772 (3,4,5,6) - try this? http://puu.sh/mu2hv/45c821f4ac.jpg I dont really like this way ;w;
00:24:379 (6) - the note puts on 00:24:532 - is better disagree
00:29:889 - remove note..doesnt have a beat here intentional overmap
00:32:568 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/mu2Rk/0b515691dc.jpg try this? my current rhythm is better for vocal I think
00:40:297 (2) - it's covered by 00:39:915 (1) - is this rankable? yea lol
00:46:037 (4,5,1) - bad flow.. i think i will put these at x:160 y:64 disagree

GL~

Thanks for mod <3

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Silky 2016-01-14T09:58:14+00:00

Depths wrote:
Axey wrote:
M4M

OMG so many diffs here lol

Depths' Rosario

00:02:568 (4) - how about x:416 y:184 sure
00:12:670 (3) - how about http://puu.sh/mu1OK/2192a0a83f.jpg fix
00:13:282 (1) - there has a strong vocal here I think you can add whistle added
00:11:905 (1) - 00:12:670 (3) - add whistle? added
00:13:741 (1) - put this slider at (412,80) and C+G is better? debated some time but sure
00:15:119 (4,5) - use slider is better ok, though I like the current patter ;w;
00:15:502 - there hasnt a beat.. so it's bettter to del it ok
00:16:190 (1) - the slider ends at 00:16:497 - ; and add note at 00:16:650 (2) - or use slider and lengthen it till 00:17:109 - mapped this way intentionally
00:19:558 (2) - if me i will put it at x:480 y:232 this is nice ok~
00:22:772 (3,4,5,6) - try this? http://puu.sh/mu2hv/45c821f4ac.jpg I dont really like this way ;w;
00:24:379 (6) - the note puts on 00:24:532 - is better disagree
00:29:889 - remove note..doesnt have a beat here intentional overmap
00:32:568 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/mu2Rk/0b515691dc.jpg try this? my current rhythm is better for vocal I think
00:40:297 (2) - it's covered by 00:39:915 (1) - is this rankable? yea lol
00:46:037 (4,5,1) - bad flow.. i think i will put these at x:160 y:64 disagree

GL~
Thanks for mod <3

updated

Narcissu wrote:
aimod about tag o ok xd

[Easy/Normal]
01:08:997 (1) - spinner too short for newplayer （only 1s）, i suggest remove it same as meg's another extended a little
[Insane]
00:29:966 (3) - i can't stop here when 1pc lol , i prefer use bad flow or antijump or NC or big DS extended a little
horizontal and vertical kill modder ...
good luck

Axey wrote:
M4M

OMG so many diffs here lol

Insane

00:49:252 (3) - I prefer del this.. keep, I think this sound is important
00:54:609 (4) - have a little strange.. http://puu.sh/mu3Gb/91da69e76c.jpg maybe it's better? I'll think later

great map and i havent seen this mapping style for so long LOL

Normal

00:06:394 (6) - how about x:380 y:324 k

GL~

thanks!

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2016-01-14T13:29:16+00:00

(｡・`ω´･)m4m

[Easy]

01:29:201 (1) -ここはちょっと変な感じがする、鼓の音が終わるんですけど、でもvocalがまだ続くなので、01:29:507でendしたらいいと思います
1/1 sliderを代わりに放置してどうですか

[Normal]

01:29:201 (1) - 同じ　＾、hard以上のdiffはJUMPがあるので、放置しなくてもいいと思います

[Yuki's Hard]

00:14:048 (2,3) - 这里怪怪的，尤其是后面3那里

[Insane]

00:19:328 (3) - ここで放置して、ちょっとわかりません　音がないですから

01:08:843 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/mvjYI/b25871571c.jpg　＞　　http://puu.sh/mvk26/8a55437bed.jpg？

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[Meg's Another]

きれい

[Enjoy's Expert]

00:14:813 (1) - 擦边了？;w;

00:19:252 (1,2,1,2) - 1/4感觉还是向外甩好点，flow也顺，建议都ctrl+g http://puu.sh/mvdPp/1d4a78388e.jpg

00:23:231 (7) - ctrl+g?

00:52:925 (1,2,3) - 不如换成两个1/2slider来的顺手。毕竟00:53:078这里本身不明显，尾巴又有鼓，没打击感

[Depths' Rosario]

00:23:078 (4,5,6) - maybe ctrl +g better for flow

00:25:680 (4,1) - spacing is close,try to ctrl+g 00:25:833 (1) -

01:10:068 (1,2,3,1) - not a Straight line :p

01:12:211 (2) - del sliderbody whistle

and there're have some useless bookmarks, remove them？

may map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/333015
star

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-14T14:19:57+00:00

TT Mouse wrote:
(｡・`ω´･)m4m

[Depths' Rosario]
00:23:078 (4,5,6) - maybe ctrl +g better for flow wont play the way I want it to if I do, no change

00:25:680 (4,1) - spacing is close,try to ctrl+g 00:25:833 (1) - ok~

01:10:068 (1,2,3,1) - not a Straight line :p owo fixed thanks~

01:12:211 (2) - del sliderbody whistle oki

and there're have some useless bookmarks, remove them？I use bookmarks as personal reference I prefer to keep them until a BN mods and then I'll remove them

may map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/333015
star

Thanks for mod

http://puu.sh/mvo7P/86d594d502.rar

Last edited by Depths 2016-01-15T09:46:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-01-14T15:37:29+00:00

nazi mod from my queue

[Easy]
00:05:323 (3) - ctrl+h better imo

[Normal]
00:12:976 - i'd map this to make it follows vocals and make it like little bit more constant with 00:13:741 (1,2,3)
00:49:252 - maybe map this with circle cuz its circle in easy diff

[Yuki's Hard]
00:03:333 (1,1) - imo this shoudnt be stacked
00:29:966 (2) - maybe add one more arrow theres a note at 00:30:195

[Insane]
00:29:966 (3) - imo this should be pointing to either 00:30:272 (1) or 00:30:348 (2)
00:44:048 (4) - rotate 90 degrees flows better imo
00:48:027 (1) - should be mapped same way with 00:48:486 (2,3)

[Meg's Another]
00:04:711 (1,2,3) - stack (1) on 00:04:099 (2) would be better imo
00:47:415 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this shouldnt be stream i cant hear any note on 1/4 ticks and even depths diff didnt map it with stream lol
01:08:843 - should be slider imo maybe make a 2/1 reverse slider
01:19:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no stream pls

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2016-01-14T20:59:12+00:00

i fixed 00:38:231 (1) - , 00:27:976 - and 00:50:935 -

thank you for modding all
http://puu.sh/mvNmK.zip

zyoi

631 posts

Joined May 2014

zyoi 2016-01-15T10:07:08+00:00

Lumael wrote:
Enjoy's Expert
00:07:007 (2) - I'm not quite sure about this slider, you're missing a sound here 00:07:160 - which is quite important since the piano is making the song build up. i think it's ok now
00:12:823 (2) - ^ And besides there's even vocals on the red tick, If I were you I'd map this so the red tick get some oportunity to shine :3 i didn't follow vocals

Awesome difficulty, my favorite yet. thank you ♥

Lami wrote:
[Enjoy]
[*]00:27:823 (5,6,7,8) - seem unnatural flow me.. but how to fix it..

Axey wrote:
Enjoy's Expert
00:17:568 (2,3,4) - i think it's better.. http://puu.sh/mu38y/291361580b.jpg kkkkkkkk

Narcissu wrote:
[Enjoy's Expert]
hate 1/4 slider jump ……中間掉了個串ACC 直接墜毀我也是ww
SPOILER

TT Mouse wrote:
[Enjoy's Expert]
00:14:813 (1) - 擦边了？;w; 才沒有ww

00:19:252 (1,2,1,2) - 1/4感觉还是向外甩好点，flow也顺，建议都ctrl+g http://puu.sh/mvdPp/1d4a78388e.jpg 好xDDDD

00:23:231 (7) - ctrl+g? ok

00:52:925 (1,2,3) - 不如换成两个1/2slider来的顺手。毕竟00:53:078这里本身不明显，尾巴又有鼓，没打击感 kk

thx 4 mod ehehe >///<

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Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Silky 2016-01-15T10:12:58+00:00

TT Mouse wrote:
(｡・`ω´･)m4m

[Easy]
01:29:201 (1) -ここはちょっと変な感じがする、鼓の音が終わるんですけど、でもvocalがまだ続くなので、01:29:507でendしたらいいと思います
1/1 sliderを代わりに放置してどうですか
[Normal]
01:29:201 (1) - 同じ　＾、hard以上のdiffはJUMPがあるので、放置しなくてもいいと思います
自分的にはないかな～keep
[Insane]
00:19:328 (3) - ここで放置して、ちょっとわかりません　音がないですからう～んとりあえずキックスライダーにしました。確かに音無いですけどなんかしらあったほうが良いかな～

01:08:843 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/mvjYI/b25871571c.jpg　＞　　http://puu.sh/mvk26/8a55437bed.jpg？ok
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may map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/333015
star

Deppyforce wrote:
nazi mod from my queue

[Easy]
00:05:323 (3) - ctrl+h better imo changed slidershape

[Normal]
00:12:976 - i'd map this to make it follows vocals and make it like little bit more constant with 00:13:741 (1,2,3) it following only pianos
00:49:252 - maybe map this with circle cuz its circle in easy diff k

[Insane]
00:29:966 (3) - imo this should be pointing to either 00:30:272 (1) or 00:30:348 (2) keep
00:44:048 (4) - rotate 90 degrees flows better imo I want keep this looks
00:48:027 (1) - should be mapped same way with 00:48:486 (2,3) no, I want use different pattern in 3 repetitions

thanks

updated Enju&meg's diff

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-01-16T11:45:08+00:00

General

Meg's diff has no video, depths diff as well
http://puu.sh/mxFEk/a9da641406.png (happens in meg's diff)

Easy

00:06:088 (4) - so nazi but somehow flow feels better with 284,300 for tail position
00:12:517 (1,2) - somehow i cant understand rhythms in here as you dont follow vocal and just follow weak music that i can hear in 25% speed only but in here 00:13:741 (1,2,3,1) - you seem following vocal+piano so i think the rhythms can be better.. hmm example http://puu.sh/mxFSl/cfe07fbc6c.jpg
00:25:833 (1) - finish on head too because that cymbal music
00:38:231 (1,2) - nazi but these slider seem arent symmetrical properly
00:49:252 (2) - soft whistle sounds better rather than drum clap, the music is weak
00:50:170 - fits a lot with drum clap reallyyyyyyyy
00:59:048 - probably u want to give finish as it has weak cymbal
01:05:170 - need finish in here because cymbal
01:13:741 (4) - probably you can end the slider in 01:14:201 - for follow the piano since you are following piano from your previous sliders
neat diff really, also something related to hitsounds apply for all diffs ><

Normal

00:05:782 (5) - i think this rhythm can be better if you dont skip 00:06:088 - really
00:14:201 (2,3) - yep somehow i cant understand what things followed by these sliders
01:10:986 - you can add a note with whistle here to follow the piano. normal's diff recovery time only needs 2 white beats
:D

Hard

00:09:762 (3,1) - stack properly
00:30:195 - i think this drum should be mapped too as it's continuously from 00:29:966 -
00:40:221 (3,1) - somehow you still can stack their tails better
00:51:701 (1) - remove finish in head? no cymbal music and somehow vocal isnt really strong to needed finish
01:14:966 (1) - whistle on head instead of finish.. music still weak
01:08:843 - somehow skip the time that has cymbal and it's a kiai stop feels too weird

Insane

00:03:869 (2) - overmap i guess
00:17:109 (1) - hmm somehow i dont really like that first vocal mapped by repeat here as you can get the clickable object for it. i'd say change this into 1 circle and 1/2 slider
00:28:053 (5) - overmap
00:32:951 (6) - ^
00:44:966 (3) - ctrl+g it and 00:45:272 (4) - ctrl+g this too. i think 00:44:354 (1,2,3,4) - their jump will be more interesting
01:22:313 - adding finish on here sounds nice for me

Meg

00:20:017 (2) - drum clap sounds fit a lot with the music
00:32:874 (2) - 1/4 slider in here sounds weird really as 00:32:951 - has nothing and the vocal in 00:33:027 - isnt something that should be mapped with high spacing
00:37:772 (2) - same with above, also 00:37:925 (3) - no need finish on head, it's totally same with 00:33:027 (3) -
01:03:486 (3) - ctrl+g plays better imo
01:29:201 (4,5) - would look better if there is no overlap imo

Enjoy

00:01:956 (2) - i'd say ctrl+g. somehow a jump and jump again for first notes arent really needed for me even an extra diff

Depths

00:29:813 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/mxI1f/c087f532b6.jpg which means they should be higher and higher instead of high spacing and being smaller
00:39:915 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/mxI76/3cdaa8b275.jpg

good luck

zyoi

631 posts

Joined May 2014

zyoi 2016-01-16T12:23:44+00:00

nelyly kk thx ><
bao bao~

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Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-16T18:30:28+00:00

fixed both, thx nely <3
http://puu.sh/my2ED/e493e4a9b3.rar

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2016-01-18T12:25:56+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Meg
00:20:017 (2) - drum clap sounds fit a lot with the music nice
00:32:874 (2) - 1/4 slider in here sounds weird really as 00:32:951 - has nothing and the vocal in 00:33:027 - isnt something that should be mapped with high spacing ok
00:37:772 (2) - same with above, also 00:37:925 (3) - no need finish on head, it's totally same with 00:33:027 (3) - ok
01:03:486 (3) - ctrl+g plays better imo keep~
01:29:201 (4,5) - would look better if there is no overlap imo this is cooler for me. keep

good luck

nely daisuki
thank you!

http://puu.sh/mAbT3.zip

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Silky 2016-01-18T14:04:06+00:00

Xinely wrote:

General
Meg's diff has no video, depths diff as well k
http://puu.sh/mxFEk/a9da641406.png (happens in meg's diff) lol ok

Easy
00:06:088 (4) - so nazi but somehow flow feels better with 284,300 for tail position ok w
00:12:517 (1,2) - somehow i cant understand rhythms in here as you dont follow vocal and just follow weak music that i can hear in 25% speed only but in here 00:13:741 (1,2,3,1) - you seem following vocal+piano so i think the rhythms can be better.. hmm example http://puu.sh/mxFSl/cfe07fbc6c.jpg
- umm... keep! I want following piano and strings in this song's Easy diff cuz it's really just right density of sound to mapping
00:25:833 (1) - finish on head too because that cymbal music kk
00:38:231 (1,2) - nazi but these slider seem aren't symmetrical properly k
00:49:252 (2) - soft whistle sounds better rather than drum clap, the music is weak eh but I think its tom drum sound
00:50:170 - fits a lot with drum clap reallyyyyyyyy i like this sound w atleast its a drum-finish imo
00:59:048 - probably u want to give finish as it has weak cymbal k
01:05:170 - need finish in here because cymbal k
01:13:741 (4) - probably you can end the slider in 01:14:201 - for follow the piano since you are following piano from your previous sliders k
neat diff really, also something related to hitsounds apply for all diffs ><

Normal
00:05:782 (5) - i think this rhythm can be better if you dont skip 00:06:088 - really k
00:14:201 (2,3) - yep somehow i cant understand what things followed by these sliders same as easy, also insane diff mainly following piano and strings
01:10:986 - you can add a note with whistle here to follow the piano. normal's diff recovery time only needs 2 white beats ok
:D tbh I can't understand why I skipped some snare-drum at kiai parts LOL

Insane
00:03:869 (2) - overmap i guess yeah also 00:03:792 (1) - this lol
00:17:109 (1) - hmm somehow i dont really like that first vocal mapped by repeat here as you can get the clickable object for it. i'd say change this into 1 circle and 1/2 slider I want follow strings first, so I changed to 1/2+circle
00:28:053 (5) - overmap its within an allowance imo
00:32:951 (6) - ^ ^
00:44:966 (3) - ctrl+g it and 00:45:272 (4) - ctrl+g this too. i think 00:44:354 (1,2,3,4) - their jump will be more interesting k, and stacked 4 to 00:43:742 (3) - 's head
01:22:313 - adding finish on here sounds nice for me o i missed it thanks

good luck

changed some hitsound
thanks!

updated GD ~~except Yuki's~~ all

Last edited by Silky 2016-01-21T15:16:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-01-21T13:44:08+00:00

mod replies

@Lumael: not necessary imo, the next slider is nced
@Lami: no fix

Axey wrote:
Yuki's Hard
00:09:762 (3,1) - 有种迷之没叠好的感觉 bug, fixed
00:33:639 (2) - 这个我会选择用00:33:333 (1) - 的滑条然后C+G ok

Narcissu wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
00:05:323 (1) - 差不多這種感覺↓↓↓，前奏夠簡單了多扔點圈也沒什麼 ok
00:12:364 (3) - 以前我肯定會吐槽出界，直到我發現標屏其實挺寬的 lol
00:50:476 - kiai 明顯比主歌了啊，SV1.01 plz , and OD 6.1 plz ? od考虑下
01:12:823 (2) - 雖然是滑條我覺得安靜的段落還是不要扔跳懒得改了

@TT Mouse: 那里跟的vocal

Deppyforce wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
00:03:333 (1,1) - imo this shoudnt be stacked just editor stack bug, dont mind
00:29:966 (2) - maybe add one more arrow theres a note at 00:30:195 keep it a hard diff

Xinely wrote:

Hard
00:09:762 (3,1) - stack properly fixed
00:30:195 - i think this drum should be mapped too as it's continuously from 00:29:966 - yes you are right but i just wanted to make it just a hard diff lol, so i decide to ignore that 1/4
00:40:221 (3,1) - somehow you still can stack their tails better yep just editor stack bug
00:51:701 (1) - remove finish in head? no cymbal music and somehow vocal isnt really strong to needed finish whi instead
01:14:966 (1) - whistle on head instead of finish.. music still weak nope imo it should be the finish
01:08:843 - somehow skip the time that has cymbal and it's a kiai stop feels too weird hmm lazy to fix the rhythm so i change my diffs kiai time

diff

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:courage
Artist:Tomatsu Haruka
ArtistUnicode:戸松遥
Creator:fuyuyu-
Version:Yuki's Hard
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags:sword art online anime opening minakami yuki depths image-- meg enjoy enju -_e_n_j_u_-
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Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-01-24T04:04:34+00:00

Hello~
Some small sugestion,

[General]

Meg's another missing video http://puu.sh/mHmv6/dd3ece381d.png , I thought you already fix that from xinely's mod lol
I'm not familiar with anime, can I have metadata source?

[Easy]

00:12:517 (1,2) - I think it'll better if you following the vocal there, so maybe try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/mHgu8/22404b9617.jpg ? also it can cover both vocal and piano better than the current one
00:44:966 - Better use whistle imo, the clap not really fit to emphsized the vocal there
00:47:109 - Maybe use clap there, then use whistle here 00:47:415 - ? You are kinda misplaced the hitsound there imo
01:06:701 - Clap there, then whistle here 01:07:007 - ? Same reason as above

[Normal]

00:19:252 (2,3) - The rhythm kinda weird imo, try this rhythm http://puu.sh/mHhm3/d6cf0cb162.jpg instead? they can cover the long vocal and guitar sound better
00:27:670 (4,5) - Maybe make them a bit curve http://puu.sh/mHhLw/7e8aaf0428.jpg ? so it'll flow more natural
00:44:201 (4) - How about add whistle there? same as you did on 00:43:588 (2) - so the both hitsound can be more consistent on that same rhythm

[Yuki's Hard]

00:21:088 - Imo the clap sound kinda too loud there, maybe change into whistle instead?
00:39:150 - Missing clap? I guess it supposed to be same as 00:33:945 (3) -
00:46:497 (2) - Isn't you misplaced that whistle sound? imo kinda out of placed since you rarely put any whistle on part before kiai
01:29:507 - Why skipping this last vocal? kinda odd imo to be skipped

[Insane]

00:47:109 (2,3,4,5) - Weird hitsound imo, I think this 00:47:109 - better to be clap instead a whistle, also 00:47:262 - and 00:47:338 - Maybe delete the clap on those two? the consecutive clap sound here 00:47:262 (3,4,5) - kinda too loud not really fit the music itself imo
01:29:507 - Why skipping this last vocal? kinda odd imo to be skipped

[Meg's Another]

00:04:711 (1,2,3) - Imo (1) is better to be stacked on 00:04:099 (2) - to have better readability on its anti jump http://puu.sh/mHmgs/5f1c173d31.jpg, instead stacked it on 00:04:252 (3) - not really intuitive to play imo
01:06:701 - Better to be a clap instead a whistle, also this 01:07:007 - better to be a whistle, so the hitsound more consistent with 01:05:170 (1,2,3) -
01:29:430 (5) - The placement kinda odd imo, it feels we have to turn sharp after 01:29:201 (4) - . Why not try something like this http://puu.sh/mHm4x/abcd243fc5.jpg ?

[Enjoy's Expert]

00:01:497 - Make the volume same on those red-green lines? to prevent any error
01:29:507 - Why skipping this last vocal? kinda odd imo to be skipped

[Depths' Rosario]

00:30:884 - Maybe add one green line there and set to 60% volume? 40% volume doesn't make sense there, also the volume will more consistent with 00:35:782 - Since the music same
00:58:129 (3) - Make that a curve instead http://puu.sh/mHlb4/7590f5787d.jpg ? so it'll flow less weird with previous slider

[]
Take it easy, good luck

zyoi

631 posts

Joined May 2014

zyoi 2016-01-24T09:24:40+00:00

01:29:507 - i keep this cuz i don't want to follow vocal
firsit fixed
thx >w<

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Last edited by zyoi 2016-01-24T14:20:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Silky

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Topic Starter

Silky 2016-01-24T14:08:05+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hello~
Some small sugestion,

[General]
Meg's another missing video http://puu.sh/mHmv6/dd3ece381d.png , I thought you already fix that from xinely's mod lol
-ummm.... it's have video in my pc...
I'm not familiar with anime, can I have metadata source?
in official HP
http://www.swordart-online.net/
[Easy]
00:12:517 (1,2) - I think it'll better if you following the vocal there, so maybe try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/mHgu8/22404b9617.jpg ? also it can cover both vocal and piano better than the current one
-fixed
00:44:966 - Better use whistle imo, the clap not really fit to emphsized the vocal there
-actually there have snare-drum sounds...
00:47:109 - Maybe use clap there, then use whistle here 00:47:415 - ? You are kinda misplaced the hitsound there imo
-almost same reason, bass-drum here.
01:06:701 - Clap there, then whistle here 01:07:007 - ? Same reason as above
-^
[Normal]
00:19:252 (2,3) - The rhythm kinda weird imo, try this rhythm http://puu.sh/mHhm3/d6cf0cb162.jpg instead? they can cover the long vocal and guitar sound better
-umm... I used 1/2 in Easy diff, so I should use 1/2 at there..
00:27:670 (4,5) - Maybe make them a bit curve http://puu.sh/mHhLw/7e8aaf0428.jpg ? so it'll flow more natural
-ok
00:44:201 (4) - How about add whistle there? same as you did on 00:43:588 (2) - so the both hitsound can be more consistent on that same rhythm
-vocal rhythm is changing at there, but drum rhythm is not changing at there. keep

changed some weird rhythm.
[Insane]
00:47:109 (2,3,4,5) - Weird hitsound imo, I think this 00:47:109 - better to be clap instead a whistle, also 00:47:262 - and 00:47:338 - Maybe delete the clap on those two? the consecutive clap sound here 00:47:262 (3,4,5) - kinda too loud not really fit the music itself imo
-same as E/N, I want follow real drum.
01:29:507 - Why skipping this last vocal? kinda odd imo to be skipped
-~~fixed~~
re-changed, because tbh that's really weird to me(that rhythm is liked by some and hated by others), and Yuki keeped that.
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Take it easy, good luck

thanks!

Edit:enju yuki imagesan updated

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