• Clap最好加在弱拍上

• 00:00:000:+1 Circle
  00:26:000(3):+Finish
  00:49:112(2):^

• HP+1
  00:26:000(4):+Finish
  00:37:556(3):^
  00:49:112(2):^
  00:56:695(5):延长到白线
  01:22:876(1):重复+1

• 00:14:444(9):Finish
  00:37:556(1):^
  01:27:210(1,2,3,4,5):使音量逐渐变大
  01:27:571(5):Finish

Leorda wrote:

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Ohai

[General]
No Tags? - IMO, no relevant tags are needed. Unless you want to put Kidou Senshi or OP2.

[Easy]
00:06:500 (1) - Remove new combo? - As stated in Garven's mod post, no changes made.
00:31:778 (4) - Move 1 grid up? - Moved.
00:43:334 (4) - New combo, it's too long for easy diff - Fixed.
01:00:668 (2) - Finish at start? - Adjusted. Removed finish on combo 3.

[Normal]
00:35:750 (1) - Make symetric? - Slight adjustment, not perfectly symetric though.
00:36:834 (2) - ^ - Same as above.
00:51:640 (1) - Move 1 grid down? - Adjusted without grid snap.
01:00:668 (3) - Finish? - Same as Easy. Added.
01:21:613 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid left? - Ops. Adjusted.

[Hard]
00:40:445 (2) - Is not stack with 1 at the end - Adjusted.
00:56:695 (5) - Extend this slider to white tick - Ops. Fixed.
01:00:126 (1) - Finish at end? - After some consideration, not adding.
01:19:085 (4) - New combo? - Done.

[Insane]
01:27:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this useless, IMO - No changes made >.<.

Good song
STAR

impossiblexu wrote:

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Hi

我的建议：

[General]

• Clap最好加在弱拍上

[Normal]

• 00:00:000:+1 Circle - Done.
  00:26:000(3):+Finish - Done.
  00:49:112(2):^ - Done.

[Hardl]

• HP+1
  00:26:000(4):+Finish - Done.
  00:37:556(3):^ - Done.
  00:49:112(2):^ - Done.
  00:56:695(5):延长到白线 - Also mentioned in Leorda's mod post. Done~
  01:22:876(1):重复+1 - Done.

[Insanel]

• 00:14:444(9):Finish - Done.
  00:37:556(1):^ - Done.
  01:27:210(1,2,3,4,5):使音量逐渐变大 - 调成volume 2.
  01:27:571(5):Finish - Done.

Good map!

~STAR~

Vikon wrote:

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[General]
1) 總覺得default clap不適合這隻歌.. 或試試這一種聲音?(見附件,純建議 - 感激不尽~Clap sound used~
2) 有使用soft-hitfinish的部份都減低音量? 個人覺得太吵了 - 调成volume 8.

[Easy]
01:07:168 (1) 被01:05:001 (5)蓋著，不太好看。 - 经过考虑，没调。
01:23:057 (1) finish轉成whistle? (這種finish太吵了，不適合使用得太頻密。) - Done.

[Normal]
01:23:418 (4) 把slider尾的finish去掉? - Done.

[Hard]
這個diff裏有一些，不斷reverse的slider，因為reverse太多，所以也不知道應該何時鬆手去按下一個 (e.g. 00:36:834 (3) , - 跟着drum才放的repeating slider.
00:00:000 (1,2,3,4) 剛打完3個這麼快的1/4notes,突然變0.5x BPM的slider，感覺有點違和 - Removed combo 2.
01:01:029 加個note? - Done.

[Insane] - 对不起，这里的建议都没接受，先考虑考虑下。。。
00:17:694 (6) 被00:16:972 (3,4) 爆出來的"300"蓋著了，不好看
00:45:139 (6,7) 兩個note之間被00:44:598 (5) 蓋著了，我第一次玩的時候以為(6)是Slider
00:56:695 (5) 這個slider被00:56:515 (4) 蓋著了，有種太擠的感覺。
01:23:328 (6,1,2,3,4) 有點難閱讀

Rukarioman wrote:

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Easy:
00:28:889 (3) - move one grid right? - Big ops. Fixed. Altered slider slightly.

Normal:
Nothing.

Hard:
00:01:805 (4) - move one grid left? - Another ops. Fixed.
00:05:777 (2) - 2 grid down one right? - ? No changes here.

Insane:
01:10:960 (4) - one grid up and left? - Hmm. Adjusted.

Really good map. All of these are suggestions. Good luck Star~

• - 關掉countdown?
  - kiai部份的whistle應該與無kiai的clap切換才對...? 現在非高潮部份的音效聽起來太重..反之則太輕orz

• 00:06:500 (5) - 取消new combo
  00:49:112 (1) - slider開頭放finish

• 00:33:945 (7) - 換成這樣?
  00:36:834 (2) - slider開頭clap
  01:02:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 換換擺法?
  
  
  Hard
  [list:fd3c3]

• - 沒什麼問題..不過OA8我覺得稍快了些 (嘛反正OA7我也打不來(淚目

Pokie wrote:

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General

• - 關掉countdown? - Ops. Done.
  - kiai部份的whistle應該與無kiai的clap切換才對...? 現在非高潮部份的音效聽起來太重..反之則太輕orz - orz.先放着，没调。

Easy

• 00:06:500 (5) - 取消new combo - 三角形颜色，没调。
  00:49:112 (1) - slider開頭放finish - 哦。

Normal

• 00:33:945 (7) - 換成這樣? - 没调，slider是跟着歌"yuki"。
  00:36:834 (2) - slider開頭clap - 把00:35:750 (1)的clap调整成 clap - silent - clap.
  01:02:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 換換擺法？ - 改成六角形。
  
  
  Hard
  [list:7cd4d]

00:37:737 (4,5) - 疊在一起? - 经过考虑没调。 >.<
01:22:876 (1) - 在這裡開始01:23:057, 完結點不變 - 没调。


Insane

• - 沒什麼問題..不過OA8我覺得稍快了些 (嘛反正OA7我也打不來(淚目 - >.<

Starrr...?
誒...Star選項呢..!??!?!

Mianki wrote:

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Easy:
Fine~

Normal:

HP Drain rate -1? - Done.
00:34:306 (7) Clap to the sliders end - Done.

Hard:

00:23:472 (7) Suggestion: Move this slider so that the sliders end is under the previous circle (picture:)[attachment=0:7cd4d]screenshot003.jpg[/attachment:7cd4d] - I'll consider about this arrangement.
00:44:417 (3) This is not right under note 1 - Ops. Adjusted.

Insane:

01:27:210 (1.2.3.4.5) These were kinda shocking but they're fine - Surprise...XD Might remove if there's more negative feedback on these though.

Very nicely mapped
Star~

1. KIAI部分怎么不用C1Clap了 这里鼓点很明显 一边听一边放效果就很不错了
2. 01:23:779 (1) - 不长不短的... 可以在01:29:557结束

1. 00:00:722 (1,2,1) - bpmx0.5的情况下 spacing snap也会是x1的一半 所以这里x2.0放吧 否则太难看了
2. 其余和Easy提到的一样

1. 00:03:250 (3,4) - 左移一格
2. 其余同Easy

1. 00:12:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个...放五角的方法的话 在屏幕中心（x,y轴交叉处）周围放一个note 离中心距离为顶点距离图形中心距离 然后复制这个note ctrl+shift+r 然后转72（144）度 然后重复这个步骤直到五角星出现
2. 然后是KIAI部分的hitsound...
3. 最后spinner之后的note :S 感觉没必要啊

Sakura301 wrote:

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[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Insane]
00:09:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this and similar ones, you could try spacing them more, look too cramped.
01:27:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ehhh too close to the spinner, and wth are they following? o.o

[Hard]
00:06:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - I still think theese stars can be spaced out more... werent there some of theese on [Insane]?

[Normal]
The repetitive sliders like: 00:41:167 (4) and 00:44:056 (1) are quite of confusing for a Normal, considering they are short and have more repetitions.

[Easy]
Fine

Ok, looks good enough to have a star

dkun wrote:

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Oh man, Gundam. :3

Easy
Nothing to report here.
Normal
^
Hard
As a general observation, you tend to switch between spacing out the finishing note of a combo, and keeping it stacked on the last note before finish. This might be a little confusing to some.
00:27:084 (1-4) - You can make the two sliders here symmetrical by placing 3 right at the end of 2, and flipping 4 horizontally from 2.
Insane
00:50:917 (5,6,7) - Space these out from (2,3,4)?
This is a pretty good insane.

Take a ★ ~

Muya wrote:

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Hard
00:56:154 (2.3) 1grid left
01:08:251 (4) 1grid right
01:21:974 (1.2) 1grid down

Insane
01:05:723 - (1.9) 1grid up or (5) 1grid up

Colin Hou wrote:

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[Easy]:

1. KIAI部分怎么不用C1Clap了 这里鼓点很明显 一边听一边放效果就很不错了
2. 01:23:779 (1) - 不长不短的... 可以在01:29:557结束

[Normal]:

1. 00:00:722 (1,2,1) - bpmx0.5的情况下 spacing snap也会是x1的一半 所以这里x2.0放吧 否则太难看了
2. 其余和Easy提到的一样

[Hard]:

1. 00:03:250 (3,4) - 左移一格
2. 其余同Easy

[Insane]:

1. 00:12:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个...放五角的方法的话 在屏幕中心（x,y轴交叉处）周围放一个note 离中心距离为顶点距离图形中心距离 然后复制这个note ctrl+shift+r 然后转72（144）度 然后重复这个步骤直到五角星出现
2. 然后是KIAI部分的hitsound...
3. 最后spinner之后的note :S 感觉没必要啊

star~

vivere wrote:

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Hi~

[General]:
BMP: 166,000 - Keeping as reference.

[Easy]:
00:50:917(2)-slider separate them a bit of number 3 (because they are close together). - Done~
this difficulty can not find more errors
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Normal:
Good.
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[Hard]:
00:26:361-(5)-that here you start a new combo, ends here:00:29:611. - Ok.
I like the difficulty - Glad you've enjoyed it, thanks.
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[Insane]:
00:50:917-New Combo - Done. Also new combo on 00:51:640 to match colour pattern later.

01:19:084-New Combo -
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good map

Staar :3

Derekku wrote:

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[General]
*Offset surprisingly works well on 0ms.
*I always recommend placing the preview point slightly before where you want it to account for the song selection fade-in. The red tick before the chorus (48931ms) should sound better. - Fixed.
*Perhaps end kiai at the end of the last spinner instead of halfway through? - Ops. Fixed.
*I really suggest just starting the map at 00:02:889. The intro feels a bit off, and even after testing multiple times it just feels awkward to play. If you decide to take this suggestion, then you can reduce the audio lead-in to just 0-1 seconds.
*Also, I'd rather not see inherited/uninherited sections on top of each other (@0ms), so if you don't change the intro, then make the inherited section 1/2 a beat after the uninherited one or something of the sort.

[Easy]
00:06:500 (1) - Why is this a new combo? o-o - Fixed.

[Normal]
Looks fine.

[Hard]
Looks nice.

[Insane]
01:06:446 (9) - Please have this be the new combo instead of 01:06:807 (1). This way, the stream overlap will be a bit easier to read. - Done.
01:12:223 (9) - Same idea as above. - Done.
01:18:001 (1) - :I You did it here and there wasn't even an overlap =x
01:22:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I highly suggest against doing this. The fast-pace of the map makes this too hard to see until it's the last second and you've already broken combo. x: - Switched to 3 repeating short sliders + 1 last beat.

Pretty nice for one of your first maps! You lost your bubble when you made changes, so you can ask for a rebubble after checking my post. :p