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Tachibana Miya - Miya to Tengoku to Jigoku

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Topic Starter
- Reimu

DeppyDf wrote:

01:02:513 - How About New Red Timing Section Here Sounds?
For what reason?

DeppyDf wrote:

Hard :D
  1. 00:22:513 (1,2) - Make Them Split A Bit.
  2. 00:23:129 (1,2) - Same Thing.
  3. 00:56:360 (1,2,3,4) - Same Thing. -w-
  4. 01:10:513 (1,2,1,2) - Split Them A Bit!
  5. 01:37:590 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe Move These Notes Slightly.
Fixed

DeppyDf wrote:

01:00:975 (4) - Split Into Two Sliders. The First One Should End At 01:01:667 - And The Second One Start After That Tick And End At 01:02:360 -
No reason to change this, I prefer it as is, it's a nice little resting point


DeppyDf wrote:

Hp Drain = 7 Please?
00:04:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The Stream's Curved Too Much I Think.
Fixed

DeppyDf wrote:

00:15:129 - From Here 'til 00:22:206 - Change Map Pattern A Little Bit, Sir.
There is no reason to change this? The ascending and descending zig zag pattern fits the music quite nicely


DeppyDf wrote:

01:00:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make It Curve A Bit. Turn It Into Stream Idk What Word Did People Using.
01:01:667 (1,2,3,4,5) - Put All Of These At The Same Place Of 01:01:590 (9) - If You Moved The Stream.
This IS a stream. Not all streams need to be moving, stacked streams are fun too.

DeppyDf wrote:

01:30:821 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Uh. I Think You Should Change The Pattern A Bit. For Example, Putting 2-4 Normal Notes After 2-4 Sliders Or Change The Slider's Direction.
01:30:821 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same In Hard.
Not entirely true, however if more people see issues with it then I will change it, it fits the music quite well IMO
Deppyforce
Ok then.. I sorry but Idk How To Explain about the red timing section. But I think It's Fine Though To Not Add.
About the Map Pattern I'll consider This is your Mapping Style then.
I glad that my mod can help you out.. At least a bit xD
Kawashiro
What a Funny song! Thanks for take my m4m req!

[DarkKanaki's Easy]
  1. 00:05:283 Idk about SV changing is accept in easy but i think its not good
  2. 00:03:744 (4,5) - This rhythm is good at easy http://puu.sh/gTSvI/7da69d8f94.jpg
  3. 01:31:129 (1) - Fix like it http://puu.sh/gTT9W/ca0cb17e5d.jpg
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:667 (2,3,4) - Change Distance 1.2
  2. 00:54:975 Add note
  3. 01:00:975 (4) - Idk why it is 1/4 slider. Change 1/2 slider plz
  4. 01:06:206 (5) - ^
  5. 01:16:206 (1) - del spinner and remake here
  6. 01:26:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - change all sliders repeat like http://puu.sh/gTTS2/2189d54ce9.jpg
[Insanity]
  1. 00:09:744 How about add note?
  2. 00:29:744 ^
  3. 00:32:821 ^
  4. 00:28:975 (1) - Move to 00:29:283 and delete repeat
  5. 00:28:052 (5,6,7) - Stream start 5 and finish 00:29:206
  6. 00:33:898 (1) - Move to 00:34:206 and delete repeat
  7. 00:33:898 Add 1/4 slider like 8,9
  8. 00:42:052 Add note
  9. 00:54:975 ^
  10. 01:21:744 ^
  11. 01:24:206 ^
What a good map! Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
- Reimu

UnLock- wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:667 (2,3,4) - Change Distance 1.2
  2. 00:54:975 Add note
Fixed

UnLock- wrote:

01:00:975 (4) - Idk why it is 1/4 slider. Change 1/2 slider plz01:06:206 (5) - ^
Both 1/2 and 1/4 sliders work here

UnLock- wrote:

01:16:206 (1) - del spinner and remake here
Reasoning?

UnLock- wrote:

01:26:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - change all sliders repeat like http://puu.sh/gTTS2/2189d54ce9.jpg
Have you done that yourself and listened to it? It doesn't match the music at all

UnLock- wrote:

[Insanity]
  1. 00:09:744 How about add note?
Added

Thanks for mod.
DarkKanaki

DeppyDf wrote:

01:16:667 (1) - Don't Start A New Combo.
Done.

UnLock- wrote:

00:05:283 Idk about SV changing is accept in easy but i think its not good
00:03:744 (4,5) - This rhythm is good at easy http://puu.sh/gTSvI/7da69d8f94.jpg
01:31:129 (1) - Fix like it http://puu.sh/gTT9W/ca0cb17e5d.jpg
Done.

Here you go Ryuu.
:3
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Miya to Tengoku to Jigoku
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Kuki
From #Modreqs

Insanity
  1. 01:06:206 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not sure if this fits
  2. 01:06:898 (1) - This too, consider a different pattern or maybe a remap here?
Nish shi shi shiii
  1. 00:06:360 - I think you should put a note here, the gap sounds off imo.
  2. 00:08:052 (2) - You could put a triple here if you wanted.
  3. 00:08:360 (3) - Curve this slider perhaps?
  4. 01:20:975 (1) - ^
  5. 01:23:436 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
- Reimu

Kuki wrote:

Insanity
01:06:898 (1) - This too, consider a different pattern or maybe a remap here?
Done

Kuki wrote:

Nish shi shi shiii
00:08:052 (2) - You could put a triple here if you wanted.
01:20:975 (1) - ^
01:23:436 (1) - ^
Done

Kuki wrote:

Insanity
01:06:206 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not sure if this fits
Nish shi shi shiii
00:06:360 - I think you should put a note here, the gap sounds off imo.
I think these both sound fine? Especially the issue you see with the nish shi shi shiii diff

Thanks for mod >.<
DeletedUser_4041880
Add "NicoNicoDouga" as the source
Synpoo
hey, from #modreqs

[Nish shi shi shiii]
00:48:975 (3) - NC
01:09:898 (5,6) - increase spacing
01:37:590 (6) - NC
01:38:821 (8) - NC

[Insanity]
00:30:360 - add a note?
00:47:590 - ^
00:50:206 (4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing
01:02:283 (5,1) - might as well blanket this
01:04:360 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look good
01:08:052 (1,2) - ^
01:12:052 (1) - remove NC
01:12:360 (2) - NC
01:37:590 (2,3,4,5) - NC on all of these (?)
Topic Starter
- Reimu

Synpoo wrote:

hey, from #modreqs

[Nish shi shi shiii]
00:48:975 (3) - NC
01:09:898 (5,6) - increase spacing
01:37:590 (6) - NC
01:38:821 (8) - NC
Done

Synpoo wrote:

[Insanity]
00:30:360 - add a note?
00:47:590 - ^
Done

Synpoo wrote:

00:50:206 (4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing
I wouldn't call 0.01x difference "inconsistent" but, fixed.

Synpoo wrote:

01:02:283 (5,1) - might as well blanket this
01:04:360 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look good
01:08:052 (1,2) - ^
01:12:052 (1) - remove NC
01:12:360 (2) - NC
01:37:590 (2,3,4,5) - NC on all of these (?)
Done and Done

Thanks for the mod :3
Mega_AL
easy
-great beginner map! I suck at mapping such easy maps, congrats for this!

normal
- 00:32:975 - this part is not so well for a slider, what about 7 normal circles in a big curve?
- 01:06:206 - same
- end is mapped very funny, nice! ;)

hard
- 00:30:513 (4,5) - this sound for me like it should be 1, a bit longer slider, like the slider in the next combo
- 00:40:975 (1) - sounds...wrong...maybe just 3 circles?
- 00:56:360 (1,2,3,4) - I would say, fill the gaps between the sliders with a note, matches better to this song part
- 01:06:206 (5) - made it longer to fill the tact, to 01:07:129, also make a clapsound at the last note
- 01:07:052 - spinner sounds completely wrong, i tried a slider from 01:07:590 to 01:07:898
- 01:20:052 (1) - please put this note ON the (5) from combo before OR make a bigger distance, it is a bit irritating...
- end as well as in every map, I like it!

insanity
- 00:42:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this sounds like a spinner, not like a row of notes
- 01:06:206 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - fill the stream to the slider, this is very difficult
amazing map!

Nish shi shi shiii
complex, but you always know what to do, just amazing

♥♥♥ this song is so noltalgic, i hope it will be ranked soon! love it ♥♥♥
ryuu
no changes for me
DarkKanaki

Mega_AL wrote:

easy
-great beginner map! I suck at mapping such easy maps, congrats for this!
THANKS! :O
Topic Starter
- Reimu

Mega_AL wrote:

- 01:07:052 - spinner sounds completely wrong, i tried a slider from 01:07:590 to 01:07:898
Slider and spinner sound the same here, makes no difference.

Mega_AL wrote:

- 01:20:052 (1) - please put this note ON the (5) from combo before OR make a bigger distance, it is a bit irritating...
Fixed

Mega_AL wrote:

insanity
- 00:42:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this sounds like a spinner, not like a row of notes
This matches the song fine, a spinner would be weird and would not be taking advantage of the emphasized part of the song here

Mega_AL wrote:

- 01:06:206 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - fill the stream to the slider, this is very difficult
For you, maybe, however for people who should/can be playing difficulties of this star rating it isn't all that difficult.



Thanks for mod
Topic Starter
- Reimu

[ Ryuu ] wrote:

Mega_AL wrote:

- 01:07:052 - spinner sounds completely wrong, i tried a slider from 01:07:590 to 01:07:898
Slider and spinner sound the same here, makes no difference.

Mega_AL wrote:

- 01:20:052 (1) - please put this note ON the (5) from combo before OR make a bigger distance, it is a bit irritating...
Fixed

Mega_AL wrote:

insanity
- 00:42:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this sounds like a spinner, not like a row of notes
This matches the song fine, a spinner would be weird and would not be taking advantage of the emphasized part of the song here

Mega_AL wrote:

- 01:06:206 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - fill the stream to the slider, this is very difficult
For you, maybe, however for people who should/can be playing difficulties of this star rating it isn't all that difficult.



Thanks for mod


whoops misclicked :L
Kyuuten
Such a great map! I like it~
Cloudless
Allo

General
The first Kiai time should start at 00:29:283
Easy
A bit hard for an easy.
00:07:744 (1,2) - This should be a slider
00:16:052 (2) - Dont stack >< hard to read for beginners
00:18:513 (2) - ^
00:20:975 (2) - ^
00:23:436 (2) - ^
00:24:667 (5,6) - These long sliders don't fit the rhythm well, it should be a slider that is a beat long and going back and forth, you may have to change the sliders before those into circles.
00:44:052 (4,5,6) - Copy and paste (4) and replace it with (6)
00:52:667 (3,4,5) - I dont like the slider, if anything start the slider where (3) and another slider that starts at the end of (4)
01:10:206 (2) - Like before; hard to read
01:12:360 (1) - Hmm It should be on the other side of the thick white line because of that reverse arrow; it flows better
01:23:129 (4) - Mhm
01:25:898 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to read; make (1) the slider instead of (2) and then you can make 01:28:360 (1,2) - and turn those into circles, it shows variety and slow progression of difficulty but still easy for a beginner
[]

Normal
00:18:821 (3,4,5) - Move (5) under (3), makes it look nicer
Good normal :)
[]

Hard
00:15:129 (1,2) - Copy and paste (1) and replace the (2), The angle is slightly off
00:16:975 (5,6,7) - Not sure if the linear pattern was intentional.
00:23:129 (1) - Remove NC, conflicts with previous ones with the same rhythm
00:32:975 (3) - That scared me lol, make the slider longer so it hits only on the white and red ticks
00:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - Copy and paste from the previous pattern
00:49:898 (3) - space that out.nvm
01:07:129 (1) - out of place spinner
[]


Insanity
Why is it named Insanity, instead of just Insane? lol
00:15:129 (1,2,3,4) - Looks ugly. Copy and paste; then Ctrl + >
00:16:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - angles between each notes is different. make them the same
00:18:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ but the last circle (7) is 1.60x instead of 1.40x, It fits the song, so make the previous one like this too
00:21:744 (1,2,3,4) - (4) should stay consistant with the distance snap IF you are going to use distance snap; Or you can make father away because it fits the song, like I said before
00:26:821 (1,2,3,4,5) - Copy and paste, dont keep on adding differently angled sliders
00:49:898 (3) - idk, spacing, but It can work
00:53:283 (1) - NC
01:05:590 (1,2,3,4) - slightly uneven spacing but it also doesnt look appealing
01:25:898 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - add a streamy part, it is INSANITY! I recommend adding the stream part at the end
01:39:436 (1) - Why is this not distanced like the others?
[]

NISHI SHI SHI SHII~
00:08:975 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe rotate the whole square jump
00:49:898 (4) - This isnt straight
00:45:744 (3) - That circle kind of ruined the flow of the jumps that comes after it, but it works
00:50:513 (1,2,3,4) - There is a tool where you can make polygons; Check under "Compose"and go under "Create Polygon Circle" and in there, you can put some data in, like a square, and it would give you an evenly spaced square, no more hassle!
00:53:898 (1,2,3) - Use your Tools! Copy and paste 2x (1) The Rotation tool (Ctrl + Shift + R; and be sure you selected the object) and +/- 120 degrees
01:30:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Create some patterns with these, dont just randomly put sliders everywhere, distance snap isnt going to save you!
01:39:513 (1) - Clap

Copy and Paste is your friend!!

This is a really hard diff, mainly because it has spikes of difficulty, rather than just a consistent challenge, If you really want to have those square jumps, take into consideration to increase the difficulty of other parts of the song, because the rest is easy as heck compared to those repeating square jumps.

[]

Hopefully this helps! GL :)
Topic Starter
- Reimu

Kawaii Muffin wrote:

Allo

General
The first Kiai time should start at 00:29:283
Easy
A bit hard for an easy.
00:07:744 (1,2) - This should be a slider
00:16:052 (2) - Dont stack >< hard to read for beginners
00:18:513 (2) - ^
00:20:975 (2) - ^
00:23:436 (2) - ^
00:24:667 (5,6) - These long sliders don't fit the rhythm well, it should be a slider that is a beat long and going back and forth, you may have to change the sliders before those into circles.
00:44:052 (4,5,6) - Copy and paste (4) and replace it with (6)
00:52:667 (3,4,5) - I dont like the slider, if anything start the slider where (3) and another slider that starts at the end of (4)
01:10:206 (2) - Like before; hard to read
01:12:360 (1) - Hmm It should be on the other side of the thick white line because of that reverse arrow; it flows better
01:23:129 (4) - Mhm
01:25:898 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to read; make (1) the slider instead of (2) and then you can make 01:28:360 (1,2) - and turn those into circles, it shows variety and slow progression of difficulty but still easy for a beginner
[]

Normal
00:18:821 (3,4,5) - Move (5) under (3), makes it look nicer
Good normal :)
[]

Hard
00:15:129 (1,2) - Copy and paste (1) and replace the (2), The angle is slightly off
00:16:975 (5,6,7) - Not sure if the linear pattern was intentional.
00:23:129 (1) - Remove NC, conflicts with previous ones with the same rhythm
00:32:975 (3) - That scared me lol, make the slider longer so it hits only on the white and red ticks
00:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - Copy and paste from the previous pattern
00:49:898 (3) - space that out.nvm
01:07:129 (1) - out of place spinner
[]


Insanity
Why is it named Insanity, instead of just Insane? lol
00:15:129 (1,2,3,4) - Looks ugly. Copy and paste; then Ctrl + >
00:16:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - angles between each notes is different. make them the same
00:18:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ but the last circle (7) is 1.60x instead of 1.40x, It fits the song, so make the previous one like this too
00:21:744 (1,2,3,4) - (4) should stay consistant with the distance snap IF you are going to use distance snap; Or you can make father away because it fits the song, like I said before
00:26:821 (1,2,3,4,5) - Copy and paste, dont keep on adding differently angled sliders
00:49:898 (3) - idk, spacing, but It can work
00:53:283 (1) - NC
01:05:590 (1,2,3,4) - slightly uneven spacing but it also doesnt look appealing
01:25:898 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - add a streamy part, it is INSANITY! I recommend adding the stream part at the end
01:39:436 (1) - Why is this not distanced like the others?
[]

NISHI SHI SHI SHII~
00:08:975 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe rotate the whole square jump
00:49:898 (4) - This isnt straight
00:45:744 (3) - That circle kind of ruined the flow of the jumps that comes after it, but it works
00:50:513 (1,2,3,4) - There is a tool where you can make polygons; Check under "Compose"and go under "Create Polygon Circle" and in there, you can put some data in, like a square, and it would give you an evenly spaced square, no more hassle!
00:53:898 (1,2,3) - Use your Tools! Copy and paste 2x (1) The Rotation tool (Ctrl + Shift + R; and be sure you selected the object) and +/- 120 degrees
01:30:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Create some patterns with these, dont just randomly put sliders everywhere, distance snap isnt going to save you!
01:39:513 (1) - Clap

Copy and Paste is your friend!!

This is a really hard diff, mainly because it has spikes of difficulty, rather than just a consistent challenge, If you really want to have those square jumps, take into consideration to increase the difficulty of other parts of the song, because the rest is easy as heck compared to those repeating square jumps.

[]

Hopefully this helps! GL :)

I fixed a few things, I had a whole reply done but chrome crashed on me and I just gave up redoing the entire reply >:

The ending of the Insanity diff is always going to be an issue to me, because what I want to do with it I don't think is 100% playable, I will have a mess around with it and see what I can come up with though

Thanks for the mod
DarkKanaki

Kawaii Muffin wrote:

Easy
A bit hard for an easy.
00:07:744 (1,2) - This should be a slider
00:16:052 (2) - Dont stack >< hard to read for beginners
00:18:513 (2) - ^
00:20:975 (2) - ^
00:23:436 (2) - ^
00:24:667 (5,6) - These long sliders don't fit the rhythm well, it should be a slider that is a beat long and going back and forth, you may have to change the sliders before those into circles.
00:44:052 (4,5,6) - Copy and paste (4) and replace it with (6)
00:52:667 (3,4,5) - I dont like the slider, if anything start the slider where (3) and another slider that starts at the end of (4)
01:10:206 (2) - Like before; hard to read
01:12:360 (1) - Hmm It should be on the other side of the thick white line because of that reverse arrow; it flows better
01:23:129 (4) - Mhm
01:25:898 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to read; make (1) the slider instead of (2) and then you can make 01:28:360 (1,2) - and turn those into circles, it shows variety and slow progression of difficulty but still easy for a beginner
Ok. All done.
Here you go Ryuu.

:3
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50,271,36667,2,0,P|61:306|109:326,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,301,37283,2,0,P|208:279|260:277,1,80
256,192,37898,12,2,39129,0:0:0:0:
116,141,39744,6,0,P|165:109|194:98,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,191,40667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,261,40975,2,0,L|162:221,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,271,41590,2,0,P|274:290|313:290,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,274,42206,2,0,P|408:233|401:193,1,80
391,127,42821,5,2,0:0:0:0:
314,151,43129,2,0,L|242:96,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,102,43744,1,2,0:0:0:0:
89,102,44052,2,0,L|89:273,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,325,44975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,333,45283,2,0,L|371:253,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,191,46206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,244,46513,6,0,P|193:243|171:230,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,191,47436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,145,47744,2,0,P|195:143|152:153,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,72,48975,6,0,L|443:140,1,80
437,213,49590,6,0,L|385:274,1,80
313,309,50206,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,317,50513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,296,50821,2,0,P|106:277|80:243,1,80
99,178,51436,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,126,51744,2,0,P|194:100|239:87,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,195,52667,2,0,L|278:229,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,147,53283,2,0,L|344:156,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,234,53898,6,0,P|386:219|426:187,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,120,54513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
401,56,54821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,104,55129,2,0,P|291:124|248:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,97,55744,2,0,P|140:116|131:152,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,210,56360,6,0,L|129:298,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,283,56975,2,0,L|234:209,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,147,57590,6,0,L|371:133,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,53,58206,2,0,L|283:40,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,58,58821,5,2,0:0:0:0:
205,58,59129,2,0,P|147:78|103:171,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,229,60052,6,0,L|225:262,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,296,60667,2,0,P|329:303|380:298,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61283,12,6,62513,0:0:0:0:
105,86,63129,6,0,P|94:132|106:177,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,238,63744,2,0,P|159:266|208:280,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,198,64667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,189,64975,2,0,P|323:173|347:144,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,87,65590,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,136,65898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,215,66206,2,0,P|449:267|429:294,3,80,2|2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,231,67436,6,0,P|294:240|233:297,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,327,68360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,327,68667,2,0,L|89:237,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,209,69283,6,0,P|207:189|236:161,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,218,70206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,145,70513,2,0,P|126:115|170:80,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,81,71129,2,0,P|288:95|333:85,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,75,72360,6,0,P|34:150|34:232,1,160
72,289,73283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,331,73590,2,0,P|188:338|227:323,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,254,74206,5,2,0:0:0:0:
121,208,74513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,129,74821,2,0,P|153:84|194:61,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,158,75744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,86,76052,6,0,P|265:68|312:66,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,64,76667,2,0,P|317:102|362:135,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,128,77283,6,0,P|378:158|375:277,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,326,78206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,290,78513,2,0,P|210:283|170:309,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,350,79129,5,0,0:0:0:0:
55,302,79436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,245,79744,2,0,P|139:215|135:162,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,109,80360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,57,80667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,87,80975,6,0,P|305:105|395:79,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,124,81898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,183,82206,2,0,P|384:225|400:266,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,137,83129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,216,83436,6,0,P|251:226|161:189,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,150,84360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
54,208,84667,2,0,P|49:259|72:296,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,239,85590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,289,85898,6,0,P|220:255|259:243,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,227,86513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
405,247,86821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,167,87129,6,0,P|413:134|386:92,1,80
318,58,87744,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,62,88052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,132,88360,5,2,0:0:0:0:
242,205,88667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,141,88975,1,2,0:0:0:0:
126,97,89283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,165,89590,6,0,P|79:207|94:252,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,306,90206,2,0,P|177:313|216:305,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,286,90821,1,14,0:0:0:0:
355,236,91129,6,0,P|383:199|376:153,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,176,92052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,97,92360,2,0,P|289:63|249:43,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,126,93283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
162,119,93590,6,0,P|118:127|82:153,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,198,94513,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,261,94821,2,0,P|144:278|187:271,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,262,95436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,235,95744,6,0,P|353:197|364:158,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,100,96360,2,0,P|276:92|222:94,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,120,96975,5,8,0:0:0:0:
158,279,97590,5,8,0:0:0:0:
318,279,98206,5,8,0:0:0:0:
318,119,98821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99436,12,2,100667,0:0:0:0:
Dawns
Easy clearly best diff, really well done, flawless map. would play again

no kds pls. :^)
ryuu
@Kawaii Muffin
thanks for look, but no changes
samplefish
hi, small mod from modreqs

[Timing]
  1. 00:24:360 - add red timing point here.

[DarkKanaki's Easy]
  1. 00:02:821 (3) - that spacing. 1.0x please
  2. 00:08:360 (2) - a little too curvy to fit with all the other sliders in the part.
  3. 00:08:360 (2,3) - flow is dead, also prefer these not overlap 00:08:360 (2,4) - http://puu.sh/hf4Jk/5e49c1652d.jpg
  4. 00:11:436 (3,4) - too close together. move 4 so it doesnt touch 3.
  5. 00:14:821 (6,1) - spacing
  6. 00:15:129 (1,3) - can they not touch
  7. 00:16:975 (4) - spacing
  8. 00:17:590 (1) - spacing
  9. 00:19:436 (4) - not even going to mention these anymore, make sure whole diff is 1.0x
  10. 00:45:283 (6,1) - pls not have them touch
  11. 00:58:821 (1,2) - only stack like this in the entire diff, pls change.
  12. 00:24:667 (6,7) - dont feel like these reverses make much sense, all of the downbeats are unclickable. remove 00:24:360 (5) - and the two reverse sliders, and just add 1/2 sliders.
  13. 00:46:513 (1,3) - make exactly same shape for consistency.
  14. 00:48:667 - why is there not a note here

    lots of unpleasant overlaps and spacing errors. will need lots of work.

couldnt listen to this anymore after one diff, sorry

good luck
Equim
Artist:橘美也
Title:美也と天国と地獄

Hard
00:28:975 (1) - the reverse seems strange here, how about http://puu.sh/iAyIG/85d104e601.jpg ?
00:32:975 (3) - at the end of this slider(00:33:744 - ), the cursor is too far from the next slider, so what about ctrl+G?
01:08:667 (3) - ctrl+G?

Insane
00:14:513 (7,8,9) - new combo here to avoid confusion
00:28:975 (1) - same as that in Hard...
00:51:283 (8) - delete


:)
Kathalshame
wow

Insanity

00:04:667 - NC?
00:11:394 -Triple doesn't seem right in the beat of the song, along with other notes being singles. that triple doesn't fit.
00:13:898 + 00:14:206 - Triples feel odd, doesn't fit with the beat correctly try (see bellow) 00:21:283 - This triangle is unexpected seeing as the other groups of 7 are like this (see bellow) also undo the NC there it goes 1,2,3 - 1,2,3,4. Should just be 1-7

00:28:975 - Kiai time should start here instead of 00:29:898, seems to fit better.
00:32:975 - 00:33:744 - should be singles, would flow better (my opinion) + NC
00:34:821 - 00:36:052 - (see bellow) spacing feels off, suggest putting them closer together. (Also 00:35:436 should be NC)

00:39:129 - Kiai time should stop here, intense part over + feels off (opinion)
00:47:129 - 00:48:360 - Spacing feels weird, suggest changing it to a circle, something like this (ignore terrible positioning)
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/iAAvR/0d8863b19d.jpg
01:00:975 - 01:01:590 Try making this stream go into a curve and set the 4 mini sliders at the end of it?
01:05:590 - 01:06:052 spacing feels odd, again try moving them closer together.
01:06:206 - NC + should all be single notes for each 'nish' something like this (see bellow) 01:06:975 - this note should be added on to the other stacked notes.
01:24:667 - 01:25:744 - These notes shouldn't be positioned like that, maybe together and no NC for each couple.
01:32:975 - This slider should be placed here, symmetrical and looks more cleaner. (see bellow)01:33:283 - 01:34:206 - same reason as one above
nice
Topic Starter
- Reimu

Equim wrote:

Artist:橘美也
Title:美也と天国と地獄

Hard
00:32:975 (3) - at the end of this slider(00:33:744 - ), the cursor is too far from the next slider, so what about ctrl+G?
The fix you had in mind didn't flow correctly, but I shuffled some things around and fixed it overall!

Equim wrote:

01:08:667 (3) - ctrl+G?
Nice catch! I didn't notice that at all!

Equim wrote:

Insane00:14:513 (7,8,9) - new combo here to avoid confusion
Fxed

Equim wrote:

00:51:283 (8) - delete[/box]
There is a sound there so the note fits, and it doesn't ruin flow. No change.

Equim wrote:

No idea what you are trying to do here, could you explain?


Thanks for mod
Topic Starter
- Reimu

DanZqa wrote:

00:11:394 -Triple doesn't seem right in the beat of the song, along with other notes being singles. that triple doesn't fit.
00:13:898 + 00:14:206 - Triples feel odd, doesn't fit with the beat correctly
The second note of each triple is mapped to a faintish note which can be kind of difficult to hear, but it IS there, the triples match that and I feel as though it fits the map nicely. No change.

DanZqa wrote:

00:21:283 - This triangle is unexpected seeing as the other groups of 7 are like this
00:32:975 - 00:33:744 - should be singles, would flow better (my opinion) + NC
00:34:821 - 00:36:052 - Spacing feels off, suggest putting them closer together. (Also 00:35:436 should be NC)
00:47:129 - 00:48:360 - Spacing feels weird
Fixed

DanZqa wrote:

01:06:975 - this note should be added on to the other stacked notes.
That would make a lot of people annoyed, the note is there because people strongly dislike trap notes.

DanZqa wrote:

01:32:975 - This slider should be placed here, symmetrical and looks more cleaner.
01:33:283 - 01:34:206 - same reason as one above
Fixed

There is also a few things I fixed that aren't listed here, like small spacing changes and NCs which aren't worth listing

Thanks for mod!
K i R a
Hello ~ Gonna mod your deliciously map, take it as a guide line or an opinion.
[General]
Audio criteria: Your mp3 needs to be between 128 and 192 kbps, it is 204, make sure you change it or find a better version, make sure to resnap all the timing points and notes in every difficulty after changing the offset due to the change on the mp3. This is necessary.

[DarkKanaki's Easy]
00:29:898 - change the timing line to 00:29:283 - as the other difficulties.
00:34:206 (5) - New combo
00:49:590 (1) - Remove new combo

You are close to have a perfect easy ~, also seems fun for an easy, good job DarkKanaki

[ryuu's Normal]
Didn't find anything wrong, the hitsounds are good and correct, same for the combos and the place of the objects, not bad spacing or anything, this difficulty should be ready.

[Hard]
Open Aimod and fix all of those unsnapped items.
00:32:975 (3) - New combo
00:34:513 (5) - ^
00:56:360 (1,2,3,4) - May be my opinion but it seems weird due to the spacing, i wont fail it but if you can do something with it to make it more natural it would be awesome.
01:20:052 (1) - Remove new combo
01:20:360 (2) - and start it here ~
01:26:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Can't see the aproaching circles because of overlaping, fix it, its a hard not an extra xD.
Same as normal, so close to be perfect

[Insanity]
00:07:744 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit confusing if you stack them, specially for an starting part, you can change the notes to make it easier to see.
00:30:513 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:129 (3) - New combo
00:47:744 (5) - ^
01:00:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems like the stream starts before than the song, maybe one or two more sliders instead of the first part of the stream would fix it.
01:06:206 (5) - New combo
01:06:975 (1) - Remove new combo

[Nish shi shi shiii]
Lol that name tho xD.
00:06:513 (1,2,3,4) - Same as in the hard, if you wanna do it unstack them from the others. Its a recommendation, not a need btw.
00:09:590 (1) - Remove new combo, yet a slider would be better than two circles.
00:16:975 (1) - Remove new combo
00:21:590 (1) - ^
00:21:898 (1) - ^
00:25:283 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ seems confusing to have new combos every two beats on continuous jumps.
00:32:975 (1) - ^
00:40:206 (1) - ^
00:47:744 (1) - ^
00:48:360 (1) - ^
00:56:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Please? I know you wanna do it cool but it seems more confusing.
01:06:667 (1) - ^
01:15:129 (1) - The spacing seems to interrupt the flow of the song (you were all time making it fluid and now you makes the player stops suddenly without something in the song to recognize that).
01:25:283 (1) - Remove new combo
01:33:283 (8) - New combo

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So in general you have a fun and nice song, maybe you should add a new color to the combo color, the timing and the difficulties are all fine, just some fixes and you are done.

Good luck with your map, also you are close to rank it so double kudosu star for you ~

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As you told me, this is a mod 4 mod so this is the map i want you to mod, specially the normal: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/41158
^^
Topic Starter
- Reimu

K i R a wrote:

[Hard]
Open Aimod and fix all of those unsnapped items.
00:32:975 (3) - New combo
01:20:360 (2) - NC here
Fixed the above all other changes untouched.

K i R a wrote:

01:26:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Can't see the aproaching circles because of overlaping, fix it
I actually spoke with Asphyxia about this like, two months ago and He said it is fine as it is.

K i R a wrote:

[Insanity]
01:00:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems like the stream starts before than the song, maybe one or two more sliders instead of the first part of the stream would fix it.
01:00:975 (1) - This note begins on the hastened "ushushush" vocal and it also begins the second female "uuuuaaaaahhhhaaaay" No change

K i R a wrote:

01:06:206 (5) - New combo
Fixed

K i R a wrote:

[Nish shi shi shiii]

00:09:590 (1) - Remove new combo
00:16:975 (1) - Remove new combo
Done

K i R a wrote:

00:25:283 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ seems confusing to have new combos every two beats on continuous jumps.
00:32:975 (1) - ^
00:40:206 (1) - ^
00:47:744 (1) - ^
00:48:360 (1) - ^
You would be surprised what it does for readability.

K i R a wrote:

00:56:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Please? I know you wanna do it cool but it seems more confusing.
01:06:667 (1) - ^
What? If you yourself cannot play a pattern, please do not call it confusing. You need to see the map from an overall perspective rather than at a personal level

K i R a wrote:

01:33:283 (8) - New combo
Done.


K i R a wrote:

As you told me, this is a mod 4 mod so this is the map i want you to mod, specially the normal: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/41158
^^
I will take a look sometime today or tomorrow
BeatBreakerS
nice mapping :D

[DarkKanaki's Easy]

  • General
  1. an easy difficulty must be below 1.5 stars for it to be ranked
  2. Lower Approach rate to 3.5
  3. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  4. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"

    mapping
  5. 00:28:052 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:28:975 (3) - Add NC
  7. 00:37:898 (1) - feel awkward to be, might be replaced by some Hit circles and Sliders
  8. 00:49:590 (1) - remove NC
[ryuu's Normal]

  • General
  1. a normal difficulty must be below 2.25 stars for it to be ranked
  2. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  3. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"

    mapping
  4. 00:12:052 (5,6,7) - make this a slider
  5. 00:32:821 (4) - remove
  6. 00:35:283 (3) - ^
  7. 00:38:206 (5,6,7) - Sliders
  8. 01:01:129 - hit circle here or move the next slider one tick back, fill later ticks with a slider or another hit circle
  9. 01:05:590 (3,4,5) - Slider
[Hard]
General
  1. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  2. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"
  3. maybe increase CS upto 4
mapping
Nothing to mod here i like it :D

[Insanity]
General
  1. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  2. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"
[Nish shi shi shiii]
General
  1. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  2. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"
Topic Starter
- Reimu

BeatBreakerS wrote:

nice mapping :D

[DarkKanaki's Easy]

  • General
  1. an easy difficulty must be below 1.5 stars for it to be ranked
  2. Lower Approach rate to 3.5
  3. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  4. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"

    mapping
  5. 00:28:052 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:28:975 (3) - Add NC
  7. 00:37:898 (1) - feel awkward to be, might be replaced by some Hit circles and Sliders
  8. 00:49:590 (1) - remove NC
[ryuu's Normal]

  • General
  1. a normal difficulty must be below 2.25 stars for it to be ranked
  2. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  3. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"

    mapping
  4. 00:12:052 (5,6,7) - make this a slider
  5. 00:32:821 (4) - remove
  6. 00:35:283 (3) - ^
  7. 00:38:206 (5,6,7) - Sliders
  8. 01:01:129 - hit circle here or move the next slider one tick back, fill later ticks with a slider or another hit circle
  9. 01:05:590 (3,4,5) - Slider
[Hard]
General
  1. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  2. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"
  3. maybe increase CS upto 4
mapping
Nothing to mod here i like it :D

[Insanity]
General
  1. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  2. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"
[Nish shi shi shiii]
General
  1. untick enable countdown as it is not being used
  2. source should be "NicoNicoDouga"

I confirmed the difficulty spread awhile back, and a QAT member said the spread is fine

Edit: A second QAT just confirmed the spread is fine
BeatBreakerS

[ Ryuu ] wrote:

I confirmed the difficulty spread awhile back, and a QAT member said the spread is fine

Edit: A second QAT just confirmed the spread is fine
ALL HAIL QAT's
Topic Starter
- Reimu

BeatBreakerS wrote:

[ Ryuu ] wrote:

I confirmed the difficulty spread awhile back, and a QAT member said the spread is fine

Edit: A second QAT just confirmed the spread is fine
ALL HAIL QAT's

Hopefully #RANKHYPE is soon!
repr1se
Mod for mod from #modreqs.

Nish shi shi shii
00:19:129 (3,1) - More natural if the 1 was the 4th circle in the previous combo.
01:39:436 (1) - Move to x:307 for symmetry

Hard
00:04:052 (3) - Move closer to next note
01:00:975 (4) - Sounds better if you cut this in half and have one more slider before it.

instead of


Overall thoughts:
Why do I even like this song
Rizen
Hello o/

From #modreqs

Easy
00:08:360 (2,4) - The overlap here is kinda unnecessary...
00:10:206 (1,2) - if u move this a little bit lower, you can then blanket 2 around slider 1 better img
00:11:436 (3,4) - not only is this overlapping, the spacing significantly changes, which is a huge no-no in easy diffs. maybe do something like this? img
00:14:821 (6,1) - distance should be constant throughout the entire diff ;_; (1.00x)
00:15:129 (1,3) - another ugly overlap, solve by angling 00:16:360 (3) - downwards img
00:16:975 (4) - spacing..
00:17:590 (1) - ^
00:20:052 (1) - ^
00:22:513 (1) - ^
00:24:667 (6,7) - ugly overlap... curve 00:24:667 (6) - more to fix
00:26:513 (1) - ^ just make sure the slider do not touch in that kind of way
00:45:283 (6,1) - ^
00:48:667 (4) - add a circle cos the vocals are very audible here
there are a lot of errors like this in the entire difficulty...
01:16:052 (1,2,1) - don't do this ;_; You haven't done anything similar to this in the diff

Only modding this diff because I don't have much time to be on osu, along with I find the Easy Difficulty being the biggest let down of the mapset (no offense).

Also, add a red timing point to offset: 29283 with bpm of 195.00? That would fix the mispositioned kiai time/downbeat.
I also think you should resize the Background so it's either 1366x768 for widescreen.
Uncheck Widescreen support as this is only necessary if you have a storyboard
Also uncheck Letterbox during breaks as you have no breaks across all difficulties
Add an Audio Offset of 2000. The difficulty starts very close to the start of the mp3 so a delay needs to be added. This can be done by editing the .osu files img
in the tags, what does hakurei style have to do with the mapset? :?

Good luck--
Weber
hi, mod here

DarKKanaki's Easy:

There is ALOT wrong with this difficulty, most of which due to sloppy patterns/blankets and overlaps, I won't recommend a full remap, since it structurally has the makings of a good map, there is alot of work to be done. I might not mention every overlap, but a fix is definitely needed.

00:08:360 (2,4) - Overlapping
00:08:975 (3) - Would probably looks better at x:196, y:88
00:11:436 (3,4) - Slight overlap
00:15:129 (1) - Rotate to blanket around 00:16:360 (3) -
00:24:360 (5) - NC
00:24:052 (4,5,6,7,1) - Actually remap this, it barely sounds like it fits with the music
00:34:206 (5) - NC
00:45:283 (6,1) - overlap
01:14:821 (3,1,2) - All of these overlaps
01:27:744 (2,3,1,2,3) - This entire pattern, please remap
01:30:821 (3) - NC
01:33:283 (4) - NC

Ryuu's Normal:

Map is fine, but SV is fast as fuck, consider decreasing and adjusting the map accordingly.

Hard:

01:12:975 (3,4,5) - Consider spreading this triangle out a little more ala bringing (4) and (5) more to the right.

Rest of diff is fine.

Insanity:

00:15:129 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders look a bit misaligned if you were going for a square formation

Nish Shi Shi Shiii:

Not used to modding extra diffs so take these few changes with a grain of salt

00:04:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this stream should be a little more spread out considering how short it is, a similar amount of spacing was used for the deathstream at the end and that works better since its long as fuck
00:06:206 (5) - Move to x:200, y:148

Extra is fine, GL
Topic Starter
- Reimu

Tatsuyu wrote:

Hard:

01:12:975 (3,4,5) - Consider spreading this triangle out a little more ala bringing (4) and (5) more to the right. Fixed

Rest of diff is fine.

Insanity:

00:15:129 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders look a bit misaligned if you were going for a square formation Fixed

Nish Shi Shi Shiii:

Not used to modding extra diffs so take these few changes with a grain of salt

00:04:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this stream should be a little more spread out considering how short it is, a similar amount of spacing was used for the deathstream at the end and that works better since its long as fuck I think it is fine as it is
Will see about finding DK for his Easy diff fixes
digdogbone
modded
Lilyanna
Hi from mod reqs
MOD
Ryuu's Normal
00:04:052 (1) - remove nc
00:40:975 - u can make this note clickable i think will flow better
00:52:667 (3,4,5,6) - avoid so much stacking notes in normal can be confusing for normal players
01:00:052 (1) - remove nc
the normal is little hard for normal maybe reduce ds and use less red ticks
Hard
00:04:052 (3) - i prefer if u change this to a spinner willl be better
00:40:975 (1,4) - little overlapp here so do this

01:00:975 (4) - again imo spinner fits here since its cool fun song
01:11:129 (1) - remove nc
Fun song
Good luck :D
Topic Starter
- Reimu

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi from mod reqs
Hard
00:04:052 (3) - i prefer if u change this to a spinner willl be better Done
00:40:975 (1,4) - little overlapp here so do this I never noticed this, thanks

01:00:975 (4) - again imo spinner fits here since its cool fun song I disagree with this, and think the slider fits better
01:11:129 (1) - remove nc Fixed
Good luck :D

Thanks for the mod
ryuu
thanks for mods

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: nini.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62513
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Miya to Tengoku to Jigoku
TitleUnicode:美也と天国と地獄
Artist:Tachibana Miya
ArtistUnicode:橘美也
Creator:- Reimu
Version:ryuu's Normal
Source:NicoNicoDouga
Tags:Amagami SS Nico Nico Douga ryuu DarkKanaki
BeatmapID:669012
BeatmapSetID:297337

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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